Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Schmog
L. B. Mek said:
who will forgive our despicable abandonment of those
who salvaged, scraped and bled
to curate this freedom we assume
as the property of youth
our nihilism assumptions making us think
it won\'t be us in their shoes, in but
a blink...
(I\'m truly ashamed that I have to share
this generational
stain, on our collective names)
an important write, dear Poet
July 28th, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
who will forgive our despicable abandonment of those
who salvaged, scraped and bled
to curate this freedom we assume
as the property of youth
our nihilism assumptions making us think
it won\'t be us in their shoes, in but
a blink...
(I\'m truly ashamed that I have to share
this generational
stain, on our collective names)
an important write, dear Poet
July 28th, 2023 03:47
Schmog
Bobby O said:
For a light whose soul was sold. It the kind of line that invites a reatesder to dig in and then multiple scenarios jump into mind leaving not clarity but interesting immersive participation.
What could’ve better?
Nice write hood read. Mr Peto
July 28th, 2023 02:08
Bobby O said:
For a light whose soul was sold. It the kind of line that invites a reatesder to dig in and then multiple scenarios jump into mind leaving not clarity but interesting immersive participation.
What could’ve better?
Nice write hood read. Mr Peto
July 28th, 2023 02:08
A Perfect World
peto said:
Loved it
From beginning to brilliant ending
Top notch writing
July 26th, 2023 01:47
peto said:
Loved it
From beginning to brilliant ending
Top notch writing
July 26th, 2023 01:47
Segment
Bobby O said:
Self created demise- top three places ever to start a story. You delivered and jumped off from that foundation with a plan and a journey. It’s a great way to create. Nice write. Good read
July 24th, 2023 18:14
Bobby O said:
Self created demise- top three places ever to start a story. You delivered and jumped off from that foundation with a plan and a journey. It’s a great way to create. Nice write. Good read
July 24th, 2023 18:14
Seeing Eye
L. B. Mek said:
I think what hinders us most
is all their segregating
toxic debris of lies
bombarding us all the time..
most of our eyes, yearn
to see the world as it is
(a great write, dear Poet
thank you)
July 24th, 2023 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
I think what hinders us most
is all their segregating
toxic debris of lies
bombarding us all the time..
most of our eyes, yearn
to see the world as it is
(a great write, dear Poet
thank you)
July 24th, 2023 04:11
φ
Poetic Dan said:
Wow and wow again. This is, as are you! A true gift.
Thank you for sharing
July 24th, 2023 03:12
Poetic Dan said:
Wow and wow again. This is, as are you! A true gift.
Thank you for sharing
July 24th, 2023 03:12
Seeing Eye
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s my kind of cuppa tea! Thank and have a wonderful morning
July 24th, 2023 03:07
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s my kind of cuppa tea! Thank and have a wonderful morning
July 24th, 2023 03:07
Broken Light
LIZ said:
\"So sick of superficial, Just give me something real\" YES please!!!!! Well done!
July 22nd, 2023 17:41
LIZ said:
\"So sick of superficial, Just give me something real\" YES please!!!!! Well done!
July 22nd, 2023 17:41
Broken Light
peto said:
Ah but these words reflect the light
A wee gem of a write
Loved reading
July 22nd, 2023 16:29
peto said:
Ah but these words reflect the light
A wee gem of a write
Loved reading
July 22nd, 2023 16:29
Graced
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'So how do you build - when
your foundation is always shaking?
(Neil Gaiman quote \'Every hour wounds. The last one kills.\')
\'Destruction translates to clarity in the making.
Clearing the way for the path I\'ll be taking.\'
\'As I learn to heal my wounds
and how to stop the bleed.\'
\'Widening my view - pan right and pan left.
Removing the haze sent to keep me bereft.\'
July 21st, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'So how do you build - when
your foundation is always shaking?
(Neil Gaiman quote \'Every hour wounds. The last one kills.\')
\'Destruction translates to clarity in the making.
Clearing the way for the path I\'ll be taking.\'
\'As I learn to heal my wounds
and how to stop the bleed.\'
\'Widening my view - pan right and pan left.
