Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Grandpa Doe
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a moral that we all have if we only take time to listen, Too many in todays society don\'t take the time to listen to others. Nicely written
January 30th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A great story with a moral that we all have if we only take time to listen, Too many in todays society don\'t take the time to listen to others. Nicely written
January 30th, 2025 04:31
Grandpa Doe
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful, touching and thoughtful piece of writing, really enjoyed it
January 30th, 2025 03:05
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful, touching and thoughtful piece of writing, really enjoyed it
January 30th, 2025 03:05
Grandpa Doe
arqios said:
Now there is a story worth telling and retelling… I wonder if the town was really Ballina NSW… just a random thought. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 01:49
arqios said:
Now there is a story worth telling and retelling… I wonder if the town was really Ballina NSW… just a random thought. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 30th, 2025 01:49
Fire Earth Water Air.
arqios said:
Quite elemental and primordial even! A thrill of a tone to read 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:26
arqios said:
Quite elemental and primordial even! A thrill of a tone to read 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:26
Fire Earth Water Air.
Poetic Licence said:
The elements that give so much life yet at the same time away so much life, the power of nature, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:18
Poetic Licence said:
The elements that give so much life yet at the same time away so much life, the power of nature, enjoyed the read
January 29th, 2025 04:18
Fire Earth Water Air.
sorenbarrett said:
Mythical in form, Biblical in sound, Apocalyptic as it reads, this poem shows a dark face. Very nice David
January 29th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Mythical in form, Biblical in sound, Apocalyptic as it reads, this poem shows a dark face. Very nice David
January 29th, 2025 04:16
WAU 1982.
Cassie58 said:
A somber poem. I am unsure what WAU 1982 represents, but it leaves me with a heavy heart. Some fine poetic lines contained in the stanzas, and the final line ends on a more optimistic note. The sun in the sky, is far better than a sunken sun. Fine poetry David.
January 29th, 2025 02:42
Cassie58 said:
A somber poem. I am unsure what WAU 1982 represents, but it leaves me with a heavy heart. Some fine poetic lines contained in the stanzas, and the final line ends on a more optimistic note. The sun in the sky, is far better than a sunken sun. Fine poetry David.
January 29th, 2025 02:42
WAU 1982.
arqios said:
Liked and Faved! Very sonorous both in language and meaning… have you been holding back this other side of you!? 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:32
arqios said:
Liked and Faved! Very sonorous both in language and meaning… have you been holding back this other side of you!? 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:32
WAU 1982.
Poetic Licence said:
I might well be wrong, i took this to about the civil war in Sudan (The Title), which was then followed by another war, apoligies if i am. It is still a very well crafted piece of writing, painting many a haunting image.
January 28th, 2025 04:24
Poetic Licence said:
I might well be wrong, i took this to about the civil war in Sudan (The Title), which was then followed by another war, apoligies if i am. It is still a very well crafted piece of writing, painting many a haunting image.
January 28th, 2025 04:24
WAU 1982.
sorenbarrett said:
I would indeed be remiss to not give this a Fave. David what has happened to your writting? Although it was always good this is in a class of its own. I sparkles with a classical flair and despite wonderful rhyme it holds deep metaphor and meaning. This is one of my favorite of yours. Very well done.. no brilliant!!
January 28th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
I would indeed be remiss to not give this a Fave. David what has happened to your writting? Although it was always good this is in a class of its own. I sparkles with a classical flair and despite wonderful rhyme it holds deep metaphor and meaning. This is one of my favorite of yours. Very well done.. no brilliant!!
January 28th, 2025 04:10
Faith and Warragul.
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story of love and giving and the cost of it to both parties. This metaphor echoed in religious stories shows devotion and love through action. A most charming story told with great imagery.
January 27th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story of love and giving and the cost of it to both parties. This metaphor echoed in religious stories shows devotion and love through action. A most charming story told with great imagery.
January 27th, 2025 05:12
Faith and Warragul.
arqios said:
Quite tragic but also courageous! We are looking at a prospective trip to Arnhem Land, not really sure that it will eventuate. But I\'ve had a roadtrip to Warragul VIC sometime in 2005, no crocs about for a while there, but sure that there should be some way up north. 👍🕊️
January 27th, 2025 03:32
arqios said:
Quite tragic but also courageous! We are looking at a prospective trip to Arnhem Land, not really sure that it will eventuate. But I\'ve had a roadtrip to Warragul VIC sometime in 2005, no crocs about for a while there, but sure that there should be some way up north. 👍🕊️
January 27th, 2025 03:32
Faith and Warragul.
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely tale of the ultimate sacrifice someone can give to please someone else, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely tale of the ultimate sacrifice someone can give to please someone else, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 03:20
The talking song.
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem I feel an urgency, being shut out, too late, gone and I just noticed, but has been gone for a long time. We talk less now days too much to get in the way. Relationshiips have changed too they have a shorter life expectancy. Great poem
January 26th, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem I feel an urgency, being shut out, too late, gone and I just noticed, but has been gone for a long time. We talk less now days too much to get in the way. Relationshiips have changed too they have a shorter life expectancy. Great poem
January 26th, 2025 05:26
The talking song.
arqios said:
It can also be a talking dance as well. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 26th, 2025 04:20
arqios said:
It can also be a talking dance as well. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 26th, 2025 04:20
The talking song.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, conversation is so important David.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, conversation is so important David.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 03:01
The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem David if we can face those things that concern us in life and sing through them all will be wonderful.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem David if we can face those things that concern us in life and sing through them all will be wonderful.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 02:48
The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
As a child i too feared storms esp thunder n lightning. Is this a true episode?
Has a lot of lesson and eloquently narrated wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
As a child i too feared storms esp thunder n lightning. Is this a true episode?
Has a lot of lesson and eloquently narrated wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:18
Will you be ready
RSM0812 said:
Waiting for love yet never ready for it. Great write
January 25th, 2025 07:45
RSM0812 said:
Waiting for love yet never ready for it. Great write
January 25th, 2025 07:45
The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening.
arqios said:
During storms My siblings and I would be like the Darling kids playing about, although we had to Peter Pan. It was fearsome and thrilling all at once. Interesting though how this ‘song’ got her through the death of a loved one as well… at least I presume the boyfriend died in the crash.
January 25th, 2025 06:08
arqios said:
During storms My siblings and I would be like the Darling kids playing about, although we had to Peter Pan. It was fearsome and thrilling all at once. Interesting though how this ‘song’ got her through the death of a loved one as well… at least I presume the boyfriend died in the crash.
January 25th, 2025 06:08
The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening.
sorenbarrett said:
David this poem obviously made an impression on me as if I had read it before. Nicely done David
January 25th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
David this poem obviously made an impression on me as if I had read it before. Nicely done David
January 25th, 2025 03:52
Will you be ready
Goldfinch60 said:
I already have love and sing about it all the time DAvid.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
I already have love and sing about it all the time DAvid.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:49
Will you be ready
arqios said:
How then shall the best man appear to herald the bridegroom’s return? 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 24th, 2025 06:36
arqios said:
How then shall the best man appear to herald the bridegroom’s return? 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 24th, 2025 06:36
Will you be ready
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning an awakening very nicely written
January 24th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning an awakening very nicely written
January 24th, 2025 04:29
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