Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
A plum from God
orchidee said:
I forgot this from science at school - plumbum = lead! lol.
July 17th, 2023 09:59
orchidee said:
I forgot this from science at school - plumbum = lead! lol.
July 17th, 2023 09:59
The Train to Auschwitz.
thinkerbell said:
Very touching piece of poetry with a beautiful ending
July 16th, 2023 07:38
thinkerbell said:
Very touching piece of poetry with a beautiful ending
July 16th, 2023 07:38
The Train to Auschwitz.
Teddy.15 said:
May I just stand here to show my appreciation for such an amazing poem, I\'ve been to visit the jewish museum in Prague dedicated to these Jewish people and I went around looking at all the pictures drawn by the children who were just about to perish, it took me 10 years to write my own poem about my mere glimpse of this piece of gastly and unbelievable wicked piece of history. Thank you.
July 16th, 2023 05:43
Teddy.15 said:
May I just stand here to show my appreciation for such an amazing poem, I\'ve been to visit the jewish museum in Prague dedicated to these Jewish people and I went around looking at all the pictures drawn by the children who were just about to perish, it took me 10 years to write my own poem about my mere glimpse of this piece of gastly and unbelievable wicked piece of history. Thank you.
July 16th, 2023 05:43
The Train to Auschwitz.
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderfully written piece. Very sad but also so true, The hope that fills this story is inspirational. We all must never forget or it could happen again. Thank you for writing this. - Phil A.
July 15th, 2023 18:39
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderfully written piece. Very sad but also so true, The hope that fills this story is inspirational. We all must never forget or it could happen again. Thank you for writing this. - Phil A.
July 15th, 2023 18:39
The Train to Auschwitz.
orchidee said:
The train to Hell - but they didn\'t know?
July 15th, 2023 11:27
orchidee said:
The train to Hell - but they didn\'t know?
July 15th, 2023 11:27
The Train to Auschwitz.
patrick reynolds said:
a moving story and a great ending line. we must never forget.
July 15th, 2023 09:38
patrick reynolds said:
a moving story and a great ending line. we must never forget.
July 15th, 2023 09:38
The Supermarket on Forsaken Street.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you very much for your intelligent comments
July 14th, 2023 17:50
David Wakeling said:
Thank you very much for your intelligent comments
July 14th, 2023 17:50
The Supermarket on Forsaken Street.
Bobby O said:
So much here. Not all are real but through those you describe w acuity is the realm of the not real that you’ve met, added the weight and knowledge gained from your interceptions. Real nice piece.
July 14th, 2023 03:41
Bobby O said:
So much here. Not all are real but through those you describe w acuity is the realm of the not real that you’ve met, added the weight and knowledge gained from your interceptions. Real nice piece.
July 14th, 2023 03:41
The Lady Who Liked Mangos.
Parisab said:
Very gentle in its approach but shined bright as a poem-thanks for the write…
July 9th, 2023 12:57
Parisab said:
Very gentle in its approach but shined bright as a poem-thanks for the write…
July 9th, 2023 12:57
The Lady Who Liked Mangos.
Bobby O said:
Enchantment will burn we learn and up side turns thrive on purest concern. Nice piece good read.
“Mangos ? Vere R dese Mangos? I vant to see dese Mangos”. ,,, Tatiana
July 9th, 2023 07:27
Bobby O said:
Enchantment will burn we learn and up side turns thrive on purest concern. Nice piece good read.
“Mangos ? Vere R dese Mangos? I vant to see dese Mangos”. ,,, Tatiana
July 9th, 2023 07:27
The Lady Who Liked Mangos.
imalexx said:
that was beautiful, every word appeared in front of my eyes so brightly
July 9th, 2023 06:37
imalexx said:
that was beautiful, every word appeared in front of my eyes so brightly
July 9th, 2023 06:37
The Days of Milk and Marmalade
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your insight.Much appreciated
July 7th, 2023 17:33
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your insight.Much appreciated
July 7th, 2023 17:33
The Days of Milk and Marmalade
LIZ said:
The last line \"It was a good life I’m sure, I just forgot to live it.\"- we are so busy these days we forget to stay still and enjoy life! Staying present is important! Thank you for sharing!
July 7th, 2023 08:47
LIZ said:
The last line \"It was a good life I’m sure, I just forgot to live it.\"- we are so busy these days we forget to stay still and enjoy life! Staying present is important! Thank you for sharing!
July 7th, 2023 08:47
The Battle and the Baby
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.It all makes sense.Thanks for your insight
July 7th, 2023 01:03
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.It all makes sense.Thanks for your insight
July 7th, 2023 01:03
The Battle and the Baby
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking at new born babies so so uplifting David.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking at new born babies so so uplifting David.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 01:00
An important Life.
Michael Edwards said:
There are few poems posted here which I read all the way through. I know within a couple of lines whether I want to continue. This one I read to the end.
July 5th, 2023 01:11
Michael Edwards said:
There are few poems posted here which I read all the way through. I know within a couple of lines whether I want to continue. This one I read to the end.
July 5th, 2023 01:11
An important Life.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing 🙂 nicely expressed
July 5th, 2023 00:44
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing 🙂 nicely expressed
July 5th, 2023 00:44
Sandra
David Wakeling said:
Thank you.Sandra was a nurse who was working night shift when two men came in and attacked and brutally murdered her.She was a good friend of mine.Her mother read my poem at the funeral.it was the greatest compliment i have ever had and the saddest time in my life.Thank you for your kind words
July 3rd, 2023 07:24
David Wakeling said:
Thank you.Sandra was a nurse who was working night shift when two men came in and attacked and brutally murdered her.She was a good friend of mine.Her mother read my poem at the funeral.it was the greatest compliment i have ever had and the saddest time in my life.Thank you for your kind words
July 3rd, 2023 07:24
Silver Moon
David Wakeling said:
Thank you. Something to look forward to after a hard life.
July 3rd, 2023 07:19
David Wakeling said:
Thank you. Something to look forward to after a hard life.
July 3rd, 2023 07:19
Sometimes it rains at night.
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.There are two sides to every coin.Thanks for commenting
July 3rd, 2023 07:17
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.There are two sides to every coin.Thanks for commenting
July 3rd, 2023 07:17
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