Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Gazania
TobaniNataiella said:
Doing what it had to survive, a very interesting read, thank you
December 18th, 2024 05:19
TobaniNataiella said:
Doing what it had to survive, a very interesting read, thank you
December 18th, 2024 05:19
Gazania
arqios said:
Oh beauty! I didn’t know what they were called. Had them to brighten the narrow patio while we lived overseas for half a dozen years. And now all the memories come flooding back! What I do understand is how the Gazanias and our potted garden distracted me from homesickness. Your latest offering has struck a sentimental chord!
December 18th, 2024 03:46
arqios said:
Oh beauty! I didn’t know what they were called. Had them to brighten the narrow patio while we lived overseas for half a dozen years. And now all the memories come flooding back! What I do understand is how the Gazanias and our potted garden distracted me from homesickness. Your latest offering has struck a sentimental chord!
December 18th, 2024 03:46
Giving up the fight
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, we all, at sometime, need to shout out about life.
Andy
December 18th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, we all, at sometime, need to shout out about life.
Andy
December 18th, 2024 02:47
Giving up the fight
arqios said:
Silly, white parrot… must be a cockatoo. The mirroring effect is staying in my afterthought! Having been on such walks myself…at least there is no white flag of surrender to be had save a squawking bird. In an atypical way that puts things into perspective.
December 17th, 2024 08:25
arqios said:
Silly, white parrot… must be a cockatoo. The mirroring effect is staying in my afterthought! Having been on such walks myself…at least there is no white flag of surrender to be had save a squawking bird. In an atypical way that puts things into perspective.
December 17th, 2024 08:25
Giving up the fight
TobaniNataiella said:
A ,lovely poem if a little on the dark side, raising situations we have all been in at some stage, just asking questions out loud in the hope there is a miracle answer, at least on this occasion a good memory came out of it ( The Bird). Really enjoyed the read
December 17th, 2024 06:36
TobaniNataiella said:
A ,lovely poem if a little on the dark side, raising situations we have all been in at some stage, just asking questions out loud in the hope there is a miracle answer, at least on this occasion a good memory came out of it ( The Bird). Really enjoyed the read
December 17th, 2024 06:36
Giving up the fight
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem with a great analogy that speaks to a place that many of us have been and dredges up old feelings and fears. It has a feel of darkness to it but I love the night.
December 17th, 2024 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem with a great analogy that speaks to a place that many of us have been and dredges up old feelings and fears. It has a feel of darkness to it but I love the night.
December 17th, 2024 04:26
In Old Egypt
arqios said:
A tragedy indeed. You spun that tale in verse so well DW!
December 16th, 2024 06:10
arqios said:
A tragedy indeed. You spun that tale in verse so well DW!
December 16th, 2024 06:10
In Old Egypt
TobaniNataiella said:
I really enjoyed reading this differently written love story, good read
December 16th, 2024 06:00
TobaniNataiella said:
I really enjoyed reading this differently written love story, good read
December 16th, 2024 06:00
In Old Egypt
sorenbarrett said:
As all great stories of drama extreem passion is accompanied by extreem actions and consequences. A love story well told with great use of names to make it authentic and the end with a most intriguing and thought provoking message
December 16th, 2024 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
As all great stories of drama extreem passion is accompanied by extreem actions and consequences. A love story well told with great use of names to make it authentic and the end with a most intriguing and thought provoking message
December 16th, 2024 05:18
Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images with poetic words combined with a most romantic statement. Well written and well finished. Great ending line
December 15th, 2024 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images with poetic words combined with a most romantic statement. Well written and well finished. Great ending line
December 15th, 2024 04:10
Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful gifts to give David.
Andy
December 15th, 2024 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful gifts to give David.
Andy
December 15th, 2024 02:03
Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows.
TobaniNataiella said:
And that is all you need, enjoyed the read.
December 15th, 2024 02:01
TobaniNataiella said:
And that is all you need, enjoyed the read.
December 15th, 2024 02:01
Go Nanna Go Nanna
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale David, it certainly drew me in.
Andy
December 15th, 2024 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale David, it certainly drew me in.
Andy
December 15th, 2024 01:58
Go Nanna Go Nanna
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. Your words played out in pictures. I found it really moving and in some ways relatable. Thank you David.
December 14th, 2024 13:20
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. Your words played out in pictures. I found it really moving and in some ways relatable. Thank you David.
December 14th, 2024 13:20
Go Nanna Go Nanna
TobaniNataiella said:
A very touching poem riddled with emotional tugs, Good Read
December 14th, 2024 06:07
TobaniNataiella said:
A very touching poem riddled with emotional tugs, Good Read
December 14th, 2024 06:07
Go Nanna Go Nanna
sorenbarrett said:
Love how you built up to the end of this poem by creating charters and emotions and then the final line of being left without knowing. And so it is with life itself we build and build and never know. A well constructed write
December 14th, 2024 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Love how you built up to the end of this poem by creating charters and emotions and then the final line of being left without knowing. And so it is with life itself we build and build and never know. A well constructed write
December 14th, 2024 04:49
DUSK.
sorenbarrett said:
Truly lovely this poem speaks to the heart about birds and also it’s metaphor. A true work of art.
December 13th, 2024 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Truly lovely this poem speaks to the heart about birds and also it’s metaphor. A true work of art.
December 13th, 2024 10:02
The Pearl Necklace.
TobaniNataiella said:
A very enjoyable and entertaining read with a twist, really enjoyed it
December 13th, 2024 00:00
TobaniNataiella said:
A very enjoyable and entertaining read with a twist, really enjoyed it
December 13th, 2024 00:00
The Pearl Necklace.
sorenbarrett said:
A most unexpected ending to this poem. Intriguing it kept attention to the end. Very nicely written
December 12th, 2024 17:16
sorenbarrett said:
A most unexpected ending to this poem. Intriguing it kept attention to the end. Very nicely written
December 12th, 2024 17:16
Not enough colours
arqios said:
I agree! There are so many different colourful things to colour in!
December 12th, 2024 01:50
arqios said:
I agree! There are so many different colourful things to colour in!
December 12th, 2024 01:50
Not enough colours
TobaniNataiella said:
A very colourful and uplifting little poem, really enjoyed the read.
December 11th, 2024 16:56
TobaniNataiella said:
A very colourful and uplifting little poem, really enjoyed the read.
December 11th, 2024 16:56
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