Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Shingles Shenanigans
Bella Shepard said:
You put such a humorous spin on such a painful condition in this poem. And your poxy chicken has that \"What the....? on his face. All kidding aside, this was such a fun read on such a painful and anxiety ridden experience. The last MRI that I had was for my knee. The machine was shorter, somewhat more open, they gave me a warm blanket, played my choice of classical music, the only thing missing was a nice glass of Lambrusco. Wishing you a healthy recovery and an MRI free future my friend.
May 28th, 2024 13:45
Bella Shepard said:
You put such a humorous spin on such a painful condition in this poem. And your poxy chicken has that \"What the....? on his face. All kidding aside, this was such a fun read on such a painful and anxiety ridden experience. The last MRI that I had was for my knee. The machine was shorter, somewhat more open, they gave me a warm blanket, played my choice of classical music, the only thing missing was a nice glass of Lambrusco. Wishing you a healthy recovery and an MRI free future my friend.
May 28th, 2024 13:45
Shingles Shenanigans
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, I’m so sorry to hear that you are still suffering.
I must thank you though. You have in passing , mentioned your shingles before. It was in fact you and that mention which motivated me to request my Shingrix shots, the second of which I had last week.
With respect to the MRI, I know I cannot do that without sedation, which I requested during my recent hospital stay. I had to beg and because of the culture in that particular hospital, it was a degrading experience, but necessary all for the sake of one bloody valium tablet.
Get well soon.
May 28th, 2024 08:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, I’m so sorry to hear that you are still suffering.
I must thank you though. You have in passing , mentioned your shingles before. It was in fact you and that mention which motivated me to request my Shingrix shots, the second of which I had last week.
With respect to the MRI, I know I cannot do that without sedation, which I requested during my recent hospital stay. I had to beg and because of the culture in that particular hospital, it was a degrading experience, but necessary all for the sake of one bloody valium tablet.
Get well soon.
May 28th, 2024 08:36
Shingles Shenanigans
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic event turned humorous. Never the less I am not sure which is worse the misery of shingles or the claustrophobia. Whether fantasy or real this piece evokes compassion. Hope all is well.
May 28th, 2024 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic event turned humorous. Never the less I am not sure which is worse the misery of shingles or the claustrophobia. Whether fantasy or real this piece evokes compassion. Hope all is well.
May 28th, 2024 05:04
Shingles Shenanigans
Cassie58 said:
Oh Teddy, I sincerely hope this poem is your wonderful imagination and not a reflection of what is happening in true life. I have heard how painful shingles can be. As for scanners, the last one I had I never thought I’d get through. Too claustrophobic, if I have to have another one, I will need a nice cocktail before I start. If you did a runner I wouldn’t blame ya. I can see the funny side here. Love your spotted chicken. Have a lovely day Teddy.
May 28th, 2024 03:56
Cassie58 said:
Oh Teddy, I sincerely hope this poem is your wonderful imagination and not a reflection of what is happening in true life. I have heard how painful shingles can be. As for scanners, the last one I had I never thought I’d get through. Too claustrophobic, if I have to have another one, I will need a nice cocktail before I start. If you did a runner I wouldn’t blame ya. I can see the funny side here. Love your spotted chicken. Have a lovely day Teddy.
May 28th, 2024 03:56
A Very Epic Morning
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Beautiful, dear Teddy.
May 27th, 2024 16:57
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Beautiful, dear Teddy.
May 27th, 2024 16:57
Knowing I Saw Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Words of light that pave the way to another day. Oh so bright in the night to wake for another fight. Days come and they go where we\'ll be no one knows. Excuse my little revere I know that where ever you go you will take the light with you. A most touching piece thanks for sharing.
May 27th, 2024 15:16
sorenbarrett said:
Words of light that pave the way to another day. Oh so bright in the night to wake for another fight. Days come and they go where we\'ll be no one knows. Excuse my little revere I know that where ever you go you will take the light with you. A most touching piece thanks for sharing.
