Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The Cat’s Tale.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, with age our minds still think we can do the things we used to but nowadays it is just wishful thinking David.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, with age our minds still think we can do the things we used to but nowadays it is just wishful thinking David.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:25
The Cat’s Tale.
arqios said:
On the human side of things it’s hard to explain but the cat’s tale covered the most salient bases.
November 6th, 2024 06:56
arqios said:
On the human side of things it’s hard to explain but the cat’s tale covered the most salient bases.
November 6th, 2024 06:56
The Cat’s Tale.
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor of age but even as personification alone it holds its own. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor of age but even as personification alone it holds its own. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 06:23
Sugar and Salt
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people are just not grateful in life David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people are just not grateful in life David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:58
The Battle and the Baby
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of new life is so appealing David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The innocence of new life is so appealing David.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:48
AVARICE.
NafisaSB said:
a poignant poem with a beautiful and true message - well done
November 5th, 2024 00:44
NafisaSB said:
a poignant poem with a beautiful and true message - well done
November 5th, 2024 00:44
The Battle and the Baby
sorenbarrett said:
Inocense is most aluring and draws a great deal of support. A most lovely write.
November 4th, 2024 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Inocense is most aluring and draws a great deal of support. A most lovely write.
November 4th, 2024 04:32
AVARICE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, the avarice in our world is getting worse each moment in our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, the avarice in our world is getting worse each moment in our lives.
Andy
November 4th, 2024 02:48
AVARICE.
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! This is so beautifully rendered I\'m on the fence over whether it\'s what it seems at first glance or a grand and damning metaphor. With a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, this is too lovely, despite its ghastliness. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 12:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! This is so beautifully rendered I\'m on the fence over whether it\'s what it seems at first glance or a grand and damning metaphor. With a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery, this is too lovely, despite its ghastliness. Thank you for sharing.
November 3rd, 2024 12:19
AVARICE.
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic write of the avarice of men and the callousness toward others in their quest. So well worded and rhymed a masterpiece
November 3rd, 2024 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic write of the avarice of men and the callousness toward others in their quest. So well worded and rhymed a masterpiece
November 3rd, 2024 09:18
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things that we can do in life pushes away the darkness David, Good write.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
So many things that we can do in life pushes away the darkness David, Good write.
Andy
November 3rd, 2024 02:28
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
sorenbarrett said:
The sad aspects of aging depicted well in attempts to live one\'s dreams with incapacitation. Well composed in solid verse
November 2nd, 2024 19:47
sorenbarrett said:
The sad aspects of aging depicted well in attempts to live one\'s dreams with incapacitation. Well composed in solid verse
November 2nd, 2024 19:47
Salute
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message that I wish we all could adhere to. The last line is my favorite and I wish all would honor.
November 2nd, 2024 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message that I wish we all could adhere to. The last line is my favorite and I wish all would honor.
November 2nd, 2024 10:05
Salute
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write David and that last line is so meaningful, if only we all could find kindness.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write David and that last line is so meaningful, if only we all could find kindness.
Andy
November 2nd, 2024 02:21
The Ghost that saves
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept, the ghost of love, makes one ponder. I love when a new thought comes in a poem. Very creative.
November 1st, 2024 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept, the ghost of love, makes one ponder. I love when a new thought comes in a poem. Very creative.
November 1st, 2024 03:51
The Ghost that saves
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you David.
Andy
November 1st, 2024 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there for you David.
Andy
November 1st, 2024 02:04
The Days of Rock and Roll.
Bobby O said:
They Day with you and happiness and I imagine especially because of the title soundtrack. It is even adjusted by volume as you move around cause it’s gotta hit you right she comes Kathy’s clown. I like Ray Davis. Will you tell me your name?
October 31st, 2024 02:49
Bobby O said:
They Day with you and happiness and I imagine especially because of the title soundtrack. It is even adjusted by volume as you move around cause it’s gotta hit you right she comes Kathy’s clown. I like Ray Davis. Will you tell me your name?
October 31st, 2024 02:49
The Days of Rock and Roll.
arqios said:
Honest, with it being the Hallowe’en week I was almost expecting a ghoulish twist at the second dance segment! Phew, all this marketing around us is messing with my flow. But the sweet tenderness meanders alongside the days of wine and roses… nothing like pure, simple bliss even if a tad poignant. 👍🏻👍🏻
October 30th, 2024 05:45
arqios said:
Honest, with it being the Hallowe’en week I was almost expecting a ghoulish twist at the second dance segment! Phew, all this marketing around us is messing with my flow. But the sweet tenderness meanders alongside the days of wine and roses… nothing like pure, simple bliss even if a tad poignant. 👍🏻👍🏻
October 30th, 2024 05:45
The Days of Rock and Roll.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful this poem speaks to all those old memories fondly tucked away. The smoothness of the read made it feel fluid like a dream. Very nice
October 30th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful this poem speaks to all those old memories fondly tucked away. The smoothness of the read made it feel fluid like a dream. Very nice
October 30th, 2024 04:45
The Days of Rock and Roll.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, back in those days of Rock and Roll life was magnificent.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, back in those days of Rock and Roll life was magnificent.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:55
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