Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Hestia\'s Kiss
L. B. Mek said:
a new born in family?
or a new flame in the heart
or a remembered, each?
such a subtle wording
thank you! dear Poet
a delightful read
October 13th, 2023 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
a new born in family?
or a new flame in the heart
or a remembered, each?
such a subtle wording
thank you! dear Poet
a delightful read
October 13th, 2023 06:07
Voices in the Corridor
peto said:
Keep sharing
It does help
Hell of a write
Got me wondering what the song is
October 12th, 2023 14:07
peto said:
Keep sharing
It does help
Hell of a write
Got me wondering what the song is
October 12th, 2023 14:07
Voices in the Corridor
LIZ said:
You know, even though we don\'t realize it...sharing our pain does help. It helps others feel....not so alone. BUT it also helps US...release! Thank you for choosing to share it! 💫
October 12th, 2023 02:11
LIZ said:
You know, even though we don\'t realize it...sharing our pain does help. It helps others feel....not so alone. BUT it also helps US...release! Thank you for choosing to share it! 💫
October 12th, 2023 02:11
One
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Your messages are inspirational! I absolutely love your work! Thank you for sharing!
October 9th, 2023 13:46
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Your messages are inspirational! I absolutely love your work! Thank you for sharing!
October 9th, 2023 13:46
Falling Up
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Balancing my mind controlling my thoughts. The power behind these words; a beautiful well needed message
October 9th, 2023 13:44
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Balancing my mind controlling my thoughts. The power behind these words; a beautiful well needed message
October 9th, 2023 13:44
Falling Up
LIZ said:
\"The lessons I have learned cannot be bought\"--I belive I\'ve mentioned this before....but that darkness, that fall....really does teach us. IF we allow it. IF we\'re able to grasp the lesson, THEN, we can get up and use it to ignite our dreams/desires. Very nice!!!
October 9th, 2023 01:48
LIZ said:
\"The lessons I have learned cannot be bought\"--I belive I\'ve mentioned this before....but that darkness, that fall....really does teach us. IF we allow it. IF we\'re able to grasp the lesson, THEN, we can get up and use it to ignite our dreams/desires. Very nice!!!
October 9th, 2023 01:48
Falling Up
L. B. Mek said:
\'The rope — it holds much better when it’s taut.
The lessons I have learned cannot be bought.
It is the deepest levels of wisdom I have sought.\'
lived through wisdom, distilled and versed
indeed, those taught strings of fate
do so like to keep us on edge
from crawling triumphs to our
sprinting\'s buckles..
feels like a new scar
is just a twilight away..
and life\'s healing balm
awaiting, at that next twilight
of merciful grace...!
we\'ve just got to find a way
to take that next crawl of a step
keep believing in that promised
better, we all deserve to aspire
towards...
(this one hit home for me, wise Poet)
thank you!
October 9th, 2023 01:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'The rope — it holds much better when it’s taut.
The lessons I have learned cannot be bought.
It is the deepest levels of wisdom I have sought.\'
lived through wisdom, distilled and versed
indeed, those taught strings of fate
do so like to keep us on edge
from crawling triumphs to our
sprinting\'s buckles..
feels like a new scar
is just a twilight away..
and life\'s healing balm
awaiting, at that next twilight
of merciful grace...!
we\'ve just got to find a way
to take that next crawl of a step
keep believing in that promised
better, we all deserve to aspire
towards...
(this one hit home for me, wise Poet)
thank you!
October 9th, 2023 01:34
Sole Bringer
L. B. Mek said:
I mean, a lot does mess with us
in our path
So with introspection, always good
to offer ourselves a sip of empathy
for ourselves..
but yeah, truth is
a lot we could have saved ourselves
from in life
if we could just take accountability
for our part in all of it..
(wise words, dear Poet
still
don\'t be too harsh with yourself
trust me, the world
is plenty harsh enough, on you
on all of us..
stay strong!
October 9th, 2023 01:26
L. B. Mek said:
I mean, a lot does mess with us
in our path
So with introspection, always good
to offer ourselves a sip of empathy
for ourselves..
but yeah, truth is
a lot we could have saved ourselves
from in life
if we could just take accountability
for our part in all of it..
