Comments received on poems by gray0328
A Lesson in Bitter Tinctures (Series on Liberals #4)
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds prophetic and is dark with promises of violence. Nicely written Gray
August 9th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds prophetic and is dark with promises of violence. Nicely written Gray
August 9th, 2025 04:33
Destructive Taste (Series on Liberals #3)
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begs for interpretation in its obscurity it speaks of inequality, lack of justice it requires several reads and even then it is not completely clear
August 8th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begs for interpretation in its obscurity it speaks of inequality, lack of justice it requires several reads and even then it is not completely clear
August 8th, 2025 12:06
The Flickering Light (Series on Liberals #2)
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray full of wonderful lines and with deep meaning
August 7th, 2025 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray full of wonderful lines and with deep meaning
August 7th, 2025 13:57
The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1)
arqios said:
Just clocked off from a blended shift. 12 hours of madness. I am also not in the best frame of mind so am greatly appreciative 🙏🏻🕊️
August 7th, 2025 05:17
arqios said:
Just clocked off from a blended shift. 12 hours of madness. I am also not in the best frame of mind so am greatly appreciative 🙏🏻🕊️
August 7th, 2025 05:17
The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1)
Doggerel Dave said:
I shall follow the series with attention.... Thanks for putting it out there.
August 6th, 2025 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I shall follow the series with attention.... Thanks for putting it out there.
August 6th, 2025 18:33
The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1)
sorenbarrett said:
Fairy tales are for children, dreams are for sleepers, wishes are for wells, shooting stars, and birthday parties. A lovely write.
August 6th, 2025 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Fairy tales are for children, dreams are for sleepers, wishes are for wells, shooting stars, and birthday parties. A lovely write.
August 6th, 2025 10:20
The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1)
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Powerful.
August 6th, 2025 10:13
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. Powerful.
August 6th, 2025 10:13
After the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a series of wonderful lines linked. I think my favorite is the first ( The mirror confirms what silence echoes) Very nice Gray
August 4th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a series of wonderful lines linked. I think my favorite is the first ( The mirror confirms what silence echoes) Very nice Gray
August 4th, 2025 04:19
Without You
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. You take the reader into the scene.
August 2nd, 2025 22:10
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. You take the reader into the scene.
August 2nd, 2025 22:10
Without You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection following loss. Nicely penned Gray and with a somber tone
August 1st, 2025 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection following loss. Nicely penned Gray and with a somber tone
August 1st, 2025 13:41
The Cloak of Decency
Doggerel Dave said:
The descriptor/aphorism or whatever \'Manners maketh the man\' could only be attached to no one I wish to be anywhere near.
Well writ, Sir.
July 31st, 2025 23:39
Doggerel Dave said:
The descriptor/aphorism or whatever \'Manners maketh the man\' could only be attached to no one I wish to be anywhere near.
Well writ, Sir.
July 31st, 2025 23:39
The Cloak of Decency
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has metaphor, symbolism and flow that makes it tell its story in disguise. Lovely
July 31st, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has metaphor, symbolism and flow that makes it tell its story in disguise. Lovely
July 31st, 2025 13:08
Your Face is the Roadmap
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, reminds me of my grandad, a face that told a thousand stories, so lived in, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 13:40
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, reminds me of my grandad, a face that told a thousand stories, so lived in, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 13:40
Your Face is the Roadmap
sorenbarrett said:
A physical map etched in flesh. Our faces tell of our journeys. Nicely written Gray
July 30th, 2025 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
A physical map etched in flesh. Our faces tell of our journeys. Nicely written Gray
July 30th, 2025 10:46
hope is the thing
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the last thing to die. A lovely poem so nicely worded it cries out to the reader in a lullaby. Well done Gray
July 28th, 2025 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the last thing to die. A lovely poem so nicely worded it cries out to the reader in a lullaby. Well done Gray
July 28th, 2025 15:29
my brain is a busy city
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid characterization of a busy mind is over crowded and moving too fast. Nicely written Gray.
July 27th, 2025 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid characterization of a busy mind is over crowded and moving too fast. Nicely written Gray.
July 27th, 2025 08:23
here comes the bus
sorenbarrett said:
We all are acculturated into our epoch and culture. Memories of stone worn by time. A lovely snapshot of the past etched in the mind. Nicely done Gray
July 26th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
We all are acculturated into our epoch and culture. Memories of stone worn by time. A lovely snapshot of the past etched in the mind. Nicely done Gray
July 26th, 2025 05:47
marvelous nature
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written Gray this peace paints wonderful pictures and is well worded to convey settings familiar but never traveled. Yes all nature contains its story and way. Lovely
July 24th, 2025 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written Gray this peace paints wonderful pictures and is well worded to convey settings familiar but never traveled. Yes all nature contains its story and way. Lovely
July 24th, 2025 12:22
black reel
sorenbarrett said:
This one is a gem Gray wonderful lines and the one that was most powerful closed it out in the last two lines.
this is the cruelty of the earth
to erase what our hearts hold closest
July 23rd, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
This one is a gem Gray wonderful lines and the one that was most powerful closed it out in the last two lines.
this is the cruelty of the earth
to erase what our hearts hold closest
July 23rd, 2025 11:23
The Captive of Captivity
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical images abound in this poem of heaven, hell, death and afterlife. Very nicely worded it rings with poetic ferver. Loved it Gray
July 21st, 2025 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical images abound in this poem of heaven, hell, death and afterlife. Very nicely worded it rings with poetic ferver. Loved it Gray
July 21st, 2025 12:51
A Factotum\'s Call
sorenbarrett said:
Intricate word weaving in this poem rhyme and meter melt into a blended piece of art. Very nicely done Gray and a fave
July 20th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Intricate word weaving in this poem rhyme and meter melt into a blended piece of art. Very nicely done Gray and a fave
July 20th, 2025 04:19
midsummer\'s night
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely
Metaphors highly praiseworthy....
July 18th, 2025 09:15
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely
Metaphors highly praiseworthy....
July 18th, 2025 09:15
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