Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Extraordinary Vision
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful imagery. You painted a sublime picture with words here.
June 28th, 2024 19:11
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful imagery. You painted a sublime picture with words here.
June 28th, 2024 19:11
Extraordinary Vision
sorenbarrett said:
\"I could hear the birds
having a bath in the sweetness
of their own glorious voices
splashing their musical notes
upon my thoughts\"
Such a beautiful image!
Reflection does indeed sway from side to side and very shortly drifts away
\"away from the now
and into tomorrow\"
The placement of this in this location of the poem was masterful. This poem left a light airy feeling.
June 28th, 2024 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
\"I could hear the birds
having a bath in the sweetness
of their own glorious voices
splashing their musical notes
upon my thoughts\"
Such a beautiful image!
Reflection does indeed sway from side to side and very shortly drifts away
\"away from the now
and into tomorrow\"
The placement of this in this location of the poem was masterful. This poem left a light airy feeling.
June 28th, 2024 04:55
Secrets of Slumberbash
Doggerel Dave said:
I too have a recurring dream or rather the setting for a series of dreams, which I don’t intend to relate ‘cos there’s too many of them…. But the setting is an expansive never-ending building – a cross between a large hotel and an ocean liner (sort of) with all those doors……. Fun.
You stirred my imagination Teddy, and I shall hold you responsible if you have managed to evict me from my very comfortable environment.😄
PS: Your picture….Sigh…..
June 27th, 2024 17:54
Doggerel Dave said:
I too have a recurring dream or rather the setting for a series of dreams, which I don’t intend to relate ‘cos there’s too many of them…. But the setting is an expansive never-ending building – a cross between a large hotel and an ocean liner (sort of) with all those doors……. Fun.
You stirred my imagination Teddy, and I shall hold you responsible if you have managed to evict me from my very comfortable environment.😄
PS: Your picture….Sigh…..
June 27th, 2024 17:54
Secrets of Slumberbash
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are most intriguing whether natural or metaphoric. Yes I emote in my dreams and have experience time distortion and lucid dreaming. Here in this poem it seems a search for an archetype a soulmate may I be so bold as to say God that is omnipresent, I have never found him either
\"but I just get on
with my day
regardless
because that is just what one does...
well, isn\'t it?\"
So nicely finished.
June 27th, 2024 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are most intriguing whether natural or metaphoric. Yes I emote in my dreams and have experience time distortion and lucid dreaming. Here in this poem it seems a search for an archetype a soulmate may I be so bold as to say God that is omnipresent, I have never found him either
\"but I just get on
with my day
regardless
because that is just what one does...
well, isn\'t it?\"
So nicely finished.
June 27th, 2024 15:39
Secrets of Slumberbash
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I relate totally. I awake heart sick sometimes. Powerful writing, dear Teddy.
June 27th, 2024 12:22
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I relate totally. I awake heart sick sometimes. Powerful writing, dear Teddy.
June 27th, 2024 12:22
Secrets of Slumberbash
Qurrathul Ain said:
So relatable. For some reasons, it spoke to my heart. Thank you for sharing!
June 27th, 2024 03:34
Qurrathul Ain said:
So relatable. For some reasons, it spoke to my heart. Thank you for sharing!
June 27th, 2024 03:34
Back from The Future
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I love the reference. Excellent work, Sweet Teddy.
June 25th, 2024 19:21
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I love the reference. Excellent work, Sweet Teddy.
June 25th, 2024 19:21
Back from The Future
Neilton said:
I see my best friend only once a year I can\'t imagine seeing her after a decade ! The platonic bond between two girls is one of a kind and as my mother always says \"if you find a friend,you have found a treasure!\"
Amazing work as always!
June 25th, 2024 08:00
Neilton said:
I see my best friend only once a year I can\'t imagine seeing her after a decade ! The platonic bond between two girls is one of a kind and as my mother always says \"if you find a friend,you have found a treasure!\"
Amazing work as always!
June 25th, 2024 08:00
Back from The Future
Poetic Dan said:
Do it and shine you are so divine. Thank you for sharing that beautiful rhyme and smile
June 25th, 2024 01:50
Poetic Dan said:
Do it and shine you are so divine. Thank you for sharing that beautiful rhyme and smile
June 25th, 2024 01:50
Back from The Future
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to get back together with good friends Teddy, good memories come flooding back.
Andy
June 25th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to get back together with good friends Teddy, good memories come flooding back.
Andy
June 25th, 2024 01:17
Back from The Future
aDarkerMind said:
old friends Teddy.
found this to be very touching...
loved every line.
June 24th, 2024 13:24
aDarkerMind said:
old friends Teddy.
found this to be very touching...
loved every line.
June 24th, 2024 13:24
Back from The Future
sorenbarrett said:
Old friendships revived such a joy a wonderful write friend showing feelings never lost.
June 24th, 2024 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
Old friendships revived such a joy a wonderful write friend showing feelings never lost.
June 24th, 2024 09:38
Dreams Worth Gold
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams can be so kind. Such a feeling of loss and still a feeling of joy at reunion. Gold indeed.
June 24th, 2024 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams can be so kind. Such a feeling of loss and still a feeling of joy at reunion. Gold indeed.
