Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
A few rocks in Africa’s shoe
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message is sent in this poem. I loved the internal rhyme in this piece that gave it more power. The last phrase was a good image to end on.
May 19th, 2025 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message is sent in this poem. I loved the internal rhyme in this piece that gave it more power. The last phrase was a good image to end on.
May 19th, 2025 06:36
We don’t live long enough
sorenbarrett said:
A poem on the meaning of aging and indeed many have asked why they have to die and that no one gets out of this world alive. Maybe we are asking the wrong question. Death merely part of a cycle of life and death not an end but a transformation a metamorphosis. Well written
May 18th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem on the meaning of aging and indeed many have asked why they have to die and that no one gets out of this world alive. Maybe we are asking the wrong question. Death merely part of a cycle of life and death not an end but a transformation a metamorphosis. Well written
May 18th, 2025 05:14
We don’t live long enough
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, a sense of asking do we only live long enough to make the mess but not long enough to fix before we die and the cycle starts again, enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 03:02
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, a sense of asking do we only live long enough to make the mess but not long enough to fix before we die and the cycle starts again, enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 03:02
The lost have been found
sorenbarrett said:
Questions I used to ask sound so familiar but well written. A poem of doubt and wanting to understand that is not answered by faith. Well done
May 17th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
Questions I used to ask sound so familiar but well written. A poem of doubt and wanting to understand that is not answered by faith. Well done
May 17th, 2025 13:11
Dream science. Energize!
sorenbarrett said:
Lucid dreams a most wonderous thing. A beautiful poem of images and meaning. Nicely done
May 13th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Lucid dreams a most wonderous thing. A beautiful poem of images and meaning. Nicely done
May 13th, 2025 04:09
Dream science. Energize!
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of dreaming that we can go back to the beginning and start again, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 03:10
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of dreaming that we can go back to the beginning and start again, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 03:10
Traveling through our mistakes
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write highlighting that man is still not learning from his mistakes, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 06:56
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write highlighting that man is still not learning from his mistakes, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 06:56
Traveling through our mistakes
sorenbarrett said:
And so is the nature of man that doesn\'t learn from his mistakes. Well written and thought provoking
May 10th, 2025 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
And so is the nature of man that doesn\'t learn from his mistakes. Well written and thought provoking
May 10th, 2025 05:25
Self hate came home to roost
Poetic Licence said:
A quite powerful and thought provoking write, nicely written and expressed
May 9th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A quite powerful and thought provoking write, nicely written and expressed
May 9th, 2025 06:20
Self hate came home to roost
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me represents the lack of esteem and value that one should have for others that we tell others we love. An old time macho view of the male role. Dominance does not mean love. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me represents the lack of esteem and value that one should have for others that we tell others we love. An old time macho view of the male role. Dominance does not mean love. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:29
Let’s not touch mustaches
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of standing up for oneself and one\'s decisions well done.
May 6th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of standing up for oneself and one\'s decisions well done.
May 6th, 2025 09:37
Those Amphibious Beings
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting poem of ancient technology, myths are great in poetry. Most lovely
May 5th, 2025 17:52
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting poem of ancient technology, myths are great in poetry. Most lovely
May 5th, 2025 17:52
In a state of heaven or not
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice and tender poem hidden in what appears prose to emerge in masked rhyme. A most lovely write
May 4th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice and tender poem hidden in what appears prose to emerge in masked rhyme. A most lovely write
May 4th, 2025 07:33
Unknown child at home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mystery that leaves the reader with a question. I love poems like this that provoke thought and open-endedly allow each reader to superimpose their own meaning. Well done I would say they took my certainty and peace of mind, my security. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mystery that leaves the reader with a question. I love poems like this that provoke thought and open-endedly allow each reader to superimpose their own meaning. Well done I would say they took my certainty and peace of mind, my security. Lovely
May 3rd, 2025 04:13
A finger can be misleading
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many hoping for an external savior to come along and rescue them, even though it\'s been made clear that the savior is within. Ignorance must be Satan\'s favorite mistress!
Great write.
