Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
4. Humble B. Bumble : Way to bee!
Clara said:
This is a wonderfully imaginative poem. A deeply layered poem with such childlike innocence at the surface. I enjoyed reading this very much!
November 18th, 2020 19:11
Clara said:
This is a wonderfully imaginative poem. A deeply layered poem with such childlike innocence at the surface. I enjoyed reading this very much!
November 18th, 2020 19:11
4. Humble B. Bumble : Way to bee!
dusk arising said:
Lets hope Bee meets his blossom soon.
November 18th, 2020 11:42
dusk arising said:
Lets hope Bee meets his blossom soon.
November 18th, 2020 11:42
3. Humble B. Bumble : Bee my guest
dusk arising said:
So long as he keeps away from Bee-elzeebub he sounds like he\'s in clover. But we shall all look forward to see what will Bee.
I hope this story is not going to be one with a sting in its tail.
November 17th, 2020 14:24
dusk arising said:
So long as he keeps away from Bee-elzeebub he sounds like he\'s in clover. But we shall all look forward to see what will Bee.
I hope this story is not going to be one with a sting in its tail.
November 17th, 2020 14:24
2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie)
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully intriguing premise, has me thinking it could be start of a didactive children\'s tale on inspirational adoption ethics, also like your natural flow,
have you considered utilising Italics to differentiate between voices? just a thought, ignore it if you feel I\'m out of place for making the suggestion.
November 17th, 2020 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully intriguing premise, has me thinking it could be start of a didactive children\'s tale on inspirational adoption ethics, also like your natural flow,
have you considered utilising Italics to differentiate between voices? just a thought, ignore it if you feel I\'m out of place for making the suggestion.
November 17th, 2020 04:46
2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie)
Trenz Pruca said:
Ha...When I was in grammar school I wrote a short story called \"Buzz-buzz the Bee.\" This reminds me of it. Thank you.
November 16th, 2020 16:04
Trenz Pruca said:
Ha...When I was in grammar school I wrote a short story called \"Buzz-buzz the Bee.\" This reminds me of it. Thank you.
November 16th, 2020 16:04
2. Humble B. Bumble : Meet the \'rents (A Bee Movie)
dusk arising said:
Nice one! Here is a video by B Bumble and the Stingers:-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jisNh8jP_g
November 16th, 2020 11:27
dusk arising said:
Nice one! Here is a video by B Bumble and the Stingers:-
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jisNh8jP_g
November 16th, 2020 11:27
Chernobyl
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Friend ~ Brian Here. Thank you fo r a very harrowing ~ but true ~ account of what happened @ Chernobyl in APRIL 1986. I live not far from SIZEWELL POWER STATION ( SUFFOLK) have stayed @ Sizewell Hall and have swam in the SEA ! A m I afraid ? NO ! Because at Chernobyl the SAFETY FACTORS were overridden causing it to go to go critical. As a Scientist I consider the UK Reactors to be SAFE and would encourage the UK Government to build more.
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian& Smokey !!!
November 13th, 2020 02:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning Friend ~ Brian Here. Thank you fo r a very harrowing ~ but true ~ account of what happened @ Chernobyl in APRIL 1986. I live not far from SIZEWELL POWER STATION ( SUFFOLK) have stayed @ Sizewell Hall and have swam in the SEA ! A m I afraid ? NO ! Because at Chernobyl the SAFETY FACTORS were overridden causing it to go to go critical. As a Scientist I consider the UK Reactors to be SAFE and would encourage the UK Government to build more.
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian& Smokey !!!
November 13th, 2020 02:35
My final line
Syd said:
Thid is such a heartbreaking poem but beautifully written....and to think it was about cocaine when I read the title.
Take care - Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:21
Syd said:
Thid is such a heartbreaking poem but beautifully written....and to think it was about cocaine when I read the title.
