Comments received on poems by jaimeleigh



This Is Who I Am...
Dahlia said:

genuine, beautifully expressed
& yes you are blessed, enjoyed through
and through, happy Sunday!
Keep poeming on....
Dahlia

March 27th, 2022 12:35

Shame On Me... {11th August 2021}
L. B. Mek said:

reads like the raw beginnings of a country music, song
or two..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(I like the sporadic internal rhyming
to add a little tempo and a loose flow)

March 22nd, 2022 04:33

To My Rapist...{What You Took From Me...}
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow this was a heavy piece to process. I can\'t even begin to imagine the trauma that will arise from such an experience. I hope your well now! ๐Ÿ’–

February 25th, 2022 11:05

To My Rapist...{What You Took From Me...}
Rozina said:

I really admire your courage to share your story here. Your strength is amazing. Thank you for sharing.

February 24th, 2022 22:11

To My Rapist...{What You Took From Me...}
L. B. Mek said:

wow
more power to you, sing your Truth!
thank you, for choosing to share..
(and however empty these words read
I\'m so sorry for the pain you had to endure
but, I am proud
to see you\'ve not only survived
but found your way to thrive, in life)

February 24th, 2022 06:55

To My Rapist...{What You Took From Me...}
Paul Bell said:

Always think forgiveness is a powerful thing to do, but revenge is more permanent.

February 24th, 2022 05:30

To My Rapist...{What You Took From Me...}
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:

Damn, cant say I\'m an experienced rape victim but I can imagine it through your words alone. Cheers to whoever your with now, and hoping it goes well, for the both of you.

February 24th, 2022 05:21

My Sheet\'n\'Cover... {Brother...}
Rocky Lagou said:

Aww! This was so sweet! Such a lovely poem dedicated to your brother! Good job! ๐Ÿ’–

February 17th, 2022 13:16

Too Soon...
Goldfinch60 said:

May that contentment be forever with you Jaime.

Andy

February 13th, 2022 01:50

Oh Fuck, Oh Fuck, Oh Fuck...
orchidee said:

A bad-hair day?!

February 9th, 2022 03:16

REFLECTION...
L. B. Mek said:

\'It gives me faith in what I see...
Looking at you, looking at me... \'
(what a beautifully worded, dedication
thanks for sharing)

February 4th, 2022 05:00

Sadness... Madness...
L. B. Mek said:

very expressive
and relatable, thanks for sharing

January 28th, 2022 06:11

Sadness... Madness...
orchidee said:

Good write J.

January 28th, 2022 03:05

Words The Most Powerful Drug Of All...
Goldfinch60 said:

They surely are Jaime.

Andy

January 26th, 2022 01:54

THANK YOU...
Goldfinch60 said:

That type of friendship is so very important in our lives.

Andy

January 22nd, 2022 01:57

The Art Of Listening...
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true, I am a listener and have helped so many people just by listening.

Andy

January 16th, 2022 02:07

The Art Of Listening...
FallenAngel1๐Ÿ•Š said:

I\'m sorry ,..what was that you said,...lol๐Ÿ˜‚ Great stuff I really enjoyed it thanks for sharing๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ˜€โœŒ๏ธ๐ŸŒŸ

January 15th, 2022 22:56

The Art Of Listening...
Rozina said:

Absolutely. Some people have the skills to be a good listener - to have empathy, patience, sincerity and be open minded. Thank you for sharing.

January 15th, 2022 22:52

Lost Control... {My Addiction Won...}
Rozina said:

Good for you. Never give up trying.

January 7th, 2022 21:58

My Everything...
Rozina said:

I love this.

December 23rd, 2021 01:10

Mental Struggles...
L. B. Mek said:

very similar in theme
to words
from one of my favourite Poet\'s:
\'Poetic Dan\'
here, on My Poetic Side..
(thanks for sharing
this is such a positively
rejuvenating, read)

December 20th, 2021 05:17

Mental Struggles...
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

We are more than our difficulties and feelings โ€ฆ

December 19th, 2021 17:15

Mental Struggles...
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sorry you struggle with your mental health . I know it isnโ€™t easy . I too can struggle with how I feel

December 19th, 2021 17:14

Low-Blow...
jaimeleigh said:



December 17th, 2021 23:53

Low-Blow...
dusk arising said:

I enjoyed reading this, it has great flow and is easily relateable... I\'m sure i met several who this piece could be intended for.

December 16th, 2021 03:56

My Life... It\'s official!!!
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Iโ€™m sorry if this is true and you are feeling sad in life . Hope things can get better

November 19th, 2021 02:20

More Questions... Than Answers...
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

This is certainly expressive ! So much frustration , loneliness but also wanting to be strong and find the light or as you say the โ€œ rainbow โ€œ

October 3rd, 2021 17:55

Patience... 4th March 2019...
DreamyDumpling said:

I hope it does come true


September 21st, 2021 07:10

NOWHERE...
L. B. Mek said:

\'Its no place to be if your a lost soul like me...\'
sadly, wherever you go in life
there will always be those, who
pathetically, convince themselves
it\'s their life\'s ambition, to antagonise and thwart
your search for independence
your need to prevail over the nihilistic dreary
your want to shed and live your life, free
of other\'s judgement...
but, what you must realise is
if those people, find their joy in life
in trying to keep you down, its because
their using you, to keep their pathetic existence afloat
that\'s how much lower their warped sense of self is..
so no, I won\'t say \'ignore them\' or anything like that
I\'ll just ask you to realise the fact
that their actions are a symbol of their desperation
and jealousy
for you have, what they lack the most
a sense of self
a sense of purpose
an understanding, of the Poetry: in life..
(stay strong, allow yourself
to knock on a few doors
you\'ll never know, what\'s fated - just for you
if, you allow them
to scare you away, from what the universe aligned
with that, you treasure most in your defiantly
pulsating heart!)
thanks for choosing to share

August 26th, 2021 03:50

There\'s No Chance... There\'s No Way...
L. B. Mek said:

good for you!
now, if you can
try and let it all - loose, and face forwards - onwards
to all that life - to live
which still awaits: your new found freedom\'s Hopeful appetite
keep striving, keep believing
maybe even one day, allow yourself to be the one, forgiving
so that you can shed, this weight and free yourself - enough
to find a path, to a place in life
where you can Thrive!

August 20th, 2021 04:34

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