Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
DreaMe
L. B. Mek said:
such effortless flow
what an inspiring theme
just, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
more power to you
August 25th, 2023 00:41
L. B. Mek said:
such effortless flow
what an inspiring theme
just, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
more power to you
August 25th, 2023 00:41
Jump
LIZ said:
I feel you! \"Forced to take off running, can barely crawl\"----oh my!!! Because from tragedy we learn growth, discernment and understanding. But it\'s not easy! Let\'s jump....still!
August 23rd, 2023 13:31
LIZ said:
I feel you! \"Forced to take off running, can barely crawl\"----oh my!!! Because from tragedy we learn growth, discernment and understanding. But it\'s not easy! Let\'s jump....still!
August 23rd, 2023 13:31
Sequenced
peto said:
Brilliant write
The rhymes work for the reader so hopefully for you also
Deep emotional and honest
With talented delivery
Stay strong
August 22nd, 2023 08:17
peto said:
Brilliant write
The rhymes work for the reader so hopefully for you also
Deep emotional and honest
With talented delivery
Stay strong
August 22nd, 2023 08:17
Sequenced
hzugman said:
Very well put I S. Even home run hitters often strike out. Keep swinging.
August 21st, 2023 17:46
hzugman said:
Very well put I S. Even home run hitters often strike out. Keep swinging.
August 21st, 2023 17:46
Sequenced
LIZ said:
This might be my new favorite! \"So I write because that\'s what I\'m tasked to do.\"--hit me hard!!!! I loved it!!
August 21st, 2023 15:31
LIZ said:
This might be my new favorite! \"So I write because that\'s what I\'m tasked to do.\"--hit me hard!!!! I loved it!!
August 21st, 2023 15:31
Lone Wolf
Bobby O said:
I’m glad you’re not tamed. Be wild and challenge and take temporary repost to gather and continue to share your gift. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:36
Bobby O said:
I’m glad you’re not tamed. Be wild and challenge and take temporary repost to gather and continue to share your gift. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:36
The Genie\'s Price
Bobby O said:
This is good this is hood this is how poetry should climb into our minds w fantasize about as we whisper more than shout and dancing in the cloud design braved by poetic phrase you have defined. Or , I guess instead I could say nice?🏙️
August 19th, 2023 17:20
Bobby O said:
This is good this is hood this is how poetry should climb into our minds w fantasize about as we whisper more than shout and dancing in the cloud design braved by poetic phrase you have defined. Or , I guess instead I could say nice?🏙️
August 19th, 2023 17:20
The Genie\'s Price
LIZ said:
Talk about memories!!! Because while reading, I envisioned computer files being opened, showing me glimpses of my life; even the ones I didn\'t want to see! \"But it\'s in my mind always on replay. And continues to haunt me every single day\"- what a line!! Very nice! ❤️
August 19th, 2023 11:44
LIZ said:
Talk about memories!!! Because while reading, I envisioned computer files being opened, showing me glimpses of my life; even the ones I didn\'t want to see! \"But it\'s in my mind always on replay. And continues to haunt me every single day\"- what a line!! Very nice! ❤️
August 19th, 2023 11:44
Triq
Bobby O said:
This is nice. I read it three times and then my girl started to demand attention and all I had to do was throw the Dizzy Dean inverted screw ball , well, at least metaphorically. Instead I was very sage and i threw an Introverted line , right on target
My Patience was lost in an old batch so I just grabbed a line and got in the groove , this intrusion just as hard to patch cuz the next line was released and delivered smooth do she just quit talking her trash , of course later , I be stuck dealing with her wrath !
Oh, I really liked it enough to steal bunches of it.
August 19th, 2023 09:09
Bobby O said:
This is nice. I read it three times and then my girl started to demand attention and all I had to do was throw the Dizzy Dean inverted screw ball , well, at least metaphorically. Instead I was very sage and i threw an Introverted line , right on target
My Patience was lost in an old batch so I just grabbed a line and got in the groove , this intrusion just as hard to patch cuz the next line was released and delivered smooth do she just quit talking her trash , of course later , I be stuck dealing with her wrath !
Oh, I really liked it enough to steal bunches of it.
August 19th, 2023 09:09
Triq
LIZ said:
That\'s how it works! And there are a lot more layers than people realize! I enjoyed this one and was singing the whole time!! 😄
August 18th, 2023 05:20
LIZ said:
That\'s how it works! And there are a lot more layers than people realize! I enjoyed this one and was singing the whole time!! 😄
August 18th, 2023 05:20
Triq
David Wakeling said:
This bounces along like a song.Well done I love the rhyme.
