Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
We See You
L. B. Mek said:
loving the attitude of this poetic voice
that \'enough is enough\' realism
wonderfully executed, another one
with a powerful last few lines
Thank you! dear Poet
for these word to celebrate
and contemplate..
October 2nd, 2023 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
loving the attitude of this poetic voice
that \'enough is enough\' realism
wonderfully executed, another one
with a powerful last few lines
Thank you! dear Poet
for these word to celebrate
and contemplate..
October 2nd, 2023 04:02
Asked Twice
L. B. Mek said:
so true, especially that last line dear Poet
people rarely realise
books are woven from other people\'s experiences of life
so yes, it\'s a vital tool to read
and heed other people\'s examples
of do\'s and dont\'s
but
if we choose to experience a diverse life
for ourselves
we can write, the books
not juts read them...
(thank you!
this is an insightful
well thought-out write
and a great read!)
\'Released from the holds
Futures look gold
Cause we shattered their molds.
And let the truth be told.
We’re coming on strong, bold.
Cards on the table
No need to fold.\'
Amen!
\'LET\'s GO!\'
October 2nd, 2023 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
so true, especially that last line dear Poet
people rarely realise
books are woven from other people\'s experiences of life
so yes, it\'s a vital tool to read
and heed other people\'s examples
of do\'s and dont\'s
but
if we choose to experience a diverse life
for ourselves
we can write, the books
not juts read them...
(thank you!
this is an insightful
well thought-out write
and a great read!)
\'Released from the holds
Futures look gold
Cause we shattered their molds.
And let the truth be told.
We’re coming on strong, bold.
Cards on the table
No need to fold.\'
Amen!
\'LET\'s GO!\'
October 2nd, 2023 03:58
Asked Twice
Parisab said:
Nicely reflective and neatly foretold…power holds special powers and be careful what you wish for -lol
October 1st, 2023 22:31
Parisab said:
Nicely reflective and neatly foretold…power holds special powers and be careful what you wish for -lol
October 1st, 2023 22:31
Modern Day Troubadour
L. B. Mek said:
Your mind is so exotic
Another enticing read
A troubadour eh, but where\'s your music? lol
That picture is GOLD
indeed, we all have lions
waiting to be unleashed..
thank you dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
Your mind is so exotic
Another enticing read
A troubadour eh, but where\'s your music? lol
That picture is GOLD
indeed, we all have lions
waiting to be unleashed..
thank you dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:27
Unlimited
L. B. Mek said:
Mush and Epinoia
in one Purposeful write
A great read,
empowering message
and energising poetry..
Thank you! dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
Mush and Epinoia
in one Purposeful write
A great read,
empowering message
and energising poetry..
Thank you! dear Poet
September 29th, 2023 04:20
Unlimited
Bobby O said:
What could be the pearl I first thought? Then of course it’s the jewel or anything we need to protect. Had to look up Epinoia/
What a wonderful word and placed exact through yiu I learn snd an humbled by your storied development w precision and flavor. Nice.
September 28th, 2023 21:50
Bobby O said:
What could be the pearl I first thought? Then of course it’s the jewel or anything we need to protect. Had to look up Epinoia/
What a wonderful word and placed exact through yiu I learn snd an humbled by your storied development w precision and flavor. Nice.
September 28th, 2023 21:50
Sweet Song
Bobby O said:
So much here but my main takeaway is the unabashed tribute you boldly share. It is to be admired.
September 28th, 2023 00:30
Bobby O said:
So much here but my main takeaway is the unabashed tribute you boldly share. It is to be admired.
September 28th, 2023 00:30
Sweet Song
LIZ said:
Wait a minute......\"tu sabe tu sabe\" that\'s Dominican slang!! Talk to me about this. And \"You saved me when I wanted to die\" made me jump a little!! Love the rhyme!! Well done!!
September 27th, 2023 02:22
LIZ said:
Wait a minute......\"tu sabe tu sabe\" that\'s Dominican slang!! Talk to me about this. And \"You saved me when I wanted to die\" made me jump a little!! Love the rhyme!! Well done!!
September 27th, 2023 02:22
Crawling
LIZ said:
Because at the end of the day, we\'re all one and the same! Ahhhh! 💫
September 26th, 2023 02:45
LIZ said:
Because at the end of the day, we\'re all one and the same! Ahhhh! 💫
September 26th, 2023 02:45
The Dark Hole
Introverted Sage said:
So glad I was able to inspire.. I love how you put those together!
The ability to even notice these cycles and waves exist is such a huge step most miss for far too long it seems. Or may be all in the right time..
\'Nor storm disturbs, flames begotten of flame,\'
Thank you!!
