Comments received on poems by gray0328
Moonlight Over the Bayou
whats write for me said:
Paints an erie scene. Would fit right into \"Uncle Tom\'s Cabin\" by Warrant.
February 25th, 2025 13:41
whats write for me said:
Paints an erie scene. Would fit right into \"Uncle Tom\'s Cabin\" by Warrant.
February 25th, 2025 13:41
The Scent of Who You Are
sorenbarrett said:
A sense too little used in life. Used in poetry in regard to flowers but little else. Very nice Gray
February 25th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
A sense too little used in life. Used in poetry in regard to flowers but little else. Very nice Gray
February 25th, 2025 10:48
Moonlight Over the Bayou
sorenbarrett said:
With the scene set so carefully it seems a trap to the reader waiting for it to spring. Beautiful wording here with vivid images painted in the heart of nature. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
With the scene set so carefully it seems a trap to the reader waiting for it to spring. Beautiful wording here with vivid images painted in the heart of nature. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 04:23
The Smile Room
NafisaSB said:
beautifully written - emotions so well expressed
February 24th, 2025 00:22
NafisaSB said:
beautifully written - emotions so well expressed
February 24th, 2025 00:22
The Smile Room
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems are consistently good. They deserve more views. This is another that has so many good lines and metaphor. It sets a mood and is masterfully done.
February 23rd, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems are consistently good. They deserve more views. This is another that has so many good lines and metaphor. It sets a mood and is masterfully done.
February 23rd, 2025 12:57
The Clowns of the Evening News
whats write for me said:
The reality of our modern news cast. Does not matter leaning left or right, the bloat is so wide it covers both sides.
February 22nd, 2025 16:44
whats write for me said:
The reality of our modern news cast. Does not matter leaning left or right, the bloat is so wide it covers both sides.
February 22nd, 2025 16:44
Becoming
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful magnificent words and images painted so well. Metaphor in poetic form so well done. Lovely! Brilliant!
February 22nd, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful magnificent words and images painted so well. Metaphor in poetic form so well done. Lovely! Brilliant!
February 22nd, 2025 06:28
Telling Truth
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a meeting being held at the top of twelve steps. A lovely write.
February 21st, 2025 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a meeting being held at the top of twelve steps. A lovely write.
February 21st, 2025 14:09
Fated Road
Thomas W Case said:
You paint this journey well with your words.
February 20th, 2025 14:32
Thomas W Case said:
You paint this journey well with your words.
February 20th, 2025 14:32
Fated Road
sorenbarrett said:
The idea of fate or destiny is still up for debate and in todays society is taking a back seat. I hate back seat drivers. Fun read my friend
February 20th, 2025 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
The idea of fate or destiny is still up for debate and in todays society is taking a back seat. I hate back seat drivers. Fun read my friend
February 20th, 2025 13:05
Unseen Blessing
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice flow to this poem with a message and good rhyme Gray
February 19th, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice flow to this poem with a message and good rhyme Gray
February 19th, 2025 15:23
Quiet Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, sexual, erotic and with very poetic wording
February 18th, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, sexual, erotic and with very poetic wording
February 18th, 2025 14:29
Sloth Superpower
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting animals and a possible metaphor. Nicely done Gray
February 17th, 2025 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting animals and a possible metaphor. Nicely done Gray
February 17th, 2025 06:00
The Quiet Sanctum
Parisab said:
Divine messaging about seeking the silence in faith -great word play
February 16th, 2025 22:41
Parisab said:
Divine messaging about seeking the silence in faith -great word play
February 16th, 2025 22:41
The Quiet Sanctum
sorenbarrett said:
I have felt it and still feel it. A wonderful write of what is needed
February 16th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
I have felt it and still feel it. A wonderful write of what is needed
February 16th, 2025 06:20
Karl is a Drunk
sorenbarrett said:
The way you describe him I think I have met him. A great write with a strong message
February 15th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
The way you describe him I think I have met him. A great write with a strong message
February 15th, 2025 13:31
Karl is a Drunk
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Worded Poem, though I feel for your Friend. I’ve known people like that. Hope he gets better.
February 15th, 2025 13:18
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Worded Poem, though I feel for your Friend. I’ve known people like that. Hope he gets better.
February 15th, 2025 13:18
A Spark at the Beginning
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem masterfully written of the advent of fire to man and what it was to bring to a species. One of two or three most important tools leading to man as he is. It has a haunting quality and feels like it has come out of the mists of the past. Lovely
February 14th, 2025 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem masterfully written of the advent of fire to man and what it was to bring to a species. One of two or three most important tools leading to man as he is. It has a haunting quality and feels like it has come out of the mists of the past. Lovely
February 14th, 2025 13:14
Quit Beating Around the Bush
sorenbarrett said:
We all long for a straight shooter. A very nice write Gray.
February 13th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
We all long for a straight shooter. A very nice write Gray.
February 13th, 2025 08:21
connected
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and seperation in this poem haunting! Too real
February 12th, 2025 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and seperation in this poem haunting! Too real
February 12th, 2025 12:24
Morning at the Beach
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very beautiful, rendered frankly with a seeming sense of classic style though lacking end rhyme or any clear rhythm, trickling excellent imagery down the page unfolding a lesson charmingly tendered with a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 23:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very beautiful, rendered frankly with a seeming sense of classic style though lacking end rhyme or any clear rhythm, trickling excellent imagery down the page unfolding a lesson charmingly tendered with a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 23:52
Salt
Distant View said:
An inventive poem! Salt (both literal and metaphorical) is a required condiment for a life of any note!
February 9th, 2025 16:46
Distant View said:
An inventive poem! Salt (both literal and metaphorical) is a required condiment for a life of any note!
February 9th, 2025 16:46
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