Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Knowing I Saw Enough
peto said:
Maybe you could take some consolation knowing your words let the rest of us see the light
Great message Teddy
Delivered perfectly
September 10th, 2023 17:18
peto said:
Maybe you could take some consolation knowing your words let the rest of us see the light
Great message Teddy
Delivered perfectly
September 10th, 2023 17:18
In Silence and Disbelief
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest Teddy, you have captured in this poem the pain and grief that we, as a nation, suffered that day. I remember the time and place when I heard the news, watching moment by moment as it was unfolding, and then seeing the second tower fall in real time. How could this be happening? You have paid tribute to all those first responders who rushed in when duty called, and gave their lives. It is with a greatful heart that I thank you for honoring all those who suffered and died on that day.
September 9th, 2023 15:45
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest Teddy, you have captured in this poem the pain and grief that we, as a nation, suffered that day. I remember the time and place when I heard the news, watching moment by moment as it was unfolding, and then seeing the second tower fall in real time. How could this be happening? You have paid tribute to all those first responders who rushed in when duty called, and gave their lives. It is with a greatful heart that I thank you for honoring all those who suffered and died on that day.
September 9th, 2023 15:45
In Silence and Disbelief
sorenbarrett said:
A captivating memorial of a dark day that has directly or indirectly affected all of us. Powerfully stated in a moving poem.
September 9th, 2023 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
A captivating memorial of a dark day that has directly or indirectly affected all of us. Powerfully stated in a moving poem.
September 9th, 2023 08:07
In Silence and Disbelief
peto said:
Empathy at it\'s finest Teddy
You are a world child
I can\'t really add to this write
Other than to thank you for it
September 9th, 2023 04:26
peto said:
Empathy at it\'s finest Teddy
You are a world child
I can\'t really add to this write
Other than to thank you for it
September 9th, 2023 04:26
In Silence and Disbelief
Neville said:
It still seems so surreal .. but sadly, it\'s real ........... Lest we forget .. Amen 🤍
September 9th, 2023 02:57
Neville said:
It still seems so surreal .. but sadly, it\'s real ........... Lest we forget .. Amen 🤍
September 9th, 2023 02:57
In Silence and Disbelief
Doggerel Dave said:
Tragic. Innocent people die in war, Teddy.
September 9th, 2023 02:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Tragic. Innocent people die in war, Teddy.
September 9th, 2023 02:31
In Silence and Disbelief
Saxon Crow said:
Great stuff Teddy. A very respectful poem for a tragedy we are still affected by.
September 9th, 2023 00:55
Saxon Crow said:
Great stuff Teddy. A very respectful poem for a tragedy we are still affected by.
September 9th, 2023 00:55
In Silence and Disbelief
LIZ said:
I remember exactly where I was! These painful memories remind us how fragile we are! A horror! This is such a great praise to those who were so violently taken away! 🙏 💖
September 9th, 2023 00:31
LIZ said:
I remember exactly where I was! These painful memories remind us how fragile we are! A horror! This is such a great praise to those who were so violently taken away! 🙏 💖
September 9th, 2023 00:31
Autumn\'s Painting
Bella Shepard said:
Your beautiful words have increased my anticipation of Autumn 10 fold. This poem is so rich in the colors and wonder of it all. Perfect pic. Thank you dear Teddy!
September 8th, 2023 14:25
Bella Shepard said:
Your beautiful words have increased my anticipation of Autumn 10 fold. This poem is so rich in the colors and wonder of it all. Perfect pic. Thank you dear Teddy!
September 8th, 2023 14:25
Autumn\'s Painting
Neville said:
its times like this I could kick myself for leafing you to be found by .. and then falling for another .. ❤️
September 8th, 2023 13:13
Neville said:
its times like this I could kick myself for leafing you to be found by .. and then falling for another .. ❤️
September 8th, 2023 13:13
Lacrime
Pop64 said:
A short, but yet a truthfully clear and poignant write. Wonderfully done!
September 8th, 2023 13:06
Pop64 said:
A short, but yet a truthfully clear and poignant write. Wonderfully done!
September 8th, 2023 13:06
Autumn\'s Painting
MendedFences27 said:
\"Glorious,\" may also describe your artwork and your poem. It was a most refreshing stroll through the woodland. Colors are amazing, bright, and beautiful. \"Dancing shadows of leaves,\" \"skeleton of the great oak,\" add life and vitality to your poem, Loved it. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 11:06
MendedFences27 said:
\"Glorious,\" may also describe your artwork and your poem. It was a most refreshing stroll through the woodland. Colors are amazing, bright, and beautiful. \"Dancing shadows of leaves,\" \"skeleton of the great oak,\" add life and vitality to your poem, Loved it. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 11:06
Autumn\'s Painting
Pop64 said:
Simply beautiful is the imagery you\'ve painted here with your words. Wonderful!!
