Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie



The modern man
Swarovski20 said:

Nice poem.

February 2nd, 2025 06:17

When sleeping gods awaken
Mutley Ravishes said:

I sometimes wonder, if \"God\" is an all knowing Being then why would It need a universe(s?!) to \"know\" Itself? A teacher once said that one needs a mirror to know oneself. So, do we have a Being that is all-knowing and at the same time doesn\'t know Itself?! I have no idea!
I remember another teacher saying that this universe is the 84th in a series of 112. He was then asked what is the outcome of number 112? He answered that 112 will be \"fully conscious.\" If that is true then we have a long ways to go!

Mind-opening rhyme!

January 20th, 2025 19:10

Haunted by past mistakes
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 12th, 2025 20:28

Power over power?
Mutley Ravishes said:

That guy was babbling. Ignorance reigns supreme.
Great work!

January 10th, 2025 18:41

Power over power?
Poetic Licence said:

It is easier for them to make excuses rather than take any positive action, well expressed

January 10th, 2025 13:19

Lessons take hold
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 8th, 2025 07:36

Lessons take hold
2781 said:

There\'s a lot of nonsense out there.

January 8th, 2025 00:50

How far behind are we
Mutley Ravishes said:

It\'s been said that long distance space travel is denied to folks at a certain \"level of consciousness.\" Lets hope that\'s true!
Great write.

January 6th, 2025 01:08

The one in us all
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 31st, 2024 20:43

The one in us all
Mutley Ravishes said:

Manjushri’s wielding his sword!
Great write.

December 31st, 2024 19:05

Christmas at mom’s house
Mutley Ravishes said:

Beautifully written.
What if the Santa story is hinting at something, i.e beliefs and receiving presents?!
Merry Christmas!

December 24th, 2024 18:40

Christmas at mom’s house
sorenbarrett said:

A seasonal poem blended with fond memories and relationships. Love the internal rhymes and general flow of the poem. Merry Christmas to you

December 24th, 2024 14:38

Christmas at mom’s house
Poetic Licence said:

Lovely memories of a loving Mother, nicely worded.

December 24th, 2024 14:19

It’s only two ways out
sorenbarrett said:

Rapid fire rhymes spit fire and some good ones too. Nicely done

December 24th, 2024 03:40

It’s only two ways out
rin said:

I want to be able to live cheerfully even in chaos, but it\'s difficult.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.

December 24th, 2024 01:23

Santa Claus grew up in the ghetto
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 19th, 2024 10:39

A Hollywood motivated future
Mutley Ravishes said:

Obi Wan
Would\'ve liked
This song!



December 18th, 2024 21:38

A Hollywood motivated future
Poetic Licence said:

Dealing with an issue that should be a concern for all and we have not heard the last of it, nicely written and strongly put.

December 18th, 2024 18:34

A bag of lies
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 14th, 2024 13:13

A bag of lies
Poetic Licence said:

The old saying Keep your friends close, Your Enemies even closer, Thank you for the read

December 14th, 2024 01:24

After the brainwashing is done
sorenbarrett said:

This point makes its point. Nazis stand for and represent all that Americans should not like. Nevertheless, freedom of speech allows them to make their home in this place of freedom. Freedom is a loose word and means whatever the person that speaks to wants it to mean. Well written.

December 13th, 2024 09:58

After the brainwashing is done
Demar Desu said:

Great poem…

December 13th, 2024 06:13

After the brainwashing is done
MR.apocalypse said:

Words like Nazi and racist will lose their meaning if we don\'t use them correctly. It has already started to take on it\'s new form

December 13th, 2024 02:08

The created
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 12th, 2024 10:50

The created
Poetic Licence said:

A enjoyable and entertaining read, raises questions i am not sure we will ever know the answers to, to be fact, Thank you

December 12th, 2024 03:53

The created
Mutley Ravishes said:

You pack so much into your rhymes. And then there\'s the flow.
I guess the Cylons are coming, though their time will be short....?!

December 12th, 2024 02:15

A stubbed toe is criminal
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

December 11th, 2024 15:08

A stubbed toe is criminal
Poetic Licence said:

A serious message conveyed in a satirical way, enjoyed the read

December 11th, 2024 03:35

How long is this chain
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

December 10th, 2024 08:33

How long is this chain
Poetic Licence said:

Another powerful piece of writing, dealing with a very real issue, Thank you

December 10th, 2024 04:18

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