Comments received on poems by gray0328
Blowing in the Wind
sorenbarrett said:
( The answer has always been moving) what a great line and finish to this poem. A lovely write Gray with a wonderful meaning that is subtle but there.
May 8th, 2025 17:24
sorenbarrett said:
( The answer has always been moving) what a great line and finish to this poem. A lovely write Gray with a wonderful meaning that is subtle but there.
May 8th, 2025 17:24
My Love is a Cartoon Owl
Poetic Licence said:
I know this could be interpreted in other ways, but I like literally as off the owl. A wonderful creature appears full of wisdom, doesn\'t miss a trick, graceful and have a majestic look to them, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 12:36
Poetic Licence said:
I know this could be interpreted in other ways, but I like literally as off the owl. A wonderful creature appears full of wisdom, doesn\'t miss a trick, graceful and have a majestic look to them, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 12:36
My Love is a Cartoon Owl
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful image. (I love owls and often sit on my patio and call them. I have had as many as five screech owls come sit with me on the backs of my chairs and stare at me) A great poem using the image of wisdom, insight, mystery and spiritual connection. A very nice write Gray
May 7th, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful image. (I love owls and often sit on my patio and call them. I have had as many as five screech owls come sit with me on the backs of my chairs and stare at me) A great poem using the image of wisdom, insight, mystery and spiritual connection. A very nice write Gray
May 7th, 2025 11:56
Shudder Spit
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write with many meanings, leaving you to interpret how you wish, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 02:04
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write with many meanings, leaving you to interpret how you wish, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 02:04
Flags Are Always in Demand
Cheeky Missy said:
Why do you make me nearly break down in a flood of tears with this? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, ringing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2025 07:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Why do you make me nearly break down in a flood of tears with this? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, ringing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2025 07:46
Flags Are Always in Demand
Doggerel Dave said:
Flags - patriotism - this one is deep, and I\'m not going to attempt to add to it apart from a fave. Thanks
May 5th, 2025 07:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Flags - patriotism - this one is deep, and I\'m not going to attempt to add to it apart from a fave. Thanks
May 5th, 2025 07:39
Flags Are Always in Demand
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray. The flag a symbol now used as a secondary symbol in this poem. This double layering makes for quite a cake. It is like a second lens double magnifying what lays beneath it. Very nicely done Gray
May 5th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here Gray. The flag a symbol now used as a secondary symbol in this poem. This double layering makes for quite a cake. It is like a second lens double magnifying what lays beneath it. Very nicely done Gray
May 5th, 2025 04:16
Double Exposure
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem Gray with great metaphor of the mirror and splitting. Since the face is not symmetrical I wonder how this affects things in the split. Loved the read
May 4th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem Gray with great metaphor of the mirror and splitting. Since the face is not symmetrical I wonder how this affects things in the split. Loved the read
May 4th, 2025 04:57
Acceptance
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording in this poem leaves feelings of being on edge. Loved it
May 3rd, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice wording in this poem leaves feelings of being on edge. Loved it
May 3rd, 2025 13:31
Holiday Adrift
sorenbarrett said:
Adventurous, harrowing, full of great images that cold I have felt many times. Well done Graty
May 2nd, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
Adventurous, harrowing, full of great images that cold I have felt many times. Well done Graty
May 2nd, 2025 09:51
The Machine Prays in Binary
sorenbarrett said:
We have enslaved ourselves to the information age it sells us our chains then makes us grateful for illusions of freedom that it sells us. Very nice Gray
May 1st, 2025 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
We have enslaved ourselves to the information age it sells us our chains then makes us grateful for illusions of freedom that it sells us. Very nice Gray
May 1st, 2025 10:17
The Ease of Small Hands
sorenbarrett said:
A poem open to interpretation could be a young woman but for me it is a small girl, innocent and full of life before it is dulled with years. So nicely written. Loved it
April 30th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem open to interpretation could be a young woman but for me it is a small girl, innocent and full of life before it is dulled with years. So nicely written. Loved it
April 30th, 2025 12:57
When You Read to a Child
sorenbarrett said:
The whole world is a book that opens to us. We are all children that if we open our eyes to the wonder around us are transported to new vistas. A lovely write
April 29th, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
The whole world is a book that opens to us. We are all children that if we open our eyes to the wonder around us are transported to new vistas. A lovely write
April 29th, 2025 12:14
Whale Fall
sorenbarrett said:
A most vivid description of demise and decay a melodious metaphor so artistically carved of words and served to the reader as aperitif, main course, and dessert a fave
April 28th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
A most vivid description of demise and decay a melodious metaphor so artistically carved of words and served to the reader as aperitif, main course, and dessert a fave
April 28th, 2025 04:55
Half Empty
Doggerel Dave said:
You are in all probability dead right. however, when all is going smoothly, when warm and cooperative interactions are the norm, why should I not call out aberrations to what I know to be possible?
