Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Step
Bobby O said:
Take a stand and now and I write that not to quote but rather to suggest your due for a fine piece b
September 19th, 2023 02:29
Bobby O said:
Take a stand and now and I write that not to quote but rather to suggest your due for a fine piece b
September 19th, 2023 02:29
You Called
L. B. Mek said:
journeys, ultimately
are internal
we quest to find, our truths
be they by someone\'s side
or just alone
what matters is that we follow
our heart\'s whispers/guidance
so we don\'t waste too much time
journeying, just
for the sake of journeying
sincerity, clarity and intent
crucial elements
in every choice we make..
(really related to your insightful depths in this one
words to contemplate after reading)
thank you! dear Poet
September 18th, 2023 03:12
L. B. Mek said:
journeys, ultimately
are internal
we quest to find, our truths
be they by someone\'s side
or just alone
what matters is that we follow
our heart\'s whispers/guidance
so we don\'t waste too much time
journeying, just
for the sake of journeying
sincerity, clarity and intent
crucial elements
in every choice we make..
(really related to your insightful depths in this one
words to contemplate after reading)
thank you! dear Poet
September 18th, 2023 03:12
Made
L. B. Mek said:
\'Eels twinkle in pools of the night.\'
that\'s electric imagery
took me right to the sensations
imbued in your poetry
not just the depicted scenes/thoughts
(I read and learn)
thank you! loved this
September 18th, 2023 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'Eels twinkle in pools of the night.\'
that\'s electric imagery
took me right to the sensations
imbued in your poetry
not just the depicted scenes/thoughts
(I read and learn)
thank you! loved this
September 18th, 2023 03:05
You Called
LIZ said:
Ohhhhh I love the flow here...you know...me and rhythm. But that\'s not important. I keep seeing the same theme so I\'m taking this one for me. I just mentioned one of my favorite quotes to someone else: \"I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be\"...keeps hitting me like a brick!! \"We’re headed to my calling. The one that’s buried deep inside\" INDEED!!! Thank you!!!
September 18th, 2023 02:47
LIZ said:
Ohhhhh I love the flow here...you know...me and rhythm. But that\'s not important. I keep seeing the same theme so I\'m taking this one for me. I just mentioned one of my favorite quotes to someone else: \"I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be\"...keeps hitting me like a brick!! \"We’re headed to my calling. The one that’s buried deep inside\" INDEED!!! Thank you!!!
September 18th, 2023 02:47
Made
LIZ said:
WOW!!!! WAKE UP!!! \"Voice now has colour and caresses the truths\"! I feel like this represents an awakening! Very nice!!
September 18th, 2023 00:36
LIZ said:
WOW!!!! WAKE UP!!! \"Voice now has colour and caresses the truths\"! I feel like this represents an awakening! Very nice!!
September 18th, 2023 00:36
Darkness of Introversion
Lorenz said:
I love this darkness in our lights !
September 17th, 2023 06:09
Lorenz said:
I love this darkness in our lights !
September 17th, 2023 06:09
Our Secret
Bobby O said:
That second heartbeat after the tension pause is loud like a snare on occasion and the gig of playing cool is up but that works cuz that honest declaration serves to build trust
September 15th, 2023 22:56
Bobby O said:
That second heartbeat after the tension pause is loud like a snare on occasion and the gig of playing cool is up but that works cuz that honest declaration serves to build trust
September 15th, 2023 22:56
Our Secret
peto said:
Shhhhhhhh
I felt it
You are a great writer sage
Another belter
September 15th, 2023 18:00
peto said:
Shhhhhhhh
I felt it
You are a great writer sage
Another belter
September 15th, 2023 18:00
Master of One
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
sing your truth, loud n Proud
thank you, dear Poet
September 15th, 2023 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
!Brilliant!
sing your truth, loud n Proud
thank you, dear Poet
September 15th, 2023 04:39
Spirit Window
L. B. Mek said:
\'You see this window is for all
Who understand the time.\'
Being connected to our now
While living our now
Is one of the hardest life skills, we all
have to cultivate
(wise words, a wonderful read
Thank you! dear Poet)
September 15th, 2023 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'You see this window is for all
Who understand the time.\'
Being connected to our now
While living our now
Is one of the hardest life skills, we all
have to cultivate
(wise words, a wonderful read
Thank you! dear Poet)
September 15th, 2023 04:36
Master of One
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, as opposites attract and wisdom should be drank by all this is wonderful metaphor. 💖
September 14th, 2023 01:38
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, as opposites attract and wisdom should be drank by all this is wonderful metaphor. 💖
September 14th, 2023 01:38
7 Year Itch
L. B. Mek said:
Time a theme for you lately
we need to find a way to release
our regrets
or they will just fester and hamper
our steps..
wonderful flow to this one dear Poet
thank you
September 11th, 2023 02:13
L. B. Mek said:
Time a theme for you lately
we need to find a way to release
our regrets
or they will just fester and hamper
our steps..
wonderful flow to this one dear Poet
thank you
September 11th, 2023 02:13
Lost in Time
L. B. Mek said:
(loved the vulnerability
and questing poetry
a poignant read, dear Poet
i\'m sorry if my words below
come across as preachy
or something
that wasn\'t my intention)
dimensionality
within the prism of reality\'s
perspectives
is a thought process, that can soothe
but like all things
before we can achieve anything
we must first visualise it
\'As I seem to be lost in this haze.\'
embrace the haze, let the blurry
offer a window to foggy outlines
of our endless possibilities..
being tired, is also
part of the journey
a time, for us to centre ourselves
reflect and learn...
