Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Empty Sky
LIZ said:
You sparked a memory!!! Beautiful!! Good to have you back!! 💖
September 3rd, 2023 04:29
LIZ said:
You sparked a memory!!! Beautiful!! Good to have you back!! 💖
September 3rd, 2023 04:29
Empty Sky
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice to see you posting again , teddy )
YeAh some things / people are difficult to let go of
September 3rd, 2023 04:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nice to see you posting again , teddy )
YeAh some things / people are difficult to let go of
September 3rd, 2023 04:15
Empty Sky
peto said:
That is some memory Teddy
Haunts your dreams
So much said in such short verse
Good to see a write from you
September 3rd, 2023 03:41
peto said:
That is some memory Teddy
Haunts your dreams
So much said in such short verse
Good to see a write from you
September 3rd, 2023 03:41
Short-Circuit
L. B. Mek said:
have a great holiday!
(oh and a lovely write as well) lol
i think if we were to become cyborg\'s, eventually
the only part of me I would never change
is my heart
August 25th, 2023 03:06
L. B. Mek said:
have a great holiday!
(oh and a lovely write as well) lol
i think if we were to become cyborg\'s, eventually
the only part of me I would never change
is my heart
August 25th, 2023 03:06
Binding Pages
L. B. Mek said:
just comfort love handles
and ennui lulls
convincing us, happiness
is but a mirage...
(lol
even too much warmth
comes with consequences)
I so relate with your theme
diamonds aren\'t born, they\'re made
and you\'re a diamond in the making
if you\'ve realised
how struggle n pressure
helps you get stronger
August 25th, 2023 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
just comfort love handles
and ennui lulls
convincing us, happiness
is but a mirage...
(lol
even too much warmth
comes with consequences)
I so relate with your theme
diamonds aren\'t born, they\'re made
and you\'re a diamond in the making
if you\'ve realised
how struggle n pressure
helps you get stronger
August 25th, 2023 03:03
Love Letter
L. B. Mek said:
(qwerty inked
digitally pristine n sincere
I\'ll email you the pixel copy
of my heart...)
😉
August 25th, 2023 02:58
L. B. Mek said:
(qwerty inked
digitally pristine n sincere
I\'ll email you the pixel copy
of my heart...)
😉
August 25th, 2023 02:58
Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
L. B. Mek said:
how we\'re in sync my cherished friend
next Friday i\'ll share a work titled \'After\'
that will be like a humble version
of this wonderfully poignant poem you shared
thank you! and when that time comes
you won\'t be journeying alone
as all your angels and loved ones
will be waiting to ferry you across
like the VVIP you are
August 25th, 2023 02:53
L. B. Mek said:
how we\'re in sync my cherished friend
next Friday i\'ll share a work titled \'After\'
that will be like a humble version
of this wonderfully poignant poem you shared
thank you! and when that time comes
you won\'t be journeying alone
as all your angels and loved ones
will be waiting to ferry you across
like the VVIP you are
August 25th, 2023 02:53
Observing a Miracle
L. B. Mek said:
so tender, you paint a soul not a character, dear Poetess
simply beautiful
August 25th, 2023 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
so tender, you paint a soul not a character, dear Poetess
simply beautiful
August 25th, 2023 02:47
Binding Pages
sorenbarrett said:
So short but true. There must be an opposition in all things. There can be no light without darkness. Very nice
August 17th, 2023 23:08
sorenbarrett said:
So short but true. There must be an opposition in all things. There can be no light without darkness. Very nice
August 17th, 2023 23:08
Short-Circuit
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about a subject that makes me a bit nervous. I\'m not sure we have thought out this technology adequately.
August 16th, 2023 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about a subject that makes me a bit nervous. I\'m not sure we have thought out this technology adequately.
August 16th, 2023 07:21
Short-Circuit
Parisab said:
Such a fresh concept, to not just criticize, but to empathize with it, and to wish to be it (some of the time.) Great read Teddy!
August 13th, 2023 16:11
Parisab said:
Such a fresh concept, to not just criticize, but to empathize with it, and to wish to be it (some of the time.) Great read Teddy!
August 13th, 2023 16:11
Short-Circuit
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing teddy .. )
to be honest this makes me think of feeling numb .. not feeling anything at all .. and that is a difficult place to be .. you know when your watching something that’s supposed to be happy /funny .. and you feel ‘nothing ‘ I’ve felt that before .. sometimes but yes I can relate to the not wanting to feel grief / sadness .( difficult emotions )
I can see the envy in this but also the sympathy towards something which may not feel anything ..
‘ as I watch her I tremble
because
I am convinced her robotic heart
wants so desperately to beat
If just for a moment
to feel any slight emotion’
how sad is it not to ‘ feel ‘ happiness joy and just to feel ‘ empty ‘
A well written poem 🌸
August 13th, 2023 14:23
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing teddy .. )
to be honest this makes me think of feeling numb .. not feeling anything at all .. and that is a difficult place to be .. you know when your watching something that’s supposed to be happy /funny .. and you feel ‘nothing ‘ I’ve felt that before .. sometimes but yes I can relate to the not wanting to feel grief / sadness .( difficult emotions )
I can see the envy in this but also the sympathy towards something which may not feel anything ..
