Comments received on poems by gray0328
the poet and the craftsman
sorenbarrett said:
Gray if I read this right I hear that there are two makers the inner poet and the outer craftsman and together they weave the poem. This so true the spirit of the poet providing the raw material and the craftsman\'s hands and experience shaping it. Simply lovely and a fave
August 31st, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Gray if I read this right I hear that there are two makers the inner poet and the outer craftsman and together they weave the poem. This so true the spirit of the poet providing the raw material and the craftsman\'s hands and experience shaping it. Simply lovely and a fave
August 31st, 2025 08:00
Shells
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray history in a pile just as bones are and fossils a memory of times past. Loved it
August 30th, 2025 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray history in a pile just as bones are and fossils a memory of times past. Loved it
August 30th, 2025 11:34
The Vine and the Branches
sorenbarrett said:
The interrelatedness of all nature and its holds and nourishment all interwoven. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
The interrelatedness of all nature and its holds and nourishment all interwoven. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 16:01
The Vine and the Branches
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another great write
August 29th, 2025 12:18
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another great write
August 29th, 2025 12:18
The Well
sorenbarrett said:
Built of fragments this poem invites the reader to decipher and assemble meaning from bits and pieces. Nicely composed it leaves clues along the way
August 28th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Built of fragments this poem invites the reader to decipher and assemble meaning from bits and pieces. Nicely composed it leaves clues along the way
August 28th, 2025 04:12
Birth of a Star
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brings to mind the phoenix raising from the ashes, the cycle of regeneration and new life from death a metamorphosis of a type. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brings to mind the phoenix raising from the ashes, the cycle of regeneration and new life from death a metamorphosis of a type. Nicely done
August 26th, 2025 12:06
Stubborn as the Earth Beneath Us
sorenbarrett said:
This poem made me think of my old English bull and left me missing him. Well done Gray
August 25th, 2025 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem made me think of my old English bull and left me missing him. Well done Gray
August 25th, 2025 15:58
some people never go crazy
David Hopkins said:
very very real Brother! i can easily relate to about every bit of that .
thanks for sharing it
August 24th, 2025 22:26
David Hopkins said:
very very real Brother! i can easily relate to about every bit of that .
thanks for sharing it
August 24th, 2025 22:26
some people never go crazy
FallingAwake2 said:
wow this is downright an amazing poem...crafted so thoughtfully, and so relatable to me. Gave me comfort. thank you!
August 24th, 2025 16:29
FallingAwake2 said:
wow this is downright an amazing poem...crafted so thoughtfully, and so relatable to me. Gave me comfort. thank you!
August 24th, 2025 16:29
some people never go crazy
Doggerel Dave said:
Very lucky circumstances plus lack of imagination. A great diagnosis of complacency. Thoroughly enjoyed.
August 24th, 2025 16:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Very lucky circumstances plus lack of imagination. A great diagnosis of complacency. Thoroughly enjoyed.
August 24th, 2025 16:13
some people never go crazy
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that speak to me of how some people never take a chance. Nicely done
August 24th, 2025 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that speak to me of how some people never take a chance. Nicely done
August 24th, 2025 16:07
Rearguard of the Pack
sorenbarrett said:
Deep message in this poem set in great images and emotion it sends its message in metaphor to all. A lovely write and a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
Deep message in this poem set in great images and emotion it sends its message in metaphor to all. A lovely write and a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:17
The Burden of Being Karma
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is an interesting story that plays out to the end. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is an interesting story that plays out to the end. Nicely done
August 22nd, 2025 11:29
The Light That Binds
sorenbarrett said:
Most nicely stated in poetic form that love and light by what ever name we call them are always there to sustain.
August 21st, 2025 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
Most nicely stated in poetic form that love and light by what ever name we call them are always there to sustain.
August 21st, 2025 12:25
Silent As Seed Beneath Soil
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
August 20th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
August 20th, 2025 10:45
Incoming Freshmen
sorenbarrett said:
Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written Gray
August 19th, 2025 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written Gray
August 19th, 2025 10:53
The Hawk\'s Arrival
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I always appreciate your feedback and support
August 18th, 2025 05:42
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren I always appreciate your feedback and support
August 18th, 2025 05:42
The Hawk\'s Arrival
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem speaks of vision that goes beyond what most see. The hawk my represent a deeper penetrating eye, a conscience even. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done this poem speaks of vision that goes beyond what most see. The hawk my represent a deeper penetrating eye, a conscience even. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 04:49
Flying Squirrel
sorenbarrett said:
The grace of a flying squirrel well described in this poem. Very nice Gray
August 17th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
The grace of a flying squirrel well described in this poem. Very nice Gray
August 17th, 2025 04:55
not afraid of aging
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the process I am currently undertaking, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 13:57
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the process I am currently undertaking, enjoyed the read
August 16th, 2025 13:57
not afraid of aging
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write on the process that I have grown to know too well. A fave
August 16th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write on the process that I have grown to know too well. A fave
August 16th, 2025 13:28
Detour on My Way to Heaven
Doggerel Dave said:
Purgatory? Limbo? (not religious, so don\'t ask me...)
Recognise the seediness, and don\'t think I could stand the polish anyway. Very downbeat in a way I can relate to.
August 15th, 2025 15:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Purgatory? Limbo? (not religious, so don\'t ask me...)
Recognise the seediness, and don\'t think I could stand the polish anyway. Very downbeat in a way I can relate to.
August 15th, 2025 15:56
Detour on My Way to Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poems with some really good lines. (alleys coughed up their regrets) was one that spilled its guts. A fave my friend
August 15th, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poems with some really good lines. (alleys coughed up their regrets) was one that spilled its guts. A fave my friend
August 15th, 2025 10:34
Detour on My Way to Heaven
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 09:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 09:35
Grandpa\'s Lesson
NinjaGirl said:
I was expecting a sweet childhood story...made me laugh! I love the more serious tone though, those we trust can set traps we\'ll fall into
August 14th, 2025 20:04
NinjaGirl said:
I was expecting a sweet childhood story...made me laugh! I love the more serious tone though, those we trust can set traps we\'ll fall into
August 14th, 2025 20:04
Grandpa\'s Lesson
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, how as children\'s something\'s are to tempting to ignore, on this occasion paid a unpleasant price, entertaining read with a more serious message, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:50
Poetic Licence said:
I love this, how as children\'s something\'s are to tempting to ignore, on this occasion paid a unpleasant price, entertaining read with a more serious message, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 12:50
Grandpa\'s Lesson
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of things gone wrong. A fun read that reminded me of past deeds. Well done
August 14th, 2025 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of things gone wrong. A fun read that reminded me of past deeds. Well done
August 14th, 2025 10:56
to speak too soon
Doggerel Dave said:
Advice worth contemplating... though I fear I may be a lost cause...
August 13th, 2025 17:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Advice worth contemplating... though I fear I may be a lost cause...
August 13th, 2025 17:27
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