Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Misguided loyalists
Doggerel Dave said:
And why? because economics, the lack of alternative safe accommodation does not allow escape. As for the rest - that\'s your territory, man.
August 19th, 2023 20:19
Doggerel Dave said:
And why? because economics, the lack of alternative safe accommodation does not allow escape. As for the rest - that\'s your territory, man.
August 19th, 2023 20:19
My God, your god, their god; check the spelling
Bobby O said:
Incisive commentary is tricky to present without judgement or personal bias. Lo, this you have achieved and I salute.
August 19th, 2023 00:24
Bobby O said:
Incisive commentary is tricky to present without judgement or personal bias. Lo, this you have achieved and I salute.
August 19th, 2023 00:24
My God, your god, their god; check the spelling
evenwheniLie said:
People have to agree on one god or no god at all…
August 18th, 2023 11:48
evenwheniLie said:
People have to agree on one god or no god at all…
August 18th, 2023 11:48
My God, your god, their god; check the spelling
2781 said:
Spirits becoming the nuisance.
August 18th, 2023 09:08
2781 said:
Spirits becoming the nuisance.
August 18th, 2023 09:08
My God, your god, their god; check the spelling
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - just become an atheist and agnostic, then continue with your life while you have it.....
August 18th, 2023 05:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah - just become an atheist and agnostic, then continue with your life while you have it.....
August 18th, 2023 05:25
It’s just another superhero movie
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m definitely letting Cremation Mary go first - clean up the joint before I get there. There\'s been moments in my life that, if I\'d known her, she would have been quite handy. Situations perhaps not quite as extreme as, but human pollutants come in various strengths.....
August 10th, 2023 19:25
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m definitely letting Cremation Mary go first - clean up the joint before I get there. There\'s been moments in my life that, if I\'d known her, she would have been quite handy. Situations perhaps not quite as extreme as, but human pollutants come in various strengths.....
August 10th, 2023 19:25
It’s just another superhero movie
Parisab said:
I’m already a fan of Cremation Mary and I will order a ‘Gucci plus Covid mask’! Love the Coltrane reference! Entertaining read and thanks evenwheniLie!
August 10th, 2023 17:37
Parisab said:
I’m already a fan of Cremation Mary and I will order a ‘Gucci plus Covid mask’! Love the Coltrane reference! Entertaining read and thanks evenwheniLie!
August 10th, 2023 17:37
Escaping the devil’s system
vividvoid14 said:
i like the way u use your words. its amazing
August 9th, 2023 14:22
vividvoid14 said:
i like the way u use your words. its amazing
August 9th, 2023 14:22
These damn flies
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣I live in Australia. Is it you who keeps on sending them over to us?
Dispose of them over there - don\'t keep on exporting them.
August 7th, 2023 06:34
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣I live in Australia. Is it you who keeps on sending them over to us?
Dispose of them over there - don\'t keep on exporting them.
August 7th, 2023 06:34
How deep is the corruption
Bobby O said:
Underneath it all is the string pull of bravery
Nice write good read
August 6th, 2023 00:31
Bobby O said:
Underneath it all is the string pull of bravery
Nice write good read
August 6th, 2023 00:31
God machine
L. B. Mek said:
two thousand different gods
so having a deity, seems to have been
a graduation of societal evolution
once,
now,
we\'re on the other side of the cliff
where we reject the very notion
of a deity, in the west
while we\'re all happy to talk about our demons and satanic influences
...
no sci-fi or fantasy book
can ever write the absurdities
our species, live...
(a questing write
pondering the limits of our intangibles)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 4th, 2023 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
two thousand different gods
so having a deity, seems to have been
a graduation of societal evolution
once,
now,
we\'re on the other side of the cliff
where we reject the very notion
of a deity, in the west
while we\'re all happy to talk about our demons and satanic influences
...
no sci-fi or fantasy book
can ever write the absurdities
our species, live...
