Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Day I Learned to Ride
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude! In a twinkling you\'ve hereby dredged from deep burial that day my daddy likewise removed the training wheels off that yellow Schwinn, and oh! How wonderfully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, exquisite poignancy. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 18:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude! In a twinkling you\'ve hereby dredged from deep burial that day my daddy likewise removed the training wheels off that yellow Schwinn, and oh! How wonderfully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, exquisite poignancy. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 18:07
The Day I Learned to Ride
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around a wonderful memory, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around a wonderful memory, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:13
The Day I Learned to Ride
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how I also remember that day. A great write so descriptive and well imaged. This seems a metaphor for many other times in life as well.
March 3rd, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how I also remember that day. A great write so descriptive and well imaged. This seems a metaphor for many other times in life as well.
March 3rd, 2025 05:56
Kitchen Demon
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and great in its neologism well done.
March 2nd, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and great in its neologism well done.
March 2nd, 2025 11:22
punctual predator
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several through the years and each just as demanding as the last. Independent too. A fun and nostalgic read for me.
March 1st, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several through the years and each just as demanding as the last. Independent too. A fun and nostalgic read for me.
March 1st, 2025 14:44
the lessons we swallow
Poetic Licence said:
We decide which way we go, enjoyed the read and the layout of the piece
February 28th, 2025 12:31
Poetic Licence said:
We decide which way we go, enjoyed the read and the layout of the piece
February 28th, 2025 12:31
the lessons we swallow
sorenbarrett said:
There is a positive side to every coin and even the most difficult has another side
February 28th, 2025 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
There is a positive side to every coin and even the most difficult has another side
February 28th, 2025 11:19
Grammar
whats write for me said:
Wow, Gray this is masterful. It tells the story of written word with grace and eloquence and merges it with speech effortlessly.
February 27th, 2025 09:24
whats write for me said:
Wow, Gray this is masterful. It tells the story of written word with grace and eloquence and merges it with speech effortlessly.
February 27th, 2025 09:24
The Heart of the Innocent
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and truth in its simplicity reveals the face of a child. May be a metaphor as well where we are all children with our own potential.
February 27th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and truth in its simplicity reveals the face of a child. May be a metaphor as well where we are all children with our own potential.
February 27th, 2025 05:10
Grammar
Cassie58 said:
I like your thoughts here concerning punctuation and grammar. Visual and nicely expressed. Have a good Thursday.
February 27th, 2025 03:09
Cassie58 said:
I like your thoughts here concerning punctuation and grammar. Visual and nicely expressed. Have a good Thursday.
February 27th, 2025 03:09
The Door Knob
whats write for me said:
Excellent writing Gray. The symbolism, imagery and craft.
February 26th, 2025 17:47
whats write for me said:
Excellent writing Gray. The symbolism, imagery and craft.
February 26th, 2025 17:47
Grammar
sorenbarrett said:
How difficult it must have been before punctuation and even before they separated words. A fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
How difficult it must have been before punctuation and even before they separated words. A fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:22
Moonlight Over the Bayou
whats write for me said:
Paints an erie scene. Would fit right into \"Uncle Tom\'s Cabin\" by Warrant.
February 25th, 2025 13:41
whats write for me said:
Paints an erie scene. Would fit right into \"Uncle Tom\'s Cabin\" by Warrant.
February 25th, 2025 13:41
The Scent of Who You Are
sorenbarrett said:
A sense too little used in life. Used in poetry in regard to flowers but little else. Very nice Gray
February 25th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
A sense too little used in life. Used in poetry in regard to flowers but little else. Very nice Gray
February 25th, 2025 10:48
Moonlight Over the Bayou
sorenbarrett said:
With the scene set so carefully it seems a trap to the reader waiting for it to spring. Beautiful wording here with vivid images painted in the heart of nature. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
With the scene set so carefully it seems a trap to the reader waiting for it to spring. Beautiful wording here with vivid images painted in the heart of nature. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 04:23
The Smile Room
NafisaSB said:
beautifully written - emotions so well expressed
February 24th, 2025 00:22
NafisaSB said:
beautifully written - emotions so well expressed
February 24th, 2025 00:22
The Smile Room
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems are consistently good. They deserve more views. This is another that has so many good lines and metaphor. It sets a mood and is masterfully done.
February 23rd, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems are consistently good. They deserve more views. This is another that has so many good lines and metaphor. It sets a mood and is masterfully done.
February 23rd, 2025 12:57
The Clowns of the Evening News
whats write for me said:
The reality of our modern news cast. Does not matter leaning left or right, the bloat is so wide it covers both sides.
February 22nd, 2025 16:44
whats write for me said:
The reality of our modern news cast. Does not matter leaning left or right, the bloat is so wide it covers both sides.
February 22nd, 2025 16:44
Becoming
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful magnificent words and images painted so well. Metaphor in poetic form so well done. Lovely! Brilliant!
February 22nd, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful magnificent words and images painted so well. Metaphor in poetic form so well done. Lovely! Brilliant!
February 22nd, 2025 06:28
Telling Truth
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a meeting being held at the top of twelve steps. A lovely write.
February 21st, 2025 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a meeting being held at the top of twelve steps. A lovely write.
February 21st, 2025 14:09
Fated Road
Thomas W Case said:
You paint this journey well with your words.
February 20th, 2025 14:32
Thomas W Case said:
You paint this journey well with your words.
February 20th, 2025 14:32
Fated Road
sorenbarrett said:
The idea of fate or destiny is still up for debate and in todays society is taking a back seat. I hate back seat drivers. Fun read my friend
February 20th, 2025 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
The idea of fate or destiny is still up for debate and in todays society is taking a back seat. I hate back seat drivers. Fun read my friend
February 20th, 2025 13:05
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