Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
DUSK.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, as darkness settles all can relax.
Andy
April 14th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, as darkness settles all can relax.
Andy
April 14th, 2025 01:50
DUSK.
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This piece to me is a mere delight to read. It so vividly speaks in a language of the birds. I always just embrace the times when all the little ones come out again to bring so many offerings to us. Saw these two red chested birds they are quite large yesterday. I was honored they picked one of the trees in my garden to rest with the trees.
April 14th, 2025 01:01
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This piece to me is a mere delight to read. It so vividly speaks in a language of the birds. I always just embrace the times when all the little ones come out again to bring so many offerings to us. Saw these two red chested birds they are quite large yesterday. I was honored they picked one of the trees in my garden to rest with the trees.
April 14th, 2025 01:01
DUSK.
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful imagery with a deeper than first read meaning, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
April 13th, 2025 04:54
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful imagery with a deeper than first read meaning, beautifully written, enjoyed the read
April 13th, 2025 04:54
DUSK.
sorenbarrett said:
David this is one of those rare poems that is both beautiful and deep in its meaning. A great use of image and metaphor it is most somber and so can be life.
April 13th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
David this is one of those rare poems that is both beautiful and deep in its meaning. A great use of image and metaphor it is most somber and so can be life.
April 13th, 2025 04:34
DUSK.
arqios said:
Now give me a poem of twilight and dusk, more so one as powerfully imaged as this; then ferment its grain freed from their husk🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2025 03:07
arqios said:
Now give me a poem of twilight and dusk, more so one as powerfully imaged as this; then ferment its grain freed from their husk🙏🏻🕊️
April 13th, 2025 03:07
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
Goldfinch60 said:
That lady can be there for us all David.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That lady can be there for us all David.
Andy
April 13th, 2025 02:31
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
Mourgana of the Fey said:
For me this poem speaks of its own ways of connecting dream and reality. It is almost like a rite of its own. It is a mystery to me weather or not you are writing about the fairytales of the firebird or perhaps this is something the muses wrote. I enjoyed the read!
April 12th, 2025 05:45
Mourgana of the Fey said:
For me this poem speaks of its own ways of connecting dream and reality. It is almost like a rite of its own. It is a mystery to me weather or not you are writing about the fairytales of the firebird or perhaps this is something the muses wrote. I enjoyed the read!
April 12th, 2025 05:45
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
arqios said:
To be involved with people of character and unique fire makes you feel so alive🙏🏻🕊
April 12th, 2025 05:30
arqios said:
To be involved with people of character and unique fire makes you feel so alive🙏🏻🕊
April 12th, 2025 05:30
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write and read, you just float along as you read, it flows so well, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 04:49
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write and read, you just float along as you read, it flows so well, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 04:49
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
sorenbarrett said:
I love this unique rhyme scheme that goes so well with this poem. The meter too is most helpful and carries the reader along on a drifting journey. Its mystical theme also sets the mood. Very nicely done David
April 12th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love this unique rhyme scheme that goes so well with this poem. The meter too is most helpful and carries the reader along on a drifting journey. Its mystical theme also sets the mood. Very nicely done David
April 12th, 2025 04:30
AWE.
arqios said:
That rope scene was quite effective there. A very gripping read 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:26
arqios said:
That rope scene was quite effective there. A very gripping read 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:26
AWE.
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write write with many meanings and wonderful lines, merits more than one read to absorb it all, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 05:04
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write write with many meanings and wonderful lines, merits more than one read to absorb it all, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 05:04
AWE.
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem David I loved several lines in this poem but my favorite was (Turn the log, it\'s warmth lies hidden,) such a wonderful metaphor. I think that the warmth of this poem lies hidden as well and I had to reread it to feel that wonderful fire. A fave
April 11th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem David I loved several lines in this poem but my favorite was (Turn the log, it\'s warmth lies hidden,) such a wonderful metaphor. I think that the warmth of this poem lies hidden as well and I had to reread it to feel that wonderful fire. A fave
April 11th, 2025 04:15
AWE.
Mourgana of the Fey said:
From quietude everything can awaken. I like this poem that tells a strong but also frail tale. This piece gives food for thought. In stead of analysing it I will just let the words wash over me.
April 11th, 2025 03:58
Mourgana of the Fey said:
From quietude everything can awaken. I like this poem that tells a strong but also frail tale. This piece gives food for thought. In stead of analysing it I will just let the words wash over me.