April 29th, 2025 19:25
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many hoping for an external savior to come along and rescue them, even though it\'s been made clear that the savior is within. Ignorance must be Satan\'s favorite mistress!
Great write.
April 29th, 2025 19:25
A finger can be misleading
sorenbarrett said:
Deep, profound, and intriguing. Osiris and his resurrection being brought back to life by Isis there are many instances in mythology of such comparisons. Well written.
April 29th, 2025 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
Deep, profound, and intriguing. Osiris and his resurrection being brought back to life by Isis there are many instances in mythology of such comparisons. Well written.
April 29th, 2025 12:24
Renegotiations
sorenbarrett said:
A lot of discontent shows in this poem. Tiered of being treated as a fool there seems to be a desire to overturn the system. Nicely written
April 27th, 2025 17:52
sorenbarrett said:
A lot of discontent shows in this poem. Tiered of being treated as a fool there seems to be a desire to overturn the system. Nicely written
April 27th, 2025 17:52
Voters
sorenbarrett said:
Strong this poem advocates more rapid change and so it was with abolition and emancipation. Well written
April 25th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Strong this poem advocates more rapid change and so it was with abolition and emancipation. Well written
April 25th, 2025 12:31
Faces of death
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem and its contrast with life and death. Great usage of rhyme and images. I think that death has the edge in this race in that entropy always wins.
April 24th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem and its contrast with life and death. Great usage of rhyme and images. I think that death has the edge in this race in that entropy always wins.
April 24th, 2025 04:33
Revelations
sorenbarrett said:
Fears and desires do in fact make up the seeds that lead to demise. A good write
April 23rd, 2025 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Fears and desires do in fact make up the seeds that lead to demise. A good write
April 23rd, 2025 12:42
A Chaos explained
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of abuse and wish for freedom from it. There is nice rhyme included that makes it flow. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of abuse and wish for freedom from it. There is nice rhyme included that makes it flow. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 10:49
That inner voice
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a mind provoking write. Lies are no more than deluding oneself or others about something you know to be otherwise. Everyone from advertisers to politicians to preachers do the same and don\'t we too when we say (nice to meet you, what a lovely dress, have a nice day)? A wonderful write.
March 25th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Ah such a mind provoking write. Lies are no more than deluding oneself or others about something you know to be otherwise. Everyone from advertisers to politicians to preachers do the same and don\'t we too when we say (nice to meet you, what a lovely dress, have a nice day)? A wonderful write.
March 25th, 2025 04:04
Just a step away
sorenbarrett said:
The death of someone only occurs when they are forgotten and all traces of them disappear. Even then their ripples continue to influence others. Yet we all put our parents to death as we metamorphosize out of their shell into our own individual and butterfly. A deeper poem than appears on the surface. Nicely written.
March 15th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
The death of someone only occurs when they are forgotten and all traces of them disappear. Even then their ripples continue to influence others. Yet we all put our parents to death as we metamorphosize out of their shell into our own individual and butterfly. A deeper poem than appears on the surface. Nicely written.
March 15th, 2025 05:16
Is culture, culture
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic rhyme in this poem gives it its strength. The rhyme is internal as well as end line. This poem makes a powerful statement.
March 13th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic rhyme in this poem gives it its strength. The rhyme is internal as well as end line. This poem makes a powerful statement.
March 13th, 2025 04:02
In recent news
sorenbarrett said:
The future doesn\'t look too bright. A good write
March 10th, 2025 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
The future doesn\'t look too bright. A good write
March 10th, 2025 18:09
Memories of a bully
sorenbarrett said:
What some people do to get noticed. A fun read.
March 5th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
What some people do to get noticed. A fun read.
March 5th, 2025 05:45
Is this our plan of attack?
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with many rhymes inside this piece
March 3rd, 2025 20:27
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read with many rhymes inside this piece
March 3rd, 2025 20:27
Flesh and bones for the fire
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has an ominous feel to it. It shows anger and resentment. There seems to be a look for justice. Well written
March 2nd, 2025 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has an ominous feel to it. It shows anger and resentment. There seems to be a look for justice. Well written
March 2nd, 2025 15:10
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