Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Mind is a Slingshot
sorenbarrett said:
Brain over brawn seems the message. It is true in most situations and very well stated in this poem. Well done.
September 18th, 2025 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Brain over brawn seems the message. It is true in most situations and very well stated in this poem. Well done.
September 18th, 2025 13:20
If I Fall Silent
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is deeply contemplative and it explores themes of silence, loss, and unspoken histories. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:36
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is deeply contemplative and it explores themes of silence, loss, and unspoken histories. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:36
If I Fall Silent
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in this poem Gray things unsaid lie at the heart of this work. A lovely write that digs deep into the mind and memory of what could have been and what should have been said. Lovely a fave
September 17th, 2025 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in this poem Gray things unsaid lie at the heart of this work. A lovely write that digs deep into the mind and memory of what could have been and what should have been said. Lovely a fave
September 17th, 2025 07:15
Open Door
sorenbarrett said:
This seems an alternate dimension through which dreams are born. Nicely done
September 16th, 2025 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
This seems an alternate dimension through which dreams are born. Nicely done
September 16th, 2025 13:50
When We Are Apart
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic descriptors of feeling the loss of another. Nicely written Gray
September 15th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic descriptors of feeling the loss of another. Nicely written Gray
September 15th, 2025 05:17
Connection Lost
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I had to pause and think about this one. The image is clear and I have been there on hold waiting for reception to be restored. A most frustrating experience, yet there is deeper meaning here as we watch life itself and reception goes down. The expected and predictable become unknown. A most mind provoking poem
September 14th, 2025 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I had to pause and think about this one. The image is clear and I have been there on hold waiting for reception to be restored. A most frustrating experience, yet there is deeper meaning here as we watch life itself and reception goes down. The expected and predictable become unknown. A most mind provoking poem
September 14th, 2025 08:12
The Pause
sorenbarrett said:
Gray these are beautiful poetic lines that speak prophetically of our time. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
Gray these are beautiful poetic lines that speak prophetically of our time. Nicely penned
September 13th, 2025 10:28
Stuck Between Floors
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s vagueness adds to the anxiety implied in it. We all remember differently even when going through the same experience at the same time in the same place. Many thoughts come with this posting on a 9/11 day as well. Implication and vagueness make this poem very powerful a fave
September 11th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem\'s vagueness adds to the anxiety implied in it. We all remember differently even when going through the same experience at the same time in the same place. Many thoughts come with this posting on a 9/11 day as well. Implication and vagueness make this poem very powerful a fave
September 11th, 2025 04:27
Remembering the Towers and the Ashes
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice and timely Gray a wonderful write for the times when memory falters and hope should remain.
September 10th, 2025 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice and timely Gray a wonderful write for the times when memory falters and hope should remain.
September 10th, 2025 13:21
The Herd of Springboks
sorenbarrett said:
So well imaged and in poetic form this poem races along with them taking the reader along. A lovely write and a fave
September 9th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
So well imaged and in poetic form this poem races along with them taking the reader along. A lovely write and a fave
September 9th, 2025 10:29
some people never go crazy
Keeter C said:
Some are complete regiments. In old age I’m bout 30 70. Trying to get better.
September 9th, 2025 00:23
Keeter C said:
Some are complete regiments. In old age I’m bout 30 70. Trying to get better.
September 9th, 2025 00:23
Dancing Under Borrowed Stars
sorenbarrett said:
In the transe of a dance, the beam of a dream where music and humanity mix there is the liberation of a soul. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
In the transe of a dance, the beam of a dream where music and humanity mix there is the liberation of a soul. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 11:06
The Naming
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels so surreal yet so light and pleasing it floats. Nicely done and although I can not put my finger on it I think it is the calling of the name that gives it a fave
September 6th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem feels so surreal yet so light and pleasing it floats. Nicely done and although I can not put my finger on it I think it is the calling of the name that gives it a fave
September 6th, 2025 04:11
The Divine Compass
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of what is not seen, heard or felt but exists beyond. Very nice
September 4th, 2025 12:12
sorenbarrett said:
This speaks of what is not seen, heard or felt but exists beyond. Very nice
September 4th, 2025 12:12
The Divine Compass
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed this poem very much
September 4th, 2025 11:33
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
enjoyed this poem very much
September 4th, 2025 11:33
The Hands That Hold
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I read that we are all our own savior and god. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2025 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I read that we are all our own savior and god. Nicely written
September 3rd, 2025 10:35
No Shame in Weakness
sorenbarrett said:
Weakness can become a strength when recognized and knowing one\'s limits is a strength
September 2nd, 2025 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
Weakness can become a strength when recognized and knowing one\'s limits is a strength
September 2nd, 2025 12:24
The Universal Root
Doggerel Dave said:
Homage to the spud 👍It\'s earned it.
September 1st, 2025 10:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Homage to the spud 👍It\'s earned it.
September 1st, 2025 10:49
The Universal Root
sorenbarrett said:
A tuber that has bridged the international gap and continues to entice and nourish nations. A poetic recipe that leaves me hungry.
September 1st, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A tuber that has bridged the international gap and continues to entice and nourish nations. A poetic recipe that leaves me hungry.
September 1st, 2025 04:33
the poet and the craftsman
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine way of describing the process of Creating a poem. Good Write.
August 31st, 2025 19:45
Kevin Hulme said:
Fine way of describing the process of Creating a poem. Good Write.
August 31st, 2025 19:45
the poet and the craftsman
sorenbarrett said:
Gray if I read this right I hear that there are two makers the inner poet and the outer craftsman and together they weave the poem. This so true the spirit of the poet providing the raw material and the craftsman\'s hands and experience shaping it. Simply lovely and a fave
August 31st, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Gray if I read this right I hear that there are two makers the inner poet and the outer craftsman and together they weave the poem. This so true the spirit of the poet providing the raw material and the craftsman\'s hands and experience shaping it. Simply lovely and a fave
August 31st, 2025 08:00
Shells
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray history in a pile just as bones are and fossils a memory of times past. Loved it
August 30th, 2025 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Gray history in a pile just as bones are and fossils a memory of times past. Loved it
August 30th, 2025 11:34
The Vine and the Branches
sorenbarrett said:
The interrelatedness of all nature and its holds and nourishment all interwoven. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
The interrelatedness of all nature and its holds and nourishment all interwoven. Nicely said
August 29th, 2025 16:01
The Vine and the Branches
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another great write
August 29th, 2025 12:18
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another great write
August 29th, 2025 12:18
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