Comments received on poems by gray0328
Salt
sorenbarrett said:
Ye are the salt of the earth. Necessary for life and the functioning of the nervous system it gives savor. Once precious. They say that Roman soldiers were paid in salt. Nicely done.
February 9th, 2025 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
Ye are the salt of the earth. Necessary for life and the functioning of the nervous system it gives savor. Once precious. They say that Roman soldiers were paid in salt. Nicely done.
February 9th, 2025 14:19
Snip
sorenbarrett said:
Such disturbing sounds join others like barking dogs, crowing roosters and those that start their lawn equipment too early in the morning. A fun read
February 8th, 2025 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Such disturbing sounds join others like barking dogs, crowing roosters and those that start their lawn equipment too early in the morning. A fun read
February 8th, 2025 20:11
Snip
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful read, the imagery certainly pertains to the pesky cat, yet i feel it could to apply to others, really enjoyed this piece
February 8th, 2025 14:33
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful read, the imagery certainly pertains to the pesky cat, yet i feel it could to apply to others, really enjoyed this piece
February 8th, 2025 14:33
Tiny Echoes
Cassie58 said:
Lovely, and your author’s notes add even more value to this piece. I love that marmosets call each other by name. So intrigued I want to know more. Much enjoyed gray0328. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:33
Cassie58 said:
Lovely, and your author’s notes add even more value to this piece. I love that marmosets call each other by name. So intrigued I want to know more. Much enjoyed gray0328. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:33
Tiny Echoes
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message set in a jeweled frame of golden poem. Lovely
February 7th, 2025 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message set in a jeweled frame of golden poem. Lovely
February 7th, 2025 11:39
Moments
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely read and clever observation being only moments we remember, i had never thought of it like that before but it is so true, really enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 15:05
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely read and clever observation being only moments we remember, i had never thought of it like that before but it is so true, really enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 15:05
Finds
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this read, full of wonderful imagery and different meanings.
February 4th, 2025 15:02
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this read, full of wonderful imagery and different meanings.
February 4th, 2025 15:02
Moments
sorenbarrett said:
Tis so true and a great line (memories, glittering constellations in the sky of all our yesterdays.) A very poignant write and deserves a fave
February 4th, 2025 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
Tis so true and a great line (memories, glittering constellations in the sky of all our yesterdays.) A very poignant write and deserves a fave
February 4th, 2025 13:06
Finds
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words building wonderful images with great metaphors. Lovely
February 3rd, 2025 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words building wonderful images with great metaphors. Lovely
February 3rd, 2025 07:15
I\'ll Remember It
Cassie58 said:
Welcome to the club. It looks as though the membership is high. I’ll keep that pen and paper handy. Nothing wrong with your poetry. Always composed well and to a high standard. I have to write shopping lists these days. Fine writing.
February 2nd, 2025 12:10
Cassie58 said:
Welcome to the club. It looks as though the membership is high. I’ll keep that pen and paper handy. Nothing wrong with your poetry. Always composed well and to a high standard. I have to write shopping lists these days. Fine writing.
February 2nd, 2025 12:10
I\'ll Remember It
sorenbarrett said:
Familiar to most of us. Just last week I went to the store to get one item Ireturned with everything else but. A wonderful write
February 2nd, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
Familiar to most of us. Just last week I went to the store to get one item Ireturned with everything else but. A wonderful write
February 2nd, 2025 07:51
I\'ll Remember It
Swarovski20 said:
Very nice poem. Nice because you can feel it.
February 2nd, 2025 06:09
Swarovski20 said:
Very nice poem. Nice because you can feel it.
February 2nd, 2025 06:09
The Complaint Experiment
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in a poem. I am a firm believer in the idea of instead of a complaint a suggestion works as well. Nicely done
February 1st, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in a poem. I am a firm believer in the idea of instead of a complaint a suggestion works as well. Nicely done
February 1st, 2025 14:22
Delay is the Deadliest form of Denial
sorenbarrett said:
The mood is well set in this write and continues throughout leaving the message of procrastination, inaction, in a stale spot where time has taken a rest all tomorrows never come. Very nicely written
January 31st, 2025 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
The mood is well set in this write and continues throughout leaving the message of procrastination, inaction, in a stale spot where time has taken a rest all tomorrows never come. Very nicely written
January 31st, 2025 14:03
Becoming Less
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer in a poem or maybe a poem in a prayer. Well written
January 30th, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer in a poem or maybe a poem in a prayer. Well written
January 30th, 2025 13:23
Becoming Less
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Reminds me of Oswald Chambers, and a host of other teachers whose writing and lectures are so familiar. Exquisitely eloquent with excellent imagery and rendered so very beautifully. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 08:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Reminds me of Oswald Chambers, and a host of other teachers whose writing and lectures are so familiar. Exquisitely eloquent with excellent imagery and rendered so very beautifully. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 08:18
Service in Motion
Cassie58 said:
Really great message in this poem. A beautiful composition. Loved it.
January 29th, 2025 17:45
Cassie58 said:
Really great message in this poem. A beautiful composition. Loved it.
January 29th, 2025 17:45
Service in Motion
sorenbarrett said:
What a great message to send I loved it
January 29th, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
What a great message to send I loved it
January 29th, 2025 13:08
When the Dead Return
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and a bit dark this poem speaks of other worldly forces and may be taken as a metaphor for forces we do not understand or are able to see directly.
January 26th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting and a bit dark this poem speaks of other worldly forces and may be taken as a metaphor for forces we do not understand or are able to see directly.
January 26th, 2025 06:19
A Preppy Dance of Fabrics
sorenbarrett said:
It is a colorful world that we live in blessed with the ability to see different light spectrums. Nicely written
January 25th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
It is a colorful world that we live in blessed with the ability to see different light spectrums. Nicely written
January 25th, 2025 15:31
Childhood\'s Corridor
sorenbarrett said:
The past a foundation set, yet the construction may be varied. A poem full of metaphor. Nicely done
January 23rd, 2025 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
The past a foundation set, yet the construction may be varied. A poem full of metaphor. Nicely done
January 23rd, 2025 07:24
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