Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Journalist
sorenbarrett said:
So well written and with great images of metaphor a fave
April 24th, 2026 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
So well written and with great images of metaphor a fave
April 24th, 2026 10:10
The Journalist
Friendship said:
well written.Your poem explores the theme of courage in the face of uncomfortable truths. It depicts a powerful figure who confronts silence and propriety with incisive questioning, revealing hidden truths and challenging societal norms.
April 24th, 2026 08:34
Friendship said:
well written.Your poem explores the theme of courage in the face of uncomfortable truths. It depicts a powerful figure who confronts silence and propriety with incisive questioning, revealing hidden truths and challenging societal norms.
April 24th, 2026 08:34
My Therapist
sorenbarrett said:
Here therapy and therapist come into play. Well done
April 23rd, 2026 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
Here therapy and therapist come into play. Well done
April 23rd, 2026 11:45
My Therapist
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your revolves around the complex dynamics of therapy and self-exploration. It highlights the discomfort of facing painful truths and the struggle of confronting one\'s inner turmoil. The therapist catalyzes change, pushing the person to confront buried emotions and experiences.
April 23rd, 2026 07:21
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your revolves around the complex dynamics of therapy and self-exploration. It highlights the discomfort of facing painful truths and the struggle of confronting one\'s inner turmoil. The therapist catalyzes change, pushing the person to confront buried emotions and experiences.
April 23rd, 2026 07:21
Our Sanctuaries
Soman Ragavan said:
Noise and spoken words can bring friction and tension. Silence enables us to recover, to navigate. Well written words.
April 22nd, 2026 21:10
Soman Ragavan said:
Noise and spoken words can bring friction and tension. Silence enables us to recover, to navigate. Well written words.
April 22nd, 2026 21:10
Our Sanctuaries
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in poetic terms that speak of what is natural and what leads to peace and happiness Silence, Stillness, Simplicity, Solitude all with s\'s.
April 22nd, 2026 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in poetic terms that speak of what is natural and what leads to peace and happiness Silence, Stillness, Simplicity, Solitude all with s\'s.
April 22nd, 2026 16:08
Our Sanctuaries
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the importance of silence, solitude, and simplicity in finding inner peace and clarity amidst the chaos of daily life.
April 22nd, 2026 08:55
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the importance of silence, solitude, and simplicity in finding inner peace and clarity amidst the chaos of daily life.
April 22nd, 2026 08:55
Mr. Brown Taught History
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like the class was full of adventure and interest.
Pity Mr Brown could not devote his special energies to aspects of history other than war.
Your write bought him to life. Mission accomplished !
April 21st, 2026 17:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like the class was full of adventure and interest.
Pity Mr Brown could not devote his special energies to aspects of history other than war.
Your write bought him to life. Mission accomplished !
April 21st, 2026 17:46
Mr. Brown Taught History
sorenbarrett said:
A teacher makes all the difference it is not what is told but how it is told that one learns from. Well done
April 21st, 2026 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
A teacher makes all the difference it is not what is told but how it is told that one learns from. Well done
April 21st, 2026 11:57
A Wired Cage
sorenbarrett said:
Addictions come in many forms and today many are addicted
April 20th, 2026 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
Addictions come in many forms and today many are addicted
April 20th, 2026 12:26
The Push Within
sorenbarrett said:
Here one is left with the image of a hard life full of adversity. Well written Gray
April 19th, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Here one is left with the image of a hard life full of adversity. Well written Gray
April 19th, 2026 04:18
Fumes of a Burning World
sorenbarrett said:
I here the commentary in this poem on war be it physical, commercial, social. We all pay a price. Nicely done Gray
April 18th, 2026 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
I here the commentary in this poem on war be it physical, commercial, social. We all pay a price. Nicely done Gray
April 18th, 2026 05:25
The Eternal Boomerang
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a poem of gratitude
April 17th, 2026 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written a poem of gratitude
April 17th, 2026 13:38
The Eternal Boomerang
Friendship said:
I really can feel your words so deeply. Your poem is a personal journey of faith and love, highlighting the miracles that arise from the act of giving love and the profound returns that come from a divine connection. You emphasize the idea that love can transcend human limitations and fill spiritual voids, ultimately leading to a sense of belonging and home. Well done, my friend🌹
April 17th, 2026 11:32
Friendship said:
I really can feel your words so deeply. Your poem is a personal journey of faith and love, highlighting the miracles that arise from the act of giving love and the profound returns that come from a divine connection. You emphasize the idea that love can transcend human limitations and fill spiritual voids, ultimately leading to a sense of belonging and home. Well done, my friend🌹
April 17th, 2026 11:32
A Single Twist
sorenbarrett said:
So little of this today a poem of friendship. Nicely written
April 16th, 2026 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
So little of this today a poem of friendship. Nicely written
April 16th, 2026 10:25
A Single Twist
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poet, presumably reflecting on personal experiences and emotions tied to everyday objects.
April 16th, 2026 09:10
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poet, presumably reflecting on personal experiences and emotions tied to everyday objects.
April 16th, 2026 09:10
Green Means Go
Doggerel Dave said:
The one of many who need their self image and feelings of importance cracked.
Enjoyed that.
April 15th, 2026 20:00
Doggerel Dave said:
The one of many who need their self image and feelings of importance cracked.
Enjoyed that.
April 15th, 2026 20:00
Green Means Go
sorenbarrett said:
A story nicely told that shows how humor conquers all. Well said Gray
April 15th, 2026 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
A story nicely told that shows how humor conquers all. Well said Gray
April 15th, 2026 15:32
The Three Acts of Truth
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem delves into themes of truth, acceptance, societal norms, and the conflict that arises when an individual’s reality challenges established beliefs. You painted an image of laughter transforming into violence, symbolizing the struggle against oppressive norms and the resilience required to assert one\'s truth.
April 14th, 2026 18:22
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem delves into themes of truth, acceptance, societal norms, and the conflict that arises when an individual’s reality challenges established beliefs. You painted an image of laughter transforming into violence, symbolizing the struggle against oppressive norms and the resilience required to assert one\'s truth.
April 14th, 2026 18:22
The Three Acts of Truth
sorenbarrett said:
The falsehood of the world is evident in this write. Nicely crafted
April 14th, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
The falsehood of the world is evident in this write. Nicely crafted
April 14th, 2026 11:00
The Three Acts of Truth
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
loved the deepness of this piece
April 14th, 2026 08:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
loved the deepness of this piece
April 14th, 2026 08:41
The Chewing, Bewhiskered, and Very Busy Man
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Enjoy.
April 13th, 2026 07:01
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Enjoy.
April 13th, 2026 07:01
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