Take care - Syd
November 10th, 2020 20:21
Fantastical
L. B. Mek said:
good read, some insightful observations and adorned with a subtle tone of poetic brevity
November 10th, 2020 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
good read, some insightful observations and adorned with a subtle tone of poetic brevity
November 10th, 2020 05:24
Fantastical
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah fairytale and stories add fantasy fun and spice to life so I enjoyed this swell fabulous poem. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 11:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah fairytale and stories add fantasy fun and spice to life so I enjoyed this swell fabulous poem. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 11:35
Groan (up)
L. B. Mek said:
good write!
I like the multiple perspectives you\'re depicting within the one voice, capturing a very natural element of our unfiltered thought processes
November 6th, 2020 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
good write!
I like the multiple perspectives you\'re depicting within the one voice, capturing a very natural element of our unfiltered thought processes
November 6th, 2020 06:32
Self-sabotage
Doggerel Dave said:
Are all your poems like this? I dare not look.
You are here. So having found yourself in this situation (Life, that is} have a look around - the possibilities are infinite. Laugh at it. I mostly find this life (the actuality of being here) a big joke.
If all else fails , get some CBT in to you.
Take care, Dave
November 5th, 2020 19:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Are all your poems like this? I dare not look.
You are here. So having found yourself in this situation (Life, that is} have a look around - the possibilities are infinite. Laugh at it. I mostly find this life (the actuality of being here) a big joke.
If all else fails , get some CBT in to you.
Take care, Dave
November 5th, 2020 19:42
It’s nothing personal
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I pity what reflection you see in that poisonous mirror,
at least your voicing your pain my friend, that\'s an important step!
stay strong and take a second longer - to linger, in those moments wear deep breaths: don\'t ache
October 30th, 2020 03:58
L. B. Mek said:
sadly, I pity what reflection you see in that poisonous mirror,
at least your voicing your pain my friend, that\'s an important step!
stay strong and take a second longer - to linger, in those moments wear deep breaths: don\'t ache
October 30th, 2020 03:58
It’s nothing personal
dusk arising said:
It\'s good job i\'m a rabbit and this human thing is just a disguise so i can safely stay above ground. Well. I say safely but.. it\'s not really safe at all is it. War is a bit frightening and those noisey police are a worry. At least us rabbits aren\'t worried by covid.
Learning to read this human stuff has been a boost really though... i even write human poetry though mine isn\'t very good.... yet.
October 29th, 2020 08:20
dusk arising said:
It\'s good job i\'m a rabbit and this human thing is just a disguise so i can safely stay above ground. Well. I say safely but.. it\'s not really safe at all is it. War is a bit frightening and those noisey police are a worry. At least us rabbits aren\'t worried by covid.
Learning to read this human stuff has been a boost really though... i even write human poetry though mine isn\'t very good.... yet.
October 29th, 2020 08:20
Still going
dusk arising said:
That\'s the human condition... for a thinker.
October 26th, 2020 16:25
dusk arising said:
That\'s the human condition... for a thinker.
October 26th, 2020 16:25
That word
Bragee said:
\"They say I love you like it is just a word they have heard.\"
I love this, so many people treat love as if it has no value.
October 23rd, 2020 11:40
Bragee said:
\"They say I love you like it is just a word they have heard.\"
I love this, so many people treat love as if it has no value.
October 23rd, 2020 11:40
I worship at your altar.
FineB said:
Hi Harvey,
What can I say!
A beautiful write and tribute to love ❤
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 16th, 2020 14:00
FineB said:
Hi Harvey,
What can I say!
A beautiful write and tribute to love ❤
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 16th, 2020 14:00
All I ask
L. B. Mek said:
all you ask: is for everything!
what a truthful testimony to how needy and vulnerable we all become in front of love, whether new or discovered later in a relationships timeline, that feeling of anxt and insecurity is unavoidable
August 11th, 2020 02:43
L. B. Mek said:
all you ask: is for everything!
what a truthful testimony to how needy and vulnerable we all become in front of love, whether new or discovered later in a relationships timeline, that feeling of anxt and insecurity is unavoidable
August 11th, 2020 02:43
Homeless
L. B. Mek said:
what a true plague homelessness is and how concisely you\'ve captured its complexities
served-up in a wonderfully rhythmic flow
August 4th, 2020 02:23
L. B. Mek said:
what a true plague homelessness is and how concisely you\'ve captured its complexities
served-up in a wonderfully rhythmic flow
August 4th, 2020 02:23
Homeless
Fay Slimm. said:
A moving heart-wrencher of a write with a last stanza that brings tears to the eyes with its honesty- - - -homelessness is one of the challenges to those who lose a job, or health or support of family or help from friends.
