Comments received on poems by gray0328
What if Death Were No End
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful poem written in great form that seems again slightly classical in nature. It asks questions that are most pertinent, especially at this time of year. Mind provoking. It is powerful and engaging loved it
April 20th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful poem written in great form that seems again slightly classical in nature. It asks questions that are most pertinent, especially at this time of year. Mind provoking. It is powerful and engaging loved it
April 20th, 2025 05:22
always on
rrodriguez said:
In a time when people are constantly tethered to their phones, your poem is a real treat. I enjoyed your realism and the way you addressed the disturbance. I read your poem all the way through and truly enjoyed it to the end.
April 19th, 2025 12:35
rrodriguez said:
In a time when people are constantly tethered to their phones, your poem is a real treat. I enjoyed your realism and the way you addressed the disturbance. I read your poem all the way through and truly enjoyed it to the end.
April 19th, 2025 12:35
Goliath
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me and seems somehow majestic. Line after line of beautiful crafted images that most would poets would dream to have but one of in a poem. A masterful work of art with metaphor that drips from. I can not tell you which line is my favorite for each has its own merit. The ending is the cherry on top. I believe that this is your finest work that I have read. I only wish that I had written it.
April 19th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me and seems somehow majestic. Line after line of beautiful crafted images that most would poets would dream to have but one of in a poem. A masterful work of art with metaphor that drips from. I can not tell you which line is my favorite for each has its own merit. The ending is the cherry on top. I believe that this is your finest work that I have read. I only wish that I had written it.
April 19th, 2025 04:24
always on
⋆♱𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱♱⋆ said:
I feel like so many relationships these days are connected by social media and the internet. The feeling of being \"left on read\" or \"left on delivered\" can be crushing to some, though I think it\'s important we take a step back and focus on the smaller things. Your poem perfectly reflects this. Bravo!
April 18th, 2025 12:50
⋆♱𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱♱⋆ said:
I feel like so many relationships these days are connected by social media and the internet. The feeling of being \"left on read\" or \"left on delivered\" can be crushing to some, though I think it\'s important we take a step back and focus on the smaller things. Your poem perfectly reflects this. Bravo!
April 18th, 2025 12:50
always on
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this poem earns a fave. But do not think that that is all the merit it has (the phone buzzes again and again a leash tied to my quiet moments ) a great line that is reflected in the entire first stanza. Well done.
April 18th, 2025 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this poem earns a fave. But do not think that that is all the merit it has (the phone buzzes again and again a leash tied to my quiet moments ) a great line that is reflected in the entire first stanza. Well done.
April 18th, 2025 11:37
Bring Me Alive
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with wonderful flow and meter that takes the reader on a ride and good rhyme enhances the journey
April 17th, 2025 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with wonderful flow and meter that takes the reader on a ride and good rhyme enhances the journey
April 17th, 2025 15:57
The Fragile Geometry of a Tuesday Night on Acid
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice description of taking a trip to here, there, near, far, and nowhere. A great read
April 16th, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice description of taking a trip to here, there, near, far, and nowhere. A great read
April 16th, 2025 11:23
The Reckless Symphony
Cheeky Missy said:
Here in the Chicago area the state police graciously post reminders on the interstate for our benefit, last April waxing poetic. This is a veritable beauty which seems could be posted more widely, if only the general public were not so busily occupied with said phones. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and a delicate poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 00:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Here in the Chicago area the state police graciously post reminders on the interstate for our benefit, last April waxing poetic. This is a veritable beauty which seems could be posted more widely, if only the general public were not so busily occupied with said phones. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and a delicate poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 00:09
The Reckless Symphony
sorenbarrett said:
This applies to all drivers on the road and on the road of life as well. Good advice and great metaphor.
April 15th, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
This applies to all drivers on the road and on the road of life as well. Good advice and great metaphor.
April 15th, 2025 09:06
The Reckless Symphony
2781 said:
I think to much technology is dangerous, and fiddling with it while driving...I am guilty.
April 15th, 2025 08:52
2781 said:
I think to much technology is dangerous, and fiddling with it while driving...I am guilty.
April 15th, 2025 08:52
keep some things to yourself
NafisaSB said:
this is the best advice i have read today
yes- not all listening ears are sympathetic, some just want to take in from th ears, and pass out through the lips
April 15th, 2025 00:02
NafisaSB said:
this is the best advice i have read today
yes- not all listening ears are sympathetic, some just want to take in from th ears, and pass out through the lips
April 15th, 2025 00:02
The Sparrow\'s Blessing
Cheeky Missy said:
One of my six brothers told me such was possible, if only...but guess I just cannot be still, so perfectly still as they need. But they\'ve played with me ever since. Very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a most delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing, Sir.
April 14th, 2025 19:53
Cheeky Missy said:
One of my six brothers told me such was possible, if only...but guess I just cannot be still, so perfectly still as they need. But they\'ve played with me ever since. Very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a most delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing, Sir.
April 14th, 2025 19:53
The Sparrow\'s Blessing
NinjaGirl said:
A sign or messenger from Heaven perhaps. Such a beautiful poem, and your description is unmatched!
April 14th, 2025 11:06
NinjaGirl said:
A sign or messenger from Heaven perhaps. Such a beautiful poem, and your description is unmatched!
April 14th, 2025 11:06
The Sparrow\'s Blessing
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have captured the poem as she the bird in this poem. It is a most beautiful piece that is lovely on its own with such great imagery and great word choice but becomes a splendid metaphor as well. This is a definite fave
April 14th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have captured the poem as she the bird in this poem. It is a most beautiful piece that is lovely on its own with such great imagery and great word choice but becomes a splendid metaphor as well. This is a definite fave
April 14th, 2025 04:34
Music
dimpy said:
indeed...music connects two hearts and also works as a medicine for broken hearts...Life is incomplete without music...
April 13th, 2025 05:25
dimpy said:
indeed...music connects two hearts and also works as a medicine for broken hearts...Life is incomplete without music...
April 13th, 2025 05:25
Music
sorenbarrett said:
From the first beating of the heart in the womb rhythm takes part of one\'s life. Pitches of bird chirps, whistle of the wind, raindrops splashes, the harmony of a running stream crescendo of a waterfall all the universe is made of music from frogs to crickets and cicadas. A most lovely poem
April 13th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
From the first beating of the heart in the womb rhythm takes part of one\'s life. Pitches of bird chirps, whistle of the wind, raindrops splashes, the harmony of a running stream crescendo of a waterfall all the universe is made of music from frogs to crickets and cicadas. A most lovely poem
April 13th, 2025 04:49
the language of hands
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful write in a sense we so seldom use in poetry. A bit of a metaphor as well. Very nice
April 12th, 2025 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful write in a sense we so seldom use in poetry. A bit of a metaphor as well. Very nice
April 12th, 2025 10:32
bite
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I loved the metaphor in this poem and the last stanza was my favorite the last two lines sealed it a fave
April 11th, 2025 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I loved the metaphor in this poem and the last stanza was my favorite the last two lines sealed it a fave
April 11th, 2025 12:43
the weight of \"g\"
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines in this poem \'Gray. Love the thought as well pronunciation has always made me laugh with everyone thinking they have the right one. How about pronouncing the G in gnostic? A fun read
April 10th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines in this poem \'Gray. Love the thought as well pronunciation has always made me laugh with everyone thinking they have the right one. How about pronouncing the G in gnostic? A fun read
April 10th, 2025 04:16
keep some things to yourself
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like a game of poker never reveal your whole hand, keep some back, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 12:14
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like a game of poker never reveal your whole hand, keep some back, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 12:14
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