Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Soul-finder
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful, sweet Teddy. I think everyone has been lost whether they admit it or not.
September 19th, 2024 17:38
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful, sweet Teddy. I think everyone has been lost whether they admit it or not.
September 19th, 2024 17:38
Soul-finder
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I love how you have used potholes here as a metaphor and thrown in too the thick fog to highlight the struggle many feel in life. You conveyed that so well. It’s lovely of you to mention Bella and others who are currently experiencing that emptiness. That shows your wonderful caring nature. One step at a time, I always say. A great read. Have s beautiful day Teddy. 🌹🏴
September 19th, 2024 09:25
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy, I love how you have used potholes here as a metaphor and thrown in too the thick fog to highlight the struggle many feel in life. You conveyed that so well. It’s lovely of you to mention Bella and others who are currently experiencing that emptiness. That shows your wonderful caring nature. One step at a time, I always say. A great read. Have s beautiful day Teddy. 🌹🏴
September 19th, 2024 09:25
Soul-finder
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I have to periodically search for mine it tends to wander and like a small child gets into all kinds of mischief when not suppervised. I now keep it on a short leash. A poem of self understanding in that existential search for self
September 19th, 2024 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I have to periodically search for mine it tends to wander and like a small child gets into all kinds of mischief when not suppervised. I now keep it on a short leash. A poem of self understanding in that existential search for self
September 19th, 2024 05:01
Soul-finder
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, no matter how many problems we come across on our life\'s pathway there is always a new path to be found which will lead us into a better future.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, no matter how many problems we come across on our life\'s pathway there is always a new path to be found which will lead us into a better future.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 02:05
Soul-finder
aDarkerMind said:
a very touching, moving write Teddy.
a poem to read and live through,
many times.
which, of course....I will.
September 19th, 2024 01:58
aDarkerMind said:
a very touching, moving write Teddy.
a poem to read and live through,
many times.
which, of course....I will.
September 19th, 2024 01:58
Perfectly polished
Dan Williams said:
I think I have been colour coordinated maybe twice in my life, probably by accident. This lady had the right ideas though. Nice.
September 19th, 2024 00:53
Dan Williams said:
I think I have been colour coordinated maybe twice in my life, probably by accident. This lady had the right ideas though. Nice.
September 19th, 2024 00:53
Perfectly polished
aDarkerMind said:
what a wonderful story Teddy...
am losing count of the times you have put a smile on my face.
and yes, perhaps at times we judge what we know very little of.
I have learnt much from you Teddy.
and am most grateful.
September 18th, 2024 12:10
aDarkerMind said:
what a wonderful story Teddy...
am losing count of the times you have put a smile on my face.
and yes, perhaps at times we judge what we know very little of.
I have learnt much from you Teddy.
and am most grateful.
September 18th, 2024 12:10
Perfectly polished
sorenbarrett said:
Great insight into a deep thought. We all judge others by ourselves when we can\'t see ourselves very clearly. We impose our values on others and then judge them by it. So nicely said Teddy
September 18th, 2024 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Great insight into a deep thought. We all judge others by ourselves when we can\'t see ourselves very clearly. We impose our values on others and then judge them by it. So nicely said Teddy
September 18th, 2024 04:57
Perfectly polished
Cassie58 said:
A fifth glass Teddy? That’s nearly a whole bottle lol. Drowning in sorrows. You are of course spot on here. I don’t feel sorry for that highly polished woman at all. She’s got time for herself. Good luck to her. I’m so busy running around everyone else, I can’t even remember where my shoes are, but hey, I keep smiling too. Gotta smile and no one’s life is perfect. Have a great day dear Teddy 🌹
September 18th, 2024 03:14
Cassie58 said:
A fifth glass Teddy? That’s nearly a whole bottle lol. Drowning in sorrows. You are of course spot on here. I don’t feel sorry for that highly polished woman at all. She’s got time for herself. Good luck to her. I’m so busy running around everyone else, I can’t even remember where my shoes are, but hey, I keep smiling too. Gotta smile and no one’s life is perfect. Have a great day dear Teddy 🌹
September 18th, 2024 03:14
Poet
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. You have such a generous heart. A fine tribute to Melvin and all the help he has given with your writing. From the heart is so important when conveying words. I can see already this has knocked his socks off and made his day. I also have to say Teddy, that unknowingly you pointed me towards Melvin’s unique writing. So a big thank you to you and your mentor. Have a super day. 🌹
September 17th, 2024 06:12
Cassie58 said:
Dear Teddy. You have such a generous heart. A fine tribute to Melvin and all the help he has given with your writing. From the heart is so important when conveying words. I can see already this has knocked his socks off and made his day. I also have to say Teddy, that unknowingly you pointed me towards Melvin’s unique writing. So a big thank you to you and your mentor. Have a super day. 🌹
September 17th, 2024 06:12
Poet
aDarkerMind said:
well Teddy, am not ashamed to say this wonderful write has put many tears in my eyes.
and words fail me right now.
you are blessed with a talent to write...
and blessed with a true heart of gold.
Thank You Teddy.
September 17th, 2024 04:48
aDarkerMind said:
well Teddy, am not ashamed to say this wonderful write has put many tears in my eyes.
and words fail me right now.
you are blessed with a talent to write...
and blessed with a true heart of gold.
Thank You Teddy.
September 17th, 2024 04:48
Poet
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful tribute to another great poet. Fun to read and a surprise ending as well.
