Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
I shall be..
Bobby O said:
This thing iof committed and loyal is amongst what many set out to offer for our eyes. You nail it w a deft and skilled style accruing splendor most never reach and the wonderment for me is you possess no secret words or magic it’s accomplished w usual tools achieving unusual excellence. I salute.
August 11th, 2023 20:20
Bobby O said:
This thing iof committed and loyal is amongst what many set out to offer for our eyes. You nail it w a deft and skilled style accruing splendor most never reach and the wonderment for me is you possess no secret words or magic it’s accomplished w usual tools achieving unusual excellence. I salute.
August 11th, 2023 20:20
God Pty Ltd
Bobby O said:
That is a Genuine Epic worthy of continued study and many lines have varied interpretation that speak to Truth w the largesse of paragraph but with succinct phrase the job is done w preciously sensitive and evocative word. The God, the kid, The typhoid cart viciously calls out and exposes zealots who frame a one sided view without a peek to that cart metaphorically travails hidden within flimsy ignorance explained weakly by FREE WILL. I could pick and examine the gems here for hours. I am humbled by this effort of sanctity and real. Thanks
August 4th, 2023 02:26
Bobby O said:
That is a Genuine Epic worthy of continued study and many lines have varied interpretation that speak to Truth w the largesse of paragraph but with succinct phrase the job is done w preciously sensitive and evocative word. The God, the kid, The typhoid cart viciously calls out and exposes zealots who frame a one sided view without a peek to that cart metaphorically travails hidden within flimsy ignorance explained weakly by FREE WILL. I could pick and examine the gems here for hours. I am humbled by this effort of sanctity and real. Thanks
August 4th, 2023 02:26
God Pty Ltd
orchidee said:
Sounds like tempting God to tempt us - the last two lines.
I do tend to \'float by\' some things in \'blind faith\' maybe. There are the difficult questions of \'why troubles to those who are \'good\' \', etc.
Even the Psalmists ask some questions in some of the Psalms.
August 4th, 2023 01:59
orchidee said:
Sounds like tempting God to tempt us - the last two lines.
I do tend to \'float by\' some things in \'blind faith\' maybe. There are the difficult questions of \'why troubles to those who are \'good\' \', etc.
Even the Psalmists ask some questions in some of the Psalms.
August 4th, 2023 01:59
Standing on a tight rope juggling broken glass.
David Wakeling said:
Not fictional.It all happened.But thanks for your comments
August 3rd, 2023 18:27
David Wakeling said:
Not fictional.It all happened.But thanks for your comments
August 3rd, 2023 18:27
Standing on a tight rope juggling broken glass.
orchidee said:
A bit of dark humour from me - fictional. A \'magician\' friend could eat glass without being injured. I said \'Pop round to see me, it will save me on the washing up!\' lol.
August 3rd, 2023 06:50
orchidee said:
A bit of dark humour from me - fictional. A \'magician\' friend could eat glass without being injured. I said \'Pop round to see me, it will save me on the washing up!\' lol.
August 3rd, 2023 06:50
The Sermon on the Hill.
orchidee said:
I could kinda \'like\' this in a way -sounds like worldly wisdom to me; the ways of thinking some have got into.
August 1st, 2023 02:41
orchidee said:
I could kinda \'like\' this in a way -sounds like worldly wisdom to me; the ways of thinking some have got into.
August 1st, 2023 02:41
The song of Falcon the Stallion
Goldfinch60 said:
Ride on in wonder and joy David.
Andy
July 30th, 2023 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Ride on in wonder and joy David.
Andy
July 30th, 2023 01:28
Belinda talks to her Husband while he is asleep.
David Wakeling said:
Belinda got the midnight train to Tulsa.I might do a sequel.What a good idea.Thanks for commenting
July 29th, 2023 03:10
David Wakeling said:
Belinda got the midnight train to Tulsa.I might do a sequel.What a good idea.Thanks for commenting
July 29th, 2023 03:10
Belinda talks to her Husband while he is asleep.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad emotive words Dave.