September 26th, 2023 01:16
Introverted Sage said:
So glad I was able to inspire.. I love how you put those together!
The ability to even notice these cycles and waves exist is such a huge step most miss for far too long it seems. Or may be all in the right time..
\'Nor storm disturbs, flames begotten of flame,\'
Thank you!!
September 26th, 2023 01:16
Seen
peto said:
Keep reading between the lines sage
But feel I\'m being allowed to do so at my own pace
Lovely write
September 25th, 2023 12:34
peto said:
Keep reading between the lines sage
But feel I\'m being allowed to do so at my own pace
Lovely write
September 25th, 2023 12:34
Changeling
peto said:
Another super write sage
Felt a bit like a song
I really enjoyed reading
And pray you find that release soon
Beautifully written
Pleasure to read
September 25th, 2023 10:51
peto said:
Another super write sage
Felt a bit like a song
I really enjoyed reading
And pray you find that release soon
Beautifully written
Pleasure to read
September 25th, 2023 10:51
Seen
L. B. Mek said:
\'Transparency is how we will grow.\'
transparency of self, indeed
I so agree, dear Poet
September 25th, 2023 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
\'Transparency is how we will grow.\'
transparency of self, indeed
I so agree, dear Poet
September 25th, 2023 05:14
The Dark Hole
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliant! dear Poet
please forgive my self-indulgent scribbling below
and thank you! for inspiring them)
connectivity
inspired by introspection\'s guide
we swim, in cyclic waves
what\'s been , will be again..
what we knew, rediscovered
repackaged, as progress\' new
yet, midstream - we break
to look back at the shore
and W. B. Yeats\' poetry
calls out, knowingly:
\'The fury and the mire of human veins.
Before me floats an image, man or shade,
Shade more than man, more image than a shade;\'
\'Nor storm disturbs, flames begotten of flame,
Where blood-begotten spirits come
And all complexities of fury leave,
Dying into a dance,
An agony of trance,
An agony of flame that cannot singe a sleeve.\'
\'When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,\'
first two verses borrowed from
\'Byzantium\'
last verse from \'When you are old\'
September 25th, 2023 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliant! dear Poet
please forgive my self-indulgent scribbling below
and thank you! for inspiring them)
connectivity
inspired by introspection\'s guide
we swim, in cyclic waves
what\'s been , will be again..
what we knew, rediscovered
repackaged, as progress\' new
yet, midstream - we break
to look back at the shore
and W. B. Yeats\' poetry
calls out, knowingly:
\'The fury and the mire of human veins.
Before me floats an image, man or shade,
Shade more than man, more image than a shade;\'
\'Nor storm disturbs, flames begotten of flame,
Where blood-begotten spirits come
And all complexities of fury leave,
Dying into a dance,
An agony of trance,
An agony of flame that cannot singe a sleeve.\'
\'When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,\'
first two verses borrowed from
\'Byzantium\'
last verse from \'When you are old\'
September 25th, 2023 05:05
Seen
LIZ said:
This is beautiful!! \"We aren\'t trapped here, we were meant to be free\"-we just need to believe it!! Move with intention. Being together as ONE! It\'s not easy...takes courage!! Thank you for sharing!
September 25th, 2023 02:39
LIZ said:
This is beautiful!! \"We aren\'t trapped here, we were meant to be free\"-we just need to believe it!! Move with intention. Being together as ONE! It\'s not easy...takes courage!! Thank you for sharing!
September 25th, 2023 02:39
Lyre, Me
Lorenz said:
Oh lira,lira ,lira
Il suono diventa la mia bussola
Rivenza o meditazione
Il cuore sa- più o meno.
(bella lira italianna in memoriam +)
September 24th, 2023 07:31
Lorenz said:
Oh lira,lira ,lira
Il suono diventa la mia bussola
Rivenza o meditazione
Il cuore sa- più o meno.
(bella lira italianna in memoriam +)
September 24th, 2023 07:31
Lyre, Me
Bobby O said:
I’m really lovin this piece line by line and then that tripled when I read “the sound becomes my compass” it’s makes perfect sense and somehow none at all in the way that you would honor cuz it shouldn’t but it does and makes it freaking perfect, metaphor doesn’t capture it , I need a better word for that device that freaking rocked the page.
September 24th, 2023 03:12
Bobby O said:
I’m really lovin this piece line by line and then that tripled when I read “the sound becomes my compass” it’s makes perfect sense and somehow none at all in the way that you would honor cuz it shouldn’t but it does and makes it freaking perfect, metaphor doesn’t capture it , I need a better word for that device that freaking rocked the page.
