Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Egg yolk on a comet tail
spilleronsheet said:
And suddenly those words I am living…
March 20th, 2024 13:40
spilleronsheet said:
And suddenly those words I am living…
March 20th, 2024 13:40
A Very Modern Tale
sorenbarrett said:
A great twist on an old tale. Funny how time changes things.
\"Romeo, my heart be broken\"
This story has always been a tragedy .
\"I fell upon your love\"
In the original it was he that fell of the dagger from love of her. Another twist.
\"it was you
who wanted me gone
“you bastard”\"
The major twist here.
\"alas, we are both still here
i’m not speaking to you anymore\"
Another twist it was death in the first case now life, and with it no fame. Ah the cost of fame. A fun and yet pensive write.
March 19th, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
A great twist on an old tale. Funny how time changes things.
\"Romeo, my heart be broken\"
This story has always been a tragedy .
\"I fell upon your love\"
In the original it was he that fell of the dagger from love of her. Another twist.
\"it was you
who wanted me gone
“you bastard”\"
The major twist here.
\"alas, we are both still here
i’m not speaking to you anymore\"
Another twist it was death in the first case now life, and with it no fame. Ah the cost of fame. A fun and yet pensive write.
March 19th, 2024 10:14
Pedestal
Bella Shepard said:
You have the gift of words dear Teddy; finding them, arranging them in the most pleasing way, bestowing them with emotion, so that they leap from the screen in this beautiful ode to love, placed oh so gently on that pedestal.
March 17th, 2024 16:55
Bella Shepard said:
You have the gift of words dear Teddy; finding them, arranging them in the most pleasing way, bestowing them with emotion, so that they leap from the screen in this beautiful ode to love, placed oh so gently on that pedestal.
March 17th, 2024 16:55
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Kieron said:
I am comforted by the thought that the sky is beautiful even when the sun is gone. Thank you for your poem, Teddy. It succinctly portrays a surely universal moment of vulnerability--and I like the egg-yolk image :D
March 16th, 2024 09:11
Kieron said:
I am comforted by the thought that the sky is beautiful even when the sun is gone. Thank you for your poem, Teddy. It succinctly portrays a surely universal moment of vulnerability--and I like the egg-yolk image :D
March 16th, 2024 09:11
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Bella Shepard said:
Looking up at the stars in the darkness, the stillness of night, is a feeling you have found the words to describe beautifully. It calms the mind and the soul, even if just for a while, to gaze upon what seems infinite. Incredible!
March 15th, 2024 11:23
Bella Shepard said:
Looking up at the stars in the darkness, the stillness of night, is a feeling you have found the words to describe beautifully. It calms the mind and the soul, even if just for a while, to gaze upon what seems infinite. Incredible!
March 15th, 2024 11:23
Pedestal
sorenbarrett said:
Love as a word in English is such a complex word. It can mean so many things from passion to adoration. It is ambiguous and covers so many emotions. Very nicely written in first person making it so much more personal. Lovely no pun intended.
March 15th, 2024 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Love as a word in English is such a complex word. It can mean so many things from passion to adoration. It is ambiguous and covers so many emotions. Very nicely written in first person making it so much more personal. Lovely no pun intended.
March 15th, 2024 04:40
Egg yolk on a comet tail
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought but I believe the the stars above are nothing more than a reflection of the stars within and thereby you yourself. As for the comet don\'t be too anxious Mark Twain was born with Haley\'s comet and died with its coming again.
March 11th, 2024 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought but I believe the the stars above are nothing more than a reflection of the stars within and thereby you yourself. As for the comet don\'t be too anxious Mark Twain was born with Haley\'s comet and died with its coming again.
March 11th, 2024 15:13
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly is something incredible about Van Gogh\'s work.
I have a jigsaw of that painting, it is not easy to do.
Fine words Teddy.
Andy
March 11th, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly is something incredible about Van Gogh\'s work.
I have a jigsaw of that painting, it is not easy to do.
Fine words Teddy.
Andy
March 11th, 2024 02:19
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Thomas W Case said:
I agree. As I write this, I am sitting at my desk. I have an old wooden art set with Starry Night on it—tremendous work.
March 10th, 2024 13:20
Thomas W Case said:
I agree. As I write this, I am sitting at my desk. I have an old wooden art set with Starry Night on it—tremendous work.
