Comments received on poems by gray0328
What You Could Be
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I am not religious but a powerful write my friend
September 8th, 2026 09:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I am not religious but a powerful write my friend
September 8th, 2026 09:52
What You Could Be
sorenbarrett said:
Although not religious this is a most powerful message that all need to take to heart. Lovely wording make this a fave Gray
September 8th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Although not religious this is a most powerful message that all need to take to heart. Lovely wording make this a fave Gray
September 8th, 2026 09:45
A Blueprint For Joy
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge grows and as it does so does doubt the faults in the rock of wisdom laid out in pages some open others closed. Some flutter in the breeze shaking memories and creating a landscape tumultuous and hazardous. Well written my friend
September 7th, 2026 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge grows and as it does so does doubt the faults in the rock of wisdom laid out in pages some open others closed. Some flutter in the breeze shaking memories and creating a landscape tumultuous and hazardous. Well written my friend
September 7th, 2026 14:42
The Wind Remembers
sorenbarrett said:
Unfinished stories how sad that is but death come early for some and lack of courage to others. Well done Gray
September 6th, 2026 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Unfinished stories how sad that is but death come early for some and lack of courage to others. Well done Gray
September 6th, 2026 11:23
Tackle Box
arqios said:
This is very touching and relatable. I have a cousin who is no longer with us that had a much-beloved tackle box. It\'s physical presence, the actions they entail and the memories they pull up are quite potent. Thoroughly moving poem, Gray. 👍🏻🕊️
Always, R
September 6th, 2026 06:59
arqios said:
This is very touching and relatable. I have a cousin who is no longer with us that had a much-beloved tackle box. It\'s physical presence, the actions they entail and the memories they pull up are quite potent. Thoroughly moving poem, Gray. 👍🏻🕊️
Always, R
September 6th, 2026 06:59
The Golden Drum Major
sorenbarrett said:
Here a tribute and sense of pride in a dog one owns. Nicely worded with great images my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Here a tribute and sense of pride in a dog one owns. Nicely worded with great images my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:28
How Do I Love
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely love poem. You have done well what is most difficult taken a love poem and made it not seem trite. Most images are overused and here they fall fresh. Nicely done Gray
September 4th, 2026 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
Such a lovely love poem. You have done well what is most difficult taken a love poem and made it not seem trite. Most images are overused and here they fall fresh. Nicely done Gray
September 4th, 2026 11:36
Items That Never Sell at a Garage Sale
Norman Flagtea said:
True art is never complete, perfect, flawless. Something is missing. The same holds true for life in general. Perfection is dead, imperfection is loveable and humane.
Thanx for your wonderful poem!
September 3rd, 2026 15:01
Norman Flagtea said:
True art is never complete, perfect, flawless. Something is missing. The same holds true for life in general. Perfection is dead, imperfection is loveable and humane.
Thanx for your wonderful poem!
September 3rd, 2026 15:01
Flickering Glow
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful atmosphere is painted in this write, romantic in every respect of the word. A fave Gray
September 3rd, 2026 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful atmosphere is painted in this write, romantic in every respect of the word. A fave Gray
September 3rd, 2026 09:33
Items That Never Sell at a Garage Sale
sorenbarrett said:
So vivid and well painted a metaphor per chance of people as well, misfits forgotten and discarded along the way.
September 2nd, 2026 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
So vivid and well painted a metaphor per chance of people as well, misfits forgotten and discarded along the way.
September 2nd, 2026 11:26
Items That Never Sell at a Garage Sale
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
September 2nd, 2026 11:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
September 2nd, 2026 11:16
Tackle Box
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording and metaphors my friend. There is sadness in the bait box and hope on the line. Watch the bobber he will signal you.
August 31st, 2026 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely wording and metaphors my friend. There is sadness in the bait box and hope on the line. Watch the bobber he will signal you.
August 31st, 2026 12:13
My Father
sorenbarrett said:
My condolences my friend I know that feeling well having lost mine when he was 89.
August 29th, 2026 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
My condolences my friend I know that feeling well having lost mine when he was 89.
August 29th, 2026 11:26
My Father
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
My deepest condolences my friend, I lost my father when he was 47, all these years later not one day passes without thinking of him
August 29th, 2026 10:16
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
My deepest condolences my friend, I lost my father when he was 47, all these years later not one day passes without thinking of him
August 29th, 2026 10:16
Hardened Places
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! A lovely write Gray that captures the essence of forgiveness. A fave my friend
August 28th, 2026 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! A lovely write Gray that captures the essence of forgiveness. A fave my friend
August 28th, 2026 08:18
Not a Dress Rehearsal
Doggerel Dave said:
Getting it all worked out ahead of time? I can relate to that - a habit. I want more spontaneity.
Well stated advice I need........ but just a wee bit of thought before I walk into that meeting?
August 27th, 2026 16:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Getting it all worked out ahead of time? I can relate to that - a habit. I want more spontaneity.
Well stated advice I need........ but just a wee bit of thought before I walk into that meeting?
August 27th, 2026 16:58
Not a Dress Rehearsal
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of staying in the moment and living there not in the past or the future. Well done Gray
August 27th, 2026 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of staying in the moment and living there not in the past or the future. Well done Gray
August 27th, 2026 09:43
They Built a Fort
sorenbarrett said:
This is nostalgic to me. When between the age of ten and fourteen I and my friends built a tree house that became a club house at the field at the end of the street. It was two stories with a deck on the top of the second floor, built of stolen construction material we kept our playboy magazines there as well as other prohibited items. Nicely written Gray
August 26th, 2026 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
This is nostalgic to me. When between the age of ten and fourteen I and my friends built a tree house that became a club house at the field at the end of the street. It was two stories with a deck on the top of the second floor, built of stolen construction material we kept our playboy magazines there as well as other prohibited items. Nicely written Gray
August 26th, 2026 11:27
Two Paths
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Gray we all let such carve our trail but many times turning around we see no trail behind us. A well written piece my friend
August 25th, 2026 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Gray we all let such carve our trail but many times turning around we see no trail behind us. A well written piece my friend
August 25th, 2026 10:45
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