Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Break
peto said:
Most telling line for me was
\"I think I should have continued the lie\"
I get the temptation to escape reality
However
Your truth shines here in the end
November 26th, 2023 20:13
peto said:
Most telling line for me was
\"I think I should have continued the lie\"
I get the temptation to escape reality
However
Your truth shines here in the end
November 26th, 2023 20:13
Vita Centrum
LIZ said:
\"It\'s with your Soul - that I\'ll be dealing\"....TRUST!!! So beautiful!
November 11th, 2023 03:27
LIZ said:
\"It\'s with your Soul - that I\'ll be dealing\"....TRUST!!! So beautiful!
November 11th, 2023 03:27
Eye Dance
Bobby O said:
It says many things and that needs to be saluted On my second read I used a personal filter and thought of the times I felt overwhelmed by what I thought was an unfair set of circumstances and chose to place effort to expose these (in my mind) tragic inequities. I think I learned from this piece to admit perhaps those moments were closer to a pity party than a genuine crusade. So, amidst all else the piece offered my main takeaway was to remind “don’t lie to yourself “. Thanks
November 7th, 2023 22:53
Bobby O said:
It says many things and that needs to be saluted On my second read I used a personal filter and thought of the times I felt overwhelmed by what I thought was an unfair set of circumstances and chose to place effort to expose these (in my mind) tragic inequities. I think I learned from this piece to admit perhaps those moments were closer to a pity party than a genuine crusade. So, amidst all else the piece offered my main takeaway was to remind “don’t lie to yourself “. Thanks
November 7th, 2023 22:53
Eye Dance
Sunsetmet said:
I love the line teaching to create your own cool nice thanks
November 7th, 2023 07:18
Sunsetmet said:
I love the line teaching to create your own cool nice thanks
November 7th, 2023 07:18
Here
Ma5on said:
IS,
I read this through once and thought it rather good. I read it a second time and found it bounced around and wasn\'t as settling the second time around.
One minute I was deep in the mind with my eyes closed, but then I had waves rushing in at me, then fire! Then water! Yikes too much going on now! Suddenly the breeze was in the trees, my heart started pounding!
What makes it work is the essence of how nature can change in a instance, all the emotions hit me at once.
So now I\'m not sure if this poem calmed me or unsettled me?
So that\'s a winner because I\'m unable to decide.
regards
M
November 6th, 2023 14:44
Ma5on said:
IS,
I read this through once and thought it rather good. I read it a second time and found it bounced around and wasn\'t as settling the second time around.
One minute I was deep in the mind with my eyes closed, but then I had waves rushing in at me, then fire! Then water! Yikes too much going on now! Suddenly the breeze was in the trees, my heart started pounding!
What makes it work is the essence of how nature can change in a instance, all the emotions hit me at once.
So now I\'m not sure if this poem calmed me or unsettled me?
So that\'s a winner because I\'m unable to decide.
regards
M
November 6th, 2023 14:44
Here
LIZ said:
Isn\'t it beautiful when we can close our eyes, an allow nature to take us with it? 💫
November 5th, 2023 06:45
LIZ said:
Isn\'t it beautiful when we can close our eyes, an allow nature to take us with it? 💫
November 5th, 2023 06:45
Silent Release
LIZ said:
\"Tests weren\'t sent to make you weak.\" Isn\'t that the truth!!!!!! Loved it!!!
November 3rd, 2023 02:44
LIZ said:
\"Tests weren\'t sent to make you weak.\" Isn\'t that the truth!!!!!! Loved it!!!
November 3rd, 2023 02:44
Siked
Bobby O said:
Close enough to attack it’s clearly love that you lack
How cool is that perfect question in the perfect sentiment in the piece
November 3rd, 2023 00:37
Bobby O said:
Close enough to attack it’s clearly love that you lack
How cool is that perfect question in the perfect sentiment in the piece
November 3rd, 2023 00:37
When I Listen
LIZ said:
WOW!!! UP, down, and everything in between!!!! All the emotions!! YET, \"It’s the silence that bangs out The dopest grooves.\"!!! ABSOLUTELY!!! 💫💫💫💫💫💫
October 28th, 2023 06:18
LIZ said:
WOW!!! UP, down, and everything in between!!!! All the emotions!! YET, \"It’s the silence that bangs out The dopest grooves.\"!!! ABSOLUTELY!!! 💫💫💫💫💫💫
October 28th, 2023 06:18
Grace
peto said:
Go sage
Enjoy every second of it
I was wondering where you had gone
Create the perfect dance
I have a tendency to step on toes
Enjoyed the read
October 26th, 2023 05:36
peto said:
Go sage
Enjoy every second of it
I was wondering where you had gone
Create the perfect dance
I have a tendency to step on toes
Enjoyed the read
October 26th, 2023 05:36
Deep Feeling
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language. Great flow and theme that you expound upon.
October 21st, 2023 13:48
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language. Great flow and theme that you expound upon.
October 21st, 2023 13:48
Internal Articulation
Pop64 said:
This has the wonderful message of survival or overcoming, something ew all need to do or develop the strength to do. Beautiful!
October 16th, 2023 08:12
Pop64 said:
This has the wonderful message of survival or overcoming, something ew all need to do or develop the strength to do. Beautiful!
October 16th, 2023 08:12
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