Comments received on poems by gray0328
the invention of hell
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message sent clearly. Well said
October 8th, 2024 20:36
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message sent clearly. Well said
October 8th, 2024 20:36
What You Find in the Mud
Cheeky Missy said:
Perhaps, yet I think it is more visible in the hands of sweet motions, like my father\'s crafting espressos or my mother\'s teaching my younger siblings, like the baby fingers picking flowers for mama, and the like. Excellently rendered with lovely details and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2024 08:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Perhaps, yet I think it is more visible in the hands of sweet motions, like my father\'s crafting espressos or my mother\'s teaching my younger siblings, like the baby fingers picking flowers for mama, and the like. Excellently rendered with lovely details and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2024 08:57
The Old Thespian \'s Gift
Seek said:
A caustic reminder of shedding masks before they become an integral part of us - false and enduring. The rendering is as beautiful as it is powerful. Thank you.
October 4th, 2024 12:14
Seek said:
A caustic reminder of shedding masks before they become an integral part of us - false and enduring. The rendering is as beautiful as it is powerful. Thank you.
October 4th, 2024 12:14
The Excuse and the Escape
Lorenz said:
Sometimes there are flashes of poetic research on this site .
September 29th, 2024 05:54
Lorenz said:
Sometimes there are flashes of poetic research on this site .
September 29th, 2024 05:54
For the Boss at Seventy-Five
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, if my mind were less bogged down or me less ignorant, I might know better whom you\'ve dedicated this so beautiful to, rendered with a subtly striking poignancy and a delicious abundance of details, imagery to make the soul swoon, and a tenderness to woo the same to sleep. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it.
September 28th, 2024 14:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, if my mind were less bogged down or me less ignorant, I might know better whom you\'ve dedicated this so beautiful to, rendered with a subtly striking poignancy and a delicious abundance of details, imagery to make the soul swoon, and a tenderness to woo the same to sleep. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it.
September 28th, 2024 14:29
What\'s in My Kitchen
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and rather charming at that, rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting sense of poignancy which lingers after the close. I like it very much. Thank you for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and rather charming at that, rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting sense of poignancy which lingers after the close. I like it very much. Thank you for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:28
Otis and His Chessboard
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! Cull a low whistle in concluding. My la. What a breathtaking beauty this is, drawing me into its folds to nestle in its embrace whilst I marvel. Fond of taking too long on my moves in chess, apparently, the metaphor grandly rendered to effect with details to bring in the kill, I dearly love this. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 11:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! Cull a low whistle in concluding. My la. What a breathtaking beauty this is, drawing me into its folds to nestle in its embrace whilst I marvel. Fond of taking too long on my moves in chess, apparently, the metaphor grandly rendered to effect with details to bring in the kill, I dearly love this. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 11:27
If You Were Me
Parisab said:
Important ideas and mighty wisdom… Glad that you aren’t silent, gray…
September 23rd, 2024 01:10
Parisab said:
Important ideas and mighty wisdom… Glad that you aren’t silent, gray…
September 23rd, 2024 01:10
The Breath That Fills My Sails
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed the quatrains set in AAAA BBBB format with great word choice and the consistent image of the sea and sailing across it. The metaphor was just below the surface and its current pulled me to the destination
September 22nd, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed the quatrains set in AAAA BBBB format with great word choice and the consistent image of the sea and sailing across it. The metaphor was just below the surface and its current pulled me to the destination
September 22nd, 2024 05:55
If You Were Me
sorenbarrett said:
More wisdom given in this poem replete with greatlines. Well done
September 21st, 2024 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
More wisdom given in this poem replete with greatlines. Well done
September 21st, 2024 05:30
The Riven Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Not religious but that does not prevent the admiration of fine art. From the first lines I was enraptured with the classic style ofthis poem and how it rolled out of the mouth like one\'s own tongue. Beautifully stated a wonderful message reminding me of Willis \" For as love\'s wild prayer disolved in air her woman\'s heart gave way!. But the sin forgiven by Christ in heaven By man is cursed alway!\"
September 21st, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
Not religious but that does not prevent the admiration of fine art. From the first lines I was enraptured with the classic style ofthis poem and how it rolled out of the mouth like one\'s own tongue. Beautifully stated a wonderful message reminding me of Willis \" For as love\'s wild prayer disolved in air her woman\'s heart gave way!. But the sin forgiven by Christ in heaven By man is cursed alway!\"
September 21st, 2024 05:11
Faith In the Greater Design
sorenbarrett said:
Some would see this as applying to God I see it as applying to the force of nature itself and love the power you have put in these words and the view of unity in all. Nicely written
September 16th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Some would see this as applying to God I see it as applying to the force of nature itself and love the power you have put in these words and the view of unity in all. Nicely written
September 16th, 2024 07:03
Punctuation At Happy Hour
Cassie58 said:
I guess the period spoilt the evening. Putting an end to the fun. A most entertaining write and clever with it too. Happy Friday.
September 13th, 2024 09:13
Cassie58 said:
I guess the period spoilt the evening. Putting an end to the fun. A most entertaining write and clever with it too. Happy Friday.
September 13th, 2024 09:13
Ozzie Enters My Chest
sorenbarrett said:
Your words bring the feelings and transport one to the very spot. Nicely done
September 12th, 2024 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Your words bring the feelings and transport one to the very spot. Nicely done
September 12th, 2024 05:31
Semaphore of Life
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent. You\'d think that\'d suffice in this society where fewer know the English language yet somehow the comprehension still seems elusive.
September 11th, 2024 13:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent. You\'d think that\'d suffice in this society where fewer know the English language yet somehow the comprehension still seems elusive.
September 11th, 2024 13:40
Hurricane Francine Comes Ashore
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! I never knew a herricane could be rendered superbly and in such fashion as this beauty! Wow! Impressively rendered to effect with such details as effectively illustrate to perfection the idea. Awesome! I love it! Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 11:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! I never knew a herricane could be rendered superbly and in such fashion as this beauty! Wow! Impressively rendered to effect with such details as effectively illustrate to perfection the idea. Awesome! I love it! Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 11:22
Semaphore of Life
sorenbarrett said:
So many nonverbal signs to follow in life. Nicely said
September 10th, 2024 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
So many nonverbal signs to follow in life. Nicely said
September 10th, 2024 13:21
The Return of Roller Skates
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia for many in this poem. When I was a kid there were no colors all skates were just plain metal. Guess that tells you my age.A fun read
September 9th, 2024 15:16
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia for many in this poem. When I was a kid there were no colors all skates were just plain metal. Guess that tells you my age.A fun read
September 9th, 2024 15:16
The Shape of Survival
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and inspiring, reminding the reader of what we prefer not to mention, yet know too keenly well.
September 8th, 2024 17:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and inspiring, reminding the reader of what we prefer not to mention, yet know too keenly well.
September 8th, 2024 17:25
The Joy of Losing Me
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some of the lines are too good for prosaic appreciation
\"Love isn’t a thing to be captured
But a river that flows through all
Achievement is not a mountain
But the air I breathe with ease
Perfection is not a mirror
But the joy of being cracked \" - almost takes us into the relam of philosophy. Loved it very much
September 7th, 2024 11:00
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some of the lines are too good for prosaic appreciation
\"Love isn’t a thing to be captured
But a river that flows through all
Achievement is not a mountain
But the air I breathe with ease
Perfection is not a mirror
But the joy of being cracked \" - almost takes us into the relam of philosophy. Loved it very much
September 7th, 2024 11:00
« Return to the profile of gray0328
