Comments received on poems by 2781
Shoosh
sorenbarrett said:
Unique and intriguing. This poem set up. It’s interest in the first line by making it a secret. It is well rhymed and has a good flow and pursues a story that we all know. Very nicely written.
December 8th, 2024 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
Unique and intriguing. This poem set up. It’s interest in the first line by making it a secret. It is well rhymed and has a good flow and pursues a story that we all know. Very nicely written.
December 8th, 2024 07:30
Silly
Doggerel Dave said:
Wonder who\'s joke you are messing with....
Occasionally necessary ( thesaurus), otherwise clanging (repetition of the same word) occurs and it is necessary to find an alternative, Good write in good order.
December 6th, 2024 16:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Wonder who\'s joke you are messing with....
Occasionally necessary ( thesaurus), otherwise clanging (repetition of the same word) occurs and it is necessary to find an alternative, Good write in good order.
December 6th, 2024 16:06
Silly
arqios said:
Spewing too many antonyms as well, or is that the Anto-dote !?
December 6th, 2024 14:24
arqios said:
Spewing too many antonyms as well, or is that the Anto-dote !?
December 6th, 2024 14:24
Silly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this was witty. Loved it my friend! A fun read. And having personally had thesaurus throat, we’re poets after all, this is a fave for me! 😂 well done!
December 6th, 2024 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now this was witty. Loved it my friend! A fun read. And having personally had thesaurus throat, we’re poets after all, this is a fave for me! 😂 well done!
December 6th, 2024 09:42
Silly
sorenbarrett said:
A great use of words in this write. Clever and well done.
December 6th, 2024 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A great use of words in this write. Clever and well done.
December 6th, 2024 07:54
Plagiarised
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! This made me laugh, my friend! No apologies needed! 🤣
December 5th, 2024 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! This made me laugh, my friend! No apologies needed! 🤣
December 5th, 2024 08:12
Plagiarised
sorenbarrett said:
It is always good to put a smile on one’s face. A little humor never hurts. Thanks for the smile.
December 5th, 2024 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is always good to put a smile on one’s face. A little humor never hurts. Thanks for the smile.
December 5th, 2024 03:55
Evil time
sorenbarrett said:
A prophesy of doom sounds like Jeramiah I had better head for the cellar. A great flow in this poem
December 4th, 2024 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
A prophesy of doom sounds like Jeramiah I had better head for the cellar. A great flow in this poem
December 4th, 2024 12:50
Evil time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, yes. Evil times indeed. Trampling the least of these, scapegoating and oppressing the foreigners/immigrants, wars, rumors, false leaders and prophets trying to deceive even the elect, famine, natural disasters ramping up, wars and rumors of wars...it is such a time. And, as you have previously stated elsewhere, we\'ve been given the ending and need to persevere in faith, love, empathy, hope and humility. Well done, my friend. 🌹🙏
December 4th, 2024 11:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, yes. Evil times indeed. Trampling the least of these, scapegoating and oppressing the foreigners/immigrants, wars, rumors, false leaders and prophets trying to deceive even the elect, famine, natural disasters ramping up, wars and rumors of wars...it is such a time. And, as you have previously stated elsewhere, we\'ve been given the ending and need to persevere in faith, love, empathy, hope and humility. Well done, my friend. 🌹🙏
December 4th, 2024 11:27
Evil time
arqios said:
It would appear that social injustice is just a tip of the iceberg, a sign of the times and of the ailment that plagues the human spirit. Something the Good News addresses quite comprehensively in prophecy and promise.
December 4th, 2024 07:09
arqios said:
It would appear that social injustice is just a tip of the iceberg, a sign of the times and of the ailment that plagues the human spirit. Something the Good News addresses quite comprehensively in prophecy and promise.
December 4th, 2024 07:09
Now
arqios said:
The be opportunistic what to gain a winning vote and parasitic to remain in power.
December 2nd, 2024 22:47
arqios said:
The be opportunistic what to gain a winning vote and parasitic to remain in power.
December 2nd, 2024 22:47
Now
Doggerel Dave said:
Politician\'s delight...or lament?.....apology?... doubt it....
December 2nd, 2024 16:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Politician\'s delight...or lament?.....apology?... doubt it....
December 2nd, 2024 16:08
Now
Neville said:
Loose not a moment in the rush .. get it done then put your feet up and relax .. maybe
December 2nd, 2024 08:55
Neville said:
Loose not a moment in the rush .. get it done then put your feet up and relax .. maybe
December 2nd, 2024 08:55
The wedding
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that emphasizes the differences in cultures and customs. We often find it difficult to understand other people even in our own culture, let alone in others. Very nicely written the style in short staccato sentences as told from the first person maintained interest and gave great stability to the poem. Very nicely done
December 1st, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that emphasizes the differences in cultures and customs. We often find it difficult to understand other people even in our own culture, let alone in others. Very nicely written the style in short staccato sentences as told from the first person maintained interest and gave great stability to the poem. Very nicely done
December 1st, 2024 05:26
The wedding
Doggerel Dave said:
I have to say, sticking my neck out with a degree of ambivalence (story full of sensitive spots for those looking for them) that I found this quite funny real and interesting. I did (from your view)enjoy it very much.
November 30th, 2024 18:12
Doggerel Dave said:
I have to say, sticking my neck out with a degree of ambivalence (story full of sensitive spots for those looking for them) that I found this quite funny real and interesting. I did (from your view)enjoy it very much.
November 30th, 2024 18:12
My way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! It’s this fact that keeps me full of hope! Well written, my friend! I’ll trust God’s ways any and every day over my own or the world’s! 💯🌹👏
November 29th, 2024 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! It’s this fact that keeps me full of hope! Well written, my friend! I’ll trust God’s ways any and every day over my own or the world’s! 💯🌹👏
November 29th, 2024 10:45
My way
arqios said:
Nothing ever goes my way, perhaps that is a good thing. But the perusal goes for the heart and then I am fully culpable. Good thing the Blood flows freely!
November 29th, 2024 05:59
arqios said:
Nothing ever goes my way, perhaps that is a good thing. But the perusal goes for the heart and then I am fully culpable. Good thing the Blood flows freely!
November 29th, 2024 05:59
My way
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed, so true many state that he is unjust unfair but we don’t understand what justice is or fairness and so not understanding we pre-judge. Nicely stated.
November 29th, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed, so true many state that he is unjust unfair but we don’t understand what justice is or fairness and so not understanding we pre-judge. Nicely stated.
November 29th, 2024 04:33
What was that
cellinic said:
Very impressive about torments of inspiration.
November 29th, 2024 02:27
cellinic said:
Very impressive about torments of inspiration.
November 29th, 2024 02:27
What was that
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh…a cliffhanger. Well done, friend! Really liked the flow of this. 👏🌹
November 28th, 2024 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh…a cliffhanger. Well done, friend! Really liked the flow of this. 👏🌹
November 28th, 2024 09:23
Hmm
Neville said:
I am curious, why is this marked for the eyes of those who have attained the age of eighteen years or more .. many thanks in anticipation of a speedy resolve to my curiosity .. Neville
November 28th, 2024 08:06
Neville said:
I am curious, why is this marked for the eyes of those who have attained the age of eighteen years or more .. many thanks in anticipation of a speedy resolve to my curiosity .. Neville
November 28th, 2024 08:06
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