Removing the haze sent to keep me bereft.\'
July 21st, 2023 03:08
That Voice
L. B. Mek said:
so true if we are but humble
enough, to learn
our mistakes, can anchor
our evolution
we need only
accept accountability and strive
to do better
next time we\'re given the opportunity
a great write, dear Poet
thank you
July 17th, 2023 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
so true if we are but humble
enough, to learn
our mistakes, can anchor
our evolution
we need only
accept accountability and strive
to do better
next time we\'re given the opportunity
a great write, dear Poet
thank you
July 17th, 2023 04:57
That Voice
Ok Waleed said:
Make that voice work for you
It may sound corny but true
good poem sage
I hope to see more rage
July 16th, 2023 23:14
Ok Waleed said:
Make that voice work for you
It may sound corny but true
good poem sage
I hope to see more rage
July 16th, 2023 23:14
Singing Blues
peto said:
This has a great flow
Almost like singing rather than reading
Perfect rhythm to go with the blues
Love a good rhyme and ending also
Ticked every box
July 12th, 2023 15:03
peto said:
This has a great flow
Almost like singing rather than reading
Perfect rhythm to go with the blues
Love a good rhyme and ending also
Ticked every box
July 12th, 2023 15:03
The Bigger They Are
Introverted Sage said:
Warms my heart, your kind words!
I appreciate your time and patronage
July 11th, 2023 22:00
Introverted Sage said:
Warms my heart, your kind words!
I appreciate your time and patronage
July 11th, 2023 22:00
The Bigger They Are
peto said:
Flows like a dream
Each verse could stand alone as poem
The 1st is amazing
Thoroughly enjoyed this one
July 11th, 2023 10:54
peto said:
Flows like a dream
Each verse could stand alone as poem
The 1st is amazing
Thoroughly enjoyed this one
July 11th, 2023 10:54
Reis
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I liked reading your poem 🙂
A lovely , interesting and engaging writing
July 11th, 2023 05:52
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I liked reading your poem 🙂
A lovely , interesting and engaging writing
July 11th, 2023 05:52
Duple
Introverted Sage said:
Indeed it is!
A constant journey with a myriad of paths not for the faint of heart.. lol
You\'re kind words and time to review my work are so appreciated!
🪶Happy writing
July 10th, 2023 19:03
Introverted Sage said:
Indeed it is!
A constant journey with a myriad of paths not for the faint of heart.. lol
You\'re kind words and time to review my work are so appreciated!
🪶Happy writing
July 10th, 2023 19:03
Duple
L. B. Mek said:
\'still there, poking away at my heart\'
(a great write
I so relate dear Poet)
\'Miss the beat - collect the breadcrumbs.
Higher moments - closing gaps of time.\'
hindsight, a curse and mercy
we can trace our missteps
while dreaming of a future
where we get our choices right
July 10th, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'still there, poking away at my heart\'
(a great write
I so relate dear Poet)
\'Miss the beat - collect the breadcrumbs.
Higher moments - closing gaps of time.\'
hindsight, a curse and mercy
we can trace our missteps
while dreaming of a future
where we get our choices right
July 10th, 2023 03:08
Sea Faring
-Iris- said:
Such lovely and creative writing. Amazing read - gets the imagination to run wild.
July 9th, 2023 09:00
-Iris- said:
Such lovely and creative writing. Amazing read - gets the imagination to run wild.
July 9th, 2023 09:00
Guided
peto said:
You really have something special
A bit of a change up in style
Rhyme and content are great
And
You tend to leave with a killer last line
No change here then
July 9th, 2023 04:55
peto said:
You really have something special
A bit of a change up in style
Rhyme and content are great
And
You tend to leave with a killer last line
No change here then
July 9th, 2023 04:55
Sea Faring
Bobby O said:
It’s real nice I felt invigorated by the tribute to beauty and wonder if it’s symbolic of someone yiu desire?
July 7th, 2023 16:23
Bobby O said:
It’s real nice I felt invigorated by the tribute to beauty and wonder if it’s symbolic of someone yiu desire?
July 7th, 2023 16:23
Sea Faring
L. B. Mek said:
admittedly i did get a little lost
in the sheer abundance of your vivid imagery
but, as a reading experience
what a poetic treat, thank you!
July 7th, 2023 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
admittedly i did get a little lost
in the sheer abundance of your vivid imagery
but, as a reading experience
what a poetic treat, thank you!
July 7th, 2023 05:32
Sea Faring
peto said:
This is a classic the rhyme is superb
First verse in particular is dynamite
Great read
July 7th, 2023 03:33
peto said:
This is a classic the rhyme is superb
First verse in particular is dynamite
Great read
July 7th, 2023 03:33
Words That Cost
peto said:
Sounds like a decision has been made
When you can see a soul you gotta trust your instincts
Always a meaty read
Absorbing
July 5th, 2023 14:29
peto said:
Sounds like a decision has been made
When you can see a soul you gotta trust your instincts
Always a meaty read
Absorbing
July 5th, 2023 14:29
This Dream
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting writing and nicely expressed 🙂
July 5th, 2023 01:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting writing and nicely expressed 🙂
July 5th, 2023 01:18
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