Andy
July 29th, 2023 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad emotive words Dave.
Andy
July 29th, 2023 01:50
Belinda talks to her Husband while he is asleep.
Bobby O said:
I loved everything about this. To pull off a realistic monologue snd snartlysplash it w rhymes that doesn’t “candy” up the believability of the message and it moves with nice timing and lingers only when the point may be worthy of pondersnce. And we had an end and we are set for a sequel. Where is she? Where is he? Surely the maddening crowd will demand the answers ??
Nice write
Good read
July 28th, 2023 22:39
Bobby O said:
I loved everything about this. To pull off a realistic monologue snd snartlysplash it w rhymes that doesn’t “candy” up the believability of the message and it moves with nice timing and lingers only when the point may be worthy of pondersnce. And we had an end and we are set for a sequel. Where is she? Where is he? Surely the maddening crowd will demand the answers ??
Nice write
Good read
July 28th, 2023 22:39
There was a time
David Wakeling said:
sure has changed but I still dream of the good old days
July 28th, 2023 03:05
David Wakeling said:
sure has changed but I still dream of the good old days
July 28th, 2023 03:05
There was a time
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes there was a time David but much has now changed.
Andy
July 28th, 2023 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes there was a time David but much has now changed.
Andy
July 28th, 2023 01:47
Ths Sun did not rise
David Wakeling said:
I\'m sure you are right.Thanks for commenting Andy.Always appreciated
July 25th, 2023 03:02
David Wakeling said:
I\'m sure you are right.Thanks for commenting Andy.Always appreciated
July 25th, 2023 03:02
Ths Sun did not rise
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter how dark it is the light will always come back.
Andy
July 25th, 2023 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
No matter how dark it is the light will always come back.
Andy
July 25th, 2023 01:11
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
David Wakeling said:
I always wish I learned to dance.I do love music however.Thanks for reading
July 24th, 2023 02:57
David Wakeling said:
I always wish I learned to dance.I do love music however.Thanks for reading
July 24th, 2023 02:57
Ugly Sue.
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing the things that you can learn from the most unexpected people.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing the things that you can learn from the most unexpected people.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 01:04
The Pearl Necklace.
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories are so important in old age David.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories are so important in old age David.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:57
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Goldfinch60 said:
To fill you life with dancing and music is a wonderful way to be, very good write David.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
To fill you life with dancing and music is a wonderful way to be, very good write David.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 00:47
The Days of Milk and Marmalade
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
An interesting and nicely expressed writing .. like your way with words )) good poem
July 23rd, 2023 00:55
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
An interesting and nicely expressed writing .. like your way with words )) good poem
July 23rd, 2023 00:55
Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
Goldfinch60 said:
I was hooked by these words David, and I believe that this happens in many ways in the way some parents control their offspring.
Freedom to be your own self is something that ALL deserve.
Andy
July 21st, 2023 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I was hooked by these words David, and I believe that this happens in many ways in the way some parents control their offspring.
Freedom to be your own self is something that ALL deserve.
Andy
July 21st, 2023 00:47
Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
Parisab said:
The cultural references are misplaced as a young Persian/Iranian American would not shout out in Arabic-fleeing from a religious state, forced hijab by parents is very unlikely-however I can understand the intent and appreciate the empathy, poet friend
July 20th, 2023 02:57
Parisab said:
The cultural references are misplaced as a young Persian/Iranian American would not shout out in Arabic-fleeing from a religious state, forced hijab by parents is very unlikely-however I can understand the intent and appreciate the empathy, poet friend
July 20th, 2023 02:57
Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
Parisab said:
This short story looks familiar? Has it been published elsewhere?
July 20th, 2023 02:40
Parisab said:
This short story looks familiar? Has it been published elsewhere?
July 20th, 2023 02:40
Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much
July 18th, 2023 19:26
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much
July 18th, 2023 19:26
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