Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Love Letter
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing .. expressing those nice words from a place of truth , love and care

The ‘ heart chakra’ is associated with the colour pink or green .. 🙂

August 11th, 2023 11:17

Love Letter
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Nev, no idea what what is a fakehu. ? ❤️

August 11th, 2023 04:08

Love Letter
Neville said:



I had to look twice before I noticed it was a fakehu .. ❤️

August 11th, 2023 04:01

Love Letter
LIZ said:

Old school love...my favorite! ❤️

August 10th, 2023 19:15

Love Letter
Parisab said:

Your letter was an invitation to the Land of Nostalgia! Grazie!

August 10th, 2023 17:42

Love Letter
Sunsetmet said:

Just lovely how this was interrupted with a heart that to me is a special love coming through the...>>>arrows >>> heart LOL

August 10th, 2023 15:08

Love Letter
peto said:

Signed sealed delivered

August 10th, 2023 14:34

Love Letter
orchidee said:

Good write T.
Has KP got one - a heart?!

August 10th, 2023 14:30

Worn Out Shoes
peto said:

Excellent as per
Enjoyed the twirl
The repeat of\" Was\" rather than \"is\"
Tinged the sadness involved
An emotional dance

August 9th, 2023 11:32

Worn Out Shoes
sorenbarrett said:

There is something about dancing that involves the whole body and soul, more expressive than song, it is a wonderful art and Mr. Bojangles is the right song for it. Daydreaming converted to dance how better to be oneself.

August 8th, 2023 16:18

Worn Out Shoes
Bella Shepard said:

Ah, this one is a beauty! I can hear \"Mr. Bojangles\" playing in the background, and see the daydreamer lost in her reverie. Thank you for such a happy thought dear friend.

August 8th, 2023 14:56

Worn Out Shoes
Sunsetmet said:

I remember the song Mr Bojangles
very well written thanks Teddy

August 8th, 2023 09:20

Worn Out Shoes
Jerry Reynolds said:

Daydreamers all
awaiting Charon\'s call

August 8th, 2023 08:12

Worn Out Shoes
LIZ said:

Ahhhh I actually consider myself a daydreamer. I do let my imagination run wherever she wants, but I know how to ground her again! 😉 AND Mr. Bojangles....what a song!! Heard it a LONG time ago. Brings back memories. 💛

August 8th, 2023 05:10

Worn Out Shoes
Neville said:


put on those red shoes and dance .. I just wanna watch you sway .. no touchin .. but this mistress T is very touching indeed ... Neville ❤️


August 8th, 2023 04:20

Worn Out Shoes
orchidee said:

Yep, KP goes out on nightly dances with Mr B. lol.

August 8th, 2023 04:09

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
orchidee said:

Is she human?! lol.

August 7th, 2023 13:01

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
orchidee said:

....not that I\'m a mysogynist though (woman-hater). it\'s just that I detest old trouts. lol.

August 7th, 2023 11:39

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
orchidee said:

Hope those worms have to wait a good while. They will taste KP and spit her out, saying \'What\'s all this botox muck?!\' lol.
If she goes before me, I will chuck her on the compost heap. lol.
I\'m sooooo horrible to her. Fido says to me \'Don\'t ya just love it though?\' lol.

August 7th, 2023 11:38

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
LIZ said:

I love this!!! Once we\'re gone there\'s nothing we can do. But we have now, and we can choose to live with intention. Whatever that looks like! Beautiful!

August 7th, 2023 11:19

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
AuburnScribbler said:

This is a beautiful poetic reminder, of the importance of individualism.

Brilliantly worded Teddy.15, and may all our finales sparkle, just as much as our journeys did.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

August 7th, 2023 11:08

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
Neville said:



I once knew a drunken prostitute who previously painted for a living and wrote some pretty amazing poetry .. They called her never say no Nancy and when I was homeless many years ago, she let me sleep on her sofa for a few nights .. She had a heart as big as a planet and I have written about her often over the years ... I very much like todays offering Teddy .. please excuse my waffle ... Neville ❤️


August 7th, 2023 10:48

Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, Teddy.

August 7th, 2023 08:23

Observing a Miracle
sorenbarrett said:

I once had a patient whose wife had died several years before. Yet every day he cooked his meal and set a place for her, served her plate, after cleared the table, washed the dishes and put them away just as if she were still there. A touching poem of missing someone that had been a part of one\'s life.

August 5th, 2023 17:49

Observing a Miracle
Neville said:



quite possibly the most moving post that I have read in a long time .. ❤️

August 5th, 2023 12:38

Observing a Miracle
MendedFences27 said:

An absolutely wonder poem of observation and imagination. \"As every gentleman does,\" establishes his identity as the forlorn lover, a classic figure that you use well. Your closing is equal to the task and adds a balance for the rreader. I simply loved this - Phil A.

August 5th, 2023 10:31

Observing a Miracle
Sunsetmet said:

This is a lovely cafe style piece line by line what meaning it has where you sit and smiles and thoughts come to mind spiritually a connection great gratitude and affection lovely written Teddy

August 5th, 2023 08:38

Observing a Miracle
orchidee said:

A fine write Teddy.
Argghhh, KP might stay with me forever! lol.

August 5th, 2023 06:33

Observing a Miracle
LIZ said:

When true love hits, even when
the loved one is gone, their love stays with us forever; and it can\'t help but shine through. At least that\'s what I got from this one! Very nice! ❤️

August 5th, 2023 05:26

Observing a Miracle
Bobby O said:

Yay the privilege of loss for
It proves we once held the most

August 5th, 2023 03:43



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