Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Impressionado 1
Eugene S. said:
I really like the lay of the poem. Feels like an ended relationship with materialism and the related obliviousness of the one
whose materialistic. It\'s funny how people cannot or refuse to see the harm they can cause by just simply being indifferent to those around them. Materialism, selfishness, soullessness. Very relatable, and based on certain critiques, a poem that proves itself true.
April 24th, 2023 20:06
Eugene S. said:
I really like the lay of the poem. Feels like an ended relationship with materialism and the related obliviousness of the one
whose materialistic. It\'s funny how people cannot or refuse to see the harm they can cause by just simply being indifferent to those around them. Materialism, selfishness, soullessness. Very relatable, and based on certain critiques, a poem that proves itself true.
April 24th, 2023 20:06
Impressionado 1
David Wakeling said:
I don\'t understand this kind of poetry.It is stream of consciousness and really has no clear meaning.It is not even clear who is talking to whom and why.
April 24th, 2023 16:44
David Wakeling said:
I don\'t understand this kind of poetry.It is stream of consciousness and really has no clear meaning.It is not even clear who is talking to whom and why.
April 24th, 2023 16:44
Locus Dreamers
SweetOdodoGrass43 said:
This is great. I love the rhyming scheme and the underlying context within it. Thank you!
April 21st, 2023 19:38
SweetOdodoGrass43 said:
This is great. I love the rhyming scheme and the underlying context within it. Thank you!
April 21st, 2023 19:38
Hawk
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded!
thank you for sharing, dear Poet
devoid of any theological alignment
I still share and laud your giving, spirit
just lovely
April 21st, 2023 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
Beautifully worded!
thank you for sharing, dear Poet
devoid of any theological alignment
I still share and laud your giving, spirit
just lovely
April 21st, 2023 05:15
Reis
Iva Hotko said:
I love the rhythm in this poem, it makes the words flow like a song, and I love the message and all the layers of its meaning. Great writing :-)
April 19th, 2023 01:43
Iva Hotko said:
I love the rhythm in this poem, it makes the words flow like a song, and I love the message and all the layers of its meaning. Great writing :-)
April 19th, 2023 01:43
Peak. Peek. Pique.
L. B. Mek said:
what insightful commentary
on this charade society, curated
by those profiteering, by selling
a mirage world, where segregation
by our differences
and devaluation
by our bank balances, aesthetics and age
is a propaganda, warping mindset
every generation is indoctrinated
to believe, as the limitations of their
reality
a great write! thanks for sharing dear poet
\'We have been shown
how their systems run cold.
Seeing the life
They had to behold.
Everything sold
for the promise of gold.\'
April 17th, 2023 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
what insightful commentary
on this charade society, curated
by those profiteering, by selling
a mirage world, where segregation
by our differences
and devaluation
by our bank balances, aesthetics and age
is a propaganda, warping mindset
every generation is indoctrinated
to believe, as the limitations of their
reality
a great write! thanks for sharing dear poet
\'We have been shown
how their systems run cold.
Seeing the life
They had to behold.
Everything sold
for the promise of gold.\'
April 17th, 2023 03:32
What You Are/This Life
L. B. Mek said:
what life-affriming sentiments and poetry
to share with the world, thank you!
\'Real eyes realize what they’re doing is wrong.
Setting all the right traps.
Ensuring humanity’s collapse.
Rituals to entrain you, timing exact.\'
\'Being exactly who you are,
is what makes you a Star.
It doesn’t matter how you style your hair.
Latest styles, brands and fashion you wear.
My only goal is to make you aware.
This lifetime, you were meant to be Rare.\'
April 14th, 2023 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
what life-affriming sentiments and poetry
to share with the world, thank you!
\'Real eyes realize what they’re doing is wrong.
Setting all the right traps.
Ensuring humanity’s collapse.
Rituals to entrain you, timing exact.\'
\'Being exactly who you are,
is what makes you a Star.
It doesn’t matter how you style your hair.
Latest styles, brands and fashion you wear.
My only goal is to make you aware.
This lifetime, you were meant to be Rare.\'
April 14th, 2023 03:40
Task c.w.
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
(yet, it\'s when we prevent people
from affecting us
we really utilise the power within
if we keep aspiring for what
\'We, Want\'
not, what society or those close to us
think, we need
then soon, a natural distance will arise
between those
who are mere burdens in our lives
and those
who encourage and help us progress..)
April 7th, 2023 02:50
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
(yet, it\'s when we prevent people
from affecting us
we really utilise the power within
if we keep aspiring for what
\'We, Want\'
not, what society or those close to us
think, we need
then soon, a natural distance will arise
between those
who are mere burdens in our lives
and those
who encourage and help us progress..)
April 7th, 2023 02:50
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