Comments received on poems by gray0328
Bring Me Alive
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with wonderful flow and meter that takes the reader on a ride and good rhyme enhances the journey
April 17th, 2025 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with wonderful flow and meter that takes the reader on a ride and good rhyme enhances the journey
April 17th, 2025 15:57
The Fragile Geometry of a Tuesday Night on Acid
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice description of taking a trip to here, there, near, far, and nowhere. A great read
April 16th, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice description of taking a trip to here, there, near, far, and nowhere. A great read
April 16th, 2025 11:23
The Reckless Symphony
Cheeky Missy said:
Here in the Chicago area the state police graciously post reminders on the interstate for our benefit, last April waxing poetic. This is a veritable beauty which seems could be posted more widely, if only the general public were not so busily occupied with said phones. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and a delicate poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 00:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Here in the Chicago area the state police graciously post reminders on the interstate for our benefit, last April waxing poetic. This is a veritable beauty which seems could be posted more widely, if only the general public were not so busily occupied with said phones. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and a delicate poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 00:09
The Reckless Symphony
sorenbarrett said:
This applies to all drivers on the road and on the road of life as well. Good advice and great metaphor.
April 15th, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
This applies to all drivers on the road and on the road of life as well. Good advice and great metaphor.
April 15th, 2025 09:06
The Reckless Symphony
2781 said:
I think to much technology is dangerous, and fiddling with it while driving...I am guilty.
April 15th, 2025 08:52
2781 said:
I think to much technology is dangerous, and fiddling with it while driving...I am guilty.
April 15th, 2025 08:52
keep some things to yourself
NafisaSB said:
this is the best advice i have read today
yes- not all listening ears are sympathetic, some just want to take in from th ears, and pass out through the lips
April 15th, 2025 00:02
NafisaSB said:
this is the best advice i have read today
yes- not all listening ears are sympathetic, some just want to take in from th ears, and pass out through the lips
April 15th, 2025 00:02
The Sparrow\'s Blessing
Cheeky Missy said:
One of my six brothers told me such was possible, if only...but guess I just cannot be still, so perfectly still as they need. But they\'ve played with me ever since. Very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a most delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing, Sir.
April 14th, 2025 19:53
Cheeky Missy said:
One of my six brothers told me such was possible, if only...but guess I just cannot be still, so perfectly still as they need. But they\'ve played with me ever since. Very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a most delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing, Sir.
April 14th, 2025 19:53
The Sparrow\'s Blessing
NinjaGirl said:
A sign or messenger from Heaven perhaps. Such a beautiful poem, and your description is unmatched!
April 14th, 2025 11:06
NinjaGirl said:
A sign or messenger from Heaven perhaps. Such a beautiful poem, and your description is unmatched!
April 14th, 2025 11:06
The Sparrow\'s Blessing
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have captured the poem as she the bird in this poem. It is a most beautiful piece that is lovely on its own with such great imagery and great word choice but becomes a splendid metaphor as well. This is a definite fave
April 14th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have captured the poem as she the bird in this poem. It is a most beautiful piece that is lovely on its own with such great imagery and great word choice but becomes a splendid metaphor as well. This is a definite fave
April 14th, 2025 04:34
Music
dimpy said:
indeed...music connects two hearts and also works as a medicine for broken hearts...Life is incomplete without music...
April 13th, 2025 05:25
dimpy said:
indeed...music connects two hearts and also works as a medicine for broken hearts...Life is incomplete without music...
April 13th, 2025 05:25
Music
sorenbarrett said:
From the first beating of the heart in the womb rhythm takes part of one\'s life. Pitches of bird chirps, whistle of the wind, raindrops splashes, the harmony of a running stream crescendo of a waterfall all the universe is made of music from frogs to crickets and cicadas. A most lovely poem
April 13th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
From the first beating of the heart in the womb rhythm takes part of one\'s life. Pitches of bird chirps, whistle of the wind, raindrops splashes, the harmony of a running stream crescendo of a waterfall all the universe is made of music from frogs to crickets and cicadas. A most lovely poem
April 13th, 2025 04:49
the language of hands
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful write in a sense we so seldom use in poetry. A bit of a metaphor as well. Very nice
April 12th, 2025 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful write in a sense we so seldom use in poetry. A bit of a metaphor as well. Very nice
April 12th, 2025 10:32
bite
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I loved the metaphor in this poem and the last stanza was my favorite the last two lines sealed it a fave
April 11th, 2025 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I loved the metaphor in this poem and the last stanza was my favorite the last two lines sealed it a fave
April 11th, 2025 12:43
the weight of \"g\"
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines in this poem \'Gray. Love the thought as well pronunciation has always made me laugh with everyone thinking they have the right one. How about pronouncing the G in gnostic? A fun read
April 10th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines in this poem \'Gray. Love the thought as well pronunciation has always made me laugh with everyone thinking they have the right one. How about pronouncing the G in gnostic? A fun read
April 10th, 2025 04:16
keep some things to yourself
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like a game of poker never reveal your whole hand, keep some back, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 12:14
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like a game of poker never reveal your whole hand, keep some back, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 12:14
keep some things to yourself
sorenbarrett said:
Proper trust to proper individuals not all trust is equal. Very nice Gray
April 9th, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Proper trust to proper individuals not all trust is equal. Very nice Gray
April 9th, 2025 11:43
the way You love me
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful line that love is to be given as water is freely without the expectation of return. Lovely. A wonderful poem
April 8th, 2025 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful line that love is to be given as water is freely without the expectation of return. Lovely. A wonderful poem
April 8th, 2025 12:50
Booted Grace
sorenbarrett said:
This is an example of how context gives different meaning to a poem. I read this first before the authors note and it felt very different after reading the note. Pieces that were hanging enigmatically now fell into place. Well done Gray
April 6th, 2025 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
This is an example of how context gives different meaning to a poem. I read this first before the authors note and it felt very different after reading the note. Pieces that were hanging enigmatically now fell into place. Well done Gray
April 6th, 2025 07:21
First Time at the Track
sorenbarrett said:
A snapshot picture in poetic words leaves not only visual but olfactory and auditory images as well. Very nicely written
April 5th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
A snapshot picture in poetic words leaves not only visual but olfactory and auditory images as well. Very nicely written
April 5th, 2025 05:12
Jesus, the Icon
sorenbarrett said:
The wording of this poem captured me and I give it a fave
April 4th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
The wording of this poem captured me and I give it a fave
April 4th, 2025 11:25
The Twins Contrite
sorenbarrett said:
Different feelings, different reactions to the same situation but love knows the heart of each and reacts the same. A wonderful write about how differences are loved just the same.
April 3rd, 2025 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
Different feelings, different reactions to the same situation but love knows the heart of each and reacts the same. A wonderful write about how differences are loved just the same.
April 3rd, 2025 10:46
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