Comments received on poems by nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
DAUGHTER ( TO EMMA )
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded and built this poem expresses how I feel about my daughters and with rhyme as well. Nicely done
March 23rd, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded and built this poem expresses how I feel about my daughters and with rhyme as well. Nicely done
March 23rd, 2025 04:34
BIRTHDAY CARD
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and a sad one at that. Symbols well used of a dried rose. Nicely written
March 21st, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and a sad one at that. Symbols well used of a dried rose. Nicely written
March 21st, 2025 04:10
UPON THE SHORE
Poetic Licence said:
The people\'s fate is held in the captains hands, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:11
Poetic Licence said:
The people\'s fate is held in the captains hands, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:11
UPON THE SHORE
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for life sailing the seas and fate is in our the captain\'s hands. Great imagery
March 20th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for life sailing the seas and fate is in our the captain\'s hands. Great imagery
March 20th, 2025 04:03
INNER EYE
Poetic Licence said:
And for some that is a scary place, the makings of nightmares, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:59
Poetic Licence said:
And for some that is a scary place, the makings of nightmares, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 06:59
INNER EYE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves feelings of the core of fear where nightmares begin. An unknown realm of one\'s anxieties. Well drawn in words. Brilliant!
March 19th, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves feelings of the core of fear where nightmares begin. An unknown realm of one\'s anxieties. Well drawn in words. Brilliant!
March 19th, 2025 05:49
SURRENDED ARMY
Poetic Licence said:
The long walk of defeat probably brings a lot of thoughts and emotions to those who done that walk, but I imagine the worst being fear of not knowing what their future holds, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 05:37
Poetic Licence said:
The long walk of defeat probably brings a lot of thoughts and emotions to those who done that walk, but I imagine the worst being fear of not knowing what their future holds, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 05:37
SURRENDED ARMY
sorenbarrett said:
A vision of defeat and possibly a metaphor as well most wars take prisoners and then what is the fate of a POW. Very well imaged and full of possibilities for further metaphors
March 18th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A vision of defeat and possibly a metaphor as well most wars take prisoners and then what is the fate of a POW. Very well imaged and full of possibilities for further metaphors
March 18th, 2025 04:18
RADIO CRACKLES
Poetic Licence said:
A stark write representing how many people are forced to and struggle to live in this world, nicely expressed
March 17th, 2025 07:16
Poetic Licence said:
A stark write representing how many people are forced to and struggle to live in this world, nicely expressed
March 17th, 2025 07:16
RADIO CRACKLES
sorenbarrett said:
A great representation of the toughness of life in the present economy and how stark the conditions that we live under. Nicely written
March 17th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great representation of the toughness of life in the present economy and how stark the conditions that we live under. Nicely written
March 17th, 2025 07:05
AN EMPTY SHELL
sorenbarrett said:
A picture too often seen. A story too often told. A broken person than no one wants to mend. Sad and well said.
March 16th, 2025 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
A picture too often seen. A story too often told. A broken person than no one wants to mend. Sad and well said.
March 16th, 2025 07:07
AN EMPTY SHELL
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of something that is all to common these days and it should never be homelessness, well expressed
March 16th, 2025 06:47
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of something that is all to common these days and it should never be homelessness, well expressed
March 16th, 2025 06:47
AN EMPTY SHELL
arqios said:
Sadly where our society is at. A truthful image and depiction 🙏🏻🕊
March 16th, 2025 04:45
arqios said:
Sadly where our society is at. A truthful image and depiction 🙏🏻🕊
March 16th, 2025 04:45
AN ANGELS NOTE
arqios said:
Oh what a good thing that the note was finally read🙏🏻🕊hope that it wasn’t too late🕊🙏🏻
March 15th, 2025 07:37
arqios said:
Oh what a good thing that the note was finally read🙏🏻🕊hope that it wasn’t too late🕊🙏🏻
March 15th, 2025 07:37
AN ANGELS NOTE
Poetic Licence said:
Even expressing sad thoughts and emotions, the write ends on a positive note, I will survive, nicely written
March 15th, 2025 05:51
Poetic Licence said:
Even expressing sad thoughts and emotions, the write ends on a positive note, I will survive, nicely written
March 15th, 2025 05:51
AN ANGELS NOTE
sorenbarrett said:
This one shows good rhyme and meter in its flow with short lines that make it easy to hear the rhyme. Nicely done
March 15th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
This one shows good rhyme and meter in its flow with short lines that make it easy to hear the rhyme. Nicely done
March 15th, 2025 05:40
HOSPITAL
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this conveys well the feelings and shock at loosing someone that close. The picture is painted well with olfactory as well as visual and auditory cues. A very well done poem
March 14th, 2025 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this conveys well the feelings and shock at loosing someone that close. The picture is painted well with olfactory as well as visual and auditory cues. A very well done poem
March 14th, 2025 11:31
HOSPITAL
Poetic Licence said:
Touching write, tears of grief, write touches on a situation many will relate to, well expressed
March 14th, 2025 09:27
Poetic Licence said:
Touching write, tears of grief, write touches on a situation many will relate to, well expressed
March 14th, 2025 09:27
HOSPITAL
arqios said:
Always wondered, outside of the legal process why we have to go away (to hospital) to die. Heart rending goodness of a read🙏🏻🕊
March 14th, 2025 05:42
arqios said:
Always wondered, outside of the legal process why we have to go away (to hospital) to die. Heart rending goodness of a read🙏🏻🕊
March 14th, 2025 05:42
MEN OF THE CLOTH
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the abuse by police but also by all goverments and places of power that continue to cover up abuse, powerful write and well expressed
March 13th, 2025 10:11
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the abuse by police but also by all goverments and places of power that continue to cover up abuse, powerful write and well expressed
March 13th, 2025 10:11
MEN OF THE CLOTH
sorenbarrett said:
When violations are quietly condoned by those in power there is little recourse. A powerful poem of outrage.
March 13th, 2025 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
When violations are quietly condoned by those in power there is little recourse. A powerful poem of outrage.
March 13th, 2025 06:43
DREAM RETURNING
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! How nicely written this piece that could be about the old or one particular old person, or hope itself. Whether a dream, vision or reality it is haunting.
March 12th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! How nicely written this piece that could be about the old or one particular old person, or hope itself. Whether a dream, vision or reality it is haunting.
March 12th, 2025 08:33
DREAM RETURNING
Poetic Licence said:
A returning dream can end up feeling like friend, a nicely expressed piece of writing
March 12th, 2025 08:14
Poetic Licence said:
A returning dream can end up feeling like friend, a nicely expressed piece of writing
March 12th, 2025 08:14
DREAM RETURNING
arqios said:
Recurring dreams are superbly interesting. Hope this isn’t too far off the mark. 🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 07:56
arqios said:
Recurring dreams are superbly interesting. Hope this isn’t too far off the mark. 🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 07:56
LEAVES
Poetic Licence said:
Seasons of life as of nature a natural cycle, has a very soothing feel as you read through with lovely imagery, really enjoyed
March 10th, 2025 10:34
Poetic Licence said:
Seasons of life as of nature a natural cycle, has a very soothing feel as you read through with lovely imagery, really enjoyed
March 10th, 2025 10:34
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