Comments received on poems by gray0328
Veil of Esteem
sorenbarrett said:
A very good point seldom addressed but seems logical and self evident that there can not exist love with out respect. Well done
May 16th, 2025 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A very good point seldom addressed but seems logical and self evident that there can not exist love with out respect. Well done
May 16th, 2025 11:11
The Mirror of our Madness
Doggerel Dave said:
Who me? I\'m perfect in every way............................................................ Denial is my only option; too much truth there.
May 15th, 2025 21:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Who me? I\'m perfect in every way............................................................ Denial is my only option; too much truth there.
May 15th, 2025 21:24
The Mirror of our Madness
sorenbarrett said:
A great message of tolerance in this poem Gray and for that a fave
May 15th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
A great message of tolerance in this poem Gray and for that a fave
May 15th, 2025 12:12
The Lamp of Love
sorenbarrett said:
All answers of import lie within. A lovely write
May 14th, 2025 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
All answers of import lie within. A lovely write
May 14th, 2025 11:52
The Webbed Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Gray. No we are not that much different than our ancestors before the fire worshiping its warmth and us before the screen bowed in adoration of its information and entertainment. Nicely done
May 13th, 2025 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Gray. No we are not that much different than our ancestors before the fire worshiping its warmth and us before the screen bowed in adoration of its information and entertainment. Nicely done
May 13th, 2025 12:22
The Pet Rock
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! But I used to dearly cherish those smooth rocks, the odd ones, the strangely coloured ones, etc. No secrets of mine were shared with the dead things, but they were certainly lovely and too charming. That aside, this is a pretty number, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a sweet poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 20:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! But I used to dearly cherish those smooth rocks, the odd ones, the strangely coloured ones, etc. No secrets of mine were shared with the dead things, but they were certainly lovely and too charming. That aside, this is a pretty number, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a sweet poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 20:06
The Pet Rock
MLHnow said:
A lump the size of Hope! I will forever now see the rocks with messages and the small bits of tactile stress reliever stone differently after reading your poem! I do have a few rocks painted with love from my children on a shelf. Perhaps I should take a moment to hold them closer!
May 12th, 2025 12:03
MLHnow said:
A lump the size of Hope! I will forever now see the rocks with messages and the small bits of tactile stress reliever stone differently after reading your poem! I do have a few rocks painted with love from my children on a shelf. Perhaps I should take a moment to hold them closer!
May 12th, 2025 12:03
Motherless Day
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, it\'s my 9th. Ten years ago was my mother\'s last mother\'s day, and I miss her more than ever this year. Gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and a painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, it\'s my 9th. Ten years ago was my mother\'s last mother\'s day, and I miss her more than ever this year. Gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and a painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 11th, 2025 06:10
Motherless Day
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing it cries out. Well written
May 11th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing it cries out. Well written
May 11th, 2025 05:05
The Diet of Approval
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write layered with metaphor, needs more than one read and is worth the extra readings, enjoyed
May 10th, 2025 13:42
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write layered with metaphor, needs more than one read and is worth the extra readings, enjoyed
May 10th, 2025 13:42
The Diet of Approval
Muse of Calliope said:
This made me pause and think deeply for a minute; so many metaphors and similes packed into here. A fave
May 10th, 2025 12:44
Muse of Calliope said:
This made me pause and think deeply for a minute; so many metaphors and similes packed into here. A fave
May 10th, 2025 12:44
The Diet of Approval
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is metaphoric existentialism. A most thought provoking write Gray
May 10th, 2025 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is metaphoric existentialism. A most thought provoking write Gray
May 10th, 2025 12:04
Every Day Sacrememt
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully crafted write, important messages and wisdom within the words, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 13:02
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully crafted write, important messages and wisdom within the words, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 13:02
Every Day Sacrememt
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words cloth wisdom in this poem. Well done Gray
May 9th, 2025 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words cloth wisdom in this poem. Well done Gray
May 9th, 2025 12:39
Blowing in the Wind
sorenbarrett said:
( The answer has always been moving) what a great line and finish to this poem. A lovely write Gray with a wonderful meaning that is subtle but there.
May 8th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
( The answer has always been moving) what a great line and finish to this poem. A lovely write Gray with a wonderful meaning that is subtle but there.
May 8th, 2025 17:24
My Love is a Cartoon Owl
Poetic Licence said:
I know this could be interpreted in other ways, but I like literally as off the owl. A wonderful creature appears full of wisdom, doesn\'t miss a trick, graceful and have a majestic look to them, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 12:36
Poetic Licence said:
I know this could be interpreted in other ways, but I like literally as off the owl. A wonderful creature appears full of wisdom, doesn\'t miss a trick, graceful and have a majestic look to them, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 12:36
My Love is a Cartoon Owl
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful image. (I love owls and often sit on my patio and call them. I have had as many as five screech owls come sit with me on the backs of my chairs and stare at me) A great poem using the image of wisdom, insight, mystery and spiritual connection. A very nice write Gray
May 7th, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful image. (I love owls and often sit on my patio and call them. I have had as many as five screech owls come sit with me on the backs of my chairs and stare at me) A great poem using the image of wisdom, insight, mystery and spiritual connection. A very nice write Gray
May 7th, 2025 11:56
Shudder Spit
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write with many meanings, leaving you to interpret how you wish, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 02:04
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write with many meanings, leaving you to interpret how you wish, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 02:04
Flags Are Always in Demand
Cheeky Missy said:
Why do you make me nearly break down in a flood of tears with this? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, ringing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2025 07:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Why do you make me nearly break down in a flood of tears with this? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, ringing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2025 07:46
Flags Are Always in Demand
Doggerel Dave said:
Flags - patriotism - this one is deep, and I\'m not going to attempt to add to it apart from a fave. Thanks
May 5th, 2025 07:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Flags - patriotism - this one is deep, and I\'m not going to attempt to add to it apart from a fave. Thanks
May 5th, 2025 07:39
Flags Are Always in Demand
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray. The flag a symbol now used as a secondary symbol in this poem. This double layering makes for quite a cake. It is like a second lens double magnifying what lays beneath it. Very nicely done Gray
May 5th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray. The flag a symbol now used as a secondary symbol in this poem. This double layering makes for quite a cake. It is like a second lens double magnifying what lays beneath it. Very nicely done Gray
May 5th, 2025 04:16
Double Exposure
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem Gray with great metaphor of the mirror and splitting. Since the face is not symmetrical I wonder how this affects things in the split. Loved the read
May 4th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem Gray with great metaphor of the mirror and splitting. Since the face is not symmetrical I wonder how this affects things in the split. Loved the read
May 4th, 2025 04:57
Double Exposure
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great read, thanks for sharing
May 4th, 2025 03:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great read, thanks for sharing
May 4th, 2025 03:58
Acceptance
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording in this poem leaves feelings of being on edge. Loved it
May 3rd, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording in this poem leaves feelings of being on edge. Loved it
May 3rd, 2025 13:31
Holiday Adrift
sorenbarrett said:
Adventurous, harrowing, full of great images that cold I have felt many times. Well done Graty
May 2nd, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
Adventurous, harrowing, full of great images that cold I have felt many times. Well done Graty
May 2nd, 2025 09:51
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