Comments received on poems by gray0328
What I Have Is Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Comfort is worth more than style. A wonderful write about what we trade. Well done Gray
December 29th, 2025 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
Comfort is worth more than style. A wonderful write about what we trade. Well done Gray
December 29th, 2025 17:00
What I Have Is Enough
Friendship said:
Well written, gray0328. Your poem revolves around the appreciation of what one already possesses, rather than succumbing to a perpetual desire for newer, better things. The subject matter explores themes of contentment, nostalgia, and the value of simple, everyday objects that hold emotional significance and memories.
December 29th, 2025 12:50
Friendship said:
Well written, gray0328. Your poem revolves around the appreciation of what one already possesses, rather than succumbing to a perpetual desire for newer, better things. The subject matter explores themes of contentment, nostalgia, and the value of simple, everyday objects that hold emotional significance and memories.
December 29th, 2025 12:50
Quiet Heroics
sorenbarrett said:
Times were different and ages were different. With growth comes obligations and the time of lazy wonder is replaced with worries and demands with some nostalgic reflections. Well done Gray
December 28th, 2025 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
Times were different and ages were different. With growth comes obligations and the time of lazy wonder is replaced with worries and demands with some nostalgic reflections. Well done Gray
December 28th, 2025 06:42
The Patience Patch
Katie B. said:
Excellent, well penned. We live in haste. Gone are the days of slow and methodical.
December 27th, 2025 11:38
Katie B. said:
Excellent, well penned. We live in haste. Gone are the days of slow and methodical.
December 27th, 2025 11:38
The Patience Patch
sorenbarrett said:
In a lazy world of disposable items where things are no longer fixed but replace and even relationships are throw aways this piece may be hard to understand but I hear it and remember those days when mending things was a necessary art and the mended took on more value than the new. I love the line \"Fixing carried fingerprints of your effort. \" This has deep meaning for me. Very nicely done Gray
December 27th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
In a lazy world of disposable items where things are no longer fixed but replace and even relationships are throw aways this piece may be hard to understand but I hear it and remember those days when mending things was a necessary art and the mended took on more value than the new. I love the line \"Fixing carried fingerprints of your effort. \" This has deep meaning for me. Very nicely done Gray
December 27th, 2025 08:16
The Patience Patch
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of time, presence, and the beauty found in slowing down. It contrasts contemporary impatience with a more contemplative approach to life, emphasizing the lessons learned from waiting and the significance of mending broken things.
December 27th, 2025 06:40
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of time, presence, and the beauty found in slowing down. It contrasts contemporary impatience with a more contemplative approach to life, emphasizing the lessons learned from waiting and the significance of mending broken things.
December 27th, 2025 06:40
Grandma\'s Lagniappe
sorenbarrett said:
The memories of a person loved for their kindness and giving. A lovely write Gray
December 26th, 2025 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
The memories of a person loved for their kindness and giving. A lovely write Gray
December 26th, 2025 10:42
The Sky Opened
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful symbolic poem of Christmas very nicely done. Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful symbolic poem of Christmas very nicely done. Happy holidays
December 25th, 2025 11:05
The Beginning
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphoric write well done. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphoric write well done. Happy Holidays
December 24th, 2025 14:54
The Shepherd\'s Promise
gray0328 said:
Merry Christmas Soren to you and your family ❣️
December 23rd, 2025 13:32
gray0328 said:
Merry Christmas Soren to you and your family ❣️
December 23rd, 2025 13:32
The Shepherd\'s Promise
sorenbarrett said:
Gray a wonderful poem that reads like a prayer. Loved it
December 23rd, 2025 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
Gray a wonderful poem that reads like a prayer. Loved it
December 23rd, 2025 13:05
Hurt Bends Its Knees
rhmn_7 said:
That last stanza has some striking power, really enjoyed this one Grayo!
December 22nd, 2025 05:27
rhmn_7 said:
That last stanza has some striking power, really enjoyed this one Grayo!
December 22nd, 2025 05:27
Hurt Bends Its Knees
sorenbarrett said:
There are some very good lines in this poem including the whole last stanza. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
There are some very good lines in this poem including the whole last stanza. Nicely done
December 22nd, 2025 04:25
If The Whole Body Were An Eye
sorenbarrett said:
I have often wondered what it would be like to have other senses such as echolocation or inferred vision and with this what it would be like to lack one or more of our senses and this poem speaks of vision and what then about the ears. A lovely light hearted write about a very deep subject that influences all we think or feel about the world around us.
December 21st, 2025 14:15
sorenbarrett said:
I have often wondered what it would be like to have other senses such as echolocation or inferred vision and with this what it would be like to lack one or more of our senses and this poem speaks of vision and what then about the ears. A lovely light hearted write about a very deep subject that influences all we think or feel about the world around us.
December 21st, 2025 14:15
If The Whole Body Were An Eye
Thomas W Case said:
The poem’s playful “what if” questions really carry it.
It feels inventive and light without losing craft.
December 21st, 2025 10:01
Thomas W Case said:
The poem’s playful “what if” questions really carry it.
It feels inventive and light without losing craft.
December 21st, 2025 10:01
Passwords
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Gray that echoes the past and memories of pillars in our life. Names reflect the hopes, achievements and honor of the past. A wonderful write my friend.
December 20th, 2025 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Gray that echoes the past and memories of pillars in our life. Names reflect the hopes, achievements and honor of the past. A wonderful write my friend.
December 20th, 2025 05:11
A Skosh
sorenbarrett said:
I love unique words and skosh is one of them. A gun read Gray
December 19th, 2025 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
I love unique words and skosh is one of them. A gun read Gray
December 19th, 2025 16:06
A Skosh
J.Allen Tompkins said:
Hello! This is the first poem I\'ve looked at being new to the site, but this line: \"But I’ve seen pinkie promises hold entire universes between two fingers. \" , stood out for me as such a combination of innocence and existential energies...excellent work there! I was also impressed with how far you stretched the rhyme within the prose-- it almost came as a surprise.
December 19th, 2025 12:10
J.Allen Tompkins said:
Hello! This is the first poem I\'ve looked at being new to the site, but this line: \"But I’ve seen pinkie promises hold entire universes between two fingers. \" , stood out for me as such a combination of innocence and existential energies...excellent work there! I was also impressed with how far you stretched the rhyme within the prose-- it almost came as a surprise.
December 19th, 2025 12:10
WD-40
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray I have to say I have used it before many times. I wish that they sold a formula for people that are rusted in their ways. Nicely written
December 18th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray I have to say I have used it before many times. I wish that they sold a formula for people that are rusted in their ways. Nicely written
December 18th, 2025 04:45
The Year Santa Wore Mr. Bruno\'s Boots
Doggerel Dave said:
The birth of scepticism in a young child - a landmark growth point!!
Certainly was for me. Thanks for the reminder.
December 17th, 2025 17:34
Doggerel Dave said:
The birth of scepticism in a young child - a landmark growth point!!
Certainly was for me. Thanks for the reminder.
December 17th, 2025 17:34
The Year Santa Wore Mr. Bruno\'s Boots
sorenbarrett said:
When a child and taken to sit on Santa\'s lap at the store I would ask why he was different every year and why other stores had different Santas and was told the same story that some were Santa\'s helpers. Never believed it and so the myth fell. A great write Gray loved it
December 17th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
When a child and taken to sit on Santa\'s lap at the store I would ask why he was different every year and why other stores had different Santas and was told the same story that some were Santa\'s helpers. Never believed it and so the myth fell. A great write Gray loved it
December 17th, 2025 12:15
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