Comments received on poems by gray0328
Houdini\'s Grave
gray0328 said:
Thank You Tom I truly appreciate your feedback
January 10th, 2024 13:43
gray0328 said:
Thank You Tom I truly appreciate your feedback
January 10th, 2024 13:43
Houdini\'s Grave
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. A fascinating poem about a fascinating man.
January 10th, 2024 04:50
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. A fascinating poem about a fascinating man.
January 10th, 2024 04:50
If Tomorrow Doesn\'t Come
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, tomorrow isn\'t looking too promising, is it? ironically, I just posted a poem of same subject. Take care.
January 9th, 2024 10:04
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, tomorrow isn\'t looking too promising, is it? ironically, I just posted a poem of same subject. Take care.
January 9th, 2024 10:04
Dilation
2781 said:
The transformation of the body that you have now, into the body the body you will have, will be instantaneous. All believes will receive this gift at the same time.
January 6th, 2024 02:45
2781 said:
The transformation of the body that you have now, into the body the body you will have, will be instantaneous. All believes will receive this gift at the same time.
January 6th, 2024 02:45
Papa Benny
Alan R said:
I pull the glistening prizes from the water...beautiful
January 4th, 2024 07:20
Alan R said:
I pull the glistening prizes from the water...beautiful
January 4th, 2024 07:20
Confined Thoughts
Eugene S. said:
The tea ball is cracked indeed - beautiful! Awesome wordplay!!
January 1st, 2024 15:15
Eugene S. said:
The tea ball is cracked indeed - beautiful! Awesome wordplay!!
January 1st, 2024 15:15
Prophetic Courage
gray0328 said:
Thanks Orchi. It\'s in our hearts and actions that our true selves can be found. But now I am going to write a a poem about a histrionic religious zealot who gets his daily workout by constantly crossing himself. 😂
December 26th, 2023 12:36
gray0328 said:
Thanks Orchi. It\'s in our hearts and actions that our true selves can be found. But now I am going to write a a poem about a histrionic religious zealot who gets his daily workout by constantly crossing himself. 😂
December 26th, 2023 12:36
Prophetic Courage
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
Yes, I saw someone so caught up in religion, that he was bowing, crossing himself, etc, so much, that I thought \'You\'ll be worn out before the service even starts\', Doh!
December 26th, 2023 02:59
orchidee said:
A fine write G.
Yes, I saw someone so caught up in religion, that he was bowing, crossing himself, etc, so much, that I thought \'You\'ll be worn out before the service even starts\', Doh!
December 26th, 2023 02:59
If Tomorrow Doesn\'t Come
gray0328 said:
Thank You for your continued support.
December 24th, 2023 19:20
gray0328 said:
Thank You for your continued support.
December 24th, 2023 19:20
The Weight We Carry
sorenbarrett said:
\"Deep inside him, he hears the hum of a boy’s dream\" a great line. All of us that have had children can relate to this poem. It is a great read with a wonderful and powerful message.
December 24th, 2023 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
\"Deep inside him, he hears the hum of a boy’s dream\" a great line. All of us that have had children can relate to this poem. It is a great read with a wonderful and powerful message.
December 24th, 2023 14:04
Party Line
sorenbarrett said:
This one brought back many childhood memories when we had an old black dial phone that had a party line with two other neighbors. How many times I got in trouble interrupting their calls.
December 24th, 2023 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
This one brought back many childhood memories when we had an old black dial phone that had a party line with two other neighbors. How many times I got in trouble interrupting their calls.
December 24th, 2023 13:47
If Tomorrow Doesn\'t Come
sorenbarrett said:
I loved your opening and great images \"Where the raccoon is but a hot tar stain
And the sweet-gum tree is lost to time\'s disdain
Where the shirt is just plastic ditch-litter
And the kitchen\'s a cow\'s corpse, bitter\"
Great images indeed. Merry Christmas to you as well
December 24th, 2023 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
I loved your opening and great images \"Where the raccoon is but a hot tar stain
And the sweet-gum tree is lost to time\'s disdain
Where the shirt is just plastic ditch-litter
And the kitchen\'s a cow\'s corpse, bitter\"
Great images indeed. Merry Christmas to you as well
December 24th, 2023 13:42
Pure Disbelief
sorenbarrett said:
The image is indelible in the mind and as all good poems are marked by their memory so is this one
December 24th, 2023 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
The image is indelible in the mind and as all good poems are marked by their memory so is this one
December 24th, 2023 06:20
The Weight We Carry
Cassie58 said:
A põem iof great compassion. Sadly we can’t help the whole world. We can show compassion though and understanding. Nicely penned stanzas.
December 21st, 2023 05:29
Cassie58 said:
A põem iof great compassion. Sadly we can’t help the whole world. We can show compassion though and understanding. Nicely penned stanzas.
December 21st, 2023 05:29
The Weight We Carry
orchidee said:
Don\'t ya just love it when a car splashes you with a puddle on purpose?! Grrr! lol.
December 21st, 2023 03:08
orchidee said:
Don\'t ya just love it when a car splashes you with a puddle on purpose?! Grrr! lol.
December 21st, 2023 03:08
Mary
orchidee said:
A fine write Gary.
I could maybe set a poem or two to a hymn/carol tune, if you wish, if I\'m inspired to!
December 20th, 2023 03:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Gary.
I could maybe set a poem or two to a hymn/carol tune, if you wish, if I\'m inspired to!
December 20th, 2023 03:02
Mary
Cassie58 said:
You honour the mother of Christ in your stanzas here. Nicely penned and so appropriate as the time of his birth approaches.
December 20th, 2023 02:29
Cassie58 said:
You honour the mother of Christ in your stanzas here. Nicely penned and so appropriate as the time of his birth approaches.
December 20th, 2023 02:29
Cowboy
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Makes me long for the open range.
December 18th, 2023 14:11
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Makes me long for the open range.
December 18th, 2023 14:11
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