Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
In the Rough
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Diamonds are formed under pressure; beautiful!
January 1st, 2024 17:24
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Diamonds are formed under pressure; beautiful!
January 1st, 2024 17:24
What If
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
The amount of emotion felt in this is beyond words! Captivating!!!!
December 29th, 2023 13:59
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
The amount of emotion felt in this is beyond words! Captivating!!!!
December 29th, 2023 13:59
What If
2781 said:
I\'ve learnt not to be presumptuous but there\'s always a way.
December 29th, 2023 09:26
2781 said:
I\'ve learnt not to be presumptuous but there\'s always a way.
December 29th, 2023 09:26
False Image
2781 said:
That\'s the point. The world\'s doing a Fauci, it\'s not here, it\'s down there with the rat\'s and dogs and all that filth!
The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked: who can know it? I the Lord search the heart, I try the reins, even to give every man according to his ways, and according to the fruit of his doings.
December 29th, 2023 08:44
2781 said:
That\'s the point. The world\'s doing a Fauci, it\'s not here, it\'s down there with the rat\'s and dogs and all that filth!
The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked: who can know it? I the Lord search the heart, I try the reins, even to give every man according to his ways, and according to the fruit of his doings.
December 29th, 2023 08:44
False Image
2781 said:
If we were to judge ourselves we wouldn\'t be judged.
December 27th, 2023 20:00
2781 said:
If we were to judge ourselves we wouldn\'t be judged.
December 27th, 2023 20:00
Blown
Bobby O said:
Step forward…..
That last line is defiantly perfect. Enjoyed the whole piece.
December 27th, 2023 00:17
Bobby O said:
Step forward…..
That last line is defiantly perfect. Enjoyed the whole piece.
December 27th, 2023 00:17
Flow
Bobby O said:
Silence to sharpen the tune - a perfectly clear juxtaposition
December 26th, 2023 23:37
Bobby O said:
Silence to sharpen the tune - a perfectly clear juxtaposition
December 26th, 2023 23:37
Flow
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery here. That open field in moonlight, a great way to feel freedom, especially in the silence. A poem of imagination.
December 26th, 2023 05:17
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery here. That open field in moonlight, a great way to feel freedom, especially in the silence. A poem of imagination.
December 26th, 2023 05:17
Break
peto said:
Most telling line for me was
\"I think I should have continued the lie\"
I get the temptation to escape reality
However
Your truth shines here in the end
November 26th, 2023 20:13
peto said:
Most telling line for me was
\"I think I should have continued the lie\"
I get the temptation to escape reality
However
Your truth shines here in the end
November 26th, 2023 20:13
Vita Centrum
LIZ said:
\"It\'s with your Soul - that I\'ll be dealing\"....TRUST!!! So beautiful!
November 11th, 2023 03:27
LIZ said:
\"It\'s with your Soul - that I\'ll be dealing\"....TRUST!!! So beautiful!
November 11th, 2023 03:27
Eye Dance
Bobby O said:
It says many things and that needs to be saluted On my second read I used a personal filter and thought of the times I felt overwhelmed by what I thought was an unfair set of circumstances and chose to place effort to expose these (in my mind) tragic inequities. I think I learned from this piece to admit perhaps those moments were closer to a pity party than a genuine crusade. So, amidst all else the piece offered my main takeaway was to remind “don’t lie to yourself “. Thanks
November 7th, 2023 22:53
Bobby O said:
It says many things and that needs to be saluted On my second read I used a personal filter and thought of the times I felt overwhelmed by what I thought was an unfair set of circumstances and chose to place effort to expose these (in my mind) tragic inequities. I think I learned from this piece to admit perhaps those moments were closer to a pity party than a genuine crusade. So, amidst all else the piece offered my main takeaway was to remind “don’t lie to yourself “. Thanks
November 7th, 2023 22:53
Eye Dance
Sunsetmet said:
I love the line teaching to create your own cool nice thanks
November 7th, 2023 07:18
Sunsetmet said:
I love the line teaching to create your own cool nice thanks
November 7th, 2023 07:18
Here
Ma5on said:
IS,
I read this through once and thought it rather good. I read it a second time and found it bounced around and wasn\'t as settling the second time around.
One minute I was deep in the mind with my eyes closed, but then I had waves rushing in at me, then fire! Then water! Yikes too much going on now! Suddenly the breeze was in the trees, my heart started pounding!
What makes it work is the essence of how nature can change in a instance, all the emotions hit me at once.
So now I\'m not sure if this poem calmed me or unsettled me?
So that\'s a winner because I\'m unable to decide.
regards
M
November 6th, 2023 14:44
Ma5on said:
IS,
I read this through once and thought it rather good. I read it a second time and found it bounced around and wasn\'t as settling the second time around.
One minute I was deep in the mind with my eyes closed, but then I had waves rushing in at me, then fire! Then water! Yikes too much going on now! Suddenly the breeze was in the trees, my heart started pounding!
What makes it work is the essence of how nature can change in a instance, all the emotions hit me at once.
So now I\'m not sure if this poem calmed me or unsettled me?
So that\'s a winner because I\'m unable to decide.
regards
M
November 6th, 2023 14:44
Here
LIZ said:
Isn\'t it beautiful when we can close our eyes, an allow nature to take us with it? 💫
November 5th, 2023 06:45
LIZ said:
Isn\'t it beautiful when we can close our eyes, an allow nature to take us with it? 💫
November 5th, 2023 06:45
Silent Release
LIZ said:
\"Tests weren\'t sent to make you weak.\" Isn\'t that the truth!!!!!! Loved it!!!
November 3rd, 2023 02:44
LIZ said:
\"Tests weren\'t sent to make you weak.\" Isn\'t that the truth!!!!!! Loved it!!!
November 3rd, 2023 02:44
Siked
Bobby O said:
Close enough to attack it’s clearly love that you lack
How cool is that perfect question in the perfect sentiment in the piece
November 3rd, 2023 00:37
Bobby O said:
Close enough to attack it’s clearly love that you lack
How cool is that perfect question in the perfect sentiment in the piece
November 3rd, 2023 00:37
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