Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
And The Winner Is?
Doggerel Dave said:
No shame is the key - should be more widely practiced. Stay the course, Teddy.
February 20th, 2024 05:56
Doggerel Dave said:
No shame is the key - should be more widely practiced. Stay the course, Teddy.
February 20th, 2024 05:56
And The Winner Is?
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - one (read \'me\') needs a certain amount of egotistical self pride to pin anything up here - it may be misguided, but there you go.......
February 20th, 2024 04:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - one (read \'me\') needs a certain amount of egotistical self pride to pin anything up here - it may be misguided, but there you go.......
February 20th, 2024 04:45
And The Winner Is?
Neville said:
absobloominlutely .. it\'s either that or cry .. 🍒🌹
February 20th, 2024 04:18
Neville said:
absobloominlutely .. it\'s either that or cry .. 🍒🌹
February 20th, 2024 04:18
Dog Lonely
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness comes in many forms at different times of life. I had a dog, when I was young that my dad would not allow in the house, it was lonely. I remember it to this day. Nothing deserves to be lonely.
February 19th, 2024 15:09
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness comes in many forms at different times of life. I had a dog, when I was young that my dad would not allow in the house, it was lonely. I remember it to this day. Nothing deserves to be lonely.
February 19th, 2024 15:09
Paddy McGee
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful tale, told by a consumate story teller. You draw us in to love this ghost and his tale. It\'s another original \"Teddy\", worth its weight in gold.
February 19th, 2024 14:54
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful tale, told by a consumate story teller. You draw us in to love this ghost and his tale. It\'s another original \"Teddy\", worth its weight in gold.
February 19th, 2024 14:54
Paddy McGee
Thoughtless said:
I believe this one deserves 5 out of 5 stars. Enjoyed it! God loves laughter. He created sex after all.
February 19th, 2024 12:53
Thoughtless said:
I believe this one deserves 5 out of 5 stars. Enjoyed it! God loves laughter. He created sex after all.
February 19th, 2024 12:53
Paddy McGee
Neville said:
absolutely brilliant Teddy .. mightily impressive and clearly demonstrates that you have not written yourself into a corner, but conversely shows how diverse the unity of mind, body and pen can really be .. it also goes to show that whist you can beat an egg, you just can\'t beat a good shag .. Neville 🌹
February 19th, 2024 03:06
Neville said:
absolutely brilliant Teddy .. mightily impressive and clearly demonstrates that you have not written yourself into a corner, but conversely shows how diverse the unity of mind, body and pen can really be .. it also goes to show that whist you can beat an egg, you just can\'t beat a good shag .. Neville 🌹
February 19th, 2024 03:06
Paddy McGee
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. So creative. Very well done. It\'s a classic.
February 18th, 2024 16:18
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. So creative. Very well done. It\'s a classic.
February 18th, 2024 16:18
A Very Fine Romance
Bella Shepard said:
Been out of town several days visiting relatives and come home to find this handsome couple immortalized in verse. I almost expect them to break into a Tango. Such fun my friend!
February 18th, 2024 15:41
Bella Shepard said:
Been out of town several days visiting relatives and come home to find this handsome couple immortalized in verse. I almost expect them to break into a Tango. Such fun my friend!
February 18th, 2024 15:41
Paddy McGee
Parisab said:
LOL, no accountability for that cringe-worthy Mc Gee. Indeed it must be “the Irish” in you, to draw deep stories in jest💝
February 18th, 2024 12:59
Parisab said:
LOL, no accountability for that cringe-worthy Mc Gee. Indeed it must be “the Irish” in you, to draw deep stories in jest💝
February 18th, 2024 12:59
Paddy McGee
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write Teddy. And I\'m certain you could put a rhythmic tune to this. 😁👍
February 18th, 2024 10:30
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write Teddy. And I\'m certain you could put a rhythmic tune to this. 😁👍
February 18th, 2024 10:30
Paddy McGee
Doggerel Dave said:
The twists and turns of this rumbunctious tale had me giddy by the end - a \'big dipper\' of a tale that one - but I do believe I got my money\'s worth Teddy. 🤪
February 18th, 2024 07:37
Doggerel Dave said:
The twists and turns of this rumbunctious tale had me giddy by the end - a \'big dipper\' of a tale that one - but I do believe I got my money\'s worth Teddy. 🤪
February 18th, 2024 07:37
Paddy McGee
arqios said:
Lovely, lively, fun read! Thanks for featuring this on your ‘page!’
February 18th, 2024 06:33
arqios said:
Lovely, lively, fun read! Thanks for featuring this on your ‘page!’
February 18th, 2024 06:33
Paddy McGee
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved ballads as poems. They may be longer but the story enthralls me. This one is great in that it is set in a mythological sense and carries a mystical feel. Wonderfully done Teddy.
