Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Where Time Really Does Stand Sill
Accidental Poet said:

Teddy, I just love this picture, is this really your attic? I love the way the light comes in through the windows and lights up the room. I don\'t see the clock, but I also love how you describe your fondness of the clock and room. If only walls could talk. Almost like there\'s an unseen poem in that room waiting to be read. Excellent Teddy. 😉👍

January 28th, 2024 11:04

Where Time Really Does Stand Sill
John said:

Those moments are essential to escape the traffic of life, great write mate

January 28th, 2024 06:44

Never Really Gone
Neville said:



I am with you all the way .. and have been here before Teddy .. such heart-wrenching realities always hurt long and deep .. Neville

January 28th, 2024 04:22

Never Really Gone
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive words Teddy, she will always be with you.

Andy

January 28th, 2024 02:46

Never Really Gone
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful Teddy, amazing work.

January 27th, 2024 22:02

Never Really Gone
Accidental Poet said:

Only physically Teddy. She\'s always with you. Heaven is only a heartbeat away. 😇

January 27th, 2024 10:24

Never Really Gone
sorenbarrett said:

What a touching and though sad wonderful vision of grief and loss. I loved so much how in the second stanza you personified grief as if it were a living being. And the finish of this piece was perfection as to how we incorporate those we love and they will always exist in us. Ten out of ten on this one

January 27th, 2024 09:42

So Let the Music Play
Cassie58 said:

When the saxaphone plays I am transported. A step nearer to heaven. Lovely poem Teddy and your posted image is a perfect match for your words. Have a beautiful weekend.

January 27th, 2024 03:51

So Let the Music Play
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Teddy, let the music flow.

Andy

https://youtu.be/Pk8ZQ4F5qh4?si=gSAAtrXlYhXgdWo-

January 27th, 2024 02:30

So Let the Music Play
Bella Shepard said:

Play it loud and strong dear Teddy, with great confidence. Beautiful pic, beautiful poem!

January 26th, 2024 14:21

So Let the Music Play
Teddy.15 said:



January 26th, 2024 12:42

So Let the Music Play
Thomas W Case said:

Love it. Fantastic work. Triumphant.

January 26th, 2024 10:18

So Let the Music Play
sorenbarrett said:

A most wonderful analogy. Music is the vibration that can take us from the seductive to the sublime. The devil may play his fiddle but the sax is so much more powerful.

January 26th, 2024 06:25

So Let the Music Play
Tom Dylan said:

Some great lines here. Love the great saxophone of one\'s soul. Just so well written.

January 26th, 2024 05:07

So Let the Music Play
Accidental Poet said:

aah yes, first reader.😁 The devil may laugh, but he laughs alone. Excellently penned Teddy. 👍

January 26th, 2024 04:52

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Neville said:


How come I almost missed this ..

Quite literally, a literary stroke of pure genius ma\'am T .. Neville

January 25th, 2024 04:35

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Forget the bad things in the past Teddy and just remember the good things as you move on into that new love that is there for you.

Andy

January 25th, 2024 02:24

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Thomas W Case said:

Simply beautiful, the perfect touch of transparency and vulnerability. Fantastic work.

January 24th, 2024 16:11

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Accidental Poet said:

You\'ve no idea just how much I can relate to your beautiful poem. And yes, acceptance of the reality of what is instead of what you\'ve wanted is the hardest pill to swallow. But I know, if anyone can reinvent themselves, it\'s you Teddy. The biggest of hugs 🫂 to you my dear poetess.

January 24th, 2024 10:31

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Tom Dylan said:

A powerful poem, Teddy, wonderfully written.

January 24th, 2024 06:58

My Heaviest Suitcase Contains My Heart
Cassie58 said:

Beautifully penned poem Teddy. Regrets are painful, acceptance the first step on the pathway to healing. Letting go can eventually be a sweet release. Easy to say, far harder to do.

January 24th, 2024 06:29

Artist
Bella Shepard said:

Love is your pallate, your brush, your canvas, and you use it beautifully in this poem. The portrait reflects the depth and breadth and height, to steal a phrase, that your love can reach. Exquisite!

January 23rd, 2024 15:57

Artist
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words Teddy.

Andy

January 23rd, 2024 02:21

Artist
Accidental Poet said:

And an artist you most certainly are Teddy. 😊👍

January 23rd, 2024 00:51

Artist
Cassie58 said:

A love poem that warms the heart. Beautifully penned Teddy.

January 22nd, 2024 21:47

Artist
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work Teddy.

January 22nd, 2024 21:04

Bukowski’s Muse
Neville said:



with this, or to be even more precise, with these words, you have reached some kind of poetic zenith .. inchiostro sorprendente ma\'am ..

Neville

January 22nd, 2024 02:16

Bukowski’s Muse
Goldfinch60 said:

That muse is within us all Teddy, sometimes it cannot find us though.

Andy

January 21st, 2024 02:28

Bukowski’s Muse
Accidental Poet said:

Much like that of one of my favs, Jack Kerouac. Well penned Dea👍r Poet.

January 20th, 2024 17:19

Bukowski’s Muse
Bella Shepard said:

I did not know Bukowski, until I read this poem, and thought it only right that I should, before I commented. So I went to You Tube, found the man, and watched the interviews and his poetry readings. Raw, merciless in many ways, unencumbered by any norms, Lenny Bruce came to mind so strongly. We need the Bukowski\'s to keep us real, grounded in what life really is, one who has no fear and often no filter, to speak the truth especially to those who don\'t want to hear it. A wonderfully inspired write dear friend, thank you once again for introducing me to something, somenone, so extraordinary!

January 20th, 2024 15:39



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