Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
David Wakeling said:
I can only hope so. Thanks for commenting.Much appreciated
December 2nd, 2023 03:00
David Wakeling said:
I can only hope so. Thanks for commenting.Much appreciated
December 2nd, 2023 03:00
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dance be there for you David and maybe the fire will be in your eyes as well.
Andy
December 2nd, 2023 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dance be there for you David and maybe the fire will be in your eyes as well.
Andy
December 2nd, 2023 02:16
Forever.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much for commenting.It is much appreciated
December 1st, 2023 05:38
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much for commenting.It is much appreciated
December 1st, 2023 05:38
Forever.
Cassie58 said:
Unexpected love comes calling, only to find it could be fleeting. Such a disappointment to believe it isn’t going to last. Beautifully expressed poetry.
December 1st, 2023 02:37
Cassie58 said:
Unexpected love comes calling, only to find it could be fleeting. Such a disappointment to believe it isn’t going to last. Beautifully expressed poetry.
December 1st, 2023 02:37
AVARICE.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you mi amigo. Your comments are always much appreciated.
December 1st, 2023 02:20
David Wakeling said:
Thank you mi amigo. Your comments are always much appreciated.
December 1st, 2023 02:20
AVARICE.
Bobby O said:
It’s speaks different with each read. That in itself is laudable, making me think is cool. The piece has a weariness, a sorta dunkigation lurks like those at work of their fathers and his and his. But there’s more here, I sense a comment about the inevitability of station, and the empathy you drew had a fatalistic tone ie: there but for the grace of God go I.
This is a masterpiece worthy of study and my thought are offered from a humble view. Props sir, Props.
November 30th, 2023 20:58
Bobby O said:
It’s speaks different with each read. That in itself is laudable, making me think is cool. The piece has a weariness, a sorta dunkigation lurks like those at work of their fathers and his and his. But there’s more here, I sense a comment about the inevitability of station, and the empathy you drew had a fatalistic tone ie: there but for the grace of God go I.
This is a masterpiece worthy of study and my thought are offered from a humble view. Props sir, Props.
November 30th, 2023 20:58
The Past.
David Wakeling said:
Good to hear.You seem a happy person.Thanks for reading and commenting
November 30th, 2023 06:20
David Wakeling said:
Good to hear.You seem a happy person.Thanks for reading and commenting
November 30th, 2023 06:20
The Past.
Goldfinch60 said:
Mu past was filled with joy and wonder David and brought me to the wonderful place that I am in now..
Andy
November 30th, 2023 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Mu past was filled with joy and wonder David and brought me to the wonderful place that I am in now..
Andy
November 30th, 2023 02:48
Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
November 22nd, 2023 02:31
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
November 22nd, 2023 02:31
Today I went to the Valley of Erudition.
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly are things that are joyous in this world David.
Andy
November 22nd, 2023 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly are things that are joyous in this world David.
Andy
November 22nd, 2023 02:11
Joseph and the last Orange
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, some people will do anything for an orange.
Andy
November 21st, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, some people will do anything for an orange.
Andy
November 21st, 2023 01:51
Joseph and the last Orange
Kinsley Lee said:
The old poor man\'s story, isn\'t it? Thank you so much.
November 20th, 2023 17:50
Kinsley Lee said:
The old poor man\'s story, isn\'t it? Thank you so much.
November 20th, 2023 17:50
Joseph and the last Orange
David Wakeling said:
Thank you I think I\'ll just go an get an orange.Just kidding
November 20th, 2023 17:25
David Wakeling said:
Thank you I think I\'ll just go an get an orange.Just kidding
November 20th, 2023 17:25
Veronica says goodbye.
Goldfinch60 said:
Hooked on your words David, thank you. Suicide is so awful for others.
Andy
November 20th, 2023 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Hooked on your words David, thank you. Suicide is so awful for others.
Andy
November 20th, 2023 02:22
Veronica says goodbye.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Yikes - a repercussion of humankind’s free will. Riveting reminiscing before the fatal act … suicide is always tragic.
November 19th, 2023 15:10
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Yikes - a repercussion of humankind’s free will. Riveting reminiscing before the fatal act … suicide is always tragic.
November 19th, 2023 15:10
Wisdom revisited.
2781 said:
There is no greater joy than to know my reality.
November 18th, 2023 07:39
2781 said:
There is no greater joy than to know my reality.
November 18th, 2023 07:39
When a love one passes.
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David. My wife of nearly forty years died and one thing that I did was remember the love that she had left behind for me.
Andy
November 18th, 2023 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David. My wife of nearly forty years died and one thing that I did was remember the love that she had left behind for me.
Andy
November 18th, 2023 02:24
When a love one passes.
Tom C Dylan said:
A very powerful poem. Striking imagery.
November 17th, 2023 03:05
Tom C Dylan said:
A very powerful poem. Striking imagery.
November 17th, 2023 03:05
Lily’s Lament
Lil said:
OK first of all I love this. Second of all my name is Lily and it is spelled the same way. Third all Love can be strong and hurtful. And I love how you just make it come out so strong.
November 12th, 2023 14:51
Lil said:
OK first of all I love this. Second of all my name is Lily and it is spelled the same way. Third all Love can be strong and hurtful. And I love how you just make it come out so strong.
November 12th, 2023 14:51
The Sermon on the Hill.
David Wakeling said:
We are all Mad. But one man\'s \"mad\" is another man\'s \"wahoo\". Thanks for commenting
November 12th, 2023 14:47
David Wakeling said:
We are all Mad. But one man\'s \"mad\" is another man\'s \"wahoo\". Thanks for commenting
November 12th, 2023 14:47
The Sermon on the Hill.
orchidee said:
It\'s the madness that the world\'s come to. Not that it suddenly become \'mad\'. It\'s been so since mankind began to be.
November 12th, 2023 02:39
orchidee said:
It\'s the madness that the world\'s come to. Not that it suddenly become \'mad\'. It\'s been so since mankind began to be.
November 12th, 2023 02:39
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