Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Wandering
Bobby O said:
A measure quite like the moon. So excellent and so flowing into the space poetically drawn fir us to read. Thanks fir this
Nice write GREAT read
August 31st, 2023 18:36
Bobby O said:
A measure quite like the moon. So excellent and so flowing into the space poetically drawn fir us to read. Thanks fir this
Nice write GREAT read
August 31st, 2023 18:36
Wandering
peto said:
Magical again
The 2nd last verse is stunning
A pleasure to read
August 31st, 2023 16:39
peto said:
Magical again
The 2nd last verse is stunning
A pleasure to read
August 31st, 2023 16:39
Wandering
Parisab said:
Great word pairings of words-‘hours.flowers.’ ‘the center. the core.’
Surreal and spiritual!
August 31st, 2023 15:54
Parisab said:
Great word pairings of words-‘hours.flowers.’ ‘the center. the core.’
Surreal and spiritual!
August 31st, 2023 15:54
Standing Secret
LIZ said:
Oh let\'s go!!!! \"Dance when the waves come too fast\", that\'s actually what I do when things aren\'t going well. Sing and dance.....always helps! Beautiful!!!
August 29th, 2023 04:45
LIZ said:
Oh let\'s go!!!! \"Dance when the waves come too fast\", that\'s actually what I do when things aren\'t going well. Sing and dance.....always helps! Beautiful!!!
August 29th, 2023 04:45
Rare Wave
L. B. Mek said:
.. and sadness, becoming
a daily dose certainty of warped normality
while Sunlight is hidden
by our chosen sunglass perspectives of life...
(a beautifully crafted poem
I read and learn wise Poet)
thank you!
August 28th, 2023 03:12
L. B. Mek said:
.. and sadness, becoming
a daily dose certainty of warped normality
while Sunlight is hidden
by our chosen sunglass perspectives of life...
(a beautifully crafted poem
I read and learn wise Poet)
thank you!
August 28th, 2023 03:12
Choosing Time
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
loved every word and image
such a great read
August 28th, 2023 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
loved every word and image
such a great read
August 28th, 2023 03:07
Choosing Time
LIZ said:
Ahhhhhh my heart skipped a beat when I read \"I\'m waiting for you. and you know it, don\'t you?\" AND \"I know you and You know we.\"! My romantic...dark side jumped off the bed! You\'re on fire! 🔥
August 27th, 2023 16:17
LIZ said:
Ahhhhhh my heart skipped a beat when I read \"I\'m waiting for you. and you know it, don\'t you?\" AND \"I know you and You know we.\"! My romantic...dark side jumped off the bed! You\'re on fire! 🔥
August 27th, 2023 16:17
Rare Wave
LIZ said:
Oh....\"Shattered and the glue\'s not on this planet\", you speak to the corners of my heart. The kind of love we give and desire is from a different dimension, and there aren\'t many hearts strong enough to withstand it. Sometimes it\'s
necessary to reach into the darkness to...FEEL...not without losing a part of our sanity. Very rare indeed! Loved it!
August 27th, 2023 04:32
LIZ said:
Oh....\"Shattered and the glue\'s not on this planet\", you speak to the corners of my heart. The kind of love we give and desire is from a different dimension, and there aren\'t many hearts strong enough to withstand it. Sometimes it\'s
necessary to reach into the darkness to...FEEL...not without losing a part of our sanity. Very rare indeed! Loved it!
August 27th, 2023 04:32
Darkness of Introversion
2781 said:
I guess the hot coals would keep you feet moving
August 25th, 2023 17:25
2781 said:
I guess the hot coals would keep you feet moving
August 25th, 2023 17:25
Darkness of Introversion
LIZ said:
I LOVE this one!!! \"Nah, I’d rather dance alone in hell.\" You got that right!! 👏👏👏👏
August 25th, 2023 11:05
LIZ said:
I LOVE this one!!! \"Nah, I’d rather dance alone in hell.\" You got that right!! 👏👏👏👏
August 25th, 2023 11:05
Jump
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing such a great write, i related
so couldn\'t help scribbling a little reply
(do we jump
or are we pushed?
consequence of circumstance
as a director of our reactive actions
we begin, with wide eyes
and open heart\'s
then our hips are pulled
into a dodging game, without warning
or a warm-up
that\'s how our life\'s bruises and injuries
accrue...
still, if we\'ve done enough to survive
jump or pushed
what matters is that time will handle the rest
we just need to find a way to move on
as soon as we can, so as to not let
these bloodsucking parasites
waste anymore of our precious time and breath...)
August 25th, 2023 00:50
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing such a great write, i related
so couldn\'t help scribbling a little reply
(do we jump
or are we pushed?
consequence of circumstance
as a director of our reactive actions
we begin, with wide eyes
and open heart\'s
then our hips are pulled
into a dodging game, without warning
or a warm-up
that\'s how our life\'s bruises and injuries
accrue...
still, if we\'ve done enough to survive
jump or pushed
what matters is that time will handle the rest
we just need to find a way to move on
as soon as we can, so as to not let
these bloodsucking parasites
waste anymore of our precious time and breath...)
August 25th, 2023 00:50
DreaMe
L. B. Mek said:
such effortless flow
what an inspiring theme
just, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
more power to you
August 25th, 2023 00:41
L. B. Mek said:
such effortless flow
what an inspiring theme
just, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
more power to you
August 25th, 2023 00:41
Jump
LIZ said:
I feel you! \"Forced to take off running, can barely crawl\"----oh my!!! Because from tragedy we learn growth, discernment and understanding. But it\'s not easy! Let\'s jump....still!
