Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
24. Humble B. Bumble : I\'ll never bee kissed
L. B. Mek said:
\'No sound to bee heard\'
lol, not taking things too serious makes this series an entertaining read, so far
December 10th, 2020 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'No sound to bee heard\'
lol, not taking things too serious makes this series an entertaining read, so far
December 10th, 2020 04:41
22. Humble B. Bumble : Bee Beautiful
L. B. Mek said:
Bee great if time would allow all to heal and flow like honey and we can hope for a sweet ending, eventually... lol
December 8th, 2020 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
Bee great if time would allow all to heal and flow like honey and we can hope for a sweet ending, eventually... lol
December 8th, 2020 05:05
21. Humble B. Bumble : It\'s not meant to bee
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good story
December 6th, 2020 15:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good story
December 6th, 2020 15:42
20. Humble B. Bumble : Let\'s just bee friends
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good tale
December 5th, 2020 14:54
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good tale
December 5th, 2020 14:54
17. Humble B. Bumble : It will never bee
L. B. Mek said:
oh no, poor humble losing out to that \'Tiny\' dancer, (well with the buzzzing vibration quality\'s of nature, I guess size doesn\'t matter in the Bee world)...
oh well plenty more Bee\'s in the hive, lol
December 3rd, 2020 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
oh no, poor humble losing out to that \'Tiny\' dancer, (well with the buzzzing vibration quality\'s of nature, I guess size doesn\'t matter in the Bee world)...
oh well plenty more Bee\'s in the hive, lol
December 3rd, 2020 04:26
16. Humble B. Bumble : Beeloved?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sorry Bruv, I only know real love, and not infatuation.
You like her, and she likes you.
Where’s the problem?\'
fav lines yet, hope you\'re having as much fun writing as we are reading,
though I wonder - what did they pollinate for dinner, lol
December 1st, 2020 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sorry Bruv, I only know real love, and not infatuation.
You like her, and she likes you.
Where’s the problem?\'
fav lines yet, hope you\'re having as much fun writing as we are reading,
though I wonder - what did they pollinate for dinner, lol
December 1st, 2020 04:58
16. Humble B. Bumble : Beeloved?
RDS said:
Ah, humble love. A really good page Aa. Hope the book is going sweet.
J
November 30th, 2020 16:40
RDS said:
Ah, humble love. A really good page Aa. Hope the book is going sweet.
J
November 30th, 2020 16:40
15. Humble B. Bumble : Unbeelievable!
orchidee said:
Good write Aa. I\'ve been dipping into snippets of this story as it\'s been going on.
November 29th, 2020 03:22
orchidee said:
Good write Aa. I\'ve been dipping into snippets of this story as it\'s been going on.
November 29th, 2020 03:22
13. Humble B. Bumble : Friday night will bee our night for dancing
RDS said:
Sam Shepard?
November 28th, 2020 17:59
RDS said:
Sam Shepard?
November 28th, 2020 17:59
12. Humble B. Bumble : Bee ware
RDS said:
Haha, only just read its a book. It\'s a really good storyline. If I\'m doing something like a book or even research and development articles I try and add litlle music related references so your line
\"... Maybee get me a nice new pair of sun glasses.\" would bee g Maybee get me a nice new pair of cheap sunglasses. (zz top)
J
November 27th, 2020 21:00
RDS said:
Haha, only just read its a book. It\'s a really good storyline. If I\'m doing something like a book or even research and development articles I try and add litlle music related references so your line
\"... Maybee get me a nice new pair of sun glasses.\" would bee g Maybee get me a nice new pair of cheap sunglasses. (zz top)
J
November 27th, 2020 21:00
11. Humble B. Bumble : Bee-for
L. B. Mek said:
ok, I think its time you changed your intro from story to Novella or even Novel, lol
keep em coming, it\'s been a fun read with some quirky and insightful passages so far
November 26th, 2020 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
ok, I think its time you changed your intro from story to Novella or even Novel, lol
keep em coming, it\'s been a fun read with some quirky and insightful passages so far
November 26th, 2020 04:18
5. Humble B. Bumble : Beeside signs
dusk arising said:
Well i for one am enjoying your continuing story. I hope you are having a lot of fun creating it.
Its going to Bee one to read to the grandchildren if thats OK with you.
November 19th, 2020 11:39
dusk arising said:
Well i for one am enjoying your continuing story. I hope you are having a lot of fun creating it.
Its going to Bee one to read to the grandchildren if thats OK with you.
November 19th, 2020 11:39
4. Humble B. Bumble : Way to bee!
Clara said:
This is a wonderfully imaginative poem. A deeply layered poem with such childlike innocence at the surface. I enjoyed reading this very much!
November 18th, 2020 19:11
Clara said:
This is a wonderfully imaginative poem. A deeply layered poem with such childlike innocence at the surface. I enjoyed reading this very much!
November 18th, 2020 19:11
4. Humble B. Bumble : Way to bee!
dusk arising said:
Lets hope Bee meets his blossom soon.
November 18th, 2020 11:42
dusk arising said:
Lets hope Bee meets his blossom soon.
