Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
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sorenbarrett said:
This happens as we grow older our hearing starts to go. lol It is true however that the language has several words with close sounds and you have made good use of this rhyming to give a different meaning to each phrase twisting a the readers mind in different directions on a wild ride. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This happens as we grow older our hearing starts to go. lol It is true however that the language has several words with close sounds and you have made good use of this rhyming to give a different meaning to each phrase twisting a the readers mind in different directions on a wild ride. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2024 03:46
Is it Blasphemous
Dan Williams said:
Lots of times I feel ashamed to be \"human\". We have done such a poor job with this tiny planet we live on. Good Work.
August 21st, 2024 00:11
Dan Williams said:
Lots of times I feel ashamed to be \"human\". We have done such a poor job with this tiny planet we live on. Good Work.
August 21st, 2024 00:11
Is it Blasphemous
sorenbarrett said:
If there were a god they would have to have a great sense of humor. After all just look at the people they created
Loved the write
August 20th, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
If there were a god they would have to have a great sense of humor. After all just look at the people they created
Loved the write
August 20th, 2024 05:11
Do it yourself Reparations
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written. An emphasis on what we lack.
August 17th, 2024 16:15
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written. An emphasis on what we lack.
August 17th, 2024 16:15
This land is my land
sorenbarrett said:
An old topic put in a most innovative and new form. Loved the rhyming with time honored images to make the point. Nicely done
August 16th, 2024 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
An old topic put in a most innovative and new form. Loved the rhyming with time honored images to make the point. Nicely done
August 16th, 2024 04:53
Stealing ideas
sorenbarrett said:
We all borrow, steal, pinch, plagiarize, copy, cover, things we have heard of seen knowingly or unknowingly. There is nothing new under the sun. Great write
August 15th, 2024 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
We all borrow, steal, pinch, plagiarize, copy, cover, things we have heard of seen knowingly or unknowingly. There is nothing new under the sun. Great write
August 15th, 2024 04:44
Politics over nature
Thoughtless said:
In overall consumption and pollution, the United States with 4.25% of the world\'s population consumes the most, closely followed by China. Both countries have significant air pollution.
Those things that might help get rid of pollution usually cost too much for poor Americans to afford. There is a world-wide gap between the rich and poor.
And some things promoted environmentally are not good for the environment such as batteries for EVs. However, scientists are getting closer to finding batteries that are more compatible for safe environmental usage. Planting trees is great, but they need to be planted in the correct places. Some places natural grasses are a better environmental alternative such as in Siberia and parts of the American tundra. It\'s complicated and requires the entire world. Quite a sticky wicket.
August 14th, 2024 22:00
Thoughtless said:
In overall consumption and pollution, the United States with 4.25% of the world\'s population consumes the most, closely followed by China. Both countries have significant air pollution.
Those things that might help get rid of pollution usually cost too much for poor Americans to afford. There is a world-wide gap between the rich and poor.
And some things promoted environmentally are not good for the environment such as batteries for EVs. However, scientists are getting closer to finding batteries that are more compatible for safe environmental usage. Planting trees is great, but they need to be planted in the correct places. Some places natural grasses are a better environmental alternative such as in Siberia and parts of the American tundra. It\'s complicated and requires the entire world. Quite a sticky wicket.
August 14th, 2024 22:00
Politics over nature
sorenbarrett said:
Hypocrisy is the rule as is waste and laziness. Sad but true. Good write
August 14th, 2024 18:29
sorenbarrett said:
Hypocrisy is the rule as is waste and laziness. Sad but true. Good write
August 14th, 2024 18:29
Politics over nature
Doggerel Dave said:
\'all the actual important stuff is off the table\' - not only masked but locked away.
August 14th, 2024 18:24
Doggerel Dave said:
\'all the actual important stuff is off the table\' - not only masked but locked away.
