Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Triq
Bobby O said:
This is nice. I read it three times and then my girl started to demand attention and all I had to do was throw the Dizzy Dean inverted screw ball , well, at least metaphorically. Instead I was very sage and i threw an Introverted line , right on target
My Patience was lost in an old batch so I just grabbed a line and got in the groove , this intrusion just as hard to patch cuz the next line was released and delivered smooth do she just quit talking her trash , of course later , I be stuck dealing with her wrath !
Oh, I really liked it enough to steal bunches of it.
August 19th, 2023 09:09
Bobby O said:
This is nice. I read it three times and then my girl started to demand attention and all I had to do was throw the Dizzy Dean inverted screw ball , well, at least metaphorically. Instead I was very sage and i threw an Introverted line , right on target
My Patience was lost in an old batch so I just grabbed a line and got in the groove , this intrusion just as hard to patch cuz the next line was released and delivered smooth do she just quit talking her trash , of course later , I be stuck dealing with her wrath !
Oh, I really liked it enough to steal bunches of it.
August 19th, 2023 09:09
Triq
LIZ said:
That\'s how it works! And there are a lot more layers than people realize! I enjoyed this one and was singing the whole time!! đ
August 18th, 2023 05:20
LIZ said:
That\'s how it works! And there are a lot more layers than people realize! I enjoyed this one and was singing the whole time!! đ
August 18th, 2023 05:20
Triq
David Wakeling said:
This bounces along like a song.Well done I love the rhyme.
August 18th, 2023 02:43
David Wakeling said:
This bounces along like a song.Well done I love the rhyme.
August 18th, 2023 02:43
DreaMe
LIZ said:
It\'s incredible when, after going through a difficult process, we realize it\'s up to us to create something new and magical! This is beautiful!
August 16th, 2023 15:33
LIZ said:
It\'s incredible when, after going through a difficult process, we realize it\'s up to us to create something new and magical! This is beautiful!
August 16th, 2023 15:33
The Edge
peto said:
Totally agree with scribbler
I honestly believe your last few writes have been on a different level
No sign of slowing down either
Superb
August 11th, 2023 11:08
peto said:
Totally agree with scribbler
I honestly believe your last few writes have been on a different level
No sign of slowing down either
Superb
August 11th, 2023 11:08
The Edge
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Introverted Sage, filled with beautiful and vicious imagery.
This when read, is eye nectar, and when read aloud, a treat for the ears.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 11th, 2023 11:03
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Introverted Sage, filled with beautiful and vicious imagery.
This when read, is eye nectar, and when read aloud, a treat for the ears.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 11th, 2023 11:03
Six Word Stranger
LIZ said:
This one might be my favorite! Beautiful!!! â¤ď¸
August 9th, 2023 14:21
LIZ said:
This one might be my favorite! Beautiful!!! â¤ď¸
August 9th, 2023 14:21
Six Word Stranger
peto said:
And what an answer you have given
Loved the rhyme again
Your writing appears to be up yet another level
Brilliant stuff
August 9th, 2023 11:15
peto said:
And what an answer you have given
Loved the rhyme again
Your writing appears to be up yet another level
Brilliant stuff
August 9th, 2023 11:15
Spirit Does
peto said:
\"Spirit writing on the walls\"
And all over this page
This is magical
Love it
August 9th, 2023 10:58
peto said:
\"Spirit writing on the walls\"
And all over this page
This is magical
Love it
August 9th, 2023 10:58
Spirit Does
David Wakeling said:
This uses the world Spirit quite a lot but doesn\'t explain what the Spirit really is.For me there is no Spirit.But hey what would I know
August 7th, 2023 18:12
David Wakeling said:
This uses the world Spirit quite a lot but doesn\'t explain what the Spirit really is.For me there is no Spirit.But hey what would I know
August 7th, 2023 18:12
Spirit Does
Bobby O said:
Makes me very nostalgic. I had a girlfriend named Spirit once. When I read that lineâwatches like a hawkâ I got shivers.
August 7th, 2023 17:23
Bobby O said:
Makes me very nostalgic. I had a girlfriend named Spirit once. When I read that lineâwatches like a hawkâ I got shivers.
August 7th, 2023 17:23
The One Without a Name
sonal monhyung said:
You are not alone with this thought .
August 6th, 2023 15:41
sonal monhyung said:
You are not alone with this thought .
August 6th, 2023 15:41
The One Without a Name
LIZ said:
Oh how beautifully sad! đ Thank you for sharing!
August 5th, 2023 12:44
LIZ said:
Oh how beautifully sad! đ Thank you for sharing!
