Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Awakening to the Flame
jarcher54 said:
Swore off poetry, then you came along... seriously, I enjoy the pulsing energy, the near-neurotic flow of images and feelings and the drumming of the rhyme.
November 11th, 2024 01:31
jarcher54 said:
Swore off poetry, then you came along... seriously, I enjoy the pulsing energy, the near-neurotic flow of images and feelings and the drumming of the rhyme.
November 11th, 2024 01:31
Sakon
Cheeky Missy said:
Esoteric, eh? You know, our symptoms matched those of souls who needed to be hospitalized for poison ivy exposure but we were informed it wasn\'t a reaction to that. And if you dared to yield comfort to that itch you\'d learn about far worse torture within seconds. But I digress. Pardon me, please.
This is a pretty little number, fascinating and rendered to effect its poignancy less easily than usual. Lovely. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 15:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Esoteric, eh? You know, our symptoms matched those of souls who needed to be hospitalized for poison ivy exposure but we were informed it wasn\'t a reaction to that. And if you dared to yield comfort to that itch you\'d learn about far worse torture within seconds. But I digress. Pardon me, please.
This is a pretty little number, fascinating and rendered to effect its poignancy less easily than usual. Lovely. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 15:09
Untitled Part 1
Cheeky Missy said:
Untitled, eh? It\'s simple enough to take from your lines and give this a satisfactory name. But be as you wish and enjoy spilling blood without giving it a donor name. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent details.
September 15th, 2024 19:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Untitled, eh? It\'s simple enough to take from your lines and give this a satisfactory name. But be as you wish and enjoy spilling blood without giving it a donor name. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy and excellent details.
September 15th, 2024 19:31
Locked Sensor
sorenbarrett said:
The center is the place to look. Answers lie within in the matter what you lack it’s contained inside.
September 5th, 2024 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
The center is the place to look. Answers lie within in the matter what you lack it’s contained inside.
September 5th, 2024 06:21
Freed
sorenbarrett said:
Highly emotional the vibrations could be felt in this piece. Nicely written with rhyme and rhythm
August 25th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
Highly emotional the vibrations could be felt in this piece. Nicely written with rhyme and rhythm
August 25th, 2024 05:36
Minded
Cassie58 said:
The mind can be both a friend and a terrible enemy. Over thinking is a curse. Enjoyed the read. Well conveyed lines.
June 18th, 2024 07:59
Cassie58 said:
The mind can be both a friend and a terrible enemy. Over thinking is a curse. Enjoyed the read. Well conveyed lines.
June 18th, 2024 07:59
Minded
Mutley Ravishes said:
A friend said that the mind is a terrible master, but a wonderful servant. I\'m working on it!
June 18th, 2024 01:26
Mutley Ravishes said:
A friend said that the mind is a terrible master, but a wonderful servant. I\'m working on it!
June 18th, 2024 01:26
Slow Climb
peto said:
Learned a new word reading this
Dichotomy
Glad I looked it up before reading it through
It makes this so much more powerful
The slower the climb the more opportunity to soak up the journey.
Every time i think I\'ve read the best of you
You hit us with another belter
Outstanding
June 9th, 2024 17:22
peto said:
Learned a new word reading this
Dichotomy
Glad I looked it up before reading it through
It makes this so much more powerful
The slower the climb the more opportunity to soak up the journey.
Every time i think I\'ve read the best of you
You hit us with another belter
Outstanding
June 9th, 2024 17:22
Unknowing Me
2781 said:
I don\'t mind eye contact. windows to the soul, as they say.
June 1st, 2024 22:38
2781 said:
I don\'t mind eye contact. windows to the soul, as they say.
June 1st, 2024 22:38
Unknowing Me
peto said:
I love when you post sage
It\'s not how they are written or how they read
It\'s how they \"feel\"
There is always self inventory
And emotions spilling from every word
Another in a series of belters
You are a gift to this site
Stunning
June 1st, 2024 18:54
peto said:
I love when you post sage
It\'s not how they are written or how they read
It\'s how they \"feel\"
There is always self inventory
And emotions spilling from every word
Another in a series of belters
You are a gift to this site
Stunning
June 1st, 2024 18:54
Conspired Choosing
2781 said:
I returned, and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to the wise, nor yet riches to men of understanding, nor yet favour to men of skill; but time and chance happeneth to them all.
May 21st, 2024 05:52
2781 said:
I returned, and saw under the sun, that the race is not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread to the wise, nor yet riches to men of understanding, nor yet favour to men of skill; but time and chance happeneth to them all.
May 21st, 2024 05:52
Conspired Choosing
Poetic Dan said:
Although I now believe this to be somewhat true! There\'s still an infinite way for us to choose, if it\'s was ment to be then it will become a loop but time is the prospective we are yet to lose! When the burden is gone you see how the rest of the animal kingdom does it too....
. Thanks for the inspiration
Keep being you
Much peace and respect
May 21st, 2024 05:04
Poetic Dan said:
Although I now believe this to be somewhat true! There\'s still an infinite way for us to choose, if it\'s was ment to be then it will become a loop but time is the prospective we are yet to lose! When the burden is gone you see how the rest of the animal kingdom does it too....
. Thanks for the inspiration
Keep being you
Much peace and respect
May 21st, 2024 05:04
Image
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A much needed message. Especially the line where you say we are molded to be the same. Beautiful work
May 19th, 2024 19:41
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A much needed message. Especially the line where you say we are molded to be the same. Beautiful work
May 19th, 2024 19:41
Shadowed
peto said:
Rhyme and flow are immaculate
Also really enjoyed this line
\"Ten toes down near the edge of insane \"
Another belter
Great writing
April 28th, 2024 18:17
peto said:
Rhyme and flow are immaculate
Also really enjoyed this line
\"Ten toes down near the edge of insane \"
Another belter
Great writing
April 28th, 2024 18:17
Shadowed
Cassie58 said:
This poem touched me. It is beautifully penned. Well done.
April 28th, 2024 15:38
Cassie58 said:
This poem touched me. It is beautifully penned. Well done.
April 28th, 2024 15:38
FraeMe
peto said:
A true battler
They may have 6taken your voice
Dont ever let them near your pen
Magic
April 25th, 2024 21:29
peto said:
A true battler
They may have 6taken your voice
Dont ever let them near your pen
Magic
April 25th, 2024 21:29
Breathing Room
Cassie58 said:
Done an about face. Like sweeping the cobwebs away and having a fresh start. I think we all need to do that once in a while. Ruby, I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for posting.
April 16th, 2024 23:56
Cassie58 said:
Done an about face. Like sweeping the cobwebs away and having a fresh start. I think we all need to do that once in a while. Ruby, I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for posting.
April 16th, 2024 23:56
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