Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
The Girl I Love and Live For
L. B. Mek said:
is the Artist the lucky one to find such a Muse
or the Muse, who lucked-out to bring out, that Poet in her man
blurred - lines: indeed...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 7th, 2021 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
is the Artist the lucky one to find such a Muse
or the Muse, who lucked-out to bring out, that Poet in her man
blurred - lines: indeed...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 7th, 2021 06:44
First & Last Love
L. B. Mek said:
again, yet another wonderful dedication!
\'Hourglass hips and fairy feet,
angel eyes and smile so sweet.\'
this heroic couplet should be in a country music song
or maybe, all of them...
May 7th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
again, yet another wonderful dedication!
\'Hourglass hips and fairy feet,
angel eyes and smile so sweet.\'
this heroic couplet should be in a country music song
or maybe, all of them...
May 7th, 2021 04:57
First & Last Love
Goldfinch60 said:
That first love returning is so wonderful Kevin.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That first love returning is so wonderful Kevin.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:27
Passion Flower
L. B. Mek said:
\'She’ll go on being beautiful
while I am sound asleep.
And when I wake refreshed again
she’ll still sit there serene.\'
simply brilliant, dear poet
(fun fact or maybe not? lol)
the latin translation \'passiflora\'
I also used to title
a mother\'s day poem dedication
May 6th, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'She’ll go on being beautiful
while I am sound asleep.
And when I wake refreshed again
she’ll still sit there serene.\'
simply brilliant, dear poet
(fun fact or maybe not? lol)
the latin translation \'passiflora\'
I also used to title
a mother\'s day poem dedication
May 6th, 2021 04:55
Kiss of Life
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, I recognise this work or maybe just the picture? not sure
another wonderfully worded dedication, thanks for sharing:
\'When willows weep and dungeons deep
depress my dreaming mind,
and nightingale, poor prince of pain,
sweet song he cannot find...\'
this verse made me think of Keat\'s \'Ode to a nightingale\'
remixed with Poe\'s \'Annabel Lee\'
(coincidentally, the very last poem Poe published),
specifically this lines (I altered some words, ahem..):
\'For the moon never beams, without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful *Lorraine*;
And the stars never rise, but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful *Lorraine*;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling—my darling—my life and my bride,\'..
link to Poe\'s unaltered version, in all its originally worded glory:
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22550 )
May 4th, 2021 06:55
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, I recognise this work or maybe just the picture? not sure
another wonderfully worded dedication, thanks for sharing:
\'When willows weep and dungeons deep
depress my dreaming mind,
and nightingale, poor prince of pain,
sweet song he cannot find...\'
this verse made me think of Keat\'s \'Ode to a nightingale\'
remixed with Poe\'s \'Annabel Lee\'
(coincidentally, the very last poem Poe published),
specifically this lines (I altered some words, ahem..):
\'For the moon never beams, without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful *Lorraine*;
And the stars never rise, but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful *Lorraine*;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling—my darling—my life and my bride,\'..
link to Poe\'s unaltered version, in all its originally worded glory:
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22550 )
May 4th, 2021 06:55
Land of Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
Poetry - exemplifying: quintessential, understated British - brilliance!
(thank you for sharing your source of inspirational happiness, dear poet
and for inspiring my own, feeble scribbled reply):
\'I\'m so grateful to have been welcomed
into this \'oh so private\' - miracle, we\'ve titled
our beloved, blighty
and ain\'t nowhere in the world
like a foreigner - made to feel, at home
than in our beautiful, British isles
where the \'Vast Majority\' - still, stubbornly choose
to nurture their hereditary pride
for those simple treasured gifts, in life
trusting in those subtle, picturesque scenes
of a freshly-pulled pints, enticingly sweating glass
as light-hearted, meaningful warmth - exudes
from beaming, grateful smiles
shared knowingly
between those fated: handful few, in our lives...\'
May 3rd, 2021 05:03
L. B. Mek said:
Poetry - exemplifying: quintessential, understated British - brilliance!
(thank you for sharing your source of inspirational happiness, dear poet
and for inspiring my own, feeble scribbled reply):
\'I\'m so grateful to have been welcomed
into this \'oh so private\' - miracle, we\'ve titled
our beloved, blighty
and ain\'t nowhere in the world
like a foreigner - made to feel, at home
than in our beautiful, British isles
where the \'Vast Majority\' - still, stubbornly choose
to nurture their hereditary pride
for those simple treasured gifts, in life
trusting in those subtle, picturesque scenes
of a freshly-pulled pints, enticingly sweating glass
as light-hearted, meaningful warmth - exudes
from beaming, grateful smiles
shared knowingly
between those fated: handful few, in our lives...\'
May 3rd, 2021 05:03
Land of Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Kevin, the sun will always light our way.
Andy
May 2nd, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Kevin, the sun will always light our way.
Andy
May 2nd, 2021 01:34
love lines
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication
depicting that painful discontent, experienced while traversing true love\'s jagged path..
thanks for sharing
April 30th, 2021 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication
depicting that painful discontent, experienced while traversing true love\'s jagged path..
thanks for sharing
April 30th, 2021 03:30
Holy Alphabet
L. B. Mek said:
different, for sure - but intriguingly-so (for me)
challenging, kinda hard to comprehend fully
a proclamation of faith, that vaguely turns into commentary, maybe?
thanks for sharing
April 29th, 2021 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
different, for sure - but intriguingly-so (for me)
challenging, kinda hard to comprehend fully
a proclamation of faith, that vaguely turns into commentary, maybe?
thanks for sharing
April 29th, 2021 04:33
True Poets
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - ace as usual; true poetry about poets (true, that is......)
April 28th, 2021 01:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - ace as usual; true poetry about poets (true, that is......)
April 28th, 2021 01:57
True Poets
Caring dove said:
I just write what I feel . I try not to think too much, or judge what I write as that can get in the way .
April 27th, 2021 14:18
Caring dove said:
I just write what I feel . I try not to think too much, or judge what I write as that can get in the way .
April 27th, 2021 14:18
since you went away
orchidee said:
Cooeee! I was hiding in the cupboard. I never really went away at all. I hang around like a bad....smell? Or penny?! lol.
April 27th, 2021 09:57
orchidee said:
Cooeee! I was hiding in the cupboard. I never really went away at all. I hang around like a bad....smell? Or penny?! lol.
April 27th, 2021 09:57
since you went away
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded - yet again, a great read dear poet
April 27th, 2021 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded - yet again, a great read dear poet
April 27th, 2021 04:30
since you went away
Liam Power said:
I like it a lot.
Great rhyme and cool metaphors and imagery.
April 27th, 2021 03:58
Liam Power said:
I like it a lot.
Great rhyme and cool metaphors and imagery.
April 27th, 2021 03:58
since you went away
orchidee said:
Cooeee! I\'ve come back now! (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
April 27th, 2021 01:54
orchidee said:
Cooeee! I\'ve come back now! (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
April 27th, 2021 01:54
since you went away
Doggerel Dave said:
My kind of poetry, with totally comprehensible feelings which have been there for me, although the ending was different.
April 26th, 2021 18:49
Doggerel Dave said:
My kind of poetry, with totally comprehensible feelings which have been there for me, although the ending was different.
April 26th, 2021 18:49
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