(a questing write
pondering the limits of our intangibles)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 4th, 2023 06:16
Tripping over the past
Beth K said:
Love, love LOVE your poem!! I felt like I was part of your family reading it. Awesome imagery, and what a gift you have for bringing words to life (or is it life to words?!). Thank you ❤️
July 29th, 2023 20:01
Beth K said:
Love, love LOVE your poem!! I felt like I was part of your family reading it. Awesome imagery, and what a gift you have for bringing words to life (or is it life to words?!). Thank you ❤️
July 29th, 2023 20:01
Admirable Admiral
L. B. Mek said:
\'but none that will jam though.\'
now that\'s flow!
so much fun as well, thank you!
July 24th, 2023 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'but none that will jam though.\'
now that\'s flow!
so much fun as well, thank you!
July 24th, 2023 04:44
The News!
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(personally, its gotten to the point
I truly believe
if something\'s in the news
best believe, someone
rich
somewhere, is profiting from it
the more vile, the subject matter
the more accurately this applies..)
just check out
the week of that 2nd titanic \'spontaneous\' implosion
then check all the news that was covered up
by people being distracted by that news
6 billion to ukraine
a sitting president\'s cocaine crimes quashed
and so much more, we will be lucky
to find out in our lifetime
now
for a real treat, trace back the original
titanic sinking
and the timely last minute absence of Rockefeller
then match it
to all the people who opposed his and Rothchild\'s fed reserve push
dying on board of that \'accidental\' collision..
news, utilised
to distract and confuse
(
https://kreately.in/why-do-people-think-that-the-federal-reserve-was-created-by-the-rothschilds-and-the-rockefellers/
)
July 21st, 2023 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(personally, its gotten to the point
I truly believe
if something\'s in the news
best believe, someone
rich
somewhere, is profiting from it
the more vile, the subject matter
the more accurately this applies..)
just check out
the week of that 2nd titanic \'spontaneous\' implosion
then check all the news that was covered up
by people being distracted by that news
6 billion to ukraine
a sitting president\'s cocaine crimes quashed
and so much more, we will be lucky
to find out in our lifetime
now
for a real treat, trace back the original
titanic sinking
and the timely last minute absence of Rockefeller
then match it
to all the people who opposed his and Rothchild\'s fed reserve push
dying on board of that \'accidental\' collision..
news, utilised
to distract and confuse
(
https://kreately.in/why-do-people-think-that-the-federal-reserve-was-created-by-the-rothschilds-and-the-rockefellers/
)
July 21st, 2023 05:48
The News!
2781 said:
There\'s an Aussie comedian named Steve Hughes who covers the topic...
My wife says, \"there they go again, spreading the good news!\"
July 21st, 2023 02:17
2781 said:
There\'s an Aussie comedian named Steve Hughes who covers the topic...
My wife says, \"there they go again, spreading the good news!\"
July 21st, 2023 02:17
What’s my niche?
Parisab said:
And now that’s a rap and grabbed my attention-on a different note I attempted at writing a lyrical rap “midlife rap” if you care to read it
July 6th, 2023 20:40
Parisab said:
And now that’s a rap and grabbed my attention-on a different note I attempted at writing a lyrical rap “midlife rap” if you care to read it
July 6th, 2023 20:40
Crazy bastard with a Gun
Parisab said:
It must have been hard practice to write this while imagining the psychopathy of a mass shooter-thanks for the write and I send my condolences to your beautiful city and the people of Philadelphia.
July 6th, 2023 00:47
Parisab said:
It must have been hard practice to write this while imagining the psychopathy of a mass shooter-thanks for the write and I send my condolences to your beautiful city and the people of Philadelphia.
July 6th, 2023 00:47
The features of Cain
evenwheniLie said:
It’s very hard not to point out the hypocrisy of mankind, it lies at the bottom of all our problems; self centered and delusional should be our name.
June 30th, 2023 09:36
evenwheniLie said:
It’s very hard not to point out the hypocrisy of mankind, it lies at the bottom of all our problems; self centered and delusional should be our name.
