Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Chain Snapped Before Anyone Noticed
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted the lead up the frozen time and the aftermath. Well done Gray a fave
March 2nd, 2026 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
So well depicted the lead up the frozen time and the aftermath. Well done Gray a fave
March 2nd, 2026 11:53
The Currency of Care
sorenbarrett said:
This gives me the feel of a loving look at one valued and cared for while they are not aware. Well written Gray
March 1st, 2026 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
This gives me the feel of a loving look at one valued and cared for while they are not aware. Well written Gray
March 1st, 2026 05:57
Beads, Booze, and Broken Saints
sorenbarrett said:
Awakening from the party froth to a day of reality. Nicely written
February 28th, 2026 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Awakening from the party froth to a day of reality. Nicely written
February 28th, 2026 12:09
Cravings Born Electric
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write, enjoyed
February 27th, 2026 09:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write, enjoyed
February 27th, 2026 09:21
Cravings Born Electric
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another great write my friend
February 27th, 2026 09:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another great write my friend
February 27th, 2026 09:21
Cravings Born Electric
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Gray in all its awful savagery it tells the story of addiction. A fave
February 27th, 2026 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Gray in all its awful savagery it tells the story of addiction. A fave
February 27th, 2026 09:09
The Taste of What We Choose
sorenbarrett said:
Such philosophy in poetic form. The metaphor fits well the human condition and so we sit flies and bees and never the two shall mix. Lovely and a fave
February 26th, 2026 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Such philosophy in poetic form. The metaphor fits well the human condition and so we sit flies and bees and never the two shall mix. Lovely and a fave
February 26th, 2026 06:07
The Edges That Bruise Us
sorenbarrett said:
Instincts are strong and like reflexes are programed to protect us but reason given time for reflection is safer and kinder. Well written Gray
February 25th, 2026 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
Instincts are strong and like reflexes are programed to protect us but reason given time for reflection is safer and kinder. Well written Gray
February 25th, 2026 12:34
The Office Guillotine
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A DEEP WRITE MY FRIEND, ENJOYED
February 24th, 2026 10:44
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A DEEP WRITE MY FRIEND, ENJOYED
February 24th, 2026 10:44
The Office Guillotine
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects the chaos and rush of daily life and the zoo that it is. Nicely done Gray
February 24th, 2026 10:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects the chaos and rush of daily life and the zoo that it is. Nicely done Gray
February 24th, 2026 10:24
Swallowing Fire
Doggerel Dave said:
So much there I recognise and can identify with. Your conclusion definitely embodies a major truth - provided I can still believe that occasionally some fights are worth the trouble. I really came to grips with this one.
February 23rd, 2026 17:57
Doggerel Dave said:
So much there I recognise and can identify with. Your conclusion definitely embodies a major truth - provided I can still believe that occasionally some fights are worth the trouble. I really came to grips with this one.
February 23rd, 2026 17:57
Swallowing Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Few wars are worth the fight as Sun Tzu says the most superior way to win is to not have to fight. Toleration sometimes is the concession made. A lovely write my friend.
February 23rd, 2026 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Few wars are worth the fight as Sun Tzu says the most superior way to win is to not have to fight. Toleration sometimes is the concession made. A lovely write my friend.
February 23rd, 2026 12:59
The Crooked Lens
Thomas W Case said:
This limps with bruised clarity—half revelation, half hangover from existing too hard.
You’ve caught the world mid-stagger, and it feels honest in all its crooked angles.
February 22nd, 2026 08:52
Thomas W Case said:
This limps with bruised clarity—half revelation, half hangover from existing too hard.
You’ve caught the world mid-stagger, and it feels honest in all its crooked angles.
February 22nd, 2026 08:52
The Crooked Lens
Paul Bell said:
Yes I\'m never sure if the madness is in the sanity, or the sanity is in the madness, but the world has went to hell and at the moment there\'s no way back.
February 22nd, 2026 05:45
Paul Bell said:
Yes I\'m never sure if the madness is in the sanity, or the sanity is in the madness, but the world has went to hell and at the moment there\'s no way back.