May 27th, 2024 15:16
My Angel
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful painting in vibrant colored words. I love the implication that the great thing brought and the miracle is contained in the last line
\" this wonderful universe really is, full of life.\" and in fact I believe you have hit on it. Of all the universe\'s miracles that is the greatest and as in all miracles something we still do jot understand. A most beautiful write Teddy.
May 26th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful painting in vibrant colored words. I love the implication that the great thing brought and the miracle is contained in the last line
\" this wonderful universe really is, full of life.\" and in fact I believe you have hit on it. Of all the universe\'s miracles that is the greatest and as in all miracles something we still do jot understand. A most beautiful write Teddy.
May 26th, 2024 06:06
My Angel
Goldfinch60 said:
Such glory is brough to you from your angel and to us with your words Teddy.
Andy
May 26th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Such glory is brough to you from your angel and to us with your words Teddy.
Andy
May 26th, 2024 01:52
My Angel
Cassie58 said:
Just so comforting. Like a warm blanket on a cold day Teddy. You brought my mum to me this morning and I can’t thank you enough for that. I love your Angel poem and your beautiful posted art work. Have a happy Sunday dear poet.
May 26th, 2024 01:51
Cassie58 said:
Just so comforting. Like a warm blanket on a cold day Teddy. You brought my mum to me this morning and I can’t thank you enough for that. I love your Angel poem and your beautiful posted art work. Have a happy Sunday dear poet.
May 26th, 2024 01:51
Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that most don\'t think of. We are two things: what we experience and feel, the joy and pain, and two what others see of us and remember of us. The first goes away in death the second remains even if just for a while. A lovely write so deep in its meaning.
May 25th, 2024 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that most don\'t think of. We are two things: what we experience and feel, the joy and pain, and two what others see of us and remember of us. The first goes away in death the second remains even if just for a while. A lovely write so deep in its meaning.
May 25th, 2024 07:08
And That Has Never Changed
sorenbarrett said:
An image that conveys such a feeling so well. Short and to the point. In this case it is true, less is more.
May 24th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
An image that conveys such a feeling so well. Short and to the point. In this case it is true, less is more.
May 24th, 2024 04:48
And That Has Never Changed
Cassie58 said:
Good morning dear Teddy. A moment in time, never forgotten. Wonderful romantic brevity. Have a beautiful Friday.
May 24th, 2024 03:39
Cassie58 said:
Good morning dear Teddy. A moment in time, never forgotten. Wonderful romantic brevity. Have a beautiful Friday.
May 24th, 2024 03:39
An Exceptional Moment
Poetic Dan said:
Look in the mirror and you\'ll see a miracle so wonderful, that makes many others happy!
Keep up the write my friend
May 23rd, 2024 23:54
Poetic Dan said:
Look in the mirror and you\'ll see a miracle so wonderful, that makes many others happy!
Keep up the write my friend
May 23rd, 2024 23:54
And That Has Never Changed
Doggerel Dave said:
And you found me on the underside of that glittering orb. What vision Teddy.... Must\'ve been the mirrors....
Is it my imagination or are people leaving/taking a holiday? Never mind, now you\'ve seen me...... I won\'t go anywhere. 😊
May 23rd, 2024 15:38
Doggerel Dave said:
And you found me on the underside of that glittering orb. What vision Teddy.... Must\'ve been the mirrors....
Is it my imagination or are people leaving/taking a holiday? Never mind, now you\'ve seen me...... I won\'t go anywhere. 😊
May 23rd, 2024 15:38
A Very Brief Moment
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful way of stating that there are moments in time that we wish would never pass. I too have a few that are permanently branded in my mind. Your word choice is perfect for the occasion. I can only imagine that your faces substituted for the red light.
May 23rd, 2024 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful way of stating that there are moments in time that we wish would never pass. I too have a few that are permanently branded in my mind. Your word choice is perfect for the occasion. I can only imagine that your faces substituted for the red light.
May 23rd, 2024 09:59
An Exceptional Moment
Cassie58 said:
I believe in miracles. You sexy thing.
Well Hot Chocolate sang that years ago Teddy and I remember that song so well.
