Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Six Word Stranger
peto said:
And what an answer you have given
Loved the rhyme again
Your writing appears to be up yet another level
Brilliant stuff
August 9th, 2023 11:15
peto said:
And what an answer you have given
Loved the rhyme again
Your writing appears to be up yet another level
Brilliant stuff
August 9th, 2023 11:15
Spirit Does
peto said:
\"Spirit writing on the walls\"
And all over this page
This is magical
Love it
August 9th, 2023 10:58
peto said:
\"Spirit writing on the walls\"
And all over this page
This is magical
Love it
August 9th, 2023 10:58
Spirit Does
David Wakeling said:
This uses the world Spirit quite a lot but doesn\'t explain what the Spirit really is.For me there is no Spirit.But hey what would I know
August 7th, 2023 18:12
David Wakeling said:
This uses the world Spirit quite a lot but doesn\'t explain what the Spirit really is.For me there is no Spirit.But hey what would I know
August 7th, 2023 18:12
Spirit Does
Bobby O said:
Makes me very nostalgic. I had a girlfriend named Spirit once. When I read that line”watches like a hawk” I got shivers.
August 7th, 2023 17:23
Bobby O said:
Makes me very nostalgic. I had a girlfriend named Spirit once. When I read that line”watches like a hawk” I got shivers.
August 7th, 2023 17:23
The One Without a Name
sonal monhyung said:
You are not alone with this thought .
August 6th, 2023 15:41
sonal monhyung said:
You are not alone with this thought .
August 6th, 2023 15:41
The One Without a Name
LIZ said:
Oh how beautifully sad! 💔 Thank you for sharing!
August 5th, 2023 12:44
LIZ said:
Oh how beautifully sad! 💔 Thank you for sharing!
August 5th, 2023 12:44
Wings Don\'t Fail Me Now
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we just need to believe and have faith in ourselves .. a nicely expressed writing ))
August 5th, 2023 03:49
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we just need to believe and have faith in ourselves .. a nicely expressed writing ))
August 5th, 2023 03:49
Time Keeper
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'\'Tea leaves thwart those who court catastrophe,\'\'
from \'Ennui\' by Sylvia Path)
August 4th, 2023 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'\'Tea leaves thwart those who court catastrophe,\'\'
from \'Ennui\' by Sylvia Path)
August 4th, 2023 03:41
Coincidence
Introverted Sage said:
Thanks so much!
Your comments make me smile.
Your time and kind words are appreciated!
August 3rd, 2023 15:52
Introverted Sage said:
Thanks so much!
Your comments make me smile.
Your time and kind words are appreciated!
August 3rd, 2023 15:52
Coincidence
peto said:
It\'s me again
Love reading from you
Got a certain unique style
August 2nd, 2023 05:20
peto said:
It\'s me again
Love reading from you
Got a certain unique style
August 2nd, 2023 05:20
True Sorcerer\'s Brew
peto said:
Loved this one
Especially the language used
Authenticated the prompt
Magic
July 31st, 2023 02:02
peto said:
Loved this one
Especially the language used
Authenticated the prompt
Magic
July 31st, 2023 02:02
Denied
Bobby O said:
Nice write. I get it but also think that if I declared in that way it would’ve fit my need and certainty. Whether indecision or dysfunction or miscreance (?) the fact is they left and it won’t be fixed so my fixation pointed toward ends in the circle file of no resource.
July 30th, 2023 00:24
Bobby O said:
Nice write. I get it but also think that if I declared in that way it would’ve fit my need and certainty. Whether indecision or dysfunction or miscreance (?) the fact is they left and it won’t be fixed so my fixation pointed toward ends in the circle file of no resource.
July 30th, 2023 00:24
Schmog
L. B. Mek said:
who will forgive our despicable abandonment of those
who salvaged, scraped and bled
to curate this freedom we assume
as the property of youth
our nihilism assumptions making us think
it won\'t be us in their shoes, in but
a blink...
(I\'m truly ashamed that I have to share
this generational
stain, on our collective names)
an important write, dear Poet
July 28th, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
who will forgive our despicable abandonment of those
who salvaged, scraped and bled
to curate this freedom we assume
as the property of youth
our nihilism assumptions making us think
it won\'t be us in their shoes, in but
a blink...
(I\'m truly ashamed that I have to share
this generational
stain, on our collective names)
an important write, dear Poet
July 28th, 2023 03:47
Schmog
Bobby O said:
For a light whose soul was sold. It the kind of line that invites a reatesder to dig in and then multiple scenarios jump into mind leaving not clarity but interesting immersive participation.
