Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Rebel Nature
peto said:
We should never have to beg for peace
\"Tempers flaring \" misunderstanding \"
\" not being heard \"
Universe conspiring
Enough to make anyone sick and tired
But that rebellious streak wins the day
Sharpest knife cutting cords
Dance in that light sage
Another fantastic write
March 8th, 2024 17:37
peto said:
We should never have to beg for peace
\"Tempers flaring \" misunderstanding \"
\" not being heard \"
Universe conspiring
Enough to make anyone sick and tired
But that rebellious streak wins the day
Sharpest knife cutting cords
Dance in that light sage
Another fantastic write
March 8th, 2024 17:37
How I Love
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the longing for deep connection and understanding in relationships. It portrays the journey from hesitation to openness with heartfelt sincerity, emphasizing the desire for genuine connection over superficial topics. It gracefully conveys the yearning for a meaningful connection with someone who embraces you entirely. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:40
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the longing for deep connection and understanding in relationships. It portrays the journey from hesitation to openness with heartfelt sincerity, emphasizing the desire for genuine connection over superficial topics. It gracefully conveys the yearning for a meaningful connection with someone who embraces you entirely. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:40
How I Love
peto said:
Magical
It seems when you give of yourself it\'s all or nothing
Yet you still seem a bit cautious to let it show
A brilliant write full of anxiety but also hope
Get that glow sage
You deserve it
More upbeat than usual
Just as high a standard
March 6th, 2024 16:31
peto said:
Magical
It seems when you give of yourself it\'s all or nothing
Yet you still seem a bit cautious to let it show
A brilliant write full of anxiety but also hope
Get that glow sage
You deserve it
More upbeat than usual
Just as high a standard
March 6th, 2024 16:31
How I Love
Bobby O said:
So we are simpatico ! I’ve reread and now realize where I jumped off course. You did good !!
March 6th, 2024 15:42
Bobby O said:
So we are simpatico ! I’ve reread and now realize where I jumped off course. You did good !!
March 6th, 2024 15:42
How I Love
Bobby O said:
Is that all logic ? Is there intertwined caution ? It’s might be the way you write, a declaration of an undying love and it might also be a bargain that represents a chance or a bargain that works against your goal. Allowing entry through a less restricted door is likely to bring a less committed partner. I used to negotiate for a living and with very few exceptions , to pander do you get a little piece because your too afraid of none
almost never works. This needs reassessment.
March 6th, 2024 04:47
Bobby O said:
Is that all logic ? Is there intertwined caution ? It’s might be the way you write, a declaration of an undying love and it might also be a bargain that represents a chance or a bargain that works against your goal. Allowing entry through a less restricted door is likely to bring a less committed partner. I used to negotiate for a living and with very few exceptions , to pander do you get a little piece because your too afraid of none
almost never works. This needs reassessment.
March 6th, 2024 04:47
Intended Release
sunshine777 said:
I really felt this, very deep and powerful. Great writing!
March 5th, 2024 20:07
sunshine777 said:
I really felt this, very deep and powerful. Great writing!
March 5th, 2024 20:07
Tight
peto said:
Absolutely brilliant writing
\"New Crest on my chest yet I still failed this test\"
That line alone is quite superb
I keep gushing over your writing
Hard enough slaying monsters in our own time let alone being unprepared and pushed
Stunning
March 5th, 2024 12:40
peto said:
Absolutely brilliant writing
\"New Crest on my chest yet I still failed this test\"
That line alone is quite superb
I keep gushing over your writing
Hard enough slaying monsters in our own time let alone being unprepared and pushed
Stunning
March 5th, 2024 12:40
Intended Release
peto said:
This is an epic
I can\'t believe the lack of views
This site is lucky to have you here
I love the recent content sage
How deep you look
Not at others but at yourself
Can\'t say enough about how good it/you are
Hope others seemingly lack of interest doesn\'t put you off posting
Magic
March 5th, 2024 12:28
peto said:
This is an epic
I can\'t believe the lack of views
This site is lucky to have you here
I love the recent content sage
How deep you look
Not at others but at yourself
Can\'t say enough about how good it/you are
Hope others seemingly lack of interest doesn\'t put you off posting
Magic
March 5th, 2024 12:28
Seed
Cassie58 said:
If you can float on the waves it is a positive. Drowning is the unsavoury alternative. It helps if you are a good swimmer. I enjoyed your words this morning IS.
February 27th, 2024 03:44
Cassie58 said:
If you can float on the waves it is a positive. Drowning is the unsavoury alternative. It helps if you are a good swimmer. I enjoyed your words this morning IS.
February 27th, 2024 03:44
Touched
rhmn_7 said:
Learning to forgive is the best thing you can do for yourself! Beautiful wording.
February 25th, 2024 09:21
rhmn_7 said:
Learning to forgive is the best thing you can do for yourself! Beautiful wording.
February 25th, 2024 09:21
Touched
Cassie58 said:
Rich in metaphor. I enjoyed reading your stanzas. I think many experience those crashing waves at times and have to contemplate how to deal with them.
February 24th, 2024 23:51
Cassie58 said:
Rich in metaphor. I enjoyed reading your stanzas. I think many experience those crashing waves at times and have to contemplate how to deal with them.
February 24th, 2024 23:51
Spikes
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Women nor Men are meant to do this life alone; His word tells us so; although there have been plenty who have and do; I hope you find a love that’s all yours!
February 17th, 2024 10:19
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Women nor Men are meant to do this life alone; His word tells us so; although there have been plenty who have and do; I hope you find a love that’s all yours!
February 17th, 2024 10:19
Spikes
2781 said:
It\'s not good for man to be alone, although I do prefer it myself!
February 17th, 2024 03:45
2781 said:
It\'s not good for man to be alone, although I do prefer it myself!
February 17th, 2024 03:45
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