Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Invention of Laughter
orchidee said:
Good write Doctor, erm, Who - erm, Teddy!
September 6th, 2023 05:40
orchidee said:
Good write Doctor, erm, Who - erm, Teddy!
September 6th, 2023 05:40
Invention of Laughter
aDarkerMind said:
would it be ok to go back and change certain things? I wonder;
go back and share a drink with Dylan Thomas....yes;
go back and marry Sylvia Plath...yes;
what else I wonder;
September 6th, 2023 05:00
aDarkerMind said:
would it be ok to go back and change certain things? I wonder;
go back and share a drink with Dylan Thomas....yes;
go back and marry Sylvia Plath...yes;
what else I wonder;
September 6th, 2023 05:00
Invention of Laughter
Neville said:
funny that .. and there I was thinking it was just me ❤️
September 6th, 2023 04:40
Neville said:
funny that .. and there I was thinking it was just me ❤️
September 6th, 2023 04:40
Invention of Laughter
peto said:
I\'d go into the past an hour
Get back the time I\'ve already been thinking of this
You can be a torment Teddy lol
September 6th, 2023 04:21
peto said:
I\'d go into the past an hour
Get back the time I\'ve already been thinking of this
You can be a torment Teddy lol
September 6th, 2023 04:21
Invention of Laughter
LIZ said:
Ohhhh you\'re in the creative mind vibe! If the time machine looks like the one on the picture I\'m in! 😁 magical!! 💖
September 6th, 2023 03:00
LIZ said:
Ohhhh you\'re in the creative mind vibe! If the time machine looks like the one on the picture I\'m in! 😁 magical!! 💖
September 6th, 2023 03:00
Blank Sheet
Bella Shepard said:
OMG! \"keys from a past life that were once
finely tuned to perfection
now playing a blank sheet of music
I am silent
I am blind
I am lost.\"
You have found perfection in this piece, the poem entwined with this beautiful picture. You amaze me dear friend, over and over again.
September 5th, 2023 13:46
Bella Shepard said:
OMG! \"keys from a past life that were once
finely tuned to perfection
now playing a blank sheet of music
I am silent
I am blind
I am lost.\"
You have found perfection in this piece, the poem entwined with this beautiful picture. You amaze me dear friend, over and over again.
September 5th, 2023 13:46
Blank Sheet
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad yet Beautiful words , teddy 🙂🌸 like the feel to this piece of writing .. like the mention of that piano
September 5th, 2023 08:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad yet Beautiful words , teddy 🙂🌸 like the feel to this piece of writing .. like the mention of that piano
September 5th, 2023 08:05
Blank Sheet
Neville said:
Ah but thou art kintsugi .. a phoenix and my very dearest Teddy ❤️ so perfectly poemed .. Neville ❤️
September 5th, 2023 04:42
Neville said:
Ah but thou art kintsugi .. a phoenix and my very dearest Teddy ❤️ so perfectly poemed .. Neville ❤️
September 5th, 2023 04:42
Blank Sheet
orchidee said:
I never knew it was like this for us - you and me! 🤣
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! lol.
September 5th, 2023 03:09
orchidee said:
I never knew it was like this for us - you and me! 🤣
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido! lol.
September 5th, 2023 03:09
Blank Sheet
LIZ said:
Beautifully broken! But you know, I\'ve learned that during that solo performance, insight comes in. So much comes to light....if we allow it!! Loved it! 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:33
LIZ said:
Beautifully broken! But you know, I\'ve learned that during that solo performance, insight comes in. So much comes to light....if we allow it!! Loved it! 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:33
Tiger Heart
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a feeling that combines so many different emotions, from high to low, which you express beautifully in this poem. Your tiger is definitely burning bright here. You also inspired me to read Blake\'s \"The Tyger\", and for that I also thank you.
September 4th, 2023 13:23
Bella Shepard said:
Love is a feeling that combines so many different emotions, from high to low, which you express beautifully in this poem. Your tiger is definitely burning bright here. You also inspired me to read Blake\'s \"The Tyger\", and for that I also thank you.
September 4th, 2023 13:23
Empty Sky
Parisab said:
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments are as big as the sky today…
September 4th, 2023 12:52
Parisab said:
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments are as big as the sky today…
September 4th, 2023 12:52
Tiger Heart
Accidental Poet said:
And may those stories adventures and memories put a smile on your face and in your heart. ☺️
September 4th, 2023 07:53
Accidental Poet said:
And may those stories adventures and memories put a smile on your face and in your heart. ☺️
September 4th, 2023 07:53
Tiger Heart
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tyger, Tyger burning Bright!\'
indeed our wise Poetess
roar loud n proud, leave behind
a fiercely defiant blaze
to inspire a generation of love..
such a great write
(ermm
kinda unrelated
but i git a box of Frosties cornflakes
this weekend, a nostalgic
treat
and yes, it still tastes
GrRReaTTttt)
😁
ahem.. \'thanks for putting up with me\'
hope you n yours
have a great week of holiday fun
stay safe
September 4th, 2023 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tyger, Tyger burning Bright!\'
indeed our wise Poetess
roar loud n proud, leave behind
a fiercely defiant blaze
to inspire a generation of love..
such a great write
(ermm
kinda unrelated
but i git a box of Frosties cornflakes
this weekend, a nostalgic
treat
and yes, it still tastes
GrRReaTTttt)
😁
ahem.. \'thanks for putting up with me\'
hope you n yours
have a great week of holiday fun
stay safe
September 4th, 2023 03:59
Empty Sky
L. B. Mek said:
(such a poignantly moody Poem
dear Poetess and please
forgive my dreary musings below kind friend
your ink inspires my honesty, a little too
effectively..
lol)
airports, are a cruel kind of gateway
to our muse of possibility and dreams
in an instant, we\'re sky high and free
and that very instant
we feel that cruel distance, singeing
that widening gap in our hearts...
