Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Divine Circle
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray a poem that I am on board with all the way. Everything is connected in this world and helping the smallest is only helping ourselves.
March 11th, 2025 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray a poem that I am on board with all the way. Everything is connected in this world and helping the smallest is only helping ourselves.
March 11th, 2025 10:56
The Constant Flow
sorenbarrett said:
Well stated in good images the concept that time continues to flow regardless and that change is continuous. The feel of the poem was like water running in a river following its course abandoned to the currents following its destiny toward the sea. A lovely write
March 10th, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Well stated in good images the concept that time continues to flow regardless and that change is continuous. The feel of the poem was like water running in a river following its course abandoned to the currents following its destiny toward the sea. A lovely write
March 10th, 2025 04:50
Modern Capabilities
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one. One might also say parental hands that steer large trucks through crowded streets might steer their children through moral choices, Professionals that practice health care might teach their children the benefits of proper diet and exercise, parents that practice law might teach their children to keep it. Those that are in construction should teach their children how to build a future and those that are in lawn maintenance teach their children how to cut their own lawn. A good write Gray
March 9th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one. One might also say parental hands that steer large trucks through crowded streets might steer their children through moral choices, Professionals that practice health care might teach their children the benefits of proper diet and exercise, parents that practice law might teach their children to keep it. Those that are in construction should teach their children how to build a future and those that are in lawn maintenance teach their children how to cut their own lawn. A good write Gray
March 9th, 2025 04:18
The Final Hour
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the metaphors you have used here gray. With limited time left, I think we would all take a good look at our priorities and put them in order prompto.
March 8th, 2025 14:36
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the metaphors you have used here gray. With limited time left, I think we would all take a good look at our priorities and put them in order prompto.
March 8th, 2025 14:36
The Final Hour
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem. The last two lines resonated (time becomes an endless river when each drop is savored) A great question to which we should know the answer. Lovely
March 8th, 2025 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem. The last two lines resonated (time becomes an endless river when each drop is savored) A great question to which we should know the answer. Lovely
March 8th, 2025 11:27
Coffee With My Younger Self
Doggerel Dave said:
I believed that encounter - brilliantly imaginative.
March 7th, 2025 16:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I believed that encounter - brilliantly imaginative.
March 7th, 2025 16:13
Coffee With My Younger Self
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read meeting our younger self\'s, if we knew then what we know now, hopefully the passion is now remembered,really enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 14:05
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read meeting our younger self\'s, if we knew then what we know now, hopefully the passion is now remembered,really enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 14:05
Coffee With My Younger Self
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so matter of fact and everyday that speaks much deeper and delves into psychological depths. Lovely
March 7th, 2025 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so matter of fact and everyday that speaks much deeper and delves into psychological depths. Lovely
March 7th, 2025 13:17
What He Gave Me
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that only in our older age do we really appreciate what parents have done for us. A beautiful poem of looking back and the good fortune of still having that person with you. Lovely
March 6th, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that only in our older age do we really appreciate what parents have done for us. A beautiful poem of looking back and the good fortune of still having that person with you. Lovely
March 6th, 2025 03:36
Two Spirits Merging
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully you have worded this poem for your beloved Ramona. Perfectly lovely.
March 5th, 2025 19:41
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully you have worded this poem for your beloved Ramona. Perfectly lovely.
March 5th, 2025 19:41
Two Spirits Merging
Natalie Gladmir said:
A wonderful couple. Long life to you both and unfading feelings!
March 5th, 2025 17:03
Natalie Gladmir said:
A wonderful couple. Long life to you both and unfading feelings!
March 5th, 2025 17:03
Two Spirits Merging
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of union and of love well written and in good form
March 5th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of union and of love well written and in good form
March 5th, 2025 13:46
Stories in the Margins
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy of each person a book. The metaphor works well in this poem that is well worded and with great images. Nicely done
March 4th, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy of each person a book. The metaphor works well in this poem that is well worded and with great images. Nicely done
March 4th, 2025 11:29
The Day I Learned to Ride
whats write for me said:
What a wonderful memory Gray!
March 4th, 2025 06:40
whats write for me said:
What a wonderful memory Gray!
March 4th, 2025 06:40
The Day I Learned to Ride
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude! In a twinkling you\'ve hereby dredged from deep burial that day my daddy likewise removed the training wheels off that yellow Schwinn, and oh! How wonderfully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, exquisite poignancy. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 18:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude! In a twinkling you\'ve hereby dredged from deep burial that day my daddy likewise removed the training wheels off that yellow Schwinn, and oh! How wonderfully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, exquisite poignancy. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 18:07
The Day I Learned to Ride
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around a wonderful memory, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around a wonderful memory, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:13
The Day I Learned to Ride
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how I also remember that day. A great write so descriptive and well imaged. This seems a metaphor for many other times in life as well.
March 3rd, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how I also remember that day. A great write so descriptive and well imaged. This seems a metaphor for many other times in life as well.
March 3rd, 2025 05:56
Kitchen Demon
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and great in its neologism well done.
March 2nd, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and great in its neologism well done.
March 2nd, 2025 11:22
punctual predator
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several through the years and each just as demanding as the last. Independent too. A fun and nostalgic read for me.
March 1st, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several through the years and each just as demanding as the last. Independent too. A fun and nostalgic read for me.
March 1st, 2025 14:44
the lessons we swallow
Poetic Licence said:
We decide which way we go, enjoyed the read and the layout of the piece
February 28th, 2025 12:31
Poetic Licence said:
We decide which way we go, enjoyed the read and the layout of the piece
February 28th, 2025 12:31
the lessons we swallow
sorenbarrett said:
There is a positive side to every coin and even the most difficult has another side
February 28th, 2025 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
There is a positive side to every coin and even the most difficult has another side
February 28th, 2025 11:19
Grammar
whats write for me said:
Wow, Gray this is masterful. It tells the story of written word with grace and eloquence and merges it with speech effortlessly.
February 27th, 2025 09:24
whats write for me said:
Wow, Gray this is masterful. It tells the story of written word with grace and eloquence and merges it with speech effortlessly.
February 27th, 2025 09:24
The Heart of the Innocent
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and truth in its simplicity reveals the face of a child. May be a metaphor as well where we are all children with our own potential.
February 27th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and truth in its simplicity reveals the face of a child. May be a metaphor as well where we are all children with our own potential.
February 27th, 2025 05:10
Grammar
Cassie58 said:
I like your thoughts here concerning punctuation and grammar. Visual and nicely expressed. Have a good Thursday.
February 27th, 2025 03:09
Cassie58 said:
I like your thoughts here concerning punctuation and grammar. Visual and nicely expressed. Have a good Thursday.
February 27th, 2025 03:09
The Door Knob
whats write for me said:
Excellent writing Gray. The symbolism, imagery and craft.
February 26th, 2025 17:47
whats write for me said:
Excellent writing Gray. The symbolism, imagery and craft.
February 26th, 2025 17:47
Grammar
sorenbarrett said:
How difficult it must have been before punctuation and even before they separated words. A fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
How difficult it must have been before punctuation and even before they separated words. A fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:22
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