Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Well
sorenbarrett said:
Built of fragments this poem invites the reader to decipher and assemble meaning from bits and pieces. Nicely composed it leaves clues along the way
August 28th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Built of fragments this poem invites the reader to decipher and assemble meaning from bits and pieces. Nicely composed it leaves clues along the way
August 28th, 2025 04:12
Birth of a Star
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brings to mind the phoenix raising from the ashes, the cycle of regeneration and new life from death a metamorphosis of a type. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brings to mind the phoenix raising from the ashes, the cycle of regeneration and new life from death a metamorphosis of a type. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 12:06
Stubborn as the Earth Beneath Us
sorenbarrett said:
This poem made me think of my old English bull and left me missing him. Well done Gray
August 25th, 2025 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem made me think of my old English bull and left me missing him. Well done Gray
August 25th, 2025 15:58
some people never go crazy
David Hopkins said:
very very real Brother! i can easily relate to about every bit of that .
thanks for sharing it
August 24th, 2025 22:26
David Hopkins said:
very very real Brother! i can easily relate to about every bit of that .
thanks for sharing it
August 24th, 2025 22:26
some people never go crazy
FallingAwake2 said:
wow this is downright an amazing poem...crafted so thoughtfully, and so relatable to me. Gave me comfort. thank you!
August 24th, 2025 16:29
FallingAwake2 said:
wow this is downright an amazing poem...crafted so thoughtfully, and so relatable to me. Gave me comfort. thank you!
August 24th, 2025 16:29
some people never go crazy
Doggerel Dave said:
Very lucky circumstances plus lack of imagination. A great diagnosis of complacency. Thoroughly enjoyed.
August 24th, 2025 16:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Very lucky circumstances plus lack of imagination. A great diagnosis of complacency. Thoroughly enjoyed.
August 24th, 2025 16:13
some people never go crazy
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that speak to me of how some people never take a chance. Nicely done
August 24th, 2025 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that speak to me of how some people never take a chance. Nicely done
August 24th, 2025 16:07
Rearguard of the Pack
sorenbarrett said:
Deep message in this poem set in great images and emotion it sends its message in metaphor to all. A lovely write and a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
Deep message in this poem set in great images and emotion it sends its message in metaphor to all. A lovely write and a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:17
The Burden of Being Karma
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is an interesting story that plays out to the end. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is an interesting story that plays out to the end. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2025 11:29
The Light That Binds
sorenbarrett said:
Most nicely stated in poetic form that love and light by what ever name we call them are always there to sustain.
August 21st, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
Most nicely stated in poetic form that love and light by what ever name we call them are always there to sustain.
August 21st, 2025 12:25
Silent As Seed Beneath Soil
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
August 20th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
August 20th, 2025 10:45
Incoming Freshmen
sorenbarrett said:
Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written Gray
August 19th, 2025 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written Gray
August 19th, 2025 10:53
The Hawk\'s Arrival
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I always appreciate your feedback and support
August 18th, 2025 05:42
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I always appreciate your feedback and support
August 18th, 2025 05:42
The Hawk\'s Arrival
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem speaks of vision that goes beyond what most see. The hawk my represent a deeper penetrating eye, a conscience even. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem speaks of vision that goes beyond what most see. The hawk my represent a deeper penetrating eye, a conscience even. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:49
Flying Squirrel
sorenbarrett said:
The grace of a flying squirrel well described in this poem. Very nice Gray
August 17th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
The grace of a flying squirrel well described in this poem. Very nice Gray
August 17th, 2025 04:55
not afraid of aging
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the process I am currently undertaking, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 13:57
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the process I am currently undertaking, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 13:57
not afraid of aging
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write on the process that I have grown to know too well. A fave
August 16th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write on the process that I have grown to know too well. A fave
August 16th, 2025 13:28
Detour on My Way to Heaven
Doggerel Dave said:
Purgatory? Limbo? (not religious, so don\'t ask me...)
Recognise the seediness, and don\'t think I could stand the polish anyway. Very downbeat in a way I can relate to.
August 15th, 2025 15:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Purgatory? Limbo? (not religious, so don\'t ask me...)
Recognise the seediness, and don\'t think I could stand the polish anyway. Very downbeat in a way I can relate to.
August 15th, 2025 15:56
Detour on My Way to Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poems with some really good lines. (alleys coughed up their regrets) was one that spilled its guts. A fave my friend
August 15th, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poems with some really good lines. (alleys coughed up their regrets) was one that spilled its guts. A fave my friend
August 15th, 2025 10:34
Detour on My Way to Heaven
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 09:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 09:35
Grandpa\'s Lesson
NinjaGirl said:
I was expecting a sweet childhood story...made me laugh! I love the more serious tone though, those we trust can set traps we\'ll fall into
August 14th, 2025 20:04
NinjaGirl said:
I was expecting a sweet childhood story...made me laugh! I love the more serious tone though, those we trust can set traps we\'ll fall into
August 14th, 2025 20:04
Grandpa\'s Lesson
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, how as children\'s something\'s are to tempting to ignore, on this occasion paid a unpleasant price, entertaining read with a more serious message, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:50
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, how as children\'s something\'s are to tempting to ignore, on this occasion paid a unpleasant price, entertaining read with a more serious message, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:50
Grandpa\'s Lesson
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of things gone wrong. A fun read that reminded me of past deeds. Well done
August 14th, 2025 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of things gone wrong. A fun read that reminded me of past deeds. Well done
August 14th, 2025 10:56
to speak too soon
Doggerel Dave said:
Advice worth contemplating... though I fear I may be a lost cause...
August 13th, 2025 17:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Advice worth contemplating... though I fear I may be a lost cause...
August 13th, 2025 17:27
to speak too soon
sorenbarrett said:
Several quotes of notable wisdom contained in this poem. Lovely a fave
August 13th, 2025 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
Several quotes of notable wisdom contained in this poem. Lovely a fave
August 13th, 2025 11:36
The Laughter of Ashes
sorenbarrett said:
Some very good lines here Gray it makes its point and the relationship between tragedy, grief and humor. Very nice and a fave
August 12th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Some very good lines here Gray it makes its point and the relationship between tragedy, grief and humor. Very nice and a fave
August 12th, 2025 04:32
Translating the Grain
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I appreciate your feedback and support
August 10th, 2025 07:42
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I appreciate your feedback and support
August 10th, 2025 07:42
Translating the Grain
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this poem one must feel. It erupts from inside like a bursting seed and sprouts out the mouth flowering into self perceived meaning in a gutteral burp. Your use of varied visceral images and metaphor put this seed in me. Lovely a fave
August 10th, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this poem one must feel. It erupts from inside like a bursting seed and sprouts out the mouth flowering into self perceived meaning in a gutteral burp. Your use of varied visceral images and metaphor put this seed in me. Lovely a fave
August 10th, 2025 05:20
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