Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Fear and Pain
sorenbarrett said:
I love the contrast between the first and last stanza, constant fear and fear not. I have lived in the first stanza and now live in the last. A wonderful write
February 9th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
I love the contrast between the first and last stanza, constant fear and fear not. I have lived in the first stanza and now live in the last. A wonderful write
February 9th, 2025 04:57
Fear and Pain
arqios said:
Now this one just has glowing semaphores toward the Like/Fave button for some reason which I am sure will dawn upon my articulative faculties in its season. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 9th, 2025 03:58
arqios said:
Now this one just has glowing semaphores toward the Like/Fave button for some reason which I am sure will dawn upon my articulative faculties in its season. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 9th, 2025 03:58
Fear and Pain
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. There can be fear and pain outside the window, but there can also be sunlight, contentment and warmth. Have a good Sunday David.
February 9th, 2025 03:24
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. There can be fear and pain outside the window, but there can also be sunlight, contentment and warmth. Have a good Sunday David.
February 9th, 2025 03:24
Fear and Pain
Goldfinch60 said:
Every day I get up I know it is going to be a good day David.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Every day I get up I know it is going to be a good day David.
Andy
February 9th, 2025 02:28
The Rainbow Trains.
Poetic Licence said:
All the choices we have and have to make on our journey, but the one thing we cannot change is death. A cleverly crafted and well written piece, really enjoyed
February 8th, 2025 08:05
Poetic Licence said:
All the choices we have and have to make on our journey, but the one thing we cannot change is death. A cleverly crafted and well written piece, really enjoyed
February 8th, 2025 08:05
The Rainbow Trains.
arqios said:
Oh my… as it progressed it got more intricate and metaphorical. You wield a mighty quill! 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:40
arqios said:
Oh my… as it progressed it got more intricate and metaphorical. You wield a mighty quill! 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:40
The Rainbow Trains.
sorenbarrett said:
A rrainbow of trains and choices to make but from the last train their is no choice. Nice David ebjoyed it
February 8th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A rrainbow of trains and choices to make but from the last train their is no choice. Nice David ebjoyed it
February 8th, 2025 04:21
The Lamb and the Tiger.
arqios said:
And the chicken wing, pawn of the lamb.. laced with spider 🕷 venom… people can be pushed to a point and all is fair in love and war…
February 7th, 2025 06:31
arqios said:
And the chicken wing, pawn of the lamb.. laced with spider 🕷 venom… people can be pushed to a point and all is fair in love and war…
February 7th, 2025 06:31
Joseph and the last orange.
Simurgh said:
Ethical and moral issues also reflected in this poem. Enjoyable read!
February 7th, 2025 06:23
Simurgh said:
Ethical and moral issues also reflected in this poem. Enjoyable read!
February 7th, 2025 06:23
Joseph and the last orange.
Simurgh said:
Indeed, what a price to pay for the orange! It was sometimes power controlling the justice and sometimes hard reality.
This poem is a splendid masterpiece of metaphors! ✨🌹🌹
I enjoyed reading the journey of your poems, they are always ironic and beautiful in its own unmatched way.
February 7th, 2025 06:19
Simurgh said:
Indeed, what a price to pay for the orange! It was sometimes power controlling the justice and sometimes hard reality.
This poem is a splendid masterpiece of metaphors! ✨🌹🌹
I enjoyed reading the journey of your poems, they are always ironic and beautiful in its own unmatched way.
February 7th, 2025 06:19
The Lamb and the Tiger.
Poetic Licence said:
Someone who thinks they have complete power having it turned on them, a very good and strong moral in this writing and i enjoyed the read ( rat poison for flavour).
February 7th, 2025 04:50
Poetic Licence said:
Someone who thinks they have complete power having it turned on them, a very good and strong moral in this writing and i enjoyed the read ( rat poison for flavour).
February 7th, 2025 04:50
The Lamb and the Tiger.
sorenbarrett said:
A story about choice power over self and others. very nicely written with careful word choice and great images to paint the story. In the end there is a moral and meaning to the story. Well done my friend
February 7th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A story about choice power over self and others. very nicely written with careful word choice and great images to paint the story. In the end there is a moral and meaning to the story. Well done my friend
February 7th, 2025 04:32
My stupid Mum.
Goldfinch60 said:
But in you she has brought a good man David.
Andy
February 7th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
But in you she has brought a good man David.
Andy
February 7th, 2025 02:46
My stupid Mum.
Cassie58 said:
Kids can be such a pain in the backside. Thankfully they grow up and learn to be more caring and sensitive towards their parents. This was the kid in you. Your mum was a diamond from what I can see. Enjoyed your words and thinking here David. Have a good day.
February 6th, 2025 08:55
Cassie58 said:
Kids can be such a pain in the backside. Thankfully they grow up and learn to be more caring and sensitive towards their parents. This was the kid in you. Your mum was a diamond from what I can see. Enjoyed your words and thinking here David. Have a good day.
February 6th, 2025 08:55
My stupid Mum.
