Comments received on poems by 2781



Crowded
Accidental Poet said:

Don\'t forget the sunscreen. πŸ‘

January 26th, 2024 04:57

Cloud cover
Doggerel Dave said:

A rip roaring read, even if.......

January 25th, 2024 15:27

How
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

January 24th, 2024 16:20

Paradise lost
2781 said:

We don\'t want to crucify him again.

January 24th, 2024 08:16

Paradise lost
orchidee said:

Some say \'Adam\' means \'mankind\' - not just one person.
I don\'t doubt Adam and Eve were real persons though.
Milton\'s beaten me to me my next poem title: \'Paradise Found\' or rather \'Paradise Revisited\'. So he found it again after he lost it, eh?

January 24th, 2024 07:35

Paradise lost
2781 said:

Circles inside circles

January 24th, 2024 05:58

Paradise lost
Lorenz said:

Neither heaven or hell ,just heavell ...

January 24th, 2024 03:44

How
orchidee said:

Good write 2.
Will next poem(s) be - what, when, where, why,,......?

January 24th, 2024 03:06

Your word
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

January 22nd, 2024 02:55

Your word
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is the finest healer in the world 2781.

Andy

January 22nd, 2024 02:28

Grumble
Goldfinch60 said:

Showing humility can lead us on the correct path in life 2781.

Andy

January 22nd, 2024 02:16

Grumble
Bella Shepard said:

Oh so true, and oh so well penned!

January 21st, 2024 14:11

Grumble
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

January 21st, 2024 08:02

Thus
orchidee said:

Now my next poem \'Us\'. heehee.

January 20th, 2024 09:56

Phonies
Doggerel Dave said:

Great comment - from whom or what are you protecting your rear end?

Steel yourself - one of the multitude could break through.....

January 19th, 2024 21:03

Phonies
2781 said:

Good point, may need an edit.

January 19th, 2024 14:32

Phonies
orchidee said:

Now - was it a pony - or donkey or ass, as some versions say?! :)

January 19th, 2024 07:54

Fear
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

January 18th, 2024 13:09

Australia day
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent and educational.

January 17th, 2024 15:38

Australia day
orchidee said:

Good write 2.

January 17th, 2024 08:35

We can
Neville said:


full of frank truths, keen insight & satire .. plus a slight religious undertone .. nevertheless I am glad I could appreciate the full flavour ..

January 17th, 2024 03:47

We can
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

January 16th, 2024 20:39

We can
Lorenz said:

Good and evil are the same interchangeable face .

January 16th, 2024 17:31

We can
Cassie58 said:

This poem reminds me of the dangerous times we find we are living in. Individually, we can do nothing. Our elected leaders can do everything to make matters far worse, if the situation isn’t handled with care. How will they fare? Will we ever live in peace? Enjoyed your lines this morning. .

January 16th, 2024 03:41

We can
Accidental Poet said:

Definitely challenging times we live in 2781. I penned a similar piece myself this morning. Must be something in the air. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

January 16th, 2024 03:34

We can
orchidee said:

Good write 2.
Now me next poem, being all opposite: \'We cannot\'. Doh! lol.
I stagger back in amazement at the inspiration for poem titles that you give me. heehee.

January 16th, 2024 03:07

Right
Accidental Poet said:

I know, crazy isn\'t it? Sort of makes you sick at heart. Well penned 2781.

January 15th, 2024 10:37

Perfect
orchidee said:

Good write 2.
I thought the title was about me. Doh! lol.

January 14th, 2024 15:42

Perfect
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Well said!

January 14th, 2024 08:42

Blind
sorenbarrett said:

And so it is that death takes us all and sifts away, leaving behind debris. Nicely done

January 12th, 2024 05:46



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