August 18th, 2023 02:43
David Wakeling said:
This bounces along like a song.Well done I love the rhyme.
August 18th, 2023 02:43
DreaMe
LIZ said:
It\'s incredible when, after going through a difficult process, we realize it\'s up to us to create something new and magical! This is beautiful!
August 16th, 2023 15:33
LIZ said:
It\'s incredible when, after going through a difficult process, we realize it\'s up to us to create something new and magical! This is beautiful!
August 16th, 2023 15:33
The Edge
peto said:
Totally agree with scribbler
I honestly believe your last few writes have been on a different level
No sign of slowing down either
Superb
August 11th, 2023 11:08
peto said:
Totally agree with scribbler
I honestly believe your last few writes have been on a different level
No sign of slowing down either
Superb
August 11th, 2023 11:08
The Edge
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Introverted Sage, filled with beautiful and vicious imagery.
This when read, is eye nectar, and when read aloud, a treat for the ears.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 11th, 2023 11:03
AuburnScribbler said:
Masterfully written here Introverted Sage, filled with beautiful and vicious imagery.
This when read, is eye nectar, and when read aloud, a treat for the ears.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 11th, 2023 11:03
Six Word Stranger
peto said:
And what an answer you have given
Loved the rhyme again
Your writing appears to be up yet another level
Brilliant stuff
August 9th, 2023 11:15
peto said:
And what an answer you have given
Loved the rhyme again
Your writing appears to be up yet another level
Brilliant stuff
August 9th, 2023 11:15
Spirit Does
peto said:
\"Spirit writing on the walls\"
And all over this page
This is magical
Love it
August 9th, 2023 10:58
peto said:
\"Spirit writing on the walls\"
And all over this page
This is magical
Love it
August 9th, 2023 10:58
Spirit Does
David Wakeling said:
This uses the world Spirit quite a lot but doesn\'t explain what the Spirit really is.For me there is no Spirit.But hey what would I know
August 7th, 2023 18:12
David Wakeling said:
This uses the world Spirit quite a lot but doesn\'t explain what the Spirit really is.For me there is no Spirit.But hey what would I know
August 7th, 2023 18:12
Spirit Does
Bobby O said:
Makes me very nostalgic. I had a girlfriend named Spirit once. When I read that line”watches like a hawk” I got shivers.
August 7th, 2023 17:23
Bobby O said:
Makes me very nostalgic. I had a girlfriend named Spirit once. When I read that line”watches like a hawk” I got shivers.
August 7th, 2023 17:23
The One Without a Name
sonal monhyung said:
You are not alone with this thought .
August 6th, 2023 15:41
sonal monhyung said:
You are not alone with this thought .
August 6th, 2023 15:41
The One Without a Name
LIZ said:
Oh how beautifully sad! 💔 Thank you for sharing!
August 5th, 2023 12:44
LIZ said:
Oh how beautifully sad! 💔 Thank you for sharing!
August 5th, 2023 12:44
Wings Don\'t Fail Me Now
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we just need to believe and have faith in ourselves .. a nicely expressed writing ))
August 5th, 2023 03:49
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we just need to believe and have faith in ourselves .. a nicely expressed writing ))
August 5th, 2023 03:49
Time Keeper
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'\'Tea leaves thwart those who court catastrophe,\'\'
from \'Ennui\' by Sylvia Path)
August 4th, 2023 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(\'\'Tea leaves thwart those who court catastrophe,\'\'
from \'Ennui\' by Sylvia Path)
August 4th, 2023 03:41
Coincidence
Introverted Sage said:
Thanks so much!
Your comments make me smile.
Your time and kind words are appreciated!
August 3rd, 2023 15:52
Introverted Sage said:
Thanks so much!
Your comments make me smile.
Your time and kind words are appreciated!
August 3rd, 2023 15:52
Coincidence
peto said:
It\'s me again
Love reading from you
Got a certain unique style
August 2nd, 2023 05:20
peto said:
It\'s me again
Love reading from you
Got a certain unique style
August 2nd, 2023 05:20
True Sorcerer\'s Brew
peto said:
Loved this one
Especially the language used
Authenticated the prompt
Magic
July 31st, 2023 02:02
peto said:
Loved this one
Especially the language used
Authenticated the prompt
Magic
July 31st, 2023 02:02
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