Comments received on poems by gray0328
Clue: The Whodunit Quest
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the game well and not just the game but the application of this to life itself. We all form opinions as we go along and sometimes they are true and sometimes not. Very nicely written
December 3rd, 2024 17:04
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the game well and not just the game but the application of this to life itself. We all form opinions as we go along and sometimes they are true and sometimes not. Very nicely written
December 3rd, 2024 17:04
White Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully worded this poem drips with wonderful images and lines.
December 1st, 2024 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully worded this poem drips with wonderful images and lines.
December 1st, 2024 19:55
White Rain
Poetic Licence said:
i like this poem, it stirs the imagination, Thank you
December 1st, 2024 13:28
Poetic Licence said:
i like this poem, it stirs the imagination, Thank you
December 1st, 2024 13:28
Sunlit Waltz
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is there for those that wish to see it. In this poem it is expressed in all its glory and simplicity
November 29th, 2024 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is there for those that wish to see it. In this poem it is expressed in all its glory and simplicity
November 29th, 2024 16:21
Quick Response
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a creepy, kind of surreal feel of a dystopia where barcodes are all that is needed. Very nicely, composed and constructed.
November 27th, 2024 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a creepy, kind of surreal feel of a dystopia where barcodes are all that is needed. Very nicely, composed and constructed.
November 27th, 2024 17:01
Coal Black Night
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about the mystery and darkness of night both in the physical and emotional sense nicely done
November 26th, 2024 18:28
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about the mystery and darkness of night both in the physical and emotional sense nicely done
November 26th, 2024 18:28
Returned If Defective
sorenbarrett said:
There are layers of meaning to this poem, and they extend to all types of relationships in our society. Although this reads has something from the past, it remains in the present even more so. A very strong metaphor here.
November 25th, 2024 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
There are layers of meaning to this poem, and they extend to all types of relationships in our society. Although this reads has something from the past, it remains in the present even more so. A very strong metaphor here.
November 25th, 2024 05:43
Oology Spring
Cassie58 said:
Really nice poetry. I love the natural environment. Time well spent studying our avian friends.
November 22nd, 2024 15:11
Cassie58 said:
Really nice poetry. I love the natural environment. Time well spent studying our avian friends.
November 22nd, 2024 15:11
Oology Spring
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful corner of nature and I also love birds nicely worded, and well done
November 22nd, 2024 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful corner of nature and I also love birds nicely worded, and well done
November 22nd, 2024 12:59
Dust-Covered Corner
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with haunting qualities life climbs from the shadows and emerges out of the dust. What we think we have put away lives on. Very well written
November 21st, 2024 23:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with haunting qualities life climbs from the shadows and emerges out of the dust. What we think we have put away lives on. Very well written
November 21st, 2024 23:02
Dust-Covered Corner
Cassie58 said:
Memories and quite lovely ones brought to life in the dusky light of an old shed. Beautiful poetry and fine description. Much enjoyed.
November 21st, 2024 13:48
Cassie58 said:
Memories and quite lovely ones brought to life in the dusky light of an old shed. Beautiful poetry and fine description. Much enjoyed.
November 21st, 2024 13:48
The Wise Fool
sorenbarrett said:
I Faved this poem for the sake of the last two stanzas. They are brilliant and shine like poetic diamonds.
November 20th, 2024 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
I Faved this poem for the sake of the last two stanzas. They are brilliant and shine like poetic diamonds.
November 20th, 2024 20:14
The Sound of Certainty
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that nowadays we are guided by the slogans and advertising of major dollars. Like sheep, we follow some believe others feel helpless. Most interesting write. Well, done
November 19th, 2024 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that nowadays we are guided by the slogans and advertising of major dollars. Like sheep, we follow some believe others feel helpless. Most interesting write. Well, done
November 19th, 2024 14:08
Miss Mary, Ticket Taker
sorenbarrett said:
A most well described period piece that sets the scene well. Very nicely done
November 17th, 2024 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
A most well described period piece that sets the scene well. Very nicely done
November 17th, 2024 14:31
The Poet\'s Cafe
sorenbarrett said:
If you listen you will hear them whispering. I loved the last stanza
November 16th, 2024 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
If you listen you will hear them whispering. I loved the last stanza
November 16th, 2024 13:25
The Poet\'s Cafe
arqios said:
A very likely scene , been there often, witnessing or enacting the poetic scribbling at various cafés.
November 16th, 2024 07:15
arqios said:
A very likely scene , been there often, witnessing or enacting the poetic scribbling at various cafés.
November 16th, 2024 07:15
Vlad, the Impaler
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunted in a sense. Some great lines in this poem. \"The earth drinks deep from crimson\" I would like to know how much of the view of him was just bad press.
November 15th, 2024 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunted in a sense. Some great lines in this poem. \"The earth drinks deep from crimson\" I would like to know how much of the view of him was just bad press.
November 15th, 2024 15:47
Vlad, the Impaler
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love this. As a fan of both history and Bram Stoker, you had me from Vlad! An excellent write! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 15th, 2024 13:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love this. As a fan of both history and Bram Stoker, you had me from Vlad! An excellent write! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 15th, 2024 13:02
To Cradle Pain
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent sonnet of a most atypical type. Brilliant!! What more is to be said?
November 15th, 2024 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent sonnet of a most atypical type. Brilliant!! What more is to be said?
November 15th, 2024 05:31
Peanut, the Chicken
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the drift of this piece. It settled right in and took me for a ride down an old country road.
November 13th, 2024 21:30
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the drift of this piece. It settled right in and took me for a ride down an old country road.
November 13th, 2024 21:30
Farewell Leaf
gray0328 said:
Thank You Soren, I always appreciate your feedback and
November 12th, 2024 14:43
gray0328 said:
Thank You Soren, I always appreciate your feedback and
November 12th, 2024 14:43
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