Comments received on poems by gray0328
First Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
This brought back memories long buried and the childhood innocence of the game and the electricity of the moment, the thrill and wishes and hope fulfilled amidst the background of others mirth made the poem a real moment. A fare for sure
June 14th, 2025 14:21
sorenbarrett said:
This brought back memories long buried and the childhood innocence of the game and the electricity of the moment, the thrill and wishes and hope fulfilled amidst the background of others mirth made the poem a real moment. A fare for sure
June 14th, 2025 14:21
Joan of Arc
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely penned Gray with power and good flow a tribute to a historical great whose name has lived on well beyond her days. A fave
June 13th, 2025 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely penned Gray with power and good flow a tribute to a historical great whose name has lived on well beyond her days. A fave
June 13th, 2025 12:55
The Fire Beneath the Stones
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Gray we all have a beast upon our back from time time. Well done
June 12th, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Gray we all have a beast upon our back from time time. Well done
June 12th, 2025 13:15
Crow\'s Descent
sorenbarrett said:
The poem in verse tells a great myth you have created with a moral. Well done Gray
June 11th, 2025 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
The poem in verse tells a great myth you have created with a moral. Well done Gray
June 11th, 2025 11:14
Vices
sorenbarrett said:
Gray words that have a familiar feel and read with power. Nicely written
June 10th, 2025 17:04
sorenbarrett said:
Gray words that have a familiar feel and read with power. Nicely written
June 10th, 2025 17:04
When You Left
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing someone. nicely written
June 9th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing someone. nicely written
June 9th, 2025 13:34
Drear Love
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go for the contradictions embodied in the penultimate stanza.
June 8th, 2025 16:57
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll go for the contradictions embodied in the penultimate stanza.
June 8th, 2025 16:57
Drear Love
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that seems a love letter to one gone. The last line caught my attention the most (a ghost I am too proud to bury) a powerful line
June 8th, 2025 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that seems a love letter to one gone. The last line caught my attention the most (a ghost I am too proud to bury) a powerful line
June 8th, 2025 12:21
Art Speaks in Tongues
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful explanation of what gives art meaning. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful explanation of what gives art meaning. Well done
June 3rd, 2025 12:08
take it all
Doggerel Dave said:
Serious advice embodied in this piece - complete reality. Clear head and \'hero\' doesn\'t exist within this frame. Subtle touch of irony to finish.
June 2nd, 2025 18:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Serious advice embodied in this piece - complete reality. Clear head and \'hero\' doesn\'t exist within this frame. Subtle touch of irony to finish.
June 2nd, 2025 18:44
Behind the Lattice
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich poetry which gained much greater depth when I found out who.
June 2nd, 2025 00:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich poetry which gained much greater depth when I found out who.
June 2nd, 2025 00:33
Behind the Lattice
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery woman or something else. Enigmatic, with great lines. Nicely written
June 1st, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery woman or something else. Enigmatic, with great lines. Nicely written
June 1st, 2025 13:12
Forgotten Hooves
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem about progress cast in the form of an animal. True it is as well a time when things were measured in horse power, when value was in how many horses it cost. A time now romanticized but at the time darkness and sweat. A noble beast with a somewhat less noble rider. Lovely poem
May 31st, 2025 11:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem about progress cast in the form of an animal. True it is as well a time when things were measured in horse power, when value was in how many horses it cost. A time now romanticized but at the time darkness and sweat. A noble beast with a somewhat less noble rider. Lovely poem
May 31st, 2025 11:08
My Pet Monkey Moses
Dan Williams said:
I think all of us are the desert, at least part of the time. Not sure who the monkey is though. Nice.
May 31st, 2025 01:04
Dan Williams said:
I think all of us are the desert, at least part of the time. Not sure who the monkey is though. Nice.
May 31st, 2025 01:04
Nobody\'s Kingdom
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed on the lack of humanity, care, compassion in today\'s society, we have become a dog eat dog world, some wonderful lines in this enjoyable read.
May 30th, 2025 10:22
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed on the lack of humanity, care, compassion in today\'s society, we have become a dog eat dog world, some wonderful lines in this enjoyable read.
May 30th, 2025 10:22
Nobody\'s Kingdom
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a poem of social commentary over a society that has lost its humanity and the last line is the kicker that sinks the nail home. Lovely and a fave
May 30th, 2025 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a poem of social commentary over a society that has lost its humanity and the last line is the kicker that sinks the nail home. Lovely and a fave
May 30th, 2025 10:15
My Pet Monkey Moses
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this well written entertaining read, thank you
May 29th, 2025 11:04
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this well written entertaining read, thank you
May 29th, 2025 11:04
My Pet Monkey Moses
sorenbarrett said:
Moses and he sleeps in a basket, parting peanut shells. Does he bring down plagues, give commandments follow a pillar of fire or eat manna, maybe banana. A fun read and endearing I hope he reaches the promised land.
May 29th, 2025 10:04
sorenbarrett said:
Moses and he sleeps in a basket, parting peanut shells. Does he bring down plagues, give commandments follow a pillar of fire or eat manna, maybe banana. A fun read and endearing I hope he reaches the promised land.
May 29th, 2025 10:04
My Pet Monkey Moses
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s too fun!!! It wouldn\'t be half so charming if you hadn\'t described him and his behaviors and your assessment to perfection so delightfully. Oh! I love it! I love him! Beautifully rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing!
May 29th, 2025 09:58
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s too fun!!! It wouldn\'t be half so charming if you hadn\'t described him and his behaviors and your assessment to perfection so delightfully. Oh! I love it! I love him! Beautifully rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing!
May 29th, 2025 09:58
The Carwash
sorenbarrett said:
A good description of a carwash indeed and it might well be of a birth as well. Nicely done
May 28th, 2025 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
A good description of a carwash indeed and it might well be of a birth as well. Nicely done
May 28th, 2025 11:17
The Carwash
Cheeky Missy said:
My subscription more or less demanding this daily ritual, you\'ve rendered it so deliciously poetic I can\'t resist the indulgence. Superbly rendered with exquisite imagery and a fascinating poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 11:01
Cheeky Missy said:
My subscription more or less demanding this daily ritual, you\'ve rendered it so deliciously poetic I can\'t resist the indulgence. Superbly rendered with exquisite imagery and a fascinating poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 11:01
unshaken
sorenbarrett said:
If I did not know better I would think that you were speaking of God. A beautiful deference to a higher power. All seeing, all knowing and all powerful. Nature maybe?
May 27th, 2025 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
If I did not know better I would think that you were speaking of God. A beautiful deference to a higher power. All seeing, all knowing and all powerful. Nature maybe?
May 27th, 2025 13:58
Memorial Day ❤️
sorenbarrett said:
A great message to the fallen and those that returned with scars physical and mental as well as those others that served and by the grace of Tod escaped unscathed. Nicely done and a fave
May 26th, 2025 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great message to the fallen and those that returned with scars physical and mental as well as those others that served and by the grace of Tod escaped unscathed. Nicely done and a fave
May 26th, 2025 14:11
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