Comments received on poems by gray0328
Mary Had a Flea Circus
sorenbarrett said:
Normally for a poem that bounces off another I wouldn\'t give a fave but this made me smile and was so well written it deserves one. A fine write Gray
October 17th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
Normally for a poem that bounces off another I wouldn\'t give a fave but this made me smile and was so well written it deserves one. A fine write Gray
October 17th, 2025 12:12
The Art of Water
Dan Williams said:
Mother and monster indeed. You have nicely captured something people often fail to see, understand. Life came from the sea.
October 16th, 2025 23:19
Dan Williams said:
Mother and monster indeed. You have nicely captured something people often fail to see, understand. Life came from the sea.
October 16th, 2025 23:19
The Potter\'s Hands
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel there\'s a religious element here I cannot relate to. However the sensation that I was formed by forces I could not control comes across clearly and truthfully.
Thanks for addressing it in that way.
October 16th, 2025 17:56
Doggerel Dave said:
I feel there\'s a religious element here I cannot relate to. However the sensation that I was formed by forces I could not control comes across clearly and truthfully.
Thanks for addressing it in that way.
October 16th, 2025 17:56
The Potter\'s Hands
sorenbarrett said:
We all come from clay and are shaped by our biology and environment, hands that are not always gentle. A telling poem. Nicely done
October 16th, 2025 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
We all come from clay and are shaped by our biology and environment, hands that are not always gentle. A telling poem. Nicely done
October 16th, 2025 12:10
The Art of Water
NinjaGirl said:
Water is really beautiful--it\'s always nature that amazes us, isn\'t it?
October 15th, 2025 22:59
NinjaGirl said:
Water is really beautiful--it\'s always nature that amazes us, isn\'t it?
October 15th, 2025 22:59
The Art of Water
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed this - captured the hypnotic character of water in it\'s many forms.
October 15th, 2025 16:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed this - captured the hypnotic character of water in it\'s many forms.
October 15th, 2025 16:04
The Art of Water
sorenbarrett said:
The Tao speaks of the qualities of water being soft and yet able to cut stone taking any form difficult to hold, Hinduism has Kali with two faces the mother and the destroyer and so is water. Birth of all life and taker of it. A wonderful poem Gray
October 15th, 2025 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
The Tao speaks of the qualities of water being soft and yet able to cut stone taking any form difficult to hold, Hinduism has Kali with two faces the mother and the destroyer and so is water. Birth of all life and taker of it. A wonderful poem Gray
October 15th, 2025 10:26
Glaze on Cracked Pottery
sorenbarrett said:
Slick deception painted over lies whether a car sail of a marriage vow all the same covered rot. Well done Gray
October 14th, 2025 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
Slick deception painted over lies whether a car sail of a marriage vow all the same covered rot. Well done Gray
October 14th, 2025 13:41
The Switch
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here Gray. The connection made by the action of closing the switch. As you began I first had visions of an electric chair and what a shocking experience, jolted into another life. Nicely done
October 13th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here Gray. The connection made by the action of closing the switch. As you began I first had visions of an electric chair and what a shocking experience, jolted into another life. Nicely done
October 13th, 2025 04:13
The Secret Treasure Trove
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of childhood provides joys and imagination that age erases leaving us looking at a blank ceiling drinking cold coffee. A wonderful write Gray and a fave
October 12th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of childhood provides joys and imagination that age erases leaving us looking at a blank ceiling drinking cold coffee. A wonderful write Gray and a fave
October 12th, 2025 06:19
Reciprocal Mistrust
Poetic Licence said:
That has a sense of isolation from a group who are not prepared to engage with anyone who do not have or follow their beliefs, there minds are closed. Enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 15:07
Poetic Licence said:
That has a sense of isolation from a group who are not prepared to engage with anyone who do not have or follow their beliefs, there minds are closed. Enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 15:07
Reciprocal Mistrust
sorenbarrett said:
Talk about feeling not a part of a group. Here people already have their minds made up and convinced to the point of not hearing or seeing what they don\'t want to believe. Nicely worded there is a deep feeling of alienation in this poem