Way back when you used the glass half full/empty to dismiss what may have been a facile comment on my part, left me without the inclination to respond again. And not many do, apart from ever present Soren, who keeps this site energised with ever present affirmations. You obviously don\'t care for interactions here - otherwise you would play the game. A pity, because you deserve a wider audience.
April 27th, 2025 06:08
Doggerel Dave said:
You are in all probability dead right. however, when all is going smoothly, when warm and cooperative interactions are the norm, why should I not call out aberrations to what I know to be possible?
Way back when you used the glass half full/empty to dismiss what may have been a facile comment on my part, left me without the inclination to respond again. And not many do, apart from ever present Soren, who keeps this site energised with ever present affirmations. You obviously don\'t care for interactions here - otherwise you would play the game. A pity, because you deserve a wider audience.
April 27th, 2025 06:08
Half Empty
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words Gray and not just beauty and power but logic that seems to fit from past experience. Put them all together and you get a fave
April 27th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words Gray and not just beauty and power but logic that seems to fit from past experience. Put them all together and you get a fave
April 27th, 2025 04:59
Works Alone Now
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Gray. Many years I have done manual labor and know the calloused hands and grease of work. You are most talented in your imagery and metaphors. Here I sense a metaphor as well. Is it not all humanity in their daily labors that are too busy to see the star light and is it not our work or rather technology that dims the skies? A most subtle message sent in such a powerful poem. Loved it
April 25th, 2025 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me Gray. Many years I have done manual labor and know the calloused hands and grease of work. You are most talented in your imagery and metaphors. Here I sense a metaphor as well. Is it not all humanity in their daily labors that are too busy to see the star light and is it not our work or rather technology that dims the skies? A most subtle message sent in such a powerful poem. Loved it
April 25th, 2025 09:31
The Whispering Wind
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have outdone yourself on this one. Every once in a while I read a poem that I envy and this is one. Your wording and metaphors make every stanza a favorite all with good meter and verse. A fave for sure
April 24th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Gray you have outdone yourself on this one. Every once in a while I read a poem that I envy and this is one. Your wording and metaphors make every stanza a favorite all with good meter and verse. A fave for sure
April 24th, 2025 04:44
The Garden of Reunion
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical references to the garden and the rolling of the stone. Very nice Gray
April 23rd, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical references to the garden and the rolling of the stone. Very nice Gray
April 23rd, 2025 12:40
always on
NafisaSB said:
you have made a truly valid point here. i agree with you
April 23rd, 2025 02:12
NafisaSB said:
you have made a truly valid point here. i agree with you
April 23rd, 2025 02:12
Strength and Courage
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and nature and how they are one. Lovely
April 22nd, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love and nature and how they are one. Lovely
April 22nd, 2025 13:00
The Redundancy of Certainty
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message set in this poem that hides behind the silver word plate of the mirror. Nicely written
April 21st, 2025 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message set in this poem that hides behind the silver word plate of the mirror. Nicely written
April 21st, 2025 15:10
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