Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The New Commandments.
David Wakeling said:
I have to confess that I like chocolate biscuits.Thanks for reading
October 10th, 2023 01:59
David Wakeling said:
I have to confess that I like chocolate biscuits.Thanks for reading
October 10th, 2023 01:59
The New Commandments.
orchidee said:
Hmm, I never come across these three before!
October 10th, 2023 01:53
orchidee said:
Hmm, I never come across these three before!
October 10th, 2023 01:53
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
David Wakeling said:
Thanks for reading. Much Appreciated.
October 7th, 2023 23:01
David Wakeling said:
Thanks for reading. Much Appreciated.
October 7th, 2023 23:01
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Bobby O said:
To dance in the kitchen, that was the line that brought me sudden hope and I think you for that. Nice write great read , you got it going on.
October 7th, 2023 16:00
Bobby O said:
To dance in the kitchen, that was the line that brought me sudden hope and I think you for that. Nice write great read , you got it going on.
October 7th, 2023 16:00
God must be so proud.
orchidee said:
We state our own beliefs, not trying to \'defend God\' though. He may think it laughable if mere humans are trying to defend Him.
It\'s understandable to question, seeing things as in your poem. And what about Job in the Old Testament?
BlessedbyGod puts it well I feel.
October 5th, 2023 03:05
orchidee said:
We state our own beliefs, not trying to \'defend God\' though. He may think it laughable if mere humans are trying to defend Him.
It\'s understandable to question, seeing things as in your poem. And what about Job in the Old Testament?
BlessedbyGod puts it well I feel.
October 5th, 2023 03:05
God must be so proud.
Goldfinch60 said:
As I have said before \"Where is god!!\"
Andy
October 5th, 2023 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
As I have said before \"Where is god!!\"
Andy
October 5th, 2023 01:15
God must be so proud.
Bobby O said:
It’s good to shake some trees and the validity here is one I want to scream whenever a certain self prophetelizing soul rings my ear with fervor so tilted that I can’t hear a message.
October 5th, 2023 00:53
Bobby O said:
It’s good to shake some trees and the validity here is one I want to scream whenever a certain self prophetelizing soul rings my ear with fervor so tilted that I can’t hear a message.
October 5th, 2023 00:53
God must be so proud.
David Wakeling said:
So God created mankind in his own image, in the image of God he created them; male and female he created them.
Way to go God intelligent design
October 4th, 2023 20:45
David Wakeling said:
So God created mankind in his own image, in the image of God he created them; male and female he created them.
Way to go God intelligent design
October 4th, 2023 20:45
God must be so proud.
BlessedbyGod said:
All those horrible things that happen isn\'t of God, it\'s of Satan and we are living in satans domain, not Hell, but he still controls this world, God cast lucifer from heaven because the devil is so vile and evil,
Yes innocent die, yes bad things happen to good and innocent people, but God is love and all the good in this world, not the evil
October 4th, 2023 15:49
BlessedbyGod said:
All those horrible things that happen isn\'t of God, it\'s of Satan and we are living in satans domain, not Hell, but he still controls this world, God cast lucifer from heaven because the devil is so vile and evil,
Yes innocent die, yes bad things happen to good and innocent people, but God is love and all the good in this world, not the evil
October 4th, 2023 15:49
Bribery and Lies.
AlitaOpal said:
Sounds like the family I grew up in, but I made sure that the family I made was far away from this emotional guilt.. it was traumatic for me... But at some point I had to snap out of the ideas proposed to me by those who call themselves my parents.. I developed boundaries and in turn got their respect through what they called rebelliousness, that which I call breaking the curse..
I really liked this
October 3rd, 2023 22:34
AlitaOpal said:
Sounds like the family I grew up in, but I made sure that the family I made was far away from this emotional guilt.. it was traumatic for me... But at some point I had to snap out of the ideas proposed to me by those who call themselves my parents.. I developed boundaries and in turn got their respect through what they called rebelliousness, that which I call breaking the curse..
I really liked this
October 3rd, 2023 22:34
On The Road to Vexation.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much.Vexation can be a worrying place.I haven\'t been there for years
October 3rd, 2023 22:02
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much.Vexation can be a worrying place.I haven\'t been there for years
October 3rd, 2023 22:02
On The Road to Vexation.