September 17th, 2024 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful tribute to another great poet. Fun to read and a surprise ending as well.
September 17th, 2024 04:17
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy those dreams Teddy as we all do when you write about them.
Mozart played be Bees eh? That would be good to listen to.
Andy
September 17th, 2024 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy those dreams Teddy as we all do when you write about them.
Mozart played be Bees eh? That would be good to listen to.
Andy
September 17th, 2024 01:27
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
NafisaSB said:
i wish, how i wish i too could have such a slumberbash..
well done, dear poet
September 17th, 2024 00:59
NafisaSB said:
i wish, how i wish i too could have such a slumberbash..
well done, dear poet
September 17th, 2024 00:59
Devil Plays the Fiddle
NafisaSB said:
the verses written in our youth are much more open and one feels the pain more deeply -and i think age mellows us down, and makes us reflect..
September 17th, 2024 00:58
NafisaSB said:
the verses written in our youth are much more open and one feels the pain more deeply -and i think age mellows us down, and makes us reflect..
September 17th, 2024 00:58
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
Dan Williams said:
And a beautiful dream it was and cleverly reported. Nice work.
September 17th, 2024 00:34
Dan Williams said:
And a beautiful dream it was and cleverly reported. Nice work.
September 17th, 2024 00:34
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
Thomas W Case said:
I love this. What a beautiful scene you create sweet Teddy.
September 16th, 2024 08:14
Thomas W Case said:
I love this. What a beautiful scene you create sweet Teddy.
September 16th, 2024 08:14
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
sorenbarrett said:
So full of child imges that I was taken back to the days of my infant grandchildren, my own small children, and my childhood. Filled with nursery rhymes and Disney I feel rejuvinated.
September 16th, 2024 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
So full of child imges that I was taken back to the days of my infant grandchildren, my own small children, and my childhood. Filled with nursery rhymes and Disney I feel rejuvinated.
September 16th, 2024 06:58
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
Cassie58 said:
What a wonderful dreamscape you have painted here. Full of vibrant imagery and lsd type of experiences. Not that I have ever tried lol, but I got a real feel here of the Beatles and Sargeant Pepper. I enjoyed the bright, sunny aspect. Not a hint of darkness or violence . What sweet dreams you have Teddy. A wonderful uplifting read for a Monday morning. Thank you so much my fellow Brit 🏴 🌹
September 16th, 2024 06:08
Cassie58 said:
What a wonderful dreamscape you have painted here. Full of vibrant imagery and lsd type of experiences. Not that I have ever tried lol, but I got a real feel here of the Beatles and Sargeant Pepper. I enjoyed the bright, sunny aspect. Not a hint of darkness or violence . What sweet dreams you have Teddy. A wonderful uplifting read for a Monday morning. Thank you so much my fellow Brit 🏴 🌹
September 16th, 2024 06:08
The Sweetest of Slumberbash
aDarkerMind said:
oh my Teddy!
fantasy indeed....
you have created a world I would gladly live in.
a bright blue frog be nice ;0)
September 16th, 2024 06:02
aDarkerMind said:
oh my Teddy!
fantasy indeed....
you have created a world I would gladly live in.
a bright blue frog be nice ;0)
September 16th, 2024 06:02
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Goldfinch60 said:
When you look in the mirror you never see the real you, you see yourself in an opposite aspect Teddy.
Andy
https://youtu.be/7QtGOWemQhY?si=oo3v-wBA5Xg3TC46
September 16th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
When you look in the mirror you never see the real you, you see yourself in an opposite aspect Teddy.
Andy
https://youtu.be/7QtGOWemQhY?si=oo3v-wBA5Xg3TC46
September 16th, 2024 01:20
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Dan Williams said:
Touches a warm spot for a ballerina I lost many years ago to inner pain also. Thank you for this.
September 16th, 2024 00:46
Dan Williams said:
Touches a warm spot for a ballerina I lost many years ago to inner pain also. Thank you for this.
September 16th, 2024 00:46
Devil Plays the Fiddle
sorenbarrett said:
This brought images of my eldest daughter. She has done well in life but divulged to me lately that her greatest regret is that she didn\'t pursue ballet. She was built for it in size and shape and was told over and over by those in ballet that she had all it took.Loved the poem and its twist of the devil. Sometikes one must sell their soul to be great.
September 15th, 2024 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
This brought images of my eldest daughter. She has done well in life but divulged to me lately that her greatest regret is that she didn\'t pursue ballet. She was built for it in size and shape and was told over and over by those in ballet that she had all it took.Loved the poem and its twist of the devil. Sometikes one must sell their soul to be great.
September 15th, 2024 12:53
Devil Plays the Fiddle
Cassie58 said:
Such a contrast here dear Teddy, between the beautiful, delicate ballerina and that devil playing fiddle. Your lines evoked strong emotions here. A delight reading one of your older poems. I love the variety in your writing. You have such wonderful creativity of thinking. Hope you are having wonderful sunshine, as we are today. 🌹
September 15th, 2024 11:18
Cassie58 said:
Such a contrast here dear Teddy, between the beautiful, delicate ballerina and that devil playing fiddle. Your lines evoked strong emotions here. A delight reading one of your older poems. I love the variety in your writing. You have such wonderful creativity of thinking. Hope you are having wonderful sunshine, as we are today. 🌹
September 15th, 2024 11:18
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