Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Justify
L. B. Mek said:
and where exactly do you presume \'you\' will \'remain\' oh \'enlightened sentient\' of all-things warped: dreary, bleak and fear derived to infantile notions from self-justifying coercive fatalism of shared pathological thought\'s...
lol, you\'re so cute, with your hands still outstretched \'after all these years\' screaming, love me, want me, See Me!
we do, we just moved-on from that entitlement fuelled self-indulgent, whingey victim mentality - a long, long time ago,
when we \'blinkered\' few realised: what you will too - someday,
cry all you want, but life operates best when we actualise our own fates!
see there\'s no conveniently \'free\' to answer your call for help, unless you reach-out - willingly and seek that help, waiting on you to value your own self: first,
then we too - can intrust a part of ourselves in your cause...
we live in a shitty world, yup how profound your realisation\'s read, truly how useful all that insight you spew... lol
lol thanks for sharing your entertainingly impassioned writes,
hopefully I matched your strain of vehemence in my pitiful words of this scribbled reply I\'m certain you\'ll detest,
sincere apologies in advance if my take on reality upsets your sensibilities dear Poet, keep that mighty Pen flowing!
January 8th, 2021 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
and where exactly do you presume \'you\' will \'remain\' oh \'enlightened sentient\' of all-things warped: dreary, bleak and fear derived to infantile notions from self-justifying coercive fatalism of shared pathological thought\'s...
lol, you\'re so cute, with your hands still outstretched \'after all these years\' screaming, love me, want me, See Me!
we do, we just moved-on from that entitlement fuelled self-indulgent, whingey victim mentality - a long, long time ago,
when we \'blinkered\' few realised: what you will too - someday,
cry all you want, but life operates best when we actualise our own fates!
see there\'s no conveniently \'free\' to answer your call for help, unless you reach-out - willingly and seek that help, waiting on you to value your own self: first,
then we too - can intrust a part of ourselves in your cause...
we live in a shitty world, yup how profound your realisation\'s read, truly how useful all that insight you spew... lol
lol thanks for sharing your entertainingly impassioned writes,
hopefully I matched your strain of vehemence in my pitiful words of this scribbled reply I\'m certain you\'ll detest,
sincere apologies in advance if my take on reality upsets your sensibilities dear Poet, keep that mighty Pen flowing!
January 8th, 2021 06:32
It\'s the hope that kills you
Jerry Reynolds said:
Flows really well. Stay Safe.
January 6th, 2021 09:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
Flows really well. Stay Safe.
January 6th, 2021 09:21
Hard-bitten
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s a pretty world if your mind is blind.\'
how jarring these words read, when I consider they\'re written by someone who chuckles along reading Terry Pratchett\'s floating Turtle perspective\'s of life, lol
January 5th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s a pretty world if your mind is blind.\'
how jarring these words read, when I consider they\'re written by someone who chuckles along reading Terry Pratchett\'s floating Turtle perspective\'s of life, lol
January 5th, 2021 05:06
Black hole soul
L. B. Mek said:
bleak be that outlook that nurtures that sweet spot between dulled indifference to life and the edges of Abyss to nullified existence...
Seek no warmth if your blood \'chooses\' to run smoother when nurtured by the cold of surrendered hope.
Ignore us naïve fools who peddle all that Toxic Positivity and pity us, somewhat: for we dare not face that morose truth of despair, you have the bravery to walk within.
But, dear brother I beg - may you never forget: even swimming in those deep pools of depression, you remain a child of \'CHOICE\'!
You \'choose\' to be brave and not look away, to hide within normality\'s easy streets of conformity!
You \'choose\' to ink your pain, so that other\'s who feel the same may know: they are not alone!
YOU CHOOSE: so choose, dear brother to Survive and sing that song for the broken hearted
and we feeble few, who dare to meet you - even if only across a bandwidth of binary digits, promise to continue, listening as best we can,
until you\'ve sang your life\'s song, as only You Can, one brave breath at a time...
