Comments received on poems by David Wakeling
The unhappy man.
Doggerel Dave said:
As an amateur pessimist, I can relate......
February 18th, 2024 07:45
Doggerel Dave said:
As an amateur pessimist, I can relate......
February 18th, 2024 07:45
The Slow Train to Wellington.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully superb words David, thank you.
Andy
February 18th, 2024 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully superb words David, thank you.
Andy
February 18th, 2024 02:26
The Slow Train to Wellington.
Doggerel Dave said:
You tell a good yarn, plus I\'ve just found out there is a town called Wellington in NSW (failed Geography at school anyway).
Enjoyed muchly.
February 17th, 2024 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
You tell a good yarn, plus I\'ve just found out there is a town called Wellington in NSW (failed Geography at school anyway).
Enjoyed muchly.
February 17th, 2024 18:28
The Slow Train to Wellington.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Your words and the painting of the scene evoke emotion. Excellent.
February 17th, 2024 15:46
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Your words and the painting of the scene evoke emotion. Excellent.
February 17th, 2024 15:46
What are you afraid of Tina Louise?
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope that all goes well for Tina Louise and that you can help her.
Andy
February 17th, 2024 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope that all goes well for Tina Louise and that you can help her.
Andy
February 17th, 2024 01:55
Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much Andy
February 16th, 2024 02:28
David Wakeling said:
Thank you so much Andy
February 16th, 2024 02:28
Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice.
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving words David.
Andy
February 16th, 2024 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving words David.
Andy
February 16th, 2024 02:16
LOVE.
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is all around us David, many just do not want to see it of hear it, I do.
Andy
February 15th, 2024 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
That love is all around us David, many just do not want to see it of hear it, I do.
Andy
February 15th, 2024 02:18
An important Life.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, luckily I am in that place where happiness reigns in my life.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David, luckily I am in that place where happiness reigns in my life.
Andy
February 14th, 2024 02:26
An important Life.
Tom C Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. You have really captured something.
February 13th, 2024 05:46
Tom C Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. You have really captured something.
February 13th, 2024 05:46
Empathy ,Sympathy and Compassion,
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a meaningful write DAvid.
Andy
February 12th, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a meaningful write DAvid.
Andy
February 12th, 2024 02:49
Mr Bellmeister catches the bus.
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem David. I say this very rarely but it will go into my favourites.
Andy
February 11th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem David. I say this very rarely but it will go into my favourites.
Andy
February 11th, 2024 02:48
The Strange Visitor.
Goldfinch60 said:
That joy is within us all at some time no matter how hard life can be David.
Be joyous!
Andy
February 10th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That joy is within us all at some time no matter how hard life can be David.
Be joyous!
Andy
February 10th, 2024 02:46
The Supermarket on Forsaken Street.
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be like that David, so many type of people but we do not know all their fears and worries.
Andy
February 9th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Life can be like that David, so many type of people but we do not know all their fears and worries.
Andy
February 9th, 2024 02:21
The Supermarket on Forsaken Street.
John Lee said:
An intriguing story of people.. of life. The tales each soul has to never tell. Awesome write!
February 8th, 2024 23:13
John Lee said:
An intriguing story of people.. of life. The tales each soul has to never tell. Awesome write!
February 8th, 2024 23:13
Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David.
Andy
February 8th, 2024 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David.
Andy
February 8th, 2024 02:30
Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows.
Doggerel Dave said:
Not fond of a piece of poetry which requires lengthy background commentary (the piece I feel should justify itself). However some explanation re your current work(s) would be appreciated.
February 8th, 2024 00:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Not fond of a piece of poetry which requires lengthy background commentary (the piece I feel should justify itself). However some explanation re your current work(s) would be appreciated.
February 8th, 2024 00:47
Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows.
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work.
February 7th, 2024 19:40
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work.
February 7th, 2024 19:40
The Saan People of the Kalahari.
