Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Conspired Choosing
Poetic Dan said:
Although I now believe this to be somewhat true! There\'s still an infinite way for us to choose, if it\'s was ment to be then it will become a loop but time is the prospective we are yet to lose! When the burden is gone you see how the rest of the animal kingdom does it too....
. Thanks for the inspiration
Keep being you
Much peace and respect
May 21st, 2024 05:04
Poetic Dan said:
Although I now believe this to be somewhat true! There\'s still an infinite way for us to choose, if it\'s was ment to be then it will become a loop but time is the prospective we are yet to lose! When the burden is gone you see how the rest of the animal kingdom does it too....
. Thanks for the inspiration
Keep being you
Much peace and respect
May 21st, 2024 05:04
Image
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A much needed message. Especially the line where you say we are molded to be the same. Beautiful work
May 19th, 2024 19:41
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A much needed message. Especially the line where you say we are molded to be the same. Beautiful work
May 19th, 2024 19:41
Shadowed
peto said:
Rhyme and flow are immaculate
Also really enjoyed this line
\"Ten toes down near the edge of insane \"
Another belter
Great writing
April 28th, 2024 18:17
peto said:
Rhyme and flow are immaculate
Also really enjoyed this line
\"Ten toes down near the edge of insane \"
Another belter
Great writing
April 28th, 2024 18:17
Shadowed
Cassie58 said:
This poem touched me. It is beautifully penned. Well done.
April 28th, 2024 15:38
Cassie58 said:
This poem touched me. It is beautifully penned. Well done.
April 28th, 2024 15:38
FraeMe
peto said:
A true battler
They may have 6taken your voice
Dont ever let them near your pen
Magic
April 25th, 2024 21:29
peto said:
A true battler
They may have 6taken your voice
Dont ever let them near your pen
Magic
April 25th, 2024 21:29
Breathing Room
Cassie58 said:
Done an about face. Like sweeping the cobwebs away and having a fresh start. I think we all need to do that once in a while. Ruby, I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for posting.
April 16th, 2024 23:56
Cassie58 said:
Done an about face. Like sweeping the cobwebs away and having a fresh start. I think we all need to do that once in a while. Ruby, I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for posting.
April 16th, 2024 23:56
Rebel Nature
peto said:
We should never have to beg for peace
\"Tempers flaring \" misunderstanding \"
\" not being heard \"
Universe conspiring
Enough to make anyone sick and tired
But that rebellious streak wins the day
Sharpest knife cutting cords
Dance in that light sage
Another fantastic write
March 8th, 2024 17:37
peto said:
We should never have to beg for peace
\"Tempers flaring \" misunderstanding \"
\" not being heard \"
Universe conspiring
Enough to make anyone sick and tired
But that rebellious streak wins the day
Sharpest knife cutting cords
Dance in that light sage
Another fantastic write
March 8th, 2024 17:37
How I Love
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the longing for deep connection and understanding in relationships. It portrays the journey from hesitation to openness with heartfelt sincerity, emphasizing the desire for genuine connection over superficial topics. It gracefully conveys the yearning for a meaningful connection with someone who embraces you entirely. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:40
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the longing for deep connection and understanding in relationships. It portrays the journey from hesitation to openness with heartfelt sincerity, emphasizing the desire for genuine connection over superficial topics. It gracefully conveys the yearning for a meaningful connection with someone who embraces you entirely. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:40
How I Love
peto said:
Magical
It seems when you give of yourself it\'s all or nothing
Yet you still seem a bit cautious to let it show
A brilliant write full of anxiety but also hope
Get that glow sage
You deserve it
More upbeat than usual
Just as high a standard
March 6th, 2024 16:31
peto said:
Magical
It seems when you give of yourself it\'s all or nothing
Yet you still seem a bit cautious to let it show
A brilliant write full of anxiety but also hope
Get that glow sage
You deserve it
More upbeat than usual
Just as high a standard
March 6th, 2024 16:31
How I Love
Bobby O said:
So we are simpatico ! I’ve reread and now realize where I jumped off course. You did good !!
March 6th, 2024 15:42
Bobby O said:
So we are simpatico ! I’ve reread and now realize where I jumped off course. You did good !!
March 6th, 2024 15:42
How I Love
Bobby O said:
Is that all logic ? Is there intertwined caution ? It’s might be the way you write, a declaration of an undying love and it might also be a bargain that represents a chance or a bargain that works against your goal. Allowing entry through a less restricted door is likely to bring a less committed partner. I used to negotiate for a living and with very few exceptions , to pander do you get a little piece because your too afraid of none
almost never works. This needs reassessment.
March 6th, 2024 04:47
Bobby O said:
Is that all logic ? Is there intertwined caution ? It’s might be the way you write, a declaration of an undying love and it might also be a bargain that represents a chance or a bargain that works against your goal. Allowing entry through a less restricted door is likely to bring a less committed partner. I used to negotiate for a living and with very few exceptions , to pander do you get a little piece because your too afraid of none
almost never works. This needs reassessment.
March 6th, 2024 04:47
Intended Release
sunshine777 said:
I really felt this, very deep and powerful. Great writing!
March 5th, 2024 20:07
sunshine777 said:
I really felt this, very deep and powerful. Great writing!
March 5th, 2024 20:07
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