Comments received on poems by Introverted Sage
Fluoroscopic Focus
Bobby O said:
Really nice and impressive. The “plating” of your phrase added an element that dared any antagonist to disassemble the art conveyed. I was challenged ( the plating nigh) to submit a committed alliterative on all and every word. Maybe give a look see ? It’s titled Perhaps and it fits nicely as companion? Hit me back if you peek? Too cool
June 23rd, 2023 13:38
Bobby O said:
Really nice and impressive. The “plating” of your phrase added an element that dared any antagonist to disassemble the art conveyed. I was challenged ( the plating nigh) to submit a committed alliterative on all and every word. Maybe give a look see ? It’s titled Perhaps and it fits nicely as companion? Hit me back if you peek? Too cool
June 23rd, 2023 13:38
Fluoroscopic Focus
LIZ said:
I actually love this! I do something similar when I have writer\'s block.
June 22nd, 2023 17:37
LIZ said:
I actually love this! I do something similar when I have writer\'s block.
June 22nd, 2023 17:37
Am I
The Dreamer said:
Anyone who can write a poem can never be broken 😉 and yeah the execution of the poem is pretty good so keep up the good work 👍🏻😁.
June 20th, 2023 21:55
The Dreamer said:
Anyone who can write a poem can never be broken 😉 and yeah the execution of the poem is pretty good so keep up the good work 👍🏻😁.
June 20th, 2023 21:55
3 Means Trine
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I appreciate how you\'ve beautifully crafted this poem
borrowing from that wonderful song
such a soothing, uplifting read
thank you, dear Poet
June 19th, 2023 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I appreciate how you\'ve beautifully crafted this poem
borrowing from that wonderful song
such a soothing, uplifting read
thank you, dear Poet
June 19th, 2023 03:54
Bird\'s Eye
L. B. Mek said:
\'Grasping for straws
To maintain the charade.
Facing the music.
Ends the games that they\'ve played.
Liberation.
Vindication.\'
profound, words to meditate upon
thank you! dear Poet
June 16th, 2023 01:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'Grasping for straws
To maintain the charade.
Facing the music.
Ends the games that they\'ve played.
Liberation.
Vindication.\'
profound, words to meditate upon
thank you! dear Poet
June 16th, 2023 01:24
Sucra
L. B. Mek said:
so true! dear Poet
your last line said it all
(donuts till our graveyards
dreamscape\'s, where salads
taste like fried food delight...
guilt detoxing our way to that
finite)
June 12th, 2023 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
so true! dear Poet
your last line said it all
(donuts till our graveyards
dreamscape\'s, where salads
taste like fried food delight...
guilt detoxing our way to that
finite)
June 12th, 2023 03:34
Modern Day Mystic
jarcher54 said:
A creative description of a curious soul. Sigh.
June 7th, 2023 12:08
jarcher54 said:
A creative description of a curious soul. Sigh.
June 7th, 2023 12:08
When I Become a Planet
HaRoTa said:
Hi there,
This is deep. I love the expression.
June 5th, 2023 09:44
HaRoTa said:
Hi there,
This is deep. I love the expression.
June 5th, 2023 09:44
Junt
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(Pyramid schemes as we profligate
Pythagoras triangulating heritages
legacy, entrenched in absurdity
of ignorance fuelled, censorship
foreshadowing future\'s
we can never contain
merely decimate with warhead
fingerprints, on our happenstance
... this a now, lament
in-step, with Time\'s unveiling
of fear warped, reality
a poetic dissection of society
as dictum, commentary)
May 29th, 2023 03:16
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(Pyramid schemes as we profligate
Pythagoras triangulating heritages
legacy, entrenched in absurdity
of ignorance fuelled, censorship
foreshadowing future\'s
we can never contain
merely decimate with warhead
fingerprints, on our happenstance
... this a now, lament
in-step, with Time\'s unveiling
of fear warped, reality
a poetic dissection of society
as dictum, commentary)
May 29th, 2023 03:16
Ditch
Bobby O said:
Ok. It’s a statement and an assuming way to tap into a humble persona and still parenting class a work in the face of self deprecating stance, a necessary conjoining ?a happenstance of coexistence ?, a ploy? a knowing author confident that readers tend away from the dichotomy and instead weave together the richness of the coexistence ??
Some points to peruse … !!!??
May 21st, 2023 02:34
Bobby O said:
Ok. It’s a statement and an assuming way to tap into a humble persona and still parenting class a work in the face of self deprecating stance, a necessary conjoining ?a happenstance of coexistence ?, a ploy? a knowing author confident that readers tend away from the dichotomy and instead weave together the richness of the coexistence ??
Some points to peruse … !!!??
May 21st, 2023 02:34
Shy Twice & Cliche\' No Longer
Bobby O said:
It’s cool that you showed this interest
Much respect.
May 18th, 2023 02:37
Bobby O said:
It’s cool that you showed this interest
Much respect.
May 18th, 2023 02:37
Shy Twice & Cliche\' No Longer
Bobby O said:
It’s cool that you showed this interest
Much respect.
May 18th, 2023 02:37
Bobby O said:
It’s cool that you showed this interest
Much respect.
May 18th, 2023 02:37
Sordid Sort It
Bobby O said:
Walk with me while we sort it out …,
That’s the perfect request for the soul of the intended and also brilliant technique to invite the reader to enjoin. How cool of a double bubble is that ??
May 16th, 2023 02:16
Bobby O said:
Walk with me while we sort it out …,
That’s the perfect request for the soul of the intended and also brilliant technique to invite the reader to enjoin. How cool of a double bubble is that ??
May 16th, 2023 02:16
Subjugation Live
L. B. Mek said:
love this
personally, took me
to the the film \'sophie\'s choice\'
but whatever your inspiration
you\'ve created a most unique
poem, dear poet
\'Meet at a great fall.\'
\'A message in the Call.\'
this coupled poetic refrain
as marriage of reality\'s chaotic
lessons, unleashes a whole host
of contemplative thoughts
May 15th, 2023 02:50
L. B. Mek said:
love this
personally, took me
to the the film \'sophie\'s choice\'
but whatever your inspiration
you\'ve created a most unique
poem, dear poet
\'Meet at a great fall.\'
\'A message in the Call.\'
this coupled poetic refrain
as marriage of reality\'s chaotic
lessons, unleashes a whole host
of contemplative thoughts
May 15th, 2023 02:50
Scripted
L. B. Mek said:
really creative
that duality in poetic voice
distilling opposing arguments
of juxtaposed perspectives
unique, accomplished poetry
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 8th, 2023 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
really creative
that duality in poetic voice
distilling opposing arguments
of juxtaposed perspectives
unique, accomplished poetry
a great read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 8th, 2023 05:47
Impressionado 1
Eugene S. said:
I really like the lay of the poem. Feels like an ended relationship with materialism and the related obliviousness of the one
whose materialistic. It\'s funny how people cannot or refuse to see the harm they can cause by just simply being indifferent to those around them. Materialism, selfishness, soullessness. Very relatable, and based on certain critiques, a poem that proves itself true.
April 24th, 2023 20:06
Eugene S. said:
I really like the lay of the poem. Feels like an ended relationship with materialism and the related obliviousness of the one
whose materialistic. It\'s funny how people cannot or refuse to see the harm they can cause by just simply being indifferent to those around them. Materialism, selfishness, soullessness. Very relatable, and based on certain critiques, a poem that proves itself true.
April 24th, 2023 20:06
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