Comments received on poems by David Wakeling



Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
David Wakeling said:

Indeed it is.thank you for reading my work

March 6th, 2023 05:32

Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
Goldfinch60 said:

There certainly are things that are joyous in this world David and walking with nature is one of them.

Andy

March 6th, 2023 02:53

Ugly Sue.
Eugene S. said:

So full of humanity and empathy are your words! \"Still the Sun shines on me like it always did.\" - that literally ripped my heart out. Bravo!

March 5th, 2023 08:53

Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
Eugene S. said:

A very American vantage point! May we never give up that stance! Nice poem and appreciated.

March 5th, 2023 08:48

Ugly Sue.
Neville said:


I am so glad I stumbled upon Ugly Sue .. restored a little bit of faith in humanity so it did sir ... bravo Neville

March 5th, 2023 06:20

Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
David Wakeling said:

We do indeed.Thanks for commenting

March 5th, 2023 04:45

Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
Goldfinch60 said:

What a poem David, we each have our own lives to live in the way WE want to.

Andy

March 5th, 2023 02:53

Ugly Sue.
David Wakeling said:

Indeed.thanks for your comments

March 3rd, 2023 15:24

Ugly Sue.
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words David, they moved me. This is going into my favourites and I don\'t say that very often.
The lady was so wise:
\"Just treat people with kindness and kindness will come back to you\"

That really happens.

Andy

March 3rd, 2023 02:49

The Pearl Necklace.
David Wakeling said:

Thank you

March 2nd, 2023 05:29

The Pearl Necklace.
2781 said:

Kind of bitter sweet, I liked it.

March 2nd, 2023 02:17

Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
David Wakeling said:

Indeed.Thanks for reading

March 1st, 2023 05:14

Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words David, we all have our way of making our day.

Andy

March 1st, 2023 02:49

The Sun did not rise this morning
David Wakeling said:

What a coincidence.Great minds think alike

February 28th, 2023 05:15

The Sun did not rise this morning
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words David, it reminded me of a poem I wrote a few years ago.

Andy

Walking Home.
Andy Brister (Goldfinch60) – August 2019.


There I was last night
Walking home,
Lost in thought.
I was heading passed the cemetery.
Three young girls were in front of me,
Chatting,
Looking frightened.
They said they were scared,
Scared to walk passed the cemetery,
Could they walk with me.
I said of course you can,
I can understand how you feel,
I too used to be scared
Scared of walking passed the cemetery,
When I was alive.



February 28th, 2023 02:31

Joseph and the last orange
sorenbarrett said:

Misunderstood intentions, over reaction, exageration all great ways of creating tragedy, humor and good stories.

February 27th, 2023 05:30

Joseph and the last orange
David Wakeling said:

Thank you.

February 27th, 2023 05:11

Joseph and the last orange
Goldfinch60 said:

I found these words very meaningful David.

Andy

February 27th, 2023 02:58

Hair Today....
David Wakeling said:

Thank you.Much appreciated

February 26th, 2023 04:43

Hair Today....
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful story David.

Andy

February 26th, 2023 02:12

Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
David Wakeling said:

Thank you Much appreciated

February 25th, 2023 05:07

Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words David.

Andy

February 25th, 2023 02:16

What game is this
David Wakeling said:

Thank you

February 25th, 2023 02:01

What game is this
Mello said:

wow
great write and love the flow.

February 24th, 2023 06:43

These are the dark days
David Wakeling said:

What What

February 23rd, 2023 02:35

These are the dark days
2781 said:

Who who

February 23rd, 2023 00:19

My name is Mary Judith MaCallister
David Wakeling said:

No can do amigo no can do.Thanks for reading

February 21st, 2023 16:01

My name is Mary Judith MaCallister
Doggerel Dave said:

Surely this piece is deserving of at least a short commentary by you.
I\'m interested, but not enough to commit without some background.

February 21st, 2023 07:26

Mr Bellmeister catches the bus.
Olaf Gatermann said:

Sad story in a fine poem! Touching narrative...

February 20th, 2023 03:33

Mr Bellmeister catches the bus.
David Wakeling said:

Indeed.Thanks for your comments

February 19th, 2023 15:39

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