Your posted artwork is so beautiful, a perfect match for your fine poetry. Of course I believe in miracles. They do happen just very occasionally. Have a lovely day. 💐
May 23rd, 2024 07:04
Cassie58 said:
I believe in miracles. You sexy thing.
Well Hot Chocolate sang that years ago Teddy and I remember that song so well.
Your posted artwork is so beautiful, a perfect match for your fine poetry. Of course I believe in miracles. They do happen just very occasionally. Have a lovely day. 💐
May 23rd, 2024 07:04
An Exceptional Moment
Goldfinch60 said:
Those miracles will come your way Teddy in the words that you share with us.
Andy
May 23rd, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Those miracles will come your way Teddy in the words that you share with us.
Andy
May 23rd, 2024 01:12
An Exceptional Moment
Doggerel Dave said:
A reflection, you reckon, Teddy? But I just cannot picture you sitting around waiting for a miracle - it just doesn\'t sound like you. Go girl, go.😉
May 22nd, 2024 19:36
Doggerel Dave said:
A reflection, you reckon, Teddy? But I just cannot picture you sitting around waiting for a miracle - it just doesn\'t sound like you. Go girl, go.😉
May 22nd, 2024 19:36
An Exceptional Moment
sorenbarrett said:
They do happen indeed guaranteed. The odds of being born who you are is beyond a miracle. That all of your ancestors should have survived, met and had each next generation is beyond impossible in probability. Should one have altered you would not be you.
May 22nd, 2024 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
They do happen indeed guaranteed. The odds of being born who you are is beyond a miracle. That all of your ancestors should have survived, met and had each next generation is beyond impossible in probability. Should one have altered you would not be you.
May 22nd, 2024 15:31
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Cassie58 said:
Venice, on my bucket list Teddy. A dark, tragic tale you have penned here of a soulful heartbreak. Love your posted pic of the beautiful Venice canals. Such a romantic place to visit. Have a happy Wednesday dear poet. 🌹
May 22nd, 2024 11:04
Cassie58 said:
Venice, on my bucket list Teddy. A dark, tragic tale you have penned here of a soulful heartbreak. Love your posted pic of the beautiful Venice canals. Such a romantic place to visit. Have a happy Wednesday dear poet. 🌹
May 22nd, 2024 11:04
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good sad emotive words Teddy,
Andy
May 22nd, 2024 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Such good sad emotive words Teddy,
Andy
May 22nd, 2024 01:59
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
sorenbarrett said:
The raven returns and a lost love from the past, now dead, haunts the present. Most interesting that your heart is on a rock, underwater, under the gondola, hidden invisible. Only through poetry does it show itself. It is only out of great pain that great art is formed. So nicely done.
May 21st, 2024 22:07
sorenbarrett said:
The raven returns and a lost love from the past, now dead, haunts the present. Most interesting that your heart is on a rock, underwater, under the gondola, hidden invisible. Only through poetry does it show itself. It is only out of great pain that great art is formed. So nicely done.
May 21st, 2024 22:07
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Doggerel Dave said:
One of my very favorite holidays – my fortnight’s stay in Venice. On leaving I’m pretty sure a piece of my heart was ripped out and stayed. I did heal eventually, but the ache still sometimes lingers.
Off beam in relation to your poem Teddy, but any mention of Venice…….
May 21st, 2024 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
One of my very favorite holidays – my fortnight’s stay in Venice. On leaving I’m pretty sure a piece of my heart was ripped out and stayed. I did heal eventually, but the ache still sometimes lingers.
Off beam in relation to your poem Teddy, but any mention of Venice…….
May 21st, 2024 19:14
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
aDarkerMind said:
as dark as I have ever seen from you Teddy;
an almost eerie tone....
and I\'m hooked!
May 21st, 2024 13:28
aDarkerMind said:
as dark as I have ever seen from you Teddy;
an almost eerie tone....
and I\'m hooked!
May 21st, 2024 13:28
Submerged In The Canals of Venice
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Powerful work. You paint this sad tale well.
May 21st, 2024 11:53
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Powerful work. You paint this sad tale well.
May 21st, 2024 11:53
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