(this is why i don\'t do goodbyes
I give everything i have
in the Time i\'m gifted with
the kind souls that enter my life
and when cruel fate comes around
I simply disappear
it has been this way all my life, a kindness
of sorts, since
i leave behind little but fragments
to remember me by)
but to me
every memory visits crystal clear
decades
after finality visits my cherished relationships..
but these wet eyes, realise
to feel this way, i must have loved so abundantly
and so gratefully, i shall carry these scarring
mementos
till that hurrah breath, grants a most finite
sigh of relief..
till then we reminisce and 🍻
September 4th, 2023 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
(such a poignantly moody Poem
dear Poetess and please
forgive my dreary musings below kind friend
your ink inspires my honesty, a little too
effectively..
lol)
airports, are a cruel kind of gateway
to our muse of possibility and dreams
in an instant, we\'re sky high and free
and that very instant
we feel that cruel distance, singeing
that widening gap in our hearts...
(this is why i don\'t do goodbyes
I give everything i have
in the Time i\'m gifted with
the kind souls that enter my life
and when cruel fate comes around
I simply disappear
it has been this way all my life, a kindness
of sorts, since
i leave behind little but fragments
to remember me by)
but to me
every memory visits crystal clear
decades
after finality visits my cherished relationships..
but these wet eyes, realise
to feel this way, i must have loved so abundantly
and so gratefully, i shall carry these scarring
mementos
till that hurrah breath, grants a most finite
sigh of relief..
till then we reminisce and 🍻
September 4th, 2023 03:52
Tiger Heart
Teddy.15 said:
William Blake\'s poem has had so much inspiration on me Tyger Tyger burning bright in the forest of the night. I am a tiger 🐅 lol 🤣
September 4th, 2023 02:35
Teddy.15 said:
William Blake\'s poem has had so much inspiration on me Tyger Tyger burning bright in the forest of the night. I am a tiger 🐅 lol 🤣
September 4th, 2023 02:35
Tiger Heart
orchidee said:
What I want to know is - what is a \'tyger\' in Blakes\' poem?! lol. There\'s a liger, so maybe a cross between a tiger and a lion, but still spelt wrong as \'lyger\'.
I must know these things of major importance. lol.
He was eccentric, so I wouldn\'t be surprised if he was thinking of some mythical beast, half-tiger, half-Fido. :)
September 4th, 2023 02:30
orchidee said:
What I want to know is - what is a \'tyger\' in Blakes\' poem?! lol. There\'s a liger, so maybe a cross between a tiger and a lion, but still spelt wrong as \'lyger\'.
I must know these things of major importance. lol.
He was eccentric, so I wouldn\'t be surprised if he was thinking of some mythical beast, half-tiger, half-Fido. :)
September 4th, 2023 02:30
Tiger Heart
LIZ said:
\"sometimes they can choke my soul\" Lord have mercy!! Isn\'t that the truth!!! 💖
September 4th, 2023 02:22
LIZ said:
\"sometimes they can choke my soul\" Lord have mercy!! Isn\'t that the truth!!! 💖
September 4th, 2023 02:22
Empty Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams be of good memories Teddy.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams be of good memories Teddy.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:07
Empty Sky
Parisab said:
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments are as big as the sky today…
September 3rd, 2023 13:06
Parisab said:
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments are as big as the sky today…
September 3rd, 2023 13:06
Empty Sky
Bella Shepard said:
I am thrilled to see your post, have missed your unequaled verse. The beautiful picture of clouds has such an ethereal feel to it, it complements the essence of this simple yet elegant poem. So glad you\'re back!
September 3rd, 2023 11:59
Bella Shepard said:
I am thrilled to see your post, have missed your unequaled verse. The beautiful picture of clouds has such an ethereal feel to it, it complements the essence of this simple yet elegant poem. So glad you\'re back!
September 3rd, 2023 11:59
Short-Circuit
Neville said:
hope you had as good a time on holiday as I\'m having now finding you back here .. ❤️
September 3rd, 2023 09:29
Neville said:
hope you had as good a time on holiday as I\'m having now finding you back here .. ❤️
September 3rd, 2023 09:29
Empty Sky
Accidental Poet said:
I know the feeling Teddy. A rose of love lives forever. 🌹
September 3rd, 2023 07:32
Accidental Poet said:
I know the feeling Teddy. A rose of love lives forever. 🌹
September 3rd, 2023 07:32
Empty Sky
sorenbarrett said:
At first read I took this literally but then upon reflection I saw that it could be taken as emotional terminals where people part in life never to see the other the same again. A subtle poem of growth, age, and emotional distancing. Touching
September 3rd, 2023 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
At first read I took this literally but then upon reflection I saw that it could be taken as emotional terminals where people part in life never to see the other the same again. A subtle poem of growth, age, and emotional distancing. Touching
September 3rd, 2023 05:45
Empty Sky
Neville said:
every word sadly enjoyed .. but the balance set write by what I sincerely hope is your eventual return .. ❤️
September 3rd, 2023 05:18
Neville said:
every word sadly enjoyed .. but the balance set write by what I sincerely hope is your eventual return .. ❤️
September 3rd, 2023 05:18
Empty Sky
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Teddy.
Did ya see me again?! lol.
September 3rd, 2023 04:46
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Teddy.
Did ya see me again?! lol.
September 3rd, 2023 04:46
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