Bobby O said:
Love the pace and its reminiscent tone, reminds of the great classic story writers that draw you in from the very first line. Much enjoyment here my friend.
October 3rd, 2023 21:19
Bobby O said:
Love the pace and its reminiscent tone, reminds of the great classic story writers that draw you in from the very first line. Much enjoyment here my friend.
October 3rd, 2023 21:19
Mrs Karminski’s Ornaments.
2781 said:
I think in 1957 a pregnancy in a new marriage would have been celebrated, not terminated!
Certainly not the norm.
October 2nd, 2023 06:32
2781 said:
I think in 1957 a pregnancy in a new marriage would have been celebrated, not terminated!
Certainly not the norm.
October 2nd, 2023 06:32
Escape Claus 5.
2781 said:
I am not so sure, but your message is clear.
To the slaughter! Do I hear?
October 1st, 2023 02:25
2781 said:
I am not so sure, but your message is clear.
To the slaughter! Do I hear?
October 1st, 2023 02:25
The branches are bare.
David Wakeling said:
I hear you mi amigo.If life doesn\'t make you scream sometimes nothing will
September 28th, 2023 00:44
David Wakeling said:
I hear you mi amigo.If life doesn\'t make you scream sometimes nothing will
September 28th, 2023 00:44
Bribery and Lies.
David Wakeling said:
Plans are good.Thanks for commenting.
September 28th, 2023 00:42
David Wakeling said:
Plans are good.Thanks for commenting.
September 28th, 2023 00:42
The branches are bare.
Bobby O said:
A cathartic scream and the very possibility it will be much more. You detail life with such a leveraged reality that I would join in with your shouts.
September 28th, 2023 00:36
Bobby O said:
A cathartic scream and the very possibility it will be much more. You detail life with such a leveraged reality that I would join in with your shouts.
September 28th, 2023 00:36
Bribery and Lies.
Bobby O said:
We posture as a plan. We count on a gentle judge as the stakes are high so we construct some kind of plan. You paint such a real aspect of life and it awakens.
September 28th, 2023 00:34
Bobby O said:
We posture as a plan. We count on a gentle judge as the stakes are high so we construct some kind of plan. You paint such a real aspect of life and it awakens.
September 28th, 2023 00:34
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful word David, I hope you keep on smiling.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful word David, I hope you keep on smiling.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:43
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
Bobby O said:
I got choked up a little bit as my mind began to grasp. It was purposeful. As your new friend , I will be hopeful b
September 24th, 2023 17:26
Bobby O said:
I got choked up a little bit as my mind began to grasp. It was purposeful. As your new friend , I will be hopeful b
September 24th, 2023 17:26
Emily goes for a walk.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very touching words David that I understand completely.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very touching words David that I understand completely.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:48
Emily goes for a walk.
David Wakeling said:
Thanks for reading.Much appreciated
September 23rd, 2023 06:55
David Wakeling said:
Thanks for reading.Much appreciated
September 23rd, 2023 06:55
Emily goes for a walk.
Bobby O said:
That touched my heart. Nice topic with much kindness spread.
September 23rd, 2023 04:38
Bobby O said:
That touched my heart. Nice topic with much kindness spread.
September 23rd, 2023 04:38
The Dawning Grace.
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment we have is now and is so important, those in the past and the future are not as important as the now David.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment we have is now and is so important, those in the past and the future are not as important as the now David.
Andy
September 22nd, 2023 01:09
Who Gains?
2781 said:
For what is a man profited, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?
September 20th, 2023 05:03
2781 said:
For what is a man profited, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?
September 20th, 2023 05:03
Who Gains?
Bobby O said:
In the comedy lies the tragedy and the forever legacy perhaps I’d best counted when you inspire someone to smile.
Nice piece. Yiu hot great ideas
September 20th, 2023 01:20
Bobby O said:
In the comedy lies the tragedy and the forever legacy perhaps I’d best counted when you inspire someone to smile.
Nice piece. Yiu hot great ideas
September 20th, 2023 01:20
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