Comments received on poems by gray0328
Ambassadors of Light
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this seems to me a poem of religious proclamation of faith and belief. Well said
October 3rd, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Well Gray this seems to me a poem of religious proclamation of faith and belief. Well said
October 3rd, 2025 11:43
the residue of living
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of memory and the significance of imperfections as markers of lived experiences. It emphasizes that the remnants of the past, represented by watermarks and smudges, are not to be erased but cherished as evidence of one\'s existence and emotional journey.
October 3rd, 2025 07:03
Friendship said:
Well written, the poem explores the theme of memory and the significance of imperfections as markers of lived experiences. It emphasizes that the remnants of the past, represented by watermarks and smudges, are not to be erased but cherished as evidence of one\'s existence and emotional journey.
October 3rd, 2025 07:03
the residue of living
sorenbarrett said:
There is a preoccupation with cleanliness from antibacterial soaps to cleaning products that remove all stains. Who wants to live in a sterile environment. Have we grown that afraid? Good write
October 2nd, 2025 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
There is a preoccupation with cleanliness from antibacterial soaps to cleaning products that remove all stains. Who wants to live in a sterile environment. Have we grown that afraid? Good write
October 2nd, 2025 12:36
the residue of living
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, enjoyed
October 2nd, 2025 10:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write, enjoyed
October 2nd, 2025 10:10
The Measure of Forgiveness
sorenbarrett said:
Know that story but here told in rhyme it is nicely told. Well done Gray
October 1st, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Know that story but here told in rhyme it is nicely told. Well done Gray
October 1st, 2025 11:55
not to offend the imbeciles
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A great write, thoroughly enjoyed
October 1st, 2025 02:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A great write, thoroughly enjoyed
October 1st, 2025 02:41
instant society
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this one hits point after point connecting thoughts. A wonderful write and a fave
September 30th, 2025 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
Gray this one hits point after point connecting thoughts. A wonderful write and a fave
September 30th, 2025 19:09
instant society
arqios said:
No there’s a title and a poem that exceeds its expectations! 🕊🙏🏻
September 30th, 2025 18:57
arqios said:
No there’s a title and a poem that exceeds its expectations! 🕊🙏🏻
September 30th, 2025 18:57
not to offend the imbeciles
Doggerel Dave said:
Inclusiveness and conformity soundly thrashed.👍
September 29th, 2025 18:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Inclusiveness and conformity soundly thrashed.👍
September 29th, 2025 18:11
not to offend the imbeciles
sorenbarrett said:
Thinly veiled this poem speaks to me against the political correctness that ignores differences which are a good thing not a bad. Nicely written and a fave
September 29th, 2025 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Thinly veiled this poem speaks to me against the political correctness that ignores differences which are a good thing not a bad. Nicely written and a fave
September 29th, 2025 14:34
The Slow Burn
Doggerel Dave said:
The search for truth and enlightenment can be (is) a hard slog, clearly described there. Felt strengthened by your poetic definition..
September 28th, 2025 18:29
Doggerel Dave said:
The search for truth and enlightenment can be (is) a hard slog, clearly described there. Felt strengthened by your poetic definition..
September 28th, 2025 18:29
The Slow Burn
sorenbarrett said:
Some look for ease and rest in an afterlife, if there is such a place I hope that it is full or those labors that put callus\'s on the hands, strength in the muscles and builds strong bones of determination. A lovely write my friend
September 28th, 2025 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Some look for ease and rest in an afterlife, if there is such a place I hope that it is full or those labors that put callus\'s on the hands, strength in the muscles and builds strong bones of determination. A lovely write my friend
September 28th, 2025 06:10
The Madness of Civil Tongues
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message and thee are great line here as well. (Violence is fear with a broken mask. Chaos burns everyone, even those watching.) Nicely done Gray
September 25th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message and thee are great line here as well. (Violence is fear with a broken mask. Chaos burns everyone, even those watching.) Nicely done Gray
September 25th, 2025 08:42
The Madness of Civil Tongues
Doggerel Dave said:
Spot on (Though unsure of the title - irony?).
September 25th, 2025 08:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Spot on (Though unsure of the title - irony?).
September 25th, 2025 08:32
What I Do
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is most mind provoking with a lot of metaphor. A most interesting last line. Nicely done
September 24th, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is most mind provoking with a lot of metaphor. A most interesting last line. Nicely done
September 24th, 2025 11:55
since when
sorenbarrett said:
Inviting is the feel of this poem, inviting after being closed. A charming write
September 23rd, 2025 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
Inviting is the feel of this poem, inviting after being closed. A charming write
September 23rd, 2025 07:37
Summer Equinox
sorenbarrett said:
Very lovely lines and images fill this poem. A fave
September 22nd, 2025 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
Very lovely lines and images fill this poem. A fave
September 22nd, 2025 11:19
The Belt of Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A belief, a plea and a pledge in a poem. Nicely written Gray
September 21st, 2025 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
A belief, a plea and a pledge in a poem. Nicely written Gray
September 21st, 2025 10:21
The Neighbor\'s Dog
sorenbarrett said:
How often we wonder about the mind of another, be it animal or human. Suspicion lies on both sides of the fence. Nicely done Gray
September 20th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
How often we wonder about the mind of another, be it animal or human. Suspicion lies on both sides of the fence. Nicely done Gray
September 20th, 2025 04:08
The Neighbor\'s Dog
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
two lives running parallel, man and dog, much enjoyed write
September 20th, 2025 03:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
two lives running parallel, man and dog, much enjoyed write
September 20th, 2025 03:59
Rerouting
sorenbarrett said:
Some very nice lines in this poem and my favorite is the last stanza
September 19th, 2025 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
Some very nice lines in this poem and my favorite is the last stanza
September 19th, 2025 10:56
The Mind is a Slingshot
sorenbarrett said:
Brain over brawn seems the message. It is true in most situations and very well stated in this poem. Well done.
September 18th, 2025 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Brain over brawn seems the message. It is true in most situations and very well stated in this poem. Well done.
September 18th, 2025 13:20
If I Fall Silent
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is deeply contemplative and it explores themes of silence, loss, and unspoken histories. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:36
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is deeply contemplative and it explores themes of silence, loss, and unspoken histories. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:36
If I Fall Silent
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in this poem Gray things unsaid lie at the heart of this work. A lovely write that digs deep into the mind and memory of what could have been and what should have been said. Lovely a fave
September 17th, 2025 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Deep meaning in this poem Gray things unsaid lie at the heart of this work. A lovely write that digs deep into the mind and memory of what could have been and what should have been said. Lovely a fave
September 17th, 2025 07:15
Open Door
sorenbarrett said:
This seems an alternate dimension through which dreams are born. Nicely done
September 16th, 2025 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
This seems an alternate dimension through which dreams are born. Nicely done
September 16th, 2025 13:50
When We Are Apart
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic descriptors of feeling the loss of another. Nicely written Gray
September 15th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic descriptors of feeling the loss of another. Nicely written Gray
September 15th, 2025 05:17
Connection Lost
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I had to pause and think about this one. The image is clear and I have been there on hold waiting for reception to be restored. A most frustrating experience, yet there is deeper meaning here as we watch life itself and reception goes down. The expected and predictable become unknown. A most mind provoking poem
September 14th, 2025 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I had to pause and think about this one. The image is clear and I have been there on hold waiting for reception to be restored. A most frustrating experience, yet there is deeper meaning here as we watch life itself and reception goes down. The expected and predictable become unknown. A most mind provoking poem
September 14th, 2025 08:12
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