June 24th, 2024 09:35
Back from The Future
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel I\'ve been let into the secret lives of two raunchy young girls transmogrified into two respectable ladies... thanks for the poetic insight, Teddy. Your true celebration makes it no less an entertaining read.😊
PS: Which one is you?
June 24th, 2024 06:00
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel I\'ve been let into the secret lives of two raunchy young girls transmogrified into two respectable ladies... thanks for the poetic insight, Teddy. Your true celebration makes it no less an entertaining read.😊
PS: Which one is you?
June 24th, 2024 06:00
Reflecting in The Shower
Poetic Dan said:
As look out my hospital window I hear that my friend and dream to get back to my family and bed.
June 23rd, 2024 20:24
Poetic Dan said:
As look out my hospital window I hear that my friend and dream to get back to my family and bed.
June 23rd, 2024 20:24
Dreams Worth Gold
aDarkerMind said:
heart and soul from start to finish Teddy...
a truely wonderfully written work of art.
June 23rd, 2024 01:29
aDarkerMind said:
heart and soul from start to finish Teddy...
a truely wonderfully written work of art.
June 23rd, 2024 01:29
Dreams Worth Gold
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy, he will always be with you.
Andy
June 23rd, 2024 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Teddy, he will always be with you.
Andy
June 23rd, 2024 00:56
Reflecting in The Shower
Doggerel Dave said:
Almost didn\'t catch this one - you were too slippery all soaped up like that, Teddy......... oh dear!
Glad I didn\'t - so simple but true, you would have had, once formed, no trouble in remembering it once you were dried, dressed and respectable once more.... oh dear!!!
June 21st, 2024 20:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Almost didn\'t catch this one - you were too slippery all soaped up like that, Teddy......... oh dear!
Glad I didn\'t - so simple but true, you would have had, once formed, no trouble in remembering it once you were dried, dressed and respectable once more.... oh dear!!!
June 21st, 2024 20:31
Reflecting in The Shower
sorenbarrett said:
Love the positive and negative aspects of this reflection. And in the word reflection there is the implied thought that there are different things to reflect on or it would not occur. We should always be aware that out of every crisis there appears an opportunity. Nicelly done Teddy
June 21st, 2024 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
Love the positive and negative aspects of this reflection. And in the word reflection there is the implied thought that there are different things to reflect on or it would not occur. We should always be aware that out of every crisis there appears an opportunity. Nicelly done Teddy
June 21st, 2024 05:51
Reflecting in The Shower
Cassie58 said:
Quiet moments in the shower. Memories flashing past in a hurry. Some good, some not so. A relatable poem Teddy. Love your posted image. Have a beautiful day. 🌹
June 21st, 2024 02:22
Cassie58 said:
Quiet moments in the shower. Memories flashing past in a hurry. Some good, some not so. A relatable poem Teddy. Love your posted image. Have a beautiful day. 🌹
June 21st, 2024 02:22
Reflecting in The Shower
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy but I am sure that like me you have been to more places of enjoyment than those we don\'t enjoy.
Andy
June 21st, 2024 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Teddy but I am sure that like me you have been to more places of enjoyment than those we don\'t enjoy.
Andy
June 21st, 2024 01:28
Mind\'s Eye
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope should always be with you Neville as we can always be surprised at what is around the next corner in our lives.
Andy
June 19th, 2024 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope should always be with you Neville as we can always be surprised at what is around the next corner in our lives.
Andy
June 19th, 2024 01:09
Mind\'s Eye
Thomas W Case said:
Yes, you can. I sense growth and hope here—tremendous work.
June 18th, 2024 15:08
Thomas W Case said:
Yes, you can. I sense growth and hope here—tremendous work.
June 18th, 2024 15:08
Mind\'s Eye
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s no learning if I forget my successes, failures, injustices - both those inflicted upon me and those I\'ve inflicted on others. Sometimes termed learning, other times experience,
However I express it, you’ve done a better poetic job here, Teddy
A rich write.
June 18th, 2024 08:06
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s no learning if I forget my successes, failures, injustices - both those inflicted upon me and those I\'ve inflicted on others. Sometimes termed learning, other times experience,
However I express it, you’ve done a better poetic job here, Teddy
A rich write.
June 18th, 2024 08:06
Mind\'s Eye
Cassie58 said:
The eyes are the windows to the soul. Fear is a terrible thing. If you can face up to your fears and rise above them, then you can achieve a great deal. Beautiful write Teddy. Have a happy Tuesday 🌹
June 18th, 2024 07:13
Cassie58 said:
The eyes are the windows to the soul. Fear is a terrible thing. If you can face up to your fears and rise above them, then you can achieve a great deal. Beautiful write Teddy. Have a happy Tuesday 🌹
June 18th, 2024 07:13
Mind\'s Eye
sorenbarrett said:
Facing one\'s fears and past mistakes depends on seeing them accurately requiring not only courage but honesty. A most important message Teddy one that many ignore for the bliss of ignorance.
June 18th, 2024 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Facing one\'s fears and past mistakes depends on seeing them accurately requiring not only courage but honesty. A most important message Teddy one that many ignore for the bliss of ignorance.
June 18th, 2024 04:39
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