Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Joy of Losing Me
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some of the lines are too good for prosaic appreciation
\"Love isn’t a thing to be captured
But a river that flows through all
Achievement is not a mountain
But the air I breathe with ease
Perfection is not a mirror
But the joy of being cracked \" - almost takes us into the relam of philosophy. Loved it very much
September 7th, 2024 11:00
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some of the lines are too good for prosaic appreciation
\"Love isn’t a thing to be captured
But a river that flows through all
Achievement is not a mountain
But the air I breathe with ease
Perfection is not a mirror
But the joy of being cracked \" - almost takes us into the relam of philosophy. Loved it very much
September 7th, 2024 11:00
Remontant Hydrangeas
Dan Williams said:
Yes, I did have to look up remontant. Like annuals times two. Very nice.
September 6th, 2024 01:14
Dan Williams said:
Yes, I did have to look up remontant. Like annuals times two. Very nice.
September 6th, 2024 01:14
Remontant Hydrangeas
Parisab said:
Two lives converge within one tender bloom
Old and new embrace, the seasons dance
Never seen these transitions described in such a way-great choices and very artful Gray0328
September 5th, 2024 23:46
Parisab said:
Two lives converge within one tender bloom
Old and new embrace, the seasons dance
Never seen these transitions described in such a way-great choices and very artful Gray0328
September 5th, 2024 23:46
Crack
sorenbarrett said:
A very interesting poem. Metaphorical in many ways. Mind provoking.
September 5th, 2024 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
A very interesting poem. Metaphorical in many ways. Mind provoking.
September 5th, 2024 13:31
Remontant Hydrangeas
sorenbarrett said:
Oh yes, Resurrection reincarnation call it what you may if not, literal metaphorical each of us have a new birth. Beautiful images.
September 4th, 2024 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
Oh yes, Resurrection reincarnation call it what you may if not, literal metaphorical each of us have a new birth. Beautiful images.
September 4th, 2024 12:52
The Law of Reflection
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and all the more charming with a subtle depth in brevity how sweetly it shines!
September 1st, 2024 15:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and all the more charming with a subtle depth in brevity how sweetly it shines!
September 1st, 2024 15:50
The Solitary Oak
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful poem. I can relate. We have an oak on a small island in the Thames which probably goes back to the civil war. Five times the width of my embrace. Stand alone. All that time it has endured. Really enjoyed the read. Thank you.
August 31st, 2024 17:55
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful poem. I can relate. We have an oak on a small island in the Thames which probably goes back to the civil war. Five times the width of my embrace. Stand alone. All that time it has endured. Really enjoyed the read. Thank you.
August 31st, 2024 17:55
The Pedagogues of Iron Will
sorenbarrett said:
A noble job that is not recognized as much as it should be.
August 29th, 2024 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
A noble job that is not recognized as much as it should be.
August 29th, 2024 11:02
Event Horizon
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful view of time and space and love as well.
August 27th, 2024 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful view of time and space and love as well.
August 27th, 2024 12:56
The Ninth Chorus
sorenbarrett said:
This makes me think of when baseball started.
August 26th, 2024 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
This makes me think of when baseball started.
August 26th, 2024 15:57
A New Dawn
Cassie58 said:
This is a wonderful tribute to Emily Dickinson. I swear I saw her penning her poems late at night by candlelight, as she glanced through the window. Very much enjoyed.
August 25th, 2024 12:30
Cassie58 said:
This is a wonderful tribute to Emily Dickinson. I swear I saw her penning her poems late at night by candlelight, as she glanced through the window. Very much enjoyed.
August 25th, 2024 12:30
A New Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
I love the rhythm that this form of poetry gives to the piece. It has a heart beat. Lovely
August 25th, 2024 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
I love the rhythm that this form of poetry gives to the piece. It has a heart beat. Lovely
August 25th, 2024 06:00
The Silent Burden
sorenbarrett said:
It can not be kept secret if more than one person knows it. Nicely stated
August 24th, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
It can not be kept secret if more than one person knows it. Nicely stated
August 24th, 2024 09:20
A New Bloom in Winter
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful poetic expression. Some really nice lines here. Much enjoyed. Thank you.
August 23rd, 2024 14:40
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful poetic expression. Some really nice lines here. Much enjoyed. Thank you.
August 23rd, 2024 14:40
A New Bloom in Winter
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully state with great imagery.
August 23rd, 2024 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully state with great imagery.
August 23rd, 2024 14:09
The Ringers\' Ritual
sorenbarrett said:
Haven\'t played that game in years. A great firsthand description brought excitement to the game. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Haven\'t played that game in years. A great firsthand description brought excitement to the game. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 15:59
The Nuthouse Olympics
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of nature and all its wonders. lovely
August 21st, 2024 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of nature and all its wonders. lovely
August 21st, 2024 11:18
The Quiet Bridge
Cassie58 said:
Wonderfully spiritual in its content. Great poetic expression and fine imagery. Pleased I stopped by today.
August 20th, 2024 12:19
Cassie58 said:
Wonderfully spiritual in its content. Great poetic expression and fine imagery. Pleased I stopped by today.
August 20th, 2024 12:19
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