Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Bravery and Slavery.
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but dream of a time without range, where peace and love rule all David.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but dream of a time without range, where peace and love rule all David.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:44
Bravery and Slavery.
sorenbarrett said:
The world is tough and the human race has many deficits evolution will tell what is right. But as for this poem I judge it a thought provoking and wonderful write.
September 24th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
The world is tough and the human race has many deficits evolution will tell what is right. But as for this poem I judge it a thought provoking and wonderful write.
September 24th, 2024 05:26
Bravery and Slavery.
Cassie58 said:
You have penned this beautifully David. There are many questions here which really stimulate the thinking. I abhor violence but would use it without hesitation if any of my loved ones were being attacked. I fear that rage, but I know it’s there. It’s not bravery, it’s survival. Men crying tears, is not a weakness, I see it as a strength. So much here to think about. An excellent write. Have a happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 03:42
Cassie58 said:
You have penned this beautifully David. There are many questions here which really stimulate the thinking. I abhor violence but would use it without hesitation if any of my loved ones were being attacked. I fear that rage, but I know it’s there. It’s not bravery, it’s survival. Men crying tears, is not a weakness, I see it as a strength. So much here to think about. An excellent write. Have a happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 03:42
Bravery and Slavery.
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write David! What would you do if your family was starving? Is it bravery to steal from another hungry family? The poem really made me think!👍
September 24th, 2024 03:24
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write David! What would you do if your family was starving? Is it bravery to steal from another hungry family? The poem really made me think!👍
September 24th, 2024 03:24
Abrim
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words and tale David, we sometimes wonder ourselves who would benefit from our existence.
Andy
September 24th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words and tale David, we sometimes wonder ourselves who would benefit from our existence.
Andy
September 24th, 2024 01:17
Abrim
Cassie58 said:
Nicely narrated David. A story well told which flows and rhymes well. Visually pleasing and much enjoyed.
September 23rd, 2024 13:28
Cassie58 said:
Nicely narrated David. A story well told which flows and rhymes well. Visually pleasing and much enjoyed.
September 23rd, 2024 13:28
Death Defying Judgement
Cheeky Missy said:
A sufficiently delicate issue, I hate pussy-footing it yet cannot avoid it, in a sense. Very serious with a definite poignancy, thank you for sharing.
September 7th, 2024 17:49
Cheeky Missy said:
A sufficiently delicate issue, I hate pussy-footing it yet cannot avoid it, in a sense. Very serious with a definite poignancy, thank you for sharing.
September 7th, 2024 17:49
Grandpa Doe
sorenbarrett said:
A great story and a great metaphor as well. Society has toppled the trees move the hills where they are no longer welcome. We do the same with people that are not desirable. They clutter up our parks and our eye sores. We push them away out of sight to another place
September 7th, 2024 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
A great story and a great metaphor as well. Society has toppled the trees move the hills where they are no longer welcome. We do the same with people that are not desirable. They clutter up our parks and our eye sores. We push them away out of sight to another place
September 7th, 2024 07:39
Grandpa Doe
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful story David, it shows that there are good people around.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful story David, it shows that there are good people around.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 02:05
Death Defying Judgement
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words David, we will all die but some want to chose which way to go, I don\'t though I will just wait.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words David, we will all die but some want to chose which way to go, I don\'t though I will just wait.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 01:47
Grandpa Doe
orchidee said:
Good write David.
Or - in some churches, though unsaid through \'politeness\' - \'You can\'t sit here. it\'s my pew!\' You get a scowling look instead.
OK for days of old, I suppose, when people paid for their own pews.
September 7th, 2024 01:01
orchidee said:
Good write David.
Or - in some churches, though unsaid through \'politeness\' - \'You can\'t sit here. it\'s my pew!\' You get a scowling look instead.
OK for days of old, I suppose, when people paid for their own pews.
September 7th, 2024 01:01
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