Goldfinch60 said:
Did not know about these people David, thank you for introducing them to me.
Andy
February 6th, 2024 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Did not know about these people David, thank you for introducing them to me.
Andy
February 6th, 2024 02:50
The Flight of the Bird boy.
Goldfinch60 said:
Flay away David, I will join you in the sky.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Flay away David, I will join you in the sky.
Andy
February 5th, 2024 02:22
Dancing with Death.
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand your pain when close family members pass on and leave you with your grief.
But what have funerals got to do with it, specifically your own? By the time of the funeral you are well and truly gone......at least one would hope so. A teeny bit embarrassing if halfway through the service the coffin lid gets kicked off and the body leaps out and cha-chas down the isle and off to find a decent pub......
February 3rd, 2024 22:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand your pain when close family members pass on and leave you with your grief.
But what have funerals got to do with it, specifically your own? By the time of the funeral you are well and truly gone......at least one would hope so. A teeny bit embarrassing if halfway through the service the coffin lid gets kicked off and the body leaps out and cha-chas down the isle and off to find a decent pub......
February 3rd, 2024 22:09
Dancing with Death.
Goldfinch60 said:
When I leave this world I have arranged for the song at the end of my funeral to be Rock Around the Clock!
Andy
February 3rd, 2024 03:33
Goldfinch60 said:
When I leave this world I have arranged for the song at the end of my funeral to be Rock Around the Clock!
Andy
February 3rd, 2024 03:33
Dancing with Death.
2781 said:
O death, where is your sting?
O grave, where is your victory?
February 3rd, 2024 02:26
2781 said:
O death, where is your sting?
O grave, where is your victory?
February 3rd, 2024 02:26
Joseph’s speech at the funeral of his wife of 25 years.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words David.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:56
The Past.
Bobby O said:
I guess what you pose here is a reality that slips into places of hope and subtracts. My percentage is that conjured of a stubborn arrogance. They’re my dreams , it’s my recollection , it’s a place where I insist upon a modicum of control. Maybe the girl left me on a day just after I got fired and all that chases me w the consequence of avalanche. But as soon as I regain normal pulse my dreams will be of my next job that I’m now free to find and the next girl who will be attached to my idiosyncrasies and rain might compel a search for a great book. They are my thoughts and dreams and they forever will reside in the asset column. I won’t debate others w views differed but I won’t get trapped into agreeing.
February 1st, 2024 00:58
Bobby O said:
I guess what you pose here is a reality that slips into places of hope and subtracts. My percentage is that conjured of a stubborn arrogance. They’re my dreams , it’s my recollection , it’s a place where I insist upon a modicum of control. Maybe the girl left me on a day just after I got fired and all that chases me w the consequence of avalanche. But as soon as I regain normal pulse my dreams will be of my next job that I’m now free to find and the next girl who will be attached to my idiosyncrasies and rain might compel a search for a great book. They are my thoughts and dreams and they forever will reside in the asset column. I won’t debate others w views differed but I won’t get trapped into agreeing.
February 1st, 2024 00:58
The Train to Auschwitz.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad and horrible times in the history of the world. Well written David.
Andy
January 31st, 2024 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Such sad and horrible times in the history of the world. Well written David.
Andy
January 31st, 2024 02:18
The Train to Auschwitz.
Christina8 said:
A very poignant and moving read!! Although its a piece of dark history, it was written well.
January 30th, 2024 13:23
Christina8 said:
A very poignant and moving read!! Although its a piece of dark history, it was written well.
January 30th, 2024 13:23
The Train to Auschwitz.
Neville said:
very occasionally, sometimes and for a short while, ignorance is bliss ..
a moving & timely account indeed of the first first holocaust ..
January 30th, 2024 05:34
Neville said:
very occasionally, sometimes and for a short while, ignorance is bliss ..
a moving & timely account indeed of the first first holocaust ..
January 30th, 2024 05:34
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