February 22nd, 2026 05:45
The Crooked Lens
sorenbarrett said:
Deep insight into a world of perspectives a prism that reflects different colored light from different angles. It is in the eye of the perceiver that truth is proclaimed and time changes all. A lovely write so poetically done. Loved particularly the opening metaphor. A fave my friend
February 22nd, 2026 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
Deep insight into a world of perspectives a prism that reflects different colored light from different angles. It is in the eye of the perceiver that truth is proclaimed and time changes all. A lovely write so poetically done. Loved particularly the opening metaphor. A fave my friend
February 22nd, 2026 05:39
The Lazy Man\'s Gospel
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'ts a good shout, NafisaSB/
February 21st, 2026 05:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'ts a good shout, NafisaSB/
February 21st, 2026 05:10
Be Kind and Love Strawberries
sorenbarrett said:
And we are all thirsty Gray for that kindness and good humor for laughter and a feeling of being wanted, cared about and loved. Very nicely written my friend
February 21st, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
And we are all thirsty Gray for that kindness and good humor for laughter and a feeling of being wanted, cared about and loved. Very nicely written my friend
February 21st, 2026 04:25
The Futility of Small Battles
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Gray. The play of puppies like the play of children is so open and free. It is creative and fun to watch. Lovely
February 20th, 2026 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
Cute Gray. The play of puppies like the play of children is so open and free. It is creative and fun to watch. Lovely
February 20th, 2026 12:43
French Quarter Fatigue
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery in this poem Gray I can feel the stones on my feet. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
Great imagery in this poem Gray I can feel the stones on my feet. Well done
February 19th, 2026 12:27
The Yawn Spinner
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write , enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2026 12:29
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write , enjoyed the read
February 18th, 2026 12:29
The Yawn Spinner
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent! A brilliant display of poetic prowess. So well written I felt not only that I knew the man but was sitting there. Nicely done Gray and a fave
February 18th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent! A brilliant display of poetic prowess. So well written I felt not only that I knew the man but was sitting there. Nicely done Gray and a fave
February 18th, 2026 10:37
A Fool With Scars
sorenbarrett said:
Such great metaphors Gray yes a wise mane is a fool with scars
February 17th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Such great metaphors Gray yes a wise mane is a fool with scars
February 17th, 2026 13:40
Can\'t Kill the Flame
Thomas W Case said:
Hey, my friend, this grips me by the collar—gritty and unflinching, like walking barefoot on broken glass.
You’ve got that stubborn ember burning through the gray, refusing to die, and I feel every damn step.
February 17th, 2026 07:37
Thomas W Case said:
Hey, my friend, this grips me by the collar—gritty and unflinching, like walking barefoot on broken glass.
You’ve got that stubborn ember burning through the gray, refusing to die, and I feel every damn step.
February 17th, 2026 07:37
Can\'t Kill the Flame
Paul Bell said:
As humans, we persevere, no matter what it seems, even if life still kicks us down and down.
Martyrs to the cause as they lower you into the grave, though, tomorrow is another day.
February 16th, 2026 14:41
Paul Bell said:
As humans, we persevere, no matter what it seems, even if life still kicks us down and down.
Martyrs to the cause as they lower you into the grave, though, tomorrow is another day.
February 16th, 2026 14:41
Can\'t Kill the Flame
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses the struggles of life, the persistence of hope, and the inner strength that drives individuals to keep moving forward despite challenges and self-doubt.
February 16th, 2026 06:08
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses the struggles of life, the persistence of hope, and the inner strength that drives individuals to keep moving forward despite challenges and self-doubt.
February 16th, 2026 06:08
Can\'t Kill the Flame
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetic and well written with great images and metaphor it defines defiance in the face of hopelessness. Lovely and a fave Gray. Decided to post my poem that resembles in some way yours of yesterday
February 16th, 2026 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetic and well written with great images and metaphor it defines defiance in the face of hopelessness. Lovely and a fave Gray. Decided to post my poem that resembles in some way yours of yesterday
February 16th, 2026 05:14
Dimensions
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem speaks of three dimensions when we know there are more. I am working on a poem closely related, not sure if I will have it ready tomorrow but within a couple of days. Good write my friend
February 15th, 2026 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem speaks of three dimensions when we know there are more. I am working on a poem closely related, not sure if I will have it ready tomorrow but within a couple of days. Good write my friend
February 15th, 2026 11:53
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