Comments received on poems by evenwheniLie
Protect the babies
Doggerel Dave said:
I still remain totally uncomprehending as to why people choose to bring a new human into the world whom it is pretty certain will live a life during which they will be unable to achieve their full potential.
November 10th, 2024 05:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I still remain totally uncomprehending as to why people choose to bring a new human into the world whom it is pretty certain will live a life during which they will be unable to achieve their full potential.
November 10th, 2024 05:17
Life’s slight of hand
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work. Are you thinking of setting it to some music?!
October 16th, 2024 20:57
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work. Are you thinking of setting it to some music?!
October 16th, 2024 20:57
Those black jobs
Dan Williams said:
Still one step above robots. Monkeys will create no SkyNet.
October 8th, 2024 00:04
Dan Williams said:
Still one step above robots. Monkeys will create no SkyNet.
October 8th, 2024 00:04
Those black jobs
jarcher54 said:
This is what poetry is about. Brave and dangerous. Sharp like razor wire tearing your flesh. Unapologetic.
October 6th, 2024 10:44
jarcher54 said:
This is what poetry is about. Brave and dangerous. Sharp like razor wire tearing your flesh. Unapologetic.
October 6th, 2024 10:44
America’s glass jaw
Doggerel Dave said:
Am I to take it that you are not too happy with the situation right now?🙃
September 13th, 2024 06:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Am I to take it that you are not too happy with the situation right now?🙃
September 13th, 2024 06:05
My post is traumatic
sorenbarrett said:
Whatever you call it, Shellshock or post traumatic stress disorder it is all the same. Misinterpretations high levels of anxiety and even paranoia. A powerful piece.
September 5th, 2024 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
Whatever you call it, Shellshock or post traumatic stress disorder it is all the same. Misinterpretations high levels of anxiety and even paranoia. A powerful piece.
September 5th, 2024 13:45
My Dothraki doctor
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded this poem is a fun read. It smacks of humor, but also has a serious side and I believe the message is more serious than one would believe.
September 4th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly worded this poem is a fun read. It smacks of humor, but also has a serious side and I believe the message is more serious than one would believe.
September 4th, 2024 05:44
Jack in a box
sorenbarrett said:
I could hear the rap in this one that had some bars. Very nice
August 28th, 2024 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
I could hear the rap in this one that had some bars. Very nice
August 28th, 2024 06:44
Diary of a cruel child
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition of errors is the first step the question becomes what now? Raw and powerful
August 22nd, 2024 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition of errors is the first step the question becomes what now? Raw and powerful
August 22nd, 2024 16:09
Step back, I’m a professional taster
sorenbarrett said:
This happens as we grow older our hearing starts to go. lol It is true however that the language has several words with close sounds and you have made good use of this rhyming to give a different meaning to each phrase twisting a the readers mind in different directions on a wild ride. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
This happens as we grow older our hearing starts to go. lol It is true however that the language has several words with close sounds and you have made good use of this rhyming to give a different meaning to each phrase twisting a the readers mind in different directions on a wild ride. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2024 03:46
Is it Blasphemous
Dan Williams said:
Lots of times I feel ashamed to be \"human\". We have done such a poor job with this tiny planet we live on. Good Work.
August 21st, 2024 00:11
Dan Williams said:
Lots of times I feel ashamed to be \"human\". We have done such a poor job with this tiny planet we live on. Good Work.
August 21st, 2024 00:11
Is it Blasphemous
sorenbarrett said:
If there were a god they would have to have a great sense of humor. After all just look at the people they created
Loved the write
August 20th, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
If there were a god they would have to have a great sense of humor. After all just look at the people they created
Loved the write
August 20th, 2024 05:11
Do it yourself Reparations
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written. An emphasis on what we lack.
August 17th, 2024 16:15
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written. An emphasis on what we lack.
August 17th, 2024 16:15
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