Comments received on poems by gray0328
Miss Mary, Ticket Taker
sorenbarrett said:
A most well described period piece that sets the scene well. Very nicely done
November 17th, 2024 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
A most well described period piece that sets the scene well. Very nicely done
November 17th, 2024 14:31
The Poet\'s Cafe
sorenbarrett said:
If you listen you will hear them whispering. I loved the last stanza
November 16th, 2024 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
If you listen you will hear them whispering. I loved the last stanza
November 16th, 2024 13:25
The Poet\'s Cafe
arqios said:
A very likely scene , been there often, witnessing or enacting the poetic scribbling at various cafés.
November 16th, 2024 07:15
arqios said:
A very likely scene , been there often, witnessing or enacting the poetic scribbling at various cafés.
November 16th, 2024 07:15
Vlad, the Impaler
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunted in a sense. Some great lines in this poem. \"The earth drinks deep from crimson\" I would like to know how much of the view of him was just bad press.
November 15th, 2024 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and haunted in a sense. Some great lines in this poem. \"The earth drinks deep from crimson\" I would like to know how much of the view of him was just bad press.
November 15th, 2024 15:47
Vlad, the Impaler
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love this. As a fan of both history and Bram Stoker, you had me from Vlad! An excellent write! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 15th, 2024 13:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Absolutely love this. As a fan of both history and Bram Stoker, you had me from Vlad! An excellent write! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤
November 15th, 2024 13:02
To Cradle Pain
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent sonnet of a most atypical type. Brilliant!! What more is to be said?
November 15th, 2024 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent sonnet of a most atypical type. Brilliant!! What more is to be said?
November 15th, 2024 05:31
Peanut, the Chicken
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the drift of this piece. It settled right in and took me for a ride down an old country road.
November 13th, 2024 21:30
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the drift of this piece. It settled right in and took me for a ride down an old country road.
November 13th, 2024 21:30
Farewell Leaf
gray0328 said:
Thank You Soren, I always appreciate your feedback and
November 12th, 2024 14:43
gray0328 said:
Thank You Soren, I always appreciate your feedback and
November 12th, 2024 14:43
Farewell Leaf
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor and a point well taken. This poem in its reading leaves a small feeling of sadness. Very nicely worded.
November 12th, 2024 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor and a point well taken. This poem in its reading leaves a small feeling of sadness. Very nicely worded.
November 12th, 2024 14:38
Fire in the Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
This has a very dark tone to it yet it reads in an inspiring way. Very enjoyable read
November 8th, 2024 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
This has a very dark tone to it yet it reads in an inspiring way. Very enjoyable read
November 8th, 2024 12:54
At the Edge of the Lagoon
Dan Williams said:
Phrasing to die for, clear pertinent message. Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:42
Dan Williams said:
Phrasing to die for, clear pertinent message. Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:42
The Strength of a Redwood Tree
sorenbarrett said:
Been there and seen their grandure, A lovely poem of nature
November 7th, 2024 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Been there and seen their grandure, A lovely poem of nature
November 7th, 2024 05:47
At the Edge of the Lagoon
sorenbarrett said:
The painting of a beautiful picture of nature which could be a metaphor as well.
November 6th, 2024 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
The painting of a beautiful picture of nature which could be a metaphor as well.
November 6th, 2024 13:52
Mr. Ball\'s Bouncing Curriculum
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and tribute to one that impressed and taught something that lasts in the lives of others
November 5th, 2024 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and tribute to one that impressed and taught something that lasts in the lives of others
November 5th, 2024 09:59
Renegade Honey Bee
sorenbarrett said:
Story of my past life and in metaphor this as well. Unfortunately such a bee remains homeless and ostricised. A poem of a free spirit
November 4th, 2024 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
Story of my past life and in metaphor this as well. Unfortunately such a bee remains homeless and ostricised. A poem of a free spirit
November 4th, 2024 10:52
Flannel Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully worded tribute to cold weather and the joy some find with it.
November 3rd, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully worded tribute to cold weather and the joy some find with it.
November 3rd, 2024 09:20
Misunderstanding
Doggerel Dave said:
Projection when it occurs in a relationship is pretty hard to unravel. You had the strength to withstand and withdraw.
Good move, rich write.
November 2nd, 2024 18:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Projection when it occurs in a relationship is pretty hard to unravel. You had the strength to withstand and withdraw.
Good move, rich write.
November 2nd, 2024 18:24
Misunderstanding
sorenbarrett said:
Accuizations that are ment to upset are best left alone. A good write of false accuiztion put aside.
November 2nd, 2024 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
Accuizations that are ment to upset are best left alone. A good write of false accuiztion put aside.
November 2nd, 2024 10:25
Woodstock Summer
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory just clicked into place. A pity I\'m forced to return. A rich romantic ride I thoroughly enjoyed.
October 29th, 2024 15:24
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory just clicked into place. A pity I\'m forced to return. A rich romantic ride I thoroughly enjoyed.
October 29th, 2024 15:24
Woodstock Summer
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days. My favorite lines were the last two. A nostalgic read.
October 29th, 2024 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days. My favorite lines were the last two. A nostalgic read.
October 29th, 2024 13:38
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