Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The House of Tears.
2781 said:
For that is the end of all men; and the living will lay it to his heart.
November 12th, 2024 09:22
2781 said:
For that is the end of all men; and the living will lay it to his heart.
November 12th, 2024 09:22
The House of Tears.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Excellent! Rings beautifully and has an air of truth about it. Welcome to the house of tears indeed! Bravo! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 07:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Excellent! Rings beautifully and has an air of truth about it. Welcome to the house of tears indeed! Bravo! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 07:05
The Harsh Light of Day.
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go somehow, sometime David.
Andy
November 11th, 2024 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go somehow, sometime David.
Andy
November 11th, 2024 02:28
The Harsh Light of Day.
arqios said:
That’s quite a way to word the feelings and notions on the subject! 👍🏻
November 10th, 2024 17:03
arqios said:
That’s quite a way to word the feelings and notions on the subject! 👍🏻
November 10th, 2024 17:03
The Harsh Light of Day.
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting poem and the point made is that it is better to fight for what one has and to give up and die. Wonderfully stated.
November 10th, 2024 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
The most interesting poem and the point made is that it is better to fight for what one has and to give up and die. Wonderfully stated.
November 10th, 2024 12:02
Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Lorenz said:
Kolo is a traditional serbian dance !
November 10th, 2024 09:26
Lorenz said:
Kolo is a traditional serbian dance !
November 10th, 2024 09:26
The SLAYING.
Dan Williams said:
Amen. \"Cold seizing hands fondle them, imitating security,\" leads into a well scripted summary of this world. Sad enough to be true. Nice.
November 10th, 2024 01:19
Dan Williams said:
Amen. \"Cold seizing hands fondle them, imitating security,\" leads into a well scripted summary of this world. Sad enough to be true. Nice.
November 10th, 2024 01:19
Crying out load
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poem David. Loved each of the scenes you painted with your words. Your closing line encapsulates the entire poem. Just great work. - Phil A
November 9th, 2024 21:42
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poem David. Loved each of the scenes you painted with your words. Your closing line encapsulates the entire poem. Just great work. - Phil A
November 9th, 2024 21:42
Crying out load
sorenbarrett said:
A dark right and commentary on the state of our society. Well expressed and with a deep sense of sadness.
November 9th, 2024 15:35
sorenbarrett said:
A dark right and commentary on the state of our society. Well expressed and with a deep sense of sadness.
November 9th, 2024 15:35
The SLAYING.
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go there in the end David, some more peacefully than others.
Andy
November 9th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all go there in the end David, some more peacefully than others.
Andy
November 9th, 2024 02:48
The SLAYING.
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp raw and savage it’s sparkles with darkness. My favorite part is the last few lines that send a shiver down your spine.
November 8th, 2024 17:49
sorenbarrett said:
Sharp raw and savage it’s sparkles with darkness. My favorite part is the last few lines that send a shiver down your spine.
November 8th, 2024 17:49
The dark days
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words David and that last verse could be me.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words David and that last verse could be me.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:41
The dark days
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. There are some among us that can hear the violins, I can fortunately can. Thanks for this.
November 8th, 2024 01:31
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. There are some among us that can hear the violins, I can fortunately can. Thanks for this.
November 8th, 2024 01:31
The dark days
arqios said:
Evolutionary poetry and survival of the wittiest, perhaps… and the thoughts begin to randomise… my fault, not yours!
November 7th, 2024 06:50
arqios said:
Evolutionary poetry and survival of the wittiest, perhaps… and the thoughts begin to randomise… my fault, not yours!
November 7th, 2024 06:50
The dark days
sorenbarrett said:
Creationism vs evolution the old science of faith issue. Nicely stated in great verse and clever wording. Nicely done.
November 7th, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Creationism vs evolution the old science of faith issue. Nicely stated in great verse and clever wording. Nicely done.
November 7th, 2024 03:46
The dark days
orchidee said:
I did see someone doing a chimp impression, but it didn\'t change my mind - I don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
November 7th, 2024 03:15
orchidee said:
I did see someone doing a chimp impression, but it didn\'t change my mind - I don\'t believe we evolved from apes.
November 7th, 2024 03:15
The Cat’s Tale.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, with age our minds still think we can do the things we used to but nowadays it is just wishful thinking David.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, with age our minds still think we can do the things we used to but nowadays it is just wishful thinking David.
Andy
November 7th, 2024 02:25
The Cat’s Tale.
arqios said:
On the human side of things it’s hard to explain but the cat’s tale covered the most salient bases.
November 6th, 2024 06:56
arqios said:
On the human side of things it’s hard to explain but the cat’s tale covered the most salient bases.
November 6th, 2024 06:56
The Cat’s Tale.
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor of age but even as personification alone it holds its own. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor of age but even as personification alone it holds its own. Lovely
November 6th, 2024 06:23
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