Comments received on poems by 2781
What can I do
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the helplessness that can come beside a hospital bed…the feeling that love is both everything and somehow never enough at the same time. This poem captures that quiet ache with honesty and grace. I felt this deeply, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 14:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the helplessness that can come beside a hospital bed…the feeling that love is both everything and somehow never enough at the same time. This poem captures that quiet ache with honesty and grace. I felt this deeply, Valiantstar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 14:00
Why
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong prophetic pulse. The imagery of idols, hollow labor, and wealth slipping through open hands all builds toward something wiser and steadier by the close. “Blessed to be a blessing” lands with real peace after everything that comes before it. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a strong prophetic pulse. The imagery of idols, hollow labor, and wealth slipping through open hands all builds toward something wiser and steadier by the close. “Blessed to be a blessing” lands with real peace after everything that comes before it. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:09
Why
arqios said:
Can\'t take any of it to the grave. And the amount of trouble we go through in life for such vainglory and striving! 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 19:09
arqios said:
Can\'t take any of it to the grave. And the amount of trouble we go through in life for such vainglory and striving! 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 19:09
Why
sorenbarrett said:
A weaving of words that takes the thoughts to task. Well done
May 10th, 2026 18:56
sorenbarrett said:
A weaving of words that takes the thoughts to task. Well done
May 10th, 2026 18:56
A new song
arqios said:
The new song is a heart song that springs forth from abiding and communing.🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:50
arqios said:
The new song is a heart song that springs forth from abiding and communing.🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:50
A new song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries the cadence of scripture and hymn alike…there’s a prophetic warmth to it that feels both invitational and solemn at the same time. The repetition of “Sing me a new song” gives the whole piece a strong spiritual pulse. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries the cadence of scripture and hymn alike…there’s a prophetic warmth to it that feels both invitational and solemn at the same time. The repetition of “Sing me a new song” gives the whole piece a strong spiritual pulse. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 16:01
Commentary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one…there’s humor all through it, but also a real warning underneath the madness. “Making cages” especially lands. Chaotic in the best way, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, you got me with this one…there’s humor all through it, but also a real warning underneath the madness. “Making cages” especially lands. Chaotic in the best way, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:56
The plot
arqios said:
That is where the best answers come, in the state of pure joy 🕊️🙏🤩
May 5th, 2026 04:35
arqios said:
That is where the best answers come, in the state of pure joy 🕊️🙏🤩
May 5th, 2026 04:35
The plot
orchidee said:
Aww, I lost the plot! heehee. No change there then for me. lol.
May 4th, 2026 14:17
orchidee said:
Aww, I lost the plot! heehee. No change there then for me. lol.
May 4th, 2026 14:17
The plot
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a hopeful push…letting go, stepping into something new, and trusting that joy will meet you there. It feels like movement and renewal all at once. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, this carries a hopeful push…letting go, stepping into something new, and trusting that joy will meet you there. It feels like movement and renewal all at once. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:53
The load
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, that contrast between descent and rising really stands out… it gives the piece a powerful movement through it. There’s a clear shift that holds everything together. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 16:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Valiantstar, that contrast between descent and rising really stands out… it gives the piece a powerful movement through it. There’s a clear shift that holds everything together. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 16:13
The load
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem deals with existential struggles, the burden of past sins or misdeeds, and the relief that comes from love, trust, and spiritual guidance.
May 3rd, 2026 05:52
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem deals with existential struggles, the burden of past sins or misdeeds, and the relief that comes from love, trust, and spiritual guidance.
May 3rd, 2026 05:52
The load
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal ride from hades to the upper world. Nicely written
May 3rd, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal ride from hades to the upper world. Nicely written
May 3rd, 2026 04:26
Prophesy
arqios said:
And many have gone silent but not as many as those whose tongues have wagged like flames 🔥🙃🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2026 18:14
arqios said:
And many have gone silent but not as many as those whose tongues have wagged like flames 🔥🙃🙏🏻🕊️
May 1st, 2026 18:14
Prophesy
sorenbarrett said:
My grandfather a very religious man once told me any prophesy is true if you put no date on it. A good write
May 1st, 2026 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
My grandfather a very religious man once told me any prophesy is true if you put no date on it. A good write
May 1st, 2026 16:23
Hands
Doggerel Dave said:
Many folks in retirement \'complain\' that they have less spare time than when they worked. Some ironical truth in that.
May 1st, 2026 00:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Many folks in retirement \'complain\' that they have less spare time than when they worked. Some ironical truth in that.
May 1st, 2026 00:28
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