Comments received on poems by Ray Moonee



My Desert Rose
L. B. Mek said:

a lovely read, wonderfully worded
thanks for sharing

May 29th, 2023 03:55

My Aquarium
L. B. Mek said:

good metaphor, thanks for sharing

May 26th, 2023 05:08

My Aquarium
Soman Ragavan said:

My comments on the poem \"My aquarium” by Ray Moonee
It is a totally different perspective to look at the whole thing from the eyes of the fish in the aquarium. In the river or the lake or the sea, they are free to roam as they wish. Just like caged birds or animals in the zoo.
The fish look for food at any time and don’t have to wait for someone to feed them. That someone might forget sometimes or be late… Please see my poem “The caged bird” on this site. Soman Ragavan. 26 May 2023. //
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May 26th, 2023 05:02