Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Lonely Reflex by the Park
rin said:
lost yet not alone
I find these words very impressive and meaningful. There are many other impressive words, but it is impossible to describe them in one word, so I have chosen only one.
December 7th, 2024 10:30
rin said:
lost yet not alone
I find these words very impressive and meaningful. There are many other impressive words, but it is impossible to describe them in one word, so I have chosen only one.
December 7th, 2024 10:30
The Promise of Happiness
sorenbarrett said:
Promises depend upon who makes them. It is like truth. It depends upon how you interpret it most interesting poem. It gave me thought.
December 4th, 2024 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
Promises depend upon who makes them. It is like truth. It depends upon how you interpret it most interesting poem. It gave me thought.
December 4th, 2024 18:48
Clue: The Whodunit Quest
Cassie58 said:
This poem brings out the detective in me. It also brings me very happy memories of family games and get togethers. Loved the character names in Clue. Thanks for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 03:05
Cassie58 said:
This poem brings out the detective in me. It also brings me very happy memories of family games and get togethers. Loved the character names in Clue. Thanks for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 03:05
The Pleasure of Righteous Anger
Mutley Ravishes said:
Bullseye! And wanting to inflict pain on others to \"get them back\" for \"causing\" \"our\" pain!
December 3rd, 2024 18:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
Bullseye! And wanting to inflict pain on others to \"get them back\" for \"causing\" \"our\" pain!
December 3rd, 2024 18:10
Clue: The Whodunit Quest
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever piece of writing, i really enjoyed it
December 3rd, 2024 17:50
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever piece of writing, i really enjoyed it
December 3rd, 2024 17:50
Clue: The Whodunit Quest
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the game well and not just the game but the application of this to life itself. We all form opinions as we go along and sometimes they are true and sometimes not. Very nicely written
December 3rd, 2024 17:04
sorenbarrett said:
I remember the game well and not just the game but the application of this to life itself. We all form opinions as we go along and sometimes they are true and sometimes not. Very nicely written
December 3rd, 2024 17:04
White Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully worded this poem drips with wonderful images and lines.
December 1st, 2024 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautifully worded this poem drips with wonderful images and lines.
December 1st, 2024 19:55
White Rain
TobaniNataiella said:
i like this poem, it stirs the imagination, Thank you
December 1st, 2024 13:28
TobaniNataiella said:
i like this poem, it stirs the imagination, Thank you
December 1st, 2024 13:28
Sunlit Waltz
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is there for those that wish to see it. In this poem it is expressed in all its glory and simplicity
November 29th, 2024 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beauty is there for those that wish to see it. In this poem it is expressed in all its glory and simplicity
November 29th, 2024 16:21
Quick Response
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a creepy, kind of surreal feel of a dystopia where barcodes are all that is needed. Very nicely, composed and constructed.
November 27th, 2024 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a creepy, kind of surreal feel of a dystopia where barcodes are all that is needed. Very nicely, composed and constructed.
November 27th, 2024 17:01
Coal Black Night
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about the mystery and darkness of night both in the physical and emotional sense nicely done
November 26th, 2024 18:28
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about the mystery and darkness of night both in the physical and emotional sense nicely done
November 26th, 2024 18:28
Returned If Defective
sorenbarrett said:
There are layers of meaning to this poem, and they extend to all types of relationships in our society. Although this reads has something from the past, it remains in the present even more so. A very strong metaphor here.
November 25th, 2024 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
There are layers of meaning to this poem, and they extend to all types of relationships in our society. Although this reads has something from the past, it remains in the present even more so. A very strong metaphor here.
November 25th, 2024 05:43
Oology Spring
Cassie58 said:
Really nice poetry. I love the natural environment. Time well spent studying our avian friends.
November 22nd, 2024 15:11
Cassie58 said:
Really nice poetry. I love the natural environment. Time well spent studying our avian friends.
November 22nd, 2024 15:11
Oology Spring
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful corner of nature and I also love birds nicely worded, and well done
November 22nd, 2024 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful corner of nature and I also love birds nicely worded, and well done
November 22nd, 2024 12:59
Dust-Covered Corner
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with haunting qualities life climbs from the shadows and emerges out of the dust. What we think we have put away lives on. Very well written
November 21st, 2024 23:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with haunting qualities life climbs from the shadows and emerges out of the dust. What we think we have put away lives on. Very well written
November 21st, 2024 23:02
Dust-Covered Corner
Cassie58 said:
Memories and quite lovely ones brought to life in the dusky light of an old shed. Beautiful poetry and fine description. Much enjoyed.
November 21st, 2024 13:48
Cassie58 said:
Memories and quite lovely ones brought to life in the dusky light of an old shed. Beautiful poetry and fine description. Much enjoyed.
November 21st, 2024 13:48
The Wise Fool
sorenbarrett said:
I Faved this poem for the sake of the last two stanzas. They are brilliant and shine like poetic diamonds.
November 20th, 2024 20:14
sorenbarrett said:
I Faved this poem for the sake of the last two stanzas. They are brilliant and shine like poetic diamonds.
November 20th, 2024 20:14
The Sound of Certainty
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that nowadays we are guided by the slogans and advertising of major dollars. Like sheep, we follow some believe others feel helpless. Most interesting write. Well, done
November 19th, 2024 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that nowadays we are guided by the slogans and advertising of major dollars. Like sheep, we follow some believe others feel helpless. Most interesting write. Well, done
November 19th, 2024 14:08
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