Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Clock\'s Whisper
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains elements of routine daily life that to some become mundane and to others give the structure that provides security and on this treadmill of life we wonder where are we going, where have we been and what is the purpose. A most poignant write
July 17th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains elements of routine daily life that to some become mundane and to others give the structure that provides security and on this treadmill of life we wonder where are we going, where have we been and what is the purpose. A most poignant write
July 17th, 2025 04:46
they came in silence
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem of fear and nightmares now real. Where freedom lies on the ground for years we fought the Nazis then the Communists now we use their tools to build what we call freedom.
July 16th, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem of fear and nightmares now real. Where freedom lies on the ground for years we fought the Nazis then the Communists now we use their tools to build what we call freedom.
July 16th, 2025 08:46
Inked Prayers
sorenbarrett said:
Have no tattoos but this poem speaks volumes of verse etched on skin. A lovely poem Gray and a fave
July 15th, 2025 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
Have no tattoos but this poem speaks volumes of verse etched on skin. A lovely poem Gray and a fave
July 15th, 2025 10:52
Fortunate Isles
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetically worded Gray a romantic and sensual poem a fave
July 14th, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetically worded Gray a romantic and sensual poem a fave
July 14th, 2025 10:05
the dungeon within
sorenbarrett said:
Compartmentalization to hide from oneself what is not acceptable. A deep dive into the psyche. Nicely written Gray
July 13th, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Compartmentalization to hide from oneself what is not acceptable. A deep dive into the psyche. Nicely written Gray
July 13th, 2025 05:13
God is Not a Cosmic Bellboy
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have hit it on the head by stepping on toes. In a world that feels entitled you have pointed out that things do not come that way. A powerful piece that pulls no punches and tells it as it is. A fave Oh by the way that will cost you ten Hail Marys and five Our Fathers.
July 12th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have hit it on the head by stepping on toes. In a world that feels entitled you have pointed out that things do not come that way. A powerful piece that pulls no punches and tells it as it is. A fave Oh by the way that will cost you ten Hail Marys and five Our Fathers.
July 12th, 2025 05:03
the hunger
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this pie of a poem. I wonder who will savor its meaning. There are those that do and those that expect to be taken care of. Those that turn nature in their favor and those that expect entitlement. Nature serves the pie and she is just. A fave Gray
July 11th, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this pie of a poem. I wonder who will savor its meaning. There are those that do and those that expect to be taken care of. Those that turn nature in their favor and those that expect entitlement. Nature serves the pie and she is just. A fave Gray
July 11th, 2025 09:55
Don\'t Jump to Conclusions
sorenbarrett said:
Clearly a plea to wait patiently before forming conclusions. Loved it Gray
July 10th, 2025 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Clearly a plea to wait patiently before forming conclusions. Loved it Gray
July 10th, 2025 14:34
wired for the divine
sorenbarrett said:
(how can the ocean be enough
when thirst roots in the soul )
A great line that conveys so much in so little. Loved the poem.
July 10th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
(how can the ocean be enough
when thirst roots in the soul )
A great line that conveys so much in so little. Loved the poem.
July 10th, 2025 03:53
poems & poets
sorenbarrett said:
Well put Gray a beautiful poem of poems. A fave
July 8th, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Well put Gray a beautiful poem of poems. A fave
July 8th, 2025 12:40
poems & poets
Cheeky Missy said:
If only this delicate beauty, like Atlas bearing the world upon his shoulder, could be posted in all halls of learning to enlighten the ignorant and open the door to pastures fewer know than should. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a wonderful poignancy, thank you for sharing.
July 8th, 2025 11:49
Cheeky Missy said:
If only this delicate beauty, like Atlas bearing the world upon his shoulder, could be posted in all halls of learning to enlighten the ignorant and open the door to pastures fewer know than should. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a wonderful poignancy, thank you for sharing.
July 8th, 2025 11:49
Polar Bear in the Fridge
sorenbarrett said:
When you said bear in the fridge I thought of Klondike bars. A fun read that gives imagery to what is inside and accentuates the cool temperature inside. Nicely done.
July 7th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
When you said bear in the fridge I thought of Klondike bars. A fun read that gives imagery to what is inside and accentuates the cool temperature inside. Nicely done.
July 7th, 2025 12:15
polish the stars
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely fanciful write that in metaphor speaks of many things, the light from the past, the romance of nature, books and poems. A lovely write
July 6th, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely fanciful write that in metaphor speaks of many things, the light from the past, the romance of nature, books and poems. A lovely write
July 6th, 2025 13:23
Ma Ma Zil
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely portrait of a woman in poetry it conveys the picture well. Most lovely
July 5th, 2025 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely portrait of a woman in poetry it conveys the picture well. Most lovely
July 5th, 2025 11:18
the art of the pause
Doggerel Dave said:
By far preferable to incessant input.
Understood completely.
July 4th, 2025 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
By far preferable to incessant input.
Understood completely.
July 4th, 2025 19:38
the art of the pause
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, silence is so often under used and percieved to be a bad thing, used correctly it has so much to offer , enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 16:31
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, silence is so often under used and percieved to be a bad thing, used correctly it has so much to offer , enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 16:31
the art of the pause
sorenbarrett said:
The hole in the pot, the space between the spokes what gives meaning. Lovely
July 4th, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
The hole in the pot, the space between the spokes what gives meaning. Lovely
July 4th, 2025 16:18
The Ironing Board
sorenbarrett said:
My mother had the same board as did my wife and those smells and memories are ironed into my memory as well. What a nice poem of nostalgia and pressed feelings of the past long stored.
July 3rd, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
My mother had the same board as did my wife and those smells and memories are ironed into my memory as well. What a nice poem of nostalgia and pressed feelings of the past long stored.
July 3rd, 2025 16:06
dark matter
Doggerel Dave said:
I have this totally off the wall suspicion that dark matter is merely the hidden element in an equation by an astronomer/mathematician which doesn\'t work.
Liked the unsatisfied questions.
July 2nd, 2025 17:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I have this totally off the wall suspicion that dark matter is merely the hidden element in an equation by an astronomer/mathematician which doesn\'t work.
Liked the unsatisfied questions.
July 2nd, 2025 17:18
dark matter
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write asking all the questions of the unknown, probably if Truth be told we fear it, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 14:04
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write asking all the questions of the unknown, probably if Truth be told we fear it, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 14:04
dark matter
sorenbarrett said:
Deep questions about the unknown, unseen, not heard, touched, tasted or smelled A dark question.
July 2nd, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Deep questions about the unknown, unseen, not heard, touched, tasted or smelled A dark question.
July 2nd, 2025 13:37
the art of digging
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write although we are all trying to build our own way in this world, we owe a debt to those who laboured before us and laid the foundations for us to build upon, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 13:59
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write although we are all trying to build our own way in this world, we owe a debt to those who laboured before us and laid the foundations for us to build upon, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 13:59
the art of digging
sorenbarrett said:
We are all architects building our own way in this world. A most interesting set of metaphors. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
We are all architects building our own way in this world. A most interesting set of metaphors. Lovely
July 1st, 2025 13:19
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