August 23rd, 2023 13:31
LIZ said:
I feel you! \"Forced to take off running, can barely crawl\"----oh my!!! Because from tragedy we learn growth, discernment and understanding. But it\'s not easy! Let\'s jump....still!
August 23rd, 2023 13:31
Sequenced
peto said:
Brilliant write
The rhymes work for the reader so hopefully for you also
Deep emotional and honest
With talented delivery
Stay strong
August 22nd, 2023 08:17
peto said:
Brilliant write
The rhymes work for the reader so hopefully for you also
Deep emotional and honest
With talented delivery
Stay strong
August 22nd, 2023 08:17
Sequenced
hzugman said:
Very well put I S. Even home run hitters often strike out. Keep swinging.
August 21st, 2023 17:46
hzugman said:
Very well put I S. Even home run hitters often strike out. Keep swinging.
August 21st, 2023 17:46
Sequenced
LIZ said:
This might be my new favorite! \"So I write because that\'s what I\'m tasked to do.\"--hit me hard!!!! I loved it!!
August 21st, 2023 15:31
LIZ said:
This might be my new favorite! \"So I write because that\'s what I\'m tasked to do.\"--hit me hard!!!! I loved it!!
August 21st, 2023 15:31
Lone Wolf
Bobby O said:
I’m glad you’re not tamed. Be wild and challenge and take temporary repost to gather and continue to share your gift. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:36
Bobby O said:
I’m glad you’re not tamed. Be wild and challenge and take temporary repost to gather and continue to share your gift. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:36
The Genie\'s Price
Bobby O said:
This is good this is hood this is how poetry should climb into our minds w fantasize about as we whisper more than shout and dancing in the cloud design braved by poetic phrase you have defined. Or , I guess instead I could say nice?🏙️
August 19th, 2023 17:20
Bobby O said:
This is good this is hood this is how poetry should climb into our minds w fantasize about as we whisper more than shout and dancing in the cloud design braved by poetic phrase you have defined. Or , I guess instead I could say nice?🏙️
August 19th, 2023 17:20
The Genie\'s Price
LIZ said:
Talk about memories!!! Because while reading, I envisioned computer files being opened, showing me glimpses of my life; even the ones I didn\'t want to see! \"But it\'s in my mind always on replay. And continues to haunt me every single day\"- what a line!! Very nice! ❤️
August 19th, 2023 11:44
LIZ said:
Talk about memories!!! Because while reading, I envisioned computer files being opened, showing me glimpses of my life; even the ones I didn\'t want to see! \"But it\'s in my mind always on replay. And continues to haunt me every single day\"- what a line!! Very nice! ❤️
August 19th, 2023 11:44
Triq
Bobby O said:
This is nice. I read it three times and then my girl started to demand attention and all I had to do was throw the Dizzy Dean inverted screw ball , well, at least metaphorically. Instead I was very sage and i threw an Introverted line , right on target
My Patience was lost in an old batch so I just grabbed a line and got in the groove , this intrusion just as hard to patch cuz the next line was released and delivered smooth do she just quit talking her trash , of course later , I be stuck dealing with her wrath !
Oh, I really liked it enough to steal bunches of it.
August 19th, 2023 09:09
Bobby O said:
This is nice. I read it three times and then my girl started to demand attention and all I had to do was throw the Dizzy Dean inverted screw ball , well, at least metaphorically. Instead I was very sage and i threw an Introverted line , right on target
My Patience was lost in an old batch so I just grabbed a line and got in the groove , this intrusion just as hard to patch cuz the next line was released and delivered smooth do she just quit talking her trash , of course later , I be stuck dealing with her wrath !
Oh, I really liked it enough to steal bunches of it.
August 19th, 2023 09:09
Triq
LIZ said:
That\'s how it works! And there are a lot more layers than people realize! I enjoyed this one and was singing the whole time!! 😄
August 18th, 2023 05:20
LIZ said:
That\'s how it works! And there are a lot more layers than people realize! I enjoyed this one and was singing the whole time!! 😄
August 18th, 2023 05:20
Triq
David Wakeling said:
This bounces along like a song.Well done I love the rhyme.
August 18th, 2023 02:43
David Wakeling said:
This bounces along like a song.Well done I love the rhyme.
August 18th, 2023 02:43
DreaMe
LIZ said:
It\'s incredible when, after going through a difficult process, we realize it\'s up to us to create something new and magical! This is beautiful!
August 16th, 2023 15:33
LIZ said:
It\'s incredible when, after going through a difficult process, we realize it\'s up to us to create something new and magical! This is beautiful!
August 16th, 2023 15:33
The Edge
peto said:
Totally agree with scribbler
I honestly believe your last few writes have been on a different level
No sign of slowing down either
Superb
August 11th, 2023 11:08
peto said:
Totally agree with scribbler
I honestly believe your last few writes have been on a different level
No sign of slowing down either
Superb
August 11th, 2023 11:08
The Edge
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Introverted Sage, filled with beautiful and vicious imagery.
This when read, is eye nectar, and when read aloud, a treat for the ears.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 11th, 2023 11:03
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Introverted Sage, filled with beautiful and vicious imagery.
This when read, is eye nectar, and when read aloud, a treat for the ears.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 11th, 2023 11:03
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