Comments received on poems by gray0328
Mary
Cassie58 said:
You honour the mother of Christ in your stanzas here. Nicely penned and so appropriate as the time of his birth approaches.
December 20th, 2023 02:29
Cassie58 said:
You honour the mother of Christ in your stanzas here. Nicely penned and so appropriate as the time of his birth approaches.
December 20th, 2023 02:29
Cowboy
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Makes me long for the open range.
December 18th, 2023 14:11
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Makes me long for the open range.
December 18th, 2023 14:11
John The Baptist
orchidee said:
A fine write G, and for this Sunday\'s theme in some churches \'The Forerunner\'.
December 17th, 2023 10:46
orchidee said:
A fine write G, and for this Sunday\'s theme in some churches \'The Forerunner\'.
December 17th, 2023 10:46
Survivor
MendedFences27 said:
Very sad, and very true. All \"survivor\'s\" feel a sense of guilt. Your poem draws a picture of what was survived. It is well written and poetic as it calls for a focus on those who do not survive. Enjoyed the read.. - Phil A.
December 12th, 2023 18:28
MendedFences27 said:
Very sad, and very true. All \"survivor\'s\" feel a sense of guilt. Your poem draws a picture of what was survived. It is well written and poetic as it calls for a focus on those who do not survive. Enjoyed the read.. - Phil A.
December 12th, 2023 18:28
Intwined Roots
GODisreal said:
I can\'t really remember when the last time someone else was able to paint the picture... thanks 🧎🏿♀️
December 11th, 2023 01:20
GODisreal said:
I can\'t really remember when the last time someone else was able to paint the picture... thanks 🧎🏿♀️
December 11th, 2023 01:20
Fervent Glory
2781 said:
That a thing about faith, it\'s as big as it\'s boundaries.
December 4th, 2023 23:28
2781 said:
That a thing about faith, it\'s as big as it\'s boundaries.
December 4th, 2023 23:28
What Lies Beneath
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.I like the rhyme although some of it is forced. There are a lot of generalisations that need explaining but hey what would I know
December 1st, 2023 15:54
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.I like the rhyme although some of it is forced. There are a lot of generalisations that need explaining but hey what would I know
December 1st, 2023 15:54
Conflicted
2781 said:
...work out your own salvation with fear and trembling, for it is God who works in you, both to will and to work for his good pleasure.
He won\'t let us down.
November 27th, 2023 01:38
2781 said:
...work out your own salvation with fear and trembling, for it is God who works in you, both to will and to work for his good pleasure.
He won\'t let us down.
November 27th, 2023 01:38
Frozen Beauty
peto said:
The 1st verse is stunning and captures the reader
Great read with magical rhyming
November 26th, 2023 20:20
peto said:
The 1st verse is stunning and captures the reader
Great read with magical rhyming
November 26th, 2023 20:20
Poetry Should Not Take Hours to Comprehend
John Lee said:
Very nice! And I agree
November 25th, 2023 22:00
John Lee said:
Very nice! And I agree
November 25th, 2023 22:00
Poets
Parisab said:
Beautiful -and you pictured the poet needing but a window and the novelist an aisle… a well respected poet once told me that a true poet must not become a novelist…
November 23rd, 2023 11:55
Parisab said:
Beautiful -and you pictured the poet needing but a window and the novelist an aisle… a well respected poet once told me that a true poet must not become a novelist…
November 23rd, 2023 11:55
Poets
Tom C Dylan said:
I absolutely love this! Completely agree with the sentiment and wonderfully written.
November 23rd, 2023 06:31
Tom C Dylan said:
I absolutely love this! Completely agree with the sentiment and wonderfully written.
November 23rd, 2023 06:31
My Mom is Dying
jarcher54 said:
Ah, Courtney, so relatable, so human. My mom died after a short intense hospitalization over a decade ago... you captured all those emotions so beautifully and sensitively. Thank you and much love.
November 18th, 2023 20:00
jarcher54 said:
Ah, Courtney, so relatable, so human. My mom died after a short intense hospitalization over a decade ago... you captured all those emotions so beautifully and sensitively. Thank you and much love.
November 18th, 2023 20:00
Lucifer\'s Flaw
jarcher54 said:
A succinct and haunting description... you had me on the lookout, scanning the dark sky above my neighborhood... a little Paradise Lost vibe... very nice imagery.
November 18th, 2023 19:57
jarcher54 said:
A succinct and haunting description... you had me on the lookout, scanning the dark sky above my neighborhood... a little Paradise Lost vibe... very nice imagery.
November 18th, 2023 19:57
My Mom is Dying
Christina8 said:
Poignant poem, very well stated. God bless you and your family.
November 16th, 2023 11:17
Christina8 said:
Poignant poem, very well stated. God bless you and your family.
November 16th, 2023 11:17
My Mom is Dying
Tom C Dylan said:
Such a powerful poem, beautifully written.
November 16th, 2023 06:21
Tom C Dylan said:
Such a powerful poem, beautifully written.
November 16th, 2023 06:21
My Mom is Dying
Firefall said:
Beautiful words. May you and your mom find peace.
November 15th, 2023 17:46
Firefall said:
Beautiful words. May you and your mom find peace.
November 15th, 2023 17:46
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