Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The Lion and The Lily.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem with a moral reads smooth as silk with its meter and rhyme. Nicley done
October 19th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
This poem with a moral reads smooth as silk with its meter and rhyme. Nicley done
October 19th, 2024 05:23
The Heart.
arqios said:
There is that certain beauty that puts our wanting to rest! Spot on DW!
October 18th, 2024 07:34
arqios said:
There is that certain beauty that puts our wanting to rest! Spot on DW!
October 18th, 2024 07:34
The Heart.
sorenbarrett said:
\"Even a noble lighthouse can not shine upon itself\" great line as is that whole stanza. Very nice David
October 18th, 2024 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
\"Even a noble lighthouse can not shine upon itself\" great line as is that whole stanza. Very nice David
October 18th, 2024 05:04
The Love Note
sorenbarrett said:
A very complicated relationship here.Love/hate (disapointment)
October 17th, 2024 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
A very complicated relationship here.Love/hate (disapointment)
October 17th, 2024 20:44
Same Sky Different Rain.
NafisaSB said:
lovely poem...no words to describe the impact it had..
October 17th, 2024 06:27
NafisaSB said:
lovely poem...no words to describe the impact it had..
October 17th, 2024 06:27
Same Sky Different Rain.
Dan Williams said:
This is first class work on a worthy subject. Nice phrasing and imagery.
October 16th, 2024 21:02
Dan Williams said:
This is first class work on a worthy subject. Nice phrasing and imagery.
October 16th, 2024 21:02
Same Sky Different Rain.
arqios said:
A differing rain however the variance of method, for myself a ‘poetic corroboree’ online in what could be deemed as a digital desert of sorts in some areas. Forgive the tangent, tracing a parallel of visualisation.
October 16th, 2024 06:55
arqios said:
A differing rain however the variance of method, for myself a ‘poetic corroboree’ online in what could be deemed as a digital desert of sorts in some areas. Forgive the tangent, tracing a parallel of visualisation.
October 16th, 2024 06:55
Same Sky Different Rain.
sorenbarrett said:
Written with care and feeling this fine poem brings me to the location. Some great lines are contained in this work of art. \"the place where love waits for its time\" \"The long walk from their dreaming\" \"They turn the logs for love is a burning whose warmth lies beneath\" Even the title is a great line. The rhyme pattern melts into this poem and is covered by the imagery and great lines. Although never having been there I feel that I have
October 16th, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Written with care and feeling this fine poem brings me to the location. Some great lines are contained in this work of art. \"the place where love waits for its time\" \"The long walk from their dreaming\" \"They turn the logs for love is a burning whose warmth lies beneath\" Even the title is a great line. The rhyme pattern melts into this poem and is covered by the imagery and great lines. Although never having been there I feel that I have
October 16th, 2024 05:40
Same Sky Different Rain.
Bobby O said:
Love is a burning whose warmth Lies beneath
How freaking cool is that certainly does that for me sometimes and I’m guessing whoever reads this he’s gonna find several phrases in there that are automatically attached to episodes that they’re familiar with. This is great writing my friend.
October 16th, 2024 03:58
Bobby O said:
Love is a burning whose warmth Lies beneath
How freaking cool is that certainly does that for me sometimes and I’m guessing whoever reads this he’s gonna find several phrases in there that are automatically attached to episodes that they’re familiar with. This is great writing my friend.
October 16th, 2024 03:58
Obsession.
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, will we ever learn in this world to make it a better place.
Andy
October 16th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words David, will we ever learn in this world to make it a better place.
Andy
October 16th, 2024 01:12
Obsession.
peet said:
Such deep thoughts so well captured in a few lines. Great words my friend.
October 15th, 2024 13:11
peet said:
Such deep thoughts so well captured in a few lines. Great words my friend.
October 15th, 2024 13:11
The Light of Lucifer.
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David, the world is so full of war, IT MUST BE STOPPED!!
Andy
October 14th, 2024 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words David, the world is so full of war, IT MUST BE STOPPED!!
Andy
October 14th, 2024 00:45
The Light of Lucifer.
sorenbarrett said:
Harsh words for dark deeds. Powerful writting
October 13th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Harsh words for dark deeds. Powerful writting
October 13th, 2024 05:27
LOVE.
sorenbarrett said:
Our own sunglasses keepus from seeing the beauty of love. A poem worth reading more than once
October 13th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Our own sunglasses keepus from seeing the beauty of love. A poem worth reading more than once
October 13th, 2024 05:23
LOVE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is around us David all but many do not see it.
Andy
October 13th, 2024 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is around us David all but many do not see it.
Andy
October 13th, 2024 02:07
BETRAYAL.
Goldfinch60 said:
All the different types of organised religion are seeking this, perhaps it does not exist David.
Andy
October 12th, 2024 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
All the different types of organised religion are seeking this, perhaps it does not exist David.
Andy
October 12th, 2024 01:56
BETRAYAL.
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of the unknown is central. When we do not know ourselves is the worst unknown. Written so well it brings this to heart
October 11th, 2024 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of the unknown is central. When we do not know ourselves is the worst unknown. Written so well it brings this to heart
October 11th, 2024 07:56
The Lady with the fire bird in her eyes.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, \\i am sure that lady will always be in your mind.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, \\i am sure that lady will always be in your mind.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:56
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