Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Champion of Coney Island
2781 said:
It must be one of the most obscene sports
August 5th, 2024 06:02
2781 said:
It must be one of the most obscene sports
August 5th, 2024 06:02
Breaking Bad Habits
sorenbarrett said:
Modern man\'s prayer. To achieve it one must return to the past. Destroy technology and modern society. Urges I have felt and only temporarily been able to overcome. Nicely written
August 4th, 2024 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Modern man\'s prayer. To achieve it one must return to the past. Destroy technology and modern society. Urges I have felt and only temporarily been able to overcome. Nicely written
August 4th, 2024 06:19
Music To Lift the Spirits
sorenbarrett said:
This was music to the ears. I love music of all types but particularly the blues. I could hear it play with this piece so nicely written.
August 3rd, 2024 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
This was music to the ears. I love music of all types but particularly the blues. I could hear it play with this piece so nicely written.
August 3rd, 2024 11:44
Forgiveness On Layaway
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded this poem has some great images and the meaning is intriguing.
August 2nd, 2024 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded this poem has some great images and the meaning is intriguing.
August 2nd, 2024 16:02
Dance of Ambiguity
sorenbarrett said:
A enlightened view of sexuality and in fact any differences that we hold as human beings or even other species. Open minded and refreshing to hear. Lovely words and great metaphors as well.
August 1st, 2024 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
A enlightened view of sexuality and in fact any differences that we hold as human beings or even other species. Open minded and refreshing to hear. Lovely words and great metaphors as well.
August 1st, 2024 07:44
Returning the Key
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren, I appreciate your feedback and it was inspired by an older poem.
July 31st, 2024 12:47
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren, I appreciate your feedback and it was inspired by an older poem.
July 31st, 2024 12:47
Returning the Key
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing and well rhymed this poem has an old flavor to it but a modern message. Nicely done
July 31st, 2024 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing and well rhymed this poem has an old flavor to it but a modern message. Nicely done
July 31st, 2024 12:05
The Biggest Lie
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here with a view of life as difficult at best and impossible at worst. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:36
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here with a view of life as difficult at best and impossible at worst. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:36
Cauliflower Ears
sorenbarrett said:
A story of badges earned in life and cleverly etched in flesh as well as word. Beautifully crafted this is a wonderful piece of art
July 29th, 2024 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
A story of badges earned in life and cleverly etched in flesh as well as word. Beautifully crafted this is a wonderful piece of art
July 29th, 2024 13:07
Uteruses Stretch
sorenbarrett said:
Well described in verse the physical process of conception and birth. Well done.
July 27th, 2024 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
Well described in verse the physical process of conception and birth. Well done.
July 27th, 2024 20:12
Salubrious Retreat
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the imagery and especially the line \"where shadows sleep\" very quieting and peaceful. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the imagery and especially the line \"where shadows sleep\" very quieting and peaceful. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 12:46
Whispers of Learning
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in tribute to a holy place, the library of wisdom. Lovely
July 24th, 2024 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in tribute to a holy place, the library of wisdom. Lovely
July 24th, 2024 07:05
The Great Marriage
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words written in metaphor with meaning deeper than what may appear either on the surface or the layer beneath.
July 22nd, 2024 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words written in metaphor with meaning deeper than what may appear either on the surface or the layer beneath.
July 22nd, 2024 06:07
Urban Love
Parisab said:
Love’s brief glow in the electric night.
Great end line!
July 21st, 2024 12:11
Parisab said:
Love’s brief glow in the electric night.
Great end line!
July 21st, 2024 12:11
Winter Vigil
Parisab said:
You kept the entire rhythm as “slow and deliberate” I really like that it fits the theme of your poem…
July 16th, 2024 20:27
Parisab said:
You kept the entire rhythm as “slow and deliberate” I really like that it fits the theme of your poem…
July 16th, 2024 20:27
Winter Vigil
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful sonnet. Lovely winter description and a feeling of peace being attained. Happy Tuesday.
July 16th, 2024 14:02
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful sonnet. Lovely winter description and a feeling of peace being attained. Happy Tuesday.
July 16th, 2024 14:02
The Gift of Absence
Parisab said:
Loving in silence is filled with grace-
I really enjoyed this tender write…
July 7th, 2024 23:46
Parisab said:
Loving in silence is filled with grace-
I really enjoyed this tender write…
July 7th, 2024 23:46
The Gift of Absence
RSM0812 said:
It message is a virtue of truth. I really like it.
July 7th, 2024 15:02
RSM0812 said:
It message is a virtue of truth. I really like it.
July 7th, 2024 15:02
Unyielding
Parisab said:
Great metaphor about how the light came through the dark mirror…Grace is beautiful from all angles…Good read…
July 5th, 2024 11:21
Parisab said:
Great metaphor about how the light came through the dark mirror…Grace is beautiful from all angles…Good read…
July 5th, 2024 11:21
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