Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Psalm to God.
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad this poem speaks to the black side of man and yet it has such good wording and images. Well done
February 26th, 2025 18:01
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad this poem speaks to the black side of man and yet it has such good wording and images. Well done
February 26th, 2025 18:01
Psalm to God.
arqios said:
A searing, telling work. It also echoes the sentiment of one pronounced dead and cancelled in the daily grind. It would be notable should the apathetic, fearful, non-existent one somehow respond. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:45
arqios said:
A searing, telling work. It also echoes the sentiment of one pronounced dead and cancelled in the daily grind. It would be notable should the apathetic, fearful, non-existent one somehow respond. 🙏🏻🕊
February 26th, 2025 05:45
Melanie Loveblind\'s Diary for the first year of Marriage.
Tony36 said:
Excellent write David
February 25th, 2025 08:18
Tony36 said:
Excellent write David
February 25th, 2025 08:18
Melanie Loveblind\'s Diary for the first year of Marriage.
Poetic Licence said:
When you really love someone and what it to work, it is unbelievable what some people will put up with, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:57
Poetic Licence said:
When you really love someone and what it to work, it is unbelievable what some people will put up with, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:57
Melanie Loveblind\'s Diary for the first year of Marriage.
sorenbarrett said:
I guess there are limits to everything, somewhere, I think, well there should be, I think, maybe? A fun read
February 25th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
I guess there are limits to everything, somewhere, I think, well there should be, I think, maybe? A fun read
February 25th, 2025 04:01
Mrs Cohen comes to America
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David showing that all can be fine even after absolute devastation has occurred.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David showing that all can be fine even after absolute devastation has occurred.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:12
Mrs Cohen comes to America
Poetic Licence said:
Very profound writing of the feelings of a lady who survived in hell, beautifully expressed
February 24th, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
Very profound writing of the feelings of a lady who survived in hell, beautifully expressed
February 24th, 2025 05:59
Mrs Cohen comes to America
sorenbarrett said:
Where the mind goes and how it works or not when it has suffered too much. My uncle was with General Patton when he entered Germany and they were the first to liberate one of the concentration camps, he aid the he will never forget the smell and the vision of suffering there. A simple write in many ways but so complex below the surface. Very well done
February 24th, 2025 02:56
sorenbarrett said:
Where the mind goes and how it works or not when it has suffered too much. My uncle was with General Patton when he entered Germany and they were the first to liberate one of the concentration camps, he aid the he will never forget the smell and the vision of suffering there. A simple write in many ways but so complex below the surface. Very well done
February 24th, 2025 02:56
Mrs Cohen comes to America
arqios said:
Simple but profound, singular but branches out, tackles without effort the substance of life during challenging seasons. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 24th, 2025 02:09
arqios said:
Simple but profound, singular but branches out, tackles without effort the substance of life during challenging seasons. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 24th, 2025 02:09
God talks to Adrian in a Dream.
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes there was that tower of Babel thing wasn\'t there. I guess that those bad poems of mine have made it to God\'s ear and like a note off key have caught his attention. Shhhhh he said. A fun read David and it has much wisdom as well.
February 23rd, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Ah yes there was that tower of Babel thing wasn\'t there. I guess that those bad poems of mine have made it to God\'s ear and like a note off key have caught his attention. Shhhhh he said. A fun read David and it has much wisdom as well.
February 23rd, 2025 05:21
God talks to Adrian in a Dream.
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read to get Sunday off to a good start, enjoyed
February 23rd, 2025 03:50
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read to get Sunday off to a good start, enjoyed
February 23rd, 2025 03:50
God talks to Adrian in a Dream.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words David.
Andy
February 23rd, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words David.
