Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
Thomas W Case said:
Great poem. Congrats on the win over my Hawkeyes Saturday.
October 23rd, 2023 00:36
Thomas W Case said:
Great poem. Congrats on the win over my Hawkeyes Saturday.
October 23rd, 2023 00:36
Fallujah Iraq April 2007,
David Wakeling said:
I think the reality of war hits home when you get a letter like that.Anyway thanks for your comments
October 22nd, 2023 20:57
David Wakeling said:
I think the reality of war hits home when you get a letter like that.Anyway thanks for your comments
October 22nd, 2023 20:57
Fallujah Iraq April 2007,
Bobby O said:
Wow ! That hits hard and I’m guessing it may be designed exact fir that intent. You continually drive home emotional points with a savvy injection method. I salute!
October 22nd, 2023 16:36
Bobby O said:
Wow ! That hits hard and I’m guessing it may be designed exact fir that intent. You continually drive home emotional points with a savvy injection method. I salute!
October 22nd, 2023 16:36
We are the stuff that screams are made of.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. So sad and so true. Nice work.
October 19th, 2023 11:49
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. So sad and so true. Nice work.
October 19th, 2023 11:49
We are the stuff that screams are made of.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true David, why can\'t this world see peace is the way to go forward.
Andy
October 19th, 2023 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true David, why can\'t this world see peace is the way to go forward.
Andy
October 19th, 2023 00:20
We are the stuff that screams are made of.
Teddy.15 said:
So damn powerful it makes my heart bleed because it\'s true we will never be rid of evil no matter how much we spread the love, and tit for tat will never solve anything. Superb poetry.
October 18th, 2023 03:05
Teddy.15 said:
So damn powerful it makes my heart bleed because it\'s true we will never be rid of evil no matter how much we spread the love, and tit for tat will never solve anything. Superb poetry.
October 18th, 2023 03:05
This is the hand, This is the will.
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David.
Andy
October 18th, 2023 02:15
This is the hand, This is the will.
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Now that is powerful.
October 18th, 2023 00:26
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Now that is powerful.
October 18th, 2023 00:26
The Care Fairies.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your kind comments.Much appreciated
October 17th, 2023 15:36
David Wakeling said:
Thank you for your kind comments.Much appreciated
October 17th, 2023 15:36
Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
Thomas W Case said:
Great lesson and fantastic story telling to develop the theme. Well done.
October 15th, 2023 15:12
Thomas W Case said:
Great lesson and fantastic story telling to develop the theme. Well done.
October 15th, 2023 15:12
Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
Teddy.15 said:
I have no beliefs in religion but this is magnificent. ❤️ love the last lines and all the imagery.
October 12th, 2023 02:50
Teddy.15 said:
I have no beliefs in religion but this is magnificent. ❤️ love the last lines and all the imagery.
October 12th, 2023 02:50
Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
David Wakeling said:
Thank you bro.I think you hit the snail on the shell.Religion and Faith who can understand it all? But with a little Sympathy empathy and compassion we might just make it through.Thanks for commenting.
October 11th, 2023 13:35
David Wakeling said:
Thank you bro.I think you hit the snail on the shell.Religion and Faith who can understand it all? But with a little Sympathy empathy and compassion we might just make it through.Thanks for commenting.
October 11th, 2023 13:35
Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
Bobby O said:
Wow! It’s a twisted truth one must unravel to see religion and Faith as totally virtuous and should stand without question, a tenet I do not fully subscribe. I love the questions this piece may raise and I also love the phrasing that moves the fable. As always, a very good read.
October 11th, 2023 06:23
Bobby O said:
Wow! It’s a twisted truth one must unravel to see religion and Faith as totally virtuous and should stand without question, a tenet I do not fully subscribe. I love the questions this piece may raise and I also love the phrasing that moves the fable. As always, a very good read.
October 11th, 2023 06:23
The New Commandments.
David Wakeling said:
I have to confess that I like chocolate biscuits.Thanks for reading
October 10th, 2023 01:59
David Wakeling said:
I have to confess that I like chocolate biscuits.Thanks for reading
October 10th, 2023 01:59
The New Commandments.
orchidee said:
Hmm, I never come across these three before!
October 10th, 2023 01:53
orchidee said:
Hmm, I never come across these three before!
October 10th, 2023 01:53
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
David Wakeling said:
Thanks for reading. Much Appreciated.
October 7th, 2023 23:01
David Wakeling said:
Thanks for reading. Much Appreciated.
