Comments received on poems by gray0328
Ancient Whispers in the Soil
sorenbarrett said:
History in fragments, untold stories told in pieces. What we all come to in the end and what will be read of us? Very nicely worded and phrased this poem feels like one of those shards dug up to reveal its story.
December 15th, 2024 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
History in fragments, untold stories told in pieces. What we all come to in the end and what will be read of us? Very nicely worded and phrased this poem feels like one of those shards dug up to reveal its story.
December 15th, 2024 06:54
Ancient Whispers in the Soil
2781 said:
I hate to think what will be dug up in another thousand or two years.
December 15th, 2024 06:21
2781 said:
I hate to think what will be dug up in another thousand or two years.
December 15th, 2024 06:21
Do You Believe in Angels?
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful sonnet. Much appreciated by this reader. Lovely poetic expression.
December 14th, 2024 13:37
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful sonnet. Much appreciated by this reader. Lovely poetic expression.
December 14th, 2024 13:37
Do You Believe in Angels?
sorenbarrett said:
(In silent rooms where moonlight lifts the dust,)(And time corrodes the silver frames of trust?)(And daylight drains the midnight’s whispered sin?) Three incredible lines. A most lovely poem my friend
December 14th, 2024 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
(In silent rooms where moonlight lifts the dust,)(And time corrodes the silver frames of trust?)(And daylight drains the midnight’s whispered sin?) Three incredible lines. A most lovely poem my friend
December 14th, 2024 07:51
The Vertigo of Eternity
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful weather, talking of a woman or the universe, nature or person the words dive deep into the depths of feelings. Very nicely done.
December 13th, 2024 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful weather, talking of a woman or the universe, nature or person the words dive deep into the depths of feelings. Very nicely done.
December 13th, 2024 14:59
Our Lady of Guadalupe
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Bone hard prayers and tones of motherly softness.\" Love it!
December 12th, 2024 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Bone hard prayers and tones of motherly softness.\" Love it!
December 12th, 2024 18:41
Our Lady of Guadalupe
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and poignant the clash of cultures and beliefs. Well penned with splendid images a metaphor as well
December 12th, 2024 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and poignant the clash of cultures and beliefs. Well penned with splendid images a metaphor as well
December 12th, 2024 13:26
The Burden of Pride
sorenbarrett said:
We often place constraints upon ourselves that nature or God does not. This poem reaches to the depths of what humans do to themselves. Very nicely said.
December 11th, 2024 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
We often place constraints upon ourselves that nature or God does not. This poem reaches to the depths of what humans do to themselves. Very nicely said.
December 11th, 2024 15:56
Eclipsing Shadows
Poetic Licence said:
There is a lot to think about reading this very enjoyable read
December 10th, 2024 13:49
Poetic Licence said:
There is a lot to think about reading this very enjoyable read
December 10th, 2024 13:49
Eclipsing Shadows
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. I see acceptance in these lines. Very nicely composed stanzas.
December 10th, 2024 13:10
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. I see acceptance in these lines. Very nicely composed stanzas.
December 10th, 2024 13:10
Eclipsing Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of unity in all its forms. Nicely written with some unique views of how unity can be seen.
December 10th, 2024 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of unity in all its forms. Nicely written with some unique views of how unity can be seen.
December 10th, 2024 13:05
Immaculate Grace
sorenbarrett said:
Mary symbol of purity, love, strength is represented in other religions as well. Virgin birth is frequent in mythology as is the idea of a demigod born of god and human. This was a beautiful tribute to all these elements encapsulated in a biblical figure. Very nicely worded in poetic form it rings out
December 9th, 2024 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Mary symbol of purity, love, strength is represented in other religions as well. Virgin birth is frequent in mythology as is the idea of a demigod born of god and human. This was a beautiful tribute to all these elements encapsulated in a biblical figure. Very nicely worded in poetic form it rings out
December 9th, 2024 15:23
Immaculate Grace
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written and touching poem, very enjoyable read
December 9th, 2024 11:45
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written and touching poem, very enjoyable read
December 9th, 2024 11:45
The Lonely Reflex by the Park
rin said:
lost yet not alone
I find these words very impressive and meaningful. There are many other impressive words, but it is impossible to describe them in one word, so I have chosen only one.
December 7th, 2024 10:30
rin said:
lost yet not alone
I find these words very impressive and meaningful. There are many other impressive words, but it is impossible to describe them in one word, so I have chosen only one.
December 7th, 2024 10:30
The Promise of Happiness
sorenbarrett said:
Promises depend upon who makes them. It is like truth. It depends upon how you interpret it most interesting poem. It gave me thought.
December 4th, 2024 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
Promises depend upon who makes them. It is like truth. It depends upon how you interpret it most interesting poem. It gave me thought.
December 4th, 2024 18:48
Clue: The Whodunit Quest
Cassie58 said:
This poem brings out the detective in me. It also brings me very happy memories of family games and get togethers. Loved the character names in Clue. Thanks for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 03:05
Cassie58 said:
This poem brings out the detective in me. It also brings me very happy memories of family games and get togethers. Loved the character names in Clue. Thanks for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 03:05
The Pleasure of Righteous Anger
Mutley Ravishes said:
Bullseye! And wanting to inflict pain on others to \"get them back\" for \"causing\" \"our\" pain!
December 3rd, 2024 18:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
Bullseye! And wanting to inflict pain on others to \"get them back\" for \"causing\" \"our\" pain!
December 3rd, 2024 18:10
Clue: The Whodunit Quest
Poetic Licence said:
A clever piece of writing, i really enjoyed it
December 3rd, 2024 17:50
Poetic Licence said:
A clever piece of writing, i really enjoyed it
December 3rd, 2024 17:50
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