Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
15. Humble B. Bumble : Unbeelievable!
orchidee said:
Good write Aa. I\'ve been dipping into snippets of this story as it\'s been going on.
November 29th, 2020 03:22
orchidee said:
Good write Aa. I\'ve been dipping into snippets of this story as it\'s been going on.
November 29th, 2020 03:22
13. Humble B. Bumble : Friday night will bee our night for dancing
RDS said:
Sam Shepard?
November 28th, 2020 17:59
RDS said:
Sam Shepard?
November 28th, 2020 17:59
12. Humble B. Bumble : Bee ware
RDS said:
Haha, only just read its a book. It\'s a really good storyline. If I\'m doing something like a book or even research and development articles I try and add litlle music related references so your line
\"... Maybee get me a nice new pair of sun glasses.\" would bee g Maybee get me a nice new pair of cheap sunglasses. (zz top)
J
November 27th, 2020 21:00
RDS said:
Haha, only just read its a book. It\'s a really good storyline. If I\'m doing something like a book or even research and development articles I try and add litlle music related references so your line
\"... Maybee get me a nice new pair of sun glasses.\" would bee g Maybee get me a nice new pair of cheap sunglasses. (zz top)
J
November 27th, 2020 21:00
11. Humble B. Bumble : Bee-for
L. B. Mek said:
ok, I think its time you changed your intro from story to Novella or even Novel, lol
keep em coming, it\'s been a fun read with some quirky and insightful passages so far
November 26th, 2020 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
ok, I think its time you changed your intro from story to Novella or even Novel, lol
keep em coming, it\'s been a fun read with some quirky and insightful passages so far
November 26th, 2020 04:18
5. Humble B. Bumble : Beeside signs
dusk arising said:
Well i for one am enjoying your continuing story. I hope you are having a lot of fun creating it.
Its going to Bee one to read to the grandchildren if thats OK with you.
November 19th, 2020 11:39
dusk arising said:
Well i for one am enjoying your continuing story. I hope you are having a lot of fun creating it.
Its going to Bee one to read to the grandchildren if thats OK with you.
November 19th, 2020 11:39
4. Humble B. Bumble : Way to bee!
Clara said:
This is a wonderfully imaginative poem. A deeply layered poem with such childlike innocence at the surface. I enjoyed reading this very much!
November 18th, 2020 19:11
Clara said:
This is a wonderfully imaginative poem. A deeply layered poem with such childlike innocence at the surface. I enjoyed reading this very much!
November 18th, 2020 19:11
4. Humble B. Bumble : Way to bee!
dusk arising said:
Lets hope Bee meets his blossom soon.
November 18th, 2020 11:42
dusk arising said:
Lets hope Bee meets his blossom soon.
November 18th, 2020 11:42
3. Humble B. Bumble : Bee my guest
dusk arising said:
So long as he keeps away from Bee-elzeebub he sounds like he\'s in clover. But we shall all look forward to see what will Bee.
I hope this story is not going to be one with a sting in its tail.
November 17th, 2020 14:24
dusk arising said:
So long as he keeps away from Bee-elzeebub he sounds like he\'s in clover. But we shall all look forward to see what will Bee.
I hope this story is not going to be one with a sting in its tail.
November 17th, 2020 14:24
2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie)
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully intriguing premise, has me thinking it could be start of a didactive children\'s tale on inspirational adoption ethics, also like your natural flow,
have you considered utilising Italics to differentiate between voices? just a thought, ignore it if you feel I\'m out of place for making the suggestion.
November 17th, 2020 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully intriguing premise, has me thinking it could be start of a didactive children\'s tale on inspirational adoption ethics, also like your natural flow,
have you considered utilising Italics to differentiate between voices? just a thought, ignore it if you feel I\'m out of place for making the suggestion.
November 17th, 2020 04:46
2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie)
Trenz Pruca said:
Ha...When I was in grammar school I wrote a short story called \"Buzz-buzz the Bee.\" This reminds me of it. Thank you.
November 16th, 2020 16:04
Trenz Pruca said:
Ha...When I was in grammar school I wrote a short story called \"Buzz-buzz the Bee.\" This reminds me of it. Thank you.
November 16th, 2020 16:04
2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie)
dusk arising said:
Nice one! Here is a video by B Bumble and the Stingers:-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jisNh8jP_g
November 16th, 2020 11:27
dusk arising said:
Nice one! Here is a video by B Bumble and the Stingers:-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jisNh8jP_g
November 16th, 2020 11:27
Chernobyl
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Friend ~ Brian Here. Thank you fo r a very harrowing ~ but true ~ account of what happened @ Chernobyl in APRIL 1986. I live not far from SIZEWELL POWER STATION ( SUFFOLK) have stayed @ Sizewell Hall and have swam in the SEA ! A m I afraid ? NO ! Because at Chernobyl the SAFETY FACTORS were overridden causing it to go to go critical. As a Scientist I consider the UK Reactors to be SAFE and would encourage the UK Government to build more.
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian& Smokey !!!
