Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Wisdom revisited.
2781 said:
There is no greater joy than to know my reality.
November 18th, 2023 07:39
2781 said:
There is no greater joy than to know my reality.
November 18th, 2023 07:39
When a love one passes.
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David. My wife of nearly forty years died and one thing that I did was remember the love that she had left behind for me.
Andy
November 18th, 2023 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David. My wife of nearly forty years died and one thing that I did was remember the love that she had left behind for me.
Andy
November 18th, 2023 02:24
When a love one passes.
Tom Dylan said:
A very powerful poem. Striking imagery.
November 17th, 2023 03:05
Tom Dylan said:
A very powerful poem. Striking imagery.
November 17th, 2023 03:05
Lily’s Lament
Lil said:
OK first of all I love this. Second of all my name is Lily and it is spelled the same way. Third all Love can be strong and hurtful. And I love how you just make it come out so strong.
November 12th, 2023 14:51
Lil said:
OK first of all I love this. Second of all my name is Lily and it is spelled the same way. Third all Love can be strong and hurtful. And I love how you just make it come out so strong.
November 12th, 2023 14:51
The Sermon on the Hill.
David Wakeling said:
We are all Mad. But one man\'s \"mad\" is another man\'s \"wahoo\". Thanks for commenting
November 12th, 2023 14:47
David Wakeling said:
We are all Mad. But one man\'s \"mad\" is another man\'s \"wahoo\". Thanks for commenting
November 12th, 2023 14:47
The Sermon on the Hill.
orchidee said:
It\'s the madness that the world\'s come to. Not that it suddenly become \'mad\'. It\'s been so since mankind began to be.
November 12th, 2023 02:39
orchidee said:
It\'s the madness that the world\'s come to. Not that it suddenly become \'mad\'. It\'s been so since mankind began to be.
November 12th, 2023 02:39
We are the tortured.
Syd said:
I couldn\'t agree more. Great write David.
- Syd
November 11th, 2023 05:59
Syd said:
I couldn\'t agree more. Great write David.
- Syd
November 11th, 2023 05:59
May Barker Richardson
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much for you insightful comments.
November 10th, 2023 15:31
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much for you insightful comments.
November 10th, 2023 15:31
May Barker Richardson
MendedFences27 said:
Sad but powerful. A poem of a soul lost through the circumstances of life.
It tells the story of how such circumstances can drive a person to lose faith in God. Very strong sentiments displayed here. The use of narrative adds a sense of reality. Excellent work. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2023 12:09
MendedFences27 said:
Sad but powerful. A poem of a soul lost through the circumstances of life.
It tells the story of how such circumstances can drive a person to lose faith in God. Very strong sentiments displayed here. The use of narrative adds a sense of reality. Excellent work. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2023 12:09
Lily’s Lament
David Wakeling said:
Certainly and who can argue with an old lady reminiscing.Not me that\'s for sure
November 10th, 2023 02:42
David Wakeling said:
Certainly and who can argue with an old lady reminiscing.Not me that\'s for sure
November 10th, 2023 02:42
Lily’s Lament
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so strong in so many different ways David.
Andy
November 10th, 2023 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so strong in so many different ways David.
Andy
November 10th, 2023 02:13
The Sun did not rise
gray0328 said:
Well done David. I want to pull the covers over my head and hide
November 9th, 2023 08:29
gray0328 said:
Well done David. I want to pull the covers over my head and hide
November 9th, 2023 08:29
There was a time
gray0328 said:
Thankfully that place lives in my memories. Well done David
November 9th, 2023 08:27
gray0328 said:
Thankfully that place lives in my memories. Well done David
November 9th, 2023 08:27
Dad and the creaky window.
gray0328 said:
Thank You David for reminding me how blessed I am to still have my 86yr old father.
November 9th, 2023 08:24
gray0328 said:
Thank You David for reminding me how blessed I am to still have my 86yr old father.
November 9th, 2023 08:24
Dad and the creaky window.
Soman Ragavan said:
Did this poem appear here before ?
November 8th, 2023 21:12
Soman Ragavan said:
Did this poem appear here before ?
November 8th, 2023 21:12
Song for a toddler
Bobby O said:
I salute the various ways you use your pen. You equally adept at noting beauty, spotlighting inequalities, calling out power , and chanting to beckon innocence.
November 7th, 2023 22:46
Bobby O said:
I salute the various ways you use your pen. You equally adept at noting beauty, spotlighting inequalities, calling out power , and chanting to beckon innocence.
November 7th, 2023 22:46
There was a time
Goldfinch60 said:
May that place be there for all of us David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May that place be there for all of us David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:27
The Flight of the Bird boy.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly into that wonderful life that your son may have David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Fly into that wonderful life that your son may have David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 02:24
No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words David.
Andy
November 5th, 2023 01:54
No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful poetry. ❤️
November 2nd, 2023 02:25
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful poetry. ❤️
November 2nd, 2023 02:25
No animals were injured in the making of this poem.
Thomas W Case said:
Truly beautiful with absolute hilarity and vulnerability all tied up in a nice little bow. Too bad she isn\'t around, you could give it to her. Big smiles.
November 2nd, 2023 02:12
Thomas W Case said:
Truly beautiful with absolute hilarity and vulnerability all tied up in a nice little bow. Too bad she isn\'t around, you could give it to her. Big smiles.
November 2nd, 2023 02:12
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