What could’ve better?
Nice write hood read. Mr Peto
July 28th, 2023 02:08
Bobby O said:
For a light whose soul was sold. It the kind of line that invites a reatesder to dig in and then multiple scenarios jump into mind leaving not clarity but interesting immersive participation.
What could’ve better?
Nice write hood read. Mr Peto
July 28th, 2023 02:08
A Perfect World
peto said:
Loved it
From beginning to brilliant ending
Top notch writing
July 26th, 2023 01:47
peto said:
Loved it
From beginning to brilliant ending
Top notch writing
July 26th, 2023 01:47
Segment
Bobby O said:
Self created demise- top three places ever to start a story. You delivered and jumped off from that foundation with a plan and a journey. It’s a great way to create. Nice write. Good read
July 24th, 2023 18:14
Bobby O said:
Self created demise- top three places ever to start a story. You delivered and jumped off from that foundation with a plan and a journey. It’s a great way to create. Nice write. Good read
July 24th, 2023 18:14
Seeing Eye
L. B. Mek said:
I think what hinders us most
is all their segregating
toxic debris of lies
bombarding us all the time..
most of our eyes, yearn
to see the world as it is
(a great write, dear Poet
thank you)
July 24th, 2023 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
I think what hinders us most
is all their segregating
toxic debris of lies
bombarding us all the time..
most of our eyes, yearn
to see the world as it is
(a great write, dear Poet
thank you)
July 24th, 2023 04:11
φ
Poetic Dan said:
Wow and wow again. This is, as are you! A true gift.
Thank you for sharing
July 24th, 2023 03:12
Poetic Dan said:
Wow and wow again. This is, as are you! A true gift.
Thank you for sharing
July 24th, 2023 03:12
Seeing Eye
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s my kind of cuppa tea! Thank and have a wonderful morning
July 24th, 2023 03:07
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s my kind of cuppa tea! Thank and have a wonderful morning
July 24th, 2023 03:07
Broken Light
LIZ said:
\"So sick of superficial, Just give me something real\" YES please!!!!! Well done!
July 22nd, 2023 17:41
LIZ said:
\"So sick of superficial, Just give me something real\" YES please!!!!! Well done!
July 22nd, 2023 17:41
Broken Light
peto said:
Ah but these words reflect the light
A wee gem of a write
Loved reading
July 22nd, 2023 16:29
peto said:
Ah but these words reflect the light
A wee gem of a write
Loved reading
July 22nd, 2023 16:29
Graced
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'So how do you build - when
your foundation is always shaking?
(Neil Gaiman quote \'Every hour wounds. The last one kills.\')
\'Destruction translates to clarity in the making.
Clearing the way for the path I\'ll be taking.\'
\'As I learn to heal my wounds
and how to stop the bleed.\'
\'Widening my view - pan right and pan left.
Removing the haze sent to keep me bereft.\'
July 21st, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'So how do you build - when
your foundation is always shaking?
(Neil Gaiman quote \'Every hour wounds. The last one kills.\')
\'Destruction translates to clarity in the making.
Clearing the way for the path I\'ll be taking.\'
\'As I learn to heal my wounds
and how to stop the bleed.\'
\'Widening my view - pan right and pan left.
Removing the haze sent to keep me bereft.\'
July 21st, 2023 03:08
That Voice
L. B. Mek said:
so true if we are but humble
enough, to learn
our mistakes, can anchor
our evolution
we need only
accept accountability and strive
to do better
next time we\'re given the opportunity
a great write, dear Poet
thank you
July 17th, 2023 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
so true if we are but humble
enough, to learn
our mistakes, can anchor
our evolution
we need only
accept accountability and strive
to do better
next time we\'re given the opportunity
a great write, dear Poet
thank you
July 17th, 2023 04:57
That Voice
Ok Waleed said:
Make that voice work for you
It may sound corny but true
good poem sage
I hope to see more rage
July 16th, 2023 23:14
Ok Waleed said:
Make that voice work for you
It may sound corny but true
good poem sage
I hope to see more rage
July 16th, 2023 23:14
Singing Blues
peto said:
This has a great flow
Almost like singing rather than reading
Perfect rhythm to go with the blues
Love a good rhyme and ending also
Ticked every box
July 12th, 2023 15:03
peto said:
This has a great flow
Almost like singing rather than reading
Perfect rhythm to go with the blues
Love a good rhyme and ending also
Ticked every box
July 12th, 2023 15:03
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