Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Who’s behind the stereotypes
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed nicely poetic it gets its message across. A fun read
February 14th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A rap indeed nicely poetic it gets its message across. A fun read
February 14th, 2025 05:42
A reflection from behind
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great flow.
I admit
I don\'t know
What you are saying
I\'ll re-read it!
February 12th, 2025 18:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great flow.
I admit
I don\'t know
What you are saying
I\'ll re-read it!
February 12th, 2025 18:42
A reflection from behind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:38
A reflection from behind
teardrop said:
I really enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for the read.
February 12th, 2025 01:34
teardrop said:
I really enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for the read.
February 12th, 2025 01:34
When sleeping gods awaken
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It need a universe(s?!) to \"know\" Itself? A teacher once said that one needs a mirror to know oneself. So, do we have a Being that is all-knowing and at the same time doesn\'t know Itself?! I have no idea!
I remember another teacher saying that this universe is the 84th in a series of 112. He was then asked what is the outcome of number 112? He answered that 112 will be \"fully conscious.\" If that is true then we have a long ways to go!
Mind-opening rhyme!
January 20th, 2025 19:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It need a universe(s?!) to \"know\" Itself? A teacher once said that one needs a mirror to know oneself. So, do we have a Being that is all-knowing and at the same time doesn\'t know Itself?! I have no idea!
I remember another teacher saying that this universe is the 84th in a series of 112. He was then asked what is the outcome of number 112? He answered that 112 will be \"fully conscious.\" If that is true then we have a long ways to go!
Mind-opening rhyme!
January 20th, 2025 19:10
Power over power?
Mutley Ravishes said:
That guy was babbling. Ignorance reigns supreme.
Great work!
January 10th, 2025 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
That guy was babbling. Ignorance reigns supreme.
Great work!
January 10th, 2025 18:41
Power over power?
Poetic Licence said:
It is easier for them to make excuses rather than take any positive action, well expressed
January 10th, 2025 13:19
Poetic Licence said:
It is easier for them to make excuses rather than take any positive action, well expressed
January 10th, 2025 13:19
How far behind are we
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that long distance space travel is denied to folks at a certain \"level of consciousness.\" Lets hope that\'s true!
Great write.
January 6th, 2025 01:08
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that long distance space travel is denied to folks at a certain \"level of consciousness.\" Lets hope that\'s true!
Great write.
January 6th, 2025 01:08
The one in us all
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s wielding his sword!
Great write.
December 31st, 2024 19:05
Mutley Ravishes said:
Manjushri’s wielding his sword!
Great write.
December 31st, 2024 19:05
Christmas at mom’s house
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully written.
What if the Santa story is hinting at something, i.e beliefs and receiving presents?!
Merry Christmas!
December 24th, 2024 18:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
Beautifully written.
What if the Santa story is hinting at something, i.e beliefs and receiving presents?!
Merry Christmas!
December 24th, 2024 18:40
Christmas at mom’s house
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem blended with fond memories and relationships. Love the internal rhymes and general flow of the poem. Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem blended with fond memories and relationships. Love the internal rhymes and general flow of the poem. Merry Christmas to you
December 24th, 2024 14:38
Christmas at mom’s house
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely memories of a loving Mother, nicely worded.
December 24th, 2024 14:19
Poetic Licence said:
Lovely memories of a loving Mother, nicely worded.
December 24th, 2024 14:19
It’s only two ways out
sorenbarrett said:
Rapid fire rhymes spit fire and some good ones too. Nicely done
December 24th, 2024 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Rapid fire rhymes spit fire and some good ones too. Nicely done
December 24th, 2024 03:40
It’s only two ways out
rin said:
I want to be able to live cheerfully even in chaos, but it\'s difficult.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:23
rin said:
I want to be able to live cheerfully even in chaos, but it\'s difficult.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:23
A Hollywood motivated future
Mutley Ravishes said:
Obi Wan
Would\'ve liked
This song!
December 18th, 2024 21:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Obi Wan
Would\'ve liked
This song!
December 18th, 2024 21:38
A Hollywood motivated future
Poetic Licence said:
Dealing with an issue that should be a concern for all and we have not heard the last of it, nicely written and strongly put.
December 18th, 2024 18:34
Poetic Licence said:
Dealing with an issue that should be a concern for all and we have not heard the last of it, nicely written and strongly put.
December 18th, 2024 18:34
A bag of lies
Poetic Licence said:
The old saying Keep your friends close, Your Enemies even closer, Thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:24
Poetic Licence said:
The old saying Keep your friends close, Your Enemies even closer, Thank you for the read
December 14th, 2024 01:24
After the brainwashing is done
sorenbarrett said:
This point makes its point. Nazis stand for and represent all that Americans should not like. Nevertheless, freedom of speech allows them to make their home in this place of freedom. Freedom is a loose word and means whatever the person that speaks to wants it to mean. Well written.
December 13th, 2024 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
This point makes its point. Nazis stand for and represent all that Americans should not like. Nevertheless, freedom of speech allows them to make their home in this place of freedom. Freedom is a loose word and means whatever the person that speaks to wants it to mean. Well written.
December 13th, 2024 09:58
After the brainwashing is done
MR.apocalypse said:
Words like Nazi and racist will lose their meaning if we don\'t use them correctly. It has already started to take on it\'s new form
December 13th, 2024 02:08
MR.apocalypse said:
Words like Nazi and racist will lose their meaning if we don\'t use them correctly. It has already started to take on it\'s new form
December 13th, 2024 02:08
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