Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
Faith and Warragul.
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely tale of the ultimate sacrifice someone can give to please someone else, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely tale of the ultimate sacrifice someone can give to please someone else, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 03:20
The talking song.
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem I feel an urgency, being shut out, too late, gone and I just noticed, but has been gone for a long time. We talk less now days too much to get in the way. Relationshiips have changed too they have a shorter life expectancy. Great poem
January 26th, 2025 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem I feel an urgency, being shut out, too late, gone and I just noticed, but has been gone for a long time. We talk less now days too much to get in the way. Relationshiips have changed too they have a shorter life expectancy. Great poem
January 26th, 2025 05:26
The talking song.
arqios said:
It can also be a talking dance as well. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 26th, 2025 04:20
arqios said:
It can also be a talking dance as well. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 26th, 2025 04:20
The talking song.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, conversation is so important David.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 03:01
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, conversation is so important David.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 03:01
The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem David if we can face those things that concern us in life and sing through them all will be wonderful.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful poem David if we can face those things that concern us in life and sing through them all will be wonderful.
Andy
January 26th, 2025 02:48
The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
As a child i too feared storms esp thunder n lightning. Is this a true episode?
Has a lot of lesson and eloquently narrated wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
As a child i too feared storms esp thunder n lightning. Is this a true episode?
Has a lot of lesson and eloquently narrated wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 14:18
Will you be ready
RSM0812 said:
Waiting for love yet never ready for it. Great write
January 25th, 2025 07:45
RSM0812 said:
Waiting for love yet never ready for it. Great write
January 25th, 2025 07:45
The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening.
arqios said:
During storms My siblings and I would be like the Darling kids playing about, although we had to Peter Pan. It was fearsome and thrilling all at once. Interesting though how this ‘song’ got her through the death of a loved one as well… at least I presume the boyfriend died in the crash.
January 25th, 2025 06:08
arqios said:
During storms My siblings and I would be like the Darling kids playing about, although we had to Peter Pan. It was fearsome and thrilling all at once. Interesting though how this ‘song’ got her through the death of a loved one as well… at least I presume the boyfriend died in the crash.
January 25th, 2025 06:08
The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening.
sorenbarrett said:
David this poem obviously made an impression on me as if I had read it before. Nicely done David
January 25th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
David this poem obviously made an impression on me as if I had read it before. Nicely done David
January 25th, 2025 03:52
Will you be ready
Goldfinch60 said:
I already have love and sing about it all the time DAvid.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
I already have love and sing about it all the time DAvid.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:49
Will you be ready
arqios said:
How then shall the best man appear to herald the bridegroom’s return? 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 24th, 2025 06:36
arqios said:
How then shall the best man appear to herald the bridegroom’s return? 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 24th, 2025 06:36
Will you be ready
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning an awakening very nicely written
January 24th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning an awakening very nicely written
January 24th, 2025 04:29
Will you be ready
Poetic Licence said:
We like to think we are, but are we, as you ask, enjoyed the read.
January 24th, 2025 03:29
Poetic Licence said:
We like to think we are, but are we, as you ask, enjoyed the read.
January 24th, 2025 03:29
The willow tree at the end of the road.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful memories David, We learned so much when out with friends in our childhood.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful memories David, We learned so much when out with friends in our childhood.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:02
The willow tree at the end of the road.
sorenbarrett said:
A literal succss as a poem and metaphoric as well. Whether seen as a family tree or nature itself the meaning grows deeper rooted when declaired by man unsafe. Our official order be it government, schools, religion tell us what to believe contrary to knowledge given by experience and life. Do we believe the news?
January 23rd, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A literal succss as a poem and metaphoric as well. Whether seen as a family tree or nature itself the meaning grows deeper rooted when declaired by man unsafe. Our official order be it government, schools, religion tell us what to believe contrary to knowledge given by experience and life. Do we believe the news?
January 23rd, 2025 04:49
The willow tree at the end of the road.
arqios said:
If every child had such a tree! Hope you took photos of it before it’s gone. Thanks for a well appointed glimpse into your world, oh Giant Killer 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:19
arqios said:
If every child had such a tree! Hope you took photos of it before it’s gone. Thanks for a well appointed glimpse into your world, oh Giant Killer 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 23rd, 2025 04:19
The willow tree at the end of the road.
orchidee said:
Good write David. I heard a tree joke - What\'s brown and green, and would kill you if it fell out of a tree on to you? Nope, not a branch - but a snooker table! heehee. Don\'t know where that bizarre joke originated.
January 23rd, 2025 03:42
orchidee said:
Good write David. I heard a tree joke - What\'s brown and green, and would kill you if it fell out of a tree on to you? Nope, not a branch - but a snooker table! heehee. Don\'t know where that bizarre joke originated.
January 23rd, 2025 03:42
The willow tree at the end of the road.
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem that bought back some happy memories, from the days when all you needed was a tree to have a good time. Often wondered given how old they are, if they could speak, what would they have to say after seeing so much, enjoyed the read.
January 23rd, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem that bought back some happy memories, from the days when all you needed was a tree to have a good time. Often wondered given how old they are, if they could speak, what would they have to say after seeing so much, enjoyed the read.
January 23rd, 2025 03:19
The willow tree at the end of the road.
Cassie58 said:
I have an affinity with trees. The silver birch outside my bedroom window is a sentinel. I understand how that willow tree was a special friend to you and how the memories will stay, long after the tree has gone. Lovely poem David. Thank you for sharing.
January 23rd, 2025 02:23
Cassie58 said:
I have an affinity with trees. The silver birch outside my bedroom window is a sentinel. I understand how that willow tree was a special friend to you and how the memories will stay, long after the tree has gone. Lovely poem David. Thank you for sharing.
January 23rd, 2025 02:23
Down this dark street.
Goldfinch60 said:
Always go towards the light David.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Always go towards the light David.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:20
Down this dark street.
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting reflection on the choices we make in life and how they change over time, enjoyed the read.
January 22nd, 2025 07:19
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting reflection on the choices we make in life and how they change over time, enjoyed the read.
January 22nd, 2025 07:19
Down this dark street.
arqios said:
A compelling narrative that is a profound and haunting reflection on life\'s choices, the passage of time, and the duality of existence. Good stuff here DWa 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 22nd, 2025 05:49
arqios said:
A compelling narrative that is a profound and haunting reflection on life\'s choices, the passage of time, and the duality of existence. Good stuff here DWa 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 22nd, 2025 05:49
Down this dark street.
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem light its path. They illuminate poetic images that reflect understanding. Very nicely written it flows well on to its end with rocks on one bank and flowers on the other.
January 22nd, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem light its path. They illuminate poetic images that reflect understanding. Very nicely written it flows well on to its end with rocks on one bank and flowers on the other.
January 22nd, 2025 04:25
The Most Stupendous Love Story the World has ever known.
Tony36 said:
Excellent write David
January 21st, 2025 12:46
Tony36 said:
Excellent write David
January 21st, 2025 12:46
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