(wise words, dear Poet
still
don\'t be too harsh with yourself
trust me, the world
is plenty harsh enough, on you
on all of us..
stay strong!
October 9th, 2023 01:26
Spice
Bobby O said:
Parrot for the fools which had a connotation but then it reversed when Speak Up seemed to reverse the direction. Action and movement and then a shift
October 7th, 2023 15:59
Bobby O said:
Parrot for the fools which had a connotation but then it reversed when Speak Up seemed to reverse the direction. Action and movement and then a shift
October 7th, 2023 15:59
Your Gold
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, such impassioned sincerity
wonderful imagery
a release in a poem
Thank you for sharing, dear Poet
October 6th, 2023 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, such impassioned sincerity
wonderful imagery
a release in a poem
Thank you for sharing, dear Poet
October 6th, 2023 05:41
SOS
L. B. Mek said:
So true, dear Poet
and from the wise words of Meditations:
“Everything we hear
is an opinion, not a fact.
Everything we see
is a perspective, not the truth.”
“Waste no more time arguing
about what a good person
should be.
Be one.”
October 6th, 2023 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
So true, dear Poet
and from the wise words of Meditations:
“Everything we hear
is an opinion, not a fact.
Everything we see
is a perspective, not the truth.”
“Waste no more time arguing
about what a good person
should be.
Be one.”
October 6th, 2023 05:28
Spice
LIZ said:
I\'m speaking my truth!! I can hang with the fire. Who am I kidding? I AM THE FIRE 🔥 😤 This is fabulous 👌
October 6th, 2023 00:17
LIZ said:
I\'m speaking my truth!! I can hang with the fire. Who am I kidding? I AM THE FIRE 🔥 😤 This is fabulous 👌
October 6th, 2023 00:17
Golden Vines
LIZ said:
Hard times really do make us stronger! IF, we learn the lessons! Very nice!! 🪶
October 3rd, 2023 02:30
LIZ said:
Hard times really do make us stronger! IF, we learn the lessons! Very nice!! 🪶
October 3rd, 2023 02:30
Asked Twice
peto said:
This one reads like a long hard look at oneself
\":helps me unload:
\" even freed a few ghosts \"
If you are gonna look
Look deep
You might just find it
Super read great results
October 2nd, 2023 10:14
peto said:
This one reads like a long hard look at oneself
\":helps me unload:
\" even freed a few ghosts \"
If you are gonna look
Look deep
You might just find it
Super read great results
October 2nd, 2023 10:14
We See You
L. B. Mek said:
loving the attitude of this poetic voice
that \'enough is enough\' realism
wonderfully executed, another one
with a powerful last few lines
Thank you! dear Poet
for these word to celebrate
and contemplate..
October 2nd, 2023 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
loving the attitude of this poetic voice
that \'enough is enough\' realism
wonderfully executed, another one
with a powerful last few lines
Thank you! dear Poet
for these word to celebrate
and contemplate..
October 2nd, 2023 04:02
Asked Twice
L. B. Mek said:
so true, especially that last line dear Poet
people rarely realise
books are woven from other people\'s experiences of life
so yes, it\'s a vital tool to read
and heed other people\'s examples
of do\'s and dont\'s
but
if we choose to experience a diverse life
for ourselves
we can write, the books
not juts read them...
(thank you!
this is an insightful
well thought-out write
and a great read!)
\'Released from the holds
Futures look gold
Cause we shattered their molds.
And let the truth be told.
We’re coming on strong, bold.
Cards on the table
No need to fold.\'
Amen!
\'LET\'s GO!\'
October 2nd, 2023 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
so true, especially that last line dear Poet
people rarely realise
books are woven from other people\'s experiences of life
so yes, it\'s a vital tool to read
and heed other people\'s examples
of do\'s and dont\'s
but
if we choose to experience a diverse life
for ourselves
we can write, the books
not juts read them...
(thank you!
this is an insightful
well thought-out write
and a great read!)
\'Released from the holds
Futures look gold
Cause we shattered their molds.
And let the truth be told.
We’re coming on strong, bold.
Cards on the table
No need to fold.\'
Amen!