August 5th, 2023 12:44
Wings Don\'t Fail Me Now
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we just need to believe and have faith in ourselves .. a nicely expressed writing ))
August 5th, 2023 03:49
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we just need to believe and have faith in ourselves .. a nicely expressed writing ))
August 5th, 2023 03:49
Time Keeper
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'\'Tea leaves thwart those who court catastrophe,\'\'
from \'Ennui\' by Sylvia Path)
August 4th, 2023 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'\'Tea leaves thwart those who court catastrophe,\'\'
from \'Ennui\' by Sylvia Path)
August 4th, 2023 03:41
Coincidence
Introverted Sage said:
Thanks so much!
Your comments make me smile.
Your time and kind words are appreciated!
August 3rd, 2023 15:52
Introverted Sage said:
Thanks so much!
Your comments make me smile.
Your time and kind words are appreciated!
August 3rd, 2023 15:52
Coincidence
peto said:
It\'s me again
Love reading from you
Got a certain unique style
August 2nd, 2023 05:20
peto said:
It\'s me again
Love reading from you
Got a certain unique style
August 2nd, 2023 05:20
True Sorcerer\'s Brew
peto said:
Loved this one
Especially the language used
Authenticated the prompt
Magic
July 31st, 2023 02:02
peto said:
Loved this one
Especially the language used
Authenticated the prompt
Magic
July 31st, 2023 02:02
Denied
Bobby O said:
Nice write. I get it but also think that if I declared in that way it wouldâve fit my need and certainty. Whether indecision or dysfunction or miscreance (?) the fact is they left and it wonât be fixed so my fixation pointed toward ends in the circle file of no resource.
July 30th, 2023 00:24
Bobby O said:
Nice write. I get it but also think that if I declared in that way it wouldâve fit my need and certainty. Whether indecision or dysfunction or miscreance (?) the fact is they left and it wonât be fixed so my fixation pointed toward ends in the circle file of no resource.
July 30th, 2023 00:24
Schmog
L. B. Mek said:
who will forgive our despicable abandonment of those
who salvaged, scraped and bled
to curate this freedom we assume
as the property of youth
our nihilism assumptions making us think
it won\'t be us in their shoes, in but
a blink...
(I\'m truly ashamed that I have to share
this generational
stain, on our collective names)
an important write, dear Poet
July 28th, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
who will forgive our despicable abandonment of those
who salvaged, scraped and bled
to curate this freedom we assume
as the property of youth
our nihilism assumptions making us think
it won\'t be us in their shoes, in but
a blink...
(I\'m truly ashamed that I have to share
this generational
stain, on our collective names)
an important write, dear Poet
July 28th, 2023 03:47
Schmog
Bobby O said:
For a light whose soul was sold. It the kind of line that invites a reatesder to dig in and then multiple scenarios jump into mind leaving not clarity but interesting immersive participation.
What couldâve better?
Nice write hood read. Mr Peto
July 28th, 2023 02:08
Bobby O said:
For a light whose soul was sold. It the kind of line that invites a reatesder to dig in and then multiple scenarios jump into mind leaving not clarity but interesting immersive participation.
What couldâve better?
Nice write hood read. Mr Peto
July 28th, 2023 02:08
A Perfect World
peto said:
Loved it
From beginning to brilliant ending
Top notch writing
July 26th, 2023 01:47
peto said:
Loved it
From beginning to brilliant ending
Top notch writing
July 26th, 2023 01:47
Segment
Bobby O said:
Self created demise- top three places ever to start a story. You delivered and jumped off from that foundation with a plan and a journey. Itâs a great way to create. Nice write. Good read
July 24th, 2023 18:14
Bobby O said:
Self created demise- top three places ever to start a story. You delivered and jumped off from that foundation with a plan and a journey. Itâs a great way to create. Nice write. Good read
July 24th, 2023 18:14
Seeing Eye
L. B. Mek said:
I think what hinders us most
is all their segregating
toxic debris of lies
bombarding us all the time..
most of our eyes, yearn
to see the world as it is
(a great write, dear Poet
thank you)
July 24th, 2023 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
I think what hinders us most
is all their segregating
toxic debris of lies
bombarding us all the time..
most of our eyes, yearn
to see the world as it is
(a great write, dear Poet
thank you)
July 24th, 2023 04:11
Ď
Poetic Dan said:
Wow and wow again. This is, as are you! A true gift.
Thank you for sharing
July 24th, 2023 03:12
Poetic Dan said:
Wow and wow again. This is, as are you! A true gift.
Thank you for sharing
July 24th, 2023 03:12
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