Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
I’ve seen the future
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Like it, Mr Futurologist Spaceman.
February 25th, 2024 18:41
Doggerel Dave said:
😂Like it, Mr Futurologist Spaceman.
February 25th, 2024 18:41
The power of alone
Doggerel Dave said:
Aloneness is fine most of the time....at least I can hear myself think.
Great stuff.
February 23rd, 2024 08:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Aloneness is fine most of the time....at least I can hear myself think.
Great stuff.
February 23rd, 2024 08:47
A house at the end of town
vividvoid14 said:
love this its an amazing poem keep writting
February 21st, 2024 09:43
vividvoid14 said:
love this its an amazing poem keep writting
February 21st, 2024 09:43
No one lives alone
Shetonya Latryce said:
Love this. Easy to read, understand and relate to. Thank you for your candid clarity.
February 13th, 2024 16:48
Shetonya Latryce said:
Love this. Easy to read, understand and relate to. Thank you for your candid clarity.
February 13th, 2024 16:48
A message from the graves of slaves
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful, I come from a town where no one of any colour were ever different or identified so. How the world can change so fast in just a generation. I now live it Italy and it\'s different. 🌹
February 12th, 2024 05:12
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly powerful, I come from a town where no one of any colour were ever different or identified so. How the world can change so fast in just a generation. I now live it Italy and it\'s different. 🌹
February 12th, 2024 05:12
The most conquered
Parisab said:
Great flow with messages, sourced by the ancient winds! Ugliest storms in history, but best not forgotten.
February 4th, 2024 12:21
Parisab said:
Great flow with messages, sourced by the ancient winds! Ugliest storms in history, but best not forgotten.
February 4th, 2024 12:21
America love her or leave her
2781 said:
Ye will revolt more and more: the whole head is sick, and the whole heart faint. From the sole of the foot even unto the head there is no soundness in it; but wounds, and bruises, and putrifying sores: they have not been closed, neither bond up, neither mollified with ointment.
February 3rd, 2024 22:28
2781 said:
Ye will revolt more and more: the whole head is sick, and the whole heart faint. From the sole of the foot even unto the head there is no soundness in it; but wounds, and bruises, and putrifying sores: they have not been closed, neither bond up, neither mollified with ointment.
February 3rd, 2024 22:28
Expulsion explosion
Doggerel Dave said:
This is difficult to unpick, actually.
• I know nothing much about specifically crack, but generally believe that the War On Drugs is a pathetic project and needs reevaluation. Unlikely as too many interests are committed to it (wot would police do without their overtime fer instance…🤣)
• But why couple this with Incel (the picture). More pathetic shits would be hard to find. Hate women because they are not getting their share of sex? Gather together to feed and reinforce their hatred? Oh please!
I don’t get the connection from your POV. From mine I see both as the symptoms of the economic system, which is screwing everyone down but the rich, who are multiplying like rabbits…..
January 19th, 2024 21:43
Doggerel Dave said:
This is difficult to unpick, actually.
• I know nothing much about specifically crack, but generally believe that the War On Drugs is a pathetic project and needs reevaluation. Unlikely as too many interests are committed to it (wot would police do without their overtime fer instance…🤣)
• But why couple this with Incel (the picture). More pathetic shits would be hard to find. Hate women because they are not getting their share of sex? Gather together to feed and reinforce their hatred? Oh please!
I don’t get the connection from your POV. From mine I see both as the symptoms of the economic system, which is screwing everyone down but the rich, who are multiplying like rabbits…..
January 19th, 2024 21:43
Expulsion explosion
2781 said:
I remember growing up when people sat on porches and had gardens out the front. Always said hello, could spend time talking over a drink or cup of tea.
Now it\'s double door garages, no time for pleasantries.
January 19th, 2024 14:55
2781 said:
I remember growing up when people sat on porches and had gardens out the front. Always said hello, could spend time talking over a drink or cup of tea.
Now it\'s double door garages, no time for pleasantries.
January 19th, 2024 14:55
Don’t fall watch your step
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic flow. Powerful and poignant.
January 10th, 2024 17:56
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic flow. Powerful and poignant.
January 10th, 2024 17:56
Why are the gods naked
Lorenz said:
The prince of angels is clothed in light ...
December 31st, 2023 08:44
Lorenz said:
The prince of angels is clothed in light ...
December 31st, 2023 08:44
Commander McBragg
Doggerel Dave said:
Never heard of this geezer before - pompous prat, but a good larf....
Rhyming up to your usual smooth read standard.
Thanks.
December 17th, 2023 16:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Never heard of this geezer before - pompous prat, but a good larf....
Rhyming up to your usual smooth read standard.
Thanks.
December 17th, 2023 16:24
What the migrants know
Doggerel Dave said:
Still following you, mate. There are many ways of telling truths , and while your style is not mine, I usually get the message loud and clear.
Keep \'em coming....
December 10th, 2023 23:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Still following you, mate. There are many ways of telling truths , and while your style is not mine, I usually get the message loud and clear.
Keep \'em coming....
December 10th, 2023 23:29
So what it’s chaos
Doggerel Dave said:
I almost end up with PTSD just reading your stuff.....
November 24th, 2023 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I almost end up with PTSD just reading your stuff.....
November 24th, 2023 18:33
Where did they come from
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great flow.
November 23rd, 2023 23:11
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great flow.
November 23rd, 2023 23:11
Are all the shamans dead
Bella Shepard said:
This is a profoundly thought-filled piece. Having been raised in a religion that I practiced for years, I reached a point of questioniong. Did I follow the rules because it was meaningful, or because I was taught to, and it was the latter. Over time I\'ve learned to let go of the fear of noncompliance, for the freedom of my own thoughts and beliefs, and am comfortable in my space. There is no surety in life, no one has all the answers. Find your path, your space, because it is meaningful to you. Take care my friend!
November 19th, 2023 14:33
Bella Shepard said:
This is a profoundly thought-filled piece. Having been raised in a religion that I practiced for years, I reached a point of questioniong. Did I follow the rules because it was meaningful, or because I was taught to, and it was the latter. Over time I\'ve learned to let go of the fear of noncompliance, for the freedom of my own thoughts and beliefs, and am comfortable in my space. There is no surety in life, no one has all the answers. Find your path, your space, because it is meaningful to you. Take care my friend!
November 19th, 2023 14:33
Are all the shamans dead
evenwheniLie said:
Whole religions and cultures have been born from illusions
November 19th, 2023 02:57
evenwheniLie said:
Whole religions and cultures have been born from illusions
November 19th, 2023 02:57
Psychology today
Lorenz said:
By dint of living among lunatics who ignore themselves I manage to achieve a certain normality ...
November 16th, 2023 11:24
Lorenz said:
By dint of living among lunatics who ignore themselves I manage to achieve a certain normality ...
November 16th, 2023 11:24
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