Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Art of Subtlety
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice Gray that is too often ignored or worse yet never learned. Nicely written
June 25th, 2025 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice Gray that is too often ignored or worse yet never learned. Nicely written
June 25th, 2025 12:09
The Barking Symphony
sorenbarrett said:
In tune and harmony with best friend and it serves as a great metaphor. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
In tune and harmony with best friend and it serves as a great metaphor. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 09:53
the root of peace
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem about humility and indeed it speaks the truth. Humility is only for the strong that are strong enough to know that they are not all there is in this world that don\'t have to worry about protecting themselves and instead protect others. A lovely write and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
A strong poem about humility and indeed it speaks the truth. Humility is only for the strong that are strong enough to know that they are not all there is in this world that don\'t have to worry about protecting themselves and instead protect others. A lovely write and a fave
June 23rd, 2025 13:24
midsummer\'s night
sorenbarrett said:
Sultry, sensuous, enchanting, a wonderful world that I have been to. Nicely written Gray
June 22nd, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sultry, sensuous, enchanting, a wonderful world that I have been to. Nicely written Gray
June 22nd, 2025 11:29
1964 Fairlane
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia in a poem, days I remember and feelings resurrected. A wonderful write.
June 21st, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia in a poem, days I remember and feelings resurrected. A wonderful write.
June 21st, 2025 12:59
Salty Paradox
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor and deep as well salt being on of the basic primitive elements and a universal need.
June 20th, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor and deep as well salt being on of the basic primitive elements and a universal need.
June 20th, 2025 14:12
prisoners of the gilded world
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words cloth a body of truth in this poem that shines through and like clothing that reveals a sirens charms draws attention. Well done Gray
June 19th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words cloth a body of truth in this poem that shines through and like clothing that reveals a sirens charms draws attention. Well done Gray
June 19th, 2025 13:11
we see with our ears
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and most interesting as a thought. I have wondered what colors smelled like and the taste of music. Loved it Gray
June 18th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and most interesting as a thought. I have wondered what colors smelled like and the taste of music. Loved it Gray
June 18th, 2025 11:33
wild horses on asphalt
Doggerel Dave said:
In very few actual lines you painted a complete picture of longing. Really neat but strong.
PS: Is that a form with a name?
June 16th, 2025 18:08
Doggerel Dave said:
In very few actual lines you painted a complete picture of longing. Really neat but strong.
PS: Is that a form with a name?
June 16th, 2025 18:08
wild horses on asphalt
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read of having the freedom of the open highway in a wonderful car, enjoyed
June 16th, 2025 16:19
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read of having the freedom of the open highway in a wonderful car, enjoyed
June 16th, 2025 16:19
wild horses on asphalt
sorenbarrett said:
They call it horsepower for a good reason. Nicely written Gray it speaks of freedom and of open roads. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
They call it horsepower for a good reason. Nicely written Gray it speaks of freedom and of open roads. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:54
Father\'s Day
arqios said:
Superb. I was late in that game and then checkmate came. It\'s so good to see here that such still exists and thrives.🙏🏻🕊️
June 15th, 2025 15:44
arqios said:
Superb. I was late in that game and then checkmate came. It\'s so good to see here that such still exists and thrives.🙏🏻🕊️
June 15th, 2025 15:44
Father\'s Day
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a loved father and so it should be. Loved it
June 15th, 2025 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to a loved father and so it should be. Loved it
June 15th, 2025 12:37
Father\'s Day
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a father and sons love, enjoyed
June 15th, 2025 12:01
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a father and sons love, enjoyed
June 15th, 2025 12:01
First Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
This brought back memories long buried and the childhood innocence of the game and the electricity of the moment, the thrill and wishes and hope fulfilled amidst the background of others mirth made the poem a real moment. A fare for sure
June 14th, 2025 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
This brought back memories long buried and the childhood innocence of the game and the electricity of the moment, the thrill and wishes and hope fulfilled amidst the background of others mirth made the poem a real moment. A fare for sure
June 14th, 2025 14:21
Joan of Arc
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely penned Gray with power and good flow a tribute to a historical great whose name has lived on well beyond her days. A fave
June 13th, 2025 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely penned Gray with power and good flow a tribute to a historical great whose name has lived on well beyond her days. A fave
June 13th, 2025 12:55
The Fire Beneath the Stones
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Gray we all have a beast upon our back from time time. Well done
June 12th, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Gray we all have a beast upon our back from time time. Well done
June 12th, 2025 13:15
Crow\'s Descent
sorenbarrett said:
The poem in verse tells a great myth you have created with a moral. Well done Gray
June 11th, 2025 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
The poem in verse tells a great myth you have created with a moral. Well done Gray
June 11th, 2025 11:14
Vices
sorenbarrett said:
Gray words that have a familiar feel and read with power. Nicely written
June 10th, 2025 17:04
sorenbarrett said:
Gray words that have a familiar feel and read with power. Nicely written
June 10th, 2025 17:04
When You Left
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing someone. nicely written
June 9th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing someone. nicely written
June 9th, 2025 13:34
Drear Love
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go for the contradictions embodied in the penultimate stanza.
June 8th, 2025 16:57
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go for the contradictions embodied in the penultimate stanza.
June 8th, 2025 16:57
Drear Love
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that seems a love letter to one gone. The last line caught my attention the most (a ghost I am too proud to bury) a powerful line
June 8th, 2025 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that seems a love letter to one gone. The last line caught my attention the most (a ghost I am too proud to bury) a powerful line
June 8th, 2025 12:21
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