Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
My Me
LIZ said:
\"Never met this human life, Yet you know my true name\" Muffled were my whispers, yet you heard the call\"! That\'s what love does! How beautiful!
September 5th, 2023 06:35
LIZ said:
\"Never met this human life, Yet you know my true name\" Muffled were my whispers, yet you heard the call\"! That\'s what love does! How beautiful!
September 5th, 2023 06:35
Bestia
L. B. Mek said:
let that rage, fuel your ink
dear Poet
tattoo you will, upon their ignorant
awareness
roar proud, let them remember
the feel
of an honest heart\'s unflinching passion..
stay strong! write bold
and find a path, to where that is enough
September 4th, 2023 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
let that rage, fuel your ink
dear Poet
tattoo you will, upon their ignorant
awareness
roar proud, let them remember
the feel
of an honest heart\'s unflinching passion..
stay strong! write bold
and find a path, to where that is enough
September 4th, 2023 04:30
Apexed
L. B. Mek said:
I relate and so naturally, rate
this inking of ambition\'s
bravely steadfast, transparency
(from your ink
to poesy\'s ears
may you be granted, all
that your tireless labour
deserves
dear Lighthouse poet
in your daring
you keep aflame our introverted
eyes of literary greed)
what a gift, to share with the world
thank you!
September 4th, 2023 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
I relate and so naturally, rate
this inking of ambition\'s
bravely steadfast, transparency
(from your ink
to poesy\'s ears
may you be granted, all
that your tireless labour
deserves
dear Lighthouse poet
in your daring
you keep aflame our introverted
eyes of literary greed)
what a gift, to share with the world
thank you!
September 4th, 2023 04:26
Bestia
LIZ said:
Very nice!! We do it to ourselves!!! \"Poor you - oh no - what a shame\" my favorite line! I love the tone!!! Totally enjoyed it!!
September 3rd, 2023 12:13
LIZ said:
Very nice!! We do it to ourselves!!! \"Poor you - oh no - what a shame\" my favorite line! I love the tone!!! Totally enjoyed it!!
September 3rd, 2023 12:13
Apexed
peto said:
4th line 1st verse
You succeeded sage
Super write
0pleasure to read
September 3rd, 2023 00:37
peto said:
4th line 1st verse
You succeeded sage
Super write
0pleasure to read
September 3rd, 2023 00:37
Apexed
LIZ said:
Well, you definitely don\'t need any classes. This is incredible! Enjoyed every line!
September 2nd, 2023 12:04
LIZ said:
Well, you definitely don\'t need any classes. This is incredible! Enjoyed every line!
September 2nd, 2023 12:04
Wandering
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'April bring powers.\'
amen
So many layers to mention
in this poetic symphony
of nature\'s symbolic omens
and introspection\'s portents..
such choice wording and flow
thank you! dear Poet
(will follow the link now)
September 1st, 2023 02:37
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'April bring powers.\'
amen
So many layers to mention
in this poetic symphony
of nature\'s symbolic omens
and introspection\'s portents..
such choice wording and flow
thank you! dear Poet
(will follow the link now)
September 1st, 2023 02:37
Wandering
Bobby O said:
A measure quite like the moon. So excellent and so flowing into the space poetically drawn fir us to read. Thanks fir this
Nice write GREAT read
August 31st, 2023 18:36
Bobby O said:
A measure quite like the moon. So excellent and so flowing into the space poetically drawn fir us to read. Thanks fir this
Nice write GREAT read
August 31st, 2023 18:36
Wandering
peto said:
Magical again
The 2nd last verse is stunning
A pleasure to read
August 31st, 2023 16:39
peto said:
Magical again
The 2nd last verse is stunning
A pleasure to read
August 31st, 2023 16:39
Wandering
Parisab said:
Great word pairings of words-‘hours.flowers.’ ‘the center. the core.’
Surreal and spiritual!
August 31st, 2023 15:54
Parisab said:
Great word pairings of words-‘hours.flowers.’ ‘the center. the core.’
Surreal and spiritual!
August 31st, 2023 15:54
Standing Secret
LIZ said:
Oh let\'s go!!!! \"Dance when the waves come too fast\", that\'s actually what I do when things aren\'t going well. Sing and dance.....always helps! Beautiful!!!
August 29th, 2023 04:45
LIZ said:
Oh let\'s go!!!! \"Dance when the waves come too fast\", that\'s actually what I do when things aren\'t going well. Sing and dance.....always helps! Beautiful!!!
August 29th, 2023 04:45
Rare Wave
L. B. Mek said:
.. and sadness, becoming
a daily dose certainty of warped normality
while Sunlight is hidden
by our chosen sunglass perspectives of life...
(a beautifully crafted poem
I read and learn wise Poet)
thank you!
August 28th, 2023 03:12
L. B. Mek said:
.. and sadness, becoming
a daily dose certainty of warped normality
while Sunlight is hidden
by our chosen sunglass perspectives of life...
(a beautifully crafted poem
I read and learn wise Poet)
thank you!
August 28th, 2023 03:12
Choosing Time
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
loved every word and image
such a great read
August 28th, 2023 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
loved every word and image
such a great read
August 28th, 2023 03:07
Choosing Time
LIZ said:
Ahhhhhh my heart skipped a beat when I read \"I\'m waiting for you. and you know it, don\'t you?\" AND \"I know you and You know we.\"! My romantic...dark side jumped off the bed! You\'re on fire! 🔥
August 27th, 2023 16:17
LIZ said:
Ahhhhhh my heart skipped a beat when I read \"I\'m waiting for you. and you know it, don\'t you?\" AND \"I know you and You know we.\"! My romantic...dark side jumped off the bed! You\'re on fire! 🔥
August 27th, 2023 16:17
Rare Wave
LIZ said:
Oh....\"Shattered and the glue\'s not on this planet\", you speak to the corners of my heart. The kind of love we give and desire is from a different dimension, and there aren\'t many hearts strong enough to withstand it. Sometimes it\'s
necessary to reach into the darkness to...FEEL...not without losing a part of our sanity. Very rare indeed! Loved it!
