Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Rome, Africa’s disobedient child
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem to read with all of its internal rhyme. Very nice
June 5th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem to read with all of its internal rhyme. Very nice
June 5th, 2025 13:28
This is not the Lords house
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in mystic metaphor speaks of history, religion, myth and sociopolitical facts in one short rhymed piece. Good enough for a fave
June 5th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in mystic metaphor speaks of history, religion, myth and sociopolitical facts in one short rhymed piece. Good enough for a fave
June 5th, 2025 04:44
Chemically, still bucking
Doggerel Dave said:
Engenders much controversy. Any advice I would want to give would be: stay yourself: avoid self immolation.
June 3rd, 2025 20:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Engenders much controversy. Any advice I would want to give would be: stay yourself: avoid self immolation.
June 3rd, 2025 20:31
Chemically, still bucking
sorenbarrett said:
Confusing isn\'t it? In a world of sex we have become so preoccupied with it that we have to categorize it label it dissect it examine it under a microscope, project it for all to see on the screen and smear it all over social media. After all there is nothing more interesting than pornography. A poignant write set in good metaphor. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Confusing isn\'t it? In a world of sex we have become so preoccupied with it that we have to categorize it label it dissect it examine it under a microscope, project it for all to see on the screen and smear it all over social media. After all there is nothing more interesting than pornography. A poignant write set in good metaphor. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 04:30
A starship in our atmosphere
Doggerel Dave said:
Phew! Objectification beyond......Fantasy plus..... It\'s fantasy \'cos getting her out of that suit would require more than I have in my toolbox.......
May 30th, 2025 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Phew! Objectification beyond......Fantasy plus..... It\'s fantasy \'cos getting her out of that suit would require more than I have in my toolbox.......
May 30th, 2025 17:23
A starship in our atmosphere
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the depiction of a trip to the club in the sky. Well painted this starship dancer. Lovely
May 30th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the depiction of a trip to the club in the sky. Well painted this starship dancer. Lovely
May 30th, 2025 04:29
A starship in our atmosphere
Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted write, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very well crafted write, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:38
A starship in our atmosphere
Mutley Ravishes said:
I can\'t think of anything to say except \"that was......\" Nope, I give up. I can\'t find the right word! Great write.
May 30th, 2025 01:51
Mutley Ravishes said:
I can\'t think of anything to say except \"that was......\" Nope, I give up. I can\'t find the right word! Great write.
May 30th, 2025 01:51
Do our presence mean they survived
sorenbarrett said:
The depth of the implications of this poem are intriguing. It is highly philosophical and yet powerful as a meta metaphor. Lovely and a fave
May 29th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
The depth of the implications of this poem are intriguing. It is highly philosophical and yet powerful as a meta metaphor. Lovely and a fave
May 29th, 2025 04:27
It was only death
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that vacillates from serious to humorous. A fun read
May 28th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that vacillates from serious to humorous. A fun read
May 28th, 2025 05:27
A god’s cure for amnesia
sorenbarrett said:
This poem requires meditation. Finding oneself call it existential if you will. A life\'s quest. Very nice
May 27th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem requires meditation. Finding oneself call it existential if you will. A life\'s quest. Very nice
May 27th, 2025 05:12
A god’s cure for amnesia
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of we as people sometimes forget what we are here for and understand the purpose of our life, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 02:24
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of we as people sometimes forget what we are here for and understand the purpose of our life, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 02:24
Are we sure of our role
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"A\" God indeed! (That\'s a whole other line of investigation, as I\'m sure you know). I like all the \"wes\" and \"ours\" in this rhyme. Great flow, deep reflections!
May 26th, 2025 19:05
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"A\" God indeed! (That\'s a whole other line of investigation, as I\'m sure you know). I like all the \"wes\" and \"ours\" in this rhyme. Great flow, deep reflections!
May 26th, 2025 19:05
Are we sure of our role
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with the use of Latin ending words in rhyme and casting the spell in rhyme internal and external it weaves its magic and gets a fave
May 26th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with the use of Latin ending words in rhyme and casting the spell in rhyme internal and external it weaves its magic and gets a fave
May 26th, 2025 04:44
Are we sure of our role
Hollow Enigma said:
Im taken here man! To not be vulgar here all i can say wow. Very cool patterns and good for you in not taking easy rhymes. First part little aqward but then boom its flows so so so well. Keep it up man thanks for sharing!
