Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Secret Treasure Trove
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of childhood provides joys and imagination that age erases leaving us looking at a blank ceiling drinking cold coffee. A wonderful write Gray and a fave
October 12th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of childhood provides joys and imagination that age erases leaving us looking at a blank ceiling drinking cold coffee. A wonderful write Gray and a fave
October 12th, 2025 06:19
Reciprocal Mistrust
Poetic Licence said:
That has a sense of isolation from a group who are not prepared to engage with anyone who do not have or follow their beliefs, there minds are closed. Enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 15:07
Poetic Licence said:
That has a sense of isolation from a group who are not prepared to engage with anyone who do not have or follow their beliefs, there minds are closed. Enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 15:07
Reciprocal Mistrust
sorenbarrett said:
Talk about feeling not a part of a group. Here people already have their minds made up and convinced to the point of not hearing or seeing what they don\'t want to believe. Nicely worded there is a deep feeling of alienation in this poem
October 11th, 2025 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Talk about feeling not a part of a group. Here people already have their minds made up and convinced to the point of not hearing or seeing what they don\'t want to believe. Nicely worded there is a deep feeling of alienation in this poem
October 11th, 2025 11:10
Reciprocal Mistrust
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write much enjoyed
October 11th, 2025 10:25
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write much enjoyed
October 11th, 2025 10:25
Suddenly
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines of this poem that enchants me the most the image is perfect (All too soon this moment will rot dry under the sun like old fruit) And how so in so many ways. A fave my friend
October 10th, 2025 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines of this poem that enchants me the most the image is perfect (All too soon this moment will rot dry under the sun like old fruit) And how so in so many ways. A fave my friend
October 10th, 2025 11:00
Echo Chamber
sorenbarrett said:
So many symbols here there is a foreboding feel to this poem. Nicely crafted it speaks in a whispered voice. Loved it and a fave
October 9th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
So many symbols here there is a foreboding feel to this poem. Nicely crafted it speaks in a whispered voice. Loved it and a fave
October 9th, 2025 04:22
Blind Date
sorenbarrett said:
So many differences look for the commonalities. a lovely poem of coming to terms and finally friends. Loved it Gray so well told
October 8th, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
So many differences look for the commonalities. a lovely poem of coming to terms and finally friends. Loved it Gray so well told
October 8th, 2025 10:23
Unexamined Lives
NafisaSB said:
you have raised some issues here that demand a response - but will it come, or will we just keep fooling ourselves
October 8th, 2025 01:00
NafisaSB said:
you have raised some issues here that demand a response - but will it come, or will we just keep fooling ourselves
October 8th, 2025 01:00
Christ\'s Gentle Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what it is to be what one professes but seldom acts upon. Lovely Gray
October 6th, 2025 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what it is to be what one professes but seldom acts upon. Lovely Gray
October 6th, 2025 14:30
Snapchat Hieroglyphics of Connection
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that emotes on a different level another dimension. Technological graphic grief. Well done Gray
October 5th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that emotes on a different level another dimension. Technological graphic grief. Well done Gray
October 5th, 2025 05:09
Unexamined Lives
Paul Bell said:
Yes, welcome to the new world where you\'ll never retire, and the graveyards are full up.
Bound to be some politician who will change it though.
October 4th, 2025 04:16
Paul Bell said:
Yes, welcome to the new world where you\'ll never retire, and the graveyards are full up.
Bound to be some politician who will change it though.
October 4th, 2025 04:16
Unexamined Lives
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A great write much enjoyed
October 4th, 2025 04:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A great write much enjoyed
October 4th, 2025 04:04
Unexamined Lives
sorenbarrett said:
This one was brilliant a Dillon type style to this poem (Bob not Thomas) It has such wonderful metaphoric associations and allegorical allegations. A poem that one has to think about to enjoy fully. A definite fave my friend
October 4th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This one was brilliant a Dillon type style to this poem (Bob not Thomas) It has such wonderful metaphoric associations and allegorical allegations. A poem that one has to think about to enjoy fully. A definite fave my friend
October 4th, 2025 03:50
Ambassadors of Light
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this seems to me a poem of religious proclamation of faith and belief. Well said
October 3rd, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this seems to me a poem of religious proclamation of faith and belief. Well said
October 3rd, 2025 11:43
the residue of living
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of memory and the significance of imperfections as markers of lived experiences. It emphasizes that the remnants of the past, represented by watermarks and smudges, are not to be erased but cherished as evidence of one\'s existence and emotional journey.
October 3rd, 2025 07:03
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of memory and the significance of imperfections as markers of lived experiences. It emphasizes that the remnants of the past, represented by watermarks and smudges, are not to be erased but cherished as evidence of one\'s existence and emotional journey.
October 3rd, 2025 07:03
the residue of living
sorenbarrett said:
There is a preoccupation with cleanliness from antibacterial soaps to cleaning products that remove all stains. Who wants to live in a sterile environment. Have we grown that afraid? Good write
October 2nd, 2025 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
There is a preoccupation with cleanliness from antibacterial soaps to cleaning products that remove all stains. Who wants to live in a sterile environment. Have we grown that afraid? Good write
October 2nd, 2025 12:36
the residue of living
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, enjoyed
October 2nd, 2025 10:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, enjoyed
October 2nd, 2025 10:10
The Measure of Forgiveness
sorenbarrett said:
Know that story but here told in rhyme it is nicely told. Well done Gray
October 1st, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Know that story but here told in rhyme it is nicely told. Well done Gray
October 1st, 2025 11:55
not to offend the imbeciles
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A great write, thoroughly enjoyed
October 1st, 2025 02:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A great write, thoroughly enjoyed
October 1st, 2025 02:41
instant society
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this one hits point after point connecting thoughts. A wonderful write and a fave
September 30th, 2025 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this one hits point after point connecting thoughts. A wonderful write and a fave
September 30th, 2025 19:09
instant society
arqios said:
No there’s a title and a poem that exceeds its expectations! 🕊🙏🏻
September 30th, 2025 18:57
arqios said:
No there’s a title and a poem that exceeds its expectations! 🕊🙏🏻
September 30th, 2025 18:57
not to offend the imbeciles
Doggerel Dave said:
Inclusiveness and conformity soundly thrashed.👍
September 29th, 2025 18:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Inclusiveness and conformity soundly thrashed.👍
September 29th, 2025 18:11
not to offend the imbeciles
sorenbarrett said:
Thinly veiled this poem speaks to me against the political correctness that ignores differences which are a good thing not a bad. Nicely written and a fave
September 29th, 2025 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Thinly veiled this poem speaks to me against the political correctness that ignores differences which are a good thing not a bad. Nicely written and a fave
September 29th, 2025 14:34
The Slow Burn
Doggerel Dave said:
The search for truth and enlightenment can be (is) a hard slog, clearly described there. Felt strengthened by your poetic definition..
September 28th, 2025 18:29
Doggerel Dave said:
The search for truth and enlightenment can be (is) a hard slog, clearly described there. Felt strengthened by your poetic definition..
September 28th, 2025 18:29
The Slow Burn
sorenbarrett said:
Some look for ease and rest in an afterlife, if there is such a place I hope that it is full or those labors that put callus\'s on the hands, strength in the muscles and builds strong bones of determination. A lovely write my friend
September 28th, 2025 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Some look for ease and rest in an afterlife, if there is such a place I hope that it is full or those labors that put callus\'s on the hands, strength in the muscles and builds strong bones of determination. A lovely write my friend
September 28th, 2025 06:10
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