Comments received on poems by gray0328
B A T H
Olive Anderson said:
You captured the essence of a human so well.... I\'m curious about the title.. This will stick with me for a long time.
January 23rd, 2025 02:10
Olive Anderson said:
You captured the essence of a human so well.... I\'m curious about the title.. This will stick with me for a long time.
January 23rd, 2025 02:10
B A T H
sorenbarrett said:
Rich with images it speaks in metaphor giving good advice. Very nice
January 22nd, 2025 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
Rich with images it speaks in metaphor giving good advice. Very nice
January 22nd, 2025 20:51
The Age of the Blissfully Ignorant
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ignorance, the parent
Of aversion and craving
A whole lot of time wasting!
Great write.
January 21st, 2025 18:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ignorance, the parent
Of aversion and craving
A whole lot of time wasting!
Great write.
January 21st, 2025 18:38
The Age of the Blissfully Ignorant
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines in this poem and unfortunatly all too true.
January 21st, 2025 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines in this poem and unfortunatly all too true.
January 21st, 2025 18:07
A Bartender\'s Gift
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines and metaphors in this poem of spilt drunken swill a deeper metaphor of communication of a meaningless existence.
January 20th, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Many great lines and metaphors in this poem of spilt drunken swill a deeper metaphor of communication of a meaningless existence.
January 20th, 2025 05:57
Santa Ana
Cassie58 said:
Very atmospheric. The wind can be so menacing and destructive. I enjoyed the imagery you created here. You also brought sound to my ears. The silence was shattered. Baton down the hatches. A lively piece.
January 19th, 2025 08:42
Cassie58 said:
Very atmospheric. The wind can be so menacing and destructive. I enjoyed the imagery you created here. You also brought sound to my ears. The silence was shattered. Baton down the hatches. A lively piece.
January 19th, 2025 08:42
You Can\'t Make an Omelette Without Breaking Some Eggs
arqios said:
And sometimes we spill some as well. Such a pleasant process poem, if you could call it that. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 19th, 2025 02:56
arqios said:
And sometimes we spill some as well. Such a pleasant process poem, if you could call it that. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 19th, 2025 02:56
You Can\'t Make an Omelette Without Breaking Some Eggs
isa kemmy said:
uuh i love it just how its brought out i like the poet style
January 18th, 2025 13:01
isa kemmy said:
uuh i love it just how its brought out i like the poet style
January 18th, 2025 13:01
You Can\'t Make an Omelette Without Breaking Some Eggs
Cheeky Missy said:
To think I crazily craft these daily, excepting Sundays. No salt whatsoever since my late father said to not salt scrambled eggs and I carried it over to omelets. Basil and of late mozzerella with diced onion, always diced onion. And what I dearly love is your perspective. Gorgeously rendered with marvelous imagery and a gripping, haunting poignancy. I love it! Thank you for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 12:41
Cheeky Missy said:
To think I crazily craft these daily, excepting Sundays. No salt whatsoever since my late father said to not salt scrambled eggs and I carried it over to omelets. Basil and of late mozzerella with diced onion, always diced onion. And what I dearly love is your perspective. Gorgeously rendered with marvelous imagery and a gripping, haunting poignancy. I love it! Thank you for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 12:41
When All Else Fails
sorenbarrett said:
It used to be that we could fix things that broke or install things but technology has arrived at the point that it either comes assembled and ready to use or if it breaks throw it away and buy a new one. And so it is in relationships as well
January 17th, 2025 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
It used to be that we could fix things that broke or install things but technology has arrived at the point that it either comes assembled and ready to use or if it breaks throw it away and buy a new one. And so it is in relationships as well
January 17th, 2025 13:04
Do You Believe in Magic?
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of good lines in thes poem. \" the stale smell of last night\'s choices.\" Very nicely written.
January 15th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of good lines in thes poem. \" the stale smell of last night\'s choices.\" Very nicely written.
January 15th, 2025 13:54
The Clowns of the Evening News
sorenbarrett said:
Scam and spam, take the ignorants money while you can. Fake news social media screws they all give me the blues. Great write what can you believe?
January 14th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Scam and spam, take the ignorants money while you can. Fake news social media screws they all give me the blues. Great write what can you believe?
January 14th, 2025 13:34
Get Out of Dodge
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this is deeper than the story. There is a time to leave and give up on all things. Very nice
January 13th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this is deeper than the story. There is a time to leave and give up on all things. Very nice
January 13th, 2025 15:44
The Gods in Disguise
sorenbarrett said:
Each of us our own god so why not each a god to be honored whether the drunk, the begger, the homeless or the powerful all should be treated with respect and kindness. Lovely
January 11th, 2025 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
Each of us our own god so why not each a god to be honored whether the drunk, the begger, the homeless or the powerful all should be treated with respect and kindness. Lovely
January 11th, 2025 14:03
Even An Angel Takes Her Cigarette Breaks
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written poem, which i really enjoyed reading
January 9th, 2025 18:54
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written poem, which i really enjoyed reading
January 9th, 2025 18:54
Even An Angel Takes Her Cigarette Breaks
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery.
January 9th, 2025 18:14
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful imagery.
January 9th, 2025 18:14
Even An Angel Takes Her Cigarette Breaks
sorenbarrett said:
Up in smoke. The breath of life also the dying breath a most sensuous poem all sealed with a coffin nail. Lovely Gray
January 9th, 2025 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
Up in smoke. The breath of life also the dying breath a most sensuous poem all sealed with a coffin nail. Lovely Gray
January 9th, 2025 14:54
The Leviathan of Leisure
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you heard the Bill Burr\'s take on cruise ships at a show in Nashville?! (Bill gets a little \"violent\").
Great write.
January 8th, 2025 18:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you heard the Bill Burr\'s take on cruise ships at a show in Nashville?! (Bill gets a little \"violent\").
Great write.
January 8th, 2025 18:33
The Leviathan of Leisure
sorenbarrett said:
The hights of luxury dipped in debauchery. Technology for the wealthy devoted to pleasure.
January 8th, 2025 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
The hights of luxury dipped in debauchery. Technology for the wealthy devoted to pleasure.
January 8th, 2025 14:01
Riveted Moments
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable and concise history and dedication to the history of jeans, i enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 17:24
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable and concise history and dedication to the history of jeans, i enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 17:24
Nocturnal Awareness
sorenbarrett said:
Both a literal picture of beauty painted in wonderful images as well as a metaphor for a new begining leaving the shadows and darkness behind. Beautiful
January 6th, 2025 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Both a literal picture of beauty painted in wonderful images as well as a metaphor for a new begining leaving the shadows and darkness behind. Beautiful
January 6th, 2025 05:35
The Flight Home
sorenbarrett said:
Traveling with children always an adventure. A most identifiable read that brings back memories some good and others not so much so.
January 5th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Traveling with children always an adventure. A most identifiable read that brings back memories some good and others not so much so.
January 5th, 2025 05:44
One Butterfly or the World
Poetic Licence said:
A meaningful message that everything is worth saving and everyone should have a chance, enjoyed the read
January 4th, 2025 12:33
Poetic Licence said:
A meaningful message that everything is worth saving and everyone should have a chance, enjoyed the read
January 4th, 2025 12:33
One Butterfly or the World
Cassie58 said:
Thank you for saving the butterfly. For me they represent a visit from the spirit world. I would have done the same and felt good about it. Lovely and meaningful too.
January 4th, 2025 11:58
Cassie58 said:
Thank you for saving the butterfly. For me they represent a visit from the spirit world. I would have done the same and felt good about it. Lovely and meaningful too.
January 4th, 2025 11:58
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