Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Rose Williams and the fragile heart.
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting if slightly dark read, which read nicely throughout the write, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 05:47
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting if slightly dark read, which read nicely throughout the write, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 05:47
Rose Williams and the fragile heart.
sorenbarrett said:
Well done unlike a bull in a china shop it seems that there was no glass broken in that menagerie. This one really took on the character. It has been so many years since I read that play.
March 3rd, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Well done unlike a bull in a china shop it seems that there was no glass broken in that menagerie. This one really took on the character. It has been so many years since I read that play.
March 3rd, 2025 05:08
Rose Williams and the fragile heart.
arqios said:
I felt such undertones of darkness and the current flowed. Perhaps the last line bringing it all together. 🙏🏻🕊
March 3rd, 2025 02:22
arqios said:
I felt such undertones of darkness and the current flowed. Perhaps the last line bringing it all together. 🙏🏻🕊
March 3rd, 2025 02:22
The Rules of The Insanity of Love.
Poetic Licence said:
The good and bad side of emotion walking hand in hand, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 05:38
Poetic Licence said:
The good and bad side of emotion walking hand in hand, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 05:38
The Rules of The Insanity of Love.
sorenbarrett said:
They say there is balance in all things and the amount of love for someone is balanced by an equal amount of hate or anger. Those that say they never fight are those with no passion in their relationship. There can not be good without evil. A sad and dark story where love and betrayal are balanced with revenge. Nicely done.
March 2nd, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
They say there is balance in all things and the amount of love for someone is balanced by an equal amount of hate or anger. Those that say they never fight are those with no passion in their relationship. There can not be good without evil. A sad and dark story where love and betrayal are balanced with revenge. Nicely done.
March 2nd, 2025 04:30
Puppa goes on a Yacht.
arqios said:
A very likeable companion, truly man’s best friend 🙏🏻🕊
March 1st, 2025 07:03
arqios said:
A very likeable companion, truly man’s best friend 🙏🏻🕊
March 1st, 2025 07:03
Puppa goes on a Yacht.
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very entertaining read and that has probably happened somewhere, enjoyed
March 1st, 2025 06:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very entertaining read and that has probably happened somewhere, enjoyed
March 1st, 2025 06:19
Puppa goes on a Yacht.
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that seems a simple story for children but I always see more. Are dogs that much different than us? Do they fantasize? I know they dream, the do pretend, and yes even have a sense of humor. Is it just our arrogance that keeps them at our feet and not at our side? A most fun read.
March 1st, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that seems a simple story for children but I always see more. Are dogs that much different than us? Do they fantasize? I know they dream, the do pretend, and yes even have a sense of humor. Is it just our arrogance that keeps them at our feet and not at our side? A most fun read.
March 1st, 2025 05:05
The Last Iceberg.
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense of the destruction of our planet, and the habits are wonderful wildlife live in, the polar bear ended up homeless, probably way off track, still enjoyed a well written write
February 28th, 2025 07:35
Poetic Licence said:
I got the sense of the destruction of our planet, and the habits are wonderful wildlife live in, the polar bear ended up homeless, probably way off track, still enjoyed a well written write
February 28th, 2025 07:35
The Last Iceberg.
arqios said:
Love the sci-fi feel of this… but it also felt so real! 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:15
arqios said:
Love the sci-fi feel of this… but it also felt so real! 🙏🏻🕊
February 28th, 2025 07:15
The Last Iceberg.
sorenbarrett said:
Both a poem of awareness and a symbolic poem of parting with the past. There is sadness in it either way. Accepting change is difficult and seen as threatening. This poem represents well these feelings. A fanciful read or maybe not.
February 28th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Both a poem of awareness and a symbolic poem of parting with the past. There is sadness in it either way. Accepting change is difficult and seen as threatening. This poem represents well these feelings. A fanciful read or maybe not.
February 28th, 2025 04:14
The Alt...The Altz..Something...
