Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Gargoyle and or guard
Mutley Ravishes said:
Two salesmen, selling nothing! Playing out a script, it\'s laughable!
With your rhyme it was like I was in a rap. Great work.
July 2nd, 2024 18:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Two salesmen, selling nothing! Playing out a script, it\'s laughable!
With your rhyme it was like I was in a rap. Great work.
July 2nd, 2024 18:43
Gargoyle and or guard
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
much enjoyed
my friend!! 😎
Great rhyme,
rhythm, flow
and blend!
Rock on!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 2nd, 2024 17:39
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
much enjoyed
my friend!! 😎
Great rhyme,
rhythm, flow
and blend!
Rock on!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 2nd, 2024 17:39
Stabilizing live’s
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a rhyme! Great work.
Mineral>Plant>Animal>Human>?
Or back down the ladder. Again?!
June 11th, 2024 18:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a rhyme! Great work.
Mineral>Plant>Animal>Human>?
Or back down the ladder. Again?!
June 11th, 2024 18:30
Resurrection of a slave
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if mankind has been here before? What if the present humanity is the fifth one to have existed on this planet?
What if we are not the body and the thoughts?
What if you, me, and everybody has committed spiritual crimes at some point in our past? (and how far back does that past really go?!)
May 23rd, 2024 18:28
Mutley Ravishes said:
What if mankind has been here before? What if the present humanity is the fifth one to have existed on this planet?
What if we are not the body and the thoughts?
What if you, me, and everybody has committed spiritual crimes at some point in our past? (and how far back does that past really go?!)
May 23rd, 2024 18:28
Let’s play Jakes
2781 said:
\"Beware of the leaven of the Pharisees, which is hypocrisy.\"
May 22nd, 2024 04:59
2781 said:
\"Beware of the leaven of the Pharisees, which is hypocrisy.\"
May 22nd, 2024 04:59
Smoldering flames
NafisaSB said:
agree with your message - keep composing - well done
May 17th, 2024 00:28
NafisaSB said:
agree with your message - keep composing - well done
May 17th, 2024 00:28
Life is just an episode
aDarkerMind said:
very good indeed...
enjoyed every word.
May 11th, 2024 12:22
aDarkerMind said:
very good indeed...
enjoyed every word.
May 11th, 2024 12:22
Mad enough to kill
Doggerel Dave said:
If that\'s the process, and I have a feeling in my vitals that it is, then gun control is the only answer.
May 10th, 2024 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
If that\'s the process, and I have a feeling in my vitals that it is, then gun control is the only answer.
May 10th, 2024 19:49
What did Malcolm say
Doggerel Dave said:
The tictoc Of Malcom X: He made much sense.
Your piece: About power and direct abuse?
Can\'t quite make the connection.
May 4th, 2024 00:30
Doggerel Dave said:
The tictoc Of Malcom X: He made much sense.
Your piece: About power and direct abuse?
Can\'t quite make the connection.
May 4th, 2024 00:30
Heavenly nightmare
2781 said:
I form light, and create darkness: I make peace, and create evil; I the Lord do all these things.
Crazy scriptures but that\'s what I got.
April 26th, 2024 23:57
2781 said:
I form light, and create darkness: I make peace, and create evil; I the Lord do all these things.
Crazy scriptures but that\'s what I got.
April 26th, 2024 23:57
America withdraw
evenwheniLie said:
America should withdraw, close its borders to certain countries (Israel should be one) to work on particular issues, take the gloves off the scientific community a bit more, revamp our society for the better, get out off conflicts and the U.N., stop policing the world and mind our business, work on space travel (cause we’re going to need it) convert nuclear weapons to cheap or free power for its citizens… etc, etc, etc…. P.S., find new ways to get power from the oceans and sun, create aircraft carrier size farms out to sea, for extra farmland… let’s blast off,, make Americans and America great!!!!!