October 7th, 2023 23:01
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Bobby O said:
To dance in the kitchen, that was the line that brought me sudden hope and I think you for that. Nice write great read , you got it going on.
October 7th, 2023 16:00
Bobby O said:
To dance in the kitchen, that was the line that brought me sudden hope and I think you for that. Nice write great read , you got it going on.
October 7th, 2023 16:00
God must be so proud.
orchidee said:
We state our own beliefs, not trying to \'defend God\' though. He may think it laughable if mere humans are trying to defend Him.
It\'s understandable to question, seeing things as in your poem. And what about Job in the Old Testament?
BlessedbyGod puts it well I feel.
October 5th, 2023 03:05
orchidee said:
We state our own beliefs, not trying to \'defend God\' though. He may think it laughable if mere humans are trying to defend Him.
It\'s understandable to question, seeing things as in your poem. And what about Job in the Old Testament?
BlessedbyGod puts it well I feel.
October 5th, 2023 03:05
God must be so proud.
Goldfinch60 said:
As I have said before \"Where is god!!\"
Andy
October 5th, 2023 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
As I have said before \"Where is god!!\"
Andy
October 5th, 2023 01:15
God must be so proud.
Bobby O said:
It’s good to shake some trees and the validity here is one I want to scream whenever a certain self prophetelizing soul rings my ear with fervor so tilted that I can’t hear a message.
October 5th, 2023 00:53
Bobby O said:
It’s good to shake some trees and the validity here is one I want to scream whenever a certain self prophetelizing soul rings my ear with fervor so tilted that I can’t hear a message.
October 5th, 2023 00:53
God must be so proud.
David Wakeling said:
So God created mankind in his own image, in the image of God he created them; male and female he created them.
Way to go God intelligent design
October 4th, 2023 20:45
David Wakeling said:
So God created mankind in his own image, in the image of God he created them; male and female he created them.
Way to go God intelligent design
October 4th, 2023 20:45
God must be so proud.
BlessedbyGod said:
All those horrible things that happen isn\'t of God, it\'s of Satan and we are living in satans domain, not Hell, but he still controls this world, God cast lucifer from heaven because the devil is so vile and evil,
Yes innocent die, yes bad things happen to good and innocent people, but God is love and all the good in this world, not the evil
October 4th, 2023 15:49
BlessedbyGod said:
All those horrible things that happen isn\'t of God, it\'s of Satan and we are living in satans domain, not Hell, but he still controls this world, God cast lucifer from heaven because the devil is so vile and evil,
Yes innocent die, yes bad things happen to good and innocent people, but God is love and all the good in this world, not the evil
October 4th, 2023 15:49
Bribery and Lies.
AlitaOpal said:
Sounds like the family I grew up in, but I made sure that the family I made was far away from this emotional guilt.. it was traumatic for me... But at some point I had to snap out of the ideas proposed to me by those who call themselves my parents.. I developed boundaries and in turn got their respect through what they called rebelliousness, that which I call breaking the curse..
I really liked this
October 3rd, 2023 22:34
AlitaOpal said:
Sounds like the family I grew up in, but I made sure that the family I made was far away from this emotional guilt.. it was traumatic for me... But at some point I had to snap out of the ideas proposed to me by those who call themselves my parents.. I developed boundaries and in turn got their respect through what they called rebelliousness, that which I call breaking the curse..
I really liked this
October 3rd, 2023 22:34
On The Road to Vexation.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much.Vexation can be a worrying place.I haven\'t been there for years
October 3rd, 2023 22:02
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much.Vexation can be a worrying place.I haven\'t been there for years
October 3rd, 2023 22:02
On The Road to Vexation.
Bobby O said:
Love the pace and its reminiscent tone, reminds of the great classic story writers that draw you in from the very first line. Much enjoyment here my friend.
October 3rd, 2023 21:19
Bobby O said:
Love the pace and its reminiscent tone, reminds of the great classic story writers that draw you in from the very first line. Much enjoyment here my friend.
October 3rd, 2023 21:19
Mrs Karminski’s Ornaments.
2781 said:
I think in 1957 a pregnancy in a new marriage would have been celebrated, not terminated!
Certainly not the norm.
October 2nd, 2023 06:32
2781 said:
I think in 1957 a pregnancy in a new marriage would have been celebrated, not terminated!
Certainly not the norm.
October 2nd, 2023 06:32
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