Comments received on poems by David Wakeling



The Narrowing.
Thomas W Case said:

Superb, on numerous levels. Great write.

October 31st, 2023 16:33

An  important Life.
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Powerful and poignant. You nailed it. Great write.

October 30th, 2023 16:51

Dear Baby Caterina.
David Wakeling said:

Coming from you that is praise indeed amigo.Thank you

October 30th, 2023 02:40

Dear Baby Caterina.
Bobby O said:

Wow! That hits hard at several levels. Calling it a masterpiece doesn’t cover it. Soul ripping, my friend.

October 29th, 2023 23:59

Lillian confronts her husband at 2 am.
gray0328 said:

Wow

October 27th, 2023 23:11

Lillian confronts her husband at 2 am.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful

October 27th, 2023 15:44

The right of the people to keep and bear Arms, shall not be infringed.
Bobby O said:

I just love the juxtaposition of the original statement and your calmly thrust content. If I knew what sardonic wit meant I would pay yiu that compliment.

October 25th, 2023 23:50


Puppa goes on a Yacht.
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent story.

October 24th, 2023 22:34

Yasmen takes her Hajib off.
Thomas W Case said:

Great poem. Congrats on the win over my Hawkeyes Saturday.

October 23rd, 2023 00:36

Fallujah Iraq April 2007,
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful, very well crafted.

October 23rd, 2023 00:32

Fallujah Iraq April 2007,
David Wakeling said:

I think the reality of war hits home when you get a letter like that.Anyway thanks for your comments

October 22nd, 2023 20:57

Fallujah Iraq April 2007,
Bobby O said:

Wow ! That hits hard and I’m guessing it may be designed exact fir that intent. You continually drive home emotional points with a savvy injection method. I salute!

October 22nd, 2023 16:36

We are the stuff that screams are made of.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. So sad and so true. Nice work.

October 19th, 2023 11:49

We are the stuff that screams are made of.
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true David, why can\'t this world see peace is the way to go forward.

Andy

October 19th, 2023 00:20

We are the stuff that screams are made of.
Teddy.15 said:

So damn powerful it makes my heart bleed because it\'s true we will never be rid of evil no matter how much we spread the love, and tit for tat will never solve anything. Superb poetry.

October 18th, 2023 03:05

This is the hand,  This is the will.
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words David.

Andy

October 18th, 2023 02:15

The Care Fairies.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words David.

Andy

October 18th, 2023 01:24

This is the hand,  This is the will.
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Now that is powerful.

October 18th, 2023 00:26

The Care Fairies.
David Wakeling said:

Thank you for your kind comments.Much appreciated

October 17th, 2023 15:36

Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
Thomas W Case said:

Great lesson and fantastic story telling to develop the theme. Well done.

October 15th, 2023 15:12

Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
Teddy.15 said:

I have no beliefs in religion but this is magnificent. ❤️ love the last lines and all the imagery.

October 12th, 2023 02:50

Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
David Wakeling said:

Thank you bro.I think you hit the snail on the shell.Religion and Faith who can understand it all? But with a little Sympathy empathy and compassion we might just make it through.Thanks for commenting.

October 11th, 2023 13:35

Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
Bobby O said:

Wow! It’s a twisted truth one must unravel to see religion and Faith as totally virtuous and should stand without question, a tenet I do not fully subscribe. I love the questions this piece may raise and I also love the phrasing that moves the fable. As always, a very good read.

October 11th, 2023 06:23

The New Commandments.
David Wakeling said:

I have to confess that I like chocolate biscuits.Thanks for reading

October 10th, 2023 01:59

The New Commandments.
orchidee said:

Hmm, I never come across these three before!

October 10th, 2023 01:53

Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
David Wakeling said:

Thanks for reading. Much Appreciated.

October 7th, 2023 23:01

Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone.
Bobby O said:

To dance in the kitchen, that was the line that brought me sudden hope and I think you for that. Nice write great read , you got it going on.

October 7th, 2023 16:00

God must be so proud.
orchidee said:

We state our own beliefs, not trying to \'defend God\' though. He may think it laughable if mere humans are trying to defend Him.
It\'s understandable to question, seeing things as in your poem. And what about Job in the Old Testament?
BlessedbyGod puts it well I feel.

October 5th, 2023 03:05

God must be so proud.
Goldfinch60 said:

As I have said before \"Where is god!!\"

Andy

October 5th, 2023 01:15

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