Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



The Death of Love
Neville said:


Ouch & double ouch .. I know you can hit hard Teddy, but I sure was not expecting the kidney punch .. I trust this is not autobiographical ..

if it is, you can have any part of me you need .. ❀️

September 14th, 2023 03:14

The Death of Love
LIZ said:

Broken heart transplant! Often times going through the experience is the only way we\'ll listen and learn. Harsh? Sometimes....but if we can grasp the lesson, the pain can feel....just a LITTLE be less...cruel. Thank you for sharing this Teddy! I know it\'s not easy! πŸ’– πŸ’–πŸ’–

September 14th, 2023 01:55

The Death of Love
orchidee said:

A fictional write Teddy?
Before I make some daft comment which may not be appropriate. Oops!

September 14th, 2023 01:48

Violin Strings
MendedFences27 said:

The violin is the only instrument that can cry. As a soul mate you have to treat it gently. Playing erratically, it\'s possibly Paganini. Oh well enjoy the music. Lovely short poem. - Phil A.

September 13th, 2023 16:26

Doctor\'s Orders
AuburnScribbler said:

Being a grandson of a winemaker, I totally relate to this Teddy.15.

A very nice little rhyme indeed, and I hope that all is well.

September 13th, 2023 08:46

Doctor\'s Orders
Pop64 said:

I\'ll drink to that! Slainte!

September 13th, 2023 08:25

Violin Strings
Pop64 said:

You chose the violin for this write, not a guitar, oboe or standing bass, but that which can truly define the intention of your write. I can picture, rather hear to sound, no defined melody, but yet a captivating cacophony of sound. Splendid write.

September 13th, 2023 05:52

Violin Strings
Neville said:



Yet I feel it sing & so beautifully ❀️

September 13th, 2023 04:37

Violin Strings
Moon_child said:

its tiny but beutiful
love the photo

September 13th, 2023 04:12

Violin Strings
LIZ said:

The violin is one of those instruments that....with the right notes, can really take us through an emotional musical ride!! I love this, and the picture! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

September 13th, 2023 02:34

Violin Strings
orchidee said:

Is it screeching or playing melodically?! lol.

September 13th, 2023 02:09

An Ode To The Wedding Band
Aktarul Islam said:

You have a good sense of humor. Excellent poem. Keep it up, honorable poet

September 12th, 2023 17:11

An Ode To The Wedding Band
Bella Shepard said:

This is delightful, puts me in mind of the movie \"The first wives club\". And the pic, I love the way she\'s looking back to make sure he\'s flat. Men, can\'t live with \'em, can\'t kill \'em. You\'ve tickled the funny bone and given me a smile all over.

September 12th, 2023 14:59

An Ode To The Wedding Band
sorenbarrett said:

Humorous but relatable which is what gives it its humor. Well said.

September 12th, 2023 12:19

An Ode To The Wedding Band
orchidee said:

My wedding ring for KP was a ring-pull Coca-Cola can opener! lol.

September 12th, 2023 11:06

An Ode To The Wedding Band
LIZ said:

Oh boy!!! 🀣🀣🀣🀣 Teddy!!!!! The picture\'s worth a thousand words!!! πŸ˜†

September 12th, 2023 10:14

An Ode To The Wedding Band
BlessedbyGod said:

Anytime Miss Teddy, I\'ve read your work for years and love every piece you write , you are very talented

September 12th, 2023 10:02

An Ode To The Wedding Band
BlessedbyGod said:

Hahaha, could go either way!!!
Great piece Teddy!!


September 12th, 2023 09:54

Doctor\'s Orders
Neville said:



Go on, make me laugh, like Hogarth .. after all, it\'s my bread and butter ❀️

September 12th, 2023 04:23

No Regrets
spilleronsheet said:

It feels precious to read your words again….welcome back, though my words were late but thoughts never subsided….

September 12th, 2023 02:44

Doctor\'s Orders
orchidee said:

There you are - a pic of you! What you been up to?! lol.

September 12th, 2023 01:31

Doctor\'s Orders
peto said:

Ah dr feelgood
Lifts your spirits and never let\'s you leave without a shot

September 12th, 2023 01:14

Doctor\'s Orders
LIZ said:

Or 2? 🀣 Nice one!!! πŸ’–

September 12th, 2023 00:01

Doctor\'s Orders
Soman Ragavan said:

Doctors give their orders; poets give theirs…
β€œMan being reasonable must get drunk. The best of life is but intoxication.”
--Gordon Byron (1788-1824).
Soman Ragavan. 12 September, 2023
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September 11th, 2023 20:41

Doctor\'s Orders
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sometimes we need something lighthearted lol πŸ™‚
I never drink at all .. never liked it very much




September 11th, 2023 18:01

Knowing I Saw Enough
Pop64 said:

A wish or desire, rather, for the masses, to be fulfilled before their passing. A poignant, thought provoking write!

September 11th, 2023 10:06

Knowing I Saw Enough
L. B. Mek said:

it\'s all about quality, dear Poetess
accrue more quality that quantity
and this wish of yours will be granted
way before that final curtain
comes calling...
(and what a striking image)
hope you n yours have a lovely week

September 11th, 2023 03:03

In Silence and Disbelief
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!

September 11th, 2023 02:58

Knowing I Saw Enough
orchidee said:

Ya seen me - what more could ya want?! heehee. Good write Teddy.
I seen the light - I changed the light bulb! 😁

September 11th, 2023 01:52

Knowing I Saw Enough
LIZ said:

I see you!!! And there is so much good!!!! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

September 10th, 2023 17:22



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