\'LET\'s GO!\'
October 2nd, 2023 03:58
Asked Twice
Parisab said:
Nicely reflective and neatly foretold…power holds special powers and be careful what you wish for -lol
October 1st, 2023 22:31
Parisab said:
Nicely reflective and neatly foretold…power holds special powers and be careful what you wish for -lol
October 1st, 2023 22:31
Modern Day Troubadour
L. B. Mek said:
Your mind is so exotic
Another enticing read
A troubadour eh, but where\'s your music? lol
That picture is GOLD
indeed, we all have lions
waiting to be unleashed..
thank you dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
Your mind is so exotic
Another enticing read
A troubadour eh, but where\'s your music? lol
That picture is GOLD
indeed, we all have lions
waiting to be unleashed..
thank you dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:27
Unlimited
L. B. Mek said:
Mush and Epinoia
in one Purposeful write
A great read,
empowering message
and energising poetry..
Thank you! dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
Mush and Epinoia
in one Purposeful write
A great read,
empowering message
and energising poetry..
Thank you! dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:20
Unlimited
Bobby O said:
What could be the pearl I first thought? Then of course it’s the jewel or anything we need to protect. Had to look up Epinoia/
What a wonderful word and placed exact through yiu I learn snd an humbled by your storied development w precision and flavor. Nice.
September 28th, 2023 21:50
Bobby O said:
What could be the pearl I first thought? Then of course it’s the jewel or anything we need to protect. Had to look up Epinoia/
What a wonderful word and placed exact through yiu I learn snd an humbled by your storied development w precision and flavor. Nice.
September 28th, 2023 21:50
Sweet Song
Bobby O said:
So much here but my main takeaway is the unabashed tribute you boldly share. It is to be admired.
September 28th, 2023 00:30
Bobby O said:
So much here but my main takeaway is the unabashed tribute you boldly share. It is to be admired.
September 28th, 2023 00:30
Sweet Song
LIZ said:
Wait a minute......\"tu sabe tu sabe\" that\'s Dominican slang!! Talk to me about this. And \"You saved me when I wanted to die\" made me jump a little!! Love the rhyme!! Well done!!
September 27th, 2023 02:22
LIZ said:
Wait a minute......\"tu sabe tu sabe\" that\'s Dominican slang!! Talk to me about this. And \"You saved me when I wanted to die\" made me jump a little!! Love the rhyme!! Well done!!
September 27th, 2023 02:22
Crawling
LIZ said:
Because at the end of the day, we\'re all one and the same! Ahhhh! 💫
September 26th, 2023 02:45
LIZ said:
Because at the end of the day, we\'re all one and the same! Ahhhh! 💫
September 26th, 2023 02:45
The Dark Hole
Introverted Sage said:
So glad I was able to inspire.. I love how you put those together!
The ability to even notice these cycles and waves exist is such a huge step most miss for far too long it seems. Or may be all in the right time..
\'Nor storm disturbs, flames begotten of flame,\'
Thank you!!
September 26th, 2023 01:16
Introverted Sage said:
So glad I was able to inspire.. I love how you put those together!
The ability to even notice these cycles and waves exist is such a huge step most miss for far too long it seems. Or may be all in the right time..
\'Nor storm disturbs, flames begotten of flame,\'
Thank you!!
September 26th, 2023 01:16
Seen
peto said:
Keep reading between the lines sage
But feel I\'m being allowed to do so at my own pace
Lovely write
September 25th, 2023 12:34
peto said:
Keep reading between the lines sage
But feel I\'m being allowed to do so at my own pace
Lovely write
September 25th, 2023 12:34
Changeling
peto said:
Another super write sage
Felt a bit like a song
I really enjoyed reading
And pray you find that release soon
Beautifully written
Pleasure to read
September 25th, 2023 10:51
peto said:
Another super write sage
Felt a bit like a song
I really enjoyed reading
And pray you find that release soon
Beautifully written
Pleasure to read
September 25th, 2023 10:51
Seen
L. B. Mek said:
\'Transparency is how we will grow.\'
transparency of self, indeed
I so agree, dear Poet
September 25th, 2023 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'Transparency is how we will grow.\'
transparency of self, indeed
I so agree, dear Poet
September 25th, 2023 05:14
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