Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Dan Williams said:

Aw come on. Not even him?

August 9th, 2024 23:47

You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Doggerel Dave said:

No gain out of staying round here then, is there....... ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™ƒ?

August 9th, 2024 07:33

You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
sorenbarrett said:

Lust, what a wonderful feeling. I covet lust and the feeling one has with such decadence. I too would go for a Lemon Meringue Pie. A most fun read well built up and paced to cause one to salivate in anticipation of the ending.

August 9th, 2024 05:52

You\'re Just Too Good To Be True
Cassie58 said:

Youโ€™re too good to be true, canโ€™t take my eyes off you. I remember the great Andy Williams singing this song Teddy. You aced with this poem. You kept the suspense going. That word filthy had my eyes out on stalks lol. However, l love lemon meringue pie too, so you canโ€™t hog it all ๐Ÿ˜€. A fun poem, much enjoyed humour. ๐ŸŒน

August 9th, 2024 03:01

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, yes, thatโ€™s where our dearly departed loved ones stay. Deep in the heart. Never far away. A part of us. In a few days it will be the 10th anniversary of losing my brother. I keep close to my three nephews. They all have a little of him in them. It is a blessing to see and feel it. A lovely write which touched me this Friday morning. Have a beautiful day dear poet. ๐ŸŒน

August 9th, 2024 02:11

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant. Fantastic work.

August 8th, 2024 19:34

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
aDarkerMind said:

goose bumps
and a lump in my throat.

(and a few tears while thinking of lost ones to go with it)

oh my!

August 8th, 2024 13:23

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
sorenbarrett said:

I feel this in that many of my friends that I grew up with are now gone. Relatives too and I wonder how much longer I have

August 8th, 2024 12:08

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, Teddy. I light a candle on those days and let them out.

August 8th, 2024 09:36

In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Teddy but they will always be with you in Spirit.

Andy

August 8th, 2024 01:50

A Very Grand Finale
Goldfinch60 said:

Play away Teddy but please to not go yet as we need to hear your final concerto.

Andy

August 8th, 2024 01:30

A Very Grand Finale
Dan Williams said:

Or, no?

August 8th, 2024 00:17

A Very Grand Finale
Dan Williams said:

Wow. Sadness with a capital \'S\'. Very well done.

August 8th, 2024 00:16

A Very Grand Finale
Bella Shepard said:

Poetry and music inextricably linked in this beautiful dream of a poem. The pic couldn\'t be more perfect, come think of it, so is the poem.

August 7th, 2024 15:13

A Very Grand Finale
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful vision, sweet Teddy.

August 7th, 2024 10:30

A Very Grand Finale
MendedFences27 said:

Hang in there. Life is all we have. Loved your poem and it\'s rather intense subject. To go out with a smile? I guess I want to be run over by a beer truck.
Keep writing and posting and practicing your piano. - Phil A.

August 7th, 2024 10:08

A Very Grand Finale
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Teddy. Are you getting married? Dreams, death, and pianos.

August 7th, 2024 09:14

A Very Grand Finale
sorenbarrett said:

Dying with a smile is the only way to go. Then to die while performing two arts simultaneously is add victory to one\'s final act. Glad that it was a dram though

August 7th, 2024 06:30

The Poetess and the Pussy
AuburnScribbler said:

This is a marvelously penned piece of literary surrealism here Teddy.15, which is handsomely adorned by a beautiful picture.

I also wholeheartedly agree with the quote, madness is an avenue that must be traversed, in order to live a full life.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

August 7th, 2024 05:49

The Poetess and the Pussy
sorenbarrett said:

Fun is what I can say about this write. Yes I agree you have not lived unless you have seen insanity, faced death, loved, and lost all.

August 7th, 2024 05:16

A Very Sweet Dream of Home
Goldfinch60 said:

Great new word Neville, slumberdash souns good to me.

Andy

August 7th, 2024 01:50

A Very Sweet Dream of Home
Cassie58 said:

Dear Teddy, I love how you can turn the everyday ordinary into something so poetic. Hope you had a beautiful holiday and feel well rested. Your posted image of London in the rain, takes me back many years. I prefer to remember it as it once was. Have a wonderful Wednesday ๐ŸŒน

August 6th, 2024 23:28

A Very Sweet Dream of Home
Bella Shepard said:

How long before slumberbash is found in the OED? I now have a new word that I shall use repeatedly. There is a gentle sweetness in this verse that I just love. Excellent write dear Teddy!

August 6th, 2024 13:23

A Very Sweet Dream of Home
Doggerel Dave said:

Find an escape anyway you can, Teddy. Especially if it is London; what can I tell you - go for it.
For me, that would be the London of the \'60\'s and 70\'s - not so sure of right now.
Thanks for the memories....๐Ÿ’—

August 6th, 2024 06:49

A Very Sweet Dream of Home
Thoughtless said:

It\'s the contrast between what is and is not. One can have two homes which both pull at one\'s heart.

August 6th, 2024 06:43

A Very Sweet Dream of Home
sorenbarrett said:

Simply changing how we think about things can make all the difference in the world as to how we feel. Ignorance is bliss. That\'s why I know nothing. Great write
Teddy

August 6th, 2024 05:25

If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill
Goldfinch60 said:

May rainbows bring joy and love to you Teddy as you write such fine words.

Andy

August 5th, 2024 01:42

If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill
MendedFences27 said:

Not an easy task being a house, nor is it easy to be one metaphorically. You have succeeded, brilliantly. Kudos for that. Your \"rainbow\" lines give the poem some color (no pun intended). Wisdom however is the foundation of your poem. (I must stop punning.) Thank you for posting this most enjoyable poem. - Phil A.

August 4th, 2024 22:26

Portrait of Truth
sorenbarrett said:

Teddy you have a knack to make someone feel good with your comments and this poem is no exception in its compliments to the subject of it. Lovely

August 4th, 2024 16:05

If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill
Thomas W Case said:

So true. I have grown in the tough times. Beautiful work, sweet Teddy.

August 4th, 2024 13:28



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