Comments received on poems by David Wakeling



Abrim
Goldfinch60 said:

Great words and tale David, we sometimes wonder ourselves who would benefit from our existence.

Andy

September 24th, 2024 01:17

Abrim
Cassie58 said:



September 23rd, 2024 13:28

Abrim
Cassie58 said:

Nicely narrated David. A story well told which flows and rhymes well. Visually pleasing and much enjoyed.

September 23rd, 2024 13:28

Abrim
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 23rd, 2024 08:26

Death Defying Judgement
Cheeky Missy said:

A sufficiently delicate issue, I hate pussy-footing it yet cannot avoid it, in a sense. Very serious with a definite poignancy, thank you for sharing.

September 7th, 2024 17:49

Grandpa Doe
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 7th, 2024 09:12

Grandpa Doe
sorenbarrett said:

A great story and a great metaphor as well. Society has toppled the trees move the hills where they are no longer welcome. We do the same with people that are not desirable. They clutter up our parks and our eye sores. We push them away out of sight to another place

September 7th, 2024 07:39

Grandpa Doe
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful story David, it shows that there are good people around.

Andy

September 7th, 2024 02:05

Death Defying Judgement
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words David, we will all die but some want to chose which way to go, I don\'t though I will just wait.

Andy

September 7th, 2024 01:47

Grandpa Doe
orchidee said:

Good write David.
Or - in some churches, though unsaid through \'politeness\' - \'You can\'t sit here. it\'s my pew!\' You get a scowling look instead.
OK for days of old, I suppose, when people paid for their own pews.

September 7th, 2024 01:01

Death Defying Judgement
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

September 6th, 2024 17:06

Death Defying Judgement
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 6th, 2024 07:16

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