September 8th, 2023 07:16
Pop64 said:
Simply beautiful is the imagery you\'ve painted here with your words. Wonderful!!
September 8th, 2023 07:16
Autumn\'s Painting
LIZ said:
Wow, you took me on a walk! Surrounded by fallen leaves!! Beautiful! 💖
September 8th, 2023 04:34
LIZ said:
Wow, you took me on a walk! Surrounded by fallen leaves!! Beautiful! 💖
September 8th, 2023 04:34
Autumn\'s Painting
L. B. Mek said:
reading this
in london, enduring another heatwave
despairing for autumnal leaves
and that blessed fresh breeze of relief
\'HELP, ME!\'
lol
just beautiful imagery dear Poetess
thank you!
September 8th, 2023 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
reading this
in london, enduring another heatwave
despairing for autumnal leaves
and that blessed fresh breeze of relief
\'HELP, ME!\'
lol
just beautiful imagery dear Poetess
thank you!
September 8th, 2023 04:33
Lacrime
L. B. Mek said:
amen!
in this deftly worded truth
is a key
to our inherited empathy..
September 8th, 2023 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
amen!
in this deftly worded truth
is a key
to our inherited empathy..
September 8th, 2023 04:31
Invention of Laughter
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll race you!
lol
just lovely
light but meaningfully deep
thank you
September 8th, 2023 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll race you!
lol
just lovely
light but meaningfully deep
thank you
September 8th, 2023 04:27
Blank Sheet
L. B. Mek said:
and I am immersed
what atmosphere you\'ve imbued into this poignant words
love the simplicity in wording,
making it that much more accessible
a sombre yet lovely write,
thank you! dear Poetess
September 8th, 2023 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
and I am immersed
what atmosphere you\'ve imbued into this poignant words
love the simplicity in wording,
making it that much more accessible
a sombre yet lovely write,
thank you! dear Poetess
September 8th, 2023 04:25
Lacrime
peto said:
Bloodshot and teary
Says more than a million words could
Deepest condolences
September 7th, 2023 16:34
peto said:
Bloodshot and teary
Says more than a million words could
Deepest condolences
September 7th, 2023 16:34
Lacrime
sorenbarrett said:
So true, each one as different as the print of the eye. Proof that short is best a powerful statement.
September 7th, 2023 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
So true, each one as different as the print of the eye. Proof that short is best a powerful statement.
September 7th, 2023 14:59
Lacrime
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, You pack into three lines the hopes, fears, happys, sads, pain, love, that are a lifetime. The eyes are truly the window of the soul, as you have so beautifully written! May your eyes always shine and your tears be those of joy!
September 7th, 2023 14:12
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, You pack into three lines the hopes, fears, happys, sads, pain, love, that are a lifetime. The eyes are truly the window of the soul, as you have so beautifully written! May your eyes always shine and your tears be those of joy!
September 7th, 2023 14:12
Lacrime
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Yep, as I look into KPs eyes, I see a botox story! lol.
September 7th, 2023 07:49
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Yep, as I look into KPs eyes, I see a botox story! lol.
September 7th, 2023 07:49
Lacrime
Doggerel Dave said:
Saw this as \"lachrymose\" and in the end wasn\'t far off the mark.....
September 7th, 2023 06:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Saw this as \"lachrymose\" and in the end wasn\'t far off the mark.....
September 7th, 2023 06:47
Lacrime
Neville said:
eye knew that my petit lacrimal duct ..
and I swear this is perfect ❤️
September 7th, 2023 04:31
Neville said:
eye knew that my petit lacrimal duct ..
and I swear this is perfect ❤️
September 7th, 2023 04:31
Lacrime
LIZ said:
Absolutely! And in my case....you have to dig deep to truly see it!!! Loved this one!!! 💖
September 7th, 2023 04:27
LIZ said:
Absolutely! And in my case....you have to dig deep to truly see it!!! Loved this one!!! 💖
September 7th, 2023 04:27
Invention of Laughter
Bella Shepard said:
Inventing the time machine could be a lot like Forrest Gump\'s box of chocolates \"You never know what you\'re going to get\". For myself, I\'d have to say the 60\"s, when I was young and on the cusp of discovering the world, and who I was in it. You pose a real philosophical quandry in a few short lines, for the twists and turns of life are never in plain sight. You\'ve made me think real hard my friend, and I think I\'ll take the rest of the day off to contemplate. lol
September 6th, 2023 14:07
Bella Shepard said:
Inventing the time machine could be a lot like Forrest Gump\'s box of chocolates \"You never know what you\'re going to get\". For myself, I\'d have to say the 60\"s, when I was young and on the cusp of discovering the world, and who I was in it. You pose a real philosophical quandry in a few short lines, for the twists and turns of life are never in plain sight. You\'ve made me think real hard my friend, and I think I\'ll take the rest of the day off to contemplate. lol
September 6th, 2023 14:07
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