Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Eye Dance
Sunsetmet said:
I love the line teaching to create your own cool nice thanks
November 7th, 2023 07:18
Sunsetmet said:
I love the line teaching to create your own cool nice thanks
November 7th, 2023 07:18
Here
Ma5on said:
IS,
I read this through once and thought it rather good. I read it a second time and found it bounced around and wasn\'t as settling the second time around.
One minute I was deep in the mind with my eyes closed, but then I had waves rushing in at me, then fire! Then water! Yikes too much going on now! Suddenly the breeze was in the trees, my heart started pounding!
What makes it work is the essence of how nature can change in a instance, all the emotions hit me at once.
So now I\'m not sure if this poem calmed me or unsettled me?
So that\'s a winner because I\'m unable to decide.
regards
M
November 6th, 2023 14:44
Ma5on said:
IS,
I read this through once and thought it rather good. I read it a second time and found it bounced around and wasn\'t as settling the second time around.
One minute I was deep in the mind with my eyes closed, but then I had waves rushing in at me, then fire! Then water! Yikes too much going on now! Suddenly the breeze was in the trees, my heart started pounding!
What makes it work is the essence of how nature can change in a instance, all the emotions hit me at once.
So now I\'m not sure if this poem calmed me or unsettled me?
So that\'s a winner because I\'m unable to decide.
regards
M
November 6th, 2023 14:44
Here
LIZ said:
Isn\'t it beautiful when we can close our eyes, an allow nature to take us with it? 💫
November 5th, 2023 06:45
LIZ said:
Isn\'t it beautiful when we can close our eyes, an allow nature to take us with it? 💫
November 5th, 2023 06:45
Silent Release
LIZ said:
\"Tests weren\'t sent to make you weak.\" Isn\'t that the truth!!!!!! Loved it!!!
November 3rd, 2023 02:44
LIZ said:
\"Tests weren\'t sent to make you weak.\" Isn\'t that the truth!!!!!! Loved it!!!
November 3rd, 2023 02:44
Siked
Bobby O said:
Close enough to attack it’s clearly love that you lack
How cool is that perfect question in the perfect sentiment in the piece
November 3rd, 2023 00:37
Bobby O said:
Close enough to attack it’s clearly love that you lack
How cool is that perfect question in the perfect sentiment in the piece
November 3rd, 2023 00:37
When I Listen
LIZ said:
WOW!!! UP, down, and everything in between!!!! All the emotions!! YET, \"It’s the silence that bangs out The dopest grooves.\"!!! ABSOLUTELY!!! 💫💫💫💫💫💫
October 28th, 2023 06:18
LIZ said:
WOW!!! UP, down, and everything in between!!!! All the emotions!! YET, \"It’s the silence that bangs out The dopest grooves.\"!!! ABSOLUTELY!!! 💫💫💫💫💫💫
October 28th, 2023 06:18
Grace
peto said:
Go sage
Enjoy every second of it
I was wondering where you had gone
Create the perfect dance
I have a tendency to step on toes
Enjoyed the read
October 26th, 2023 05:36
peto said:
Go sage
Enjoy every second of it
I was wondering where you had gone
Create the perfect dance
I have a tendency to step on toes
Enjoyed the read
October 26th, 2023 05:36
Deep Feeling
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language. Great flow and theme that you expound upon.
October 21st, 2023 13:48
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language. Great flow and theme that you expound upon.
October 21st, 2023 13:48
Internal Articulation
Pop64 said:
This has the wonderful message of survival or overcoming, something ew all need to do or develop the strength to do. Beautiful!
October 16th, 2023 08:12
Pop64 said:
This has the wonderful message of survival or overcoming, something ew all need to do or develop the strength to do. Beautiful!
October 16th, 2023 08:12
Internal Articulation
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
tight, tight flow dear Poet
what a great reading experience..
\'What goes around
comes back around.
Throughout my childhood
Was screamed so loud.
But looking back
I\'ll say, I\'m proud.
Reflecting on the mirror
Not on the ground.
I let my darkness
fly in the clouds.\'
October 16th, 2023 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
tight, tight flow dear Poet
what a great reading experience..
\'What goes around
comes back around.
Throughout my childhood
Was screamed so loud.
But looking back
I\'ll say, I\'m proud.
Reflecting on the mirror
Not on the ground.
I let my darkness
fly in the clouds.\'
October 16th, 2023 04:32
Spun
L. B. Mek said:
did you have the munchies after..
lol
I\'m with you dear Poet
let those who can walk
in other people\'s shoes
throw the first stone
everyone else
mind your fckin business!
lol
purposed emotionality
is our artistry\'s fuel
October 16th, 2023 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
did you have the munchies after..
lol
I\'m with you dear Poet
let those who can walk
in other people\'s shoes
throw the first stone
everyone else
mind your fckin business!
lol
purposed emotionality
is our artistry\'s fuel
October 16th, 2023 04:28
Internal Articulation
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. Like a phoenix from the ashes.
October 16th, 2023 01:10
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. Like a phoenix from the ashes.
October 16th, 2023 01:10
Spun
peto said:
I can\'t help but think this is work related
\" got a new peculiar bevel to my once laboured gait\"
Loved this line
Great read
October 15th, 2023 13:08
peto said:
I can\'t help but think this is work related
\" got a new peculiar bevel to my once laboured gait\"
Loved this line
Great read
October 15th, 2023 13:08
Spun
novaa said:
\'So close your eyes and find your groove.
Rocky at first then it gets smooth.\'......These lines convey a sense of hope and resilience. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 02:53
novaa said:
\'So close your eyes and find your groove.
Rocky at first then it gets smooth.\'......These lines convey a sense of hope and resilience. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 02:53
Paper Waves
LIZ said:
Why did I immediately think of the song A Thousand Miles by Vanessa Carlton? \"Staring blankly ahead, just making my way, making a way through the crowd\"
WOW! \"With a heavy heart, because I let so much stay\"----isn\'t that the truth!!! BRILLIANT!!
October 14th, 2023 04:31
LIZ said:
Why did I immediately think of the song A Thousand Miles by Vanessa Carlton? \"Staring blankly ahead, just making my way, making a way through the crowd\"
WOW! \"With a heavy heart, because I let so much stay\"----isn\'t that the truth!!! BRILLIANT!!
October 14th, 2023 04:31
Paper Waves
peto said:
Top form sage
I feel the pain but also your strength
Your rhyming is superb
October 14th, 2023 00:40
peto said:
Top form sage
I feel the pain but also your strength
Your rhyming is superb
October 14th, 2023 00:40
Deep Feeling
peto said:
You showing yourself sage
PERFECT
No more hiding
I really love this
Forgiveness is a hard one
Forgiving yourself hardest of all
You mentioned the Devine
I asked god for forgiveness and wouldn\'t forgive myself
Some check eh
We live and learn
Loved it
October 14th, 2023 00:37
peto said:
You showing yourself sage
PERFECT
No more hiding
I really love this
Forgiveness is a hard one
Forgiving yourself hardest of all
You mentioned the Devine
I asked god for forgiveness and wouldn\'t forgive myself
Some check eh
We live and learn
Loved it
October 14th, 2023 00:37
Voices in the Corridor
L. B. Mek said:
first save ourselves
then offer a helping hand
just like those wise
stewardesses tell us...
(so true, wise Poet)
thank you
October 13th, 2023 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
first save ourselves
then offer a helping hand
just like those wise
stewardesses tell us...
(so true, wise Poet)
thank you
October 13th, 2023 06:09
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