Comments received on poems by gray0328
Assets of the Soul
Dan Williams said:
A fine list of attributes we all should aspire to. Well done.
October 27th, 2024 23:06
Dan Williams said:
A fine list of attributes we all should aspire to. Well done.
October 27th, 2024 23:06
My Father, Scholar of the Unwritten Halls
sorenbarrett said:
Ivory walls are not needed for knowledge they are just a right of passage for a job. A great tribute to your father. Nicely done
October 27th, 2024 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Ivory walls are not needed for knowledge they are just a right of passage for a job. A great tribute to your father. Nicely done
October 27th, 2024 06:10
Assets of the Soul
Doggerel Dave said:
Nicely placed as a personal experience and not a lecture.
Great with insights on every line.
October 26th, 2024 15:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Nicely placed as a personal experience and not a lecture.
Great with insights on every line.
October 26th, 2024 15:13
Assets of the Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words that tell of the human spirit in its daily journey Loved it
October 26th, 2024 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words that tell of the human spirit in its daily journey Loved it
October 26th, 2024 14:23
Assets of the Soul
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love your title, it\'s quite genius, then each line, how to recognise one\'s inner self and accept each flaw how ever big or small, humans are complicated but reading this makes it seem all so understandable. A wonderful piece of poetry. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 12:31
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love your title, it\'s quite genius, then each line, how to recognise one\'s inner self and accept each flaw how ever big or small, humans are complicated but reading this makes it seem all so understandable. A wonderful piece of poetry. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 12:31
Assets of the Soul
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, VERY lovely. Trickling down the page almost like the sound my tea gives when I\'m pouring our cups of tea which my brother calls calming to hear, this is gently rendered with wonderfully tasteful imagery and a clinging, haunting poignancy refusing to let the reader simply walk away. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 12:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, VERY lovely. Trickling down the page almost like the sound my tea gives when I\'m pouring our cups of tea which my brother calls calming to hear, this is gently rendered with wonderfully tasteful imagery and a clinging, haunting poignancy refusing to let the reader simply walk away. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 12:18
The Consolation of Boethius
Parisab said:
Sounds like he is free at all cost…Your work is always powerful, sir….
October 26th, 2024 10:29
Parisab said:
Sounds like he is free at all cost…Your work is always powerful, sir….
October 26th, 2024 10:29
The Consolation of Boethius
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of the persistance of the human spirit. Wonderfully worded it raises the spirt of the reader. Lovely
October 25th, 2024 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of the persistance of the human spirit. Wonderfully worded it raises the spirt of the reader. Lovely
October 25th, 2024 12:26
The New Hip-Hop Hooray
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure my back can take it - but still.....
October 24th, 2024 08:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure my back can take it - but still.....
October 24th, 2024 08:37
The New Hip-Hop Hooray
sorenbarrett said:
A very encouraging write where the spirit never ages only the body. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A very encouraging write where the spirit never ages only the body. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 05:57
Housecleaning Mediation
Doggerel Dave said:
You put me to shame until I read your note above.
October 23rd, 2024 21:54
Doggerel Dave said:
You put me to shame until I read your note above.
October 23rd, 2024 21:54
Housecleaning Mediation
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a ritual but a metaphor well written in verse
October 23rd, 2024 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a ritual but a metaphor well written in verse
October 23rd, 2024 12:53
What Makes a Hero
sorenbarrett said:
Unsung heros that do for others that which no others see. A most beautiful write
October 22nd, 2024 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
Unsung heros that do for others that which no others see. A most beautiful write
October 22nd, 2024 08:45
The Weight of Unforgiven Sins
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt is a heavy burden and heavier still is self deception. We all carry the later to some degree or other but some carry much more. Nicely written
October 20th, 2024 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt is a heavy burden and heavier still is self deception. We all carry the later to some degree or other but some carry much more. Nicely written
October 20th, 2024 06:33
The Last Voyage
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a story I\'ve never imagined. Heard of wolves breaking in to a winter bound train and lions eating railroad workers in Africa, bears breaking into cabins and igloos but never a ship, only whales and sharks at sea. Gripping read
October 19th, 2024 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a story I\'ve never imagined. Heard of wolves breaking in to a winter bound train and lions eating railroad workers in Africa, bears breaking into cabins and igloos but never a ship, only whales and sharks at sea. Gripping read
October 19th, 2024 10:50
A Dod Named Tension
tallisman said:
Strangely haunting quality…good piece!
October 17th, 2024 15:33
tallisman said:
Strangely haunting quality…good piece!
October 17th, 2024 15:33
A Dod Named Tension
sorenbarrett said:
Tension was a good name and serves as a good metaphor. Reminds me of an old dog I used to have.
October 17th, 2024 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
Tension was a good name and serves as a good metaphor. Reminds me of an old dog I used to have.
October 17th, 2024 11:46
The Invisible Bars
NinjaGirl said:
Live in the comfort of lies or fight for the satisfaction of truth?
October 14th, 2024 21:14
NinjaGirl said:
Live in the comfort of lies or fight for the satisfaction of truth?
October 14th, 2024 21:14
The Invisible Bars
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s marketing for you. Plenty of that now days
October 14th, 2024 17:50
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s marketing for you. Plenty of that now days
October 14th, 2024 17:50
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