November 13th, 2020 02:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Friend ~ Brian Here. Thank you fo r a very harrowing ~ but true ~ account of what happened @ Chernobyl in APRIL 1986. I live not far from SIZEWELL POWER STATION ( SUFFOLK) have stayed @ Sizewell Hall and have swam in the SEA ! A m I afraid ? NO ! Because at Chernobyl the SAFETY FACTORS were overridden causing it to go to go critical. As a Scientist I consider the UK Reactors to be SAFE and would encourage the UK Government to build more.
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian& Smokey !!!
November 13th, 2020 02:35
My final line
Syd said:
Thid is such a heartbreaking poem but beautifully written....and to think it was about cocaine when I read the title.
Take care - Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:21
Syd said:
Thid is such a heartbreaking poem but beautifully written....and to think it was about cocaine when I read the title.
Take care - Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:21
Fantastical
L. B. Mek said:
good read, some insightful observations and adorned with a subtle tone of poetic brevity
November 10th, 2020 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
good read, some insightful observations and adorned with a subtle tone of poetic brevity
November 10th, 2020 05:24
Fantastical
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah fairytale and stories add fantasy fun and spice to life so I enjoyed this swell fabulous poem. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 11:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah fairytale and stories add fantasy fun and spice to life so I enjoyed this swell fabulous poem. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 11:35
Groan (up)
L. B. Mek said:
good write!
I like the multiple perspectives you\'re depicting within the one voice, capturing a very natural element of our unfiltered thought processes
November 6th, 2020 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
good write!
I like the multiple perspectives you\'re depicting within the one voice, capturing a very natural element of our unfiltered thought processes
November 6th, 2020 06:32
Self-sabotage
Doggerel Dave said:
Are all your poems like this? I dare not look.
You are here. So having found yourself in this situation (Life, that is} have a look around - the possibilities are infinite. Laugh at it. I mostly find this life (the actuality of being here) a big joke.
If all else fails , get some CBT in to you.
Take care, Dave
November 5th, 2020 19:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Are all your poems like this? I dare not look.
You are here. So having found yourself in this situation (Life, that is} have a look around - the possibilities are infinite. Laugh at it. I mostly find this life (the actuality of being here) a big joke.
If all else fails , get some CBT in to you.
Take care, Dave
November 5th, 2020 19:42
It’s nothing personal
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I pity what reflection you see in that poisonous mirror,
at least your voicing your pain my friend, that\'s an important step!
stay strong and take a second longer - to linger, in those moments wear deep breaths: don\'t ache
October 30th, 2020 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I pity what reflection you see in that poisonous mirror,
at least your voicing your pain my friend, that\'s an important step!
stay strong and take a second longer - to linger, in those moments wear deep breaths: don\'t ache
October 30th, 2020 03:58
It’s nothing personal
dusk arising said:
It\'s good job i\'m a rabbit and this human thing is just a disguise so i can safely stay above ground. Well. I say safely but.. it\'s not really safe at all is it. War is a bit frightening and those noisey police are a worry. At least us rabbits aren\'t worried by covid.
Learning to read this human stuff has been a boost really though... i even write human poetry though mine isn\'t very good.... yet.
October 29th, 2020 08:20
dusk arising said:
It\'s good job i\'m a rabbit and this human thing is just a disguise so i can safely stay above ground. Well. I say safely but.. it\'s not really safe at all is it. War is a bit frightening and those noisey police are a worry. At least us rabbits aren\'t worried by covid.
Learning to read this human stuff has been a boost really though... i even write human poetry though mine isn\'t very good.... yet.
October 29th, 2020 08:20
Still going
dusk arising said:
That\'s the human condition... for a thinker.
October 26th, 2020 16:25
dusk arising said:
That\'s the human condition... for a thinker.
October 26th, 2020 16:25
That word
Bragee said:
\"They say I love you like it is just a word they have heard.\"
I love this, so many people treat love as if it has no value.
October 23rd, 2020 11:40
Bragee said:
\"They say I love you like it is just a word they have heard.\"
I love this, so many people treat love as if it has no value.
October 23rd, 2020 11:40
I worship at your altar.
FineB said:
Hi Harvey,
What can I say!
A beautiful write and tribute to love ❤
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 16th, 2020 14:00
FineB said:
Hi Harvey,
What can I say!
A beautiful write and tribute to love ❤
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 16th, 2020 14:00
All I ask
L. B. Mek said:
all you ask: is for everything!
what a truthful testimony to how needy and vulnerable we all become in front of love, whether new or discovered later in a relationships timeline, that feeling of anxt and insecurity is unavoidable
August 11th, 2020 02:43
L. B. Mek said:
all you ask: is for everything!
what a truthful testimony to how needy and vulnerable we all become in front of love, whether new or discovered later in a relationships timeline, that feeling of anxt and insecurity is unavoidable
August 11th, 2020 02:43
Homeless
L. B. Mek said:
what a true plague homelessness is and how concisely you\'ve captured its complexities
served-up in a wonderfully rhythmic flow
August 4th, 2020 02:23
L. B. Mek said:
what a true plague homelessness is and how concisely you\'ve captured its complexities
served-up in a wonderfully rhythmic flow
August 4th, 2020 02:23
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