Comments received on poems by gray0328
Without You
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. You take the reader into the scene.
August 2nd, 2025 22:10
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. You take the reader into the scene.
August 2nd, 2025 22:10
Without You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection following loss. Nicely penned Gray and with a somber tone
August 1st, 2025 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection following loss. Nicely penned Gray and with a somber tone
August 1st, 2025 13:41
The Cloak of Decency
Doggerel Dave said:
The descriptor/aphorism or whatever \'Manners maketh the man\' could only be attached to no one I wish to be anywhere near.
Well writ, Sir.
July 31st, 2025 23:39
Doggerel Dave said:
The descriptor/aphorism or whatever \'Manners maketh the man\' could only be attached to no one I wish to be anywhere near.
Well writ, Sir.
July 31st, 2025 23:39
The Cloak of Decency
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has metaphor, symbolism and flow that makes it tell its story in disguise. Lovely
July 31st, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has metaphor, symbolism and flow that makes it tell its story in disguise. Lovely
July 31st, 2025 13:08
Your Face is the Roadmap
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, reminds me of my grandad, a face that told a thousand stories, so lived in, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 13:40
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, reminds me of my grandad, a face that told a thousand stories, so lived in, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 13:40
Your Face is the Roadmap
sorenbarrett said:
A physical map etched in flesh. Our faces tell of our journeys. Nicely written Gray
July 30th, 2025 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
A physical map etched in flesh. Our faces tell of our journeys. Nicely written Gray
July 30th, 2025 10:46
hope is the thing
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the last thing to die. A lovely poem so nicely worded it cries out to the reader in a lullaby. Well done Gray
July 28th, 2025 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the last thing to die. A lovely poem so nicely worded it cries out to the reader in a lullaby. Well done Gray
July 28th, 2025 15:29
my brain is a busy city
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid characterization of a busy mind is over crowded and moving too fast. Nicely written Gray.
July 27th, 2025 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid characterization of a busy mind is over crowded and moving too fast. Nicely written Gray.
July 27th, 2025 08:23
here comes the bus
sorenbarrett said:
We all are acculturated into our epoch and culture. Memories of stone worn by time. A lovely snapshot of the past etched in the mind. Nicely done Gray
July 26th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
We all are acculturated into our epoch and culture. Memories of stone worn by time. A lovely snapshot of the past etched in the mind. Nicely done Gray
July 26th, 2025 05:47
marvelous nature
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written Gray this peace paints wonderful pictures and is well worded to convey settings familiar but never traveled. Yes all nature contains its story and way. Lovely
July 24th, 2025 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written Gray this peace paints wonderful pictures and is well worded to convey settings familiar but never traveled. Yes all nature contains its story and way. Lovely
July 24th, 2025 12:22
black reel
sorenbarrett said:
This one is a gem Gray wonderful lines and the one that was most powerful closed it out in the last two lines.
this is the cruelty of the earth
to erase what our hearts hold closest
July 23rd, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
This one is a gem Gray wonderful lines and the one that was most powerful closed it out in the last two lines.
this is the cruelty of the earth
to erase what our hearts hold closest
July 23rd, 2025 11:23
The Captive of Captivity
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical images abound in this poem of heaven, hell, death and afterlife. Very nicely worded it rings with poetic ferver. Loved it Gray
July 21st, 2025 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical images abound in this poem of heaven, hell, death and afterlife. Very nicely worded it rings with poetic ferver. Loved it Gray
July 21st, 2025 12:51
A Factotum\'s Call
sorenbarrett said:
Intricate word weaving in this poem rhyme and meter melt into a blended piece of art. Very nicely done Gray and a fave
July 20th, 2025 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Intricate word weaving in this poem rhyme and meter melt into a blended piece of art. Very nicely done Gray and a fave
July 20th, 2025 04:19
midsummer\'s night
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely
Metaphors highly praiseworthy....
July 18th, 2025 09:15
Priya Tomar said:
Very lovely
Metaphors highly praiseworthy....
July 18th, 2025 09:15
The Clock\'s Whisper
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains elements of routine daily life that to some become mundane and to others give the structure that provides security and on this treadmill of life we wonder where are we going, where have we been and what is the purpose. A most poignant write
July 17th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains elements of routine daily life that to some become mundane and to others give the structure that provides security and on this treadmill of life we wonder where are we going, where have we been and what is the purpose. A most poignant write
July 17th, 2025 04:46
they came in silence
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem of fear and nightmares now real. Where freedom lies on the ground for years we fought the Nazis then the Communists now we use their tools to build what we call freedom.
July 16th, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem of fear and nightmares now real. Where freedom lies on the ground for years we fought the Nazis then the Communists now we use their tools to build what we call freedom.
July 16th, 2025 08:46
Inked Prayers
sorenbarrett said:
Have no tattoos but this poem speaks volumes of verse etched on skin. A lovely poem Gray and a fave
July 15th, 2025 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
Have no tattoos but this poem speaks volumes of verse etched on skin. A lovely poem Gray and a fave
July 15th, 2025 10:52
Fortunate Isles
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetically worded Gray a romantic and sensual poem a fave
July 14th, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetically worded Gray a romantic and sensual poem a fave
July 14th, 2025 10:05
the dungeon within
sorenbarrett said:
Compartmentalization to hide from oneself what is not acceptable. A deep dive into the psyche. Nicely written Gray
July 13th, 2025 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
Compartmentalization to hide from oneself what is not acceptable. A deep dive into the psyche. Nicely written Gray
July 13th, 2025 05:13
God is Not a Cosmic Bellboy
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have hit it on the head by stepping on toes. In a world that feels entitled you have pointed out that things do not come that way. A powerful piece that pulls no punches and tells it as it is. A fave Oh by the way that will cost you ten Hail Marys and five Our Fathers.
July 12th, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have hit it on the head by stepping on toes. In a world that feels entitled you have pointed out that things do not come that way. A powerful piece that pulls no punches and tells it as it is. A fave Oh by the way that will cost you ten Hail Marys and five Our Fathers.
July 12th, 2025 05:03
the hunger
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this pie of a poem. I wonder who will savor its meaning. There are those that do and those that expect to be taken care of. Those that turn nature in their favor and those that expect entitlement. Nature serves the pie and she is just. A fave Gray
July 11th, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this pie of a poem. I wonder who will savor its meaning. There are those that do and those that expect to be taken care of. Those that turn nature in their favor and those that expect entitlement. Nature serves the pie and she is just. A fave Gray
July 11th, 2025 09:55
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