Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



An Ode to Spaghetti
orchidee said:

I wish to complain. lol. What has pole dancing got to do with spaghetti?! heehee.

September 29th, 2023 07:24

An Ode to Spaghetti
LIZ said:

🤣🤣🤣🤣 Teddy, we\'re on a food ride!! Oh so.....erotic 😆😆😆😆 sucking, twisting, pole dancing....moist. What\'s not to like??? You\'re the best! 😆 Keep them coming. See, I knew you had it in you lol 😆 💖💖💖

September 29th, 2023 07:11

An Ode to Spaghetti
L. B. Mek said:

your pictures are the best, my friend
I read that sandwich poem
and felt sorry for your husband
that\'s some stiff competition..
but then reading this ode
to your.. noodle \'sucking\'
preferences
leads me to believe, your husband
is a very satisfied man indeed
lol
question is
do you like it
Florentine aldente
or Londoner, aldente
or maybe you mix it up
from one meal to the next...
🤭😅🤐


September 29th, 2023 05:34

An Ode to Spaghetti
sorenbarrett said:

I love spaghetti sometimes just with butter and garlic sometimes with just meatballs. You are making me hungry and it is still early. Soft or hard I prefer it soft certainly not hard it could be aldente but the older I get the fewer dentes. Loved the poem Teddy

September 29th, 2023 05:07

An Ode to Spaghetti
orchidee said:

Good writ Teddy - ahh, a picture of KP there. That\'s what she looks like now with the botox. lol.

September 29th, 2023 01:49

An Ode To The Sandwich
Bella Shepard said:

Now that\'s what I call a real manwich! Mine would be a slice each of Aiden Turner and Colin Firth, on rye of course. You are too fun!

September 28th, 2023 10:46

The Death of Great Music
Bella Shepard said:

We all suffered a great loss when we lost them. Just to wonder what they might have done, if only, is a sad remembrance. The true greats will live on forever in their music, from generation to generation, and we are fortunate in that. Beautifully pondered dear Teddy, and eloquently expressed.

September 28th, 2023 10:38

An Ode To The Sandwich
aDarkerMind said:

crunchy peanut butter and real butter.
Janis Joplin ripping thru a blues tune, in the company of Kate Bush.
perfik!

September 28th, 2023 09:51

None Of Us Would Be Poets.
Pop64 said:

The ending of the poem, as stated, sums the truth of the write up with clarity. For love, the greatest of all emotions, that which inspires, brings joy, sadness and pain, is the very foundation of poetry. It is the spark for everything else. This is a wonderful write!

September 28th, 2023 09:47

None Of Us Would Be Poets.
AuburnScribbler said:

This is an amazingly written immaculate definition Teddy.15.

Some poems, emphatically hit the nail on the head, and this is one them.

This is a true literary triumph bravo and I hope that all is well!

September 28th, 2023 09:41

An Ode To The Sandwich
Christina8 said:

OOH my that was a lovely visual!! I\'d switch out keanu with someone else but keep Bradley Cooper!! Very nice!

September 28th, 2023 07:46

An Ode To The Sandwich
Saxon Crow said:

With or without sauce?

September 28th, 2023 07:35

An Ode To The Sandwich
Pop64 said:

Everyone has their own taste, that\'s quite a sandwich! Enjoy it and remember, what you don\'t finish, you can wrap up and have later LOL

September 28th, 2023 06:17

An Ode To The Sandwich
BlessedbyGod said:

Not at all what I was expecting!!!!🤣🤣
I love it!!!
Keanu Reeves and Bradley Cooper !!!!!!
Imagine that, obviously u do!!😂😂😂🥰🥰🥰

September 28th, 2023 06:16

An Ode To The Sandwich
peto said:

And served up on a plate
Wire in Teddy

September 28th, 2023 02:40

An Ode To The Sandwich
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Teddy.
I\'m between KP and dunno who else. It\'s a mouldy old sandwich! 😁 Tastes of... you know it, botox!

September 28th, 2023 01:45

An Ode To The Sandwich
LIZ said:

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I was thinking....I\'m hungry...but now I\'m REALLY hungry!!! I\'ll have a bite....or 2....or 3....Damn!!! 😲😲 OK give me the whole thing!! 💖💖💖

September 28th, 2023 01:28

The Death of Great Music
Daye Writes said:

That\'s powerful

September 27th, 2023 09:35

The Death of Great Music
Pop64 said:

While their families remain the victims, we as appreciators of the music only lose potential songs, but we carry forward their library of life. Well penned!

September 27th, 2023 08:31

And Write She shall
Pop64 said:

Sadness, I find, turns into more profound, deeper writes. These 3 short lines are a true statement of fact. Wonderfully conveyed.

September 27th, 2023 08:05

The Death of Great Music
sorenbarrett said:

I often wonder if they were all to live longer along with Janis Joplin, Mozart, Jimi Hendrix and many other greats what would music be like today? A provocative and most interesting thought. Nicely done Teddy.

September 27th, 2023 05:19

The Death of Great Music
Christina8 said:

I often wonder the same....as the daughter in law of a recording artist I think he went to soon....same with all the above mentioned artists....enough to make you cry when you think about all the music we missed out on.....Christina

September 27th, 2023 02:27

The Death of Great Music
LIZ said:

Tragedies....only way to not let ourselves become victims of it, is by keeping their music alive! 💖💖💖

September 27th, 2023 02:07

The Death of Great Music
orchidee said:

A fine write Teddy.

September 27th, 2023 02:04

And Write She shall
Christina8 said:

i do find it\'s easier to write about the sad stuff than happy...

September 26th, 2023 04:56

And Write She shall
Neville said:



................. superb ❤️

September 26th, 2023 01:59

And Write She shall
orchidee said:

Will KP write?! lol

September 26th, 2023 01:28

And Write She shall
LIZ said:

EVERY TIME!!!!💖💖💖

September 26th, 2023 01:03

Washed Away
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ve heard of lightning striking, whirlwind relationships and love going down the drain but this kind of wraps it all up into one. The metaphor of the umbrella is great, I think we all need one.

September 25th, 2023 13:50

Senryu 1
peto said:

Touche Teddy


September 25th, 2023 12:48



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