Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Words That Cost
peto said:
Sounds like a decision has been made
When you can see a soul you gotta trust your instincts
Always a meaty read
Absorbing
July 5th, 2023 14:29
peto said:
Sounds like a decision has been made
When you can see a soul you gotta trust your instincts
Always a meaty read
Absorbing
July 5th, 2023 14:29
This Dream
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting writing and nicely expressed 🙂
July 5th, 2023 01:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting writing and nicely expressed 🙂
July 5th, 2023 01:18
Brace
Introverted Sage said:
Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Your kind words are appreciated!
Introversion proves to be a blessing and a curse sometimes
July 4th, 2023 16:09
Introverted Sage said:
Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Your kind words are appreciated!
Introversion proves to be a blessing and a curse sometimes
July 4th, 2023 16:09
Brace
peto said:
Although a sad vibe
This is beautifully written
You can defo stand as well as anyone with a pen in your hand
Feel a bit guilty for enjoying
July 4th, 2023 13:45
peto said:
Although a sad vibe
This is beautifully written
You can defo stand as well as anyone with a pen in your hand
Feel a bit guilty for enjoying
July 4th, 2023 13:45
The Devil I\'m Fighting
peto said:
Enjoyed the rhyme in this one
The fact you are writing about
Leads me to believe you are at the very least holding your own in this battle
If not already on top
July 3rd, 2023 08:07
peto said:
Enjoyed the rhyme in this one
The fact you are writing about
Leads me to believe you are at the very least holding your own in this battle
If not already on top
July 3rd, 2023 08:07
The Devil I\'m Fighting
Bobby O said:
Ping pings with my mind.
Denotes the powerful back and forth that is contained in all such journeys.
Nice write good read
July 3rd, 2023 07:34
Bobby O said:
Ping pings with my mind.
Denotes the powerful back and forth that is contained in all such journeys.
Nice write good read
July 3rd, 2023 07:34
The Devil I\'m Fighting
L. B. Mek said:
heartbreakingly profound
reminds me of Ren\'s \'for joe\'
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebX5ZvrT6-o
)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 3rd, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
heartbreakingly profound
reminds me of Ren\'s \'for joe\'
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebX5ZvrT6-o
)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 3rd, 2023 04:55
Fated Flying
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed
\"True living is done on the breeze \"
And killer last verse are particular highlights
June 29th, 2023 18:35
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed
\"True living is done on the breeze \"
And killer last verse are particular highlights
June 29th, 2023 18:35
Divine Dancing
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting well written poem .. some lovely words in this
June 27th, 2023 04:24
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting well written poem .. some lovely words in this
June 27th, 2023 04:24
Circled
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting words . Good poem ))
June 27th, 2023 04:23
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting words . Good poem ))
June 27th, 2023 04:23
Fluoroscopic Focus
Bobby O said:
Really nice and impressive. The “plating” of your phrase added an element that dared any antagonist to disassemble the art conveyed. I was challenged ( the plating nigh) to submit a committed alliterative on all and every word. Maybe give a look see ? It’s titled Perhaps and it fits nicely as companion? Hit me back if you peek? Too cool
June 23rd, 2023 13:38
Bobby O said:
Really nice and impressive. The “plating” of your phrase added an element that dared any antagonist to disassemble the art conveyed. I was challenged ( the plating nigh) to submit a committed alliterative on all and every word. Maybe give a look see ? It’s titled Perhaps and it fits nicely as companion? Hit me back if you peek? Too cool
June 23rd, 2023 13:38
Fluoroscopic Focus
LIZ said:
I actually love this! I do something similar when I have writer\'s block.
June 22nd, 2023 17:37
LIZ said:
I actually love this! I do something similar when I have writer\'s block.
June 22nd, 2023 17:37
Am I
The Dreamer said:
Anyone who can write a poem can never be broken 😉 and yeah the execution of the poem is pretty good so keep up the good work 👍🏻😁.
June 20th, 2023 21:55
The Dreamer said:
Anyone who can write a poem can never be broken 😉 and yeah the execution of the poem is pretty good so keep up the good work 👍🏻😁.
June 20th, 2023 21:55
3 Means Trine
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I appreciate how you\'ve beautifully crafted this poem
borrowing from that wonderful song
such a soothing, uplifting read
thank you, dear Poet
June 19th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I appreciate how you\'ve beautifully crafted this poem
borrowing from that wonderful song
such a soothing, uplifting read
thank you, dear Poet
June 19th, 2023 03:54
Bird\'s Eye
L. B. Mek said:
\'Grasping for straws
To maintain the charade.
Facing the music.
Ends the games that they\'ve played.
Liberation.
Vindication.\'
profound, words to meditate upon
thank you! dear Poet
June 16th, 2023 01:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'Grasping for straws
To maintain the charade.
Facing the music.
Ends the games that they\'ve played.
Liberation.
Vindication.\'
profound, words to meditate upon
thank you! dear Poet
June 16th, 2023 01:24
Sucra
L. B. Mek said:
so true! dear Poet
your last line said it all
(donuts till our graveyards
dreamscape\'s, where salads
taste like fried food delight...
guilt detoxing our way to that
finite)
June 12th, 2023 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
so true! dear Poet
your last line said it all
(donuts till our graveyards
dreamscape\'s, where salads
taste like fried food delight...
guilt detoxing our way to that
finite)
June 12th, 2023 03:34
Modern Day Mystic
jarcher54 said:
A creative description of a curious soul. Sigh.
June 7th, 2023 12:08
jarcher54 said:
A creative description of a curious soul. Sigh.
June 7th, 2023 12:08
When I Become a Planet
HaRoTa said:
Hi there,
This is deep. I love the expression.
June 5th, 2023 09:44
HaRoTa said:
Hi there,
This is deep. I love the expression.
June 5th, 2023 09:44
Junt
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(Pyramid schemes as we profligate
Pythagoras triangulating heritages
legacy, entrenched in absurdity
of ignorance fuelled, censorship
foreshadowing future\'s
we can never contain
merely decimate with warhead
fingerprints, on our happenstance
... this a now, lament
in-step, with Time\'s unveiling
of fear warped, reality
a poetic dissection of society
as dictum, commentary)
May 29th, 2023 03:16
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(Pyramid schemes as we profligate
Pythagoras triangulating heritages
legacy, entrenched in absurdity
of ignorance fuelled, censorship
foreshadowing future\'s
we can never contain
merely decimate with warhead
fingerprints, on our happenstance
... this a now, lament
in-step, with Time\'s unveiling
of fear warped, reality
a poetic dissection of society
as dictum, commentary)
May 29th, 2023 03:16
Ditch
Bobby O said:
Ok. It’s a statement and an assuming way to tap into a humble persona and still parenting class a work in the face of self deprecating stance, a necessary conjoining ?a happenstance of coexistence ?, a ploy? a knowing author confident that readers tend away from the dichotomy and instead weave together the richness of the coexistence ??
Some points to peruse … !!!??
May 21st, 2023 02:34
Bobby O said:
Ok. It’s a statement and an assuming way to tap into a humble persona and still parenting class a work in the face of self deprecating stance, a necessary conjoining ?a happenstance of coexistence ?, a ploy? a knowing author confident that readers tend away from the dichotomy and instead weave together the richness of the coexistence ??
Some points to peruse … !!!??
May 21st, 2023 02:34
Shy Twice & Cliche\' No Longer
Bobby O said:
It’s cool that you showed this interest
Much respect.
May 18th, 2023 02:37
Bobby O said:
It’s cool that you showed this interest
Much respect.
May 18th, 2023 02:37
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