November 18th, 2020 11:42
3. Humble B. Bumble : Bee my guest
dusk arising said:
So long as he keeps away from Bee-elzeebub he sounds like he\'s in clover. But we shall all look forward to see what will Bee.
I hope this story is not going to be one with a sting in its tail.
November 17th, 2020 14:24
dusk arising said:
So long as he keeps away from Bee-elzeebub he sounds like he\'s in clover. But we shall all look forward to see what will Bee.
I hope this story is not going to be one with a sting in its tail.
November 17th, 2020 14:24
2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie)
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully intriguing premise, has me thinking it could be start of a didactive children\'s tale on inspirational adoption ethics, also like your natural flow,
have you considered utilising Italics to differentiate between voices? just a thought, ignore it if you feel I\'m out of place for making the suggestion.
November 17th, 2020 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully intriguing premise, has me thinking it could be start of a didactive children\'s tale on inspirational adoption ethics, also like your natural flow,
have you considered utilising Italics to differentiate between voices? just a thought, ignore it if you feel I\'m out of place for making the suggestion.
November 17th, 2020 04:46
2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie)
Trenz Pruca said:
Ha...When I was in grammar school I wrote a short story called \"Buzz-buzz the Bee.\" This reminds me of it. Thank you.
November 16th, 2020 16:04
Trenz Pruca said:
Ha...When I was in grammar school I wrote a short story called \"Buzz-buzz the Bee.\" This reminds me of it. Thank you.
November 16th, 2020 16:04
2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie)
dusk arising said:
Nice one! Here is a video by B Bumble and the Stingers:-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jisNh8jP_g
November 16th, 2020 11:27
dusk arising said:
Nice one! Here is a video by B Bumble and the Stingers:-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jisNh8jP_g
November 16th, 2020 11:27
Chernobyl
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Friend ~ Brian Here. Thank you fo r a very harrowing ~ but true ~ account of what happened @ Chernobyl in APRIL 1986. I live not far from SIZEWELL POWER STATION ( SUFFOLK) have stayed @ Sizewell Hall and have swam in the SEA ! A m I afraid ? NO ! Because at Chernobyl the SAFETY FACTORS were overridden causing it to go to go critical. As a Scientist I consider the UK Reactors to be SAFE and would encourage the UK Government to build more.
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian& Smokey !!!
November 13th, 2020 02:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Friend ~ Brian Here. Thank you fo r a very harrowing ~ but true ~ account of what happened @ Chernobyl in APRIL 1986. I live not far from SIZEWELL POWER STATION ( SUFFOLK) have stayed @ Sizewell Hall and have swam in the SEA ! A m I afraid ? NO ! Because at Chernobyl the SAFETY FACTORS were overridden causing it to go to go critical. As a Scientist I consider the UK Reactors to be SAFE and would encourage the UK Government to build more.
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian& Smokey !!!
November 13th, 2020 02:35
My final line
Syd said:
Thid is such a heartbreaking poem but beautifully written....and to think it was about cocaine when I read the title.
Take care - Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:21
Syd said:
Thid is such a heartbreaking poem but beautifully written....and to think it was about cocaine when I read the title.
Take care - Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:21
Fantastical
L. B. Mek said:
good read, some insightful observations and adorned with a subtle tone of poetic brevity
November 10th, 2020 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
good read, some insightful observations and adorned with a subtle tone of poetic brevity
November 10th, 2020 05:24
Fantastical
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah fairytale and stories add fantasy fun and spice to life so I enjoyed this swell fabulous poem. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 11:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah fairytale and stories add fantasy fun and spice to life so I enjoyed this swell fabulous poem. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 11:35
Groan (up)
L. B. Mek said:
good write!
I like the multiple perspectives you\'re depicting within the one voice, capturing a very natural element of our unfiltered thought processes
November 6th, 2020 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
good write!
I like the multiple perspectives you\'re depicting within the one voice, capturing a very natural element of our unfiltered thought processes
November 6th, 2020 06:32
Self-sabotage
Doggerel Dave said:
Are all your poems like this? I dare not look.
You are here. So having found yourself in this situation (Life, that is} have a look around - the possibilities are infinite. Laugh at it. I mostly find this life (the actuality of being here) a big joke.
If all else fails , get some CBT in to you.
Take care, Dave
November 5th, 2020 19:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Are all your poems like this? I dare not look.
You are here. So having found yourself in this situation (Life, that is} have a look around - the possibilities are infinite. Laugh at it. I mostly find this life (the actuality of being here) a big joke.
If all else fails , get some CBT in to you.
Take care, Dave
November 5th, 2020 19:42
It’s nothing personal
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I pity what reflection you see in that poisonous mirror,
at least your voicing your pain my friend, that\'s an important step!
stay strong and take a second longer - to linger, in those moments wear deep breaths: don\'t ache
October 30th, 2020 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I pity what reflection you see in that poisonous mirror,
at least your voicing your pain my friend, that\'s an important step!
stay strong and take a second longer - to linger, in those moments wear deep breaths: don\'t ache
October 30th, 2020 03:58
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