August 14th, 2024 18:24
Serial killer in hiding
sorenbarrett said:
I hear venom in this poem. Anger and disgust are expressed. Powerful
August 11th, 2024 20:02
sorenbarrett said:
I hear venom in this poem. Anger and disgust are expressed. Powerful
August 11th, 2024 20:02
A beautiful dark heart
Cassie58 said:
A fun write. I enjoyed the humour. All the best.
August 9th, 2024 15:10
Cassie58 said:
A fun write. I enjoyed the humour. All the best.
August 9th, 2024 15:10
A beautiful dark heart
sorenbarrett said:
Lilith before Eve great add in here. The poem brings to mind Joseph Conrad \"The heart of darkness\" A most interesting write.
August 9th, 2024 14:20
sorenbarrett said:
Lilith before Eve great add in here. The poem brings to mind Joseph Conrad \"The heart of darkness\" A most interesting write.
August 9th, 2024 14:20
Our God
sorenbarrett said:
\" sin protected by bodies are but mere sacrifices for those who wish to be saved\" a great line in a fine write
July 29th, 2024 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
\" sin protected by bodies are but mere sacrifices for those who wish to be saved\" a great line in a fine write
July 29th, 2024 09:39
Trump for president
Jerry Reynolds said:
To be all talk
and no listen
is not amazing grace
July 19th, 2024 07:05
Jerry Reynolds said:
To be all talk
and no listen
is not amazing grace
July 19th, 2024 07:05
Trump for president
sorenbarrett said:
These two choices, is this the best that America has. We are in trouble.
July 19th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
These two choices, is this the best that America has. We are in trouble.
July 19th, 2024 05:28
Trump for president
Mutley Ravishes said:
Trump or Biden
Take your pick
If democracy isn\'t a scam
Then I am sick!
July 19th, 2024 00:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
Trump or Biden
Take your pick
If democracy isn\'t a scam
Then I am sick!
July 19th, 2024 00:22
The mob at a politician’s door
Doggerel Dave said:
Promises, promises... A man for all seasons bullshit. Well writ.
July 18th, 2024 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Promises, promises... A man for all seasons bullshit. Well writ.
July 18th, 2024 19:19
Take me to your leader
evenwheniLie said:
…..pointing out the obvious holes in mans various philosophies, and onto theologies; the mind with all of its selfish ideologies are but mere reflections of the self, we formulate and postulate our theories in such directions to give value and spiritual weight to what some psychiatrist deem essentially schizophrenic in nature, although not clinically speaking they and there impact are the same.
July 7th, 2024 23:26
evenwheniLie said:
…..pointing out the obvious holes in mans various philosophies, and onto theologies; the mind with all of its selfish ideologies are but mere reflections of the self, we formulate and postulate our theories in such directions to give value and spiritual weight to what some psychiatrist deem essentially schizophrenic in nature, although not clinically speaking they and there impact are the same.
July 7th, 2024 23:26
Take me to your leader
2781 said:
The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.
July 7th, 2024 17:56
2781 said:
The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.
July 7th, 2024 17:56
Evil intended
Parisab said:
Indeed to recognize “the good in men comes best when “life unfolds”… it takes patience and faith indeed…
July 5th, 2024 11:33
Parisab said:
Indeed to recognize “the good in men comes best when “life unfolds”… it takes patience and faith indeed…
July 5th, 2024 11:33
Gargoyle and or guard
Mutley Ravishes said:
Two salesmen, selling nothing! Playing out a script, it\'s laughable!
With your rhyme it was like I was in a rap. Great work.
July 2nd, 2024 18:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Two salesmen, selling nothing! Playing out a script, it\'s laughable!
With your rhyme it was like I was in a rap. Great work.
July 2nd, 2024 18:43
Gargoyle and or guard
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
much enjoyed
my friend!! 😎
Great rhyme,
rhythm, flow
and blend!
Rock on!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 2nd, 2024 17:39
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
much enjoyed
my friend!! 😎
Great rhyme,
rhythm, flow
and blend!
Rock on!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 2nd, 2024 17:39
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