Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The Train to Auschwitz.
patrick reynolds said:
a moving story and a great ending line. we must never forget.
July 15th, 2023 09:38
patrick reynolds said:
a moving story and a great ending line. we must never forget.
July 15th, 2023 09:38
The Supermarket on Forsaken Street.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you very much for your intelligent comments
July 14th, 2023 17:50
David Wakeling said:
Thank you very much for your intelligent comments
July 14th, 2023 17:50
The Supermarket on Forsaken Street.
Bobby O said:
So much here. Not all are real but through those you describe w acuity is the realm of the not real that you’ve met, added the weight and knowledge gained from your interceptions. Real nice piece.
July 14th, 2023 03:41
Bobby O said:
So much here. Not all are real but through those you describe w acuity is the realm of the not real that you’ve met, added the weight and knowledge gained from your interceptions. Real nice piece.
July 14th, 2023 03:41
The Lady Who Liked Mangos.
Parisab said:
Very gentle in its approach but shined bright as a poem-thanks for the write…
July 9th, 2023 12:57
Parisab said:
Very gentle in its approach but shined bright as a poem-thanks for the write…
July 9th, 2023 12:57
The Lady Who Liked Mangos.
Bobby O said:
Enchantment will burn we learn and up side turns thrive on purest concern. Nice piece good read.
“Mangos ? Vere R dese Mangos? I vant to see dese Mangos”. ,,, Tatiana
July 9th, 2023 07:27
Bobby O said:
Enchantment will burn we learn and up side turns thrive on purest concern. Nice piece good read.
“Mangos ? Vere R dese Mangos? I vant to see dese Mangos”. ,,, Tatiana
July 9th, 2023 07:27
The Lady Who Liked Mangos.
imalexx said:
that was beautiful, every word appeared in front of my eyes so brightly
July 9th, 2023 06:37
imalexx said:
that was beautiful, every word appeared in front of my eyes so brightly
July 9th, 2023 06:37
The Days of Milk and Marmalade
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your insight.Much appreciated
July 7th, 2023 17:33
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your insight.Much appreciated
July 7th, 2023 17:33
The Days of Milk and Marmalade
LIZ said:
The last line \"It was a good life I’m sure, I just forgot to live it.\"- we are so busy these days we forget to stay still and enjoy life! Staying present is important! Thank you for sharing!
July 7th, 2023 08:47
LIZ said:
The last line \"It was a good life I’m sure, I just forgot to live it.\"- we are so busy these days we forget to stay still and enjoy life! Staying present is important! Thank you for sharing!
July 7th, 2023 08:47
The Battle and the Baby
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.It all makes sense.Thanks for your insight
July 7th, 2023 01:03
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.It all makes sense.Thanks for your insight
July 7th, 2023 01:03
The Battle and the Baby
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking at new born babies so so uplifting David.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking at new born babies so so uplifting David.
Andy
July 7th, 2023 01:00
An important Life.
Michael Edwards said:
There are few poems posted here which I read all the way through. I know within a couple of lines whether I want to continue. This one I read to the end.
July 5th, 2023 01:11
Michael Edwards said:
There are few poems posted here which I read all the way through. I know within a couple of lines whether I want to continue. This one I read to the end.
July 5th, 2023 01:11
Sandra
David Wakeling said:
Thank you.Sandra was a nurse who was working night shift when two men came in and attacked and brutally murdered her.She was a good friend of mine.Her mother read my poem at the funeral.it was the greatest compliment i have ever had and the saddest time in my life.Thank you for your kind words
July 3rd, 2023 07:24
David Wakeling said:
Thank you.Sandra was a nurse who was working night shift when two men came in and attacked and brutally murdered her.She was a good friend of mine.Her mother read my poem at the funeral.it was the greatest compliment i have ever had and the saddest time in my life.Thank you for your kind words
July 3rd, 2023 07:24
Silver Moon
David Wakeling said:
Thank you. Something to look forward to after a hard life.
July 3rd, 2023 07:19
David Wakeling said:
Thank you. Something to look forward to after a hard life.
July 3rd, 2023 07:19
Sometimes it rains at night.
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.There are two sides to every coin.Thanks for commenting
July 3rd, 2023 07:17
David Wakeling said:
Indeed.There are two sides to every coin.Thanks for commenting
July 3rd, 2023 07:17
Sometimes it rains at night.
Goldfinch60 said:
But in the dark peace comes over us all.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
But in the dark peace comes over us all.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:13
Rest in pieces
2781 said:
As in water face answers to face,so the heart of man to man.
June 26th, 2023 01:58
2781 said:
As in water face answers to face,so the heart of man to man.
June 26th, 2023 01:58
THE FARE.
David Wakeling said:
It costs you one life to live.Death is the fare.
June 20th, 2023 17:15
David Wakeling said:
It costs you one life to live.Death is the fare.
June 20th, 2023 17:15
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