September 11th, 2023 02:09
L. B. Mek said:
(loved the vulnerability
and questing poetry
a poignant read, dear Poet
i\'m sorry if my words below
come across as preachy
or something
that wasn\'t my intention)
dimensionality
within the prism of reality\'s
perspectives
is a thought process, that can soothe
but like all things
before we can achieve anything
we must first visualise it
\'As I seem to be lost in this haze.\'
embrace the haze, let the blurry
offer a window to foggy outlines
of our endless possibilities..
being tired, is also
part of the journey
a time, for us to centre ourselves
reflect and learn...
September 11th, 2023 02:09
What Does it Take
L. B. Mek said:
as was said already
a thought provoking read, dear Poet
thank you!
September 11th, 2023 02:02
L. B. Mek said:
as was said already
a thought provoking read, dear Poet
thank you!
September 11th, 2023 02:02
Mask Off
peto said:
Another great thought provoking read
\"Is it your heart or your weapons for trade \"
Stunning
September 10th, 2023 17:22
peto said:
Another great thought provoking read
\"Is it your heart or your weapons for trade \"
Stunning
September 10th, 2023 17:22
Mask Off
Bobby O said:
It finishes and it soars and it could be worthy of chapter 2?
September 10th, 2023 13:27
Bobby O said:
It finishes and it soars and it could be worthy of chapter 2?
September 10th, 2023 13:27
Mask Off
LIZ said:
Wow!!! Everything always comes to light!! RELEASE! \"A mirror reflects back at you.What it is you came here to do\", that is, if we care enough to look!!! Very nice!!!
September 10th, 2023 13:10
LIZ said:
Wow!!! Everything always comes to light!! RELEASE! \"A mirror reflects back at you.What it is you came here to do\", that is, if we care enough to look!!! Very nice!!!
September 10th, 2023 13:10
Lost in Time
peto said:
Ah sage
It flows and rhymes so smoothly the reader is at the end almost directly after reading the first word
Amazing write
September 10th, 2023 07:20
peto said:
Ah sage
It flows and rhymes so smoothly the reader is at the end almost directly after reading the first word
Amazing write
September 10th, 2023 07:20
Lost in Time
LIZ said:
Time does go by fast doesn\'t it? It can be exhausting. But, that\'s why we can\'t take anything for granted. \"Millions of lifetimes remembered\"! Loved it!!
September 10th, 2023 00:02
LIZ said:
Time does go by fast doesn\'t it? It can be exhausting. But, that\'s why we can\'t take anything for granted. \"Millions of lifetimes remembered\"! Loved it!!
September 10th, 2023 00:02
What Does it Take
peto said:
You really are on fire
Superb write
Amazing rhyme
The content brilliant
September 9th, 2023 04:31
peto said:
You really are on fire
Superb write
Amazing rhyme
The content brilliant
September 9th, 2023 04:31
What Does it Take
Parisab said:
May we all find safety, by making friends with our friends! Dynamic piece-
September 8th, 2023 23:48
Parisab said:
May we all find safety, by making friends with our friends! Dynamic piece-
September 8th, 2023 23:48
What Does it Take
LIZ said:
To exists...within your own unique energy! With all the flaws and mistakes, and the in betweens, at peace! At least...for me that\'s what it means! This is definitely thought provoking! Loved it!
September 8th, 2023 20:42
LIZ said:
To exists...within your own unique energy! With all the flaws and mistakes, and the in betweens, at peace! At least...for me that\'s what it means! This is definitely thought provoking! Loved it!
September 8th, 2023 20:42
Whispered
L. B. Mek said:
\'Samadhi\'
Sanskrit, like all the old wise languages
can evoke so much in such few syllables
(a oneness with the universality
that surround us
while still anchored to our flesh
of fallibility..)
seeking that subtle gentleness
at the nucleus of our life\'s storms
such a meaningful poem, dear Poet
thank you
September 8th, 2023 02:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'Samadhi\'
Sanskrit, like all the old wise languages
can evoke so much in such few syllables
(a oneness with the universality
that surround us
while still anchored to our flesh
of fallibility..)
seeking that subtle gentleness
at the nucleus of our life\'s storms
such a meaningful poem, dear Poet
thank you
September 8th, 2023 02:52
Whispered
LIZ said:
Why are you doing this to me?? Ohhhhh I\'m smiling! All my senses are alert!!! 💋Thank you!
September 7th, 2023 13:43
LIZ said:
Why are you doing this to me?? Ohhhhh I\'m smiling! All my senses are alert!!! 💋Thank you!
September 7th, 2023 13:43
Whispered
peto said:
You keep getting better
No mean feat consideration previous writes
This is particularly outstanding
September 7th, 2023 12:04
peto said:
You keep getting better
No mean feat consideration previous writes
This is particularly outstanding
September 7th, 2023 12:04
My Me
peto said:
Top form yet again
I did wonder if it should have read
\"Human live\"
Works either way
Another fav for me
September 6th, 2023 04:47
peto said:
Top form yet again
I did wonder if it should have read
\"Human live\"
Works either way
Another fav for me
September 6th, 2023 04:47
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