Comments received on poems by gray0328
Elements
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
I fought fire with - fire? No, with water. Chucked a bucket of it over neighbour\'s bonfire. lol.
March 17th, 2024 02:32
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
I fought fire with - fire? No, with water. Chucked a bucket of it over neighbour\'s bonfire. lol.
March 17th, 2024 02:32
Tears
Cassie58 said:
Highly creative.Never thought of looking at the world through the eyes of a fallen tear before. Love that you mention the white cliffs of Dover. Many a tear would have been shed either on departure or return to those shores. For me they represent home. Enjoyed my visit today.
March 10th, 2024 06:52
Cassie58 said:
Highly creative.Never thought of looking at the world through the eyes of a fallen tear before. Love that you mention the white cliffs of Dover. Many a tear would have been shed either on departure or return to those shores. For me they represent home. Enjoyed my visit today.
March 10th, 2024 06:52
Tears
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
You know the dark humour story of someone waving for help in the sea.
When rescued they said \'Why didn\'t you help; I was drowning\'. The reply was \'I thought ya was waving hello to me!\'
March 10th, 2024 03:28
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
You know the dark humour story of someone waving for help in the sea.
When rescued they said \'Why didn\'t you help; I was drowning\'. The reply was \'I thought ya was waving hello to me!\'
March 10th, 2024 03:28
I\'m Leaving You, But Come With Me
Cloie said:
It\'s a poignant reflection on longing, disillusionment, and the inescapable nature of certain connections. Fabulous!
March 3rd, 2024 05:50
Cloie said:
It\'s a poignant reflection on longing, disillusionment, and the inescapable nature of certain connections. Fabulous!
March 3rd, 2024 05:50
The Dark Talent
Cloie said:
Your poem is so captivating! I love how it delves into the idea of courage and talent, painting a vivid picture of midnight\'s mystery and the hidden depths within ourselves. It\'s like a gentle nudge to step into our own light. Amazing work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:40
Cloie said:
Your poem is so captivating! I love how it delves into the idea of courage and talent, painting a vivid picture of midnight\'s mystery and the hidden depths within ourselves. It\'s like a gentle nudge to step into our own light. Amazing work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:40
Heart of the Tree
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly celebrates the act of planting a tree, pulsating with hope, community, and the enduring legacy it brings. It\'s a vibrant ode to stewardship, echoing through time with each leaf\'s whisper and each branch\'s sway.
February 25th, 2024 05:37
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly celebrates the act of planting a tree, pulsating with hope, community, and the enduring legacy it brings. It\'s a vibrant ode to stewardship, echoing through time with each leaf\'s whisper and each branch\'s sway.
February 25th, 2024 05:37
Carrying the Cross
orchidee said:
A fine write gray.
It\'s more than giving up choccie biccies for Lent, we know. Though I suppose that\'s some small cross to bear, if whimsical.
February 23rd, 2024 03:22
orchidee said:
A fine write gray.
It\'s more than giving up choccie biccies for Lent, we know. Though I suppose that\'s some small cross to bear, if whimsical.
February 23rd, 2024 03:22
Sometimes In the Stillness
Kinsey Peterson said:
This is among one of my favourite pieces I have found on this site. Thank you immensely.
February 22nd, 2024 13:46
Kinsey Peterson said:
This is among one of my favourite pieces I have found on this site. Thank you immensely.
February 22nd, 2024 13:46
Marvel At The Riddle
Classicmister said:
\"There is no art to find the mind\'s construction in the face\"
W. Shakespeare
February 19th, 2024 08:17
Classicmister said:
\"There is no art to find the mind\'s construction in the face\"
W. Shakespeare
February 19th, 2024 08:17
Marvel At The Riddle
2781 said:
a man\'s wisdom maketh his face to shine, and the boldness of his face shall be changed.
February 19th, 2024 07:23
2781 said:
a man\'s wisdom maketh his face to shine, and the boldness of his face shall be changed.
February 19th, 2024 07:23
Marvel At The Riddle
Alan R said:
Behold the etched line of worry or wisdom, who knows.... beautiful
February 19th, 2024 07:07
Alan R said:
Behold the etched line of worry or wisdom, who knows.... beautiful
February 19th, 2024 07:07
Love, A Fire
Alan R said:
the beauty of warmth, the necessity of light....
Gorgeous
February 18th, 2024 08:54
Alan R said:
the beauty of warmth, the necessity of light....
Gorgeous
February 18th, 2024 08:54
Don\'t Give Up
orchidee said:
I didn\'t \'give up\' on this poem, but read it to the end!
February 17th, 2024 03:45
orchidee said:
I didn\'t \'give up\' on this poem, but read it to the end!
February 17th, 2024 03:45
Don\'t Give Up
Alan R said:
The tree knows its script by heart, offering up a leaf like a magician
Very beautiful
February 17th, 2024 02:35
Alan R said:
The tree knows its script by heart, offering up a leaf like a magician
Very beautiful
February 17th, 2024 02:35
Morning Bread
John Lee said:
Such a satisfying read. It digests as a psalm to my soul.
February 12th, 2024 19:20
John Lee said:
Such a satisfying read. It digests as a psalm to my soul.
February 12th, 2024 19:20
Crows In The Wind
gray0328 said:
Thank You for sharing your feedback Tom I appreciate it brother
February 9th, 2024 01:01
gray0328 said:
Thank You for sharing your feedback Tom I appreciate it brother
February 9th, 2024 01:01
21 Grams
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the weight of my brain - 21 grams! lol.
February 3rd, 2024 03:02
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the weight of my brain - 21 grams! lol.
February 3rd, 2024 03:02
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