March 10th, 2024 13:20
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Cassie58 said:
I too would like to think Van Gogh created his masterpiece after looking out on the heavens on a sleepless night. I love the texture, colour and movement of this beautiful painting. He had such a troubled mind and yet this artwork brings in some much needed light. Your words dear Teddy capture well the mental torture he had to endure. A fine tribute. Have a wonderful Sunday. 🌹
March 10th, 2024 06:39
Cassie58 said:
I too would like to think Van Gogh created his masterpiece after looking out on the heavens on a sleepless night. I love the texture, colour and movement of this beautiful painting. He had such a troubled mind and yet this artwork brings in some much needed light. Your words dear Teddy capture well the mental torture he had to endure. A fine tribute. Have a wonderful Sunday. 🌹
March 10th, 2024 06:39
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Accidental Poet said:
Words oh so beautiful Teddy. Rest assured, your comet burns brightly just for you. 🌹
March 10th, 2024 05:46
Accidental Poet said:
Words oh so beautiful Teddy. Rest assured, your comet burns brightly just for you. 🌹
March 10th, 2024 05:46
Egg yolk on a comet tail
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m with you, Teddy; Vincent has something (soothing tone) very special...........
But of greater concern would be your very severe insomnia........
March 10th, 2024 05:07
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m with you, Teddy; Vincent has something (soothing tone) very special...........
But of greater concern would be your very severe insomnia........
March 10th, 2024 05:07
Pedestal
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn words Teddy, I am sure that you have found love.
Andy
March 9th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful lovelorn words Teddy, I am sure that you have found love.
Andy
March 9th, 2024 02:51
Pedestal
Parisab said:
Very Bronte in style, so romantic and mystical …happy international women’s day dear Teddy …
March 9th, 2024 01:59
Parisab said:
Very Bronte in style, so romantic and mystical …happy international women’s day dear Teddy …
March 9th, 2024 01:59
Pedestal
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, I\'ve said all I want to say about poetic love, and I don\'t want to spoil the party....so I will delete....on the other hand... Good for True Love in keeping away, \'cos it motivates you to write some fun, interesting poetry...
March 8th, 2024 17:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, I\'ve said all I want to say about poetic love, and I don\'t want to spoil the party....so I will delete....on the other hand... Good for True Love in keeping away, \'cos it motivates you to write some fun, interesting poetry...
March 8th, 2024 17:03
Pedestal
Cassie58 said:
On the subject of love , dear Teddy you have it buttoned up. So many beautiful poems you have penned, and another here. You have included Romeo and Juliet, that tragic pair in this offering. Such an elegant piece of writing. You ask yourself all the questions and many others ask the very same. Have a fabulous weekend dear poet.
March 8th, 2024 13:29
Cassie58 said:
On the subject of love , dear Teddy you have it buttoned up. So many beautiful poems you have penned, and another here. You have included Romeo and Juliet, that tragic pair in this offering. Such an elegant piece of writing. You ask yourself all the questions and many others ask the very same. Have a fabulous weekend dear poet.
March 8th, 2024 13:29
The Great Journey Home
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Teddy - this is one I\'ve been meaning to engage with you over a rather long time (Not seeking argument here, just....)
I too, no interest in religion, and so cannot cop an angel with all it\'s associations.
My fantasy is a vast cosmic game, analogous to one of those MMORPG computer things, and a controller with a brief to give me chances with only limited intervention, but from time to time, oh what interventions!
March 8th, 2024 07:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, Teddy - this is one I\'ve been meaning to engage with you over a rather long time (Not seeking argument here, just....)
I too, no interest in religion, and so cannot cop an angel with all it\'s associations.
My fantasy is a vast cosmic game, analogous to one of those MMORPG computer things, and a controller with a brief to give me chances with only limited intervention, but from time to time, oh what interventions!
March 8th, 2024 07:27
Pedestal
Neville said:
well that\'s love wrapped up, beautifully bound and presented to the world .. this treatise on the subject was indeed a real treat .. please pardon the play on words
🌹Neville
March 8th, 2024 04:45
Neville said:
well that\'s love wrapped up, beautifully bound and presented to the world .. this treatise on the subject was indeed a real treat .. please pardon the play on words
🌹Neville
March 8th, 2024 04:45
The Great Journey Home
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have angels Teddy and I am sure yours will always be with you.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have angels Teddy and I am sure yours will always be with you.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:25
The Great Journey Home
MendedFences27 said:
Lovely poetry. Angels are what we cling to when seeking peace. They can bring solace and wisdom that aids in coping with this world. it\'s a wonderful thought you have posted. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2024 16:53
MendedFences27 said:
Lovely poetry. Angels are what we cling to when seeking peace. They can bring solace and wisdom that aids in coping with this world. it\'s a wonderful thought you have posted. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2024 16:53
The Great Journey Home
Bella Shepard said:
This wonderfulpoem evokes such sweet memories. As a child, there hung next to my bed a picture of a guardian angel, with arms spread over a child, and a traditional prayer printed beneath. I\'m so glad you have those protective arms around you, such solice in a troubled world. Beautifully and lovingly written dear friend!
