Comments received on poems by nephilim56
UPON THE STREET
sorenbarrett said:
Take me home is what I get from the last line. Beautifully worded in verse the rhyme carries one onward as a plesent aroma draws the bee. At first a soft sadness of melancholy that turns mystical and dream like with some great lines (dream on a battered shore, memories melted, a chill to place its icy lips) Great lines. A poem worthy of a fave
February 3rd, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Take me home is what I get from the last line. Beautifully worded in verse the rhyme carries one onward as a plesent aroma draws the bee. At first a soft sadness of melancholy that turns mystical and dream like with some great lines (dream on a battered shore, memories melted, a chill to place its icy lips) Great lines. A poem worthy of a fave
February 3rd, 2025 05:29
UPON THE STREET
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and poignant piece. have been before where this piece goes, sadly to many people are suffering this today, and there should be no homelessness in the western world. Well written
February 3rd, 2025 04:27
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and poignant piece. have been before where this piece goes, sadly to many people are suffering this today, and there should be no homelessness in the western world. Well written
February 3rd, 2025 04:27
MAN IN THE TOWER
Cassie58 said:
The presentation for this poem works very well. Your words impact powerfully. Great read.
February 2nd, 2025 12:18
Cassie58 said:
The presentation for this poem works very well. Your words impact powerfully. Great read.
February 2nd, 2025 12:18
MAN IN THE TOWER
sorenbarrett said:
A great line \"About his head a crown of words\" That line alone deserves a fave.
February 2nd, 2025 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
A great line \"About his head a crown of words\" That line alone deserves a fave.
February 2nd, 2025 05:39
MAN IN THE TOWER
arqios said:
A very powerful read! I’m imagining it even more powerful when performed 🙏🏻🕊
February 2nd, 2025 04:46
arqios said:
A very powerful read! I’m imagining it even more powerful when performed 🙏🏻🕊
February 2nd, 2025 04:46
FROZEN
sorenbarrett said:
This poem written in a cascading form like a waterfall carries one over the edge falling to the end. Lovely
February 1st, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem written in a cascading form like a waterfall carries one over the edge falling to the end. Lovely
February 1st, 2025 04:38
STRANGER
arqios said:
It appears to be more difficult to be a stranger in the winter places than in the tropics… reminds me of the little match girl. 🙏🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 08:10
arqios said:
It appears to be more difficult to be a stranger in the winter places than in the tropics… reminds me of the little match girl. 🙏🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 08:10
STRANGER
Poetic Licence said:
That paints a touching but sad picture in your head, hopefully he made were he was going, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 06:02
Poetic Licence said:
That paints a touching but sad picture in your head, hopefully he made were he was going, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 06:02
STRANGER
sorenbarrett said:
A stark and frigid image is cast in this winter scene. Vivid in reality is there a metaphor here? Nicely painted and penned
January 31st, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A stark and frigid image is cast in this winter scene. Vivid in reality is there a metaphor here? Nicely painted and penned
January 31st, 2025 04:20
QUIET HOUR
Poetic Licence said:
Looking back with a gentle sadness at what has gone, beautifully written, enjoyed the read.
January 30th, 2025 07:15
Poetic Licence said:
Looking back with a gentle sadness at what has gone, beautifully written, enjoyed the read.
January 30th, 2025 07:15
QUIET HOUR
arqios said:
For me it was “glass to lips” a real ‘humdinger’ of an image from personal experience and from observation of others. 👍🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 05:37
arqios said:
For me it was “glass to lips” a real ‘humdinger’ of an image from personal experience and from observation of others. 👍🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 05:37
QUIET HOUR
Caring dove said:
I like the mention of the rainbow in this writing . Nice and interesting writing
January 30th, 2025 05:08
Caring dove said:
I like the mention of the rainbow in this writing . Nice and interesting writing
January 30th, 2025 05:08
QUIET HOUR
sorenbarrett said:
A definate feeling of nostalgia but more a longing for the past and what has been lost. A sweet sadness in reflection. Very nicely done
January 30th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A definate feeling of nostalgia but more a longing for the past and what has been lost. A sweet sadness in reflection. Very nicely done
January 30th, 2025 04:49
SILENT SOLDIER
Cassie58 said:
And this scene was probably played out many times during the war. Letters and photographs of loved ones and sweethearts were so very precious. All that there was from home apart from memories. Very nicely penned but so very poignant. Touched my heart it did.