June 30th, 2023 09:36
The features of Cain
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear Poet
brotherly love, as our conduit to demise
those by our sides, we kill for
those on the other \'side\', we deem
as beneath our need to respect
and love;
sister\'s, crying that we stop
all this masculine chest drumming
malevolence
while we men stubbornly devolve
to assault rifles
from machetes and throwing dirt
..
cyclicality of inherited, cultural
influences
our proximity to hate, blossoming
the flowers of our generation\'s, hate
we aspire for greatness
with each bullet we choose, to destroy
than fire and murder a brethren
that we know, just killed our
sister..
wait, who can accept such a fate
nah, bring out the nuclears
lets all be blinded and die
b\'cos
I don\'t have it in me to let my
families killer, simply slide
...
and on, with each death toll
total
we distance ourselves from
the humane, in our species
name...
June 30th, 2023 06:40
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear Poet
brotherly love, as our conduit to demise
those by our sides, we kill for
those on the other \'side\', we deem
as beneath our need to respect
and love;
sister\'s, crying that we stop
all this masculine chest drumming
malevolence
while we men stubbornly devolve
to assault rifles
from machetes and throwing dirt
..
cyclicality of inherited, cultural
influences
our proximity to hate, blossoming
the flowers of our generation\'s, hate
we aspire for greatness
with each bullet we choose, to destroy
than fire and murder a brethren
that we know, just killed our
sister..
wait, who can accept such a fate
nah, bring out the nuclears
lets all be blinded and die
b\'cos
I don\'t have it in me to let my
families killer, simply slide
...
and on, with each death toll
total
we distance ourselves from
the humane, in our species
name...
June 30th, 2023 06:40
Afrikaner
Garth Rakumakoe said:
My maternal ancestry is that of the Nama people of Namibia, closely related to the tribes of the Hereros, Griequas, and the Khoi and the San. The oldest tribes people in Subsaharan Africa, so suffice to say, this piece hits home for me in more ways than I can express. Ode. Hommage. Peace. Love. Rain. Blessings. Well expressed sir.
June 22nd, 2023 04:40
Garth Rakumakoe said:
My maternal ancestry is that of the Nama people of Namibia, closely related to the tribes of the Hereros, Griequas, and the Khoi and the San. The oldest tribes people in Subsaharan Africa, so suffice to say, this piece hits home for me in more ways than I can express. Ode. Hommage. Peace. Love. Rain. Blessings. Well expressed sir.
June 22nd, 2023 04:40
Afrikaner
jarcher54 said:
Powerful and thoughtful... sometimes what others need to do is just listen. Planet Africa is a phrase I will remember... inspired words.
June 22nd, 2023 02:35
jarcher54 said:
Powerful and thoughtful... sometimes what others need to do is just listen. Planet Africa is a phrase I will remember... inspired words.
June 22nd, 2023 02:35
From then till now and back again
L. B. Mek said:
it never ends, does it?
we\'ve need a revolution, to make amends
for our last revolution, since
archaic days of might, made right
soon, we\'ll get it right
instead of slingshot stones
those Hiroshima devastations
will really, get the job done...
but even, then
there will be a chieftain, tripping on stage
or stirring hiss skull pot
and telling, TALL tales
of a past glory, distorted by dystopian
fog
.. all while, a poet
sends smoke signals to posterity
to record it all, dreaming
of a more poetic experience
of existence
June 5th, 2023 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
it never ends, does it?
we\'ve need a revolution, to make amends
for our last revolution, since
archaic days of might, made right
soon, we\'ll get it right
instead of slingshot stones
those Hiroshima devastations
will really, get the job done...
but even, then
there will be a chieftain, tripping on stage
or stirring hiss skull pot
and telling, TALL tales
of a past glory, distorted by dystopian
fog
.. all while, a poet
sends smoke signals to posterity
to record it all, dreaming
of a more poetic experience
of existence
June 5th, 2023 02:56
End Game
L. B. Mek said:
\'evil is explained not changed,
kept in range to be used for blame,
or to externalize shame,\'
deep!
a questing write, dear Poet
May 22nd, 2023 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'evil is explained not changed,
kept in range to be used for blame,
or to externalize shame,\'
deep!
a questing write, dear Poet
May 22nd, 2023 04:14
What’s beauty
2781 said:
What\'s that saying? \"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.\"
Mouldering the beholdering maybe.
May 18th, 2023 23:40
2781 said:
What\'s that saying? \"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.\"
Mouldering the beholdering maybe.
May 18th, 2023 23:40
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