October 11th, 2025 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Talk about feeling not a part of a group. Here people already have their minds made up and convinced to the point of not hearing or seeing what they don\'t want to believe. Nicely worded there is a deep feeling of alienation in this poem
October 11th, 2025 11:10
Reciprocal Mistrust
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write much enjoyed
October 11th, 2025 10:25
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a fine write much enjoyed
October 11th, 2025 10:25
Suddenly
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines of this poem that enchants me the most the image is perfect (All too soon this moment will rot dry under the sun like old fruit) And how so in so many ways. A fave my friend
October 10th, 2025 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines of this poem that enchants me the most the image is perfect (All too soon this moment will rot dry under the sun like old fruit) And how so in so many ways. A fave my friend
October 10th, 2025 11:00
Echo Chamber
sorenbarrett said:
So many symbols here there is a foreboding feel to this poem. Nicely crafted it speaks in a whispered voice. Loved it and a fave
October 9th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
So many symbols here there is a foreboding feel to this poem. Nicely crafted it speaks in a whispered voice. Loved it and a fave
October 9th, 2025 04:22
Blind Date
sorenbarrett said:
So many differences look for the commonalities. a lovely poem of coming to terms and finally friends. Loved it Gray so well told
October 8th, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
So many differences look for the commonalities. a lovely poem of coming to terms and finally friends. Loved it Gray so well told
October 8th, 2025 10:23
Unexamined Lives
NafisaSB said:
you have raised some issues here that demand a response - but will it come, or will we just keep fooling ourselves
October 8th, 2025 01:00
NafisaSB said:
you have raised some issues here that demand a response - but will it come, or will we just keep fooling ourselves
October 8th, 2025 01:00
Christ\'s Gentle Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what it is to be what one professes but seldom acts upon. Lovely Gray
October 6th, 2025 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of what it is to be what one professes but seldom acts upon. Lovely Gray
October 6th, 2025 14:30
Snapchat Hieroglyphics of Connection
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that emotes on a different level another dimension. Technological graphic grief. Well done Gray
October 5th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that emotes on a different level another dimension. Technological graphic grief. Well done Gray
October 5th, 2025 05:09
Unexamined Lives
Paul Bell said:
Yes, welcome to the new world where you\'ll never retire, and the graveyards are full up.
Bound to be some politician who will change it though.
October 4th, 2025 04:16
Paul Bell said:
Yes, welcome to the new world where you\'ll never retire, and the graveyards are full up.
Bound to be some politician who will change it though.
October 4th, 2025 04:16
Unexamined Lives
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A great write much enjoyed
October 4th, 2025 04:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A great write much enjoyed
October 4th, 2025 04:04
Unexamined Lives
sorenbarrett said:
This one was brilliant a Dillon type style to this poem (Bob not Thomas) It has such wonderful metaphoric associations and allegorical allegations. A poem that one has to think about to enjoy fully. A definite fave my friend
October 4th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This one was brilliant a Dillon type style to this poem (Bob not Thomas) It has such wonderful metaphoric associations and allegorical allegations. A poem that one has to think about to enjoy fully. A definite fave my friend
October 4th, 2025 03:50
Ambassadors of Light
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this seems to me a poem of religious proclamation of faith and belief. Well said
October 3rd, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this seems to me a poem of religious proclamation of faith and belief. Well said
October 3rd, 2025 11:43
the residue of living
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of memory and the significance of imperfections as markers of lived experiences. It emphasizes that the remnants of the past, represented by watermarks and smudges, are not to be erased but cherished as evidence of one\'s existence and emotional journey.
October 3rd, 2025 07:03
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of memory and the significance of imperfections as markers of lived experiences. It emphasizes that the remnants of the past, represented by watermarks and smudges, are not to be erased but cherished as evidence of one\'s existence and emotional journey.
October 3rd, 2025 07:03
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