Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Don’t fall watch your step
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic flow. Powerful and poignant.
January 10th, 2024 17:56
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic flow. Powerful and poignant.
January 10th, 2024 17:56
Why are the gods naked
Lorenz said:
The prince of angels is clothed in light ...
December 31st, 2023 08:44
Lorenz said:
The prince of angels is clothed in light ...
December 31st, 2023 08:44
Commander McBragg
Doggerel Dave said:
Never heard of this geezer before - pompous prat, but a good larf....
Rhyming up to your usual smooth read standard.
Thanks.
December 17th, 2023 16:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Never heard of this geezer before - pompous prat, but a good larf....
Rhyming up to your usual smooth read standard.
Thanks.
December 17th, 2023 16:24
What the migrants know
Doggerel Dave said:
Still following you, mate. There are many ways of telling truths , and while your style is not mine, I usually get the message loud and clear.
Keep \'em coming....
December 10th, 2023 23:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Still following you, mate. There are many ways of telling truths , and while your style is not mine, I usually get the message loud and clear.
Keep \'em coming....
December 10th, 2023 23:29
So what it’s chaos
Doggerel Dave said:
I almost end up with PTSD just reading your stuff.....
November 24th, 2023 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I almost end up with PTSD just reading your stuff.....
November 24th, 2023 18:33
Where did they come from
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great flow.
November 23rd, 2023 23:11
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great flow.
November 23rd, 2023 23:11
Are all the shamans dead
Bella Shepard said:
This is a profoundly thought-filled piece. Having been raised in a religion that I practiced for years, I reached a point of questioniong. Did I follow the rules because it was meaningful, or because I was taught to, and it was the latter. Over time I\'ve learned to let go of the fear of noncompliance, for the freedom of my own thoughts and beliefs, and am comfortable in my space. There is no surety in life, no one has all the answers. Find your path, your space, because it is meaningful to you. Take care my friend!
November 19th, 2023 14:33
Bella Shepard said:
This is a profoundly thought-filled piece. Having been raised in a religion that I practiced for years, I reached a point of questioniong. Did I follow the rules because it was meaningful, or because I was taught to, and it was the latter. Over time I\'ve learned to let go of the fear of noncompliance, for the freedom of my own thoughts and beliefs, and am comfortable in my space. There is no surety in life, no one has all the answers. Find your path, your space, because it is meaningful to you. Take care my friend!
November 19th, 2023 14:33
Are all the shamans dead
evenwheniLie said:
Whole religions and cultures have been born from illusions
November 19th, 2023 02:57
evenwheniLie said:
Whole religions and cultures have been born from illusions
November 19th, 2023 02:57
Psychology today
Lorenz said:
By dint of living among lunatics who ignore themselves I manage to achieve a certain normality ...
November 16th, 2023 11:24
Lorenz said:
By dint of living among lunatics who ignore themselves I manage to achieve a certain normality ...
November 16th, 2023 11:24
False freedoms
2781 said:
Woe unto them that call good evil and evil good; that put darkness for light, and light for darkness, that put bitter for sweet and sweet for bitter!
November 10th, 2023 04:56
2781 said:
Woe unto them that call good evil and evil good; that put darkness for light, and light for darkness, that put bitter for sweet and sweet for bitter!
November 10th, 2023 04:56
It’s war, it’s war, it’s war!
dtrusss said:
Thought provoking, homie! Love it. Off the power trip and poetic. I dig
November 6th, 2023 17:02
dtrusss said:
Thought provoking, homie! Love it. Off the power trip and poetic. I dig
November 6th, 2023 17:02
Tents, pills and needles; oh my
evenwheniLie said:
Just laughing at the poem
November 1st, 2023 07:37
evenwheniLie said:
Just laughing at the poem
November 1st, 2023 07:37
Tents, pills and needles; oh my
Thomas W Case said:
Great flow, powerful and poignant.
October 31st, 2023 23:06
Thomas W Case said:
Great flow, powerful and poignant.
October 31st, 2023 23:06
Tents, pills and needles; oh my
Niko Papadatos said:
I really liked how you are addressing this problem.
October 31st, 2023 07:55
Niko Papadatos said:
I really liked how you are addressing this problem.
October 31st, 2023 07:55
Nano Nano
Bella Shepard said:
This is extraordinary in message and verse. Beautifully penned dear poet!
October 9th, 2023 13:03
Bella Shepard said:
This is extraordinary in message and verse. Beautifully penned dear poet!
October 9th, 2023 13:03
Bitter old man
Doggerel Dave said:
Not... quite... sure... about... this...one ...at... all................
September 27th, 2023 02:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Not... quite... sure... about... this...one ...at... all................
September 27th, 2023 02:05
Origins of a terrorist
Bobby O said:
This might be a proper METHOD poem. ?
September 24th, 2023 03:23
Bobby O said:
This might be a proper METHOD poem. ?
September 24th, 2023 03:23
Origins of a terrorist
evenwheniLie said:
I think many terrorists are disturbed, but hide behind religious views for validation
September 23rd, 2023 21:54
evenwheniLie said:
I think many terrorists are disturbed, but hide behind religious views for validation
September 23rd, 2023 21:54
Origins of a terrorist
Doggerel Dave said:
Nihilism personified and versified in your usual get to the root of it all manner.
September 23rd, 2023 20:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Nihilism personified and versified in your usual get to the root of it all manner.
September 23rd, 2023 20:29
American superstar
Doggerel Dave said:
Captured: the hideous superficiality of it all....
You really chewed on that one and spat it out.
Good for you.
September 19th, 2023 04:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Captured: the hideous superficiality of it all....
You really chewed on that one and spat it out.
Good for you.
September 19th, 2023 04:22
American superstar
Bobby O said:
Nice. I was at the old Stadium the day of that funk when he looked at Dr. J who signaled to MJ that the close contest with Dominique called for him to pull out all the stops and recreate the famous fly from the FT line just as the doctor did. A classic recreation and a victory for MJ resulted. It was thrilling and IMO wasn’t even the best dunk of the night , rather , I believe the best was MJ down the baseline using the ball as a prop pillow before the vicious jam last second as he reached the rim. Other than that I don’t remember much about that day!
And BTW I GOT NOTHING BUT praise for MJ on the 94’ and his many contributions far exceed what can be penciled to the other column. G O. A T. BY FAR!!
September 19th, 2023 02:39
Bobby O said:
Nice. I was at the old Stadium the day of that funk when he looked at Dr. J who signaled to MJ that the close contest with Dominique called for him to pull out all the stops and recreate the famous fly from the FT line just as the doctor did. A classic recreation and a victory for MJ resulted. It was thrilling and IMO wasn’t even the best dunk of the night , rather , I believe the best was MJ down the baseline using the ball as a prop pillow before the vicious jam last second as he reached the rim. Other than that I don’t remember much about that day!
And BTW I GOT NOTHING BUT praise for MJ on the 94’ and his many contributions far exceed what can be penciled to the other column. G O. A T. BY FAR!!
September 19th, 2023 02:39
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