Have the New Year you want, dear Poet!
stay safe and colour the sky\'s blue with your swear words (it helps - sometimes),
thanks for sharing!
December 31st, 2020 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
bleak be that outlook that nurtures that sweet spot between dulled indifference to life and the edges of Abyss to nullified existence...
Seek no warmth if your blood \'chooses\' to run smoother when nurtured by the cold of surrendered hope.
Ignore us naïve fools who peddle all that Toxic Positivity and pity us, somewhat: for we dare not face that morose truth of despair, you have the bravery to walk within.
But, dear brother I beg - may you never forget: even swimming in those deep pools of depression, you remain a child of \'CHOICE\'!
You \'choose\' to be brave and not look away, to hide within normality\'s easy streets of conformity!
You \'choose\' to ink your pain, so that other\'s who feel the same may know: they are not alone!
YOU CHOOSE: so choose, dear brother to Survive and sing that song for the broken hearted
and we feeble few, who dare to meet you - even if only across a bandwidth of binary digits, promise to continue, listening as best we can,
until you\'ve sang your life\'s song, as only You Can, one brave breath at a time...
Have the New Year you want, dear Poet!
stay safe and colour the sky\'s blue with your swear words (it helps - sometimes),
thanks for sharing!
December 31st, 2020 05:11
A calling
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have heard that a lot \"somewhere else is better than here and some time else was better than now.\"
December 29th, 2020 14:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have heard that a lot \"somewhere else is better than here and some time else was better than now.\"
December 29th, 2020 14:51
A calling
dusk arising said:
The pubs closed at 10.30pm in the 60\'s.... air pollution was rife. Mind you, the seasons did know how to behave and the old £ s d currency was great. I spanned age eight to eighteen in those sixties and it was great. Mind you i havent had a bad decade since then either.
December 29th, 2020 11:25
dusk arising said:
The pubs closed at 10.30pm in the 60\'s.... air pollution was rife. Mind you, the seasons did know how to behave and the old £ s d currency was great. I spanned age eight to eighteen in those sixties and it was great. Mind you i havent had a bad decade since then either.
December 29th, 2020 11:25
42. Humble B. Bumble : Beedazzled
Jerry Reynolds said:
Bee Brave little Bee. Happy New Year
December 27th, 2020 16:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Bee Brave little Bee. Happy New Year
December 27th, 2020 16:06
41. Humble B. Bumble : All abuzz about a bee
Jerry Reynolds said:
You, Bee having a Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2020 10:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
You, Bee having a Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2020 10:53
40. Humble B. Bumble : Bee happily ever after
Jerry Reynolds said:
Merry Christmas Aa. Good story
December 25th, 2020 08:56
Jerry Reynolds said:
Merry Christmas Aa. Good story
December 25th, 2020 08:56
39. Humble B. Bumble : Bee true to love
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Happy Holiday.
December 24th, 2020 16:29
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Happy Holiday.
December 24th, 2020 16:29
38. Humble B. Bumble : Bee Bee the Bee
L. B. Mek said:
ah a sweet ending, in time for that happy day of all things honey and mead... lol,
a fun read
December 24th, 2020 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
ah a sweet ending, in time for that happy day of all things honey and mead... lol,
a fun read
December 24th, 2020 05:17
37. Humble B. Bumble : It\'s good to bee home
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m still enjoying these fun reads,
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 22nd, 2020 06:51
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m still enjoying these fun reads,
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 22nd, 2020 06:51
36. Humble B. Bumble : Time to bee invited to Honeycombe
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have a Happy Holiday and stay safe,
December 21st, 2020 14:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Have a Happy Holiday and stay safe,
December 21st, 2020 14:42
32. Humble B. Bumble : Two bee\'s or not two bee\'s
L. B. Mek said:
Shakespeare\'s buzzing in his boots I tell ya, let\'s hope it\'s not a Romeo ending for our eager bee, lol
Happy Holidays
December 18th, 2020 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
Shakespeare\'s buzzing in his boots I tell ya, let\'s hope it\'s not a Romeo ending for our eager bee, lol
Happy Holidays
December 18th, 2020 05:44
32. Humble B. Bumble : Two bee\'s or not two bee\'s
Jerry Reynolds said:
Bee in love. Have a Happy Holiday
December 17th, 2020 16:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
Bee in love. Have a Happy Holiday
December 17th, 2020 16:53
31. Humble B. Bumble : You bee you and I\'ll bee me
L. B. Mek said:
yup grasshopper\'s always gota be the wise, bearded badass\' in every story, lol
December 17th, 2020 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
yup grasshopper\'s always gota be the wise, bearded badass\' in every story, lol
December 17th, 2020 04:53
28. Humble B. Bumble : Bee-Real
L. B. Mek said:
all that and reality\'s belated realisation hits Bee-real, he\'s just another soldier in that cog of survival mechanism engineered to keep a queen \'in the mood\' - so to speak (cough)...