March 7th, 2024 15:38
Bella Shepard said:
This wonderfulpoem evokes such sweet memories. As a child, there hung next to my bed a picture of a guardian angel, with arms spread over a child, and a traditional prayer printed beneath. I\'m so glad you have those protective arms around you, such solice in a troubled world. Beautifully and lovingly written dear friend!
March 7th, 2024 15:38
The Great Journey Home
Cassie58 said:
Your words dear Teddy are beautiful. I have no interest either in organized religion, but everyone needs a guardian Angel looking after them. I sincerely hope my mum had one guiding her into the spirit world when she passed. Your lovely poem created light and peace. I thank you for that. Hope your Thursday has been a happy one. 💐
March 7th, 2024 13:11
Cassie58 said:
Your words dear Teddy are beautiful. I have no interest either in organized religion, but everyone needs a guardian Angel looking after them. I sincerely hope my mum had one guiding her into the spirit world when she passed. Your lovely poem created light and peace. I thank you for that. Hope your Thursday has been a happy one. 💐
March 7th, 2024 13:11
The Great Journey Home
Cloie said:
Your poem tenderly expresses a longing for solace and peace. The imagery of flying with an angel away from a harsh world evokes a sense of seeking refuge and comfort. It beautifully portrays a heartfelt desire for release and tranquility. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:44
Cloie said:
Your poem tenderly expresses a longing for solace and peace. The imagery of flying with an angel away from a harsh world evokes a sense of seeking refuge and comfort. It beautifully portrays a heartfelt desire for release and tranquility. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:44
Death In Verona
Cloie said:
Your retelling of Romeo and Juliet\'s story is truly captivating. The depth of emotion you infuse into their tale is remarkable. Despite the obstacles posed by their feuding families, you portray their love as an unstoppable force, which is incredibly moving. As Shakespeare said, \"The course of true love never did run smooth,\" and your narrative beautifully illustrates this sentiment. The imagery you use, such as the metaphor of \"a million lightning bolts,\" vividly conveys the intensity of their connection. The drama in the narrative emphasizes its timeless allure. The climax, depicting Romeo and Juliet\'s tragic end, is handled with poignant detail and depth. The uncertainty surrounding their fate in the afterlife evokes a profound sense of longing and melancholy, yet there\'s a glimmer of hope that they might reunite beyond mortal constraints. Your retelling skillfully captures both the beauty and tragedy of this enduring love story from literature.
March 7th, 2024 09:26
Cloie said:
Your retelling of Romeo and Juliet\'s story is truly captivating. The depth of emotion you infuse into their tale is remarkable. Despite the obstacles posed by their feuding families, you portray their love as an unstoppable force, which is incredibly moving. As Shakespeare said, \"The course of true love never did run smooth,\" and your narrative beautifully illustrates this sentiment. The imagery you use, such as the metaphor of \"a million lightning bolts,\" vividly conveys the intensity of their connection. The drama in the narrative emphasizes its timeless allure. The climax, depicting Romeo and Juliet\'s tragic end, is handled with poignant detail and depth. The uncertainty surrounding their fate in the afterlife evokes a profound sense of longing and melancholy, yet there\'s a glimmer of hope that they might reunite beyond mortal constraints. Your retelling skillfully captures both the beauty and tragedy of this enduring love story from literature.
March 7th, 2024 09:26
The Great Journey Home
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this could be the last goodbye from one departing or just the acknowledgment of a dream coming on. Beautiful and serene in any sense, hope it\'s the latter.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
Now Teddy this could be the last goodbye from one departing or just the acknowledgment of a dream coming on. Beautiful and serene in any sense, hope it\'s the latter.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
The Great Journey Home
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful dedication to your Angel Teddy. 😇
March 7th, 2024 07:17
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful dedication to your Angel Teddy. 😇
March 7th, 2024 07:17
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