Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Without Words
Christina8 said:

Oh, wow this is most touching....a wonderful poem! sad ending but I feel it was cathartic for you? Great job!

September 17th, 2023 12:29

Without Words
spilleronsheet said:

Such beautiful words and those emotions that were lessons untold….regret shall be the last season that I wish to witness further….but about our loved ones, I am truly they are within us…so is your mother, tell her within your oneself and say it every time what you always wanted to say…cause your a reflection of her….I shall imbibe your words and shall myself reflect upon it…thanks for such dear words dearest teddy

September 17th, 2023 12:13

Without Words
Bella Shepard said:

Your pic is of wordless paper, but I also see the ornate filagree that surrounds that space, feelings of love that were always there if perhaps, some things were never said. You speak from the heart dear Teddy, it\'s a beautiful thing!

September 17th, 2023 11:23

Without Words
sorenbarrett said:

Sad but so commonly true. Well expressed in words of softness and care.

September 17th, 2023 08:09

Without Words
BlessedbyGod said:

So beautiful Teddy,😥😥
It breaks my heart knowing how and this happened and at the most happiestvtime in your life too,
You will have healing my dear,
She knows how you felt about her and knows how much you love her,
She and your brother are so proud of you Teddy,and it\'s never too late to tell her how you feel,

When you\'re alone and thinking about her, do you ever feel a gentle breeze kiss you skin or see a beautiful butterfly or little bird at the exact time your thinking about her,
Those times was her letting you know that she is with u always and loves you so much,
She can still hear u Teddy, tell her how u feel, tell her those words left unsaid

Love always Melissa

September 17th, 2023 08:00

Without Words
2781 said:

It\'s a good reminder to say what we need to say, and not like me delay, x.

September 17th, 2023 05:33

Without Words
aDarkerMind said:

that\'s life indeed Teddy;
a most beautiful and sad poem from the heart.
very touching;

September 17th, 2023 05:13

visionary
MendedFences27 said:

A wonderful take on the reading experience. I understood fully what you meant by \"the lines of each page yet to come.\" One can read with this fear and sometimes with happy expectations. Loved this poem. - Phil A.

September 16th, 2023 19:17

visionary
BlessedbyGod said:

Loved this dear Teddy,it\'s true too!!🙃🙃

September 16th, 2023 08:09

visionary
Neville said:


I\'m with you all the way on this one ❤️

September 16th, 2023 03:45

visionary
orchidee said:

You\'ll fear the lines of my pages - cos I\'ll be singing \'em! lol. That\'s scary.

September 16th, 2023 02:02

visionary
jarcher54 said:

As the saying goes, one page at a time! A lovely little ponder.


September 16th, 2023 02:00

Doggy Style
peto said:

Hi Teddy
Want to buy a bag?
It\'s the little things isn\'t it
Great start to the weekend
Walkies replaced by busses

September 15th, 2023 09:57

Doggy Style
BlessedbyGod said:

Hahahaha, I definitely cannot afford Prada so I opted for nada,
I just have a small backpack,
And no dog,
I\'m happy with the simple things

September 15th, 2023 09:18

Doggy Style
L. B. Mek said:

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
you brilliant soul you
thank you for helping with my six pack journey
so funny!
have a blessed weekend, cherished friend
your images are crazy! 😂

September 15th, 2023 06:08

The Death of Love
L. B. Mek said:

\'scars to your beautiful\'
we seldom get timing right
between our heart\'s and eyes
we see, we fantasize
our heart warns, but tries to keep up
then we burn and we learn
that next time
we let our heart, dictate
wait
till we have more than hope
to step on and form our paths
before we approach
or reciprocate
and with our heart\'s guidance
we choose to believe
no regrets!
when we fall for the true thing
because come what may
we know we\'ll grow..
(i\'m sorry for the pain
than inspired these words, my friend
a brave write, love the defiant voice
soar high, dear Poetess
smile BRIGHT
let the world hear you Roar!)

September 15th, 2023 06:05

Violin Strings
L. B. Mek said:

\'erratically\'
simply Brilliant dear Poet
I so relate..
and what an image, that\'s
breathtakingly, heartbreakingly
beautiful

September 15th, 2023 05:58

Doggy Style
Pop64 said:

While this is a thought provoking write, it too is humorous. Love the direction this took. Michael

September 15th, 2023 05:50

An Ode To The Wedding Band
L. B. Mek said:

lol
you and your images
Bulldoze over them all, dear cherished friend
it takes two to fail at marriage
but there\'s always an asshole
hiding behind the other
trying to look good to the world...
Hollywood scenes
while the other is swimming
in reality\'s tears..

September 15th, 2023 05:45

Doctor\'s Orders
L. B. Mek said:

lol
great pic dear Poetess
and yes, it does help
as long
as its us drinking
and not addiction
drowning us...

September 15th, 2023 05:41

An Ode To The Wedding Band
Aktarul Islam said:

You have a good sense of humor. Excellent poem. Keep it up, honorable poet

September 15th, 2023 04:55

Doggy Style
Neville said:


Shh\' it happens and doesn\'t it just .. that\'s one helluva observational poem Teddy .. and by the way, I call my bag Berty .. Neville ❤️


September 15th, 2023 02:43

Doggy Style
Doggerel Dave said:

Prada bag a knock off - look at the stitching....😇!!!

September 15th, 2023 02:25

Doggy Style
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write Teddy, and one of Fido\'s friends there.

September 15th, 2023 01:57

Doggy Style
Aktarul Islam said:

Wow, amazing, you nailed it. Hats off to you, Dear poet.

September 15th, 2023 01:23

Doggy Style
LIZ said:

TEDDY!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 what have you started???? Lord!!! I see those bags...filled with dog shit....everywhere!!! 😆😆

September 15th, 2023 00:23

The Death of Love
sorenbarrett said:

This could be taken literally or figuratively in the sense of a broken heart. Although I don\'t wish either it would be better if it were the second. A hard hitting poem either way.

September 14th, 2023 17:34

The Death of Love
MendedFences27 said:

If you could replace your violin-heart with any other instrument, what would it be? Your poem says you were a violinist. Is or was, that true? Your poem brings to light the plight of many musicians. I\'m sure many have faced the moment where they must choose to change instruments or to stop playing completely. - Phil A.

September 14th, 2023 11:52

The Death of Love
peto said:

I\'m struggling to comment on this
Let\'s just say I\'m glad I can

September 14th, 2023 08:53

The Death of Love
Pop64 said:

The imagery you wrote into this leaves the reader with understanding, sympathy and empathy. A remarkable write with hopes this was past.

September 14th, 2023 05:54



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