what a penetrative (ahem), look into society you have weaved with your Bee-centric commentary, dear Poet,
a fun series so far, I guess just, erm - keep em coming... lmao!
December 14th, 2020 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
all that and reality\'s belated realisation hits Bee-real, he\'s just another soldier in that cog of survival mechanism engineered to keep a queen \'in the mood\' - so to speak (cough)...
what a penetrative (ahem), look into society you have weaved with your Bee-centric commentary, dear Poet,
a fun series so far, I guess just, erm - keep em coming... lmao!
December 14th, 2020 04:58
25. Humble B. Bumble : Beeyond the joke!
Jerry Reynolds said:
Humbel perseveres.
December 10th, 2020 15:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
Humbel perseveres.
December 10th, 2020 15:49
24. Humble B. Bumble : I\'ll never bee kissed
L. B. Mek said:
\'No sound to bee heard\'
lol, not taking things too serious makes this series an entertaining read, so far
December 10th, 2020 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'No sound to bee heard\'
lol, not taking things too serious makes this series an entertaining read, so far
December 10th, 2020 04:41
22. Humble B. Bumble : Bee Beautiful
L. B. Mek said:
Bee great if time would allow all to heal and flow like honey and we can hope for a sweet ending, eventually... lol
December 8th, 2020 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
Bee great if time would allow all to heal and flow like honey and we can hope for a sweet ending, eventually... lol
December 8th, 2020 05:05
21. Humble B. Bumble : It\'s not meant to bee
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good story
December 6th, 2020 15:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good story
December 6th, 2020 15:42
20. Humble B. Bumble : Let\'s just bee friends
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good tale
December 5th, 2020 14:54
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good tale
December 5th, 2020 14:54
17. Humble B. Bumble : It will never bee
L. B. Mek said:
oh no, poor humble losing out to that \'Tiny\' dancer, (well with the buzzzing vibration quality\'s of nature, I guess size doesn\'t matter in the Bee world)...
oh well plenty more Bee\'s in the hive, lol
December 3rd, 2020 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
oh no, poor humble losing out to that \'Tiny\' dancer, (well with the buzzzing vibration quality\'s of nature, I guess size doesn\'t matter in the Bee world)...
oh well plenty more Bee\'s in the hive, lol
December 3rd, 2020 04:26
16. Humble B. Bumble : Beeloved?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sorry Bruv, I only know real love, and not infatuation.
You like her, and she likes you.
Where’s the problem?\'
fav lines yet, hope you\'re having as much fun writing as we are reading,
though I wonder - what did they pollinate for dinner, lol
December 1st, 2020 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sorry Bruv, I only know real love, and not infatuation.
You like her, and she likes you.
Where’s the problem?\'
fav lines yet, hope you\'re having as much fun writing as we are reading,
though I wonder - what did they pollinate for dinner, lol
December 1st, 2020 04:58
16. Humble B. Bumble : Beeloved?
RDS said:
Ah, humble love. A really good page Aa. Hope the book is going sweet.
J
November 30th, 2020 16:40
RDS said:
Ah, humble love. A really good page Aa. Hope the book is going sweet.
J
November 30th, 2020 16:40
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