April 11th, 2025 03:58
Faith
dimpy said:
i think this poem is about keeping the faith... nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 11:33
dimpy said:
i think this poem is about keeping the faith... nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 11:33
Faith
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of each of us in own beliefs interpret and believe in what we see and hear the way we choose to, which is not always the truth.enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 04:21
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of each of us in own beliefs interpret and believe in what we see and hear the way we choose to, which is not always the truth.enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 04:21
Faith
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reminded me of an episode of The Twilight Zone. There is a wonderful line in this write (Some lit bright candles so the blind could see,) In this poem I see a metaphor of loss of natural truth, knowledge or what ever you wish to label it. The candles symbolizing man made truth is given for the blind to see. In our religious beliefs we associate our own power or prayer with natural occurrences the rising of the sun. Although this may not be the original intent of the poem it comes through to me this way.
April 10th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reminded me of an episode of The Twilight Zone. There is a wonderful line in this write (Some lit bright candles so the blind could see,) In this poem I see a metaphor of loss of natural truth, knowledge or what ever you wish to label it. The candles symbolizing man made truth is given for the blind to see. In our religious beliefs we associate our own power or prayer with natural occurrences the rising of the sun. Although this may not be the original intent of the poem it comes through to me this way.
April 10th, 2025 04:11
SECLUSION
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write I feel on the slightly darker side of life, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 02:35
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write I feel on the slightly darker side of life, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 02:35
August is accused of murdering a child.
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
While just clicking on one of your poems not knowing what I was up or in for strangely enough just today I made a similar poem. Not that the two poems are the same but they could connect. My poem is written from a very different personal perspective. YES I know this veiled figure or veiled lady. I have had encounters with this lady myself. Hence the topics I will not start to make any assumptions on this poem just letting the voices within the voids wash over like waves or winds. You have expressed much here in and between these lines. Thanks for sharing!
R
April 9th, 2025 01:28
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
While just clicking on one of your poems not knowing what I was up or in for strangely enough just today I made a similar poem. Not that the two poems are the same but they could connect. My poem is written from a very different personal perspective. YES I know this veiled figure or veiled lady. I have had encounters with this lady myself. Hence the topics I will not start to make any assumptions on this poem just letting the voices within the voids wash over like waves or winds. You have expressed much here in and between these lines. Thanks for sharing!
R
April 9th, 2025 01:28
SECLUSION
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
From start to finish I was glued to my screen. Each stanza giving new ways into interweaving natural images together with human images. All varieties of tone season life lines family lines etc. And then again how interwoven is all of this as per today. How much nature do we have left within us as humans. A world of tranquil weather suits the summary well. You have a gifted pen! Much enjoyed the read. Greetings and blessings
R
April 9th, 2025 01:23
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
From start to finish I was glued to my screen. Each stanza giving new ways into interweaving natural images together with human images. All varieties of tone season life lines family lines etc. And then again how interwoven is all of this as per today. How much nature do we have left within us as humans. A world of tranquil weather suits the summary well. You have a gifted pen! Much enjoyed the read. Greetings and blessings
R
April 9th, 2025 01:23
SECLUSION
arqios said:
For a period in life I’ve lived through those summers. Sometimes glad it’s now outgrown 🙏🏻🕊
April 8th, 2025 20:59
arqios said:
For a period in life I’ve lived through those summers. Sometimes glad it’s now outgrown 🙏🏻🕊
April 8th, 2025 20:59
SECLUSION
sorenbarrett said:
One large metaphor broken into several component pieces this poem is quite deep in its meaning that upon first reading is obscure and rather cryptic. Sad and hopeless in its initial tone it speaks of alienation. This poem seems to end in darkness. Very well written
April 8th, 2025 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
One large metaphor broken into several component pieces this poem is quite deep in its meaning that upon first reading is obscure and rather cryptic. Sad and hopeless in its initial tone it speaks of alienation. This poem seems to end in darkness. Very well written
April 8th, 2025 19:35
August is accused of murdering a child.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Is this just an illusion of a dance? / Just two shadows flickering together.\" Powerful poem with quite a grabbing title. Brilliant, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
March 28th, 2025 07:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Is this just an illusion of a dance? / Just two shadows flickering together.\" Powerful poem with quite a grabbing title. Brilliant, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
March 28th, 2025 07:31
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