Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
sorenbarrett said:
The pheonix baptized in fire ashes to ashes and dust to dust then resurection. A great write
October 10th, 2024 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
The pheonix baptized in fire ashes to ashes and dust to dust then resurection. A great write
October 10th, 2024 20:25
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
Thomas W Case said:
This is such a well-done magical journey.
October 10th, 2024 17:42
Thomas W Case said:
This is such a well-done magical journey.
October 10th, 2024 17:42
Empathy, Sympathy and Compassion
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful and meaningful write David.
Andy
October 7th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful and meaningful write David.
Andy
October 7th, 2024 01:18
Empathy, Sympathy and Compassion
sorenbarrett said:
A parable with inset menings. Nicely written it keeps the reader engagued and wanting more.
October 6th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A parable with inset menings. Nicely written it keeps the reader engagued and wanting more.
October 6th, 2024 05:50
Emily goes for a walk.
Lil said:
This is like a puzzle, once you build it. It comes tumbling/ breaking down or apart, but there\'s a perk. You can always re-pair it. Wonderful work!!!
October 5th, 2024 22:32
Lil said:
This is like a puzzle, once you build it. It comes tumbling/ breaking down or apart, but there\'s a perk. You can always re-pair it. Wonderful work!!!
October 5th, 2024 22:32
Emily goes for a walk.
sorenbarrett said:
As we take the walk through the maze of life we may loose our memory in its turns and find ourselves down a blind alley. I love how the symbolic use of flowers indicates the direction we are headed and the softness or the guide being gentle and kind whether leading us to past memories of love or present of death. Nicely done
October 5th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
As we take the walk through the maze of life we may loose our memory in its turns and find ourselves down a blind alley. I love how the symbolic use of flowers indicates the direction we are headed and the softness or the guide being gentle and kind whether leading us to past memories of love or present of death. Nicely done
October 5th, 2024 06:06
Same Sky Different Rain.
Dan Williams said:
That\'s not a knife., THIS is a knife. I like it.
October 5th, 2024 00:10
Dan Williams said:
That\'s not a knife., THIS is a knife. I like it.
October 5th, 2024 00:10
Same Sky Different Rain.
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a beautiful picture in the mind and I picture dream in an aboriginal sense and the comming to life of trees and rocks. Very nicely done and deserves more reads.
October 4th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a beautiful picture in the mind and I picture dream in an aboriginal sense and the comming to life of trees and rocks. Very nicely done and deserves more reads.
October 4th, 2024 04:59
Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful!! Many of us rebel against our past and its origins. A great story with a moral. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2024 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful!! Many of us rebel against our past and its origins. A great story with a moral. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2024 04:39
Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong and understandable words David. I can understand this in that I now believe that organised religion is a farce.
Andy
October 3rd, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong and understandable words David. I can understand this in that I now believe that organised religion is a farce.
Andy
October 3rd, 2024 01:13
The kindness of the lady.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem David, took me to a place of wonder.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem David, took me to a place of wonder.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:40
At the Altar of Eros.
sorenbarrett said:
This a tasty sandwich fabled beginning and end with story in the center. Loved the joint elements of Greek and Egyptian mythology remnicent of the Bem Bem bird and cosmic egg. Well constructed and nicely written
September 29th, 2024 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
This a tasty sandwich fabled beginning and end with story in the center. Loved the joint elements of Greek and Egyptian mythology remnicent of the Bem Bem bird and cosmic egg. Well constructed and nicely written
September 29th, 2024 07:09
An important Life.
sorenbarrett said:
It is all in a point of view. We can choose how we see things. A very good lesson to learn. Nicely done.
September 28th, 2024 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is all in a point of view. We can choose how we see things. A very good lesson to learn. Nicely done.
September 28th, 2024 19:04
An important Life.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, thise nights can be wondrous.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, thise nights can be wondrous.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:28
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
Cassie58 said:
How reassured that child must have been. She must have felt that security all around her. Nicely conveyed lines. Enjoyed the flow, the rhyme and the imagery. Well done David.
September 27th, 2024 19:33
Cassie58 said:
How reassured that child must have been. She must have felt that security all around her. Nicely conveyed lines. Enjoyed the flow, the rhyme and the imagery. Well done David.
September 27th, 2024 19:33
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