January 29th, 2025 18:38
Cassie58 said:
And this scene was probably played out many times during the war. Letters and photographs of loved ones and sweethearts were so very precious. All that there was from home apart from memories. Very nicely penned but so very poignant. Touched my heart it did.
January 29th, 2025 18:38
SILENT SOLDIER
arqios said:
Quite moving and very resonant. Much respect and honour 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 29th, 2025 07:55
arqios said:
Quite moving and very resonant. Much respect and honour 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 29th, 2025 07:55
SILENT SOLDIER
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant and touching write a soldier prepairing for what he believes is the end, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:21
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant and touching write a soldier prepairing for what he believes is the end, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:21
SILENT SOLDIER
sorenbarrett said:
In so few words so much said. Loved the short lines giving a sense of urgency, The terseness added to this feel of something comming, The last lines with metaphor send the message clearly. Very well done
January 29th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
In so few words so much said. Loved the short lines giving a sense of urgency, The terseness added to this feel of something comming, The last lines with metaphor send the message clearly. Very well done
January 29th, 2025 04:20
WISHES
Cassie58 said:
If some of our wishes come true, we can consider ourselves fortunate. I would imagine there are many coins cast in hopes that don’t materialize. I really liked your poem. It reads beautifully out loud.
January 28th, 2025 15:59
Cassie58 said:
If some of our wishes come true, we can consider ourselves fortunate. I would imagine there are many coins cast in hopes that don’t materialize. I really liked your poem. It reads beautifully out loud.
January 28th, 2025 15:59
WISHES
RSM0812 said:
A lot of people probably can relate to this. Great write.
January 28th, 2025 15:41
RSM0812 said:
A lot of people probably can relate to this. Great write.
January 28th, 2025 15:41
WISHES
sorenbarrett said:
The reason so many play the lottery and I guess we all do in the journey of life. Very nicely written in verse
January 28th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
The reason so many play the lottery and I guess we all do in the journey of life. Very nicely written in verse
January 28th, 2025 06:52
WISHES
arqios said:
Oh if only all those wishes thrived…. but then again on second thought not all our wishes are for our or others’ good. Provocative poem! Quite enjoyed 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:14
arqios said:
Oh if only all those wishes thrived…. but then again on second thought not all our wishes are for our or others’ good. Provocative poem! Quite enjoyed 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:14
WISHES
Poetic Licence said:
They say if we have nothing to wish or dream for, then what is the point, maybe why we hang on to them, enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2025 04:30
Poetic Licence said:
They say if we have nothing to wish or dream for, then what is the point, maybe why we hang on to them, enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2025 04:30
CLASSLESS
sorenbarrett said:
And so it has always been. A great write with a good point
January 27th, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
And so it has always been. A great write with a good point
January 27th, 2025 18:15
CLASSLESS
Poetic Licence said:
wrongly It has always been not what you know, who you know that matters, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 16:45
Poetic Licence said:
wrongly It has always been not what you know, who you know that matters, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 16:45
MY DAD
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Heart felt message about loss. I am deeply sorry for yours.
January 27th, 2025 13:56
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Heart felt message about loss. I am deeply sorry for yours.
January 27th, 2025 13:56
MORE
arqios said:
So much more is the invite to both enjoy this moment and prepare for those yet to come 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 26th, 2025 07:21
arqios said:
So much more is the invite to both enjoy this moment and prepare for those yet to come 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 26th, 2025 07:21
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