August 27th, 2023 04:32
LIZ said:
Oh....\"Shattered and the glue\'s not on this planet\", you speak to the corners of my heart. The kind of love we give and desire is from a different dimension, and there aren\'t many hearts strong enough to withstand it. Sometimes it\'s
necessary to reach into the darkness to...FEEL...not without losing a part of our sanity. Very rare indeed! Loved it!
August 27th, 2023 04:32
Darkness of Introversion
2781 said:
I guess the hot coals would keep you feet moving
August 25th, 2023 17:25
2781 said:
I guess the hot coals would keep you feet moving
August 25th, 2023 17:25
Darkness of Introversion
LIZ said:
I LOVE this one!!! \"Nah, I’d rather dance alone in hell.\" You got that right!! 👏👏👏👏
August 25th, 2023 11:05
LIZ said:
I LOVE this one!!! \"Nah, I’d rather dance alone in hell.\" You got that right!! 👏👏👏👏
August 25th, 2023 11:05
Jump
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing such a great write, i related
so couldn\'t help scribbling a little reply
(do we jump
or are we pushed?
consequence of circumstance
as a director of our reactive actions
we begin, with wide eyes
and open heart\'s
then our hips are pulled
into a dodging game, without warning
or a warm-up
that\'s how our life\'s bruises and injuries
accrue...
still, if we\'ve done enough to survive
jump or pushed
what matters is that time will handle the rest
we just need to find a way to move on
as soon as we can, so as to not let
these bloodsucking parasites
waste anymore of our precious time and breath...)
August 25th, 2023 00:50
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing such a great write, i related
so couldn\'t help scribbling a little reply
(do we jump
or are we pushed?
consequence of circumstance
as a director of our reactive actions
we begin, with wide eyes
and open heart\'s
then our hips are pulled
into a dodging game, without warning
or a warm-up
that\'s how our life\'s bruises and injuries
accrue...
still, if we\'ve done enough to survive
jump or pushed
what matters is that time will handle the rest
we just need to find a way to move on
as soon as we can, so as to not let
these bloodsucking parasites
waste anymore of our precious time and breath...)
August 25th, 2023 00:50
DreaMe
L. B. Mek said:
such effortless flow
what an inspiring theme
just, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
more power to you
August 25th, 2023 00:41
L. B. Mek said:
such effortless flow
what an inspiring theme
just, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
more power to you
August 25th, 2023 00:41
Jump
LIZ said:
I feel you! \"Forced to take off running, can barely crawl\"----oh my!!! Because from tragedy we learn growth, discernment and understanding. But it\'s not easy! Let\'s jump....still!
August 23rd, 2023 13:31
LIZ said:
I feel you! \"Forced to take off running, can barely crawl\"----oh my!!! Because from tragedy we learn growth, discernment and understanding. But it\'s not easy! Let\'s jump....still!
August 23rd, 2023 13:31
Sequenced
peto said:
Brilliant write
The rhymes work for the reader so hopefully for you also
Deep emotional and honest
With talented delivery
Stay strong
August 22nd, 2023 08:17
peto said:
Brilliant write
The rhymes work for the reader so hopefully for you also
Deep emotional and honest
With talented delivery
Stay strong
August 22nd, 2023 08:17
Sequenced
hzugman said:
Very well put I S. Even home run hitters often strike out. Keep swinging.
August 21st, 2023 17:46
hzugman said:
Very well put I S. Even home run hitters often strike out. Keep swinging.
August 21st, 2023 17:46
Sequenced
LIZ said:
This might be my new favorite! \"So I write because that\'s what I\'m tasked to do.\"--hit me hard!!!! I loved it!!
August 21st, 2023 15:31
LIZ said:
This might be my new favorite! \"So I write because that\'s what I\'m tasked to do.\"--hit me hard!!!! I loved it!!
August 21st, 2023 15:31
Lone Wolf
Bobby O said:
I’m glad you’re not tamed. Be wild and challenge and take temporary repost to gather and continue to share your gift. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:36
Bobby O said:
I’m glad you’re not tamed. Be wild and challenge and take temporary repost to gather and continue to share your gift. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:36
The Genie\'s Price
Bobby O said:
This is good this is hood this is how poetry should climb into our minds w fantasize about as we whisper more than shout and dancing in the cloud design braved by poetic phrase you have defined. Or , I guess instead I could say nice?🏙️
August 19th, 2023 17:20
Bobby O said:
This is good this is hood this is how poetry should climb into our minds w fantasize about as we whisper more than shout and dancing in the cloud design braved by poetic phrase you have defined. Or , I guess instead I could say nice?🏙️
August 19th, 2023 17:20
The Genie\'s Price
LIZ said:
Talk about memories!!! Because while reading, I envisioned computer files being opened, showing me glimpses of my life; even the ones I didn\'t want to see! \"But it\'s in my mind always on replay. And continues to haunt me every single day\"- what a line!! Very nice! ❤️
August 19th, 2023 11:44
LIZ said:
Talk about memories!!! Because while reading, I envisioned computer files being opened, showing me glimpses of my life; even the ones I didn\'t want to see! \"But it\'s in my mind always on replay. And continues to haunt me every single day\"- what a line!! Very nice! ❤️
August 19th, 2023 11:44
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