September 24th, 2023 03:12
Box
Bobby O said:
What a nice piece.
“In the guise of becoming wise”
That statement pushes necessary knowledge for all to consider. Don’t lie and never pretend.
September 22nd, 2023 23:16
Bobby O said:
What a nice piece.
“In the guise of becoming wise”
That statement pushes necessary knowledge for all to consider. Don’t lie and never pretend.
September 22nd, 2023 23:16
Box
Pop64 said:
That box can be both captor and the place to gain freedom, provided the key is truly found. Beautiful writing!
September 22nd, 2023 08:02
Pop64 said:
That box can be both captor and the place to gain freedom, provided the key is truly found. Beautiful writing!
September 22nd, 2023 08:02
Box
LIZ said:
Get that key...unlock, and dust off!!! New beginnings!! Beautiful!!!
September 22nd, 2023 03:40
LIZ said:
Get that key...unlock, and dust off!!! New beginnings!! Beautiful!!!
September 22nd, 2023 03:40
Step
Bobby O said:
Take a stand and now and I write that not to quote but rather to suggest your due for a fine piece b
September 19th, 2023 02:29
Bobby O said:
Take a stand and now and I write that not to quote but rather to suggest your due for a fine piece b
September 19th, 2023 02:29
You Called
L. B. Mek said:
journeys, ultimately
are internal
we quest to find, our truths
be they by someone\'s side
or just alone
what matters is that we follow
our heart\'s whispers/guidance
so we don\'t waste too much time
journeying, just
for the sake of journeying
sincerity, clarity and intent
crucial elements
in every choice we make..
(really related to your insightful depths in this one
words to contemplate after reading)
thank you! dear Poet
September 18th, 2023 03:12
L. B. Mek said:
journeys, ultimately
are internal
we quest to find, our truths
be they by someone\'s side
or just alone
what matters is that we follow
our heart\'s whispers/guidance
so we don\'t waste too much time
journeying, just
for the sake of journeying
sincerity, clarity and intent
crucial elements
in every choice we make..
(really related to your insightful depths in this one
words to contemplate after reading)
thank you! dear Poet
September 18th, 2023 03:12
Made
L. B. Mek said:
\'Eels twinkle in pools of the night.\'
that\'s electric imagery
took me right to the sensations
imbued in your poetry
not just the depicted scenes/thoughts
(I read and learn)
thank you! loved this
September 18th, 2023 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'Eels twinkle in pools of the night.\'
that\'s electric imagery
took me right to the sensations
imbued in your poetry
not just the depicted scenes/thoughts
(I read and learn)
thank you! loved this
September 18th, 2023 03:05
You Called
LIZ said:
Ohhhhh I love the flow here...you know...me and rhythm. But that\'s not important. I keep seeing the same theme so I\'m taking this one for me. I just mentioned one of my favorite quotes to someone else: \"I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be\"...keeps hitting me like a brick!! \"We’re headed to my calling. The one that’s buried deep inside\" INDEED!!! Thank you!!!
September 18th, 2023 02:47
LIZ said:
Ohhhhh I love the flow here...you know...me and rhythm. But that\'s not important. I keep seeing the same theme so I\'m taking this one for me. I just mentioned one of my favorite quotes to someone else: \"I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I have ended up where I needed to be\"...keeps hitting me like a brick!! \"We’re headed to my calling. The one that’s buried deep inside\" INDEED!!! Thank you!!!
September 18th, 2023 02:47
Made
LIZ said:
WOW!!!! WAKE UP!!! \"Voice now has colour and caresses the truths\"! I feel like this represents an awakening! Very nice!!
September 18th, 2023 00:36
LIZ said:
WOW!!!! WAKE UP!!! \"Voice now has colour and caresses the truths\"! I feel like this represents an awakening! Very nice!!
September 18th, 2023 00:36
Darkness of Introversion
Lorenz said:
I love this darkness in our lights !
September 17th, 2023 06:09
Lorenz said:
I love this darkness in our lights !
September 17th, 2023 06:09
Our Secret
Bobby O said:
That second heartbeat after the tension pause is loud like a snare on occasion and the gig of playing cool is up but that works cuz that honest declaration serves to build trust
September 15th, 2023 22:56
Bobby O said:
That second heartbeat after the tension pause is loud like a snare on occasion and the gig of playing cool is up but that works cuz that honest declaration serves to build trust
September 15th, 2023 22:56
Our Secret
peto said:
Shhhhhhhh
I felt it
You are a great writer sage
Another belter
September 15th, 2023 18:00
peto said:
Shhhhhhhh
I felt it
You are a great writer sage
Another belter
September 15th, 2023 18:00
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