Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Emily goes for a walk.
Lil said:
This is like a puzzle, once you build it. It comes tumbling/ breaking down or apart, but there\'s a perk. You can always re-pair it. Wonderful work!!!
October 5th, 2024 22:32
Lil said:
This is like a puzzle, once you build it. It comes tumbling/ breaking down or apart, but there\'s a perk. You can always re-pair it. Wonderful work!!!
October 5th, 2024 22:32
Emily goes for a walk.
sorenbarrett said:
As we take the walk through the maze of life we may loose our memory in its turns and find ourselves down a blind alley. I love how the symbolic use of flowers indicates the direction we are headed and the softness or the guide being gentle and kind whether leading us to past memories of love or present of death. Nicely done
October 5th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
As we take the walk through the maze of life we may loose our memory in its turns and find ourselves down a blind alley. I love how the symbolic use of flowers indicates the direction we are headed and the softness or the guide being gentle and kind whether leading us to past memories of love or present of death. Nicely done
October 5th, 2024 06:06
Same Sky Different Rain.
Dan Williams said:
That\'s not a knife., THIS is a knife. I like it.
October 5th, 2024 00:10
Dan Williams said:
That\'s not a knife., THIS is a knife. I like it.
October 5th, 2024 00:10
Same Sky Different Rain.
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a beautiful picture in the mind and I picture dream in an aboriginal sense and the comming to life of trees and rocks. Very nicely done and deserves more reads.
October 4th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This paints a beautiful picture in the mind and I picture dream in an aboriginal sense and the comming to life of trees and rocks. Very nicely done and deserves more reads.
October 4th, 2024 04:59
Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful!! Many of us rebel against our past and its origins. A great story with a moral. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2024 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful!! Many of us rebel against our past and its origins. A great story with a moral. Nicely written
October 3rd, 2024 04:39
Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong and understandable words David. I can understand this in that I now believe that organised religion is a farce.
Andy
October 3rd, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong and understandable words David. I can understand this in that I now believe that organised religion is a farce.
Andy
October 3rd, 2024 01:13
The kindness of the lady.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem David, took me to a place of wonder.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem David, took me to a place of wonder.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:40
At the Altar of Eros.
sorenbarrett said:
This a tasty sandwich fabled beginning and end with story in the center. Loved the joint elements of Greek and Egyptian mythology remnicent of the Bem Bem bird and cosmic egg. Well constructed and nicely written
September 29th, 2024 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
This a tasty sandwich fabled beginning and end with story in the center. Loved the joint elements of Greek and Egyptian mythology remnicent of the Bem Bem bird and cosmic egg. Well constructed and nicely written
September 29th, 2024 07:09
An important Life.
sorenbarrett said:
It is all in a point of view. We can choose how we see things. A very good lesson to learn. Nicely done.
September 28th, 2024 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is all in a point of view. We can choose how we see things. A very good lesson to learn. Nicely done.
September 28th, 2024 19:04
An important Life.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, thise nights can be wondrous.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, thise nights can be wondrous.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:28
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
Cassie58 said:
How reassured that child must have been. She must have felt that security all around her. Nicely conveyed lines. Enjoyed the flow, the rhyme and the imagery. Well done David.
September 27th, 2024 19:33
Cassie58 said:
How reassured that child must have been. She must have felt that security all around her. Nicely conveyed lines. Enjoyed the flow, the rhyme and the imagery. Well done David.
September 27th, 2024 19:33
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the protective theme of this poem filled with great images and pulled on by the current of rhyme. Very nicely done David
September 27th, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the protective theme of this poem filled with great images and pulled on by the current of rhyme. Very nicely done David
September 27th, 2024 03:46
We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home.
orchidee said:
Good write David.
September 27th, 2024 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write David.
September 27th, 2024 01:53
Belinda talks to her Husband while he is asleep.
Cassie58 said:
From a woman’s perspective, the end of the road has been reached.and who would blame her for leaving. She has become an empty shell. A sad poem David, you convey Belinda’s plight well.
September 25th, 2024 21:25
Cassie58 said:
From a woman’s perspective, the end of the road has been reached.and who would blame her for leaving. She has become an empty shell. A sad poem David, you convey Belinda’s plight well.
September 25th, 2024 21:25
Bravery and Slavery.
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but dream of a time without range, where peace and love rule all David.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We can but dream of a time without range, where peace and love rule all David.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:44
Bravery and Slavery.
sorenbarrett said:
The world is tough and the human race has many deficits evolution will tell what is right. But as for this poem I judge it a thought provoking and wonderful write.
September 24th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
The world is tough and the human race has many deficits evolution will tell what is right. But as for this poem I judge it a thought provoking and wonderful write.
September 24th, 2024 05:26
Bravery and Slavery.
Cassie58 said:
You have penned this beautifully David. There are many questions here which really stimulate the thinking. I abhor violence but would use it without hesitation if any of my loved ones were being attacked. I fear that rage, but I know it’s there. It’s not bravery, it’s survival. Men crying tears, is not a weakness, I see it as a strength. So much here to think about. An excellent write. Have a happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 03:42
Cassie58 said:
You have penned this beautifully David. There are many questions here which really stimulate the thinking. I abhor violence but would use it without hesitation if any of my loved ones were being attacked. I fear that rage, but I know it’s there. It’s not bravery, it’s survival. Men crying tears, is not a weakness, I see it as a strength. So much here to think about. An excellent write. Have a happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 03:42
Bravery and Slavery.
Mason 𓆩ᥫ᭡𓆪 said:
Good write David! What would you do if your family was starving? Is it bravery to steal from another hungry family? The poem really made me think!👍
September 24th, 2024 03:24
Mason 𓆩ᥫ᭡𓆪 said:
Good write David! What would you do if your family was starving? Is it bravery to steal from another hungry family? The poem really made me think!👍
September 24th, 2024 03:24
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