February 18th, 2024 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved ballads as poems. They may be longer but the story enthralls me. This one is great in that it is set in a mythological sense and carries a mystical feel. Wonderfully done Teddy.
February 18th, 2024 06:32
Paddy McGee
Bobby O said:
That’s really freaking clever. It’s alive. It paints a story’ with invisible air as the only canvas as the words jump off the static page snd affix with motion and pathos
February 18th, 2024 05:20
Bobby O said:
That’s really freaking clever. It’s alive. It paints a story’ with invisible air as the only canvas as the words jump off the static page snd affix with motion and pathos
February 18th, 2024 05:20
A Very Fine Romance
Doggerel Dave said:
So he didn\'t get a boner after all? No further comment - empathy only goes so far.....🤣
February 17th, 2024 23:57
Doggerel Dave said:
So he didn\'t get a boner after all? No further comment - empathy only goes so far.....🤣
February 17th, 2024 23:57
A Very Fine Romance
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. This one id different for you. I love it.
February 17th, 2024 15:51
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. This one id different for you. I love it.
February 17th, 2024 15:51
A Very Fine Romance
Accidental Poet said:
Certainly a chuckling of my bones dear Teddy. Stay tuned for tomorrow and I\'ll repay you with my own entry of humor. 🤣
February 17th, 2024 13:48
Accidental Poet said:
Certainly a chuckling of my bones dear Teddy. Stay tuned for tomorrow and I\'ll repay you with my own entry of humor. 🤣
February 17th, 2024 13:48
A Very Fine Romance
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh yes, Teddy. You have a couple of good characters there. They could have a pint and wash their feet.
February 17th, 2024 10:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh yes, Teddy. You have a couple of good characters there. They could have a pint and wash their feet.
February 17th, 2024 10:36
A Very Fine Romance
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
lol 😂 I needed this today! Hopefully they are still together..
February 17th, 2024 10:10
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
lol 😂 I needed this today! Hopefully they are still together..
February 17th, 2024 10:10
A Very Fine Romance
Neville said:
and would you believe after all that he still preferred Bendy Wendy .. she was far more flexible and in lots of ways .. ❤️
February 17th, 2024 08:58
Neville said:
and would you believe after all that he still preferred Bendy Wendy .. she was far more flexible and in lots of ways .. ❤️
February 17th, 2024 08:58
Indecent Proposal
sorenbarrett said:
Always a fan of Shakespeare and many of his lines, I have wondered how he had such an expansive vocabulary\' This poem rings true and I too have felt how wonderful it would be to be able to get a lesson or two from the greatest, but then it would be like Mozart trying to teach me piano, a waste of his time. Your meter carries one along this poem which is enhanced by the rhyme that is pleasing to the ear. Shakespeare did not always rhyme. Maybe you could teach him a thing or two. Lovely poem Teddy with a thought dear to the heart of many a poet.
February 17th, 2024 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Always a fan of Shakespeare and many of his lines, I have wondered how he had such an expansive vocabulary\' This poem rings true and I too have felt how wonderful it would be to be able to get a lesson or two from the greatest, but then it would be like Mozart trying to teach me piano, a waste of his time. Your meter carries one along this poem which is enhanced by the rhyme that is pleasing to the ear. Shakespeare did not always rhyme. Maybe you could teach him a thing or two. Lovely poem Teddy with a thought dear to the heart of many a poet.
February 17th, 2024 06:09
Fantasia
Neville said:
almost the same thing happened to me a while back .. I thought I was playing a sitar .. opened my eyes and was plucking a chicken .. ❤️
February 17th, 2024 03:52
Neville said:
almost the same thing happened to me a while back .. I thought I was playing a sitar .. opened my eyes and was plucking a chicken .. ❤️
February 17th, 2024 03:52
Fantasia
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words Teddy, did you mange to finish the piece of music?
Andy
https://youtu.be/dXa8my9pb5g?si=9QK7F4IqBt_yqDyv
February 17th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words Teddy, did you mange to finish the piece of music?
Andy
https://youtu.be/dXa8my9pb5g?si=9QK7F4IqBt_yqDyv
February 17th, 2024 01:50
Fantasia
sorenbarrett said:
You had me. I myself was thinking of when I was playing piano. I never became all that proficient in that my teacher refused to teach me blues when I was a child. Then the end or your poem hit me and the title made sense and I realized I had been doing the same as I read it. Very nice
February 16th, 2024 15:25
sorenbarrett said:
You had me. I myself was thinking of when I was playing piano. I never became all that proficient in that my teacher refused to teach me blues when I was a child. Then the end or your poem hit me and the title made sense and I realized I had been doing the same as I read it. Very nice
February 16th, 2024 15:25
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