Comments received on poems by Ray Moonee
Land of Mind
sorenbarrett said:
I love poems that pose a question and leave one to ponder. This is one and my answer is neither there is no such thing as fault.
September 10th, 2025 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
I love poems that pose a question and leave one to ponder. This is one and my answer is neither there is no such thing as fault.
September 10th, 2025 11:09
Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A most unique view based on definition of words. A deep philosophical question in this poem. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
A most unique view based on definition of words. A deep philosophical question in this poem. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 14:13
A Throbbing Train
sorenbarrett said:
Intent is everything in spoken words and though we think we know it is seldom that we do. A great write about the pain of words ill said and with intent all the worse in that ground things will seldom grow again
August 30th, 2025 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
Intent is everything in spoken words and though we think we know it is seldom that we do. A great write about the pain of words ill said and with intent all the worse in that ground things will seldom grow again
August 30th, 2025 12:58
Atrocity
Doggerel Dave said:
Apalling. Societal values and norms imposed on the individual. Well said.
I would have preferred though that the material provided in your comment be the subject matter of your poem.
August 25th, 2025 18:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Apalling. Societal values and norms imposed on the individual. Well said.
I would have preferred though that the material provided in your comment be the subject matter of your poem.
August 25th, 2025 18:09
Atrocity
sorenbarrett said:
With the aid of the author\'s not this one becomes clear in its metaphors and is powerful and poignant. Well written and a fave
August 25th, 2025 15:33
sorenbarrett said:
With the aid of the author\'s not this one becomes clear in its metaphors and is powerful and poignant. Well written and a fave
August 25th, 2025 15:33
Beyond Breath
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poetic dedication to an astronaut well written
August 24th, 2025 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poetic dedication to an astronaut well written
August 24th, 2025 13:35
Beyond Breath
Demar Desu said:
Mankind’s curiosity seems to be also the demise (climate change), sometimes I wonder if satisfaction ever comes to scientists
August 24th, 2025 12:19
Demar Desu said:
Mankind’s curiosity seems to be also the demise (climate change), sometimes I wonder if satisfaction ever comes to scientists
August 24th, 2025 12:19
Rewriting the Tale
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message in this write it reflects a more modern view of choice and an antihero over the old hero view. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2025 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message in this write it reflects a more modern view of choice and an antihero over the old hero view. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2025 07:23
Stray\'s Truth
sorenbarrett said:
My heart goes out to stray dogs but I am not able to care for them and so am forced to watch them fight and suffer. Sad
August 22nd, 2025 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
My heart goes out to stray dogs but I am not able to care for them and so am forced to watch them fight and suffer. Sad
August 22nd, 2025 10:46
My Desert Rose
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely read, wonderfully worded
thanks for sharing
May 29th, 2023 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
a lovely read, wonderfully worded
thanks for sharing
May 29th, 2023 03:55
My Aquarium
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My aquarium” by Ray Moonee
It is a totally different perspective to look at the whole thing from the eyes of the fish in the aquarium. In the river or the lake or the sea, they are free to roam as they wish. Just like caged birds or animals in the zoo.
The fish look for food at any time and don’t have to wait for someone to feed them. That someone might forget sometimes or be late… Please see my poem “The caged bird” on this site. Soman Ragavan. 26 May 2023. //
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May 26th, 2023 05:02
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My aquarium” by Ray Moonee
It is a totally different perspective to look at the whole thing from the eyes of the fish in the aquarium. In the river or the lake or the sea, they are free to roam as they wish. Just like caged birds or animals in the zoo.
The fish look for food at any time and don’t have to wait for someone to feed them. That someone might forget sometimes or be late… Please see my poem “The caged bird” on this site. Soman Ragavan. 26 May 2023. //
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May 26th, 2023 05:02
