Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
At the Altar of Eros.
sorenbarrett said:
This a tasty sandwich fabled beginning and end with story in the center. Loved the joint elements of Greek and Egyptian mythology remnicent of the Bem Bem bird and cosmic egg. Well constructed and nicely written
September 29th, 2024 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
This a tasty sandwich fabled beginning and end with story in the center. Loved the joint elements of Greek and Egyptian mythology remnicent of the Bem Bem bird and cosmic egg. Well constructed and nicely written
September 29th, 2024 07:09
An important Life.
sorenbarrett said:
It is all in a point of view. We can choose how we see things. A very good lesson to learn. Nicely done.
September 28th, 2024 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is all in a point of view. We can choose how we see things. A very good lesson to learn. Nicely done.
September 28th, 2024 19:04
An important Life.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, thise nights can be wondrous.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, thise nights can be wondrous.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:28
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
Cassie58 said:
How reassured that child must have been. She must have felt that security all around her. Nicely conveyed lines. Enjoyed the flow, the rhyme and the imagery. Well done David.
September 27th, 2024 19:33
Cassie58 said:
How reassured that child must have been. She must have felt that security all around her. Nicely conveyed lines. Enjoyed the flow, the rhyme and the imagery. Well done David.
September 27th, 2024 19:33
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the protective theme of this poem filled with great images and pulled on by the current of rhyme. Very nicely done David
September 27th, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the protective theme of this poem filled with great images and pulled on by the current of rhyme. Very nicely done David
September 27th, 2024 03:46
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
orchidee said:
Good write David.
September 27th, 2024 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write David.
September 27th, 2024 01:53
Belinda talks to her Husband while he is asleep.
Cassie58 said:
From a woman’s perspective, the end of the road has been reached.and who would blame her for leaving. She has become an empty shell. A sad poem David, you convey Belinda’s plight well.
September 25th, 2024 21:25
Cassie58 said:
From a woman’s perspective, the end of the road has been reached.and who would blame her for leaving. She has become an empty shell. A sad poem David, you convey Belinda’s plight well.
September 25th, 2024 21:25
Bravery and Slavery.
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but dream of a time without range, where peace and love rule all David.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but dream of a time without range, where peace and love rule all David.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:44
Bravery and Slavery.
sorenbarrett said:
The world is tough and the human race has many deficits evolution will tell what is right. But as for this poem I judge it a thought provoking and wonderful write.
September 24th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
The world is tough and the human race has many deficits evolution will tell what is right. But as for this poem I judge it a thought provoking and wonderful write.
September 24th, 2024 05:26
Bravery and Slavery.
Cassie58 said:
You have penned this beautifully David. There are many questions here which really stimulate the thinking. I abhor violence but would use it without hesitation if any of my loved ones were being attacked. I fear that rage, but I know it’s there. It’s not bravery, it’s survival. Men crying tears, is not a weakness, I see it as a strength. So much here to think about. An excellent write. Have a happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 03:42
Cassie58 said:
You have penned this beautifully David. There are many questions here which really stimulate the thinking. I abhor violence but would use it without hesitation if any of my loved ones were being attacked. I fear that rage, but I know it’s there. It’s not bravery, it’s survival. Men crying tears, is not a weakness, I see it as a strength. So much here to think about. An excellent write. Have a happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 03:42
Bravery and Slavery.
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write David! What would you do if your family was starving? Is it bravery to steal from another hungry family? The poem really made me think!👍
September 24th, 2024 03:24
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write David! What would you do if your family was starving? Is it bravery to steal from another hungry family? The poem really made me think!👍
September 24th, 2024 03:24
Abrim
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words and tale David, we sometimes wonder ourselves who would benefit from our existence.
Andy
September 24th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words and tale David, we sometimes wonder ourselves who would benefit from our existence.
Andy
September 24th, 2024 01:17
Abrim
Cassie58 said:
Nicely narrated David. A story well told which flows and rhymes well. Visually pleasing and much enjoyed.
September 23rd, 2024 13:28
Cassie58 said:
Nicely narrated David. A story well told which flows and rhymes well. Visually pleasing and much enjoyed.
September 23rd, 2024 13:28
Death Defying Judgement
Cheeky Missy said:
A sufficiently delicate issue, I hate pussy-footing it yet cannot avoid it, in a sense. Very serious with a definite poignancy, thank you for sharing.
September 7th, 2024 17:49
Cheeky Missy said:
A sufficiently delicate issue, I hate pussy-footing it yet cannot avoid it, in a sense. Very serious with a definite poignancy, thank you for sharing.
September 7th, 2024 17:49
Grandpa Doe
sorenbarrett said:
A great story and a great metaphor as well. Society has toppled the trees move the hills where they are no longer welcome. We do the same with people that are not desirable. They clutter up our parks and our eye sores. We push them away out of sight to another place
September 7th, 2024 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
A great story and a great metaphor as well. Society has toppled the trees move the hills where they are no longer welcome. We do the same with people that are not desirable. They clutter up our parks and our eye sores. We push them away out of sight to another place
September 7th, 2024 07:39
Grandpa Doe
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful story David, it shows that there are good people around.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful story David, it shows that there are good people around.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 02:05
Death Defying Judgement
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words David, we will all die but some want to chose which way to go, I don\'t though I will just wait.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words David, we will all die but some want to chose which way to go, I don\'t though I will just wait.
Andy
September 7th, 2024 01:47
Grandpa Doe
orchidee said:
Good write David.
Or - in some churches, though unsaid through \'politeness\' - \'You can\'t sit here. it\'s my pew!\' You get a scowling look instead.
OK for days of old, I suppose, when people paid for their own pews.
September 7th, 2024 01:01
orchidee said:
Good write David.
Or - in some churches, though unsaid through \'politeness\' - \'You can\'t sit here. it\'s my pew!\' You get a scowling look instead.
OK for days of old, I suppose, when people paid for their own pews.
September 7th, 2024 01:01
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