Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
We are the tortured.
Syd said:
I couldn\'t agree more. Great write David.
- Syd
November 11th, 2023 05:59
Syd said:
I couldn\'t agree more. Great write David.
- Syd
November 11th, 2023 05:59
May Barker Richardson
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much for you insightful comments.
November 10th, 2023 15:31
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much for you insightful comments.
November 10th, 2023 15:31
May Barker Richardson
MendedFences27 said:
Sad but powerful. A poem of a soul lost through the circumstances of life.
It tells the story of how such circumstances can drive a person to lose faith in God. Very strong sentiments displayed here. The use of narrative adds a sense of reality. Excellent work. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2023 12:09
MendedFences27 said:
Sad but powerful. A poem of a soul lost through the circumstances of life.
It tells the story of how such circumstances can drive a person to lose faith in God. Very strong sentiments displayed here. The use of narrative adds a sense of reality. Excellent work. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2023 12:09
Lily’s Lament
David Wakeling said:
Certainly and who can argue with an old lady reminiscing.Not me that\'s for sure
November 10th, 2023 02:42
David Wakeling said:
Certainly and who can argue with an old lady reminiscing.Not me that\'s for sure
November 10th, 2023 02:42
Lily’s Lament
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so strong in so many different ways David.
Andy
November 10th, 2023 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so strong in so many different ways David.
Andy
November 10th, 2023 02:13
The Sun did not rise
gray0328 said:
Well done David. I want to pull the covers over my head and hide
November 9th, 2023 08:29
gray0328 said:
Well done David. I want to pull the covers over my head and hide
November 9th, 2023 08:29
There was a time
gray0328 said:
Thankfully that place lives in my memories. Well done David
November 9th, 2023 08:27
gray0328 said:
Thankfully that place lives in my memories. Well done David
November 9th, 2023 08:27
Dad and the creaky window.
gray0328 said:
Thank You David for reminding me how blessed I am to still have my 86yr old father.
November 9th, 2023 08:24
gray0328 said:
Thank You David for reminding me how blessed I am to still have my 86yr old father.
November 9th, 2023 08:24
Dad and the creaky window.
Soman Ragavan said:
Did this poem appear here before ?
November 8th, 2023 21:12
Soman Ragavan said:
Did this poem appear here before ?
November 8th, 2023 21:12
Song for a toddler
Bobby O said:
I salute the various ways you use your pen. You equally adept at noting beauty, spotlighting inequalities, calling out power , and chanting to beckon innocence.
November 7th, 2023 22:46
Bobby O said:
I salute the various ways you use your pen. You equally adept at noting beauty, spotlighting inequalities, calling out power , and chanting to beckon innocence.
November 7th, 2023 22:46
There was a time
Goldfinch60 said:
May that place be there for all of us David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May that place be there for all of us David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:27
The Flight of the Bird boy.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly into that wonderful life that your son may have David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly into that wonderful life that your son may have David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:24
No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 01:54
No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful poetry. ❤️
November 2nd, 2023 02:25
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful poetry. ❤️
November 2nd, 2023 02:25
No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Thomas W Case said:
Truly beautiful with absolute hilarity and vulnerability all tied up in a nice little bow. Too bad she isn\'t around, you could give it to her. Big smiles.
November 2nd, 2023 02:12
Thomas W Case said:
Truly beautiful with absolute hilarity and vulnerability all tied up in a nice little bow. Too bad she isn\'t around, you could give it to her. Big smiles.
November 2nd, 2023 02:12
An important Life.
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Powerful and poignant. You nailed it. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 16:51
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Powerful and poignant. You nailed it. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 16:51
Dear Baby Caterina.
David Wakeling said:
Coming from you that is praise indeed amigo.Thank you
October 30th, 2023 02:40
David Wakeling said:
Coming from you that is praise indeed amigo.Thank you
October 30th, 2023 02:40
Dear Baby Caterina.
Bobby O said:
Wow! That hits hard at several levels. Calling it a masterpiece doesn’t cover it. Soul ripping, my friend.
October 29th, 2023 23:59
Bobby O said:
Wow! That hits hard at several levels. Calling it a masterpiece doesn’t cover it. Soul ripping, my friend.
October 29th, 2023 23:59
The right of the people to keep and bear Arms, shall not be infringed.
Bobby O said:
I just love the juxtaposition of the original statement and your calmly thrust content. If I knew what sardonic wit meant I would pay yiu that compliment.
October 25th, 2023 23:50
Bobby O said:
I just love the juxtaposition of the original statement and your calmly thrust content. If I knew what sardonic wit meant I would pay yiu that compliment.
October 25th, 2023 23:50
The right of the people to keep and bear Arms, shall not be infringed.
Thomas W Case said:
A powerhouse.
October 25th, 2023 17:42
Thomas W Case said:
A powerhouse.
October 25th, 2023 17:42
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