‘ as I watch her I tremble
because
I am convinced her robotic heart
wants so desperately to beat
If just for a moment
to feel any slight emotion’
how sad is it not to ‘ feel ‘ happiness joy and just to feel ‘ empty ‘
A well written poem 🌸
August 13th, 2023 14:23
Short-Circuit
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, you\'ve chosen a most appropriate pic for this poem. Ophelia, I think, succumbing to her fate. You\'ve put so exquisitely into words the struggle of our emotional lives, for it is all emotion in the end. If we feel, we endure the consequences good, or bad, but we Feel. Your emotional life has led you to this gem of a poem, you are the amazing writer my dear! A thousand fav\'s
August 13th, 2023 13:56
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, you\'ve chosen a most appropriate pic for this poem. Ophelia, I think, succumbing to her fate. You\'ve put so exquisitely into words the struggle of our emotional lives, for it is all emotion in the end. If we feel, we endure the consequences good, or bad, but we Feel. Your emotional life has led you to this gem of a poem, you are the amazing writer my dear! A thousand fav\'s
August 13th, 2023 13:56
Short-Circuit
peto said:
Careful what you wish for Teddy
Ai couldn\'t write with such feeling as this
And when that switch is flicked hmmm
Thought provoking read
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 13th, 2023 13:52
peto said:
Careful what you wish for Teddy
Ai couldn\'t write with such feeling as this
And when that switch is flicked hmmm
Thought provoking read
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 13th, 2023 13:52
Short-Circuit
LIZ said:
This is such a real subject, put in the most delicate way. I agree, it would be nice to feel no grief or sadness......oh but I would accept grief and sadness, as long as I get to love and laugh!!! Well done Teddy! 💖💖💖
August 13th, 2023 13:32
LIZ said:
This is such a real subject, put in the most delicate way. I agree, it would be nice to feel no grief or sadness......oh but I would accept grief and sadness, as long as I get to love and laugh!!! Well done Teddy! 💖💖💖
August 13th, 2023 13:32
Short-Circuit
orchidee said:
Never be as intelligent as humans though, I say. I mean Daleks are talking dustbins! heehee.
Ahhh, a poem about KP, I see! Looks like her too. lol.
August 13th, 2023 13:21
orchidee said:
Never be as intelligent as humans though, I say. I mean Daleks are talking dustbins! heehee.
Ahhh, a poem about KP, I see! Looks like her too. lol.
August 13th, 2023 13:21
Binding Pages
Teddy.15 said:
No I\'m not Dave I\'m saying if there was no suffering that it wouldn\'t be worth writing about if it was all roses and light it would be boring. 💖
August 13th, 2023 01:48
Teddy.15 said:
No I\'m not Dave I\'m saying if there was no suffering that it wouldn\'t be worth writing about if it was all roses and light it would be boring. 💖
August 13th, 2023 01:48
Binding Pages
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, your piece is smooth and neat, but are you saying that you can only write of your tragedies while there, however if you extract yourself onto a path warmth this is not worth a write? More uplifting, I would have thought.
Am I missing something?
August 12th, 2023 20:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy, your piece is smooth and neat, but are you saying that you can only write of your tragedies while there, however if you extract yourself onto a path warmth this is not worth a write? More uplifting, I would have thought.
Am I missing something?
August 12th, 2023 20:54
Binding Pages
MendedFences27 said:
Ever so true. Without one we would soon be bored of the other. A lot of wisdom in these four lines. It;s a keeper. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2023 18:59
MendedFences27 said:
Ever so true. Without one we would soon be bored of the other. A lot of wisdom in these four lines. It;s a keeper. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2023 18:59
Binding Pages
Bella Shepard said:
Without one, how would we know the other, framed so beautifully in this poem. We embrace them both, for they are who we are, who we become. Four lines of such wisdom my friend, love it!
August 12th, 2023 12:16
Bella Shepard said:
Without one, how would we know the other, framed so beautifully in this poem. We embrace them both, for they are who we are, who we become. Four lines of such wisdom my friend, love it!
August 12th, 2023 12:16
Binding Pages
Sunsetmet said:
This is the write that people need to hear darkness I can relate to world of tragedies but not to write we are poets and this is the real tragic world we live upon
August 12th, 2023 07:40
Sunsetmet said:
This is the write that people need to hear darkness I can relate to world of tragedies but not to write we are poets and this is the real tragic world we live upon
August 12th, 2023 07:40
Binding Pages
LIZ said:
Isn\'t that the truth!!! Because inspiration can sometimes come from the darkest places. Very nice!! 💖
August 12th, 2023 05:17
LIZ said:
Isn\'t that the truth!!! Because inspiration can sometimes come from the darkest places. Very nice!! 💖
August 12th, 2023 05:17
Binding Pages
orchidee said:
I knew there was some reason I married KP - tragedies, etc. lol.
August 12th, 2023 05:05
orchidee said:
I knew there was some reason I married KP - tragedies, etc. lol.
August 12th, 2023 05:05
Love Letter
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing .. expressing those nice words from a place of truth , love and care
The ‘ heart chakra’ is associated with the colour pink or green .. 🙂
August 11th, 2023 11:17
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing .. expressing those nice words from a place of truth , love and care
The ‘ heart chakra’ is associated with the colour pink or green .. 🙂
August 11th, 2023 11:17
Love Letter
Neville said:
I had to look twice before I noticed it was a fakehu .. ❤️
August 11th, 2023 04:01
Neville said:
I had to look twice before I noticed it was a fakehu .. ❤️
August 11th, 2023 04:01
Love Letter
Parisab said:
Your letter was an invitation to the Land of Nostalgia! Grazie!
August 10th, 2023 17:42
Parisab said:
Your letter was an invitation to the Land of Nostalgia! Grazie!
August 10th, 2023 17:42
Love Letter
Sunsetmet said:
Just lovely how this was interrupted with a heart that to me is a special love coming through the...>>>arrows >>> heart LOL
August 10th, 2023 15:08
Sunsetmet said:
Just lovely how this was interrupted with a heart that to me is a special love coming through the...>>>arrows >>> heart LOL
August 10th, 2023 15:08
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