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching write of the slow and heartbreaking breakdown of the mind, expressed in a caring way in this write
February 27th, 2025 07:51
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching write of the slow and heartbreaking breakdown of the mind, expressed in a caring way in this write
February 27th, 2025 07:51
The Alt...The Altz..Something...
arqios said:
Everyone in my family that lived past 50 seems to have been thusly afflicted. It scares me some 🙏🏻🕊 awesome title too, btw👍🏻
February 27th, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
Everyone in my family that lived past 50 seems to have been thusly afflicted. It scares me some 🙏🏻🕊 awesome title too, btw👍🏻
February 27th, 2025 06:47
The Alt...The Altz..Something...
sorenbarrett said:
A sad deterioration of the mind evidenced so creatively in the obvious breakdown in the poem itself. Very nicely done David a fave for creativity in this one.
February 27th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
A sad deterioration of the mind evidenced so creatively in the obvious breakdown in the poem itself. Very nicely done David a fave for creativity in this one.
February 27th, 2025 04:30
The Alt...The Altz..Something...
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope this is untrue David, my wife had dementia for years and died from it, such an awful time!
Andy
February 27th, 2025 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope this is untrue David, my wife had dementia for years and died from it, such an awful time!
Andy
February 27th, 2025 02:58
Psalm to God.
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad this poem speaks to the black side of man and yet it has such good wording and images. Well done
February 26th, 2025 18:01
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad this poem speaks to the black side of man and yet it has such good wording and images. Well done
February 26th, 2025 18:01
Psalm to God.
arqios said:
A searing, telling work. It also echoes the sentiment of one pronounced dead and cancelled in the daily grind. It would be notable should the apathetic, fearful, non-existent one somehow respond. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:45
arqios said:
A searing, telling work. It also echoes the sentiment of one pronounced dead and cancelled in the daily grind. It would be notable should the apathetic, fearful, non-existent one somehow respond. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:45
Melanie Loveblind\'s Diary for the first year of Marriage.
Tony36 said:
Excellent write David
February 25th, 2025 08:18
Tony36 said:
Excellent write David
February 25th, 2025 08:18
Melanie Loveblind\'s Diary for the first year of Marriage.
Poetic Licence said:
When you really love someone and what it to work, it is unbelievable what some people will put up with, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:57
Poetic Licence said:
When you really love someone and what it to work, it is unbelievable what some people will put up with, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:57
Melanie Loveblind\'s Diary for the first year of Marriage.
sorenbarrett said:
I guess there are limits to everything, somewhere, I think, well there should be, I think, maybe? A fun read
February 25th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
I guess there are limits to everything, somewhere, I think, well there should be, I think, maybe? A fun read
February 25th, 2025 04:01
Mrs Cohen comes to America
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David showing that all can be fine even after absolute devastation has occurred.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David showing that all can be fine even after absolute devastation has occurred.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:12
Mrs Cohen comes to America
Poetic Licence said:
Very profound writing of the feelings of a lady who survived in hell, beautifully expressed
February 24th, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
Very profound writing of the feelings of a lady who survived in hell, beautifully expressed
February 24th, 2025 05:59
Mrs Cohen comes to America
sorenbarrett said:
Where the mind goes and how it works or not when it has suffered too much. My uncle was with General Patton when he entered Germany and they were the first to liberate one of the concentration camps, he aid the he will never forget the smell and the vision of suffering there. A simple write in many ways but so complex below the surface. Very well done
February 24th, 2025 02:56
sorenbarrett said:
Where the mind goes and how it works or not when it has suffered too much. My uncle was with General Patton when he entered Germany and they were the first to liberate one of the concentration camps, he aid the he will never forget the smell and the vision of suffering there. A simple write in many ways but so complex below the surface. Very well done
February 24th, 2025 02:56
Mrs Cohen comes to America
arqios said:
Simple but profound, singular but branches out, tackles without effort the substance of life during challenging seasons. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 24th, 2025 02:09
arqios said:
Simple but profound, singular but branches out, tackles without effort the substance of life during challenging seasons. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 24th, 2025 02:09
God talks to Adrian in a Dream.
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes there was that tower of Babel thing wasn\'t there. I guess that those bad poems of mine have made it to God\'s ear and like a note off key have caught his attention. Shhhhh he said. A fun read David and it has much wisdom as well.
February 23rd, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes there was that tower of Babel thing wasn\'t there. I guess that those bad poems of mine have made it to God\'s ear and like a note off key have caught his attention. Shhhhh he said. A fun read David and it has much wisdom as well.
February 23rd, 2025 05:21
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