March 23rd, 2024 11:06
evenwheniLie said:
America should withdraw, close its borders to certain countries (Israel should be one) to work on particular issues, take the gloves off the scientific community a bit more, revamp our society for the better, get out off conflicts and the U.N., stop policing the world and mind our business, work on space travel (cause we’re going to need it) convert nuclear weapons to cheap or free power for its citizens… etc, etc, etc…. P.S., find new ways to get power from the oceans and sun, create aircraft carrier size farms out to sea, for extra farmland… let’s blast off,, make Americans and America great!!!!!
March 23rd, 2024 11:06
America withdraw
2781 said:
I fear it\'s list it\'s way, and taken many with it.
March 22nd, 2024 23:14
2781 said:
I fear it\'s list it\'s way, and taken many with it.
March 22nd, 2024 23:14
Sorry
Doggerel Dave said:
Re your response to Zamir Marshall (above): I obviously haven\'t made the right comments in the past to elicit such a clear and rewarding statement of your position. Thanks for providing that now.
Ever thought of placing that or similar atop of your homepage/profile?
March 10th, 2024 00:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Re your response to Zamir Marshall (above): I obviously haven\'t made the right comments in the past to elicit such a clear and rewarding statement of your position. Thanks for providing that now.
Ever thought of placing that or similar atop of your homepage/profile?
March 10th, 2024 00:17
Sorry
sunshine777 said:
beautifully written and truthful, thank you for sharing
March 9th, 2024 22:14
sunshine777 said:
beautifully written and truthful, thank you for sharing
March 9th, 2024 22:14
Lost papers of a troubled man
Doggerel Dave said:
I get it - I feel it - I understand it, but it is too far outside my own personal experience to make meaningful comment.
But many thanks for or putting it out there.
March 2nd, 2024 00:31
Doggerel Dave said:
I get it - I feel it - I understand it, but it is too far outside my own personal experience to make meaningful comment.
But many thanks for or putting it out there.
March 2nd, 2024 00:31
Lost papers of a troubled man
Parisab said:
“cultural dystrophy that serves as a trophy to victims trying to be wolves, but still serving that master with hooves.“
Only relief that comes from him not being among us, witnessing the affairs of the day…
Powerful and sensitive poem…
March 1st, 2024 11:11
Parisab said:
“cultural dystrophy that serves as a trophy to victims trying to be wolves, but still serving that master with hooves.“
Only relief that comes from him not being among us, witnessing the affairs of the day…
Powerful and sensitive poem…
March 1st, 2024 11:11
I’ve seen the future
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Like it, Mr Futurologist Spaceman.
February 25th, 2024 18:41
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Like it, Mr Futurologist Spaceman.
February 25th, 2024 18:41
The power of alone
Doggerel Dave said:
Aloneness is fine most of the time....at least I can hear myself think.
Great stuff.
February 23rd, 2024 08:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Aloneness is fine most of the time....at least I can hear myself think.
Great stuff.
February 23rd, 2024 08:47
A house at the end of town
vividvoid14 said:
love this its an amazing poem keep writting
February 21st, 2024 09:43
vividvoid14 said:
love this its an amazing poem keep writting
February 21st, 2024 09:43
No one lives alone
Shetonya Latryce said:
Love this. Easy to read, understand and relate to. Thank you for your candid clarity.
February 13th, 2024 16:48
Shetonya Latryce said:
Love this. Easy to read, understand and relate to. Thank you for your candid clarity.
February 13th, 2024 16:48
A message from the graves of slaves
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful, I come from a town where no one of any colour were ever different or identified so. How the world can change so fast in just a generation. I now live it Italy and it\'s different. 🌹
February 12th, 2024 05:12
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful, I come from a town where no one of any colour were ever different or identified so. How the world can change so fast in just a generation. I now live it Italy and it\'s different. 🌹
February 12th, 2024 05:12
The most conquered
Parisab said:
Great flow with messages, sourced by the ancient winds! Ugliest storms in history, but best not forgotten.
February 4th, 2024 12:21
Parisab said:
Great flow with messages, sourced by the ancient winds! Ugliest storms in history, but best not forgotten.
February 4th, 2024 12:21
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