Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Internal Articulation
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
tight, tight flow dear Poet
what a great reading experience..
\'What goes around
comes back around.
Throughout my childhood
Was screamed so loud.
But looking back
I\'ll say, I\'m proud.
Reflecting on the mirror
Not on the ground.
I let my darkness
fly in the clouds.\'
October 16th, 2023 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
tight, tight flow dear Poet
what a great reading experience..
\'What goes around
comes back around.
Throughout my childhood
Was screamed so loud.
But looking back
I\'ll say, I\'m proud.
Reflecting on the mirror
Not on the ground.
I let my darkness
fly in the clouds.\'
October 16th, 2023 04:32
Spun
L. B. Mek said:
did you have the munchies after..
lol
I\'m with you dear Poet
let those who can walk
in other people\'s shoes
throw the first stone
everyone else
mind your fckin business!
lol
purposed emotionality
is our artistry\'s fuel
October 16th, 2023 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
did you have the munchies after..
lol
I\'m with you dear Poet
let those who can walk
in other people\'s shoes
throw the first stone
everyone else
mind your fckin business!
lol
purposed emotionality
is our artistry\'s fuel
October 16th, 2023 04:28
Internal Articulation
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. Like a phoenix from the ashes.
October 16th, 2023 01:10
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. Like a phoenix from the ashes.
October 16th, 2023 01:10
Spun
peto said:
I can\'t help but think this is work related
\" got a new peculiar bevel to my once laboured gait\"
Loved this line
Great read
October 15th, 2023 13:08
peto said:
I can\'t help but think this is work related
\" got a new peculiar bevel to my once laboured gait\"
Loved this line
Great read
October 15th, 2023 13:08
Spun
novaa said:
\'So close your eyes and find your groove.
Rocky at first then it gets smooth.\'......These lines convey a sense of hope and resilience. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 02:53
novaa said:
\'So close your eyes and find your groove.
Rocky at first then it gets smooth.\'......These lines convey a sense of hope and resilience. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 02:53
Paper Waves
LIZ said:
Why did I immediately think of the song A Thousand Miles by Vanessa Carlton? \"Staring blankly ahead, just making my way, making a way through the crowd\"
WOW! \"With a heavy heart, because I let so much stay\"----isn\'t that the truth!!! BRILLIANT!!
October 14th, 2023 04:31
LIZ said:
Why did I immediately think of the song A Thousand Miles by Vanessa Carlton? \"Staring blankly ahead, just making my way, making a way through the crowd\"
WOW! \"With a heavy heart, because I let so much stay\"----isn\'t that the truth!!! BRILLIANT!!
October 14th, 2023 04:31
Paper Waves
peto said:
Top form sage
I feel the pain but also your strength
Your rhyming is superb
October 14th, 2023 00:40
peto said:
Top form sage
I feel the pain but also your strength
Your rhyming is superb
October 14th, 2023 00:40
Deep Feeling
peto said:
You showing yourself sage
PERFECT
No more hiding
I really love this
Forgiveness is a hard one
Forgiving yourself hardest of all
You mentioned the Devine
I asked god for forgiveness and wouldn\'t forgive myself
Some check eh
We live and learn
Loved it
October 14th, 2023 00:37
peto said:
You showing yourself sage
PERFECT
No more hiding
I really love this
Forgiveness is a hard one
Forgiving yourself hardest of all
You mentioned the Devine
I asked god for forgiveness and wouldn\'t forgive myself
Some check eh
We live and learn
Loved it
October 14th, 2023 00:37
Voices in the Corridor
L. B. Mek said:
first save ourselves
then offer a helping hand
just like those wise
stewardesses tell us...
(so true, wise Poet)
thank you
October 13th, 2023 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
first save ourselves
then offer a helping hand
just like those wise
stewardesses tell us...
(so true, wise Poet)
thank you
October 13th, 2023 06:09
Hestia\'s Kiss
L. B. Mek said:
a new born in family?
or a new flame in the heart
or a remembered, each?
such a subtle wording
thank you! dear Poet
a delightful read
October 13th, 2023 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
a new born in family?
or a new flame in the heart
or a remembered, each?
such a subtle wording
thank you! dear Poet
a delightful read
October 13th, 2023 06:07
Voices in the Corridor
peto said:
Keep sharing
It does help
Hell of a write
Got me wondering what the song is
October 12th, 2023 14:07
peto said:
Keep sharing
It does help
Hell of a write
Got me wondering what the song is
October 12th, 2023 14:07
Voices in the Corridor
LIZ said:
You know, even though we don\'t realize it...sharing our pain does help. It helps others feel....not so alone. BUT it also helps US...release! Thank you for choosing to share it! 💫
October 12th, 2023 02:11
LIZ said:
You know, even though we don\'t realize it...sharing our pain does help. It helps others feel....not so alone. BUT it also helps US...release! Thank you for choosing to share it! 💫
October 12th, 2023 02:11
One
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Your messages are inspirational! I absolutely love your work! Thank you for sharing!
October 9th, 2023 13:46
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Your messages are inspirational! I absolutely love your work! Thank you for sharing!
