Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Harold Percy
sorenbarrett said:
Once burnt twice shy they say. A most engaging story that bleeds of more reality than fiction. Such feelings do exist and such people as well. The dilema of making a deathbed promise to one\'s father and keeping it. Very nicely done
March 19th, 2025 03:22
sorenbarrett said:
Once burnt twice shy they say. A most engaging story that bleeds of more reality than fiction. Such feelings do exist and such people as well. The dilema of making a deathbed promise to one\'s father and keeping it. Very nicely done
March 19th, 2025 03:22
Harold Percy
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words from a man who did not have a good life by the sound of it.
Andy
March 19th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words from a man who did not have a good life by the sound of it.
Andy
March 19th, 2025 02:43
The ever-persisting hallucination
Poetic Licence said:
Things come and they, change happens whether we like it or not, sometimes it can be for the better, we hope, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 05:19
Poetic Licence said:
Things come and they, change happens whether we like it or not, sometimes it can be for the better, we hope, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 05:19
The ever-persisting hallucination
sorenbarrett said:
Change is inevitable and for those that like the present it is dark but for those suffering it offers a glimmer of hope. This poem focuses on the first and dark side of change. Very well written and rhymed
March 18th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Change is inevitable and for those that like the present it is dark but for those suffering it offers a glimmer of hope. This poem focuses on the first and dark side of change. Very well written and rhymed
March 18th, 2025 04:15
The ever-persisting hallucination
arqios said:
Our mind, we take along, and often steers our life journey🙏🏻🕊
March 18th, 2025 01:16
arqios said:
Our mind, we take along, and often steers our life journey🙏🏻🕊
March 18th, 2025 01:16
Mr Walton had to wait.
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I have been there I think both in person and on the phone. It is the lack of respect that I hate the worst. A great write that most can identify with.
March 17th, 2025 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I have been there I think both in person and on the phone. It is the lack of respect that I hate the worst. A great write that most can identify with.
March 17th, 2025 06:11
Mr Walton had to wait.
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of waiting in the devils waiting room, one to make you have a ponder, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 06:05
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of waiting in the devils waiting room, one to make you have a ponder, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 06:05
Mr Walton had to wait.
arqios said:
It was quite suddenly that it hit me. One of many views presented itself, the Custodian had a hood and scythe in hand; not my choice, but. Just leapt at me last moment there 🙏🏻🕊️
March 17th, 2025 02:05
arqios said:
It was quite suddenly that it hit me. One of many views presented itself, the Custodian had a hood and scythe in hand; not my choice, but. Just leapt at me last moment there 🙏🏻🕊️
March 17th, 2025 02:05
Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
sorenbarrett said:
Each stanza an emotion and emotions come in stanzas, chapters and sometimes in just single words. The shift as rapidly as the stanzas in a poem. A wonderful write with imagery that felt so personal and intimate yet familiar. Very nicely done David
March 16th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Each stanza an emotion and emotions come in stanzas, chapters and sometimes in just single words. The shift as rapidly as the stanzas in a poem. A wonderful write with imagery that felt so personal and intimate yet familiar. Very nicely done David
March 16th, 2025 06:59
Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
Poetic Licence said:
Amongst all the fear,sadness, loss and regret in life there are moments to be happy and thankful about, nicely expressed and written
March 16th, 2025 05:23
Poetic Licence said:
Amongst all the fear,sadness, loss and regret in life there are moments to be happy and thankful about, nicely expressed and written
March 16th, 2025 05:23
Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
arqios said:
We navigate all terrain and clime to where we’re at everyday through the length and breadth of our lifespan. It makes for a well textured canvas🙏🏻🕊
March 16th, 2025 02:42
arqios said:
We navigate all terrain and clime to where we’re at everyday through the length and breadth of our lifespan. It makes for a well textured canvas🙏🏻🕊
March 16th, 2025 02:42
Vera and Harold.
arqios said:
Reminds me of Nan and Gramps - very companionable but lacking any romantic gestures.🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:36
arqios said:
Reminds me of Nan and Gramps - very companionable but lacking any romantic gestures.🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:36
Vera and Harold.
sorenbarrett said:
Refreshing and most brave David to hear a different definition of the overused term love. There are a million poems about it many sticky and gooey some sentimental others heroic but few if any deal with it in this manner. That is what poetry is, isn\'t it presenting the mundane in novel ways? This deserves a fave
March 15th, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Refreshing and most brave David to hear a different definition of the overused term love. There are a million poems about it many sticky and gooey some sentimental others heroic but few if any deal with it in this manner. That is what poetry is, isn\'t it presenting the mundane in novel ways? This deserves a fave
March 15th, 2025 05:31
Vera and Harold.
Poetic Licence said:
There are many variations of love, but true love will last through anything, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
There are many variations of love, but true love will last through anything, enjoyed the read
March 15th, 2025 05:25
Vera and Harold.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is different in many ways DAvid but true love lasts forever.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is different in many ways DAvid but true love lasts forever.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:20
Wendy meets Blind Brad at the Bus stop.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, there are many of these people around.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, there are many of these people around.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:08
Wendy meets Blind Brad at the Bus stop.
orchidee said:
Good write David. Someone spoke to me at a bus stop. They said \'This bus stop has been out of use for some time\'. I had been waiting there for 5 years! LOL.
March 14th, 2025 12:21
orchidee said:
Good write David. Someone spoke to me at a bus stop. They said \'This bus stop has been out of use for some time\'. I had been waiting there for 5 years! LOL.
March 14th, 2025 12:21
Wendy meets Blind Brad at the Bus stop.
Poetic Licence said:
I think we have all met people like that, to wrapped up in their own world they cannot see what is right in front of them, enjoyed the read
March 14th, 2025 09:16
Poetic Licence said:
I think we have all met people like that, to wrapped up in their own world they cannot see what is right in front of them, enjoyed the read
March 14th, 2025 09:16
Wendy meets Blind Brad at the Bus stop.
sorenbarrett said:
I have met people like this and further she seems a metaphor for all the information asked and gleaned from vendors, internet and sold to data brokers. A fun read David
March 14th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
I have met people like this and further she seems a metaphor for all the information asked and gleaned from vendors, internet and sold to data brokers. A fun read David
March 14th, 2025 03:56
Wendy meets Blind Brad at the Bus stop.
arqios said:
Easy to forget the blind part, the sunnies don’t always give it away, and neither do the dogs 🙏🏻🕊️
March 14th, 2025 03:03
arqios said:
Easy to forget the blind part, the sunnies don’t always give it away, and neither do the dogs 🙏🏻🕊️
March 14th, 2025 03:03
Deirdre
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching personal write of love and loss, beautifully expressed in an emotional write
March 13th, 2025 06:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching personal write of love and loss, beautifully expressed in an emotional write
March 13th, 2025 06:38
Deirdre
arqios said:
Oh my… so much like my journey… minus the cancer, thus far. Liked and Faved 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:30
arqios said:
Oh my… so much like my journey… minus the cancer, thus far. Liked and Faved 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:30
Deirdre
sorenbarrett said:
A very personal poem of love and loss and pain. A beautiful expression of human emotion
March 13th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
A very personal poem of love and loss and pain. A beautiful expression of human emotion
March 13th, 2025 03:41
Alone in the sea at night.
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of tiredness and disillusionment in life, feeling of just had enough with it all, nicely written and expressed
March 12th, 2025 07:53
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of tiredness and disillusionment in life, feeling of just had enough with it all, nicely written and expressed
March 12th, 2025 07:53
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