August 3rd, 2020 09:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A moving heart-wrencher of a write with a last stanza that brings tears to the eyes with its honesty- - - -homelessness is one of the challenges to those who lose a job, or health or support of family or help from friends.
August 3rd, 2020 09:39
Homeless
jarcher54 said:
The modern world is relentlessly hard for anyone who falls out of line, who can\'t land that steady job or who loses that supportive family. It\'s up to all of us to rage against this dog-eat-dog culture where those who fall by the wayside are expected to get back up without any help. This sweet little poem of yours captures the spirit of one of the most moving character poems ever composed, Padraic Colum\'s Old Woman of the Roads. Check it out on MPS at https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-6144
The final stanza is heartbreaking:
Och! but I\'m weary of mist and dark,
And roads where there\'s never a house nor bush,
And tired I am of bog and road,
And the crying wind and the lonesome hush!
And I am praying to God on high,
And I am praying Him night and day,
For a little house - a house of my own
Out of the wind\'s and the rain\'s way.
August 3rd, 2020 09:05
jarcher54 said:
The modern world is relentlessly hard for anyone who falls out of line, who can\'t land that steady job or who loses that supportive family. It\'s up to all of us to rage against this dog-eat-dog culture where those who fall by the wayside are expected to get back up without any help. This sweet little poem of yours captures the spirit of one of the most moving character poems ever composed, Padraic Colum\'s Old Woman of the Roads. Check it out on MPS at https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-6144
The final stanza is heartbreaking:
Och! but I\'m weary of mist and dark,
And roads where there\'s never a house nor bush,
And tired I am of bog and road,
And the crying wind and the lonesome hush!
And I am praying to God on high,
And I am praying Him night and day,
For a little house - a house of my own
Out of the wind\'s and the rain\'s way.
August 3rd, 2020 09:05
English Weather
MendedFences27 said:
And don\'t forget the wind. I find that here in New England, there is constant grousing about the weather, but New Englanders would have it no other way.. I\'m sure that Brits also would prefer the seasonal changes to a constant boring atmospnere. . _ Phil A.
July 29th, 2020 21:28
MendedFences27 said:
And don\'t forget the wind. I find that here in New England, there is constant grousing about the weather, but New Englanders would have it no other way.. I\'m sure that Brits also would prefer the seasonal changes to a constant boring atmospnere. . _ Phil A.
July 29th, 2020 21:28
English Weather
dusk arising said:
Aye, England becoming greater Manchester... famous for it\'s rain
July 29th, 2020 06:40
dusk arising said:
Aye, England becoming greater Manchester... famous for it\'s rain
July 29th, 2020 06:40
Weep
benevolentbluebabe said:
A beautiful thought, and a hopeful one; for all us hopeless romantics out there! I love it
July 22nd, 2020 11:07
benevolentbluebabe said:
A beautiful thought, and a hopeful one; for all us hopeless romantics out there! I love it
July 22nd, 2020 11:07
Make a stand
dusk arising said:
I agree, there is enough falseness in those who turn to god in times of need making pious promises only to abuse the situation in a more level headed time.
Far wiser to use prayer for the mind enhancing practice it surely is wherein the brain waves change pattern to a more logical sphere and a peace, acceptance and serenity overtake ones mind without any temporary unnecessary involvement of a god.
A point well made and nicely woven in your post.
July 20th, 2020 13:49
dusk arising said:
I agree, there is enough falseness in those who turn to god in times of need making pious promises only to abuse the situation in a more level headed time.
Far wiser to use prayer for the mind enhancing practice it surely is wherein the brain waves change pattern to a more logical sphere and a peace, acceptance and serenity overtake ones mind without any temporary unnecessary involvement of a god.
A point well made and nicely woven in your post.
July 20th, 2020 13:49
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