October 9th, 2023 13:46
Falling Up
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Balancing my mind controlling my thoughts. The power behind these words; a beautiful well needed message
October 9th, 2023 13:44
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Balancing my mind controlling my thoughts. The power behind these words; a beautiful well needed message
October 9th, 2023 13:44
Falling Up
LIZ said:
\"The lessons I have learned cannot be bought\"--I belive I\'ve mentioned this before....but that darkness, that fall....really does teach us. IF we allow it. IF we\'re able to grasp the lesson, THEN, we can get up and use it to ignite our dreams/desires. Very nice!!!
October 9th, 2023 01:48
LIZ said:
\"The lessons I have learned cannot be bought\"--I belive I\'ve mentioned this before....but that darkness, that fall....really does teach us. IF we allow it. IF we\'re able to grasp the lesson, THEN, we can get up and use it to ignite our dreams/desires. Very nice!!!
October 9th, 2023 01:48
Falling Up
L. B. Mek said:
\'The rope — it holds much better when it’s taut.
The lessons I have learned cannot be bought.
It is the deepest levels of wisdom I have sought.\'
lived through wisdom, distilled and versed
indeed, those taught strings of fate
do so like to keep us on edge
from crawling triumphs to our
sprinting\'s buckles..
feels like a new scar
is just a twilight away..
and life\'s healing balm
awaiting, at that next twilight
of merciful grace...!
we\'ve just got to find a way
to take that next crawl of a step
keep believing in that promised
better, we all deserve to aspire
towards...
(this one hit home for me, wise Poet)
thank you!
October 9th, 2023 01:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'The rope — it holds much better when it’s taut.
The lessons I have learned cannot be bought.
It is the deepest levels of wisdom I have sought.\'
lived through wisdom, distilled and versed
indeed, those taught strings of fate
do so like to keep us on edge
from crawling triumphs to our
sprinting\'s buckles..
feels like a new scar
is just a twilight away..
and life\'s healing balm
awaiting, at that next twilight
of merciful grace...!
we\'ve just got to find a way
to take that next crawl of a step
keep believing in that promised
better, we all deserve to aspire
towards...
(this one hit home for me, wise Poet)
thank you!
October 9th, 2023 01:34
Sole Bringer
L. B. Mek said:
I mean, a lot does mess with us
in our path
So with introspection, always good
to offer ourselves a sip of empathy
for ourselves..
but yeah, truth is
a lot we could have saved ourselves
from in life
if we could just take accountability
for our part in all of it..
(wise words, dear Poet
still
don\'t be too harsh with yourself
trust me, the world
is plenty harsh enough, on you
on all of us..
stay strong!
October 9th, 2023 01:26
L. B. Mek said:
I mean, a lot does mess with us
in our path
So with introspection, always good
to offer ourselves a sip of empathy
for ourselves..
but yeah, truth is
a lot we could have saved ourselves
from in life
if we could just take accountability
for our part in all of it..
(wise words, dear Poet
still
don\'t be too harsh with yourself
trust me, the world
is plenty harsh enough, on you
on all of us..
stay strong!
October 9th, 2023 01:26
Spice
Bobby O said:
Parrot for the fools which had a connotation but then it reversed when Speak Up seemed to reverse the direction. Action and movement and then a shift
October 7th, 2023 15:59
Bobby O said:
Parrot for the fools which had a connotation but then it reversed when Speak Up seemed to reverse the direction. Action and movement and then a shift
October 7th, 2023 15:59
Your Gold
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, such impassioned sincerity
wonderful imagery
a release in a poem
Thank you for sharing, dear Poet
October 6th, 2023 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, such impassioned sincerity
wonderful imagery
a release in a poem
Thank you for sharing, dear Poet
October 6th, 2023 05:41
SOS
L. B. Mek said:
So true, dear Poet
and from the wise words of Meditations:
“Everything we hear
is an opinion, not a fact.
Everything we see
is a perspective, not the truth.”
“Waste no more time arguing
about what a good person
should be.
Be one.”
October 6th, 2023 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
So true, dear Poet
and from the wise words of Meditations:
“Everything we hear
is an opinion, not a fact.
Everything we see
is a perspective, not the truth.”
“Waste no more time arguing
about what a good person
should be.
Be one.”
October 6th, 2023 05:28
Spice
LIZ said:
I\'m speaking my truth!! I can hang with the fire. Who am I kidding? I AM THE FIRE 🔥 😤 This is fabulous 👌
October 6th, 2023 00:17
LIZ said:
I\'m speaking my truth!! I can hang with the fire. Who am I kidding? I AM THE FIRE 🔥 😤 This is fabulous 👌
October 6th, 2023 00:17
Golden Vines
LIZ said:
Hard times really do make us stronger! IF, we learn the lessons! Very nice!! 🪶
October 3rd, 2023 02:30
LIZ said:
Hard times really do make us stronger! IF, we learn the lessons! Very nice!! 🪶
October 3rd, 2023 02:30
Asked Twice
peto said:
This one reads like a long hard look at oneself
\":helps me unload:
\" even freed a few ghosts \"
If you are gonna look
Look deep
You might just find it
Super read great results
October 2nd, 2023 10:14
peto said:
This one reads like a long hard look at oneself
\":helps me unload:
\" even freed a few ghosts \"
If you are gonna look
Look deep
You might just find it
Super read great results
October 2nd, 2023 10:14
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