Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Amber\'s last words
evenwheniLie said:
.... life\'s realities can cause one to question the name, the symbols, the religion, the mirage we deemed our moral compass, I believe it is at that time we are at our closest to god.
January 10th, 2024 17:00
evenwheniLie said:
.... life\'s realities can cause one to question the name, the symbols, the religion, the mirage we deemed our moral compass, I believe it is at that time we are at our closest to god.
January 10th, 2024 17:00
Belinda talks to her Husband while he is asleep.
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
A sad unappreciated wife\'s lament expressed awesomely. I have heard of too many wives who feel this way after hot love affairs and courtship love. Kudos!!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 01:44
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
A sad unappreciated wife\'s lament expressed awesomely. I have heard of too many wives who feel this way after hot love affairs and courtship love. Kudos!!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 01:44
Standing on a tight rope juggling broken glass.
Norman Flagtea said:
Juggling broken glass is a nice image. And the whole poem touches upon feelings most of us have had at certain times. Very painful... Well written, David
January 6th, 2024 10:29
Norman Flagtea said:
Juggling broken glass is a nice image. And the whole poem touches upon feelings most of us have had at certain times. Very painful... Well written, David
January 6th, 2024 10:29
We are the stuff that screams are made of.
2781 said:
Yes, the foolish will not see the light,
On the day of his vengeance they will see who was right.
January 5th, 2024 02:18
2781 said:
Yes, the foolish will not see the light,
On the day of his vengeance they will see who was right.
January 5th, 2024 02:18
The Past.
Bobby O said:
And the memories deliver us inaccuracy that hides , maybe, unbeknownst we may claim certain and promote mirage as real.?
Now Iām more scared than before.
January 3rd, 2024 00:17
Bobby O said:
And the memories deliver us inaccuracy that hides , maybe, unbeknownst we may claim certain and promote mirage as real.?
Now Iām more scared than before.
January 3rd, 2024 00:17
The Past.
Bobby O said:
And the memories deliver us inaccuracy that hides , maybe, unbeknownst we may claim certain and promote mirage as real.?
Now Iām more scared than before.
January 3rd, 2024 00:00
Bobby O said:
And the memories deliver us inaccuracy that hides , maybe, unbeknownst we may claim certain and promote mirage as real.?
Now Iām more scared than before.
January 3rd, 2024 00:00
Abbie talks to a stranger at the beach.
Bobby O said:
Itās different each read. Great writing. I usually never ask but it is one time Iād hope you might share your intentions?
December 26th, 2023 23:42
Bobby O said:
Itās different each read. Great writing. I usually never ask but it is one time Iād hope you might share your intentions?
December 26th, 2023 23:42
Abbie talks to a stranger at the beach.
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work.
December 24th, 2023 13:54
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work.
December 24th, 2023 13:54
The Bus Stop on Grace Avenue.
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Very well done.
December 21st, 2023 17:23
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Very well done.
December 21st, 2023 17:23
The Bus Stop on Grace Avenue.
Cassie58 said:
A touching poem to read. The story line conveyed well and the message is true. There is beauty everywhere for those who take the time to look.
December 21st, 2023 17:08
Cassie58 said:
A touching poem to read. The story line conveyed well and the message is true. There is beauty everywhere for those who take the time to look.
December 21st, 2023 17:08
The House of Tears.
Bobby O said:
You made it real. Your style is powerful my friend.
December 14th, 2023 00:56
Bobby O said:
You made it real. Your style is powerful my friend.
December 14th, 2023 00:56
Go Nanna Go Nanna
Bragee said:
Great story!
I love that you were only thinking of oneās own sadness but able to encourage someone to reflect on their happiness in the end.
December 12th, 2023 22:51
Bragee said:
Great story!
I love that you were only thinking of oneās own sadness but able to encourage someone to reflect on their happiness in the end.
December 12th, 2023 22:51
Go Nanna Go Nanna
Norman Flagtea said:
Very moving! I like poems that tell a story...
December 12th, 2023 15:38
Norman Flagtea said:
Very moving! I like poems that tell a story...
December 12th, 2023 15:38
The most hated man in America.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words but I hope it is fiction David and that you have a good life.
Andy
December 9th, 2023 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words but I hope it is fiction David and that you have a good life.
Andy
December 9th, 2023 01:39
Same Sky Different Rain.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, may that fear never come to them.
Andy
December 6th, 2023 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words David, may that fear never come to them.
Andy
December 6th, 2023 02:25
Same Sky Different Rain.
David Wakeling said:
A Corroboree is a ceremonial meeting of Australian Aboriginals, where people interact with the Dreamtime through music, costume, and dance. It is sacred to them and people from outside the community are not permitted to partake or observe the event. Sorry
December 5th, 2023 18:09
David Wakeling said:
A Corroboree is a ceremonial meeting of Australian Aboriginals, where people interact with the Dreamtime through music, costume, and dance. It is sacred to them and people from outside the community are not permitted to partake or observe the event. Sorry
December 5th, 2023 18:09
Same Sky Different Rain.
Natalie Gladmir said:
Good and merry time spending. May I join your company?
December 5th, 2023 16:41
Natalie Gladmir said:
Good and merry time spending. May I join your company?
December 5th, 2023 16:41
The Long Walk to the Bath.
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.Something for the kids to sing around the fire place art night
December 4th, 2023 14:56
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.Something for the kids to sing around the fire place art night
December 4th, 2023 14:56
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