Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
How far behind are we
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that long distance space travel is denied to folks at a certain \"level of consciousness.\" Lets hope that\'s true!
Great write.
January 6th, 2025 01:08
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that long distance space travel is denied to folks at a certain \"level of consciousness.\" Lets hope that\'s true!
Great write.
January 6th, 2025 01:08
The one in us all
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s wielding his sword!
Great write.
December 31st, 2024 19:05
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s wielding his sword!
Great write.
December 31st, 2024 19:05
Christmas at mom’s house
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully written.
What if the Santa story is hinting at something, i.e beliefs and receiving presents?!
Merry Christmas!
December 24th, 2024 18:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully written.
What if the Santa story is hinting at something, i.e beliefs and receiving presents?!
Merry Christmas!
December 24th, 2024 18:40
Christmas at mom’s house
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem blended with fond memories and relationships. Love the internal rhymes and general flow of the poem. Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem blended with fond memories and relationships. Love the internal rhymes and general flow of the poem. Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 14:38
Christmas at mom’s house
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely memories of a loving Mother, nicely worded.
December 24th, 2024 14:19
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely memories of a loving Mother, nicely worded.
December 24th, 2024 14:19
It’s only two ways out
sorenbarrett said:
Rapid fire rhymes spit fire and some good ones too. Nicely done
December 24th, 2024 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Rapid fire rhymes spit fire and some good ones too. Nicely done
December 24th, 2024 03:40
It’s only two ways out
rin said:
I want to be able to live cheerfully even in chaos, but it\'s difficult.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:23
rin said:
I want to be able to live cheerfully even in chaos, but it\'s difficult.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:23
A Hollywood motivated future
Mutley Ravishes said:
Obi Wan
Would\'ve liked
This song!
December 18th, 2024 21:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Obi Wan
Would\'ve liked
This song!
December 18th, 2024 21:38
A Hollywood motivated future
Poetic Licence said:
Dealing with an issue that should be a concern for all and we have not heard the last of it, nicely written and strongly put.
December 18th, 2024 18:34
Poetic Licence said:
Dealing with an issue that should be a concern for all and we have not heard the last of it, nicely written and strongly put.
December 18th, 2024 18:34
A bag of lies
Poetic Licence said:
The old saying Keep your friends close, Your Enemies even closer, Thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:24
Poetic Licence said:
The old saying Keep your friends close, Your Enemies even closer, Thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:24
After the brainwashing is done
sorenbarrett said:
This point makes its point. Nazis stand for and represent all that Americans should not like. Nevertheless, freedom of speech allows them to make their home in this place of freedom. Freedom is a loose word and means whatever the person that speaks to wants it to mean. Well written.
December 13th, 2024 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
This point makes its point. Nazis stand for and represent all that Americans should not like. Nevertheless, freedom of speech allows them to make their home in this place of freedom. Freedom is a loose word and means whatever the person that speaks to wants it to mean. Well written.
December 13th, 2024 09:58
After the brainwashing is done
MR.apocalypse said:
Words like Nazi and racist will lose their meaning if we don\'t use them correctly. It has already started to take on it\'s new form
December 13th, 2024 02:08
MR.apocalypse said:
Words like Nazi and racist will lose their meaning if we don\'t use them correctly. It has already started to take on it\'s new form
December 13th, 2024 02:08
The created
Poetic Licence said:
A enjoyable and entertaining read, raises questions i am not sure we will ever know the answers to, to be fact, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 03:53
Poetic Licence said:
A enjoyable and entertaining read, raises questions i am not sure we will ever know the answers to, to be fact, Thank you
December 12th, 2024 03:53
The created
Mutley Ravishes said:
You pack so much into your rhymes. And then there\'s the flow.
I guess the Cylons are coming, though their time will be short....?!
December 12th, 2024 02:15
Mutley Ravishes said:
You pack so much into your rhymes. And then there\'s the flow.
I guess the Cylons are coming, though their time will be short....?!
December 12th, 2024 02:15
A stubbed toe is criminal
Poetic Licence said:
A serious message conveyed in a satirical way, enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 03:35
Poetic Licence said:
A serious message conveyed in a satirical way, enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 03:35
How long is this chain
Poetic Licence said:
Another powerful piece of writing, dealing with a very real issue, Thank you
December 10th, 2024 04:18
Poetic Licence said:
Another powerful piece of writing, dealing with a very real issue, Thank you
December 10th, 2024 04:18
Egypt and Sumer were babies
Poetic Licence said:
I like the message written within this poem, and i love the line Adams calender was our Big Ben, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 17:29
Poetic Licence said:
I like the message written within this poem, and i love the line Adams calender was our Big Ben, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 8th, 2024 17:29
Egypt and Sumer were babies
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow of this poem as well as the direction it took. On the surface light hearted but more profound underneath. Lovely
December 8th, 2024 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow of this poem as well as the direction it took. On the surface light hearted but more profound underneath. Lovely
December 8th, 2024 15:48
Purposeful denial is a science
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"the universe inside can be more demanding.\" Great line (and the title, too). I\'ve been thinking lately that the \"devils\" inside are the truly demanding ones, and not The Creator!
December 8th, 2024 04:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"the universe inside can be more demanding.\" Great line (and the title, too). I\'ve been thinking lately that the \"devils\" inside are the truly demanding ones, and not The Creator!
December 8th, 2024 04:30
Purposeful denial is a science
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time imparting a bit of wisdom. Very nicely done.
December 7th, 2024 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time imparting a bit of wisdom. Very nicely done.
December 7th, 2024 14:11
Purposeful denial is a science
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time in parting a bit of wisdom. Very nicely done.
December 7th, 2024 14:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time in parting a bit of wisdom. Very nicely done.
December 7th, 2024 14:10
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