Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Art of Disappearing
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I have had young children and can identify this is so cute it deserves a fave just for how child like this is. It is lovely
November 7th, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I have had young children and can identify this is so cute it deserves a fave just for how child like this is. It is lovely
November 7th, 2025 13:00
Crucified Acres
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray
\"billboards rise taller than the hills
casting fake shadows on cracked soil \"
The image painted is not pretty but the poem is. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray
\"billboards rise taller than the hills
casting fake shadows on cracked soil \"
The image painted is not pretty but the poem is. A fave my friend
November 6th, 2025 05:47
Heavy Pebbles
sorenbarrett said:
A fist full of great sayings all original most lovely
November 5th, 2025 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
A fist full of great sayings all original most lovely
November 5th, 2025 11:46
Letting Others Voluntarily Evolve L-O-V-E
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
November 5th, 2025 10:02
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
November 5th, 2025 10:02
Letting Others Voluntarily Evolve L-O-V-E
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray I too take water to be the ultimate in as the Tao says being soft the best to defeat the hard. Well written Gray
November 4th, 2025 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Gray I too take water to be the ultimate in as the Tao says being soft the best to defeat the hard. Well written Gray
November 4th, 2025 13:53
The Broodmother
sorenbarrett said:
It is the wording that gives a dark feel to this poem and that gets the fave. Very nicely done (She spins shadowed thread, The wind sneers through jaws of forest teeth, Her laughter cracks the spine of the wind)
November 3rd, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is the wording that gives a dark feel to this poem and that gets the fave. Very nicely done (She spins shadowed thread, The wind sneers through jaws of forest teeth, Her laughter cracks the spine of the wind)
November 3rd, 2025 11:55
small town nights
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice. I turned 60 this year, so I still vaguely remember… thanks for reminding me and painting a nice picture with words.
Cheers,
AHB
November 2nd, 2025 21:52
A.H. Browning said:
Very nice. I turned 60 this year, so I still vaguely remember… thanks for reminding me and painting a nice picture with words.
Cheers,
AHB
November 2nd, 2025 21:52
small town nights
2781 said:
Six in the car, and one in the boot, as I remember.
November 2nd, 2025 07:50
2781 said:
Six in the car, and one in the boot, as I remember.
November 2nd, 2025 07:50
small town nights
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia breeds in this poem of a time gone by. Not only the setting but of a time of rebellion not outgrown but transformed into a modern metamorphosis in a techno world of streaming where mischief takes other forms. Love the flow of this poem Gray. It took me back to another time.
November 2nd, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia breeds in this poem of a time gone by. Not only the setting but of a time of rebellion not outgrown but transformed into a modern metamorphosis in a techno world of streaming where mischief takes other forms. Love the flow of this poem Gray. It took me back to another time.
November 2nd, 2025 05:17
Borrowed Cart
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this one draws vivid images in the mind painting not only a picture but a metaphor of life itself. Most lovely it is a fave my friend
November 1st, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this one draws vivid images in the mind painting not only a picture but a metaphor of life itself. Most lovely it is a fave my friend
November 1st, 2025 06:21
Currency of Blood
sorenbarrett said:
Religious where debt seems to mean original sin carried and paid by a savior\'s ransom. Well done
October 31st, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Religious where debt seems to mean original sin carried and paid by a savior\'s ransom. Well done
October 31st, 2025 12:57
Repurposed
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last line of this poem (Beauty grows fierce in unexpected soil) Very nicely written Gray
October 30th, 2025 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
I love the last line of this poem (Beauty grows fierce in unexpected soil) Very nicely written Gray
October 30th, 2025 12:36
The Shape of Boundaries
sorenbarrett said:
It hurts only to heal, not wound. A great line. A poem that makes deep sense. Very well done.
October 29th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
It hurts only to heal, not wound. A great line. A poem that makes deep sense. Very well done.
October 29th, 2025 11:33
Walking in Love
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic profession of trust and faith. This poem speaks of belief in a higher power that will sustain and care for the follower. Nicely said Gray
October 28th, 2025 10:24
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic profession of trust and faith. This poem speaks of belief in a higher power that will sustain and care for the follower. Nicely said Gray
October 28th, 2025 10:24
Chronic Diorama
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of life as a movie blurred in colors. It does seem that way as time flashes by. Nice write Gray
October 27th, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view of life as a movie blurred in colors. It does seem that way as time flashes by. Nice write Gray
October 27th, 2025 20:05
the invitation
sorenbarrett said:
I would count this as spiritual not religious. A poem of being one with nature and all around us and knowing that we are part of it all. A lovely writ Gray
October 26th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
I would count this as spiritual not religious. A poem of being one with nature and all around us and knowing that we are part of it all. A lovely writ Gray
October 26th, 2025 05:15
The Shepherd of My Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Here I see unconditional love and forgiveness that steadies the wanderer and provides a guiding star. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
Here I see unconditional love and forgiveness that steadies the wanderer and provides a guiding star. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 12:06
the obstinacy of creative work
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful work Gray. To break the rules one must know them. Picasso could paint realism but chose not to. When creating a master bonsai tree the creator must know all the rules before he can break them. Loved it
October 24th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful work Gray. To break the rules one must know them. Picasso could paint realism but chose not to. When creating a master bonsai tree the creator must know all the rules before he can break them. Loved it
October 24th, 2025 11:25
Through the Cracks He Shines
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and most upbeat one might say spiritual. Through the cracks and fissures of decay and disregard beams light and beauty. Hope shines eternal. Lovely
October 23rd, 2025 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and most upbeat one might say spiritual. Through the cracks and fissures of decay and disregard beams light and beauty. Hope shines eternal. Lovely
October 23rd, 2025 06:35
Definance in the Bottle
coracaodacripta said:
I resonate with this, a real wake up call.
October 22nd, 2025 14:59
coracaodacripta said:
I resonate with this, a real wake up call.
October 22nd, 2025 14:59
Definance in the Bottle
Paul Bell said:
The drink will break you, rich, poor, it doesn\'t care.
Easily accessible, daring that one last drink that makes you lie to yourself pretending you\'re in control.
October 22nd, 2025 13:36
Paul Bell said:
The drink will break you, rich, poor, it doesn\'t care.
Easily accessible, daring that one last drink that makes you lie to yourself pretending you\'re in control.
October 22nd, 2025 13:36
Definance in the Bottle
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strong words dark and gritty well done
October 22nd, 2025 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of strong words dark and gritty well done
October 22nd, 2025 12:24
Mutual Confidence
sorenbarrett said:
I was going to say some great lines in this poem but that would be a lie. The whole poem is full of great lines Gray a fave
October 21st, 2025 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
I was going to say some great lines in this poem but that would be a lie. The whole poem is full of great lines Gray a fave
October 21st, 2025 11:27
The Weight of Gold
Doggerel Dave said:
Precicely - very heavy stuff, gold. Bound to weigh you down to the point of non existence.
October 18th, 2025 17:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Precicely - very heavy stuff, gold. Bound to weigh you down to the point of non existence.
October 18th, 2025 17:13
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