Andy
February 23rd, 2025 02:53
God talks to Adrian in a Dream.
arqios said:
And be silent 🤫 about that too! The sleeping pill 💊 made sure of that🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 02:20
arqios said:
And be silent 🤫 about that too! The sleeping pill 💊 made sure of that🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 02:20
Amelia
arqios said:
There was a time and a day, a social structure and manner before social decay… I suppose the upper crust folks still keep some modicum of social norms… but I’m not privy to that world… good to see and feel it still exists in poems… 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:17
arqios said:
There was a time and a day, a social structure and manner before social decay… I suppose the upper crust folks still keep some modicum of social norms… but I’m not privy to that world… good to see and feel it still exists in poems… 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:17
Amelia
Poetic Licence said:
That is beautifully written really flows as you read, very enjoyable
February 22nd, 2025 04:14
Poetic Licence said:
That is beautifully written really flows as you read, very enjoyable
February 22nd, 2025 04:14
Amelia
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow and rhyme of this poem that seems in some ways folk legend in style. It has a ghostly feel to it. Haunting. Very nice and a fave
February 22nd, 2025 02:55
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow and rhyme of this poem that seems in some ways folk legend in style. It has a ghostly feel to it. Haunting. Very nice and a fave
February 22nd, 2025 02:55
I can’t breathe
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'m supposedly
A cop
I and my \"colleagues\"
Let me
Be filmed openly
Committing an atrocity
Knowing full well
On social media
It would be posted
And my police buddies and innocent citizens
Would be toasted
In riots
Go figure
David Dorn R.I.P
February 21st, 2025 19:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'m supposedly
A cop
I and my \"colleagues\"
Let me
Be filmed openly
Committing an atrocity
Knowing full well
On social media
It would be posted
And my police buddies and innocent citizens
Would be toasted
In riots
Go figure
David Dorn R.I.P
February 21st, 2025 19:50
I can’t breathe
Cassie58 said:
How terrifying a situation is this. Fear and panic setting in. The scenario plays out in vivid imagery. Well done David.
February 21st, 2025 12:55
Cassie58 said:
How terrifying a situation is this. Fear and panic setting in. The scenario plays out in vivid imagery. Well done David.
February 21st, 2025 12:55
I can’t breathe
Poetic Licence said:
I can feel the panic as i read, great write
February 21st, 2025 05:56
Poetic Licence said:
I can feel the panic as i read, great write
February 21st, 2025 05:56
I can’t breathe
arqios said:
So much explosive emotion in this read. Also very heart rending 🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 05:41
arqios said:
So much explosive emotion in this read. Also very heart rending 🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 05:41
The Glorious Joy of Death.
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and carefully written write which makes you ask yourself so many questions, the last verse in particular is poignant, to end her suffering not the children\'s. Great write
February 20th, 2025 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and carefully written write which makes you ask yourself so many questions, the last verse in particular is poignant, to end her suffering not the children\'s. Great write
February 20th, 2025 04:51
The Glorious Joy of Death.
sorenbarrett said:
A tragedy to one a blessing to another, what one sees as devastating today may turn out to be salvation tomorrow. All things have their own purpose that we in our short time span and from a narrow perspective can not see. Judge not it is said and well so too. Heart felt write David.
February 20th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A tragedy to one a blessing to another, what one sees as devastating today may turn out to be salvation tomorrow. All things have their own purpose that we in our short time span and from a narrow perspective can not see. Judge not it is said and well so too. Heart felt write David.
February 20th, 2025 04:31
The Glorious Joy of Death.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very poignant words David.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Very poignant words David.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:20
The Glorious Joy of Death.
arqios said:
Tragic stories. I was posting up a poem inspired by a mythologicalGreek tale that paralleled this but posted another last minute, leaving the former as a draft. In hindsight I see now that the staggered posting might be to everyone’s benefit. Still reeling from it. 🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 01:51
arqios said:
Tragic stories. I was posting up a poem inspired by a mythologicalGreek tale that paralleled this but posted another last minute, leaving the former as a draft. In hindsight I see now that the staggered posting might be to everyone’s benefit. Still reeling from it. 🙏🏻🕊
February 20th, 2025 01:51
Pathogena the Temptress.
Poetic Licence said:
An intriguing and very enjoyable read, beautifully written and laid out.
February 19th, 2025 08:21
Poetic Licence said:
An intriguing and very enjoyable read, beautifully written and laid out.
February 19th, 2025 08:21
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