Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie



Obtuse
Doggerel Dave said:

Denial (particularly if it is in your best interests to do so) rulz....👍

November 23rd, 2024 05:14

Obtuse
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

November 22nd, 2024 15:27

The God scope
Mutley Ravishes said:

That`s the kind of questing I like!
Your writing is going up and up (imo).

November 18th, 2024 21:35

The God scope
Doggerel Dave said:

We\'re here because we\'re here - That\'s all we can possibly know for sure.

November 18th, 2024 00:39

Our metamorphosis
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 15th, 2024 10:57

Does god need God
Mutley Ravishes said:

Tell it to `em!
This fifth sun race
We need a slap in the face!

\"The real man is a magnificent Imagination.\"
N.G

November 13th, 2024 18:49

What the dying see
Mutley Ravishes said:

Great contemplation
Beautifully written
Thanks a million!

November 11th, 2024 19:34

What the dying see
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

November 11th, 2024 15:03

What the dying see
Lorenz said:

Post halloween delirium !

November 11th, 2024 09:43

Protect the babies
Doggerel Dave said:

I still remain totally uncomprehending as to why people choose to bring a new human into the world whom it is pretty certain will live a life during which they will be unable to achieve their full potential.

November 10th, 2024 05:17

Emotional constraints
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 9th, 2024 07:30

The tree of Eve
Demar Desu said:

Lmaoo the last line

November 3rd, 2024 23:38

A hard head makes a soft ass
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 26th, 2024 07:37

This music in my ear
Tony36 said:

Brilliant

October 18th, 2024 09:26

Life’s slight of hand
Mutley Ravishes said:

Great work. Are you thinking of setting it to some music?!

October 16th, 2024 20:57

Those black jobs
Dan Williams said:

Still one step above robots. Monkeys will create no SkyNet.

October 8th, 2024 00:04

Those black jobs
jarcher54 said:

This is what poetry is about. Brave and dangerous. Sharp like razor wire tearing your flesh. Unapologetic.

October 6th, 2024 10:44

Getting hard to remember
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 26th, 2024 13:31

Boisterously bourgeois but chained
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 24th, 2024 15:52

Dedicated to detonation
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 23rd, 2024 06:38

Unwritten Proverbs
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 20th, 2024 07:24

Back to the blackboard
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 14th, 2024 21:07

America’s glass jaw
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 13th, 2024 09:44

America’s glass jaw
Doggerel Dave said:

Am I to take it that you are not too happy with the situation right now?🙃

September 13th, 2024 06:05

My post is traumatic
sorenbarrett said:

Whatever you call it, Shellshock or post traumatic stress disorder it is all the same. Misinterpretations high levels of anxiety and even paranoia. A powerful piece.

September 5th, 2024 13:45

My Dothraki doctor
sorenbarrett said:

Cleverly worded this poem is a fun read. It smacks of humor, but also has a serious side and I believe the message is more serious than one would believe.

September 4th, 2024 05:44

Up against a warmonger
Mutley Ravishes said:

Up against three warmongers?!

September 2nd, 2024 01:10

Have some kool aid
2781 said:

It\'s a slippery slope

August 31st, 2024 02:45

Ingrained truths
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 29th, 2024 18:49

Jack in a box
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 28th, 2024 09:58

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