Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Seeing Eye
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s my kind of cuppa tea! Thank and have a wonderful morning
July 24th, 2023 03:07
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s my kind of cuppa tea! Thank and have a wonderful morning
July 24th, 2023 03:07
Broken Light
LIZ said:
\"So sick of superficial, Just give me something real\" YES please!!!!! Well done!
July 22nd, 2023 17:41
LIZ said:
\"So sick of superficial, Just give me something real\" YES please!!!!! Well done!
July 22nd, 2023 17:41
Broken Light
peto said:
Ah but these words reflect the light
A wee gem of a write
Loved reading
July 22nd, 2023 16:29
peto said:
Ah but these words reflect the light
A wee gem of a write
Loved reading
July 22nd, 2023 16:29
Graced
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'So how do you build - when
your foundation is always shaking?
(Neil Gaiman quote \'Every hour wounds. The last one kills.\')
\'Destruction translates to clarity in the making.
Clearing the way for the path I\'ll be taking.\'
\'As I learn to heal my wounds
and how to stop the bleed.\'
\'Widening my view - pan right and pan left.
Removing the haze sent to keep me bereft.\'
July 21st, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'So how do you build - when
your foundation is always shaking?
(Neil Gaiman quote \'Every hour wounds. The last one kills.\')
\'Destruction translates to clarity in the making.
Clearing the way for the path I\'ll be taking.\'
\'As I learn to heal my wounds
and how to stop the bleed.\'
\'Widening my view - pan right and pan left.
Removing the haze sent to keep me bereft.\'
July 21st, 2023 03:08
That Voice
L. B. Mek said:
so true if we are but humble
enough, to learn
our mistakes, can anchor
our evolution
we need only
accept accountability and strive
to do better
next time we\'re given the opportunity
a great write, dear Poet
thank you
July 17th, 2023 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
so true if we are but humble
enough, to learn
our mistakes, can anchor
our evolution
we need only
accept accountability and strive
to do better
next time we\'re given the opportunity
a great write, dear Poet
thank you
July 17th, 2023 04:57
That Voice
Ok Waleed said:
Make that voice work for you
It may sound corny but true
good poem sage
I hope to see more rage
July 16th, 2023 23:14
Ok Waleed said:
Make that voice work for you
It may sound corny but true
good poem sage
I hope to see more rage
July 16th, 2023 23:14
Singing Blues
peto said:
This has a great flow
Almost like singing rather than reading
Perfect rhythm to go with the blues
Love a good rhyme and ending also
Ticked every box
July 12th, 2023 15:03
peto said:
This has a great flow
Almost like singing rather than reading
Perfect rhythm to go with the blues
Love a good rhyme and ending also
Ticked every box
July 12th, 2023 15:03
The Bigger They Are
Introverted Sage said:
Warms my heart, your kind words!
I appreciate your time and patronage
July 11th, 2023 22:00
Introverted Sage said:
Warms my heart, your kind words!
I appreciate your time and patronage
July 11th, 2023 22:00
The Bigger They Are
peto said:
Flows like a dream
Each verse could stand alone as poem
The 1st is amazing
Thoroughly enjoyed this one
July 11th, 2023 10:54
peto said:
Flows like a dream
Each verse could stand alone as poem
The 1st is amazing
Thoroughly enjoyed this one
July 11th, 2023 10:54
Reis
Caring dove said:
I liked reading your poem 🙂
A lovely , interesting and engaging writing
July 11th, 2023 05:52
Caring dove said:
I liked reading your poem 🙂
A lovely , interesting and engaging writing
July 11th, 2023 05:52
Duple
Introverted Sage said:
Indeed it is!
A constant journey with a myriad of paths not for the faint of heart.. lol
You\'re kind words and time to review my work are so appreciated!
🪶Happy writing
July 10th, 2023 19:03
Introverted Sage said:
Indeed it is!
A constant journey with a myriad of paths not for the faint of heart.. lol
You\'re kind words and time to review my work are so appreciated!
🪶Happy writing
July 10th, 2023 19:03
Duple
L. B. Mek said:
\'still there, poking away at my heart\'
(a great write
I so relate dear Poet)
\'Miss the beat - collect the breadcrumbs.
Higher moments - closing gaps of time.\'
hindsight, a curse and mercy
we can trace our missteps
while dreaming of a future
where we get our choices right
July 10th, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'still there, poking away at my heart\'
(a great write
I so relate dear Poet)
\'Miss the beat - collect the breadcrumbs.