Poetic Licence said:
Taking you on the journey how when young you take everything for granted and feel a lot of what your parents do is pointless and stupid, arriving into maturity realising they were all acts of love, compassion and care. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 05:41
Poetic Licence said:
Taking you on the journey how when young you take everything for granted and feel a lot of what your parents do is pointless and stupid, arriving into maturity realising they were all acts of love, compassion and care. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 05:41
My stupid Mum.
sorenbarrett said:
Message recieved. Such a wonderful way to present it. I\'ve been a kid, had kids and watched kids. We all are kids in one way or anothe and still growing. Growing out of ignorance hopefully and into understanding. Growing in empathy and understanding of love. A beautiful write
February 6th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Message recieved. Such a wonderful way to present it. I\'ve been a kid, had kids and watched kids. We all are kids in one way or anothe and still growing. Growing out of ignorance hopefully and into understanding. Growing in empathy and understanding of love. A beautiful write
February 6th, 2025 03:50
My stupid Mum.
arqios said:
Walking in someone else’s shoes for a bit? Doesn’t really sound like confessional poetry per se… a tad more like narrating from someone else’s perspective. Perhaps I’m wrong but reminds me of that “yeah-nah” music video from several years ago now. 🙏🏻🕊
February 6th, 2025 02:44
arqios said:
Walking in someone else’s shoes for a bit? Doesn’t really sound like confessional poetry per se… a tad more like narrating from someone else’s perspective. Perhaps I’m wrong but reminds me of that “yeah-nah” music video from several years ago now. 🙏🏻🕊
February 6th, 2025 02:44
Joseph and the last orange.
Cassie58 said:
What a price to pay for an orange. Sort of rough justice or cruel karma. Life is harsh isn’t it? A good read David. Enjoyed with my late night cuppa.
February 5th, 2025 17:53
Cassie58 said:
What a price to pay for an orange. Sort of rough justice or cruel karma. Life is harsh isn’t it? A good read David. Enjoyed with my late night cuppa.
February 5th, 2025 17:53
Joseph and the last orange.
arqios said:
Another one that would’ve been transported to the penal colony, back in the day. “Alms. Alms. Spare me a piece of bread. Spare me your mercy.”
February 5th, 2025 06:34
arqios said:
Another one that would’ve been transported to the penal colony, back in the day. “Alms. Alms. Spare me a piece of bread. Spare me your mercy.”
February 5th, 2025 06:34
Joseph and the last orange.
Poetic Licence said:
Made me think this one because it is not to much to just want an orange, but then it is the way you go about that and they way it is received. Social as well as moral issues made an interesting and enjoyable read.
February 5th, 2025 04:56
Poetic Licence said:
Made me think this one because it is not to much to just want an orange, but then it is the way you go about that and they way it is received. Social as well as moral issues made an interesting and enjoyable read.
February 5th, 2025 04:56
Joseph and the last orange.
sorenbarrett said:
There may be a meta metaphor here. Poverty asks for justice of which there is none and comes up empty handed. The only escape in a power driven world is death the only true justice dispensed to all. How\'s that for a cynic\'s review? Good write my friend
February 5th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
There may be a meta metaphor here. Poverty asks for justice of which there is none and comes up empty handed. The only escape in a power driven world is death the only true justice dispensed to all. How\'s that for a cynic\'s review? Good write my friend
February 5th, 2025 04:41
Alison\'s first time.
Poetic Licence said:
A gift from the heart is a true gift, it is not giving thinking how it will be received, so sometime we can have regrets after but not at the time of giving. An interesting write that makes you have a think, enjoyed reading.
February 4th, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
A gift from the heart is a true gift, it is not giving thinking how it will be received, so sometime we can have regrets after but not at the time of giving. An interesting write that makes you have a think, enjoyed reading.
February 4th, 2025 05:59
Alison\'s first time.
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem that makes one ponder. One should never give a gift that one regrets. A gift is from the heart freely given with no regret regardless of what is done with it anything else is but a ransom. A wonderful write nicely worded and structured
February 4th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem that makes one ponder. One should never give a gift that one regrets. A gift is from the heart freely given with no regret regardless of what is done with it anything else is but a ransom. A wonderful write nicely worded and structured
February 4th, 2025 03:55
Alison\'s first time.
arqios said:
At best life can be overwhelming for seasoned travellers but can be so much more 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
February 4th, 2025 01:38
arqios said:
At best life can be overwhelming for seasoned travellers but can be so much more 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
February 4th, 2025 01:38
The Kiama Rock-Hoppers Club
sorenbarrett said:
Child or adult we often do foolish things that have bad results. Things we never intended but in our ignorance or neglect we are responsible and have to live with it. A wonderfully written piece set up well and well told with a sinking feeling at the end.
February 3rd, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Child or adult we often do foolish things that have bad results. Things we never intended but in our ignorance or neglect we are responsible and have to live with it. A wonderfully written piece set up well and well told with a sinking feeling at the end.
February 3rd, 2025 04:11
The Kiama Rock-Hoppers Club
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and sad read, reminding me of events we have had here over the years very much like this.
February 3rd, 2025 03:07
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and sad read, reminding me of events we have had here over the years very much like this.
February 3rd, 2025 03:07
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