May 26th, 2025 03:06
Hollow Enigma said:
Im taken here man! To not be vulgar here all i can say wow. Very cool patterns and good for you in not taking easy rhymes. First part little aqward but then boom its flows so so so well. Keep it up man thanks for sharing!
May 26th, 2025 03:06
The Wrong Talents
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this poem is an inspiration to aspiring individuals in all areas. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded this poem is an inspiration to aspiring individuals in all areas. Lovely
May 25th, 2025 14:52
Gold digger
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem it reads so well and tells its tail which I am not sure to take humorously of more metaphorically. A fun read none the less. Loved it
May 24th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem it reads so well and tells its tail which I am not sure to take humorously of more metaphorically. A fun read none the less. Loved it
May 24th, 2025 12:57
Bruce Lee
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well Bruce Lee a major star in my younger days. Watched his movies and was shocked and saddened at his death. He remains a model for the martial arts and particularly in movies. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
I remember well Bruce Lee a major star in my younger days. Watched his movies and was shocked and saddened at his death. He remains a model for the martial arts and particularly in movies. Nicely done
May 23rd, 2025 04:46
Bruce Lee
Poetic Licence said:
Blimey spent hours as a kid trying to do what he did, a true master, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
Blimey spent hours as a kid trying to do what he did, a true master, enjoyed the read
May 23rd, 2025 02:27
A few rocks in Africa’s shoe
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message is sent in this poem. I loved the internal rhyme in this piece that gave it more power. The last phrase was a good image to end on.
May 19th, 2025 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message is sent in this poem. I loved the internal rhyme in this piece that gave it more power. The last phrase was a good image to end on.
May 19th, 2025 06:36
We don’t live long enough
sorenbarrett said:
A poem on the meaning of aging and indeed many have asked why they have to die and that no one gets out of this world alive. Maybe we are asking the wrong question. Death merely part of a cycle of life and death not an end but a transformation a metamorphosis. Well written
May 18th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poem on the meaning of aging and indeed many have asked why they have to die and that no one gets out of this world alive. Maybe we are asking the wrong question. Death merely part of a cycle of life and death not an end but a transformation a metamorphosis. Well written
May 18th, 2025 05:14
We don’t live long enough
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, a sense of asking do we only live long enough to make the mess but not long enough to fix before we die and the cycle starts again, enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 03:02
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, a sense of asking do we only live long enough to make the mess but not long enough to fix before we die and the cycle starts again, enjoyed the read
May 18th, 2025 03:02
The lost have been found
sorenbarrett said:
Questions I used to ask sound so familiar but well written. A poem of doubt and wanting to understand that is not answered by faith. Well done
May 17th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
Questions I used to ask sound so familiar but well written. A poem of doubt and wanting to understand that is not answered by faith. Well done
May 17th, 2025 13:11
Dream science. Energize!
sorenbarrett said:
Lucid dreams a most wonderous thing. A beautiful poem of images and meaning. Nicely done
May 13th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Lucid dreams a most wonderous thing. A beautiful poem of images and meaning. Nicely done
May 13th, 2025 04:09
Dream science. Energize!
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of dreaming that we can go back to the beginning and start again, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 03:10
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of dreaming that we can go back to the beginning and start again, nicely expressed and written
May 13th, 2025 03:10
Traveling through our mistakes
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write highlighting that man is still not learning from his mistakes, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 06:56
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write highlighting that man is still not learning from his mistakes, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 06:56
Traveling through our mistakes
sorenbarrett said:
And so is the nature of man that doesn\'t learn from his mistakes. Well written and thought provoking
May 10th, 2025 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
And so is the nature of man that doesn\'t learn from his mistakes. Well written and thought provoking
May 10th, 2025 05:25
Self hate came home to roost
Poetic Licence said:
A quite powerful and thought provoking write, nicely written and expressed
May 9th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A quite powerful and thought provoking write, nicely written and expressed
May 9th, 2025 06:20
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