Higher moments - closing gaps of time.\'
hindsight, a curse and mercy
we can trace our missteps
while dreaming of a future
where we get our choices right
July 10th, 2023 03:08
Sea Faring
-Iris- said:
Such lovely and creative writing. Amazing read - gets the imagination to run wild.
July 9th, 2023 09:00
-Iris- said:
Such lovely and creative writing. Amazing read - gets the imagination to run wild.
July 9th, 2023 09:00
Guided
peto said:
You really have something special
A bit of a change up in style
Rhyme and content are great
And
You tend to leave with a killer last line
No change here then
July 9th, 2023 04:55
peto said:
You really have something special
A bit of a change up in style
Rhyme and content are great
And
You tend to leave with a killer last line
No change here then
July 9th, 2023 04:55
Sea Faring
Bobby O said:
It’s real nice I felt invigorated by the tribute to beauty and wonder if it’s symbolic of someone yiu desire?
July 7th, 2023 16:23
Bobby O said:
It’s real nice I felt invigorated by the tribute to beauty and wonder if it’s symbolic of someone yiu desire?
July 7th, 2023 16:23
Sea Faring
L. B. Mek said:
admittedly i did get a little lost
in the sheer abundance of your vivid imagery
but, as a reading experience
what a poetic treat, thank you!
July 7th, 2023 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
admittedly i did get a little lost
in the sheer abundance of your vivid imagery
but, as a reading experience
what a poetic treat, thank you!
July 7th, 2023 05:32
Sea Faring
peto said:
This is a classic the rhyme is superb
First verse in particular is dynamite
Great read
July 7th, 2023 03:33
peto said:
This is a classic the rhyme is superb
First verse in particular is dynamite
Great read
July 7th, 2023 03:33
Words That Cost
peto said:
Sounds like a decision has been made
When you can see a soul you gotta trust your instincts
Always a meaty read
Absorbing
July 5th, 2023 14:29
peto said:
Sounds like a decision has been made
When you can see a soul you gotta trust your instincts
Always a meaty read
Absorbing
July 5th, 2023 14:29
Brace
Introverted Sage said:
Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Your kind words are appreciated!
Introversion proves to be a blessing and a curse sometimes
July 4th, 2023 16:09
Introverted Sage said:
Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Your kind words are appreciated!
Introversion proves to be a blessing and a curse sometimes
July 4th, 2023 16:09
Brace
peto said:
Although a sad vibe
This is beautifully written
You can defo stand as well as anyone with a pen in your hand
Feel a bit guilty for enjoying
July 4th, 2023 13:45
peto said:
Although a sad vibe
This is beautifully written
You can defo stand as well as anyone with a pen in your hand
Feel a bit guilty for enjoying
July 4th, 2023 13:45
The Devil I\'m Fighting
peto said:
Enjoyed the rhyme in this one
The fact you are writing about
Leads me to believe you are at the very least holding your own in this battle
If not already on top
July 3rd, 2023 08:07
peto said:
Enjoyed the rhyme in this one
The fact you are writing about
Leads me to believe you are at the very least holding your own in this battle
If not already on top
July 3rd, 2023 08:07
The Devil I\'m Fighting
Bobby O said:
Ping pings with my mind.
Denotes the powerful back and forth that is contained in all such journeys.
Nice write good read
July 3rd, 2023 07:34
Bobby O said:
Ping pings with my mind.
Denotes the powerful back and forth that is contained in all such journeys.
Nice write good read
July 3rd, 2023 07:34
The Devil I\'m Fighting
L. B. Mek said:
heartbreakingly profound
reminds me of Ren\'s \'for joe\'
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebX5ZvrT6-o
)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 3rd, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
heartbreakingly profound
reminds me of Ren\'s \'for joe\'
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebX5ZvrT6-o
)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 3rd, 2023 04:55
Fated Flying
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed
\"True living is done on the breeze \"
And killer last verse are particular highlights
June 29th, 2023 18:35
peto said:
Thoroughly enjoyed
\"True living is done on the breeze \"
And killer last verse are particular highlights
June 29th, 2023 18:35
Divine Dancing
Caring dove said:
Interesting well written poem .. some lovely words in this
June 27th, 2023 04:24
Caring dove said:
Interesting well written poem .. some lovely words in this
June 27th, 2023 04:24
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